Project Grimoire - Brionac ~Lugh Lamhfhata~ · forum

Lavender

Joined January 2014

Lavender 2014-07-14T12:35:28+00:00

Red means it conflicts with the guideline, you must fix it.
Blue means some of my important suggestions, you can ignore it.
Black just means my comments.
M4M
[General]

tag移除cytus（已经在source里面）

[Insane]

第一根红线是否有必要？（毕竟打图不需要）
00:19:130 (3) - 00:20:158 (4) - 00:21:186 (1,2,4) - 00:23:243 (1,1,1) - 00:26:329 (2,2,3) - 00:29:414 (1,2,4) - .....你看着加whistle吧
00:31:471 (1) - 这里开始可以加clap，后面太繁琐了，差不多的，我就说说Finish好了
00:35:585 (1) - 00:52:041 (1) - 01:08:497 (1) - 01:24:953 (1) - 01:56:837 (1) - finish
01:57:900 - 这个后面就不要加clap了
00:31:471 - 这根绿线0.75x ，而00:52:034 - 这根1.0x，明显最开始的节奏最舒缓
00:41:071 (2,3) - 2，3换一下
00:48:099 (2,3,4) - 突然ds变很高（比我还凶）。。
01:07:297 (1) - 没必要使用折返
01:07:469 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - 可以考虑渐渐增大ds
01:10:554 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - ^
01:08:497 (1) - 不好看
01:10:554 (1) - 建议不用两个以上的折返
01:23:239 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - 赞
01:33:010 (3) - Ctrl+G
整体感觉梗不够多啊（够

美丽

-[Hikari]-

84 posts

Joined February 2014

Topic Starter

-[Hikari]- 2014-07-14T13:37:29+00:00

[Teichan] wrote:
Red means it conflicts with the guideline, you must fix it.
Blue means some of my important suggestions, you can ignore it.
Black just means my comments.
M4M
[General]

tag移除cytus（已经在source里面） fixed
[Insane]
第一根红线是否有必要？（毕竟打图不需要） 线还是得插好……
00:19:130 (3) - 00:20:158 (4) - 00:21:186 (1,2,4) - 00:23:243 (1,1,1) - 00:26:329 (2,2,3) - 00:29:414 (1,2,4) - .....你看着加whistle吧
00:31:471 (1) - 这里开始可以加clap，后面太繁琐了，差不多的，我就说说Finish好了
00:35:585 (1) - 00:52:041 (1) - 01:08:497 (1) - 01:24:953 (1) - 01:56:837 (1) - finish
01:57:900 - 这个后面就不要加clap了 Hitsound all fixed. 非常感谢！
00:31:471 - 这根绿线0.75x ，而00:52:034 - 这根1.0x，明显最开始的节奏最舒缓
00:41:071 (2,3) - 2，3换一下[/color] 换了的话接后面的1很别扭
00:48:099 (2,3,4) - 突然ds变很高（比我还凶）。。
01:07:297 (1) - 没必要使用折返 这是个六分拍……总不见得做连打吧……
01:07:469 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - 可以考虑渐渐增大ds
01:10:554 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - ^[/color]
01:08:497 (1) - 不好看 稍微改了下
01:10:554 (1) - 建议不用两个以上的折返 fixed
01:23:239 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - 赞 ^_^thx
01:33:010 (3) - Ctrl+G fixed
整体感觉梗不够多啊（够 黔驴技穷惹;w;
美丽

liaoxingyao

864 posts

Joined November 2013

liaoxingyao 2014-07-17T07:57:24+00:00

No Kud
Offset为117900的红线BPM换为159.50
Offset为123620的红线BPM换为145.01
Offset为125068的红线Offset-1ms
记得为绿线换Offset和Resnap All Notes

Last edited by liaoxingyao 2014-07-18T04:59:13+00:00, edited 3 times in total.

yf_bmp

Elite Storyboarder II / Elite Mapper

1,630 posts

Joined December 2011

yf_bmp 2014-07-17T09:31:46+00:00

no kd

[Insane]
请注意一些细节方面的事情虽然不影响打图但会给人一种比较乱的感觉

00:18:788 (1,2,3) - 这三个应该不是刻意不等距的吧让它们等距

00:20:158 (4,1) - 4的后半部分没有包住1的头

00:25:300 (1,2) - 太单调的感觉跟前面一样做些形状会比较好

00:30:443 (4) - 这个形状现在不太常用不过也没问题

00:31:471 (1,2,3,4,5) - 关于这四个我觉得你的图应该有挺多图形跳的所以这四个建议摆成平行四边形会比较好

00:34:043 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 如果是弧形的话那是没摆好

00:34:043 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,3) - 没包好

00:39:357 (7,8,1) - 这里距离突然不等又不太像是刻意弄的..所以建议等距后面再适当调调

00:39:699 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 可以用旋转工具摆的更好, 顺带如果滑条的弧度稍微再大一点的话会更美观

00:41:071 (2,3,1) - 这三个同时看的话会比较别扭, 00:41:756 (1,2,3) - 这三个没有包好,而且要注意00:41:756 (1,3) - 之间的距离

00:43:813 (1,2) - 没包好

00:45:870 (1) - 这个滑条还是有些欠前后关系的考虑 00:44:842 (2,1) - 这两个一起看的话有些看不出之间有啥关系.. 以及可以00:45:870 (1,4) - 这两个一起看

00:55:127 (1,2,3) - 可以错开一些这个现在真心少用都是挺老的梗了

01:02:669 (2,3) - 3 的形状欠考虑, 01:02:326 (1,2,3) - 这三个一起看能看得出的

01:02:326 - 01:08:326 - 这一段总体来看感觉是围绕一个方向在field边缘转不太建议这样

01:09:183 (3,1) - 尾部和note挤在一块了

01:10:383 (4,1) - 包好一些

01:11:411 - 这里也建议加个物件, 空拍没啥感觉

01:16:725 (1,2,3) - 换成连打已经kiai了却放的这么拘束的话实在没感觉

01:17:754 (1,2,3) - ^

01:21:696 (2) - 以这个为中心, 01:20:839 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - 可以看出这个串的弧度不够

01:34:210 (1,2,3) - 可以错开一些

01:46:894 (3,5,1) - 距离注意下

02:00:541 (2,4) -

音效太单薄了比如你跟钢琴音的部分在高音部分可以加whistle啊之类的音乐里有鼓点的地方可以shift+w 暴力加音效

Good luck~

liaoxingyao

864 posts

Joined November 2013

liaoxingyao 2014-07-18T01:15:43+00:00

wu
忘了射性
这是你的♂性

-[Hikari]-

84 posts

Joined February 2014

Topic Starter

-[Hikari]- 2014-07-18T13:30:06+00:00

liaoxingyao wrote:
No Kud
Offset为117900的红线BPM换为159.50
Offset为123620的红线BPM换为145.01
Offset为125068的红线Offset-1ms
记得为绿线换Offset和Resnap All Notes

;w;还是一直觉得不给kds不好意思……

-[Hikari]-

84 posts

Joined February 2014

Topic Starter

-[Hikari]- 2014-07-18T15:45:09+00:00

yf_bmp wrote:
no kd

[Insane]
请注意一些细节方面的事情虽然不影响打图但会给人一种比较乱的感觉

00:18:788 (1,2,3) - 这三个应该不是刻意不等距的吧让它们等距 fixed

00:20:158 (4,1) - 4的后半部分没有包住1的头 fixed

00:25:300 (1,2) - 太单调的感觉跟前面一样做些形状会比较好一直没想法就摆在这里了;w;

00:30:443 (4) - 这个形状现在不太常用不过也没问题那就不改了

00:31:471 (1,2,3,4,5) - 关于这四个我觉得你的图应该有挺多图形跳的所以这四个建议摆成平行四边形会比较好改了下

00:34:043 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 如果是弧形的话那是没摆好 fixed

00:34:043 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,3) - 没包好 ;w;？

00:39:357 (7,8,1) - 这里距离突然不等又不太像是刻意弄的..所以建议等距后面再适当调调 fixed

00:39:699 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 可以用旋转工具摆的更好, 顺带如果滑条的弧度稍微再大一点的话会更美观 ;w;摆了一会儿越来越丑……

00:41:071 (2,3,1) - 这三个同时看的话会比较别扭, 00:41:756 (1,2,3) - 这三个没有包好,而且要注意00:41:756 (1,3) - 之间的距离 fixed

00:43:813 (1,2) - 没包好 fixed

00:45:870 (1) - 这个滑条还是有些欠前后关系的考虑 00:44:842 (2,1) - 这两个一起看的话有些看不出之间有啥关系.. 以及可以00:45:870 (1,4) - 这两个一起看 fixed，上次改了一下前面然后就导致这里别扭了

00:55:127 (1,2,3) - 可以错开一些这个现在真心少用都是挺老的梗了 fixed;w;

01:02:669 (2,3) - 3 的形状欠考虑, 01:02:326 (1,2,3) - 这三个一起看能看得出的 fixed

01:02:326 - 01:08:326 - 这一段总体来看感觉是围绕一个方向在field边缘转不太建议这样这里我先不改了

01:09:183 (3,1) - 尾部和note挤在一块了 fixed

01:10:383 (4,1) - 包好一些 fixed

01:11:411 - 这里也建议加个物件, 空拍没啥感觉 fixed

01:16:725 (1,2,3) - 换成连打已经kiai了却放的这么拘束的话实在没感觉 fixed

01:17:754 (1,2,3) - ^ fixed

01:21:696 (2) - 以这个为中心, 01:20:839 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - 可以看出这个串的弧度不够 fixed

01:34:210 (1,2,3) - 可以错开一些个人感觉stack比较好看……

01:46:894 (3,5,1) - 距离注意下

02:00:541 (2,4) - fixed

音效太单薄了比如你跟钢琴音的部分在高音部分可以加whistle啊之类的音乐里有鼓点的地方可以shift+w 暴力加音效我再研究研究

Good luck~

liaoxingyao

864 posts

Joined November 2013

liaoxingyao 2014-07-19T03:42:48+00:00

- H i k a r i - wrote:
liaoxingyao wrote:
No Kud
Offset为117900的红线BPM换为159.50
Offset为123620的红线BPM换为145.01
Offset为125068的红线Offset-1ms
记得为绿线换Offset和Resnap All Notes
;w;还是一直觉得不给kds不好意思……

可是你给了会被Denied的;w;

TtmnZk

Elite Mapper

597 posts

Joined March 2013

TtmnZk 2014-07-19T12:57:10+00:00

hi!

- H i k a r i - wrote:
[General]
insane 的话我觉还是GS tiny好点
怎么没E N H？补一下呗，这样好一起啊

[Insane]
00:24:272 (1,2,3) - 这里怎么突然间距就变了，感觉跟前面保持一样比较好啊

00:32:087 (1,5) - 这里铺折返感觉很怪，因为前面有跳且2已经在折返条上，这样停顿一下连贯性就断了的感觉

00:32:500 (5) - 同上

00:35:585 (1,2,3,4) - 这里节奏少了点下多点note

00:40:042 (2,3,1,2) -没包好？

00:47:927 (1,2,3,4,5) -跳整体有点扁，flow有点不好，试着纵向拉宽点

00:49:984 (1,2,3,4,5) -跟00:32:087(1,5) - 一样的感觉

00:51:013 (5) -没摆直的感觉

01:00:269 (1) -这里很坑人不好读，这么短的折返大多数osuer光标在这里不会动，所以很影响接下来的读图，
不过是是故意的就不用改了了

01:05:240 - 加个note 空了不好

01:18:782 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) -1.5有点大，调低点或者改成弧，总之注意flow

01:24:953-01:32:495-这里我推荐改变DS来表现歌曲又高到低，节奏减少感觉一般在鼓点的消失和人声清唱的开始会好点

mod的不好别见怪呀

-[Hikari]-

84 posts

Joined February 2014

Topic Starter

-[Hikari]- 2014-07-20T13:25:49+00:00

TT Mouse wrote:
hi!
- H i k a r i - wrote:
[General]
insane 的话我觉还是GS tiny好点 ;w;？
怎么没E N H？补一下呗，这样好一起啊 ;w;正在做

[Insane]
00:24:272 (1,2,3) - 这里怎么突然间距就变了，感觉跟前面保持一样比较好啊这里是接着下面的滑条中心

00:32:087 (1,5) - 这里铺折返感觉很怪，因为前面有跳且2已经在折返条上，这样停顿一下连贯性就断了的感觉我考虑下

00:32:500 (5) - 同上

00:35:585 (1,2,3,4) - 这里节奏少了点下多点note TAT感觉没啥鼓点跟

00:40:042 (2,3,1,2) -没包好？这里怎么改也弄不漂亮

00:47:927 (1,2,3,4,5) -跳整体有点扁，flow有点不好，试着纵向拉宽点 fixed

00:49:984 (1,2,3,4,5) -跟00:32:087(1,5) - 一样的感觉

00:51:013 (5) -没摆直的感觉 fixed

01:00:269 (1) -这里很坑人不好读，这么短的折返大多数osuer光标在这里不会动，所以很影响接下来的读图，
不过是是故意的就不用改了了 fixed

01:05:240 - 加个note 空了不好这里没主旋律我就空掉了

01:18:782 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) -1.5有点大，调低点或者改成弧，总之注意flow fixed

01:24:953-01:32:495-这里我推荐改变DS来表现歌曲又高到低，节奏减少感觉一般在鼓点的消失和人声清唱的开始会好点 TAT我四暗刻一下……

mod的不好别见怪呀

Hakurei Yoru

688 posts

Joined September 2013

Hakurei Yoru 2014-07-25T10:13:54+00:00

嘿~你的GD~
滑条肯定是拉得难看的可以自己改改。
质量欠佳见谅。

SPOILER

osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: 5-03 Brionac ~Lugh Lamhfhata~.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 68069
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.6
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.3
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.9

[Metadata]
Title:Brionac ~Lugh Lamhfhata~
TitleUnicode:Brionac ~Lugh Lamhfhata~
Artist:Project Grimoire
ArtistUnicode:Project Grimoire
Creator:- H i k a r i -
Version:Hyper
Source:Cytus
Tags:ICE
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:-1

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.4
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"IMG_0726.PNG",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

[TimingPoints]
1145,374.391613627855,3,2,0,20,1,0
18788,342.831675361259,3,2,0,40,1,0
19130,342.831675361259,3,2,0,40,1,0
31471,-100,3,2,0,60,0,0
35585,-83.3333333333333,3,1,0,60,0,0
52034,-133.333333333333,3,2,0,60,0,0
58212,-100,3,2,0,70,0,0
68154,-83.3333333333333,3,2,0,70,0,0
68497,-83.3333333333333,3,2,0,80,0,0
78782,-80,3,2,0,85,0,1
79811,-83.3333333333333,3,2,0,85,0,1
80839,-100,3,2,0,80,0,1
84610,-66.6666666666667,3,2,0,80,0,1
84953,-133.333333333333,3,2,0,60,0,0
91124,-100,3,2,0,60,0,0
92153,-100,3,2,0,60,0,0
96267,-83.3333333333333,3,2,0,65,0,0
96609,-74.0740740740741,3,2,0,70,0,0
96952,-66.6666666666667,3,2,0,75,0,0
97295,-100,3,2,0,80,0,0
105180,-100,3,2,0,70,0,0
113408,-100,3,1,0,70,0,0
117900,376.175548589342,3,2,0,40,1,0
117900,-200,3,2,0,40,0,0
122428,397.350993377483,3,2,0,40,1,0
123620,413.76456796083,3,2,0,40,1,0
123620,-200,3,2,0,40,0,0
125067,444.444444444444,3,2,0,40,1,0
127733,-100,3,2,0,5,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 179,179,179
Combo2 : 255,125,158
Combo3 : 255,255,128
Combo4 : 58,252,199

[HitObjects]
136,80,770,6,0,L|232:96,1,70
256,176,1145,2,0,L|112:200,2,140,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,264,2268,6,0,L|368:240,2,140,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,344,3391,6,0,P|128:296|144:208,1,140
220,264,4140,1,0,0:0:0:0:
220,264,4514,6,0,P|272:252|336:280,1,105
324,232,4888,2,0,L|336:152,1,70
344,76,5263,5,0,0:0:0:0:
344,76,5637,2,0,P|304:108|212:112,1,140
120,68,6386,2,0,P|160:36|252:32,1,140
344,76,7135,5,0,0:0:0:0:
344,76,7509,2,0,L|384:224,1,140
340,232,9007,6,0,L|316:140,1,70
416,148,9381,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,240,9756,2,0,P|356:232|324:164,1,140
372,72,10504,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,148,10879,6,0,L|260:208,1,140
344,264,11627,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,148,12002,2,0,P|364:108|272:144,1,140
184,188,12751,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,256,13125,6,0,P|96:216|120:136,1,140
184,188,14248,5,0,0:0:0:0:
244,256,14623,2,0,P|184:288|116:236,1,140
184,184,15371,2,0,P|244:152|312:204,1,140
344,272,16120,5,0,0:0:0:0:
248,256,16495,2,0,L|328:128,1,140
256,192,17618,12,0,18554,0:0:0:0:
312,104,18788,6,2,L|384:68,2,70,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,196,19472,2,0,L|220:272,1,140
216,176,20158,5,2,0:0:0:0:
332,88,20501,2,0,P|380:148|340:208,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,332,21186,6,2,P|224:272|364:204,1,280,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,292,22044,2,2,L|304:268,1,70,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,184,22558,5,0,0:0:0:0:
360,104,22901,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,292,23243,6,0,L|304:268,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,184,23586,2,0,L|320:208,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,220,23929,1,0,0:0:0:0:
356,104,24272,6,0,P|396:136|396:240,1,140,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,300,24958,2,0,P|240:268|240:164,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,25386,12,0,26843,0:0:0:0:
160,104,27015,5,2,0:0:0:0:
160,104,27186,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,104,27357,2,0,B|204:120|244:104|244:104|264:68|324:80|324:80|352:140|352:140|312:196,1,280,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,208,28386,6,2,B|224:272|224:272|260:256|284:264|284:264|312:296|364:268|364:268|452:296,1,280
464,192,29414,6,0,B|404:160|404:160|404:112|360:68|360:68|312:56|288:64|288:64|232:84,1,280,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,112,30272,1,0,0:0:0:0:
116,196,30443,6,0,L|160:272,5,70,2|0|0|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,256,31471,6,2,P|304:228|384:232,1,140
336,308,31986,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,308,32071,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,308,32157,1,0,0:0:0:0:
436,288,32500,2,0,P|464:228|428:152,1,140,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
439,162,32928,1,0,0:0:0:0:
439,162,33014,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,96,33186,5,2,0:0:0:0:
268,160,33528,2,0,P|328:188|364:172,1,105
348,224,33871,2,0,L|296:296,1,70
156,336,34214,6,0,L|112:336,7,35,2|0|0|0|2|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,296,34900,2,2,L|136:272,3,35,0|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,264,35243,2,2,L|188:224,3,35,0|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,252,35585,5,2,0:0:0:0:
352,168,35757,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,80,35928,2,0,P|340:72|304:84,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,168,36271,2,0,P|404:176|440:164,1,83.9999974365235
392,80,36614,5,2,0:0:0:0:
248,76,36785,1,0,0:0:0:0:
164,192,36957,2,0,P|152:244|184:288,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,328,37300,2,0,L|248:152,1,167.999994873047,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,192,37814,6,0,P|348:244|316:288,1,83.9999974365235,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,352,38157,1,0,0:0:0:0:
244,328,38328,2,0,P|232:276|264:232,1,83.9999974365235,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,192,38671,6,0,P|320:140|284:120,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,96,39014,2,0,P|168:80|136:88,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,228,39357,2,0,L|176:156,1,83.9999974365235
224,96,39699,6,0,P|260:144|256:268,1,167.999994873047,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,232,40385,2,0,P|80:184|84:60,1,167.999994873047,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
75,79,40814,1,0,0:0:0:0:
75,79,40899,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,128,41071,6,0,L|212:224,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,256,41414,2,0,L|300:160,1,83.9999974365235
168,128,41756,6,0,B|200:64|200:64|288:56,1,125.999996154785,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,64,42099,2,0,B|288:128|288:128|352:204,1,125.999996154785,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,204,42442,2,0,L|236:244,1,83.9999974365235
148,240,42785,6,0,P|136:180|164:160,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,120,43128,2,0,P|248:180|220:200,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,300,43471,6,0,L|160:224,1,83.9999974365235
145,239,43728,1,0,0:0:0:0:
145,239,43813,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,216,43985,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,232,44156,2,0,L|296:308,2,83.9999974365235,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,232,44585,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,232,44670,1,0,0:0:0:0:
456,216,44842,6,0,P|416:148|320:160,1,167.999994873047,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,45356,1,0,0:0:0:0:
308,296,45528,2,0,L|384:216,1,83.9999974365235
324,148,45870,6,0,P|284:164|248:204,2,83.9999974365235,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,232,46385,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,332,46556,2,0,L|256:332,1,125.999996154785
244,312,46899,6,0,P|224:220|128:216,1,167.999994873047,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,296,47413,1,0,0:0:0:0:
244,312,47585,2,0,L|272:224,1,83.9999974365235
364,232,47927,6,0,P|344:168|244:144,1,167.999994873047,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,148,48356,1,0,0:0:0:0:
212,160,48442,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,240,48613,2,0,L|168:240,1,83.9999974365235
240,328,48956,6,0,L|336:328,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,128,49299,2,0,L|392:128,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,128,49556,1,0,0:0:0:0:
428,128,49642,1,0,0:0:0:0:
408,224,49813,1,0,0:0:0:0:
408,224,49984,6,0,P|336:208|296:120,1,167.999994873047,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,128,50670,2,0,P|182:202|104:224,1,167.999994873047
80,220,51099,1,0,0:0:0:0:
56,208,51184,1,0,0:0:0:0:
76,96,51356,6,0,P|140:64|172:76,1,83.9999974365235,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,128,51699,2,0,P|152:160|120:148,1,83.9999974365235
143,158,51956,1,0,0:0:0:0:
143,158,52041,1,4,0:0:0:0:
96,260,52384,5,0,0:0:0:0:
232,316,52727,1,0,0:0:0:0:
364,252,53070,6,0,B|380:208|380:208|408:192|412:160|412:160|412:152,2,105.000004005432,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,228,54098,5,0,0:0:0:0:
272,92,54441,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,220,54784,2,0,L|308:272,1,52.5000020027161
268,340,55127,6,0,B|216:340|216:340|196:316|156:328,2,105.000004005432,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,196,56155,6,0,B|296:196|296:196|316:220|356:208,2,105.000004005432,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,96,57184,2,0,L|100:156,1,52.5000020027161
244,196,57527,2,0,L|208:256,1,52.5000020027161
356,288,57869,2,0,L|320:348,1,52.5000020027161
236,336,58212,6,0,B|248:300|264:288|264:288|280:272|280:272|312:216,1,140
388,176,58898,1,0,0:0:0:0:
276,48,59241,6,0,B|264:84|248:96|248:96|232:112|232:112|200:168,1,140
124,208,59926,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,312,60269,6,0,L|276:312,1,70
256,212,60612,2,0,L|340:212,1,70
320,112,60955,2,0,L|404:112,1,70
468,176,61298,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,272,61469,2,0,B|420:288|420:288|380:280|380:280,1,70
324,200,61812,1,0,0:0:0:0:
236,156,61983,2,0,B|196:136|196:136|196:80,1,70
292,92,62326,5,0,0:0:0:0:
376,140,62498,1,0,0:0:0:0:
292,188,62669,2,0,L|272:268,1,70
188,300,63012,2,0,L|208:220,1,70
232,136,63355,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,63440,12,0,64212,0:0:0:0:
188,176,64383,5,0,0:0:0:0:
276,136,64555,1,0,0:0:0:0:
364,180,64726,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,272,64898,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,352,65069,2,0,P|280:340|264:288,1,105
272,260,65412,5,0,0:0:0:0:
292,164,65583,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,80,65755,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,68,65926,1,0,0:0:0:0:
72,136,66097,2,0,P|76:184|164:192,1,140
272,140,66783,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,140,67126,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,140,67469,6,0,P|268:92|180:84,1,140
272,140,68154,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,140,68326,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,144,68497,6,0,P|256:188|288:236,1,83.9999974365235
269,220,68754,1,0,0:0:0:0:
269,220,68840,1,8,0:0:0:0:
388,236,69012,1,0,0:0:0:0:
360,108,69183,6,0,P|300:52|212:68,1,167.999994873047,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,62,69611,1,0,0:0:0:0:
220,62,69697,1,0,0:0:0:0:
196,184,69869,2,0,L|280:136,1,83.9999974365235
268,142,70126,1,0,0:0:0:0:
268,142,70211,1,8,0:0:0:0:
328,240,70383,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,240,70554,6,0,L|244:288,1,83.9999974365235
116,156,70897,2,0,L|228:196,1,83.9999974365235,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,116,71240,2,0,L|236:156,1,83.9999974365235
244,232,71583,2,0,P|192:192|212:72,1,167.999994873047,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
191,95,72011,1,0,0:0:0:0:
191,95,72097,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,148,72268,6,0,L|72:208,1,167.999994873047,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,200,72697,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,200,72783,1,0,0:0:0:0:
116,316,72954,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,228,73125,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,332,73297,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,236,73468,1,0,0:0:0:0:
268,132,73640,6,0,L|208:72,1,83.9999974365235,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,64,73983,2,0,L|388:124,1,83.9999974365235
400,136,74240,1,0,0:0:0:0:
412,148,74325,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,236,74497,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,236,74668,2,0,P|264:192|136:208,1,167.999994873047,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,280,75354,6,0,L|200:88,1,167.999994873047,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,117,75782,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,117,75868,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,68,76040,1,0,0:0:0:0:
404,128,76211,1,0,0:0:0:0:
404,128,76382,2,0,L|332:176,1,83.9999974365235,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,252,76725,6,0,L|260:300,1,83.9999974365235
262,298,76982,1,0,0:0:0:0:
262,298,77068,1,8,0:0:0:0:
124,240,77411,6,0,P|120:160|192:108,1,167.999994873047,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
183,109,77839,1,0,0:0:0:0:
183,109,77925,1,0,0:0:0:0:
276,152,78097,2,0,P|236:196|180:200,2,83.9999974365235,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,56,78611,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,56,78782,6,0,P|304:60|344:92,2,87.5,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,148,79296,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,80,79468,2,0,L|68:160,1,87.5
200,152,79811,2,0,L|124:232,1,87.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,280,80154,1,0,0:0:0:0:
84,280,80496,6,0,P|136:328|244:304,1,167.999994873047,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,304,80925,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,284,81011,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,160,81182,2,0,L|200:232,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,152,81525,2,0,L|136:80,1,70
196,228,81868,6,0,P|192:276|280:312,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,232,82553,2,0,P|332:212|276:240,1,105,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,208,82896,6,0,L|248:108,1,70
184,264,83239,2,0,L|168:164,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,324,83582,2,0,L|76:224,1,70
216,340,83925,6,0,B|272:344|292:328|292:328|344:356|396:328|396:328|436:300|436:300|456:252,1,280,8|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,160,84782,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,148,84953,6,0,L|336:260,1,105.000004005432
334,250,85382,1,0,0:0:0:0:
334,250,85467,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,284,85639,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,284,85982,6,0,P|192:216|80:228,1,183.750007009506
80,236,86667,2,0,L|52:292,1,52.5000020027161
124,344,87010,2,0,L|152:288,1,52.5000020027161
232,284,87353,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,284,87696,2,0,P|284:272|304:296,1,78.7500030040742
328,264,88039,6,0,L|368:200,1,52.5000020027161
404,136,88381,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,80,88724,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,320,89067,6,0,P|244:336|268:216,1,210.000008010865
212,160,89924,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,72,90096,2,0,P|372:104|408:240,1,210.000008010865
320,220,91124,5,0,0:0:0:0:
264,304,91296,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,216,91467,2,0,L|152:156,1,70
108,248,91810,2,0,L|52:308,1,70
172,328,92153,2,0,B|224:316|236:336|236:336|264:324|320:328,2,140,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,228,93181,5,0,0:0:0:0:
208,144,93353,1,0,0:0:0:0:
300,116,93524,1,0,0:0:0:0:
396,132,93695,1,0,0:0:0:0:
464,200,93867,2,0,L|436:284,2,70,0|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,200,94295,5,0,0:0:0:0:
464,200,94381,1,0,0:0:0:0:
396,132,94552,2,0,P|360:116|320:140,1,70
260,216,94895,2,0,P|296:232|336:208,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,132,95238,2,0,B|360:120|348:136|336:128|336:128|304:136|296:128|296:128|252:128,2,140,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,232,96267,6,0,B|400:256|400:256|380:316|364:328|304:336,2,167.999994873047,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,100,97295,6,0,L|308:248,1,140,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,292,97809,1,0,0:0:0:0:
132,264,97981,1,8,0:0:0:0:
132,168,98152,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,108,98324,6,0,L|204:256,1,140,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,292,98838,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,260,99009,1,0,0:0:0:0:
424,172,99181,1,0,0:0:0:0:
340,120,99352,6,0,L|336:268,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,259,99781,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,259,99866,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,316,100038,6,2,L|216:312,7,35,8|0|0|0|0|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,292,100723,2,2,L|224:252,3,35,0|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,276,101066,2,2,L|280:224,3,35,0|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,276,101409,5,14,0:0:0:0:
320,276,102438,5,2,0:0:0:0:
320,276,103466,6,0,B|280:240|280:240|284:204|272:184|272:184|244:156,2,140,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,248,104323,1,0,0:0:0:0:
424,148,104495,6,0,B|460:112|460:88|460:88|484:68|504:32,2,140,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,180,105523,2,0,L|124:280,1,140
324,304,106209,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,124,106552,6,0,L|292:224,1,140
100,216,107237,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,120,107580,6,0,B|220:132|248:120|248:120|272:136|312:124,2,140,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,224,108609,6,0,B|160:240|160:240|136:224|112:244|72:232,2,140,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,304,109466,1,0,0:0:0:0:
396,284,109637,6,0,B|440:248|440:248|440:144,1,140
460,60,110323,1,0,0:0:0:0:
340,80,110666,6,0,B|296:116|296:116|296:220,2,140,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,80,111694,6,0,L|192:80,1,140
168,180,112380,1,0,0:0:0:0:
116,264,112551,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,264,112723,6,0,P|224:288|248:204,1,280,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,116,113751,6,0,P|296:108|444:240,1,280,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,252,114522,1,0,0:0:0:0:
452,276,114608,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,296,114780,6,0,P|348:232|208:212,1,210,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,216,115379,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,232,115465,1,0,0:0:0:0:
104,304,115637,1,0,0:0:0:0:
104,304,115808,6,0,P|88:200|240:120,1,280,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,176,116837,6,2,L|300:216,3,35,0|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,224,117179,2,2,L|320:272,3,35,0|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,272,117522,2,2,L|340:320,3,35,0|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,324,117865,5,14,0:0:0:0:
456,288,118276,2,0,L|456:216,1,70
384,140,119028,5,2,0:0:0:0:
348,276,119404,1,0,0:0:0:0:
376,192,119780,2,0,P|328:180|304:192,1,70,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,248,120533,5,0,0:0:0:0:
304,128,120909,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,40,121285,2,0,P|204:52|204:72,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,188,122037,5,0,0:0:0:0:
240,248,122428,1,2,0:0:0:0:
336,264,122825,1,0,0:0:0:0:
412,204,123222,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,108,123620,6,0,P|404:88|376:84,1,52.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,84,124033,2,0,P|336:88|304:108,1,52.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,116,124447,2,0,P|276:140|272:152,1,35,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,300,125067,5,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,125178,12,0,127733,0:0:0:0:

yf_bmp

Elite Storyboarder II / Elite Mapper

1,630 posts

Joined December 2011

yf_bmp 2014-07-25T11:00:33+00:00

帮别人做GD怎么可以质量欠佳

liaoxingyao

864 posts

Joined November 2013

liaoxingyao 2014-07-30T08:24:12+00:00

GD
抱歉GD太屎了...sad

-[Hikari]-

84 posts

Joined February 2014

Topic Starter

-[Hikari]- 2014-07-31T02:43:23+00:00

Hakurei Yoru wrote:

嘿~你的GD~
滑条肯定是拉得难看的可以自己改改。
质量欠佳见谅。

SPOILER

osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: 5-03 Brionac ~Lugh Lamhfhata~.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 68069
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.6
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.3
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.9

[Metadata]
Title:Brionac ~Lugh Lamhfhata~
TitleUnicode:Brionac ~Lugh Lamhfhata~
Artist:Project Grimoire
ArtistUnicode:Project Grimoire
Creator:- H i k a r i -
Version:Hyper
Source:Cytus
Tags:ICE
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:-1

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.4
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"IMG_0726.PNG",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

[TimingPoints]
1145,374.391613627855,3,2,0,20,1,0
18788,342.831675361259,3,2,0,40,1,0
19130,342.831675361259,3,2,0,40,1,0
31471,-100,3,2,0,60,0,0
35585,-83.3333333333333,3,1,0,60,0,0
52034,-133.333333333333,3,2,0,60,0,0
58212,-100,3,2,0,70,0,0
68154,-83.3333333333333,3,2,0,70,0,0
68497,-83.3333333333333,3,2,0,80,0,0
78782,-80,3,2,0,85,0,1
79811,-83.3333333333333,3,2,0,85,0,1
80839,-100,3,2,0,80,0,1
84610,-66.6666666666667,3,2,0,80,0,1
84953,-133.333333333333,3,2,0,60,0,0
91124,-100,3,2,0,60,0,0
92153,-100,3,2,0,60,0,0
96267,-83.3333333333333,3,2,0,65,0,0
96609,-74.0740740740741,3,2,0,70,0,0
96952,-66.6666666666667,3,2,0,75,0,0
97295,-100,3,2,0,80,0,0
105180,-100,3,2,0,70,0,0
113408,-100,3,1,0,70,0,0
117900,376.175548589342,3,2,0,40,1,0
117900,-200,3,2,0,40,0,0
122428,397.350993377483,3,2,0,40,1,0
123620,413.76456796083,3,2,0,40,1,0
123620,-200,3,2,0,40,0,0
125067,444.444444444444,3,2,0,40,1,0
127733,-100,3,2,0,5,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 179,179,179
Combo2 : 255,125,158
Combo3 : 255,255,128
Combo4 : 58,252,199

[HitObjects]
136,80,770,6,0,L|232:96,1,70
256,176,1145,2,0,L|112:200,2,140,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,264,2268,6,0,L|368:240,2,140,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,344,3391,6,0,P|128:296|144:208,1,140
220,264,4140,1,0,0:0:0:0:
220,264,4514,6,0,P|272:252|336:280,1,105
324,232,4888,2,0,L|336:152,1,70
344,76,5263,5,0,0:0:0:0:
344,76,5637,2,0,P|304:108|212:112,1,140
120,68,6386,2,0,P|160:36|252:32,1,140
344,76,7135,5,0,0:0:0:0:
344,76,7509,2,0,L|384:224,1,140
340,232,9007,6,0,L|316:140,1,70
416,148,9381,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,240,9756,2,0,P|356:232|324:164,1,140
372,72,10504,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,148,10879,6,0,L|260:208,1,140
344,264,11627,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,148,12002,2,0,P|364:108|272:144,1,140
184,188,12751,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,256,13125,6,0,P|96:216|120:136,1,140
184,188,14248,5,0,0:0:0:0:
244,256,14623,2,0,P|184:288|116:236,1,140
184,184,15371,2,0,P|244:152|312:204,1,140
344,272,16120,5,0,0:0:0:0:
248,256,16495,2,0,L|328:128,1,140
256,192,17618,12,0,18554,0:0:0:0:
312,104,18788,6,2,L|384:68,2,70,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,196,19472,2,0,L|220:272,1,140
216,176,20158,5,2,0:0:0:0:
332,88,20501,2,0,P|380:148|340:208,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,332,21186,6,2,P|224:272|364:204,1,280,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,292,22044,2,2,L|304:268,1,70,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,184,22558,5,0,0:0:0:0:
360,104,22901,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,292,23243,6,0,L|304:268,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,184,23586,2,0,L|320:208,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,220,23929,1,0,0:0:0:0:
356,104,24272,6,0,P|396:136|396:240,1,140,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,300,24958,2,0,P|240:268|240:164,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,25386,12,0,26843,0:0:0:0:
160,104,27015,5,2,0:0:0:0:
160,104,27186,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,104,27357,2,0,B|204:120|244:104|244:104|264:68|324:80|324:80|352:140|352:140|312:196,1,280,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,208,28386,6,2,B|224:272|224:272|260:256|284:264|284:264|312:296|364:268|364:268|452:296,1,280
464,192,29414,6,0,B|404:160|404:160|404:112|360:68|360:68|312:56|288:64|288:64|232:84,1,280,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,112,30272,1,0,0:0:0:0:
116,196,30443,6,0,L|160:272,5,70,2|0|0|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,256,31471,6,2,P|304:228|384:232,1,140
336,308,31986,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,308,32071,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,308,32157,1,0,0:0:0:0:
436,288,32500,2,0,P|464:228|428:152,1,140,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
439,162,32928,1,0,0:0:0:0:
439,162,33014,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,96,33186,5,2,0:0:0:0:
268,160,33528,2,0,P|328:188|364:172,1,105
348,224,33871,2,0,L|296:296,1,70
156,336,34214,6,0,L|112:336,7,35,2|0|0|0|2|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,296,34900,2,2,L|136:272,3,35,0|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,264,35243,2,2,L|188:224,3,35,0|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,252,35585,5,2,0:0:0:0:
352,168,35757,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,80,35928,2,0,P|340:72|304:84,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,168,36271,2,0,P|404:176|440:164,1,83.9999974365235
392,80,36614,5,2,0:0:0:0:
248,76,36785,1,0,0:0:0:0:
164,192,36957,2,0,P|152:244|184:288,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,328,37300,2,0,L|248:152,1,167.999994873047,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,192,37814,6,0,P|348:244|316:288,1,83.9999974365235,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,352,38157,1,0,0:0:0:0:
244,328,38328,2,0,P|232:276|264:232,1,83.9999974365235,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,192,38671,6,0,P|320:140|284:120,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,96,39014,2,0,P|168:80|136:88,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,228,39357,2,0,L|176:156,1,83.9999974365235
224,96,39699,6,0,P|260:144|256:268,1,167.999994873047,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,232,40385,2,0,P|80:184|84:60,1,167.999994873047,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
75,79,40814,1,0,0:0:0:0:
75,79,40899,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,128,41071,6,0,L|212:224,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,256,41414,2,0,L|300:160,1,83.9999974365235
168,128,41756,6,0,B|200:64|200:64|288:56,1,125.999996154785,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,64,42099,2,0,B|288:128|288:128|352:204,1,125.999996154785,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,204,42442,2,0,L|236:244,1,83.9999974365235
148,240,42785,6,0,P|136:180|164:160,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,120,43128,2,0,P|248:180|220:200,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,300,43471,6,0,L|160:224,1,83.9999974365235
145,239,43728,1,0,0:0:0:0:
145,239,43813,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,216,43985,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,232,44156,2,0,L|296:308,2,83.9999974365235,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,232,44585,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,232,44670,1,0,0:0:0:0:
456,216,44842,6,0,P|416:148|320:160,1,167.999994873047,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,45356,1,0,0:0:0:0:
308,296,45528,2,0,L|384:216,1,83.9999974365235
324,148,45870,6,0,P|284:164|248:204,2,83.9999974365235,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,232,46385,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,332,46556,2,0,L|256:332,1,125.999996154785
244,312,46899,6,0,P|224:220|128:216,1,167.999994873047,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,296,47413,1,0,0:0:0:0:
244,312,47585,2,0,L|272:224,1,83.9999974365235
364,232,47927,6,0,P|344:168|244:144,1,167.999994873047,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,148,48356,1,0,0:0:0:0:
212,160,48442,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,240,48613,2,0,L|168:240,1,83.9999974365235
240,328,48956,6,0,L|336:328,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,128,49299,2,0,L|392:128,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,128,49556,1,0,0:0:0:0:
428,128,49642,1,0,0:0:0:0:
408,224,49813,1,0,0:0:0:0:
408,224,49984,6,0,P|336:208|296:120,1,167.999994873047,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,128,50670,2,0,P|182:202|104:224,1,167.999994873047
80,220,51099,1,0,0:0:0:0:
56,208,51184,1,0,0:0:0:0:
76,96,51356,6,0,P|140:64|172:76,1,83.9999974365235,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,128,51699,2,0,P|152:160|120:148,1,83.9999974365235
143,158,51956,1,0,0:0:0:0:
143,158,52041,1,4,0:0:0:0:
96,260,52384,5,0,0:0:0:0:
232,316,52727,1,0,0:0:0:0:
364,252,53070,6,0,B|380:208|380:208|408:192|412:160|412:160|412:152,2,105.000004005432,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,228,54098,5,0,0:0:0:0:
272,92,54441,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,220,54784,2,0,L|308:272,1,52.5000020027161
268,340,55127,6,0,B|216:340|216:340|196:316|156:328,2,105.000004005432,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,196,56155,6,0,B|296:196|296:196|316:220|356:208,2,105.000004005432,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,96,57184,2,0,L|100:156,1,52.5000020027161
244,196,57527,2,0,L|208:256,1,52.5000020027161
356,288,57869,2,0,L|320:348,1,52.5000020027161
236,336,58212,6,0,B|248:300|264:288|264:288|280:272|280:272|312:216,1,140
388,176,58898,1,0,0:0:0:0:
276,48,59241,6,0,B|264:84|248:96|248:96|232:112|232:112|200:168,1,140
124,208,59926,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,312,60269,6,0,L|276:312,1,70
256,212,60612,2,0,L|340:212,1,70
320,112,60955,2,0,L|404:112,1,70
468,176,61298,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,272,61469,2,0,B|420:288|420:288|380:280|380:280,1,70
324,200,61812,1,0,0:0:0:0:
236,156,61983,2,0,B|196:136|196:136|196:80,1,70
292,92,62326,5,0,0:0:0:0:
376,140,62498,1,0,0:0:0:0:
292,188,62669,2,0,L|272:268,1,70
188,300,63012,2,0,L|208:220,1,70
232,136,63355,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,63440,12,0,64212,0:0:0:0:
188,176,64383,5,0,0:0:0:0:
276,136,64555,1,0,0:0:0:0:
364,180,64726,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,272,64898,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,352,65069,2,0,P|280:340|264:288,1,105
272,260,65412,5,0,0:0:0:0:
292,164,65583,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,80,65755,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,68,65926,1,0,0:0:0:0:
72,136,66097,2,0,P|76:184|164:192,1,140
272,140,66783,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,140,67126,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,140,67469,6,0,P|268:92|180:84,1,140
272,140,68154,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,140,68326,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,144,68497,6,0,P|256:188|288:236,1,83.9999974365235
269,220,68754,1,0,0:0:0:0:
269,220,68840,1,8,0:0:0:0:
388,236,69012,1,0,0:0:0:0:
360,108,69183,6,0,P|300:52|212:68,1,167.999994873047,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,62,69611,1,0,0:0:0:0:
220,62,69697,1,0,0:0:0:0:
196,184,69869,2,0,L|280:136,1,83.9999974365235
268,142,70126,1,0,0:0:0:0:
268,142,70211,1,8,0:0:0:0:
328,240,70383,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,240,70554,6,0,L|244:288,1,83.9999974365235
116,156,70897,2,0,L|228:196,1,83.9999974365235,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,116,71240,2,0,L|236:156,1,83.9999974365235
244,232,71583,2,0,P|192:192|212:72,1,167.999994873047,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
191,95,72011,1,0,0:0:0:0:
191,95,72097,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,148,72268,6,0,L|72:208,1,167.999994873047,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,200,72697,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,200,72783,1,0,0:0:0:0:
116,316,72954,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,228,73125,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,332,73297,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,236,73468,1,0,0:0:0:0:
268,132,73640,6,0,L|208:72,1,83.9999974365235,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,64,73983,2,0,L|388:124,1,83.9999974365235
400,136,74240,1,0,0:0:0:0:
412,148,74325,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,236,74497,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,236,74668,2,0,P|264:192|136:208,1,167.999994873047,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,280,75354,6,0,L|200:88,1,167.999994873047,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,117,75782,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,117,75868,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,68,76040,1,0,0:0:0:0:
404,128,76211,1,0,0:0:0:0:
404,128,76382,2,0,L|332:176,1,83.9999974365235,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,252,76725,6,0,L|260:300,1,83.9999974365235
262,298,76982,1,0,0:0:0:0:
262,298,77068,1,8,0:0:0:0:
124,240,77411,6,0,P|120:160|192:108,1,167.999994873047,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
183,109,77839,1,0,0:0:0:0:
183,109,77925,1,0,0:0:0:0:
276,152,78097,2,0,P|236:196|180:200,2,83.9999974365235,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,56,78611,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,56,78782,6,0,P|304:60|344:92,2,87.5,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,148,79296,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,80,79468,2,0,L|68:160,1,87.5
200,152,79811,2,0,L|124:232,1,87.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,280,80154,1,0,0:0:0:0:
84,280,80496,6,0,P|136:328|244:304,1,167.999994873047,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,304,80925,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,284,81011,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,160,81182,2,0,L|200:232,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,152,81525,2,0,L|136:80,1,70
196,228,81868,6,0,P|192:276|280:312,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,232,82553,2,0,P|332:212|276:240,1,105,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,208,82896,6,0,L|248:108,1,70
184,264,83239,2,0,L|168:164,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,324,83582,2,0,L|76:224,1,70
216,340,83925,6,0,B|272:344|292:328|292:328|344:356|396:328|396:328|436:300|436:300|456:252,1,280,8|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,160,84782,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,148,84953,6,0,L|336:260,1,105.000004005432
334,250,85382,1,0,0:0:0:0:
334,250,85467,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,284,85639,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,284,85982,6,0,P|192:216|80:228,1,183.750007009506
80,236,86667,2,0,L|52:292,1,52.5000020027161
124,344,87010,2,0,L|152:288,1,52.5000020027161
232,284,87353,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,284,87696,2,0,P|284:272|304:296,1,78.7500030040742
328,264,88039,6,0,L|368:200,1,52.5000020027161
404,136,88381,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,80,88724,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,320,89067,6,0,P|244:336|268:216,1,210.000008010865
212,160,89924,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,72,90096,2,0,P|372:104|408:240,1,210.000008010865
320,220,91124,5,0,0:0:0:0:
264,304,91296,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,216,91467,2,0,L|152:156,1,70
108,248,91810,2,0,L|52:308,1,70
172,328,92153,2,0,B|224:316|236:336|236:336|264:324|320:328,2,140,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,228,93181,5,0,0:0:0:0:
208,144,93353,1,0,0:0:0:0:
300,116,93524,1,0,0:0:0:0:
396,132,93695,1,0,0:0:0:0:
464,200,93867,2,0,L|436:284,2,70,0|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,200,94295,5,0,0:0:0:0:
464,200,94381,1,0,0:0:0:0:
396,132,94552,2,0,P|360:116|320:140,1,70
260,216,94895,2,0,P|296:232|336:208,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,132,95238,2,0,B|360:120|348:136|336:128|336:128|304:136|296:128|296:128|252:128,2,140,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,232,96267,6,0,B|400:256|400:256|380:316|364:328|304:336,2,167.999994873047,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,100,97295,6,0,L|308:248,1,140,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,292,97809,1,0,0:0:0:0:
132,264,97981,1,8,0:0:0:0:
132,168,98152,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,108,98324,6,0,L|204:256,1,140,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,292,98838,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,260,99009,1,0,0:0:0:0:
424,172,99181,1,0,0:0:0:0:
340,120,99352,6,0,L|336:268,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,259,99781,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,259,99866,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,316,100038,6,2,L|216:312,7,35,8|0|0|0|0|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,292,100723,2,2,L|224:252,3,35,0|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,276,101066,2,2,L|280:224,3,35,0|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,276,101409,5,14,0:0:0:0:
320,276,102438,5,2,0:0:0:0:
320,276,103466,6,0,B|280:240|280:240|284:204|272:184|272:184|244:156,2,140,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,248,104323,1,0,0:0:0:0:
424,148,104495,6,0,B|460:112|460:88|460:88|484:68|504:32,2,140,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,180,105523,2,0,L|124:280,1,140
324,304,106209,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,124,106552,6,0,L|292:224,1,140
100,216,107237,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,120,107580,6,0,B|220:132|248:120|248:120|272:136|312:124,2,140,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,224,108609,6,0,B|160:240|160:240|136:224|112:244|72:232,2,140,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,304,109466,1,0,0:0:0:0:
396,284,109637,6,0,B|440:248|440:248|440:144,1,140
460,60,110323,1,0,0:0:0:0:
340,80,110666,6,0,B|296:116|296:116|296:220,2,140,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,80,111694,6,0,L|192:80,1,140
168,180,112380,1,0,0:0:0:0:
116,264,112551,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,264,112723,6,0,P|224:288|248:204,1,280,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,116,113751,6,0,P|296:108|444:240,1,280,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,252,114522,1,0,0:0:0:0:
452,276,114608,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,296,114780,6,0,P|348:232|208:212,1,210,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,216,115379,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,232,115465,1,0,0:0:0:0:
104,304,115637,1,0,0:0:0:0:
104,304,115808,6,0,P|88:200|240:120,1,280,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,176,116837,6,2,L|300:216,3,35,0|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,224,117179,2,2,L|320:272,3,35,0|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,272,117522,2,2,L|340:320,3,35,0|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,324,117865,5,14,0:0:0:0:
456,288,118276,2,0,L|456:216,1,70
384,140,119028,5,2,0:0:0:0:
348,276,119404,1,0,0:0:0:0:
376,192,119780,2,0,P|328:180|304:192,1,70,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,248,120533,5,0,0:0:0:0:
304,128,120909,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,40,121285,2,0,P|204:52|204:72,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,188,122037,5,0,0:0:0:0:
240,248,122428,1,2,0:0:0:0:
336,264,122825,1,0,0:0:0:0:
412,204,123222,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,108,123620,6,0,P|404:88|376:84,1,52.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,84,124033,2,0,P|336:88|304:108,1,52.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,116,124447,2,0,P|276:140|272:152,1,35,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,300,125067,5,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,125178,12,0,127733,0:0:0:0:

已整合

-[Hikari]-

84 posts

Joined February 2014

Topic Starter

-[Hikari]- 2014-07-31T02:44:22+00:00

liaoxingyao wrote:
GD
抱歉GD太屎了...sad

已整合

liaoxingyao

864 posts

Joined November 2013

liaoxingyao 2014-07-31T03:31:26+00:00

如果你不介意的话建议
Xingyao's Normal
Redwhite's Hyper

-[Hikari]-

84 posts

Joined February 2014

Topic Starter

-[Hikari]- 2014-08-03T09:38:46+00:00

liaoxingyao wrote:
如果你不介意的话建议
Xingyao's Normal
Redwhite's Hyper

ok

Hakurei Yoru

688 posts

Joined September 2013

Hakurei Yoru 2014-08-05T10:35:54+00:00

[general]
嗯，其实好图。
[Normal]
说残忍点直接删了吧。
说好听点remap plz.
梗用得完全超出了NM的范围了。
[Insane]
把前面做了吧。
00:33:528 (1) - 这音空得简直世界第一不愉快。红线起连打也是……

01:08:497 (1,2,3) - 咋和hhkkyy一样都喜欢这么长的条结尾还把俩1/4错开..其实这里重叠会不会能看点——当然这只是建议。

01:15:697 (7) - 音乐没吵你吵啥。

01:24:953 (1) - 这里一段有点浪费音乐密度哦。01:32:153 (4) -

这里不得不提一下，你这In的下节奏密度也是莫名其妙得很，处理好作为玩家打一张图对音乐感觉出来的节奏，这样一个关系是很重要的。
这张In吧，很多应该高密度的地方就是长滑条打法，就一张Diff你偷什么懒——————其实吧就一段……

01:31:467 (1,2,3,4) - 换梗。

01:38:152 (3,2) - 弄成短滑条不要在中间空音会更好。

01:56:151 (5) - ^

其实说那么多干啥呢，空音空得有点多，而且空得特别难受。
自己做出来的图全程仔细听听音效。

没摸过几次我都敢这么装比。
肯定要被婊，我先跑，有人婊我我不说话。

-[Hikari]-

84 posts

Joined February 2014

Topic Starter

-[Hikari]- 2014-08-06T03:10:09+00:00

Hakurei Yoru wrote:
[general]
嗯，其实好图。
[Normal]
说残忍点直接删了吧。
说好听点remap plz.
梗用得完全超出了NM的范围了。;w;那得我自己来一张了
[Insane]
把前面做了吧。
00:33:528 (1) - 这音空得简直世界第一不愉快。红线起连打也是…… fixed

01:08:497 (1,2,3) - 咋和hhkkyy一样都喜欢这么长的条结尾还把俩1/4错开..其实这里重叠会不会能看点——当然这只是建议。 stack了

01:15:697 (7) - 音乐没吵你吵啥。改成4分拍跟钢琴音惹

01:24:953 (1) - 这里一段有点浪费音乐密度哦。

01:32:153 (4) -

这里不得不提一下，你这In的下节奏密度也是莫名其妙得很，处理好作为玩家打一张图对音乐感觉出来的节奏，这样一个关系是很重要的。
这张In吧，很多应该高密度的地方就是长滑条打法，就一张Diff你偷什么懒——————其实吧就一段……
和上一条一起回复了吧，2nd还是不太敢下节奏下的太狠……于是水段不少……个人感觉做成水段问题也不大（明明是不水自己就打不动了
01:31:467 (1,2,3,4) - 换梗。 fixed

01:38:152 (3,2) - 弄成短滑条不要在中间空音会更好。

01:56:151 (5) - ^ fixed

其实说那么多干啥呢，空音空得有点多，而且空得特别难受。
自己做出来的图全程仔细听听音效。 ;w;我还是图样……

没摸过几次我都敢这么装比。
肯定要被婊，我先跑，有人婊我我不说话。

Edogawa Conan

54 posts

Joined April 2014

Edogawa Conan 2014-08-06T08:26:10+00:00

顶;w;

Spring

117 posts

Joined March 2013

Spring 2014-08-08T07:14:02+00:00

hyper

01:00:098 - 建议加一个note和前面的2同一位置，这里的音比较高，加一个note和前面00:58:898 (2) - 区别开比较好，和后面连起来也感觉很顺
01:01:983 (7) - 这个可以画的更加标准些，像这个01:01:469 (5) -

insane

00:42:271 (3) - Ctrl+G 感觉打起来更舒服
01:46:723 (2,3) - 这两个改成和前面这个01:46:037 (3,4,5) - 一样的三连感觉不错
01:53:580 - 这个位置的音挺容易听到的，加一个note柑橘能更好
01:50:494 (4,5) - 间距和这里01:49:808 (1,2) - 相同更好看些

渣摸请不要见怪

-[Hikari]-

84 posts

Joined February 2014

Topic Starter

-[Hikari]- 2014-08-10T07:29:37+00:00

sodarose wrote:
insane
建议把开头那段也做了吧orz
01:31:467 (1,2,1,2) - 感觉怪怪的 ;w;我觉得没啥问题……
02:05:067 (1) - 这里加个circle，把转盘移到02:05:178 fixed

Redwhite's Hyper
感觉改成hard会不会好一些啊
吐槽下滑条尾2连切指太多了orz
00:30:443 (1) - 少折返一下感觉好一些
00:34:900 (2) - NC
01:40:723 (2) - ^

渣摸见谅orz

-[Hikari]-

84 posts

Joined February 2014

Topic Starter

-[Hikari]- 2014-08-10T07:36:05+00:00

spring wrote:
hyper
01:00:098 - 建议加一个note和前面的2同一位置，这里的音比较高，加一个note和前面00:58:898 (2) - 区别开比较好，和后面连起来也感觉很顺
01:01:983 (7) - 这个可以画的更加标准些，像这个01:01:469 (5) -

insane
00:42:271 (3) - Ctrl+G 感觉打起来更舒服 fixed，这样改真的很不错哎
01:46:723 (2,3) - 这两个改成和前面这个01:46:037 (3,4,5) - 一样的三连感觉不错这里没音…而且我这样摆了也没办法改成三连了
01:53:580 - 这个位置的音挺容易听到的，加一个note柑橘能更好 fixed
01:50:494 (4,5) - 间距和这里01:49:808 (1,2) - 相同更好看些我考虑下
渣摸请不要见怪

MirinH

726 posts

Joined January 2013

MirinH 2014-08-10T09:07:50+00:00

ok mod it is
Do u want a guest diff(

[zjwautumn's Easy]
u dont make Easy by ds 1.4, i dont know its rankable or not.
[Yoru's Hyper]
00:02:268 (1,1) - plz blanket it well
00:02:268 (1,2) - not really stacking
00:04:514 (1,2) - I think 3/4 slider is not good here because the music is not very high. I will put 4/4 slider and a note here if I'm mapping.
00:08:258 - you need add some note here.
00:09:007 (1,3) - doesn't really staking
00:09:381 (2,3) - blanket
00:12:751 (4,1) - ^
00:14:248 (1,2) - ^
00:14:623 (2,2) - stacking
00:19:472 (2,2,1) - ^
00:21:186 (1,2) - blanket
00:22:901 (2,3,1) - stacking
00:23:586 (2,2) - ^
00:31:471 (1,2,3,4,5) - Blanket
00:39:014 (2) - Maybe ctrl + g flow better
00:42:785 (1,1) - stacking
00:44:156 (5,6,7,3) - ^
00:54:784 (3,1) - ^
01:01:812 (6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - looks not good
01:08:326 (3,1) - stacking
01:08:497 (1,4) - ^
01:09:183 (1,4) - Blanket
01:14:668 (6,1) - ^
I dont want write more, there is many problem like those, u need all fix it
[Insane]
00:38:328 (2) - I think clap here its better
00:46:556 (2) - ^
00:47:585 (6,7) - ^
01:45:180 (1,2) - maybe stack

-[Hikari]-

84 posts

Joined February 2014

Topic Starter

-[Hikari]- 2014-08-10T09:26:07+00:00

- D a s z x - wrote:
ok mod it is
Do u want a guest diff( glad if you can make a more difficult one
[zjwautumn's Easy]
u dont make Easy by ds 1.4, i dont know its rankable or not.
[Yoru's Hyper]
00:02:268 (1,1) - plz blanket it well
00:02:268 (1,2) - not really stacking
00:04:514 (1,2) - I think 3/4 slider is not good here because the music is not very high. I will put 4/4 slider and a note here if I'm mapping.
00:08:258 - you need add some note here.
00:09:007 (1,3) - doesn't really staking
00:09:381 (2,3) - blanket
00:12:751 (4,1) - ^
00:14:248 (1,2) - ^
00:14:623 (2,2) - stacking
00:19:472 (2,2,1) - ^
00:21:186 (1,2) - blanket
00:22:901 (2,3,1) - stacking
00:23:586 (2,2) - ^
00:31:471 (1,2,3,4,5) - Blanket
00:39:014 (2) - Maybe ctrl + g flow better
00:42:785 (1,1) - stacking
00:44:156 (5,6,7,3) - ^
00:54:784 (3,1) - ^
01:01:812 (6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - looks not good
01:08:326 (3,1) - stacking
01:08:497 (1,4) - ^
01:09:183 (1,4) - Blanket
01:14:668 (6,1) - ^
I dont want write more, there is many problem like those, u need all fix it
[Insane]
00:38:328 (2) - I think clap here its better
00:46:556 (2) - ^
00:47:585 (6,7) - ^
01:45:180 (1,2) - maybe stack All fixed

IamKwaN

osu! Alumni

3,905 posts

Joined August 2012

IamKwaN 2014-08-10T15:49:07+00:00

不給十張票 (dance

http://puu.sh/aMBl5/2575187743.rar

EDIT:

SPOILER

osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: 5-03 Brionac ~Lugh Lamhfhata~.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 68069
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.6
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 0.7999989

[Metadata]
Title:Brionac ~Lugh Lamhfhata~
TitleUnicode:Brionac ~Lugh Lamhfhata~
Artist:Project Grimoire
ArtistUnicode:Project Grimoire
Creator:- H i k a r i -
Version:KwaN's Normal
Source:Cytus
Tags:ICE zjwautumn IamKwaN Hakurei Yoru
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:-1

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:4
SliderMultiplier:1
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"IMG_0726.PNG",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

[TimingPoints]
1145,374.391613627855,3,2,88,35,1,0
18788,342.831675361259,3,2,88,45,1,0
19130,342.831675361259,3,2,88,35,1,0
29414,-100,3,2,88,45,0,0
31471,-100,3,2,88,50,0,0
35585,-100,3,2,89,75,0,0
36614,-100,3,2,89,65,0,0
36957,-100,3,2,89,75,0,0
37642,-100,3,2,89,65,0,0
37814,-100,3,2,89,75,0,0
43813,-100,3,2,89,65,0,0
44156,-100,3,2,89,75,0,0
44842,-100,3,2,89,65,0,0
45185,-100,3,2,89,75,0,0
59584,-100,3,2,89,85,0,0
59926,-100,3,2,89,95,0,0
60269,-100,3,2,89,75,0,0
64383,-100,3,2,89,65,0,0
64555,-100,3,2,89,75,0,0
65412,-100,3,2,89,65,0,0
65583,-100,3,2,89,75,0,0
68497,-100,3,2,89,85,0,1
76640,-100,3,2,89,85,0,0
76725,-100,3,2,89,85,0,1
77754,-100,3,2,89,75,0,1
77925,-100,3,2,89,85,0,1
80839,-100,3,2,89,75,0,1
81011,-100,3,2,89,85,0,1
81868,-100,3,2,89,75,0,1
82039,-100,3,2,89,85,0,1
84953,-100,3,2,89,85,0,0
96267,-100,3,2,89,95,0,0
97295,-100,3,2,89,65,0,0
97467,-100,3,2,89,85,0,0
98324,-100,3,2,89,75,0,0
98495,-100,3,2,89,85,0,0
101409,-100,3,2,89,55,0,1
101495,-100,3,2,89,55,0,0
113751,-100,3,2,89,45,0,0
113922,-100,3,2,89,55,0,0
114780,-100,3,2,89,45,0,0
114951,-100,3,2,89,55,0,0
115808,-100,3,2,89,45,0,0
115979,-100,3,2,89,55,0,0
117900,376.175548589342,3,2,88,35,1,0
122428,397.350993377483,3,2,88,25,1,0
123620,413.76456796083,3,2,88,25,1,0
125067,444.444444444444,3,2,88,15,1,0
127733,-100,3,2,88,5,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 179,179,179
Combo2 : 255,125,158
Combo3 : 255,255,128
Combo4 : 58,252,199

[HitObjects]
171,74,770,6,0,L|176:123,1,50,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
198,168,1145,6,0,P|243:185|292:173,2,100,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
162,261,2268,2,0,P|117:278|68:266,2,100,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,296,3391,5,2,0:0:0:0:
349,329,3765,2,0,P|394:312|443:324,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
488,234,4514,2,0,P|506:157|432:72,1,200,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
331,75,5637,6,0,P|285:95|238:84,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,62,6386,1,8,0:0:0:0:
124,160,6760,2,0,P|144:206|133:253,2,100,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,62,7884,6,0,B|186:85|186:85|235:82,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,114,8632,2,0,B|376:110|376:110|423:134,1,100,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
449,230,9381,1,2,0:0:0:0:
395,314,9756,1,2,0:0:0:0:
295,316,10130,6,0,L|196:300,2,100,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
273,218,11253,2,0,L|175:202,2,100,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
327,133,12376,5,2,0:0:0:0:
268,51,12751,2,0,P|223:29|170:36,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
74,31,13499,2,0,B|74:91|118:119|118:119|81:157|92:210,1,200,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
190,187,14623,6,0,P|192:239|163:277,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
85,337,15371,1,8,0:0:0:0:
178,371,15746,2,0,L|279:359,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
366,314,16495,1,8,0:0:0:0:
442,249,16869,6,0,P|466:295|462:346,2,100,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
385,166,17992,1,2,0:0:0:0:
171,73,18788,6,0,L|164:122,1,50,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
147,169,19130,6,0,L|155:271,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
93,347,19815,1,8,0:0:0:0:
40,261,20158,2,0,L|44:207,2,50,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
93,347,20844,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,337,21186,6,0,L|292:328,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,303,21872,2,0,L|393:251,1,50,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
414,207,22215,2,0,L|421:106,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
346,39,22901,1,8,0:0:0:0:
251,70,23243,6,0,L|201:76,1,50,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
161,107,23586,2,0,P|115:124|67:111,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
34,206,24272,2,0,L|45:308,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
127,361,24958,1,8,0:0:0:0:
190,284,25300,6,0,L|200:184,2,100,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
285,252,26329,2,0,L|295:152,2,100,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
294,301,27186,1,0,0:0:0:0:
318,344,27357,6,0,P|363:364|410:352,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
468,270,28042,1,8,0:0:0:0:
473,169,28386,2,0,L|477:117,2,50,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
379,205,29071,1,8,0:0:0:0:
314,128,29414,6,0,P|265:140|217:127,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
118,117,30100,2,0,L|68:126,2,50,8|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
158,208,30786,1,0,0:0:0:0:
159,308,31129,1,8,0:0:0:0:
244,359,31471,6,0,L|255:255,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
265,159,32157,1,8,0:0:0:0:
355,115,32500,2,0,L|366:219,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,315,33186,1,8,0:0:0:0:
283,352,33528,6,0,P|236:363|186:349,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,287,34214,1,8,0:0:0:0:
153,197,34557,2,0,B|164:135|131:92|131:92|173:109|218:84,1,200,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,50,35585,5,4,0:1:0:0:
407,80,35928,2,0,P|422:130|404:178,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,252,36614,1,4,0:1:0:0:
439,282,36957,2,0,P|454:332|436:380,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
349,331,37642,6,0,L|250:345,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
157,307,38328,2,0,L|154:256,1,50,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
123,217,38671,2,0,L|117:116,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
189,47,39357,2,0,L|240:51,1,50,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,53,39699,5,2,0:0:0:0:
348,133,40042,1,0,0:0:0:0:
315,227,40385,1,8,0:0:0:0:
337,324,40728,2,0,P|248:300|218:205,1,200,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,106,41756,6,0,B|150:96|150:96|102:107,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,185,42442,1,8,0:0:0:0:
73,279,42785,2,0,L|69:335,2,50,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,247,43471,2,0,L|164:197,1,50,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,147,43813,5,4,0:1:0:0:
200,55,44156,2,0,P|247:44|296:56,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
379,112,44842,1,4,0:1:0:0:
462,168,45185,2,0,P|464:216|444:262,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
362,320,45870,6,0,P|314:309|264:320,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
166,335,46556,2,0,L|159:281,1,50,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
138,240,46899,2,0,L|149:141,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,66,47585,1,8,0:0:0:0:
59,164,47927,6,0,P|108:167|149:140,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
179,99,48442,1,0,0:0:0:0:
217,67,48613,2,0,P|263:61|310:84,1,100,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
389,145,49299,2,0,L|443:137,2,50,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,236,49984,6,0,L|346:336,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
246,345,50670,2,0,L|244:295,1,50,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
226,248,51013,2,0,P|178:239|131:255,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
36,220,51699,1,8,0:0:0:0:
96,140,52041,6,0,L|94:33,2,100,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,208,53070,2,0,P|256:248|344:208,1,200,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,140,54098,6,0,L|418:33,2,100,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
319,113,55127,2,0,P|256:171|274:276,1,200,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
306,313,55984,1,0,0:0:0:0:
349,336,56155,6,0,B|397:351|397:351|446:339,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
491,249,56841,1,8,0:0:0:0:
449,157,57184,1,2,0:0:0:0:
449,157,57869,1,8,0:0:0:0:
363,104,58212,6,0,L|355:5,2,100,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
286,168,59241,1,2,0:0:0:0:
191,201,59584,1,8,0:0:0:0:
115,136,59926,1,8,0:0:0:0:
65,222,60269,6,0,P|55:273|72:319,2,100,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
155,265,61298,2,0,P|203:260|250:278,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
331,336,61983,1,8,0:0:0:0:
402,266,62326,6,0,L|502:253,2,100,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,197,63355,2,0,P|316:150|331:102,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
417,51,64040,1,8,0:0:0:0:
401,150,64383,6,0,L|252:150,1,150,4|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,150,65069,1,8,0:0:0:0:
115,96,65412,2,0,B|85:149|116:204|116:204|92:239|108:286,1,200,4|8,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,332,66269,1,0,0:0:0:0:
174,351,66440,6,0,P|223:340|272:353,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,279,67126,1,8,0:0:0:0:
410,207,67469,2,0,P|459:218|508:205,2,100,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
459,119,68497,6,0,P|410:106|363:120,1,100,4|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
317,138,69012,1,0,0:0:0:0:
268,120,69183,2,0,P|220:106|172:119,1,100,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,251,70040,2,0,L|48:257,2,50,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
137,284,70554,6,0,B|186:277|186:277|238:283,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,242,71240,1,8,0:0:0:0:
381,326,71583,2,0,P|428:244|380:160,1,200,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,74,72611,5,2,0:0:0:0:
233,40,72955,2,0,L|134:55,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
77,137,73640,1,2,0:0:0:0:
172,171,73984,2,0,L|271:156,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,242,74668,6,0,P|334:290|322:338,2,100,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
374,157,75697,2,0,L|475:143,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,43,76382,2,0,L|413:50,1,50,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,57,76725,6,0,B|314:64|314:64|266:52,1,100,4|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
166,67,77411,1,8,0:0:0:0:
81,121,77754,2,0,P|68:170|89:214,1,100,4|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
141,297,78439,1,8,0:0:0:0:
235,330,78782,6,0,L|334:335,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
417,278,79468,1,8,0:0:0:0:
457,186,79811,2,0,L|468:82,2,100,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
358,200,80839,6,0,L|347:100,1,100,4|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
265,42,81525,1,8,0:0:0:0:
172,79,81868,2,0,L|161:178,1,100,4|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
79,237,82554,1,8,0:0:0:0:
34,326,82896,6,0,P|81:337|130:323,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,279,83582,1,8,0:0:0:0:
314,311,83925,2,0,P|362:300|409:313,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
483,246,84610,1,8,0:0:0:0:
423,165,84953,6,0,P|330:145|307:53,1,200,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
206,53,85982,2,0,P|208:102|185:145,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
91,165,86667,1,8,0:0:0:0:
141,251,87010,6,0,P|189:262|219:300,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
314,329,87696,1,8,0:0:0:0:
410,302,88039,2,0,L|439:199,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
421,106,88724,1,8,0:0:0:0:
337,51,89067,6,0,B|287:35|287:35|238:41,2,100,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
421,106,90096,1,2,0:0:0:0:
337,161,90438,2,0,B|287:177|287:177|238:171,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
189,164,90953,1,0,0:0:0:0:
139,158,91124,6,0,P|121:204|130:252,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
186,335,91810,1,8,0:0:0:0:
285,322,92153,2,0,P|333:329|383:310,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
442,233,92838,1,8,0:0:0:0:
418,135,93181,6,0,L|426:35,2,100,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
379,167,94038,1,0,0:0:0:0:
335,191,94210,2,0,P|245:206|180:130,1,200,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
207,33,95238,5,2,0:0:0:0:
278,105,95581,1,0,0:0:0:0:
243,198,95924,1,8,0:0:0:0:
144,214,96267,1,2,0:0:0:0:
92,128,96609,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,214,96952,1,8,0:0:0:0:
91,299,97295,6,0,B|145:331|199:300|199:300|237:320|284:306,1,200,4|8,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
365,362,98324,2,0,B|397:308|366:254|366:254|386:216|372:169,1,200,4|8,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
429,88,99352,6,0,B|375:56|321:87|321:87|283:67|236:81,1,200,4|8,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
150,130,100381,2,0,P|101:139|51:127,2,100,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
235,182,101409,6,0,L|227:282,1,100,4|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
145,339,102094,1,8,0:0:0:0:
85,258,102437,2,0,L|36:253,2,50,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
145,339,103123,1,8,0:0:0:0:
234,295,103466,6,0,P|283:291|331:306,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
429,289,104151,2,0,L|432:240,1,50,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
417,190,104494,2,0,L|414:91,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,37,105180,1,8,0:0:0:0:
237,79,105522,6,0,L|187:85,1,50,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
141,63,105866,2,0,L|42:76,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
20,173,106551,2,0,P|10:218|36:263,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
117,322,107237,1,8,0:0:0:0:
206,278,107580,6,0,L|213:178,2,100,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
306,278,108609,2,0,L|299:178,2,100,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
331,320,109465,1,0,0:0:0:0:
369,352,109637,6,0,P|417:365|463:348,1,100,4|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
486,250,110322,1,8,0:0:0:0:
458,153,110665,2,0,L|462:98,2,50,4|0|0,0:1|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
374,208,111351,1,8,0:0:0:0:
294,146,111694,6,0,B|246:132|246:132|210:98,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
115,63,112380,2,0,L|62:68,2,50,8|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
125,162,113066,1,0,0:0:0:0:
76,249,113409,1,8,0:0:0:0:
142,323,113751,6,0,P|189:333|241:322,1,100,4|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
321,265,114437,1,8,0:0:0:0:
334,165,114780,2,0,P|287:175|235:164,1,100,4|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
155,107,115466,1,8,0:0:0:0:
227,38,115808,6,0,P|274:28|326:39,1,100,4|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
411,88,116494,1,8,0:0:0:0:
445,181,116837,2,0,B|437:229|401:255|401:255|444:306|421:358,1,200,4|8,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
326,325,117900,6,0,L|227:334,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,283,118652,1,8,0:0:0:0:
201,204,119028,2,0,L|300:213,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
387,162,119780,1,8,0:0:0:0:
389,61,120157,6,0,P|437:70|474:105,2,100,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
291,81,121285,2,0,P|241:91|196:74,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
110,22,122037,1,8,0:0:0:0:
102,120,122428,6,0,L|2:131,2,100,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,192,123620,6,0,L|263:203,2,100,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
121,217,124654,1,2,0:0:0:0:
136,308,125067,5,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,125289,12,0,127733,0:0:0:0:

-[Hikari]-

84 posts

Joined February 2014

Topic Starter

-[Hikari]- 2014-08-11T04:23:31+00:00

IamKwaN wrote:

不給十張票 (dance

http://puu.sh/aMBl5/2575187743.rar

EDIT:

SPOILER

osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: 5-03 Brionac ~Lugh Lamhfhata~.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 68069
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.6
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 0.7999989

[Metadata]
Title:Brionac ~Lugh Lamhfhata~
TitleUnicode:Brionac ~Lugh Lamhfhata~
Artist:Project Grimoire
ArtistUnicode:Project Grimoire
Creator:- H i k a r i -
Version:KwaN's Normal
Source:Cytus
Tags:ICE zjwautumn IamKwaN Hakurei Yoru
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:-1

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:4
SliderMultiplier:1
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"IMG_0726.PNG",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

[TimingPoints]
1145,374.391613627855,3,2,88,35,1,0
18788,342.831675361259,3,2,88,45,1,0
19130,342.831675361259,3,2,88,35,1,0
29414,-100,3,2,88,45,0,0
31471,-100,3,2,88,50,0,0
35585,-100,3,2,89,75,0,0
36614,-100,3,2,89,65,0,0
36957,-100,3,2,89,75,0,0
37642,-100,3,2,89,65,0,0
37814,-100,3,2,89,75,0,0
43813,-100,3,2,89,65,0,0
44156,-100,3,2,89,75,0,0
44842,-100,3,2,89,65,0,0
45185,-100,3,2,89,75,0,0
59584,-100,3,2,89,85,0,0
59926,-100,3,2,89,95,0,0
60269,-100,3,2,89,75,0,0
64383,-100,3,2,89,65,0,0
64555,-100,3,2,89,75,0,0
65412,-100,3,2,89,65,0,0
65583,-100,3,2,89,75,0,0
68497,-100,3,2,89,85,0,1
76640,-100,3,2,89,85,0,0
76725,-100,3,2,89,85,0,1
77754,-100,3,2,89,75,0,1
77925,-100,3,2,89,85,0,1
80839,-100,3,2,89,75,0,1
81011,-100,3,2,89,85,0,1
81868,-100,3,2,89,75,0,1
82039,-100,3,2,89,85,0,1
84953,-100,3,2,89,85,0,0
96267,-100,3,2,89,95,0,0
97295,-100,3,2,89,65,0,0
97467,-100,3,2,89,85,0,0
98324,-100,3,2,89,75,0,0
98495,-100,3,2,89,85,0,0
101409,-100,3,2,89,55,0,1
101495,-100,3,2,89,55,0,0
113751,-100,3,2,89,45,0,0
113922,-100,3,2,89,55,0,0
114780,-100,3,2,89,45,0,0
114951,-100,3,2,89,55,0,0
115808,-100,3,2,89,45,0,0
115979,-100,3,2,89,55,0,0
117900,376.175548589342,3,2,88,35,1,0
122428,397.350993377483,3,2,88,25,1,0
123620,413.76456796083,3,2,88,25,1,0
125067,444.444444444444,3,2,88,15,1,0
127733,-100,3,2,88,5,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 179,179,179
Combo2 : 255,125,158
Combo3 : 255,255,128
Combo4 : 58,252,199

[HitObjects]
171,74,770,6,0,L|176:123,1,50,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
198,168,1145,6,0,P|243:185|292:173,2,100,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
162,261,2268,2,0,P|117:278|68:266,2,100,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,296,3391,5,2,0:0:0:0:
349,329,3765,2,0,P|394:312|443:324,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
488,234,4514,2,0,P|506:157|432:72,1,200,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
331,75,5637,6,0,P|285:95|238:84,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,62,6386,1,8,0:0:0:0:
124,160,6760,2,0,P|144:206|133:253,2,100,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,62,7884,6,0,B|186:85|186:85|235:82,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,114,8632,2,0,B|376:110|376:110|423:134,1,100,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
449,230,9381,1,2,0:0:0:0:
395,314,9756,1,2,0:0:0:0:
295,316,10130,6,0,L|196:300,2,100,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
273,218,11253,2,0,L|175:202,2,100,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
327,133,12376,5,2,0:0:0:0:
268,51,12751,2,0,P|223:29|170:36,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
74,31,13499,2,0,B|74:91|118:119|118:119|81:157|92:210,1,200,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
190,187,14623,6,0,P|192:239|163:277,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
85,337,15371,1,8,0:0:0:0:
178,371,15746,2,0,L|279:359,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
366,314,16495,1,8,0:0:0:0:
442,249,16869,6,0,P|466:295|462:346,2,100,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
385,166,17992,1,2,0:0:0:0:
171,73,18788,6,0,L|164:122,1,50,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
147,169,19130,6,0,L|155:271,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
93,347,19815,1,8,0:0:0:0:
40,261,20158,2,0,L|44:207,2,50,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
93,347,20844,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,337,21186,6,0,L|292:328,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,303,21872,2,0,L|393:251,1,50,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
414,207,22215,2,0,L|421:106,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
346,39,22901,1,8,0:0:0:0:
251,70,23243,6,0,L|201:76,1,50,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
161,107,23586,2,0,P|115:124|67:111,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
34,206,24272,2,0,L|45:308,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
127,361,24958,1,8,0:0:0:0:
190,284,25300,6,0,L|200:184,2,100,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
285,252,26329,2,0,L|295:152,2,100,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
294,301,27186,1,0,0:0:0:0:
318,344,27357,6,0,P|363:364|410:352,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
468,270,28042,1,8,0:0:0:0:
473,169,28386,2,0,L|477:117,2,50,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
379,205,29071,1,8,0:0:0:0:
314,128,29414,6,0,P|265:140|217:127,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
118,117,30100,2,0,L|68:126,2,50,8|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
158,208,30786,1,0,0:0:0:0:
159,308,31129,1,8,0:0:0:0:
244,359,31471,6,0,L|255:255,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
265,159,32157,1,8,0:0:0:0:
355,115,32500,2,0,L|366:219,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,315,33186,1,8,0:0:0:0:
283,352,33528,6,0,P|236:363|186:349,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,287,34214,1,8,0:0:0:0:
153,197,34557,2,0,B|164:135|131:92|131:92|173:109|218:84,1,200,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,50,35585,5,4,0:1:0:0:
407,80,35928,2,0,P|422:130|404:178,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,252,36614,1,4,0:1:0:0:
439,282,36957,2,0,P|454:332|436:380,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
349,331,37642,6,0,L|250:345,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
157,307,38328,2,0,L|154:256,1,50,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
123,217,38671,2,0,L|117:116,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
189,47,39357,2,0,L|240:51,1,50,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,53,39699,5,2,0:0:0:0:
348,133,40042,1,0,0:0:0:0:
315,227,40385,1,8,0:0:0:0:
337,324,40728,2,0,P|248:300|218:205,1,200,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,106,41756,6,0,B|150:96|150:96|102:107,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,185,42442,1,8,0:0:0:0:
73,279,42785,2,0,L|69:335,2,50,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,247,43471,2,0,L|164:197,1,50,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,147,43813,5,4,0:1:0:0:
200,55,44156,2,0,P|247:44|296:56,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
379,112,44842,1,4,0:1:0:0:
462,168,45185,2,0,P|464:216|444:262,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
362,320,45870,6,0,P|314:309|264:320,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
166,335,46556,2,0,L|159:281,1,50,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
138,240,46899,2,0,L|149:141,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,66,47585,1,8,0:0:0:0:
59,164,47927,6,0,P|108:167|149:140,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
179,99,48442,1,0,0:0:0:0:
217,67,48613,2,0,P|263:61|310:84,1,100,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
389,145,49299,2,0,L|443:137,2,50,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,236,49984,6,0,L|346:336,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
246,345,50670,2,0,L|244:295,1,50,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
226,248,51013,2,0,P|178:239|131:255,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
36,220,51699,1,8,0:0:0:0:
96,140,52041,6,0,L|94:33,2,100,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,208,53070,2,0,P|256:248|344:208,1,200,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,140,54098,6,0,L|418:33,2,100,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
319,113,55127,2,0,P|256:171|274:276,1,200,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
306,313,55984,1,0,0:0:0:0:
349,336,56155,6,0,B|397:351|397:351|446:339,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
491,249,56841,1,8,0:0:0:0:
449,157,57184,1,2,0:0:0:0:
449,157,57869,1,8,0:0:0:0:
363,104,58212,6,0,L|355:5,2,100,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
286,168,59241,1,2,0:0:0:0:
191,201,59584,1,8,0:0:0:0:
115,136,59926,1,8,0:0:0:0:
65,222,60269,6,0,P|55:273|72:319,2,100,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
155,265,61298,2,0,P|203:260|250:278,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
331,336,61983,1,8,0:0:0:0:
402,266,62326,6,0,L|502:253,2,100,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,197,63355,2,0,P|316:150|331:102,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
417,51,64040,1,8,0:0:0:0:
401,150,64383,6,0,L|252:150,1,150,4|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,150,65069,1,8,0:0:0:0:
115,96,65412,2,0,B|85:149|116:204|116:204|92:239|108:286,1,200,4|8,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,332,66269,1,0,0:0:0:0:
174,351,66440,6,0,P|223:340|272:353,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,279,67126,1,8,0:0:0:0:
410,207,67469,2,0,P|459:218|508:205,2,100,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
459,119,68497,6,0,P|410:106|363:120,1,100,4|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
317,138,69012,1,0,0:0:0:0:
268,120,69183,2,0,P|220:106|172:119,1,100,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,251,70040,2,0,L|48:257,2,50,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
137,284,70554,6,0,B|186:277|186:277|238:283,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,242,71240,1,8,0:0:0:0:
381,326,71583,2,0,P|428:244|380:160,1,200,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,74,72611,5,2,0:0:0:0:
233,40,72955,2,0,L|134:55,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
77,137,73640,1,2,0:0:0:0:
172,171,73984,2,0,L|271:156,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,242,74668,6,0,P|334:290|322:338,2,100,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
374,157,75697,2,0,L|475:143,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,43,76382,2,0,L|413:50,1,50,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,57,76725,6,0,B|314:64|314:64|266:52,1,100,4|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
166,67,77411,1,8,0:0:0:0:
81,121,77754,2,0,P|68:170|89:214,1,100,4|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
141,297,78439,1,8,0:0:0:0:
235,330,78782,6,0,L|334:335,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
417,278,79468,1,8,0:0:0:0:
457,186,79811,2,0,L|468:82,2,100,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
358,200,80839,6,0,L|347:100,1,100,4|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
265,42,81525,1,8,0:0:0:0:
172,79,81868,2,0,L|161:178,1,100,4|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
79,237,82554,1,8,0:0:0:0:
34,326,82896,6,0,P|81:337|130:323,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,279,83582,1,8,0:0:0:0:
314,311,83925,2,0,P|362:300|409:313,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
483,246,84610,1,8,0:0:0:0:
423,165,84953,6,0,P|330:145|307:53,1,200,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
206,53,85982,2,0,P|208:102|185:145,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
91,165,86667,1,8,0:0:0:0:
141,251,87010,6,0,P|189:262|219:300,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
314,329,87696,1,8,0:0:0:0:
410,302,88039,2,0,L|439:199,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
421,106,88724,1,8,0:0:0:0:
337,51,89067,6,0,B|287:35|287:35|238:41,2,100,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
421,106,90096,1,2,0:0:0:0:
337,161,90438,2,0,B|287:177|287:177|238:171,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
189,164,90953,1,0,0:0:0:0:
139,158,91124,6,0,P|121:204|130:252,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
186,335,91810,1,8,0:0:0:0:
285,322,92153,2,0,P|333:329|383:310,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
442,233,92838,1,8,0:0:0:0:
418,135,93181,6,0,L|426:35,2,100,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
379,167,94038,1,0,0:0:0:0:
335,191,94210,2,0,P|245:206|180:130,1,200,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
207,33,95238,5,2,0:0:0:0:
278,105,95581,1,0,0:0:0:0:
243,198,95924,1,8,0:0:0:0:
144,214,96267,1,2,0:0:0:0:
92,128,96609,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,214,96952,1,8,0:0:0:0:
91,299,97295,6,0,B|145:331|199:300|199:300|237:320|284:306,1,200,4|8,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
365,362,98324,2,0,B|397:308|366:254|366:254|386:216|372:169,1,200,4|8,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
429,88,99352,6,0,B|375:56|321:87|321:87|283:67|236:81,1,200,4|8,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
150,130,100381,2,0,P|101:139|51:127,2,100,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
235,182,101409,6,0,L|227:282,1,100,4|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
145,339,102094,1,8,0:0:0:0:
85,258,102437,2,0,L|36:253,2,50,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
145,339,103123,1,8,0:0:0:0:
234,295,103466,6,0,P|283:291|331:306,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
429,289,104151,2,0,L|432:240,1,50,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
417,190,104494,2,0,L|414:91,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,37,105180,1,8,0:0:0:0:
237,79,105522,6,0,L|187:85,1,50,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
141,63,105866,2,0,L|42:76,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
20,173,106551,2,0,P|10:218|36:263,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
117,322,107237,1,8,0:0:0:0:
206,278,107580,6,0,L|213:178,2,100,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
306,278,108609,2,0,L|299:178,2,100,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
331,320,109465,1,0,0:0:0:0:
369,352,109637,6,0,P|417:365|463:348,1,100,4|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
486,250,110322,1,8,0:0:0:0:
458,153,110665,2,0,L|462:98,2,50,4|0|0,0:1|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
374,208,111351,1,8,0:0:0:0:
294,146,111694,6,0,B|246:132|246:132|210:98,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
115,63,112380,2,0,L|62:68,2,50,8|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
125,162,113066,1,0,0:0:0:0:
76,249,113409,1,8,0:0:0:0:
142,323,113751,6,0,P|189:333|241:322,1,100,4|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
321,265,114437,1,8,0:0:0:0:
334,165,114780,2,0,P|287:175|235:164,1,100,4|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
155,107,115466,1,8,0:0:0:0:
227,38,115808,6,0,P|274:28|326:39,1,100,4|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
411,88,116494,1,8,0:0:0:0:
445,181,116837,2,0,B|437:229|401:255|401:255|444:306|421:358,1,200,4|8,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
326,325,117900,6,0,L|227:334,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,283,118652,1,8,0:0:0:0:
201,204,119028,2,0,L|300:213,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
387,162,119780,1,8,0:0:0:0:
389,61,120157,6,0,P|437:70|474:105,2,100,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
291,81,121285,2,0,P|241:91|196:74,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
110,22,122037,1,8,0:0:0:0:
102,120,122428,6,0,L|2:131,2,100,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,192,123620,6,0,L|263:203,2,100,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
121,217,124654,1,2,0:0:0:0:
136,308,125067,5,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,125289,12,0,127733,0:0:0:0:

thx bakakwan~

IamKwaN

osu! Alumni

3,905 posts

Joined August 2012

IamKwaN 2014-08-11T06:51:36+00:00

Hi, from my queue here.

General

現在的BG不合規格,用這張1024*768?
SPOILER
Title應該是這個:
```
Brionac ～Lugh Lamhfhata～
```
Reference:
Inconsistent Combo Colors of zjwautumn's Easy.
全部diff的Widescreen Support都不用勾,因為沒有Storyboard.
Diff name有點問題,Hyper不是用於beatmania? 還是你想整個set都用beatmania的難度名? 那就要改成Beginner-->Normal-->Hyper-->Another了,不然就用最基本ENHI.
最好map掉Insane的break,感覺4個diff都無break比較一致,map了的話就所有diff都不用勾"Letterbox in Breaks".

Insane

00:52:034 - 把這綠線snap到00:52:041.
Kiai的時間點比較奇怪,preview time開始我已經覺得是kiai time
00:19:130 (3) - NC吧,開了紅線
00:27:186 (1,2) - Swap NC, 我看你都是大白線開NC的
00:40:385 (3,2) - 這是故意不stack? 01:30:953 (4,1)跟01:55:465 (6,2)也是
其實我有點不理解你NC的pattern,例如00:34:214 (1)沒啥特別又不是大白線為何NC? 其他例子: 01:03:698 (1) - 01:07:297 (1) - 這個應該是01:07:469 (2)NC吧
01:15:697 (7,1) - 交換NC
01:56:494 (1) - why NC?
節奏沒問題,但音效的whistle pattern我不能理解,比如說00:19:130 (3,4),高音的地方是在滑條頭而不是尾,所以我比較能理解whistle放在head,這3/4曲子我推薦你用1whistle3clap的pattern,default的那個clap也是比較違和
00:43:813 (1,2) - Normal-finish on heads
01:08:497 (1) - ^
01:16:725 (1) - Finish; same for 01:17:754 (1)

Yoru's Hyper

HP+1, 對於一個Hard來說,HP只有4是太低了
00:52:034 - 把這綠線snap到00:52:041.
Kiai的時間點比較奇怪,preview time開始我已經覺得是kiai time,01:16:725 也是比較合理的開始點
00:04:888 (2) - 這是跟什麼map的?自創的音? 換成一個3/2滑條就好
00:08:258 - 為啥漏音反而在前面自創節奏?
00:14:248 (1,3) - Stack 很多細節的stack都沒做好,00:22:901 (2,1) - 00:39:357 (3,2) - 00:42:785 (1,1) - 00:44:585 (6,7,3) - 01:10:126 (5,6,3) -
00:30:443 (1) - 用折返滑條來捉節奏有點不能理解;我聽到00:30:786跟00:31:129都是樂器的重音,而前面的長滑條節奏也是比較鬆,這裡用來回折返我覺得不太合適,這樣如何?
SPOILER
00:34:214 (1,2,3) - 有啥特別原因不用4個相同的滑條? 00:34:557也是比較重的鼓點
00:58:212 (1,2,1,2) - 節奏上這兩段有明顯區別,實在不適合用平衡結構,00:59:241 (1,2) - 3個白線的節奏比前面強烈很多,可以嘗試用3/4滑條再加點變速,因你這Hyper 空拍很多,DS很少,顯得難度有點不足
01:08:497 (1) - finish on head
01:14:668 (6,1) - Overlap很醜
SPOILER
01:24:953 - 這段開始對於我來說節奏一樣緊湊,用正常的SV更能體現音樂
01:40:038 (1,2,3) - 同樣
02:04:033 (2) - 這個頭的whistle能刪除
排列還算可以,但很多細節還沒做好,比如那些stack,overlap,overlap我指01:59:028 (1,3)這種,明明有很多位置,為何要逼在一起?
Hyper的做法無論是節奏還是排列你可以參考:
http://osu.ppy.sh/b/285414
http://osu.ppy.sh/b/258595
http://osu.ppy.sh/b/341673
http://osu.ppy.sh/b/438547
至於音效,前奏缺少很多whistle,基本上大白線都可以放,因為音樂是比較高音;另外後面內置Normal的whistle跟clap很違和耶,特別是哨子很吵,跟整首歌曲的氣氛很不合

zjwautumn's Easy

加上kiai time吧? 這曲子的kiai也很明顯
Easy的stack leniacy改回7吧,跟Normal一樣
01:45:521 - 把這綠線snap到01:45:523.
這EZ的難度跟Hyper是相反,Hyper是太容易,Easy是太難,建議減少連續的圓圈,最多兩個就好,多用長滑條
00:12:376 (1,2,3) -
00:39:357 (1,2) - Stack是絕對不建議,就算是Normal也被噴
00:53:413 (3,4,1) -
00:56:155 (1,2,3) -
00:59:584 (2,3,1) -
01:06:440 (1,2,3,4) -
01:10:554 (1,2,3,4) -
01:14:668 (1,2,3,4) -
01:16:382 (1,2) -
01:28:039 (3,4,1) -
01:30:096 (1,2,3) -
01:33:181 (1,2,3) -
01:35:238 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 絕對是Normal的節奏
01:45:523 (1,2,3) -
01:58:652 (1,2) -
自訂的S:C2 clap跟S:C1 whistle是也是比較違和,建議另外找一套
01:38:324 (1) - Remove NC
01:42:095 (1) - 整個EZ的DS要一致,不能為了排列犧牲Distance Snap.
粗略看了幾眼,節奏的取捨是最大的問題,另外就是為了排列犧牲DS,其他NC,音效的問題等你改了節奏再摸

@Hikari: 順便幫我更新一下

KwaN's Normal

osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: 5-03 Brionac ~Lugh Lamhfhata~.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 68069
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 0.7999989

[Metadata]
Title:Brionac ~Lugh Lamhfhata~
TitleUnicode:Brionac ~Lugh Lamhfhata~
Artist:Project Grimoire
ArtistUnicode:Project Grimoire
Creator:- H i k a r i -
Version:KwaN's Normal
Source:Cytus
Tags:ICE zjwautumn IamKwaN Hakurei Yoru
BeatmapID:477350
BeatmapSetID:190450

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:4
SliderMultiplier:1
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"IMG_0726.PNG",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

[TimingPoints]
1145,374.391613627855,3,2,88,35,1,0
18788,342.831675361259,3,2,88,45,1,0
19130,342.831675361259,3,2,88,35,1,0
29414,-100,3,2,88,45,0,0
31471,-100,3,2,88,50,0,0
35585,-100,3,2,89,75,0,0
36614,-100,3,2,89,65,0,0
36957,-100,3,2,89,75,0,0
37642,-100,3,2,89,65,0,0
37814,-100,3,2,89,75,0,0
43813,-100,3,2,89,65,0,0
44156,-100,3,2,89,75,0,0
44842,-100,3,2,89,65,0,0
45185,-100,3,2,89,75,0,0
59584,-100,3,2,89,85,0,0
59926,-100,3,2,89,95,0,0
60269,-100,3,2,89,75,0,0
64383,-100,3,2,89,65,0,0
64555,-100,3,2,89,75,0,0
65412,-100,3,2,89,65,0,0
65583,-100,3,2,89,75,0,0
68497,-100,3,2,89,85,0,1
76640,-100,3,2,89,85,0,0
76725,-100,3,2,89,85,0,1
77754,-100,3,2,89,75,0,1
77925,-100,3,2,89,85,0,1
80839,-100,3,2,89,75,0,1
81011,-100,3,2,89,85,0,1
81868,-100,3,2,89,75,0,1
82039,-100,3,2,89,85,0,1
84953,-100,3,2,89,85,0,0
96267,-100,3,2,89,95,0,0
97295,-100,3,2,89,65,0,0
97467,-100,3,2,89,85,0,0
98324,-100,3,2,89,75,0,0
98495,-100,3,2,89,85,0,0
101409,-100,3,2,89,55,0,1
101495,-100,3,2,89,55,0,0
113751,-100,3,2,89,45,0,0
113922,-100,3,2,89,55,0,0
114780,-100,3,2,89,45,0,0
114951,-100,3,2,89,55,0,0
115808,-100,3,2,89,45,0,0
115979,-100,3,2,89,55,0,0
117900,376.175548589342,3,2,88,35,1,0
122428,397.350993377483,3,2,88,25,1,0
123620,413.76456796083,3,2,88,25,1,0
125067,444.444444444444,3,2,88,15,1,0
127733,-100,3,2,88,5,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 179,179,179
Combo2 : 255,125,158
Combo3 : 255,255,128
Combo4 : 58,252,199

[HitObjects]
171,74,770,6,0,L|176:123,1,50,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
198,168,1145,6,0,P|243:185|292:173,2,100,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
162,261,2268,2,0,P|117:278|68:266,2,100,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,296,3391,5,2,0:0:0:0:
349,329,3765,2,0,P|394:312|443:324,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
488,234,4514,2,0,P|506:157|432:72,1,200,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
331,75,5637,6,0,P|285:95|238:84,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,62,6386,1,8,0:0:0:0:
124,160,6760,2,0,P|144:206|133:253,2,100,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,62,7884,6,0,B|186:85|186:85|235:82,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,114,8632,2,0,B|376:110|376:110|423:134,1,100,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
449,230,9381,1,2,0:0:0:0:
395,314,9756,1,2,0:0:0:0:
295,316,10130,6,0,L|196:300,2,100,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
273,218,11253,2,0,L|175:202,2,100,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
327,133,12376,5,2,0:0:0:0:
268,51,12751,2,0,P|223:29|170:36,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
74,31,13499,2,0,B|74:91|118:119|118:119|81:157|92:210,1,200,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
190,187,14623,6,0,P|192:239|163:277,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
85,337,15371,1,8,0:0:0:0:
178,371,15746,2,0,L|279:359,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
366,314,16495,1,8,0:0:0:0:
442,249,16869,6,0,P|466:295|462:346,2,100,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
385,166,17992,1,2,0:0:0:0:
171,73,18788,6,0,L|164:122,1,50,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
147,169,19130,6,0,L|155:271,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
93,347,19815,1,8,0:0:0:0:
40,261,20158,2,0,L|44:207,2,50,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
93,347,20844,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,337,21186,6,0,L|292:328,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,303,21872,2,0,L|393:251,1,50,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
414,207,22215,2,0,L|421:106,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
346,39,22901,1,8,0:0:0:0:
251,70,23243,6,0,L|201:76,1,50,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
161,107,23586,2,0,P|115:124|67:111,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
34,206,24272,2,0,L|45:308,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
127,361,24958,1,8,0:0:0:0:
190,284,25300,6,0,L|200:184,2,100,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
285,252,26329,2,0,L|295:152,2,100,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
294,301,27186,1,0,0:0:0:0:
318,344,27357,6,0,P|363:364|410:352,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
468,270,28042,1,8,0:0:0:0:
473,169,28386,2,0,L|477:117,2,50,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
379,205,29071,1,8,0:0:0:0:
314,128,29414,6,0,P|265:140|217:127,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
118,117,30100,2,0,L|68:126,2,50,8|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
158,208,30786,1,0,0:0:0:0:
159,308,31129,1,8,0:0:0:0:
244,359,31471,6,0,L|255:255,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
265,159,32157,1,8,0:0:0:0:
355,115,32500,2,0,L|366:219,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,315,33186,1,8,0:0:0:0:
283,352,33528,6,0,P|236:363|186:349,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,287,34214,1,8,0:0:0:0:
153,197,34557,2,0,B|164:135|131:92|131:92|173:109|218:84,1,200,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,50,35585,5,4,0:1:0:0:
407,80,35928,2,0,P|422:130|404:178,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,252,36614,1,4,0:1:0:0:
439,282,36957,2,0,P|454:332|436:380,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
349,331,37642,6,0,L|250:345,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
157,307,38328,2,0,L|154:256,1,50,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
123,217,38671,2,0,L|117:116,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
189,47,39357,2,0,L|240:51,1,50,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,53,39699,5,2,0:0:0:0:
348,133,40042,1,0,0:0:0:0:
315,227,40385,1,8,0:0:0:0:
337,324,40728,2,0,P|248:300|218:205,1,200,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,106,41756,6,0,B|150:96|150:96|102:107,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,185,42442,1,8,0:0:0:0:
73,279,42785,2,0,L|69:335,2,50,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,247,43471,2,0,L|164:197,1,50,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,147,43813,5,4,0:1:0:0:
200,55,44156,2,0,P|247:44|296:56,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
379,112,44842,1,4,0:1:0:0:
462,168,45185,2,0,P|464:216|444:262,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
362,320,45870,6,0,P|314:309|264:320,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
166,335,46556,2,0,L|159:281,1,50,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
138,240,46899,2,0,L|149:141,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,66,47585,1,8,0:0:0:0:
59,164,47927,6,0,P|108:167|149:140,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
179,99,48442,1,0,0:0:0:0:
217,67,48613,2,0,P|263:61|310:84,1,100,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
389,145,49299,2,0,L|443:137,2,50,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,236,49984,6,0,L|346:336,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
246,345,50670,2,0,L|244:295,1,50,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
226,248,51013,2,0,P|178:239|131:255,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
36,220,51699,1,8,0:0:0:0:
96,140,52041,6,0,L|94:33,2,100,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,208,53070,2,0,P|256:248|344:208,1,200,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,140,54098,6,0,L|418:33,2,100,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
319,113,55127,2,0,P|256:171|274:276,1,200,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
306,313,55984,1,0,0:0:0:0:
349,336,56155,6,0,B|397:351|397:351|446:339,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
491,249,56841,1,8,0:0:0:0:
449,157,57184,1,2,0:0:0:0:
449,157,57869,1,8,0:0:0:0:
363,104,58212,6,0,L|355:5,2,100,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
286,168,59241,1,2,0:0:0:0:
191,201,59584,1,8,0:0:0:0:
115,136,59926,1,8,0:0:0:0:
65,222,60269,6,0,P|55:273|72:319,2,100,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
155,265,61298,2,0,P|203:260|250:278,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
331,336,61983,1,8,0:0:0:0:
402,266,62326,6,0,L|502:253,2,100,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,197,63355,2,0,P|316:150|331:102,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
417,51,64040,1,8,0:0:0:0:
401,150,64383,6,0,L|252:150,1,150,4|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,150,65069,1,8,0:0:0:0:
115,96,65412,2,0,B|85:149|116:204|116:204|92:239|108:286,1,200,4|8,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,332,66269,1,0,0:0:0:0:
174,351,66440,6,0,P|223:340|272:353,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,279,67126,1,8,0:0:0:0:
410,207,67469,2,0,P|459:218|508:205,2,100,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
459,119,68497,6,0,P|410:106|363:120,1,100,4|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
317,138,69012,1,0,0:0:0:0:
268,120,69183,2,0,P|220:106|172:119,1,100,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,251,70040,2,0,L|48:257,2,50,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
137,284,70554,6,0,B|186:277|186:277|238:283,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,242,71240,1,8,0:0:0:0:
381,326,71583,2,0,P|428:244|380:160,1,200,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,74,72611,5,2,0:0:0:0:
233,40,72955,2,0,L|134:55,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
77,137,73640,1,2,0:0:0:0:
172,171,73984,2,0,L|271:156,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,242,74668,6,0,P|334:290|322:338,2,100,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
374,157,75697,2,0,L|475:143,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,43,76382,2,0,L|413:50,1,50,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,57,76725,6,0,B|314:64|314:64|266:52,1,100,4|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
166,67,77411,1,8,0:0:0:0:
81,121,77754,2,0,P|68:170|89:214,1,100,4|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
141,297,78439,1,8,0:0:0:0:
235,330,78782,6,0,L|334:335,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
417,278,79468,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,184,79811,2,0,L|459:80,2,100,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
349,198,80839,6,0,L|338:98,1,100,4|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,40,81525,1,8,0:0:0:0:
163,77,81868,2,0,L|152:176,1,100,4|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
70,235,82554,1,8,0:0:0:0:
25,324,82896,6,0,P|72:335|121:321,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
211,277,83582,1,8,0:0:0:0:
305,309,83925,2,0,P|353:298|400:311,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,248,84610,1,8,0:0:0:0:
423,165,84953,6,0,P|330:145|307:53,1,200,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
206,53,85982,2,0,P|208:102|185:145,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
91,165,86667,1,8,0:0:0:0:
141,251,87010,6,0,P|189:262|219:300,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
314,329,87696,1,8,0:0:0:0:
410,302,88039,2,0,L|439:199,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
421,106,88724,1,8,0:0:0:0:
337,51,89067,6,0,B|287:35|287:35|238:41,2,100,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
421,106,90096,1,2,0:0:0:0:
337,161,90438,2,0,B|287:177|287:177|238:171,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
189,164,90953,1,0,0:0:0:0:
139,158,91124,6,0,P|121:204|130:252,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
186,335,91810,1,8,0:0:0:0:
285,322,92153,2,0,P|333:329|383:310,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
442,233,92838,1,8,0:0:0:0:
418,135,93181,6,0,L|426:35,2,100,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
379,167,94038,1,0,0:0:0:0:
335,191,94210,2,0,P|245:206|180:130,1,200,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
207,33,95238,5,2,0:0:0:0:
278,105,95581,1,0,0:0:0:0:
243,198,95924,1,8,0:0:0:0:
144,214,96267,1,2,0:0:0:0:
92,128,96609,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,214,96952,1,8,0:0:0:0:
91,299,97295,6,0,B|145:331|199:300|199:300|237:320|284:306,1,200,4|8,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
365,362,98324,2,0,B|397:308|366:254|366:254|386:216|372:169,1,200,4|8,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
429,88,99352,6,0,B|375:56|321:87|321:87|283:67|236:81,1,200,4|8,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
150,130,100381,2,0,P|101:139|51:127,2,100,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
235,182,101409,6,0,L|227:282,1,100,4|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
145,339,102094,1,8,0:0:0:0:
85,258,102437,2,0,L|36:253,2,50,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
145,339,103123,1,8,0:0:0:0:
234,295,103466,6,0,P|283:291|331:306,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
429,289,104151,2,0,L|432:240,1,50,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
417,190,104494,2,0,L|414:91,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,37,105180,1,8,0:0:0:0:
237,79,105522,6,0,L|187:85,1,50,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
141,63,105866,2,0,L|42:76,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
20,173,106551,2,0,P|10:218|36:263,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
117,322,107237,1,8,0:0:0:0:
206,278,107580,6,0,L|213:178,2,100,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
306,278,108609,2,0,L|299:178,2,100,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
331,320,109465,1,0,0:0:0:0:
369,352,109637,6,0,P|417:365|463:348,1,100,4|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
486,250,110322,1,8,0:0:0:0:
458,153,110665,2,0,L|462:98,2,50,4|0|0,0:1|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
374,208,111351,1,8,0:0:0:0:
294,146,111694,6,0,B|246:132|246:132|210:98,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
115,63,112380,2,0,L|62:68,2,50,8|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
125,162,113066,1,0,0:0:0:0:
76,249,113409,1,8,0:0:0:0:
142,323,113751,6,0,P|189:333|241:322,1,100,4|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
321,265,114437,1,8,0:0:0:0:
334,165,114780,2,0,P|287:175|235:164,1,100,4|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
155,107,115466,1,8,0:0:0:0:
227,38,115808,6,0,P|274:28|326:39,1,100,4|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
411,88,116494,1,8,0:0:0:0:
445,181,116837,2,0,B|437:229|401:255|401:255|444:306|421:358,1,200,4|8,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
326,325,117900,6,0,L|227:334,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,283,118652,1,8,0:0:0:0:
201,204,119028,2,0,L|300:213,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
387,162,119780,1,8,0:0:0:0:
389,61,120157,6,0,P|437:70|474:105,2,100,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
291,81,121285,2,0,P|241:91|196:74,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
110,22,122037,1,8,0:0:0:0:
102,120,122428,6,0,L|2:131,2,100,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,192,123620,6,0,L|263:203,2,100,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
121,217,124654,1,2,0:0:0:0:
136,308,125067,5,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,125289,12,0,127733,0:0:0:0:

Hakurei Yoru

688 posts

Joined September 2013

Hakurei Yoru 2014-08-11T12:01:31+00:00

- D a s z x - wrote:
ok mod it is

caonima
all fixed
you're best mappppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppperrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr

红白跑出来了
我得把她关回去，所以改不完。
先房。

SPOILER

osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: 5-03 Brionac ~Lugh Lamhfhata~.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 68069
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.6
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.3
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.799999

[Metadata]
Title:Brionac ~Lugh Lamhfhata~
TitleUnicode:Brionac ~Lugh Lamhfhata~
Artist:Project Grimoire
ArtistUnicode:Project Grimoire
Creator:- H i k a r i -
Version:Yoru's Hyper
Source:Cytus
Tags:ICE zjwautumn IamKwaN Hakurei Yoru
BeatmapID:469187
BeatmapSetID:190450

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.4
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"IMG_0726.PNG",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

[TimingPoints]
1145,374.391613627855,3,2,0,20,1,0
18788,342.831675361259,3,2,0,40,1,0
19130,342.831675361259,3,2,0,40,1,0
31471,-100,3,2,0,60,0,0
35585,-83.3333333333333,3,1,0,60,0,0
52041,-133.333333333333,3,2,0,60,0,0
58212,-100,3,2,0,70,0,0
68154,-83.3333333333333,3,2,0,70,0,0
68497,-83.3333333333333,3,2,0,80,0,1
78782,-80,3,2,0,85,0,1
79811,-83.3333333333333,3,2,0,85,0,1
80839,-100,3,2,0,80,0,1
84610,-66.6666666666667,3,2,0,80,0,1
84953,-133.333333333333,3,2,0,60,0,0
91124,-100,3,2,0,60,0,0
92153,-100,3,2,0,60,0,0
96267,-83.3333333333333,3,2,0,65,0,0
96609,-74.0740740740741,3,2,0,70,0,0
96952,-66.6666666666667,3,2,0,75,0,0
97295,-100,3,2,0,80,0,0
105180,-100,3,2,0,70,0,0
113408,-100,3,1,0,70,0,0
117900,376.175548589342,3,2,0,40,1,0
117900,-200,3,2,0,40,0,0
122428,397.350993377483,3,2,0,40,1,0
123620,413.76456796083,3,2,0,40,1,0
123620,-200,3,2,0,40,0,0
125067,444.444444444444,3,2,0,40,1,0
127733,-100,3,2,0,5,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 179,179,179
Combo2 : 255,125,158
Combo3 : 255,255,128
Combo4 : 58,252,199

[HitObjects]
136,80,770,6,0,L|232:96,1,70
256,176,1145,2,0,L|112:200,2,140,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,264,2268,6,0,L|364:240,2,140,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,264,3391,5,0,0:0:0:0:
220,264,3765,1,0,0:0:0:0:
220,264,4140,1,0,0:0:0:0:
220,264,4514,6,0,B|256:252|280:260|280:260|312:284|360:272,1,140
344,76,5263,5,0,0:0:0:0:
344,76,5637,2,0,P|304:108|212:112,1,140
120,68,6386,2,0,P|160:36|252:32,1,140
344,76,7135,5,0,0:0:0:0:
344,76,7509,2,0,L|384:224,1,140
288,224,8258,2,0,L|312:312,2,70,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,292,9007,6,0,L|280:200,1,70
448,128,9381,1,0,0:0:0:0:
456,216,9756,2,0,P|396:208|364:140,1,140
392,44,10504,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,148,10879,6,0,L|260:208,1,140
344,264,11627,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,148,12002,2,0,P|364:108|272:144,1,140
184,192,12751,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,256,13125,6,0,P|96:216|120:136,1,140
196,192,14248,5,0,0:0:0:0:
252,268,14623,2,0,P|192:292|124:248,1,140
196,192,15371,2,0,P|256:168|324:212,1,140
344,272,16120,5,0,0:0:0:0:
248,256,16495,2,0,L|328:128,1,140
200,204,17243,2,0,L|120:332,1,140
256,192,17618,12,0,18554,0:0:0:0:
312,104,18788,6,2,L|384:68,2,70,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,200,19472,2,0,L|220:276,1,140
216,176,20158,5,2,0:0:0:0:
332,88,20501,2,0,P|380:148|340:208,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,332,21186,6,2,P|224:272|364:204,1,280,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,304,22044,2,2,L|300:260,1,70,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,184,22558,5,0,0:0:0:0:
360,104,22901,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,292,23243,6,0,L|304:268,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,184,23586,2,0,L|320:208,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,224,23929,1,0,0:0:0:0:
360,104,24272,6,0,P|396:136|396:240,1,140,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,300,24958,2,0,P|240:268|240:164,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,25386,12,0,26843,0:0:0:0:
160,104,27015,5,2,0:0:0:0:
160,104,27186,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,104,27357,2,0,B|204:120|244:104|244:104|264:68|324:80|324:80|352:140|352:140|312:196,1,280,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,208,28386,6,2,B|224:272|224:272|260:256|284:264|284:264|312:296|364:268|364:268|452:296,1,280
464,192,29414,6,0,B|404:160|404:160|404:112|360:68|360:68|312:56|288:64|288:64|232:84,1,280,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,112,30272,1,0,0:0:0:0:
116,196,30443,6,0,L|160:272,4,70,2|0|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,256,31471,6,2,P|304:228|384:232,1,140
336,308,31986,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,308,32071,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,308,32157,1,0,0:0:0:0:
436,288,32500,2,0,P|464:228|428:152,1,140,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
439,162,32928,1,0,0:0:0:0:
439,162,33014,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,96,33186,5,2,0:0:0:0:
268,160,33528,2,0,P|328:188|364:172,1,105
348,224,33871,2,0,L|296:296,1,70
156,336,34214,6,0,L|112:336,7,35,2|0|0|0|2|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,296,34900,6,2,L|136:272,3,35,0|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,264,35243,2,2,L|188:224,3,35,0|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,252,35585,5,2,0:0:0:0:
352,168,35757,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,80,35928,2,0,P|340:72|304:84,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,168,36271,2,0,P|404:176|440:164,1,83.9999974365235
392,80,36614,5,2,0:0:0:0:
248,76,36785,1,0,0:0:0:0:
164,192,36957,2,0,P|152:244|184:288,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,328,37300,2,0,L|248:152,1,167.999994873047,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,192,37814,6,0,P|348:244|316:288,1,83.9999974365235,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,352,38157,1,0,0:0:0:0:
244,328,38328,2,0,P|232:276|264:232,1,83.9999974365235,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,192,38671,6,0,P|320:140|284:120,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
143,84,39014,2,0,P|185:80|224:96,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,228,39357,2,0,L|176:156,1,83.9999974365235
224,96,39699,6,0,P|260:144|256:268,1,167.999994873047,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,232,40385,2,0,P|80:184|84:60,1,167.999994873047,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
75,79,40814,1,0,0:0:0:0:
75,79,40899,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,128,41071,6,0,L|212:224,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,256,41414,2,0,L|300:160,1,83.9999974365235
168,128,41756,6,0,B|200:64|200:64|288:56,1,125.999996154785,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,64,42099,2,0,B|288:128|288:128|352:204,1,125.999996154785,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,204,42442,2,0,L|236:244,1,83.9999974365235
148,240,42785,6,0,P|136:180|164:160,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,120,43128,2,0,P|248:180|220:200,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,300,43471,6,0,L|160:228,1,83.9999974365235
147,240,43728,1,0,0:0:0:0:
147,240,43813,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,216,43985,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,232,44156,2,0,L|296:308,2,83.9999974365235,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,232,44585,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,232,44670,1,0,0:0:0:0:
456,216,44842,6,0,P|416:148|320:160,1,167.999994873047,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,45356,1,0,0:0:0:0:
308,296,45528,2,0,L|384:216,1,83.9999974365235
324,148,45870,6,0,P|284:164|248:204,2,83.9999974365235,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,232,46385,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,332,46556,2,0,L|256:332,1,125.999996154785
244,312,46899,6,0,P|224:220|128:216,1,167.999994873047,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,296,47413,1,0,0:0:0:0:
244,312,47585,2,0,L|272:224,1,83.9999974365235
364,232,47927,6,0,P|344:168|244:144,1,167.999994873047,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,148,48356,1,0,0:0:0:0:
212,160,48442,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,240,48613,2,0,L|168:240,1,83.9999974365235
240,328,48956,6,0,L|336:328,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,128,49299,2,0,L|392:128,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,128,49556,1,0,0:0:0:0:
428,128,49642,1,0,0:0:0:0:
408,224,49813,1,0,0:0:0:0:
408,224,49984,6,0,P|336:208|296:120,1,167.999994873047,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,128,50670,2,0,P|182:202|104:224,1,167.999994873047
80,220,51099,1,0,0:0:0:0:
56,208,51184,1,0,0:0:0:0:
76,96,51356,6,0,P|140:64|172:76,1,83.9999974365235,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,128,51699,2,0,P|152:160|120:148,1,83.9999974365235
143,158,51956,1,0,0:0:0:0:
143,158,52041,1,4,0:0:0:0:
96,260,52384,5,0,0:0:0:0:
232,316,52727,1,0,0:0:0:0:
364,252,53070,6,0,B|380:208|380:208|408:192|412:160|412:160|412:152,2,105.000004005432,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,228,54098,5,0,0:0:0:0:
272,92,54441,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,220,54784,2,0,L|308:272,1,52.5000020027161
268,340,55127,6,0,B|216:340|216:340|196:316|156:328,2,105.000004005432,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,196,56155,6,0,B|296:196|296:196|316:220|356:208,2,105.000004005432,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,96,57184,2,0,L|100:156,1,52.5000020027161
244,196,57527,2,0,L|208:256,1,52.5000020027161
356,288,57869,2,0,L|320:348,1,52.5000020027161
236,336,58212,6,0,B|248:300|264:288|264:288|280:272|280:272|312:216,1,140
388,176,58898,1,0,0:0:0:0:
276,48,59241,6,0,B|264:84|248:96|248:96|232:112|232:112|200:168,1,140
388,176,59926,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,312,60269,6,0,L|276:312,1,70
256,212,60612,2,0,L|340:212,1,70
320,112,60955,2,0,L|404:112,1,70
468,176,61298,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,272,61469,2,0,B|420:288|420:288|380:280|380:280,1,70
276,256,61812,1,0,0:0:0:0:
220,148,61983,2,0,B|204:120|204:120|212:80|212:80,1,70
292,92,62326,5,0,0:0:0:0:
376,140,62498,1,0,0:0:0:0:
292,188,62669,2,0,L|272:268,1,70
188,300,63012,2,0,L|208:220,1,70
232,136,63355,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,63440,12,0,64212,0:0:0:0:
188,176,64383,5,0,0:0:0:0:
276,136,64555,1,0,0:0:0:0:
364,180,64726,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,272,64898,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,352,65069,2,0,P|280:340|264:288,1,105
272,260,65412,5,0,0:0:0:0:
292,164,65583,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,80,65755,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,68,65926,1,0,0:0:0:0:
72,136,66097,2,0,P|76:184|164:192,1,140
272,140,66783,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,140,67126,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,140,67469,6,0,P|268:92|180:84,1,140
272,140,68154,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,140,68326,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,144,68497,6,0,P|256:188|288:236,1,83.9999974365235,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
269,220,68754,1,0,0:0:0:0:
269,220,68840,1,8,0:0:0:0:
388,236,69012,1,0,0:0:0:0:
360,108,69183,6,0,P|300:52|212:68,1,167.999994873047,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,62,69611,1,0,0:0:0:0:
220,62,69697,1,0,0:0:0:0:
196,184,69869,2,0,L|292:128,1,83.9999974365235
268,141,70126,1,0,0:0:0:0:
268,141,70211,1,8,0:0:0:0:
328,240,70383,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,240,70554,6,0,L|244:288,1,83.9999974365235
116,156,70897,2,0,L|228:196,1,83.9999974365235,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,116,71240,2,0,L|236:156,1,83.9999974365235
244,232,71583,2,0,P|192:192|212:72,1,167.999994873047,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
191,95,72011,1,0,0:0:0:0:
191,95,72097,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,148,72268,6,0,L|72:208,1,167.999994873047,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,200,72697,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,200,72783,1,0,0:0:0:0:
116,316,72954,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,228,73125,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,332,73297,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,236,73468,1,0,0:0:0:0:
268,132,73640,6,0,L|208:72,1,83.9999974365235,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,64,73983,2,0,L|388:124,1,83.9999974365235
400,136,74240,1,0,0:0:0:0:
412,148,74325,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,236,74497,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,236,74668,2,0,P|264:192|136:208,1,167.999994873047,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,280,75354,6,0,L|200:88,1,167.999994873047,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,117,75782,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,117,75868,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,68,76040,1,0,0:0:0:0:
404,128,76211,1,0,0:0:0:0:
404,128,76382,2,0,L|332:176,1,83.9999974365235,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,252,76725,6,0,L|260:300,1,83.9999974365235
262,298,76982,1,0,0:0:0:0:
262,298,77068,1,8,0:0:0:0:
124,240,77411,6,0,P|120:160|192:108,1,167.999994873047,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
183,109,77839,1,0,0:0:0:0:
183,109,77925,1,0,0:0:0:0:
276,152,78097,2,0,P|236:196|180:200,2,83.9999974365235,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,56,78611,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,56,78782,6,0,P|304:60|344:92,2,87.5,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,148,79296,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,80,79468,2,0,L|68:160,1,87.5
200,148,79811,2,0,L|128:224,1,83.9999974365235,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,280,80154,1,0,0:0:0:0:
84,280,80496,6,0,P|136:328|244:304,1,167.999994873047,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,304,80925,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,284,81011,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,160,81182,2,0,L|200:232,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,152,81525,2,0,L|136:80,1,70
196,228,81868,6,0,P|192:276|280:312,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,232,82553,2,0,P|332:212|276:240,1,105,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,208,82896,6,0,L|248:108,1,70
184,264,83239,2,0,L|168:164,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,324,83582,2,0,L|76:224,1,70
216,340,83925,6,0,B|272:344|292:328|292:328|344:356|396:328|396:328|436:300|436:300|456:252,1,280,8|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,160,84782,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,148,84953,6,0,L|336:260,1,105.000004005432
334,250,85382,1,0,0:0:0:0:
334,250,85467,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,284,85639,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,284,85982,6,0,P|192:216|80:228,1,183.750007009506
80,236,86667,2,0,L|52:292,1,52.5000020027161
124,344,87010,2,0,L|152:288,1,52.5000020027161
232,284,87353,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,284,87696,2,0,P|284:272|304:296,1,78.7500030040742
328,264,88039,6,0,L|368:200,1,52.5000020027161
404,136,88381,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,80,88724,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,320,89067,6,0,P|244:336|268:216,1,210.000008010865
212,160,89924,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,72,90096,2,0,P|372:104|408:240,1,210.000008010865
320,220,91124,5,0,0:0:0:0:
264,304,91296,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,216,91467,2,0,L|152:156,1,70
108,248,91810,2,0,L|52:308,1,70
172,328,92153,2,0,B|224:316|236:336|236:336|264:324|320:328,2,140,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,228,93181,5,0,0:0:0:0:
208,144,93353,1,0,0:0:0:0:
300,116,93524,1,0,0:0:0:0:
396,132,93695,1,0,0:0:0:0:
464,200,93867,2,0,L|436:284,2,70,0|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,200,94295,5,0,0:0:0:0:
464,200,94381,1,0,0:0:0:0:
396,132,94552,2,0,P|360:116|320:140,1,70
260,216,94895,2,0,P|296:232|336:208,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,132,95238,2,0,B|360:120|348:136|336:128|336:128|304:136|296:128|296:128|252:128,2,140,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,232,96267,6,0,B|400:256|400:256|380:316|364:328|304:336,2,167.999994873047,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,100,97295,6,0,L|308:248,1,140,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,292,97809,1,0,0:0:0:0:
132,264,97981,1,8,0:0:0:0:
132,168,98152,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,108,98324,6,0,L|204:256,1,140,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,292,98838,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,260,99009,1,0,0:0:0:0:
424,172,99181,1,0,0:0:0:0:
340,120,99352,6,0,L|336:268,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,259,99781,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,259,99866,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,316,100038,6,2,L|216:312,7,35,8|0|0|0|0|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,292,100723,6,2,L|224:252,3,35,0|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,276,101066,2,2,L|280:224,3,35,0|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,276,101409,5,14,0:0:0:0:
320,276,102438,5,2,0:0:0:0:
320,276,103466,6,0,B|280:240|280:240|284:204|272:184|272:184|244:156,2,140,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,248,104323,1,0,0:0:0:0:
424,148,104495,6,0,B|460:112|460:88|460:88|484:68|504:32,2,140,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,180,105523,2,0,L|124:280,1,140
324,304,106209,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,124,106552,6,0,L|292:224,1,140
100,216,107237,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,120,107580,6,0,B|220:132|248:120|248:120|272:136|312:124,2,140,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,224,108609,6,0,B|160:240|160:240|136:224|112:244|72:232,2,140,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,304,109466,1,0,0:0:0:0:
396,284,109637,6,0,B|440:248|440:248|440:144,1,140
460,60,110323,1,0,0:0:0:0:
340,80,110666,6,0,B|296:116|296:116|296:220,2,140,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,80,111694,6,0,L|192:80,1,140
168,180,112380,1,0,0:0:0:0:
116,264,112551,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,264,112723,6,0,P|224:288|248:204,1,280,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,116,113751,6,0,P|296:108|444:240,1,280,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,252,114522,1,0,0:0:0:0:
452,276,114608,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,296,114780,6,0,P|348:232|208:212,1,210,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,216,115379,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,232,115465,1,0,0:0:0:0:
104,304,115637,1,0,0:0:0:0:
104,304,115808,6,0,P|88:200|240:120,1,280,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,176,116837,6,2,L|300:216,3,35,0|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,224,117179,2,2,L|320:272,3,35,0|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,272,117522,2,2,L|340:320,3,35,0|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,324,117865,5,14,0:0:0:0:
456,288,118276,2,0,L|456:216,1,70
424,96,119028,5,2,0:0:0:0:
348,276,119404,1,0,0:0:0:0:
424,96,119780,2,0,P|376:84|352:96,1,70,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,248,120533,5,0,0:0:0:0:
304,128,120909,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,40,121285,2,0,P|216:56|204:96,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,188,122037,5,0,0:0:0:0:
240,248,122428,1,2,0:0:0:0:
336,264,122825,1,0,0:0:0:0:
412,204,123222,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,108,123620,6,0,P|404:88|376:84,1,52.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,84,124033,2,0,P|336:88|304:108,1,52.5,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,116,124447,2,0,P|276:140|272:152,1,35,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,300,125067,5,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,125178,12,0,127733,0:0:0:0:

-[Hikari]-

84 posts

Joined February 2014

Topic Starter

-[Hikari]- 2014-08-11T13:17:23+00:00

IamKwaN wrote:

Hi, from my queue here.

General

現在的BG不合規格,用這張1024*768?
SPOILER
Title應該是這個:
```
Brionac ～Lugh Lamhfhata～
```
Reference:
Inconsistent Combo Colors of zjwautumn's Easy.
全部diff的Widescreen Support都不用勾,因為沒有Storyboard.
Diff name有點問題,Hyper不是用於beatmania? 還是你想整個set都用beatmania的難度名? 那就要改成Beginner-->Normal-->Hyper-->Another了,不然就用最基本ENHI.
最好map掉Insane的break,感覺4個diff都無break比較一致,map了的話就所有diff都不用勾"Letterbox in Breaks". general部分我得等GDer的修改，先放着

Insane

00:52:034 - 把這綠線snap到00:52:041. fixed
Kiai的時間點比較奇怪,preview time開始我已經覺得是kiai time fixed
00:19:130 (3) - NC吧,開了紅線 fixed
00:27:186 (1,2) - Swap NC, 我看你都是大白線開NC的 fixed
00:40:385 (3,2) - 這是故意不stack? 01:30:953 (4,1)跟01:55:465 (6,2)也是 stack不上……
其實我有點不理解你NC的pattern,例如00:34:214 (1)沒啥特別又不是大白線為何NC? 其他例子: 01:03:698 (1) - 01:07:297 (1) - 這個應該是01:07:469 (2)NC吧 fixed
01:15:697 (7,1) - 交換NC fixed
01:56:494 (1) - why NC? fixed(本来这里一个note一个nc……
節奏沒問題,但音效的whistle pattern我不能理解,比如說00:19:130 (3,4),高音的地方是在滑條頭而不是尾,所以我比較能理解whistle放在head,這3/4曲子我推薦你用1whistle3clap的pattern,default的那個clap也是比較違和
00:43:813 (1,2) - Normal-finish on heads
01:08:497 (1) - ^
01:16:725 (1) - Finish; same for 01:17:754 (1) Hitsound all fixed

Yoru's Hyper

HP+1, 對於一個Hard來說,HP只有4是太低了
00:52:034 - 把這綠線snap到00:52:041.
Kiai的時間點比較奇怪,preview time開始我已經覺得是kiai time,01:16:725 也是比較合理的開始點
00:04:888 (2) - 這是跟什麼map的?自創的音? 換成一個3/2滑條就好
00:08:258 - 為啥漏音反而在前面自創節奏?
00:14:248 (1,3) - Stack 很多細節的stack都沒做好,00:22:901 (2,1) - 00:39:357 (3,2) - 00:42:785 (1,1) - 00:44:585 (6,7,3) - 01:10:126 (5,6,3) -
00:30:443 (1) - 用折返滑條來捉節奏有點不能理解;我聽到00:30:786跟00:31:129都是樂器的重音,而前面的長滑條節奏也是比較鬆,這裡用來回折返我覺得不太合適,這樣如何?
SPOILER
00:34:214 (1,2,3) - 有啥特別原因不用4個相同的滑條? 00:34:557也是比較重的鼓點
00:58:212 (1,2,1,2) - 節奏上這兩段有明顯區別,實在不適合用平衡結構,00:59:241 (1,2) - 3個白線的節奏比前面強烈很多,可以嘗試用3/4滑條再加點變速,因你這Hyper 空拍很多,DS很少,顯得難度有點不足
01:08:497 (1) - finish on head
01:14:668 (6,1) - Overlap很醜
SPOILER
01:24:953 - 這段開始對於我來說節奏一樣緊湊,用正常的SV更能體現音樂
01:40:038 (1,2,3) - 同樣
02:04:033 (2) - 這個頭的whistle能刪除
排列還算可以,但很多細節還沒做好,比如那些stack,overlap,overlap我指01:59:028 (1,3)這種,明明有很多位置,為何要逼在一起?
Hyper的做法無論是節奏還是排列你可以參考:
http://osu.ppy.sh/b/285414
http://osu.ppy.sh/b/258595
http://osu.ppy.sh/b/341673
http://osu.ppy.sh/b/438547
至於音效,前奏缺少很多whistle,基本上大白線都可以放,因為音樂是比較高音;另外後面內置Normal的whistle跟clap很違和耶,特別是哨子很吵,跟整首歌曲的氣氛很不合

zjwautumn's Easy

加上kiai time吧? 這曲子的kiai也很明顯
Easy的stack leniacy改回7吧,跟Normal一樣
01:45:521 - 把這綠線snap到01:45:523.
這EZ的難度跟Hyper是相反,Hyper是太容易,Easy是太難,建議減少連續的圓圈,最多兩個就好,多用長滑條
00:12:376 (1,2,3) -
00:39:357 (1,2) - Stack是絕對不建議,就算是Normal也被噴
00:53:413 (3,4,1) -
00:56:155 (1,2,3) -
00:59:584 (2,3,1) -
01:06:440 (1,2,3,4) -
01:10:554 (1,2,3,4) -
01:14:668 (1,2,3,4) -
01:16:382 (1,2) -
01:28:039 (3,4,1) -
01:30:096 (1,2,3) -
01:33:181 (1,2,3) -
01:35:238 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 絕對是Normal的節奏
01:45:523 (1,2,3) -
01:58:652 (1,2) -
自訂的S:C2 clap跟S:C1 whistle是也是比較違和,建議另外找一套
01:38:324 (1) - Remove NC
01:42:095 (1) - 整個EZ的DS要一致,不能為了排列犧牲Distance Snap.
粗略看了幾眼,節奏的取捨是最大的問題,另外就是為了排列犧牲DS,其他NC,音效的問題等你改了節奏再摸

@Hikari: 順便幫我更新一下

KwaN's Normal

osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: 5-03 Brionac ~Lugh Lamhfhata~.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 68069
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 0.7999989

[Metadata]
Title:Brionac ~Lugh Lamhfhata~
TitleUnicode:Brionac ~Lugh Lamhfhata~
Artist:Project Grimoire
ArtistUnicode:Project Grimoire
Creator:- H i k a r i -
Version:KwaN's Normal
Source:Cytus
Tags:ICE zjwautumn IamKwaN Hakurei Yoru
BeatmapID:477350
BeatmapSetID:190450

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:4
SliderMultiplier:1
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"IMG_0726.PNG",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

[TimingPoints]
1145,374.391613627855,3,2,88,35,1,0
18788,342.831675361259,3,2,88,45,1,0
19130,342.831675361259,3,2,88,35,1,0
29414,-100,3,2,88,45,0,0
31471,-100,3,2,88,50,0,0
35585,-100,3,2,89,75,0,0
36614,-100,3,2,89,65,0,0
36957,-100,3,2,89,75,0,0
37642,-100,3,2,89,65,0,0
37814,-100,3,2,89,75,0,0
43813,-100,3,2,89,65,0,0
44156,-100,3,2,89,75,0,0
44842,-100,3,2,89,65,0,0
45185,-100,3,2,89,75,0,0
59584,-100,3,2,89,85,0,0
59926,-100,3,2,89,95,0,0
60269,-100,3,2,89,75,0,0
64383,-100,3,2,89,65,0,0
64555,-100,3,2,89,75,0,0
65412,-100,3,2,89,65,0,0
65583,-100,3,2,89,75,0,0
68497,-100,3,2,89,85,0,1
76640,-100,3,2,89,85,0,0
76725,-100,3,2,89,85,0,1
77754,-100,3,2,89,75,0,1
77925,-100,3,2,89,85,0,1
80839,-100,3,2,89,75,0,1
81011,-100,3,2,89,85,0,1
81868,-100,3,2,89,75,0,1
82039,-100,3,2,89,85,0,1
84953,-100,3,2,89,85,0,0
96267,-100,3,2,89,95,0,0
97295,-100,3,2,89,65,0,0
97467,-100,3,2,89,85,0,0
98324,-100,3,2,89,75,0,0
98495,-100,3,2,89,85,0,0
101409,-100,3,2,89,55,0,1
101495,-100,3,2,89,55,0,0
113751,-100,3,2,89,45,0,0
113922,-100,3,2,89,55,0,0
114780,-100,3,2,89,45,0,0
114951,-100,3,2,89,55,0,0
115808,-100,3,2,89,45,0,0
115979,-100,3,2,89,55,0,0
117900,376.175548589342,3,2,88,35,1,0
122428,397.350993377483,3,2,88,25,1,0
123620,413.76456796083,3,2,88,25,1,0
125067,444.444444444444,3,2,88,15,1,0
127733,-100,3,2,88,5,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 179,179,179
Combo2 : 255,125,158
Combo3 : 255,255,128
Combo4 : 58,252,199

[HitObjects]
171,74,770,6,0,L|176:123,1,50,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
198,168,1145,6,0,P|243:185|292:173,2,100,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
162,261,2268,2,0,P|117:278|68:266,2,100,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,296,3391,5,2,0:0:0:0:
349,329,3765,2,0,P|394:312|443:324,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
488,234,4514,2,0,P|506:157|432:72,1,200,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
331,75,5637,6,0,P|285:95|238:84,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,62,6386,1,8,0:0:0:0:
124,160,6760,2,0,P|144:206|133:253,2,100,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,62,7884,6,0,B|186:85|186:85|235:82,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,114,8632,2,0,B|376:110|376:110|423:134,1,100,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
449,230,9381,1,2,0:0:0:0:
395,314,9756,1,2,0:0:0:0:
295,316,10130,6,0,L|196:300,2,100,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
273,218,11253,2,0,L|175:202,2,100,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
327,133,12376,5,2,0:0:0:0:
268,51,12751,2,0,P|223:29|170:36,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
74,31,13499,2,0,B|74:91|118:119|118:119|81:157|92:210,1,200,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
190,187,14623,6,0,P|192:239|163:277,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
85,337,15371,1,8,0:0:0:0:
178,371,15746,2,0,L|279:359,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
366,314,16495,1,8,0:0:0:0:
442,249,16869,6,0,P|466:295|462:346,2,100,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
385,166,17992,1,2,0:0:0:0:
171,73,18788,6,0,L|164:122,1,50,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
147,169,19130,6,0,L|155:271,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
93,347,19815,1,8,0:0:0:0:
40,261,20158,2,0,L|44:207,2,50,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
93,347,20844,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,337,21186,6,0,L|292:328,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,303,21872,2,0,L|393:251,1,50,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
414,207,22215,2,0,L|421:106,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
346,39,22901,1,8,0:0:0:0:
251,70,23243,6,0,L|201:76,1,50,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
161,107,23586,2,0,P|115:124|67:111,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
34,206,24272,2,0,L|45:308,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
127,361,24958,1,8,0:0:0:0:
190,284,25300,6,0,L|200:184,2,100,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
285,252,26329,2,0,L|295:152,2,100,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
294,301,27186,1,0,0:0:0:0:
318,344,27357,6,0,P|363:364|410:352,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
468,270,28042,1,8,0:0:0:0:
473,169,28386,2,0,L|477:117,2,50,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
379,205,29071,1,8,0:0:0:0:
314,128,29414,6,0,P|265:140|217:127,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
118,117,30100,2,0,L|68:126,2,50,8|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
158,208,30786,1,0,0:0:0:0:
159,308,31129,1,8,0:0:0:0:
244,359,31471,6,0,L|255:255,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
265,159,32157,1,8,0:0:0:0:
355,115,32500,2,0,L|366:219,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,315,33186,1,8,0:0:0:0:
283,352,33528,6,0,P|236:363|186:349,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,287,34214,1,8,0:0:0:0:
153,197,34557,2,0,B|164:135|131:92|131:92|173:109|218:84,1,200,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,50,35585,5,4,0:1:0:0:
407,80,35928,2,0,P|422:130|404:178,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,252,36614,1,4,0:1:0:0:
439,282,36957,2,0,P|454:332|436:380,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
349,331,37642,6,0,L|250:345,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
157,307,38328,2,0,L|154:256,1,50,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
123,217,38671,2,0,L|117:116,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
189,47,39357,2,0,L|240:51,1,50,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,53,39699,5,2,0:0:0:0:
348,133,40042,1,0,0:0:0:0:
315,227,40385,1,8,0:0:0:0:
337,324,40728,2,0,P|248:300|218:205,1,200,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,106,41756,6,0,B|150:96|150:96|102:107,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,185,42442,1,8,0:0:0:0:
73,279,42785,2,0,L|69:335,2,50,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,247,43471,2,0,L|164:197,1,50,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,147,43813,5,4,0:1:0:0:
200,55,44156,2,0,P|247:44|296:56,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
379,112,44842,1,4,0:1:0:0:
462,168,45185,2,0,P|464:216|444:262,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
362,320,45870,6,0,P|314:309|264:320,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
166,335,46556,2,0,L|159:281,1,50,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
138,240,46899,2,0,L|149:141,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,66,47585,1,8,0:0:0:0:
59,164,47927,6,0,P|108:167|149:140,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
179,99,48442,1,0,0:0:0:0:
217,67,48613,2,0,P|263:61|310:84,1,100,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
389,145,49299,2,0,L|443:137,2,50,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,236,49984,6,0,L|346:336,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
246,345,50670,2,0,L|244:295,1,50,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
226,248,51013,2,0,P|178:239|131:255,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
36,220,51699,1,8,0:0:0:0:
96,140,52041,6,0,L|94:33,2,100,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,208,53070,2,0,P|256:248|344:208,1,200,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,140,54098,6,0,L|418:33,2,100,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
319,113,55127,2,0,P|256:171|274:276,1,200,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
306,313,55984,1,0,0:0:0:0:
349,336,56155,6,0,B|397:351|397:351|446:339,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
491,249,56841,1,8,0:0:0:0:
449,157,57184,1,2,0:0:0:0:
449,157,57869,1,8,0:0:0:0:
363,104,58212,6,0,L|355:5,2,100,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
286,168,59241,1,2,0:0:0:0:
191,201,59584,1,8,0:0:0:0:
115,136,59926,1,8,0:0:0:0:
65,222,60269,6,0,P|55:273|72:319,2,100,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
155,265,61298,2,0,P|203:260|250:278,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
331,336,61983,1,8,0:0:0:0:
402,266,62326,6,0,L|502:253,2,100,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,197,63355,2,0,P|316:150|331:102,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
417,51,64040,1,8,0:0:0:0:
401,150,64383,6,0,L|252:150,1,150,4|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,150,65069,1,8,0:0:0:0:
115,96,65412,2,0,B|85:149|116:204|116:204|92:239|108:286,1,200,4|8,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,332,66269,1,0,0:0:0:0:
174,351,66440,6,0,P|223:340|272:353,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,279,67126,1,8,0:0:0:0:
410,207,67469,2,0,P|459:218|508:205,2,100,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
459,119,68497,6,0,P|410:106|363:120,1,100,4|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
317,138,69012,1,0,0:0:0:0:
268,120,69183,2,0,P|220:106|172:119,1,100,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,251,70040,2,0,L|48:257,2,50,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
137,284,70554,6,0,B|186:277|186:277|238:283,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,242,71240,1,8,0:0:0:0:
381,326,71583,2,0,P|428:244|380:160,1,200,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,74,72611,5,2,0:0:0:0:
233,40,72955,2,0,L|134:55,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
77,137,73640,1,2,0:0:0:0:
172,171,73984,2,0,L|271:156,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,242,74668,6,0,P|334:290|322:338,2,100,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
374,157,75697,2,0,L|475:143,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,43,76382,2,0,L|413:50,1,50,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,57,76725,6,0,B|314:64|314:64|266:52,1,100,4|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
166,67,77411,1,8,0:0:0:0:
81,121,77754,2,0,P|68:170|89:214,1,100,4|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
141,297,78439,1,8,0:0:0:0:
235,330,78782,6,0,L|334:335,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
417,278,79468,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,184,79811,2,0,L|459:80,2,100,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
349,198,80839,6,0,L|338:98,1,100,4|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,40,81525,1,8,0:0:0:0:
163,77,81868,2,0,L|152:176,1,100,4|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
70,235,82554,1,8,0:0:0:0:
25,324,82896,6,0,P|72:335|121:321,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
211,277,83582,1,8,0:0:0:0:
305,309,83925,2,0,P|353:298|400:311,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,248,84610,1,8,0:0:0:0:
423,165,84953,6,0,P|330:145|307:53,1,200,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
206,53,85982,2,0,P|208:102|185:145,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
91,165,86667,1,8,0:0:0:0:
141,251,87010,6,0,P|189:262|219:300,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
314,329,87696,1,8,0:0:0:0:
410,302,88039,2,0,L|439:199,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
421,106,88724,1,8,0:0:0:0:
337,51,89067,6,0,B|287:35|287:35|238:41,2,100,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
421,106,90096,1,2,0:0:0:0:
337,161,90438,2,0,B|287:177|287:177|238:171,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
189,164,90953,1,0,0:0:0:0:
139,158,91124,6,0,P|121:204|130:252,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
186,335,91810,1,8,0:0:0:0:
285,322,92153,2,0,P|333:329|383:310,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
442,233,92838,1,8,0:0:0:0:
418,135,93181,6,0,L|426:35,2,100,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
379,167,94038,1,0,0:0:0:0:
335,191,94210,2,0,P|245:206|180:130,1,200,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
207,33,95238,5,2,0:0:0:0:
278,105,95581,1,0,0:0:0:0:
243,198,95924,1,8,0:0:0:0:
144,214,96267,1,2,0:0:0:0:
92,128,96609,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,214,96952,1,8,0:0:0:0:
91,299,97295,6,0,B|145:331|199:300|199:300|237:320|284:306,1,200,4|8,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
365,362,98324,2,0,B|397:308|366:254|366:254|386:216|372:169,1,200,4|8,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
429,88,99352,6,0,B|375:56|321:87|321:87|283:67|236:81,1,200,4|8,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
150,130,100381,2,0,P|101:139|51:127,2,100,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
235,182,101409,6,0,L|227:282,1,100,4|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
145,339,102094,1,8,0:0:0:0:
85,258,102437,2,0,L|36:253,2,50,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
145,339,103123,1,8,0:0:0:0:
234,295,103466,6,0,P|283:291|331:306,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
429,289,104151,2,0,L|432:240,1,50,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
417,190,104494,2,0,L|414:91,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,37,105180,1,8,0:0:0:0:
237,79,105522,6,0,L|187:85,1,50,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
141,63,105866,2,0,L|42:76,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
20,173,106551,2,0,P|10:218|36:263,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
117,322,107237,1,8,0:0:0:0:
206,278,107580,6,0,L|213:178,2,100,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
306,278,108609,2,0,L|299:178,2,100,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
331,320,109465,1,0,0:0:0:0:
369,352,109637,6,0,P|417:365|463:348,1,100,4|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
486,250,110322,1,8,0:0:0:0:
458,153,110665,2,0,L|462:98,2,50,4|0|0,0:1|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
374,208,111351,1,8,0:0:0:0:
294,146,111694,6,0,B|246:132|246:132|210:98,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
115,63,112380,2,0,L|62:68,2,50,8|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
125,162,113066,1,0,0:0:0:0:
76,249,113409,1,8,0:0:0:0:
142,323,113751,6,0,P|189:333|241:322,1,100,4|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
321,265,114437,1,8,0:0:0:0:
334,165,114780,2,0,P|287:175|235:164,1,100,4|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
155,107,115466,1,8,0:0:0:0:
227,38,115808,6,0,P|274:28|326:39,1,100,4|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
411,88,116494,1,8,0:0:0:0:
445,181,116837,2,0,B|437:229|401:255|401:255|444:306|421:358,1,200,4|8,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
326,325,117900,6,0,L|227:334,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,283,118652,1,8,0:0:0:0:
201,204,119028,2,0,L|300:213,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
387,162,119780,1,8,0:0:0:0:
389,61,120157,6,0,P|437:70|474:105,2,100,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
291,81,121285,2,0,P|241:91|196:74,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
110,22,122037,1,8,0:0:0:0:
102,120,122428,6,0,L|2:131,2,100,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,192,123620,6,0,L|263:203,2,100,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
121,217,124654,1,2,0:0:0:0:
136,308,125067,5,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,125289,12,0,127733,0:0:0:0:

Snowy Wings

136 posts

Joined January 2013

Snowy Wings 2014-08-11T14:32:45+00:00

- D a s z x - wrote:
[zjwautumn's Easy]
u dont make Easy by ds 1.4, i dont know its rankable or not.er...change a bit(1.3ds)
thanks

IamKwaN wrote:
zjwautumn's Easy
加上kiai time吧? 這曲子的kiai也很明顯已加
Easy的stack leniacy改回7吧,跟Normal一樣改回7了（其实改不改都没差诶。。反正都没有stack了）
01:45:521 - 把這綠線snap到01:45:523.已改
這EZ的難度跟Hyper是相反,Hyper是太容易,Easy是太難,建議減少連續的圓圈,最多兩個就好,多用長滑條不好意思我很少做EZ，对EZ的节奏掌握不好。
00:12:376 (1,2,3) -
00:39:357 (1,2) - Stack是絕對不建議,就算是Normal也被噴
00:53:413 (3,4,1) -
00:56:155 (1,2,3) -
00:59:584 (2,3,1) -
01:06:440 (1,2,3,4) -
01:10:554 (1,2,3,4) -
01:14:668 (1,2,3,4) -
01:16:382 (1,2) -
01:28:039 (3,4,1) - 除了这个其他的都修改了，这里感觉改成滑条不太合适
01:30:096 (1,2,3) -
01:33:181 (1,2,3) -
01:35:238 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 絕對是Normal的節奏
01:45:523 (1,2,3) -
01:58:652 (1,2) -
自訂的S:C2 clap跟S:C1 whistle是也是比較違和,建議另外找一套
01:38:324 (1) - Remove NC
01:42:095 (1) - 整個EZ的DS要一致,不能為了排列犧牲Distance Snap.
粗略看了幾眼,節奏的取捨是最大的問題,另外就是為了排列犧牲DS,其他NC,音效的問題等你改了節奏再摸音效重做了一下

谢谢mod:)

Wing My Way

186 posts

Joined September 2013

Wing My Way 2014-08-16T17:01:18+00:00

[Insane]
前面空白太多了，歌又短。
00:20:158 (2) - 类似这种有特色的颤音可以做的更有创意
00:34:557 (1) - 应该换成连打吧？
00:35:585 (1,2,3,4) - 类似这种空拍衔接的很不好，后面还有好多类似的地方比较多，和kiai难度差距太大，可以有点内容。后面类似的注意一下
00:59:583 (5,9) - 加NC
01:10:554 (1) - 容易误读
01:36:609 (1,1) - 去NC
01:41:409 (3) - 后面的break没必要
01:56:237 (6,1) - 则呢玩

以上纯属瞎扯

Lily-Cook

27 posts

Joined July 2013

Lily-Cook 2014-08-22T17:37:36+00:00

IN:爷爷 00:47:927 (1) - 大跳直接fail。
01:00:269 (1) - 这个note影藏太深，反正我是看不见

Hard：00:09:007 (1) - 这竟然不是单点，连跪几次，顺便hard的连打全是在滑条结尾，要不要这样
Hyper要不要和Hard这么像...

KwaN's Normal：00:57:869 (4) - 和前面距离突然就不同了，而且在之前的note下面，跪了

Xingyao's Normal：01:04:383 (1) - 直接跪在这的短距离单点note+折返，而且01:05:412 (1) - 和前面那个单点折返有空拍距离是相等的，坑！

Easy点个赞

Streliteela

612 posts

Joined January 2012

Streliteela 2014-08-22T18:55:13+00:00

我来摸图啦lol

[General]

cytus的好曲子，节奏明快音效丰富很适合作图。BPM和offset测得不错；easy和normal问题都不大，适当改改小问题就好；hard难度问题比较多，建议进行整体修改；对于hard来说，放太多读图梗并不是一个明智的选择，局部的flow也有一点问题（详细见下文）；Insane排版很有进步，但难度分布不均匀；一些梗的难度已经到了ex级别但其它某些地方的节奏处理又偏于hard级别，建议重新调整一下一些大跳和读图梗的ds，太大实在相当坑orz可以test自己感受一下

[Insane]

od8感觉是没问题的（如果没有那些坑爹梗的话）；楼上几位有提到曲子开头空了一大段很浪费，这个问题希望好好考虑一下，尽量把前面的部分也摆出来

00:24:272 (1,2,3) - 前面的部分你跟了主旋律的节奏，在这里还是跟着主旋律走比较好些；三个note单点有点破坏之前滑条的流畅感
00:31:471 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - 梗的思路不错但这难度陡增的有点突兀，尤其00:32:500 (1,2,3,4) - 这大跳直接就飞出去了
00:34:557 (1) - 如果不打算在这里放转盘而放长滑条的话，请改一改它的形状。。这个太难看了orz
00:35:585 (1) - 奇怪为什么主旋律到了节奏反而变缓了？！这样处理的话完全把节奏处理成hard了，尤其前面那个大跳坑刚打完活下来的触们在刚经历完生死考验以后正准备迎接更鬼畜的洗礼结果发现变成hard了sad。。这部分如果再和前面一样跟主旋律用长滑条的话就不妥了，建议跟鼓点走，减少一些1/2滑条的使用，改用1/4或者单点来丰富节奏是非常必要的。
00:43:299 (4,5,6) - 这个三连的位置相当别手。。
00:47:927 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - 这个地方是最要吐槽的。。前面节奏都是1/2滑条这里咣咣咣来几个大跳。。不知你自己打的时候这里是不是随手碾压。。反正我是不行根本反应不过来

而且说排列的话，前面那个大跳梗也是差不多这个思路，都是对称的几何大跳。。你试试可以换换其它思路，比如可以这样？（以 00:47:927 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 部分为例，随手摆的，位置和ds不一定合适）

SPOILER

00:51:013 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1) - 还有这个地方也是够难读的，可能我水平有限
00:59:241 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - 为何上面那个地方那么不明显都拆串了这个地方却用了个整串？三连---三连---三连的节奏感觉会更舒服一些，而且也会避免01:00:098 (10,1) - 这个地方难读的问题
01:07:469 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 这个加速串重新摆，太难看；尤其01:08:154 (9) - 基本快成一个大直棒子捅下去了orz
01:12:611 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 这地方节奏是这样的么？怎么怪怪的
01:24:953 (1) - 这后面又是难读骤减。。你想人家刚打完你前面那一堆大间距串突然一下子又变回hard。。柑橘萌萌哒w
01:34:210 (1,2,3) - 这个地方可以适当拉开些距离，不用拉太远，类似这样就行

SPOILER

01:40:209 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 爷爷，这真心打不了。。求碾压手元
01:48:094 (4,5,6) - 打起来特别特别特别特别地别手
01:54:265 (4,5,6,7) - ^
01:55:294 (4,5,6,7) - ^
01:48:094 (4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - 打起来相当相当相当相当地难读
01:55:808 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 重新摆，这串太难看根本看不下去orz
02:04:447 (2,1,1) - 这结尾也是相当怪异。。后面还有余音啊喂。。转盘到那里就停止了感觉怪怪的啊。。但具体改发我也没有什么特别好的思路，总之感觉很违和sad

[Hard]

这个我就不细摸了，问题比较多；就找几个地方笼统的说一说吧，总之可能需要大改。下面说几个个人认为问题最严重的地方：
ctrl+A看看你的整体排列分布，全挤在中间四个角基本都是空的（尤其左边两个角），差评
00:08:258 (3,1) - 个人非常非常非常非常非常不喜欢这种梗，尤其是在hard里面出现
00:27:357 (3,1,1) - 重新拉滑条，形状太诡异了orz
00:30:443 (1) - 这种1/2多次折返滑条我个人认为在hard里面绝对是败笔，削弱了太多的打击感
00:31:471 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - 这几个中间的停顿个人也是觉得相当违和，可能有人说过适当的停顿有神效，这话没错，但这个地方我是真没感觉出神效orz
00:34:214 (1) - 就这么一个折返滑条miss掉这么多节奏也是夫妻
00:43:471 (1,2,3) - 这种地方在hard里面基本就读不出来，类似的滑条尾重叠note的现象还有很多不一一赘述
01:03:440 (1) - 这转盘加的也是莫名其妙
01:30:096 (3,1,2) - 这种奇怪的ds也有很多地方出现，01:30:096 (3,1) - 的节奏明显和01:31:124 (1,2) - 不一样但排列上却排成了等距，这种还是不要在hard里面用到的好

[Normal]
做的不错
00:36:614 (3,4,1) - 把这里微调一下，让1、4滑条头和3形成正三角，再让4包1更好看
00:42:785 (3,4) - 平行？
00:43:813 (1,2,3,4) - 这个地方有些微微不好看，考虑把3移动一下让123的形状y轴对称，再将4上移包住3。见下图

SPOILER

01:08:497 (1,2,3) - 对normal难度来说是不是有点难度大。。
01:36:952 (6) - 这个遮挡确实在nm里难度大了
02:03:620 (1,2,1) - 这个结尾同样的，我没有好的改进方法，总之目前这种排列对于nm还是难

Easy我没有做过所以就不摸了，基本没什么问题
嗯就这样w加油

liaoxingyao

864 posts

Joined November 2013

liaoxingyao 2014-08-23T03:30:09+00:00

lily-cook wrote:
IN:爷爷 00:47:927 (1) - 大跳直接fail。
01:00:269 (1) - 这个note影藏太深，反正我是看不见

Hard：00:09:007 (1) - 这竟然不是单点，连跪几次，顺便hard的连打全是在滑条结尾，要不要这样
Hyper要不要和Hard这么像...

KwaN's Normal：00:57:869 (4) - 和前面距离突然就不同了，而且在之前的note下面，跪了

Xingyao's Normal：01:04:383 (1) - 直接跪在这的短距离单点note+折返，而且01:05:412 (1) - 和前面那个单点折返有空拍距离是相等的，坑！

Easy点个赞

奇怪我NM都被删了你还摸有点服

-[Hikari]-

84 posts

Joined February 2014

Topic Starter

-[Hikari]- 2014-08-23T06:06:00+00:00

Wing My Way wrote:
[Insane]
前面空白太多了，歌又短。前面不太打算补了，因为我开始时难度就低
00:20:158 (2) - 类似这种有特色的颤音可以做的更有创意 ;w;这里…我考虑了一会儿画不好
00:34:557 (1) - 应该换成连打吧？这里是一个长音，以前连打改成滑条的
00:35:585 (1,2,3,4) - 类似这种空拍衔接的很不好，后面还有好多类似的地方比较多，和kiai难度差距太大，可以有点内容。后面类似的注意一下恩…难度分配不均我也注意到了，我考虑考虑
00:59:583 (5,9) - 加NC fixed
01:10:554 (1) - 容易误读 ;w;应该怎么改？
01:36:609 (1,1) - 去NC 滑条变速不是要NC的么……？
01:41:409 (3) - 后面的break没必要不补也行吧？我思考思考
01:56:237 (6,1) - 则呢玩 ;w;fixed

以上纯属瞎扯

-[Hikari]-

84 posts

Joined February 2014

Topic Starter

-[Hikari]- 2014-08-23T06:12:39+00:00

lily-cook wrote:
IN:爷爷 00:47:927 (1) - 大跳直接fail。间距变小了
01:00:269 (1) - 这个note影藏太深，反正我是看不见看缩圈能看出来吧…………

Hard：00:09:007 (1) - 这竟然不是单点，连跪几次，顺便hard的连打全是在滑条结尾，要不要这样
Hyper要不要和Hard这么像...

KwaN's Normal：00:57:869 (4) - 和前面距离突然就不同了，而且在之前的note下面，跪了

Xingyao's Normal：01:04:383 (1) - 直接跪在这的短距离单点note+折返，而且01:05:412 (1) - 和前面那个单点折返有空拍距离是相等的，坑！

Easy点个赞

Hakurei Yoru

688 posts

Joined September 2013

Hakurei Yoru 2014-08-23T06:21:56+00:00

Streliteela wrote:
我来摸图啦lol

[General]

cytus的好曲子，节奏明快音效丰富很适合作图。BPM和offset测得不错；easy和normal问题都不大，适当改改小问题就好；hard难度问题比较多，建议进行整体修改；对于hard来说，放太多读图梗并不是一个明智的选择，局部的flow也有一点问题（详细见下文）；Insane排版很有进步，但难度分布不均匀；一些梗的难度已经到了ex级别但其它某些地方的节奏处理又偏于hard级别，建议重新调整一下一些大跳和读图梗的ds，太大实在相当坑orz可以test自己感受一下

[Hard]

这个我就不细摸了，问题比较多；就找几个地方笼统的说一说吧，总之可能需要大改。下面说几个个人认为问题最严重的地方：
ctrl+A看看你的整体排列分布，全挤在中间四个角基本都是空的（尤其左边两个角），差评
00:08:258 (3,1) - 个人非常非常非常非常非常不喜欢这种梗，尤其是在hard里面出现
00:27:357 (3,1,1) - 重新拉滑条，形状太诡异了orz
00:30:443 (1) - 这种1/2多次折返滑条我个人认为在hard里面绝对是败笔，削弱了太多的打击感
00:31:471 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - 这几个中间的停顿个人也是觉得相当违和，可能有人说过适当的停顿有神效，这话没错，但这个地方我是真没感觉出神效orz
00:34:214 (1) - 就这么一个折返滑条miss掉这么多节奏也是夫妻
00:43:471 (1,2,3) - 这种地方在hard里面基本就读不出来，类似的滑条尾重叠note的现象还有很多不一一赘述
01:03:440 (1) - 这转盘加的也是莫名其妙
01:30:096 (3,1,2) - 这种奇怪的ds也有很多地方出现，01:30:096 (3,1) - 的节奏明显和01:31:124 (1,2) - 不一样但排列上却排成了等距，这种还是不要在hard里面用到的好

AF 不想说什么，但折返我还是那样不过采的重音小小改了下，至少我觉得那里放折返没有错。

服服服

osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: 5-03 Brionac ~Lugh Lamhfhata~.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 68069
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.6
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.5
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.799999

[Metadata]
Title:Brionac ~Lugh Lamhfhata~
TitleUnicode:Brionac ~Lugh Lamhfhata~
Artist:Project Grimoire
ArtistUnicode:Project Grimoire
Creator:-[Hikari]-
Version:Yoru's Hard
Source:Cytus
Tags:ICE zjwautumn IamKwaN Hakurei Yoru
BeatmapID:469187
BeatmapSetID:190450

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.4
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"IMG_0726.PNG",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

[TimingPoints]
1145,374.391613627855,3,2,0,20,1,0
18788,342.831675361259,3,2,0,40,1,0
19130,342.831675361259,3,2,0,40,1,0
30443,-200,3,2,0,40,0,0
31471,-100,3,2,0,60,0,0
35585,-83.3333333333333,3,1,0,60,0,0
52041,-133.333333333333,3,2,0,60,0,0
58212,-100,3,2,0,70,0,0
68154,-83.3333333333333,3,2,0,70,0,0
68497,-83.3333333333333,3,2,0,80,0,1
78782,-80,3,2,0,85,0,1
79811,-83.3333333333333,3,2,0,85,0,1
80839,-100,3,2,0,80,0,1
84610,-66.6666666666667,3,2,0,80,0,1
84953,-133.333333333333,3,2,0,60,0,0
91124,-100,3,2,0,60,0,0
92153,-100,3,2,0,60,0,0
96267,-83.3333333333333,3,2,0,65,0,0
96609,-74.0740740740741,3,2,0,70,0,0
96952,-66.6666666666667,3,2,0,75,0,0
97295,-100,3,2,0,80,0,0
105180,-100,3,2,0,70,0,0
113408,-100,3,1,0,70,0,0
117900,376.175548589342,3,2,0,40,1,0
117900,-200,3,2,0,40,0,0
122428,397.350993377483,3,2,0,40,1,0
123620,413.76456796083,3,2,0,40,1,0
123620,-200,3,2,0,40,0,0
125067,444.444444444444,3,2,0,40,1,0
127733,-100,3,2,0,5,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 179,179,179
Combo2 : 255,125,158
Combo3 : 255,255,128
Combo4 : 58,252,199

[HitObjects]
136,80,770,6,0,L|232:96,1,70
256,176,1145,2,0,L|112:200,2,140,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,264,2268,6,0,L|364:240,2,140,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,264,3391,5,0,0:0:0:0:
220,264,3765,1,0,0:0:0:0:
220,264,4140,1,0,0:0:0:0:
220,264,4514,6,0,B|256:252|280:260|280:260|312:284|360:272,1,140
344,76,5263,5,0,0:0:0:0:
344,76,5637,2,0,P|304:108|212:112,1,140
120,68,6386,2,0,P|160:36|252:32,1,140
344,76,7135,5,0,0:0:0:0:
344,76,7509,2,0,L|384:224,1,140
288,224,8258,2,0,L|312:312,2,70,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,292,9007,5,0,0:0:0:0:
448,128,9381,1,0,0:0:0:0:
456,216,9756,2,0,P|396:208|364:140,1,140
392,44,10504,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,148,10879,6,0,L|260:208,1,140
344,264,11627,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,148,12002,2,0,P|364:108|272:144,1,140
184,192,12751,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,256,13125,6,0,P|96:216|120:136,1,140
196,192,14248,5,0,0:0:0:0:
252,268,14623,2,0,P|192:292|124:248,1,140
196,192,15371,2,0,P|256:168|324:212,1,140
344,272,16120,5,0,0:0:0:0:
248,256,16495,2,0,L|328:128,1,140
200,204,17243,2,0,L|120:332,1,140
256,192,17618,12,0,18554,0:0:0:0:
312,104,18788,6,2,L|384:68,2,70,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,200,19472,2,0,L|220:276,1,140
216,176,20158,5,2,0:0:0:0:
332,88,20501,2,0,P|380:148|340:208,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,332,21186,6,2,P|224:272|364:204,1,280,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,304,22044,2,2,L|300:260,1,70,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,184,22558,5,0,0:0:0:0:
360,104,22901,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,292,23243,6,0,L|304:268,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,184,23586,2,0,L|320:208,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,224,23929,1,0,0:0:0:0:
360,104,24272,6,0,P|396:136|396:240,1,140,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,300,24958,2,0,P|240:268|240:164,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,25386,12,0,26843,0:0:0:0:
168,116,27015,5,2,0:0:0:0:
156,100,27186,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,80,27357,2,0,B|200:100|244:92|244:92|276:64|324:64|324:64|356:120|416:108,1,280
400,32,28386,6,0,B|368:80|376:128|376:128|388:192|328:224|328:224|296:296,1,280
312,160,29414,2,0,B|372:164|408:220|408:220|348:212|300:228|300:228|272:256,1,245
164,112,30272,1,0,0:0:0:0:
120,192,30443,6,0,P|112:236|216:236,1,175
211,247,31471,6,2,P|272:204|347:223,1,140
288,296,31986,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,296,32071,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,296,32157,1,0,0:0:0:0:
436,288,32329,1,0,0:0:0:0:
436,288,32500,6,2,P|464:228|428:152,1,140,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
439,162,32928,1,0,0:0:0:0:
439,162,33014,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,96,33186,5,2,0:0:0:0:
268,160,33357,1,0,0:0:0:0:
268,160,33528,6,0,P|328:188|364:172,1,105
348,224,33871,2,0,L|296:296,1,70
156,336,34214,6,0,L|112:336,3,35,2|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,296,34557,6,2,L|136:272,7,35,0|0|0|0|2|0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,264,35243,2,2,L|188:224,3,35,2|0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,252,35585,5,2,0:0:0:0:
352,168,35757,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,80,35928,2,0,P|340:72|304:84,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,168,36271,2,0,P|404:176|440:164,1,83.9999974365235
392,80,36614,5,2,0:0:0:0:
248,76,36785,1,0,0:0:0:0:
164,192,36957,2,0,P|152:244|184:288,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,328,37300,2,0,L|248:152,1,167.999994873047,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,192,37814,6,0,P|348:244|316:288,1,83.9999974365235,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,352,38157,1,0,0:0:0:0:
244,328,38328,2,0,P|232:276|264:232,1,83.9999974365235,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,192,38671,6,0,P|320:140|284:120,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
143,84,39014,2,0,P|185:80|224:96,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,228,39357,2,0,L|176:156,1,83.9999974365235
224,96,39699,6,0,P|260:144|256:268,1,167.999994873047,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,232,40385,2,0,P|80:184|84:60,1,167.999994873047,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
75,79,40814,1,0,0:0:0:0:
75,79,40899,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,128,41071,6,0,L|212:224,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,256,41414,2,0,L|300:160,1,83.9999974365235
168,128,41756,6,0,B|200:64|200:64|288:56,1,125.999996154785,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,64,42099,2,0,B|288:128|288:128|352:204,1,125.999996154785,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,204,42442,2,0,L|236:244,1,83.9999974365235
148,240,42785,6,0,P|136:180|164:160,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,120,43128,2,0,P|248:180|220:200,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,300,43471,6,0,L|160:228,1,83.9999974365235
147,240,43728,1,0,0:0:0:0:
147,240,43813,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,216,43985,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,232,44156,2,0,L|296:308,2,83.9999974365235,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,232,44585,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,232,44670,1,0,0:0:0:0:
456,216,44842,6,0,P|416:148|320:160,1,167.999994873047,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,45356,1,0,0:0:0:0:
308,296,45528,2,0,L|384:216,1,83.9999974365235
324,148,45870,6,0,P|284:164|248:204,2,83.9999974365235,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,232,46385,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,332,46556,2,0,L|256:332,1,125.999996154785
244,312,46899,6,0,P|224:220|128:216,1,167.999994873047,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,296,47413,1,0,0:0:0:0:
244,312,47585,2,0,L|272:224,1,83.9999974365235
364,232,47927,6,0,P|344:168|244:144,1,167.999994873047,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,148,48356,1,0,0:0:0:0:
212,160,48442,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,240,48613,2,0,L|168:240,1,83.9999974365235
240,328,48956,6,0,L|336:328,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,128,49299,2,0,L|392:128,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,128,49556,1,0,0:0:0:0:
428,128,49642,1,0,0:0:0:0:
408,224,49813,1,0,0:0:0:0:
408,224,49984,6,0,P|336:208|296:120,1,167.999994873047,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,128,50670,2,0,P|182:202|104:224,1,167.999994873047
80,220,51099,1,0,0:0:0:0:
56,208,51184,1,0,0:0:0:0:
76,96,51356,6,0,P|140:64|172:76,1,83.9999974365235,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,128,51699,2,0,P|152:160|120:148,1,83.9999974365235
143,158,51956,1,0,0:0:0:0:
143,158,52041,1,4,0:0:0:0:
96,260,52384,5,0,0:0:0:0:
232,316,52727,1,0,0:0:0:0:
364,252,53070,6,0,B|380:208|380:208|408:192|412:160|412:160|412:152,2,105.000004005432,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,228,54098,5,0,0:0:0:0:
272,92,54441,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,220,54784,2,0,L|308:272,1,52.5000020027161
268,340,55127,6,0,B|216:340|216:340|196:316|156:328,2,105.000004005432,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,196,56155,6,0,B|296:196|296:196|316:220|356:208,2,105.000004005432,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,96,57184,2,0,L|100:156,1,52.5000020027161
244,196,57527,2,0,L|208:256,1,52.5000020027161
356,288,57869,2,0,L|320:348,1,52.5000020027161
236,336,58212,6,0,B|248:300|264:288|264:288|280:272|280:272|312:216,1,140
388,176,58898,1,0,0:0:0:0:
276,48,59241,6,0,B|264:84|248:96|248:96|232:112|232:112|200:168,1,140
388,176,59926,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,312,60269,6,0,L|276:312,1,70
256,212,60612,2,0,L|340:212,1,70
320,112,60955,2,0,L|404:112,1,70
468,176,61298,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,272,61469,2,0,B|420:288|420:288|380:280|380:280,1,70
276,256,61812,1,0,0:0:0:0:
220,148,61983,2,0,B|204:120|204:120|212:80|212:80,1,70
292,92,62326,5,0,0:0:0:0:
376,140,62498,1,0,0:0:0:0:
292,188,62669,2,0,L|272:268,1,70
188,300,63012,2,0,L|208:220,1,70
232,136,63355,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,148,63698,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,160,64040,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,176,64383,5,0,0:0:0:0:
276,136,64555,1,0,0:0:0:0:
364,180,64726,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,272,64898,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,352,65069,2,0,P|280:340|264:288,1,105
272,260,65412,5,0,0:0:0:0:
292,164,65583,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,80,65755,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,68,65926,1,0,0:0:0:0:
72,136,66097,2,0,P|76:184|164:192,1,140
272,140,66783,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,140,67126,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,140,67469,6,0,P|268:92|180:84,1,140
272,140,68154,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,140,68326,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,144,68497,6,0,P|256:188|288:236,1,83.9999974365235,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
269,220,68754,1,0,0:0:0:0:
269,220,68840,1,8,0:0:0:0:
388,236,69012,1,0,0:0:0:0:
360,108,69183,6,0,P|300:52|212:68,1,167.999994873047,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,62,69611,1,0,0:0:0:0:
220,62,69697,1,0,0:0:0:0:
196,184,69869,2,0,L|292:128,1,83.9999974365235
268,141,70126,1,0,0:0:0:0:
268,141,70211,1,8,0:0:0:0:
328,240,70383,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,240,70554,6,0,L|244:288,1,83.9999974365235
116,156,70897,2,0,L|228:196,1,83.9999974365235,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,116,71240,2,0,L|236:156,1,83.9999974365235
244,232,71583,2,0,P|192:192|212:72,1,167.999994873047,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
191,95,72011,1,0,0:0:0:0:
191,95,72097,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,148,72268,6,0,L|72:208,1,167.999994873047,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,200,72697,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,200,72783,1,0,0:0:0:0:
116,316,72954,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,228,73125,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,332,73297,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,236,73468,1,0,0:0:0:0:
268,132,73640,6,0,L|208:72,1,83.9999974365235,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,64,73983,2,0,L|388:124,1,83.9999974365235
400,136,74240,1,0,0:0:0:0:
412,148,74325,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,236,74497,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,236,74668,2,0,P|264:192|136:208,1,167.999994873047,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,280,75354,6,0,L|200:88,1,167.999994873047,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,117,75782,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,117,75868,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,68,76040,1,0,0:0:0:0:
404,128,76211,1,0,0:0:0:0:
404,128,76382,2,0,L|332:176,1,83.9999974365235,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,252,76725,6,0,L|260:300,1,83.9999974365235
262,298,76982,1,0,0:0:0:0:
262,298,77068,1,8,0:0:0:0:
124,240,77411,6,0,P|120:160|192:108,1,167.999994873047,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
183,109,77839,1,0,0:0:0:0:
183,109,77925,1,0,0:0:0:0:
276,152,78097,2,0,P|236:196|180:200,2,83.9999974365235,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,56,78611,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,56,78782,6,0,P|304:60|344:92,2,87.5,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,148,79296,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,80,79468,2,0,L|68:160,1,87.5
200,148,79811,2,0,L|128:224,1,83.9999974365235,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,280,80154,1,0,0:0:0:0:
84,280,80496,6,0,P|136:328|244:304,1,167.999994873047,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,304,80925,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,284,81011,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,160,81182,2,0,L|200:232,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,152,81525,2,0,L|136:80,1,70
196,228,81868,6,0,P|192:276|280:312,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,232,82553,2,0,P|332:212|276:240,1,105,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,208,82896,6,0,L|248:108,1,70
184,264,83239,2,0,L|168:164,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,324,83582,2,0,L|76:224,1,70
216,340,83925,6,0,B|272:344|292:328|292:328|344:356|396:328|396:328|436:300|436:300|456:252,1,280,8|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,160,84782,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,148,84953,6,0,L|336:260,1,105.000004005432
334,250,85382,1,0,0:0:0:0:
334,250,85467,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,284,85639,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,284,85982,6,0,P|192:216|80:228,1,183.750007009506
80,236,86667,2,0,L|52:292,1,52.5000020027161
124,344,87010,2,0,L|152:288,1,52.5000020027161
232,284,87353,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,284,87696,2,0,P|284:272|304:296,1,78.7500030040742
328,264,88039,6,0,L|368:200,1,52.5000020027161
404,136,88381,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,80,88724,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,320,89067,6,0,P|244:336|268:216,1,210.000008010865
220,140,89924,1,0,0:0:0:0:
300,72,90096,2,0,P|376:104|412:240,1,210.000008010865
348,256,90953,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,328,91124,5,0,0:0:0:0:
168,312,91296,1,0,0:0:0:0:
172,208,91467,2,0,L|124:148,1,70
96,252,91810,2,0,L|40:312,1,70
172,328,92153,2,0,B|224:320|236:336|236:336|264:324|320:328,2,140,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,228,93181,5,0,0:0:0:0:
208,144,93353,1,0,0:0:0:0:
300,116,93524,1,0,0:0:0:0:
396,132,93695,1,0,0:0:0:0:
464,200,93867,2,0,L|436:284,2,70,0|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,200,94295,5,0,0:0:0:0:
464,200,94381,1,0,0:0:0:0:
396,132,94552,2,0,P|360:116|320:140,1,70
260,216,94895,2,0,P|296:232|336:208,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,132,95238,2,0,B|360:120|348:136|336:128|336:128|304:136|296:128|296:128|252:128,2,140,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,232,96267,6,0,B|400:256|400:256|380:316|364:328|304:336,2,167.999994873047,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,100,97295,6,0,L|308:248,1,140,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,292,97809,1,0,0:0:0:0:
132,264,97981,1,8,0:0:0:0:
132,168,98152,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,108,98324,6,0,L|204:256,1,140,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,292,98838,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,260,99009,1,0,0:0:0:0:
424,172,99181,1,0,0:0:0:0:
340,120,99352,6,0,L|336:268,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,259,99781,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,259,99866,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,316,100038,6,2,L|216:312,7,35,8|0|0|0|0|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,292,100723,6,2,L|224:252,3,35,0|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,276,101066,2,2,L|280:224,3,35,0|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,276,101409,5,14,0:0:0:0:
320,276,102438,5,2,0:0:0:0:
320,276,103466,6,0,B|280:240|280:240|284:204|272:184|272:184|244:156,2,140,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,248,104323,1,0,0:0:0:0:
424,148,104495,6,0,B|460:112|460:88|460:88|484:68|504:32,2,140,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,180,105523,2,0,L|124:280,1,140
324,304,106209,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,124,106552,6,0,L|292:224,1,140
100,216,107237,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,120,107580,6,0,B|220:132|248:120|248:120|272:136|312:124,2,140,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,224,108609,6,0,B|160:240|160:240|136:224|112:244|72:232,2,140,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,304,109466,1,0,0:0:0:0:
396,284,109637,6,0,B|440:248|440:248|440:144,1,140
460,60,110323,1,0,0:0:0:0:
340,80,110666,6,0,B|296:116|296:116|296:220,2,140,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,80,111694,6,0,L|192:80,1,140
168,180,112380,1,0,0:0:0:0:
116,264,112551,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,264,112723,6,0,P|224:288|248:204,1,280,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,116,113751,6,0,P|296:108|444:240,1,280,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,252,114522,1,0,0:0:0:0:
452,276,114608,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,296,114780,6,0,P|348:232|208:212,1,210,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,216,115379,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,232,115465,1,0,0:0:0:0:
104,304,115637,1,0,0:0:0:0:
104,304,115808,6,0,P|88:200|240:120,1,280,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,176,116837,6,2,L|300:216,3,35,0|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,224,117179,2,2,L|320:272,3,35,0|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,272,117522,2,2,L|340:320,3,35,0|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,324,117865,5,14,0:0:0:0:
456,288,118276,2,0,L|456:216,1,70
424,96,119028,5,2,0:0:0:0:
348,276,119404,1,0,0:0:0:0:
424,96,119780,2,0,P|376:84|352:96,1,70,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,248,120533,5,0,0:0:0:0:
304,128,120909,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,40,121285,2,0,P|216:56|204:96,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,188,122037,5,0,0:0:0:0:
240,248,122428,1,2,0:0:0:0:
336,264,122825,1,0,0:0:0:0:
412,204,123222,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,108,123620,6,0,P|404:88|376:84,1,52.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,84,124033,2,0,P|336:88|304:108,1,52.5,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,116,124447,2,0,P|276:140|272:152,1,35,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,300,125067,5,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,125178,12,0,127733,0:0:0:0:

-[Hikari]-

84 posts

Joined February 2014

Topic Starter

-[Hikari]- 2014-08-23T07:00:54+00:00

Streliteela wrote:
我来摸图啦lol

[General]

cytus的好曲子，节奏明快音效丰富很适合作图。BPM和offset测得不错；easy和normal问题都不大，适当改改小问题就好；hard难度问题比较多，建议进行整体修改；对于hard来说，放太多读图梗并不是一个明智的选择，局部的flow也有一点问题（详细见下文）；Insane排版很有进步，但难度分布不均匀；一些梗的难度已经到了ex级别但其它某些地方的节奏处理又偏于hard级别，建议重新调整一下一些大跳和读图梗的ds，太大实在相当坑orz可以test自己感受一下我会把间距改小的

[Insane]

od8感觉是没问题的（如果没有那些坑爹梗的话）；楼上几位有提到曲子开头空了一大段很浪费，这个问题希望好好考虑一下，尽量把前面的部分也摆出来因为我一开始就是水段所以再往前摆只会更水;w;

00:24:272 (1,2,3) - 前面的部分你跟了主旋律的节奏，在这里还是跟着主旋律走比较好些；三个note单点有点破坏之前滑条的流畅感 fixed，换成一个滑条
00:31:471 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - 梗的思路不错但这难度陡增的有点突兀，尤其00:32:500 (1,2,3,4) - 这大跳直接就飞出去了改小了
00:34:557 (1) - 如果不打算在这里放转盘而放长滑条的话，请改一改它的形状。。这个太难看了orz …为啥我觉得还不错
00:35:585 (1) - 奇怪为什么主旋律到了节奏反而变缓了？！这样处理的话完全把节奏处理成hard了，尤其前面那个大跳坑刚打完活下来的触们在刚经历完生死考验以后正准备迎接更鬼畜的洗礼结果发现变成hard了sad。。这部分如果再和前面一样跟主旋律用长滑条的话就不妥了，建议跟鼓点走，减少一些1/2滑条的使用，改用1/4或者单点来丰富节奏是非常必要的。我把前面的大跳改小了，本意就是不打算从这里开始坑人的……
00:43:299 (4,5,6) - 这个三连的位置相当别手。。 ;w;我觉得还好？
00:47:927 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - 这个地方是最要吐槽的。。前面节奏都是1/2滑条这里咣咣咣来几个大跳。。不知你自己打的时候这里是不是随手碾压。。反正我是不行根本反应不过来而且说排列的话，前面那个大跳梗也是差不多这个思路，都是对称的几何大跳。。你试试可以换换其它思路，比如可以这样？（以 00:47:927 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 部分为例，随手摆的，位置和ds不一定合适）
SPOILER
减小间距了;w;
00:51:013 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1) - 还有这个地方也是够难读的，可能我水平有限这里不改动
00:59:241 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - 为何上面那个地方那么不明显都拆串了这个地方却用了个整串？三连---三连---三连的节奏感觉会更舒服一些，而且也会避免01:00:098 (10,1) - 这个地方难读的问题 (10,1)那里是个6分拍，之前我拆一下看看，本来是长串和折返交替的
01:07:469 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 这个加速串重新摆，太难看；尤其01:08:154 (9) - 基本快成一个大直棒子捅下去了orz 改了一下9的弧度
01:12:611 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 这地方节奏是这样的么？怎么怪怪的的确是这样的
01:24:953 (1) - 这后面又是难读骤减。。你想人家刚打完你前面那一堆大间距串突然一下子又变回hard。。柑橘萌萌哒w ;w;我觉得可以降低一点难度……我看看
01:34:210 (1,2,3) - 这个地方可以适当拉开些距离，不用拉太远，类似这样就行
SPOILER
fixed，换了种摆法
01:40:209 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 爷爷，这真心打不了。。求碾压手元这里我就故意一下吧…
01:48:094 (4,5,6) - 打起来特别特别特别特别地别手
01:54:265 (4,5,6,7) - ^
01:55:294 (4,5,6,7) - ^ ;w;我觉得这三个地方都没问题啊……
01:48:094 (4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - 打起来相当相当相当相当地难读 fixed
01:55:808 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 重新摆，这串太难看根本看不下去orz fixed
02:04:447 (2,1,1) - 这结尾也是相当怪异。。后面还有余音啊喂。。转盘到那里就停止了感觉怪怪的啊。。但具体改发我也没有什么特别好的思路，总之感觉很违和sad 又加了个转盘

IamKwaN

osu! Alumni

3,905 posts

Joined August 2012

IamKwaN 2014-08-23T07:52:45+00:00

lily-cook wrote:
KwaN's Normal：00:57:869 (4) - 和前面距离突然就不同了，而且在之前的note下面，跪了沒問題只是普通的一個stack 而且沒有polarity的問題

Streliteela wrote:
[Normal]
00:36:614 (3,4,1) - 把这里微调一下，让1、4滑条头和3形成正三角，再让4包1更好看好
00:42:785 (3,4) - 平行？故意CTRL + H +G
00:43:813 (1,2,3,4) - 这个地方有些微微不好看，考虑把3移动一下让123的形状y轴对称，再将4上移包住3。 blanket我感覺更不好看,把那flow拐下去
01:08:497 (1,2,3) - 对normal难度来说是不是有点难度大。。再難點我也做過
01:36:952 (6) - 这个遮挡确实在nm里难度大了也不是
02:03:620 (1,2,1) - 这个结尾同样的，我没有好的改进方法，总之目前这种排列对于nm还是难你對nm難度的定義有點過窄,我這裡全都只是1/2,排列也沒啥特別

SPOILER

osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: 5-03 Brionac ~Lugh Lamhfhata~.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 68069
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 0.7999989

[Metadata]
Title:Brionac ~Lugh Lamhfhata~
TitleUnicode:Brionac ~Lugh Lamhfhata~
Artist:Project Grimoire
ArtistUnicode:Project Grimoire
Creator:-[Hikari]-
Version:KwaN's Normal
Source:Cytus
Tags:ICE zjwautumn IamKwaN Hakurei Yoru
BeatmapID:477350
BeatmapSetID:190450

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:4
SliderMultiplier:1
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"IMG_0726.PNG",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

[TimingPoints]
1145,374.391613627855,3,2,88,35,1,0
18788,342.831675361259,3,2,88,45,1,0
19130,342.831675361259,3,2,88,35,1,0
29414,-100,3,2,88,45,0,0
31471,-100,3,2,88,50,0,0
35585,-100,3,2,89,75,0,0
36614,-100,3,2,89,65,0,0
36957,-100,3,2,89,75,0,0
37642,-100,3,2,89,65,0,0
37814,-100,3,2,89,75,0,0
43813,-100,3,2,89,65,0,0
44156,-100,3,2,89,75,0,0
44842,-100,3,2,89,65,0,0
45185,-100,3,2,89,75,0,0
59584,-100,3,2,89,85,0,0
59926,-100,3,2,89,95,0,0
60269,-100,3,2,89,75,0,0
64383,-100,3,2,89,65,0,0
64555,-100,3,2,89,75,0,0
65412,-100,3,2,89,65,0,0
65583,-100,3,2,89,75,0,0
68497,-100,3,2,89,85,0,1
76640,-100,3,2,89,85,0,0
76725,-100,3,2,89,85,0,1
77754,-100,3,2,89,75,0,1
77925,-100,3,2,89,85,0,1
80839,-100,3,2,89,75,0,1
81011,-100,3,2,89,85,0,1
81868,-100,3,2,89,75,0,1
82039,-100,3,2,89,85,0,1
84953,-100,3,2,89,85,0,0
96267,-100,3,2,89,95,0,0
97295,-100,3,2,89,65,0,0
97467,-100,3,2,89,85,0,0
98324,-100,3,2,89,75,0,0
98495,-100,3,2,89,85,0,0
101409,-100,3,2,89,55,0,1
101495,-100,3,2,89,55,0,0
113751,-100,3,2,89,45,0,0
113922,-100,3,2,89,55,0,0
114780,-100,3,2,89,45,0,0
114951,-100,3,2,89,55,0,0
115808,-100,3,2,89,45,0,0
115979,-100,3,2,89,55,0,0
117900,376.175548589342,3,2,88,35,1,0
122428,397.350993377483,3,2,88,25,1,0
123620,413.76456796083,3,2,88,25,1,0
125067,444.444444444444,3,2,88,15,1,0
127733,-100,3,2,88,5,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 179,179,179
Combo2 : 255,125,158
Combo3 : 255,255,128
Combo4 : 58,252,199

[HitObjects]
171,74,770,6,0,L|176:123,1,50,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
198,168,1145,6,0,P|243:185|292:173,2,100,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
162,261,2268,2,0,P|117:278|68:266,2,100,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,296,3391,5,2,0:0:0:0:
349,329,3765,2,0,P|394:312|443:324,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
488,234,4514,2,0,P|506:157|432:72,1,200,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
331,75,5637,6,0,P|285:95|238:84,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,62,6386,1,8,0:0:0:0:
124,160,6760,2,0,P|144:206|133:253,2,100,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,62,7884,6,0,B|186:85|186:85|235:82,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,114,8632,2,0,B|376:110|376:110|423:134,1,100,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
449,230,9381,1,2,0:0:0:0:
395,314,9756,1,2,0:0:0:0:
295,316,10130,6,0,L|196:300,2,100,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
273,218,11253,2,0,L|175:202,2,100,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
327,133,12376,5,2,0:0:0:0:
268,51,12751,2,0,P|223:29|170:36,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
74,31,13499,2,0,B|74:91|118:119|118:119|81:157|92:210,1,200,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
190,187,14623,6,0,P|192:239|163:277,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
85,337,15371,1,8,0:0:0:0:
178,371,15746,2,0,L|279:359,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
366,314,16495,1,8,0:0:0:0:
442,249,16869,6,0,P|466:295|462:346,2,100,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
385,166,17992,1,2,0:0:0:0:
171,73,18788,6,0,L|164:122,1,50,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
147,169,19130,6,0,L|155:271,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
93,347,19815,1,8,0:0:0:0:
40,261,20158,2,0,L|44:207,2,50,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
93,347,20844,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,337,21186,6,0,L|292:328,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,303,21872,2,0,L|393:251,1,50,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
414,207,22215,2,0,L|421:106,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
346,39,22901,1,8,0:0:0:0:
251,70,23243,6,0,L|201:76,1,50,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
161,107,23586,2,0,P|115:124|67:111,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
34,206,24272,2,0,L|45:308,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
127,361,24958,1,8,0:0:0:0:
190,284,25300,6,0,L|200:184,2,100,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
285,252,26329,2,0,L|295:152,2,100,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
294,301,27186,1,0,0:0:0:0:
318,344,27357,6,0,P|363:364|410:352,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
468,270,28042,1,8,0:0:0:0:
473,169,28386,2,0,L|477:117,2,50,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
379,205,29071,1,8,0:0:0:0:
314,128,29414,6,0,P|265:140|217:127,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
118,117,30100,2,0,L|68:126,2,50,8|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
158,208,30786,1,0,0:0:0:0:
159,308,31129,1,8,0:0:0:0:
244,359,31471,6,0,L|255:255,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
265,159,32157,1,8,0:0:0:0:
355,115,32500,2,0,L|366:219,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,315,33186,1,8,0:0:0:0:
283,352,33528,6,0,P|236:363|186:349,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,287,34214,1,8,0:0:0:0:
153,197,34557,2,0,B|164:135|131:92|131:92|173:109|218:84,1,200,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
303,33,35585,5,4,0:1:0:0:
398,64,35928,2,0,P|405:113|386:158,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
315,228,36614,1,4,0:1:0:0:
390,290,36957,2,0,P|397:339|378:384,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,326,37642,6,0,L|197:340,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
137,275,38328,2,0,L|134:224,1,50,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
103,185,38671,2,0,L|97:84,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
189,47,39357,2,0,L|240:51,1,50,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,53,39699,5,2,0:0:0:0:
348,133,40042,1,0,0:0:0:0:
315,227,40385,1,8,0:0:0:0:
337,324,40728,2,0,P|248:300|218:205,1,200,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,106,41756,6,0,B|150:96|150:96|102:107,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,185,42442,1,8,0:0:0:0:
73,279,42785,2,0,L|69:335,2,50,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,247,43471,2,0,L|164:197,1,50,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,147,43813,5,4,0:1:0:0:
200,55,44156,2,0,P|247:44|296:56,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
379,112,44842,1,4,0:1:0:0:
462,168,45185,2,0,P|464:216|444:262,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
362,320,45870,6,0,P|314:309|264:320,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
166,335,46556,2,0,L|159:281,1,50,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
138,240,46899,2,0,L|149:141,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,66,47585,1,8,0:0:0:0:
59,164,47927,6,0,P|108:167|149:140,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
179,99,48442,1,0,0:0:0:0:
217,67,48613,2,0,P|263:61|310:84,1,100,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
389,145,49299,2,0,L|443:137,2,50,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,236,49984,6,0,L|346:336,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
246,345,50670,2,0,L|244:295,1,50,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
226,248,51013,2,0,P|178:239|131:255,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
36,220,51699,1,8,0:0:0:0:
96,140,52041,6,0,L|94:33,2,100,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,208,53070,2,0,P|256:248|344:208,1,200,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,140,54098,6,0,L|418:33,2,100,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
319,113,55127,2,0,P|256:171|274:276,1,200,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
306,313,55984,1,0,0:0:0:0:
349,336,56155,6,0,B|397:351|397:351|446:339,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
491,249,56841,1,8,0:0:0:0:
449,157,57184,1,2,0:0:0:0:
449,157,57869,1,8,0:0:0:0:
363,104,58212,6,0,L|355:5,2,100,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
286,168,59241,1,2,0:0:0:0:
191,201,59584,1,8,0:0:0:0:
115,136,59926,1,8,0:0:0:0:
65,222,60269,6,0,P|55:273|72:319,2,100,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
155,265,61298,2,0,P|203:260|250:278,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
331,336,61983,1,8,0:0:0:0:
402,266,62326,6,0,L|502:253,2,100,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,197,63355,2,0,P|316:150|331:102,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
417,51,64040,1,8,0:0:0:0:
401,150,64383,6,0,L|252:150,1,150,4|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,150,65069,1,8,0:0:0:0:
115,96,65412,2,0,B|85:149|116:204|116:204|92:239|108:286,1,200,4|8,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,332,66269,1,0,0:0:0:0:
174,351,66440,6,0,P|223:340|272:353,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,279,67126,1,8,0:0:0:0:
410,207,67469,2,0,P|459:218|508:205,2,100,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
459,119,68497,6,0,P|410:106|363:120,1,100,4|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
317,138,69012,1,0,0:0:0:0:
268,120,69183,2,0,P|220:106|172:119,1,100,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,251,70040,2,0,L|48:257,2,50,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
137,284,70554,6,0,B|186:277|186:277|238:283,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,242,71240,1,8,0:0:0:0:
381,326,71583,2,0,P|428:244|380:160,1,200,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,74,72611,5,2,0:0:0:0:
233,40,72955,2,0,L|134:55,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
77,137,73640,1,2,0:0:0:0:
172,171,73984,2,0,L|271:156,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,242,74668,6,0,P|334:290|322:338,2,100,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
374,157,75697,2,0,L|475:143,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,43,76382,2,0,L|413:50,1,50,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,57,76725,6,0,B|314:64|314:64|266:52,1,100,4|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
166,67,77411,1,8,0:0:0:0:
81,121,77754,2,0,P|68:170|89:214,1,100,4|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
141,297,78439,1,8,0:0:0:0:
235,330,78782,6,0,L|334:335,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
417,278,79468,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,184,79811,2,0,L|459:80,2,100,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
349,198,80839,6,0,L|338:98,1,100,4|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,40,81525,1,8,0:0:0:0:
163,77,81868,2,0,L|152:176,1,100,4|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
70,235,82554,1,8,0:0:0:0:
25,324,82896,6,0,P|72:335|121:321,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
211,277,83582,1,8,0:0:0:0:
305,309,83925,2,0,P|353:298|400:311,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,248,84610,1,8,0:0:0:0:
423,165,84953,6,0,P|330:145|307:53,1,200,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
206,53,85982,2,0,P|208:102|185:145,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
91,165,86667,1,8,0:0:0:0:
141,251,87010,6,0,P|189:262|219:300,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
314,329,87696,1,8,0:0:0:0:
410,302,88039,2,0,L|439:199,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
421,106,88724,1,8,0:0:0:0:
337,51,89067,6,0,B|287:35|287:35|238:41,2,100,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
421,106,90096,1,2,0:0:0:0:
337,161,90438,2,0,B|287:177|287:177|238:171,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
189,164,90953,1,0,0:0:0:0:
139,158,91124,6,0,P|121:204|130:252,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
186,335,91810,1,8,0:0:0:0:
285,322,92153,2,0,P|333:329|383:310,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
442,233,92838,1,8,0:0:0:0:
418,135,93181,6,0,L|426:35,2,100,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
379,167,94038,1,0,0:0:0:0:
335,191,94210,2,0,P|245:206|180:130,1,200,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
207,33,95238,5,2,0:0:0:0:
278,105,95581,1,0,0:0:0:0:
243,198,95924,1,8,0:0:0:0:
144,214,96267,1,2,0:0:0:0:
92,128,96609,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,214,96952,1,8,0:0:0:0:
91,299,97295,6,0,B|145:331|199:300|199:300|237:320|284:306,1,200,4|8,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
365,362,98324,2,0,B|397:308|366:254|366:254|386:216|372:169,1,200,4|8,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
429,88,99352,6,0,B|375:56|321:87|321:87|283:67|236:81,1,200,4|8,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
150,130,100381,2,0,P|101:139|51:127,2,100,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
235,182,101409,6,0,L|227:282,1,100,4|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
145,339,102094,1,8,0:0:0:0:
85,258,102437,2,0,L|36:253,2,50,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
145,339,103123,1,8,0:0:0:0:
234,295,103466,6,0,P|283:291|331:306,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
429,289,104151,2,0,L|432:240,1,50,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
417,190,104494,2,0,L|414:91,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,37,105180,1,8,0:0:0:0:
237,79,105522,6,0,L|187:85,1,50,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
141,63,105866,2,0,L|42:76,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
20,173,106551,2,0,P|10:218|36:263,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
117,322,107237,1,8,0:0:0:0:
206,278,107580,6,0,L|213:178,2,100,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
306,278,108609,2,0,L|299:178,2,100,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
331,320,109465,1,0,0:0:0:0:
369,352,109637,6,0,P|417:365|463:348,1,100,4|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
486,250,110322,1,8,0:0:0:0:
458,153,110665,2,0,L|462:98,2,50,4|0|0,0:1|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
374,208,111351,1,8,0:0:0:0:
294,146,111694,6,0,B|246:132|246:132|210:98,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
115,63,112380,2,0,L|62:68,2,50,8|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
125,162,113066,1,0,0:0:0:0:
76,249,113409,1,8,0:0:0:0:
142,323,113751,6,0,P|189:333|241:322,1,100,4|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
321,265,114437,1,8,0:0:0:0:
334,165,114780,2,0,P|287:175|235:164,1,100,4|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
155,107,115466,1,8,0:0:0:0:
227,38,115808,6,0,P|274:28|326:39,1,100,4|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
411,88,116494,1,8,0:0:0:0:
445,181,116837,2,0,B|437:229|401:255|401:255|444:306|421:358,1,200,4|8,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
326,325,117900,6,0,L|227:334,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,283,118652,1,8,0:0:0:0:
201,204,119028,2,0,L|300:213,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
387,162,119780,1,8,0:0:0:0:
389,61,120157,6,0,P|437:70|474:105,2,100,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
291,81,121285,2,0,P|241:91|196:74,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
110,22,122037,1,8,0:0:0:0:
102,120,122428,6,0,L|2:131,2,100,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,192,123620,6,0,L|263:203,2,100,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
121,217,124654,1,2,0:0:0:0:
136,308,125067,5,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,125289,12,0,127733,0:0:0:0:

Project Grimoire - Brionac ~Lugh Lamhfhata~

Sign In To Proceed

Don't have an account?

Project Grimoire - Brionac ~Lugh Lamhfhata~

[Teichan] wrote:

liaoxingyao wrote:

yf_bmp wrote:

- H i k a r i - wrote:

liaoxingyao wrote:

- H i k a r i - wrote:

TT Mouse wrote:

- H i k a r i - wrote:

Hakurei Yoru wrote:

liaoxingyao wrote:

liaoxingyao wrote:

Hakurei Yoru wrote:

sodarose wrote:

spring wrote:

- D a s z x - wrote:

IamKwaN wrote:

General

Insane

Yoru's Hyper

zjwautumn's Easy

- D a s z x - wrote:

IamKwaN wrote:

General

Insane

Yoru's Hyper

zjwautumn's Easy

- D a s z x - wrote:

IamKwaN wrote:

zjwautumn's Easy

lily-cook wrote:

Wing My Way wrote:

lily-cook wrote:

Streliteela wrote:

Streliteela wrote:

lily-cook wrote:

Streliteela wrote:

New reply