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Azmato

Azmato 2013-12-21T17:34:34+00:00

I love this

Azmato

Azmato 2013-12-21T17:56:10+00:00

[Hard]

00:19:040 (2) - http://puu.sh/5TXBd.jpg I think this direction is nice

01:02:886 (3) - http://puu.sh/5TXKI.jpg how about this?. use (2) slider and make a triangle. 316 196

01:14:656 (1,2,3) - http://puu.sh/5TXTa.jpg how about this rhythm??

01:18:348 (3) - I think this slider should be go right direction. cuz 01:17:194 (6) is going left direction

01:37:963 (5) - NC?? (not strongly suggest)

01:56:194 (7) - x232 y192

02:16:502 what's this green line..? I think 5% vol difference dosen't make big diffrerence.

02:19:040 (3,4,5) - you can make a stream + sliders here. I recommend that

02:42:579 (4) - ctrl G?

02:47:502 (2) - http://puu.sh/5TYmS.jpg

03:19:502 (3,4,5,6) - I think these stream make overnotes... If I were you, I would make long slider.

03:25:963 (2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - why this part have so many hitsounds..? only this part.

03:35:194 you can add a note here

03:40:963 (2,3,4) - I think this distance is too difficult for hard players, so I recommend you to reduce distance or make 2 reverse sliders

that's all.

really nice map

I'm looking forward to see this map be ranked.

oh I recommend you some BGs.

SPOILER

:)
https://yuno.yande.re/sample/c44afd2d8b ... sample.jpg
http://yande.re/sample/b2717b1e175a7ea1 ... sample.jpg
http://yande.re/sample/480bcbf01858255f ... sample.jpg

Tsumetaku

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Tsumetaku 2013-12-21T20:41:07+00:00

Azmato wrote:
[Hard]

00:19:040 (2) - http://puu.sh/5TXBd.jpg I think this direction is nice

01:02:886 (3) - http://puu.sh/5TXKI.jpg how about this?. use (2) slider and make a triangle. 316 196

01:14:656 (1,2,3) - http://puu.sh/5TXTa.jpg how about this rhythm??

01:18:348 (3) - I think this slider should be go right direction. cuz 01:17:194 (6) is going left direction

01:37:963 (5) - NC?? (not strongly suggest)

01:56:194 (7) - x232 y192

02:16:502 what's this green line..? I think 5% vol difference dosen't make big diffrerence.

02:19:040 (3,4,5) - you can make a stream + sliders here. I recommend that

02:42:579 (4) - ctrl G?

02:47:502 (2) - http://puu.sh/5TYmS.jpg

03:19:502 (3,4,5,6) - I think these stream make overnotes... If I were you, I would make long slider.

03:25:963 (2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - why this part have so many hitsounds..? only this part.

03:35:194 you can add a note here

03:40:963 (2,3,4) - I think this distance is too difficult for hard players, so I recommend you to reduce distance or make 2 reverse sliders

that's all.

really nice map I'm looking forward to see this map be ranked.

oh I recommend you some BGs.

SPOILER
:)
https://yuno.yande.re/sample/c44afd2d8b ... sample.jpg
http://yande.re/sample/b2717b1e175a7ea1 ... sample.jpg
http://yande.re/sample/480bcbf01858255f ... sample.jpg

Oh Thanks!!~~><

the second BG is great \:D/
~~such long time didn't find some bg...~~

will fixed after my computer back... maybe tomorrow

whatever thx for your support and star >w<
OSU! needs more Tiara!!!(?

Azmato

Azmato 2013-12-22T01:10:38+00:00

Tsumetaku wrote:
Azmato wrote:
[Hard]

SPOILER
:)
https://yuno.yande.re/sample/c44afd2d8b ... sample.jpg
http://yande.re/sample/b2717b1e175a7ea1 ... sample.jpg
http://yande.re/sample/480bcbf01858255f ... sample.jpg
Oh Thanks!!~~><

the second BG is great \:D/
~~such long time didn't find some bg...~~

will fixed after my computer back... maybe tomorrow

whatever thx for your support and star >w<
OSU! needs more Tiara!!!(?

I really think so!

Azmato

Azmato 2013-12-22T09:59:44+00:00

Tsumetaku!

Do you mind if I make a Insane..?

Tsumetaku

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Tsumetaku 2013-12-22T10:28:06+00:00

wow I purposed to make an Insane...

but BPM is a little bit too low so didnt feel well...

I've add many little jumps into hard so maybe dont need ;3

Sorry~~ ~~(im not too lazy on finding Mods )~~

Azmato

Azmato 2013-12-22T15:03:23+00:00

Tsumetaku wrote:
wow I purposed to make an Insane...

but BPM is a little bit too low so didnt feel well...

I've add many little jumps into hard so maybe dont need ;3

Sorry~~ ~~(im not too lazy on finding Mods )~~

Oh, OK. Thanks

Btw, good luck for rank

Tsumetaku

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Tsumetaku 2013-12-23T10:52:40+00:00

To Azmato~~

All fixed so didnt Quote again ww
Such useful modding~
and used my ~~new mapping skill~~(? remapped some little part :3~

Really BIG thx for your comming>w<
give me some motion to keep working

AruOtta

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AruOtta 2014-01-27T20:08:26+00:00

Hello, as requested =3

Yomi's Normal

Hitsounds
01:18:579 (5,5) - Clap at the reverse of the sliders. It rythm better =3
02:23:194 (5) - ^
02:34:502 (4) - ^

Rythm
03:35:194 (2) - Place it on the previous white line and place a circle stacked on the (3) at 03:35:886 (Because we can think it's on the white line =/)

Placements
02:03:809 (1) - Blanket with (5) I think
02:06:579 (4,5) - If you stack them, it's going to be difficult with hidden x3
03:26:886 (1) - Blanket with (4) ?

Hard

NC
01:35:194 (1) - Delete NC
02:45:348 (4) - ^

Rythm
00:20:194 (3,4) - They must be placed with 1/3 "Beat Snap Divisor" =p

Hitsounds
01:18:809 (6) - Clap on the head and the end of the slider
01:26:194 (4) - ^
02:23:194 (5) - ^ (here only at the end)
02:30:809 (6) - ^
03:07:733 (6) - ^
03:15:117 (5) - ^
03:22:502 (9) - ^
03:29:886 (6) - ^ (i'm a man)
03:33:579 (4) - ^
01:20:771 (4) - Clap on the head (rythm better imo =D)
01:24:463 (4) - ^
01:36:463 (2) - ^
02:21:694 (4) - ^
02:24:463 (2) - ^ (lol)
02:29:079 (4) - ^
03:06:002 (5) - ^
03:09:694 (6) - ^
03:13:386 (4) - ^ (i'm hungry =/)
03:23:540 (3) - ^
03:30:925 (2) - ^
03:32:771 (2) - ^
03:34:617 (2) - ^
(Then I think you understand =3)

Good Luck <3

Tsumetaku

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Tsumetaku 2014-01-27T20:22:23+00:00

Kenterz9 wrote:
Hello, as requested =3

Hard

NC
01:35:194 (1) - Delete NC
02:45:348 (4) - ^

Rythm
00:20:194 (3,4) - They must be placed with 1/3 "Beat Snap Divisor" =p

Hitsounds
01:18:809 (6) - Clap on the head and the end of the slider
01:26:194 (4) - ^
02:23:194 (5) - ^ (here only at the end)
02:30:809 (6) - ^
03:07:733 (6) - ^
03:15:117 (5) - ^
03:22:502 (9) - ^
03:29:886 (6) - ^ (i'm a man)
03:33:579 (4) - ^
01:20:771 (4) - Clap on the head (rythm better imo =D)
01:24:463 (4) - ^
01:36:463 (2) - ^
02:21:694 (4) - ^
02:24:463 (2) - ^ (lol)
02:29:079 (4) - ^
03:06:002 (5) - ^
03:09:694 (6) - ^
03:13:386 (4) - ^ (i'm hungry =/)
03:23:540 (3) - ^
03:30:925 (2) - ^
03:32:771 (2) - ^
03:34:617 (2) - ^
(Then I think you understand =3)

Good Luck <3
wow All Fixed~~
Sorry for didn't reply one by one ;w; It's all really useful and ~~funny~~
Thanks >w<~

Kibbleru

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Kibbleru 2014-01-30T00:26:58+00:00

you should try for bubble

have some starzz~

Tsumetaku

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Tsumetaku 2014-01-30T01:08:47+00:00

@Kibbleru

I'm trying to find BATs ;w;

Thanks for starsss

Kibbleru

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Kibbleru 2014-01-30T01:15:55+00:00

Tsumetaku wrote:
@Kibbleru

I'm trying to find BATs ;w;

Thanks for starsss

One of them has a modding queue and theres an option to bubble.
i think it was shira or something o-o?

Tsumetaku

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Tsumetaku 2014-01-30T01:32:52+00:00

@Kibbleru

nah

Shi-ra's is for mania map
specific mapping mode isn't suitable

keep trying...
XD

Kibbleru

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Kibbleru 2014-01-31T08:21:54+00:00

hmm. dis guy

SapphireGhost[18] is the nicest BAT you will ever meet on osu!, also a great mapper and modder. SapphireGhost demands people to ask questions so ask random stuff whenever you have the chance while SapphireGhost is online on osu! (except it was actually in reference to his somewhat inactive Formspring account). SapphireGhost is a PC Tablet User.
Most people may know him for the fortnightly Ranking chart (previously done by Cyclone and taken his place as in June 2012 until March 2013 [Replaced by DeathxShinigami, 10 months]) or the two approved beatmaps.
Current status: Active.

Tsumetaku

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Tsumetaku 2014-01-31T08:53:27+00:00

@Kibbleru

Oh... SapphireGhost... I dont know
will try then

dont worry about this map,i'm sure i wont give up for this

SapphireGhost

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SapphireGhost 2014-02-18T12:23:19+00:00

?

Subject: G's Modding Queue [Close]

Tsumetaku wrote:
小車車...恩...

https://osu.ppy.sh/s/133163

SapphireGhost~~

thx.w.

If I'm really your favourite player then I should definitely mod this! It's late and I'm a bit tired right now, so I'll have to look over things again later.

General
- I think the title should be capitalised as SEAHOLLY, looking at the original upload.
- Some inconsistent kiai times that may be worth fixing if they are unintentional.

Hard
- At least OD7 is preferable here to vary the scoreboards a bit more.
02:37:271 (1) - Start 1/2 tick earlier to fit the vocals.
03:15:809 to 03:19:502 - This slowdown is difficult to read without Tick Rate 2. Consider using 0.8x Slider Velocity instead of 0.5x.
03:18:579 (3,1,2) - This may be easier to read if you unstack (2) from (1).

Yomi's Normal
00:27:809 (1,2,3) - The curves on these sliders could be smoother. You could make it into an elbow shape, or maybe something like this.
02:51:809 (1,1,2) - Same as above. See here, here, and here.

As a whole, I like the song (I even considered mapping it too) but I think both difficulties could benefit from being cleaned up a little, and trying to add more creative things that fit the song. Let me know if you want help when it's less late for me and either way contact me somehow for a re-check.

Last edited by SapphireGhost 2014-02-23T05:48:56+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Tsumetaku

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Tsumetaku 2014-02-18T14:12:18+00:00

SapphireGhost wrote:
?
Subject: G's Modding Queue [Close]

Tsumetaku wrote:
小車車...恩...

https://osu.ppy.sh/s/133163

SapphireGhost~~

thx.w.
If I'm really your favourite player then I should definitely mod this! It's late and I'm a bit tired right now, so I'll have to look over things again later.
XD yeah when i saw the question,im sure you're my answer! cuz i watched your replays learned many things since i joined Osu! and feel really admire about your playing skill,especially you're in #100 now.>< btw about looking over,it's ok~ take a good rest ;3~ (?

General
- I think the title should be capitalised as SEAHOLLY, looking at the original upload. :O fixed~ It's my typing error... and didn't find it for long time Orz
- Some inconsistent kiai times that may be worth fixing if they are unintentional. Ok~ think a while and follow yomi's setting.

Hard
- At least OD7 is preferable here to vary the scoreboards a bit more. Ohoh~ Changed.
02:37:271 (1) - Start 1/2 tick earlier to fit the vocals. fixed~
03:18:579 (3,1,2) - This may be easier to read if you unstack (2) from (1). hmm... unstacked now

As a whole, I like the song (I even considered mapping it too) but I think both difficulties could benefit from being cleaned up a little, and trying to add more creative things that fit the song. Let me know if you want help when it's less late for me and either way contact me somehow for a re-check.
:D I really love Tiara's song composing, and planning to make a project for herwww.
After thinking of your advise,added something new creative part from following backgrond~ also fixed some of the arrangement to be more clean~ I'll contact you tomorrow or later for recheck~ glad for any help i can get><
Very HugeThanks ~ oωo

EDIT: Fixed All for yomi san~

SapphireGhost wrote:
Hard
03:15:809 to 03:19:502 - This slowdown is difficult to read without Tick Rate 2. Consider using 0.8x Slider Velocity instead of 0.5x. OK~ Changed to .75x and replaced the sliders~

captin1

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captin1 2014-03-02T06:41:00+00:00

nice :3 need more tiara in osu

~~wish she composed more songs like balloon but oh well~~

SapphireGhost

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SapphireGhost 2014-03-02T06:42:57+00:00

Okay, let's look at this again. This will be a mod with a lot of big ideas that use this map to apply to mapping in general. It might look overwhelming but I hope I can provide lots of good information on how to map well.

Hard Here's a short example I made of how I would map this, and maybe you can get some inspiration/ideas of what I am looking for: example thing

- As a piece of general advice, I would use less patterns that overlap each other. It helps to make the map look cleaner and more readable, and makes things easier on Hidden players like me.

- I think the kiai sections could benefit from less triplets (three 1/4s in a row) to keep the vocals free and more consistent hitsounding to tie the map together.

01:14:656 (1,2) - I would recommend not putting a new combo under another note. It looks sort of odd from a visual standpoint, but also because I think stacks should only be used rarely when there's a good musical reason to do so. A stack stops the flow of the map, and spacing keeps it going.

01:15:348 (1,2) - I would change (1) to use a soft whistle sound, and (2) to use a normal hit sound, same for each two notes before a kiai time. I find if you put soft notes right before the beginning of a section using the normal sounds for notes, it helps increase the impact.

01:15:809 (3) - Add a new combo for the start of the kiai time.

01:20:425 (3,4) - For notes that are spaced like this, the spacing is high enough that I would just avoid the overlap entirely (see the example thing), as it looks neater. The other thing about this type of pattern is that it requires to player to start the second slider on a blue tick, which can be awkward. For some advice, try listening to what your map sounds like when only hearing circles and the starts of sliders, as this is what the player will be tapping to.

01:21:348 (1,2,3) - This is tough pattern to make look nice, because you want the distance of each blanket to be roughly the same. Here's how I would go about it. Notice how the notes fit together snugly and hold each other tight at night and whisper "I love you" in each other's ears and slowly take their partners closer and kiss them as if they'll never see each other again and fall asleep so they can be together in their dreams. That's how a good blanket should make you feel.

02:44:425 to 02:48:117 - This is a big point in the song, and I think you've got the right idea with how it should be mapped. However, I would go further and make a star pattern (see the example thing again). This is an example of where I would use stacks, because the flow in this section starts and stops. I also used the Rotate (Ctrl+Shift+R) function to make it look neater.

There is likely more I could address in this post, but this is currently all I had the energy for. Let me know if you still want to keep using this map to find opportunities to improve or just put on some finishing touches to get it bubbled and rankable and apply these ideas to a different map. I do like to help as long as the mapper finds my advice useful, so just let me know.

Tsumetaku

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Tsumetaku 2014-03-02T16:30:08+00:00

Thanks captin san and Sapphire san >w<
~~planning remap the kiai part after suggestion... reply later really useful!!~~

dont have much time these days ><" when i finish remapping ill tell thou... sorry ;w;

Last edited by Tsumetaku 2014-03-11T14:46:40+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

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Kibbleru 2014-03-10T21:46:16+00:00

this isnt bubbled yet @_@?

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Xinchii

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Xinchii 2014-04-03T17:38:40+00:00

HI Testplay and mod(?)

[Hard]

01:34:271(1,2,3,4,5,6) - 感覺可以做標準星形
02:05:656(6) - 跟(5)blanket?
02:12:117(3) - 跟(2)blanket? 像前面的(5,1)跟後面的(4,5)一樣感覺會比較整齊

testplay

感覺我貼惹一個史上最水mod

Tsumetaku

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Tsumetaku 2014-04-03T17:49:35+00:00

討論出來版鼠對我們不可行(?

All fixed thanks >wo~

SPOILER

leon1341414 wrote:
HI Testplay and mod(?)

[Hard]
01:34:271(1,2,3,4,5,6) - 感覺可以做標準星形哇我都沒注意到這星型跑掉了w
02:05:656(6) - 跟(5)blanket? 豪
02:12:117(3) - 跟(2)blanket? 像前面的(5,1)跟後面的(4,5)一樣感覺會比較整齊真的耶)o(
testplay

感覺我貼惹一個史上最水mod
不不沒U人能比窩更水

Caffe_[Latte]

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Caffe_[Latte] 2014-04-21T12:27:29+00:00

[Hard]

00:18:809 (2) - spacing

00:29:656 (3) - ^

00:53:656 (4) - NC

00:54:579 (1) - REMOVE NC

01:34:271 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I think these dosen't make perfect star.. ( like this 02:44:425 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) )

02:14:886 (1,1) - smillar to 01:10:271 (1,1) ?

02:32:886 (4) - 216 l 288

02:34:271 (2) - ^ , maybe move 02:34:502 (3,4,5) samely

03:37:733 (4) - 124 l 112

I'm really pleasured that you used BG which I suggested

Well hope this map to be ranked soon!

Tsumetaku

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Tsumetaku 2014-04-21T13:10:02+00:00

Caffe_[Latte] wrote:
[Hard]

00:18:809 (2) - spacing

00:29:656 (3) - ^

00:53:656 (4) - NC

00:54:579 (1) - REMOVE NC

01:34:271 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I think these dosen't make perfect star.. ( like this 02:44:425 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) )

02:14:886 (1,1) - smillar to 01:10:271 (1,1) ?

02:32:886 (4) - 216 l 288

02:34:271 (2) - ^ , maybe move 02:34:502 (3,4,5) samely

03:37:733 (4) - 124 l 112

I'm really pleasured that you used BG which I suggested

Well hope this map to be ranked soon!
All Fixed >w<//
The BG you suggest is really wonderful >.< very like it!
also thanks for modding ;w;
hope BATs will see this map...

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Kibbleru 2014-04-23T03:26:22+00:00

ill take a quick look i guess

[Hard]

00:25:963 (1,2,3) - i think you should definitely use the rotate tool for this pattern instead of creating new sliders :I (ctrl shift r)
00:27:809 (1,2) - i think this rhythm sounds better. or something similar, idk. just make sure (2)'s head is at 00:28:502 - to express that strong sound there.
SPOILER
00:39:809 (2) - why a brezier curve >_<? they're so outdated :3
01:17:194 (6) - curve on the end seems to help it transition better into the following curved sliders
SPOILER
01:52:733 (1) - curving it the other way seems to look better for me but i think this is a bit more of a personal view
SPOILER
01:58:271 (5,6) - did u copy paste the sliders? if not then you should
03:15:809 (1) - ctrl g i think gives better flow :3
03:40:733 (1,2,3,4,5) - this looks a bit neater imo, since it stacks and also doesn't seem to overlap with the previous slider
SPOILER
03:38:886 (4) - NC for consistency

Thats all GL!

Tsumetaku

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Tsumetaku 2014-04-23T12:39:59+00:00

Kibbleru wrote:
ill take a quick look i guess

[Hard]
00:25:963 (1,2,3) - i think you should definitely use the rotate tool for this pattern instead of creating new sliders :I (ctrl shift r)
00:27:809 (1,2) - i think this rhythm sounds better. or something similar, idk. just make sure (2)'s head is at 00:28:502 - to express that strong sound there.
SPOILER
00:39:809 (2) - why a brezier curve >_<? they're so outdated :3
01:17:194 (6) - curve on the end seems to help it transition better into the following curved sliders
SPOILER
01:52:733 (1) - curving it the other way seems to look better for me but i think this is a bit more of a personal view
SPOILER
01:58:271 (5,6) - did u copy paste the sliders? if not then you should
03:15:809 (1) - ctrl g i think gives better flow :3
03:40:733 (1,2,3,4,5) - this looks a bit neater imo, since it stacks and also doesn't seem to overlap with the previous slider
SPOILER
03:38:886 (4) - NC for consistency
Thats all GL!

wa ;w; Thankyuuuuuuuuu for mods
All Fixed... you're really a good modder though

Why I always has no time now :/ Hate school

Kibbleru

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Kibbleru 2014-05-26T21:28:20+00:00

yay this is on jonathan's modding list >w<

Tsumetaku

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Tsumetaku 2014-05-27T11:45:03+00:00

X3 I found him accepting old maps www

Hope he'll come soon XD!!

EDIT:500th post X333

jonathanlfj

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jonathanlfj 2014-06-11T03:40:58+00:00

soon(tm)

[General]
try offset + 5ms, feels more accurate to play on my end. Mod is done with your original timing

[Yomi's Normal]
00:27:809 (1,3) - the extra node after the red one makes these look really awkward, was that intentional?
00:54:348 - there is both a strong vocal and piano here, so maybe add a note
01:09:809 (2) - maybe a whistle here
01:13:502 - end the spinner here, since thats where the violin(?) comes to a halt
01:33:809 (5,6,1) - i would arrange it like this so it flows better afterwards:

SPOILER

03:02:425 - i would remove this break here, its really short and not very necessary since it just transitions immediately
03:13:963 (4) - clap on end
03:37:502 (4,1) - blanket this a bit better, also this rhythm might throw some players off, might want to swap 03:37:963 (1,2) for a repeat slider

[Hard]
00:24:117 (3) - NC here and remove NC at 00:25:963 (1)
00:31:502 (1) - whistle or finish on start?
00:47:194 (1) - remove NC, also maybe a whistle on the start
01:12:233 (1) - end this spinner at 01:13:502 to capture the halting music
01:34:271 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - when i first played this the spacing is not very obvious hinting at 3/4, so i would make the spacing even bigger here (try 1.7x or 1.8x)
01:52:733 (1) - add finish or whistle to the start?
02:01:963 (4) - add a whistle for the piano sound
02:37:040 (1) - i would end this at 02:38:656, it follows the piano better also making the gap consistent like between 02:39:348 (1,2) and 02:40:271 (3,4)
02:47:194 (1,2) - if you just read this by the relative spacing its really easy to mistaken them as 1/4 spacing, try moving 02:47:502 (2) - more down
03:37:963 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - if you enlarged spacing at 01:34:271 (1,2,3,1,2,3) do it to this as well. Also you might want a NC on 03:38:886 (4)

Pretty nice set, let me know after

Tsumetaku

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Tsumetaku 2014-06-11T15:14:42+00:00

jonathanlfj wrote:
soon(tm) \：D/(ry

[General]
try offset + 5ms, feels more accurate to play on my end. Mod is done with your original timing hmm,fixed~

[Hard]
00:24:117 (3) - NC here and remove NC at 00:25:963 (1)
00:31:502 (1) - whistle or finish on start?
00:47:194 (1) - remove NC, also maybe a whistle on the start
01:12:233 (1) - end this spinner at 01:13:502 to capture the halting music
01:34:271 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - when i first played this the spacing is not very obvious hinting at 3/4, so i would make the spacing even bigger here (try 1.7x or 1.8x)
01:52:733 (1) - add finish or whistle to the start?
02:01:963 (4) - add a whistle for the piano sound
02:37:040 (1) - i would end this at 02:38:656, it follows the piano better also making the gap consistent like between 02:39:348 (1,2) and 02:40:271 (3,4)
02:47:194 (1,2) - if you just read this by the relative spacing its really easy to mistaken them as 1/4 spacing, try moving 02:47:502 (2) - more down
03:37:963 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - if you enlarged spacing at 01:34:271 (1,2,3,1,2,3) do it to this as well. Also you might want a NC on 03:38:886 (4)

Pretty nice set, let me know after
All Fixed in Hard www including the spacing and NC,they effects alot XD Also thakyuu for coming!!!
Will ask yomi san for fixing

Kinomi

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Kinomi 2014-06-11T16:34:11+00:00

jonathanlfj wrote:
soon(tm)

[Yomi's Normal]
00:27:809 (1,3) - the extra node after the red one makes these look really awkward, was that intentional? yea, looks fine imo.
00:54:348 - there is both a strong vocal and piano here, so maybe add a note maybe a bit hard and ugly, so i didn't map that vocal
01:09:809 (2) - maybe a whistle here ok
01:13:502 - end the spinner here, since thats where the violin(?) comes to a halt sure
01:33:809 (5,6,1) - i would arrange it like this so it flows better afterwards:
SPOILER
ok
03:02:425 - i would remove this break here, its really short and not very necessary since it just transitions immediately 我觉得这样比较带感
03:13:963 (4) - clap on end ok
03:37:502 (4,1) - blanket this a bit better, also this rhythm might throw some players off, might want to swap 03:37:963 (1,2) for a repeat slider
changed

http://puu.sh/9oZyP/843ff63e5e.osu

Kibbleru

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Kibbleru 2014-06-11T23:15:23+00:00

ITS HAPPENING

jonathanlfj

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jonathanlfj 2014-06-12T00:39:21+00:00

i guess we shouldn't wait any longer

Bubbled~

Tsumetaku

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Tsumetaku 2014-06-12T03:56:43+00:00

wao wuo wow
I didn't noticed it already been 1 year old ;w; so many memories...

thankyuuuuuuuuuuuu lfj!!!! ;www;

~~不過還真的好剛好XD 把它放在words好了www~~

Lust

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Lust 2014-06-12T04:01:23+00:00

ayyyyy finally bubbled
turn up

Kibbleru

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Kibbleru 2014-06-12T23:08:49+00:00

finaly gz xD

Xinchii

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Xinchii 2014-06-17T11:45:46+00:00

wacao

還真的好久惹.......

Tsumetaku

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Tsumetaku 2014-06-17T17:14:21+00:00

Really so long...;w; thankyuu guys~

~~豪九不見leon桑www~~

Kurai

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Kurai 2014-06-26T17:27:01+00:00

[Normal]

00:35:199 (1,2,3) - This pattern doesn't really fit the song imo. There is no piano note, so I would rather you followed the vocals here.
Like http://puu.sh/9LaJi/c20b8ccc81.jpg or http://puu.sh/9LaKM/dfb9ea2542.jpg

[Hard]

00:16:738 (1) - I have the feeling this slidr could be much more better, try to make it a bit more curvy and try to make the curve smoother? Example:
SPOILER

That's all I guess owo

Tsumetaku

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Tsumetaku 2014-06-26T22:53:59+00:00

Ohhh thankyuuuu Kurai san ;w;~~
Will inform yomi san and fix tomorrow after exam

EDIT: Fixed that issue by curing more X3

Last edited by Tsumetaku 2014-06-27T16:42:08+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Kinomi

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Kinomi 2014-06-27T16:03:25+00:00

change that pattern

SPOILER

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352,192,199045,5,8,0:0:0:0:
392,236,199276,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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280,248,203199,6,0,L|368:352,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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256,272,217507,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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