1. 01:21:003 (2) - Missed a clap on the tail? Maybe it was intentional but i'm not so sure.
2. 01:22:351 (2) - Same as above.
3. 01:55:722 (3) - Maybe you would prefer to NC here instead of 01:55:385 (1) as it follows a nice music change and you break into a unique pattern.
4. 02:07:689 (1) - This slider is significantly overlapping the life bar. Try to make some placement adjustments or tweak the structure of the slider's design to avoid the overlap.
5. 02:33:306 (6,2) - Not really important but noticeable enough in gameplay to be worth pointing out. Try to avoid the slightly-touching overlap between these two if you can find an easy way to do so.
6. 03:15:947 (3) - Try this with a soft addition. Sounds really good and keeps consistency with its use 05:57:407 (3).
7. 04:27:492 (1) - I don't feel the need for this spinner's end to be 5% with an audible beat in the music. In fact you could use a soft-finish with 50% vol. for it.
8. 04:37:857 (1,2,3,4,5) - I feel it would be nicer if you moved this rightwards to be somewhat closer to 04:37:351 (2). With how the music gets progressively more ominous and intense as we play through this section, I think it makes sense not to immediately have such a significant jump into this pattern, but rather tone it down so that the jumps get increasingly more strenuous over the course of this part. (This was hard to explain, let me know if I should clarify)
9. 04:42:239 (5) - The cymbal crash in the music that lands on the head of this slider is quite powerful. Consider using a soft addition.
10. 04:58:081 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Hmm although this pattern is alright, I have to say I really would've liked to see some kind of polygon or back-and-forth jump pattern with a gradual spacing increase here to reflect how the drum hits are getting stronger. Perhaps experiment with one! You might like it.
11. 05:35:834 (3) - Same here as mentioned for 03:15:947 (3) -

Trust wrote:

[Extra Stage]

1. 01:21:003 (2) - Missed a clap on the tail? Maybe it was intentional but i'm not so sure. oops, indeed
2. 01:22:351 (2) - Same as above.
3. 01:55:722 (3) - Maybe you would prefer to NC here instead of 01:55:385 (1) as it follows a nice music change and you break into a unique pattern. Mhhh yeah okay
4. 02:07:689 (1) - This slider is significantly overlapping the life bar. Try to make some placement adjustments or tweak the structure of the slider's design to avoid the overlap. QQ okay moved the whole part down a bit
5. 02:33:306 (6,2) - Not really important but noticeable enough in gameplay to be worth pointing out. Try to avoid the slightly-touching overlap between these two if you can find an easy way to do so. oops, fixed
6. 03:15:947 (3) - Try this with a soft addition. Sounds really good and keeps consistency with its use 05:57:407 (3). indeed
7. 04:27:492 (1) - I don't feel the need for this spinner's end to be 5% with an audible beat in the music. In fact you could use a soft-finish with 50% vol. for it. mhhhh, at first I didn't want to use a soft finish here because that would be 3 finishes on a measure, but it makes more sense to me now so eh, changed that *shrug*
8. 04:37:857 (1,2,3,4,5) - I feel it would be nicer if you moved this rightwards to be somewhat closer to 04:37:351 (2). With how the music gets progressively more ominous and intense as we play through this section, I think it makes sense not to immediately have such a significant jump into this pattern, but rather tone it down so that the jumps get increasingly more strenuous over the course of this part. (This was hard to explain, let me know if I should clarify) Makes sense, changed that and the spacing of this part a little so it reflects the song more
9. 04:42:239 (5) - The cymbal crash in the music that lands on the head of this slider is quite powerful. Consider using a soft addition. okay
10. 04:58:081 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Hmm although this pattern is alright, I have to say I really would've liked to see some kind of polygon or back-and-forth jump pattern with a gradual spacing increase here to reflect how the drum hits are getting stronger. Perhaps experiment with one! You might like it. I went with the same circle shape but with increasing spacing :p
11. 05:35:834 (3) - Same here as mentioned for 03:15:947 (3) - changed too

Really not much to say from me, just minor stuff. Had a blast playing this too https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1798222 (that od9 omg) ヽ(*´∇｀)ﾉ

Hope some of this helps! Feel free to fix whatever and let me know~

apaffy wrote:

It's trust; he's one the best modders and has incredible insight so yeah.

感情の魔天楼　～ World's End

感情の魔天楼 ～ World's End

Lanturn wrote:

PS. I know this may sound funny, but the Title should be: (Wider space. directly from http://www.kawachi.zaq.ne.jp/demetori/ )

Lanturn wrote:

Just the unicode name of the song. If you copy it from anywhere and paste it (like the official site or vgmdb) You'll get the wider space.

LunarSakuya wrote:

trust in trust

General
- Unused red lines at the beginning? Yeah I timed the intro because why not \:D/

- Don't think you need "~" in tags lol and what is woof ~I am woof~


Extra Stage
02:02:295 (8) - NC i believe Thought about NCing here but--
02:03:307 (1) - then remove NC and put it on (2) instead --oh, ok
02:09:205 (1) - Finish on head would be fitting wow how did I forget this one wtf
03:03:307 (7,8) - Consider swapping these Mhhhhhh okay, moved sliders around a bit too

SPOILER

(ignore note placement if you want ofc) The 1/2 sliders would follow the hold of the guitar more accurately imo

Not much from me gg
pretty streams =v= \:D/
call me when your body is ready

Amamiya Yuko wrote:

omg didnt notice
congrats