T.M. Revolution x Mizuki Nana - Preserved Roses -Anime Versi · forum

Atrue

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Atrue 2014-01-21T14:45:44+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2015年1月9日 at 23:41:17

Artist: T.M. Revolution x Mizuki Nana
Title: Preserved Roses -Anime Version-
Source: Kakumeiki Valvrave
Tags: 革命機ヴァルヴレイヴ VVV the Liberator Epic Records Japan Eruerufu Karurusutain Tokishima Haruto Sashinami Shoko Rukino Saki Sunrise Mei 615915887 YoshinoSakura lkx_Shore ITer IamKwaN Priti
BPM: 167
Filesize: 5335kb
Play Time: 01:29
Difficulties Available:

Insane (4.63 stars, 364 notes)
KwaN's Normal (1.92 stars, 123 notes)
Mei's Insane (4.58 stars, 358 notes)
Priti's Advanced (2.59 stars, 179 notes)
Shore's Hard (3.59 stars, 279 notes)
YoshinoSakura's Easy (1.42 stars, 89 notes)

Download: T.M. Revolution x Mizuki Nana - Preserved Roses -Anime Version-
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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3rd
Insane by me Done
Mei's Insane by Mei Done
Hard by lkx_Shore Done
YoshinoSakura‘s Easy by YoshinoSakura Done
Normal by IamKwaN Done
Advanced by Priti Done
Storyboard by ITer Done

Thanks people involved in the mapset!

People helped me fixing the SB: Fycho, Xinely, Setsurei

Please redownload after 1/5/2015

Last edited by Atrue 2015-01-09T15:42:25+00:00, edited 26 times in total.

lkx_Shore

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lkx_Shore 2014-03-23T06:50:45+00:00

好消息，hard我做了一半结果顺手更新了

Atrue

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Atrue 2014-03-23T06:52:51+00:00

lkx_Shore wrote:
好消息，hard我做了一半结果顺手更新了

吉安帕又能随手ss啦

EmingK

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EmingK 2014-03-23T09:20:13+00:00

lkx_Shore wrote:
好消息，hard我做了一半结果顺手更新了

hhhuccu

Anya-Alstreim

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Anya-Alstreim 2014-03-24T05:25:12+00:00

晒上我ACC最高的一个成绩。感觉挺难的，不过玩的很爽。

Atrue

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Atrue 2014-03-26T02:24:12+00:00

Deliay's mod and my reply:
00:08:972 (4) - add note here 试过，不好加，跟的也不是背景音
00:18:313 (1) - add note here 这里没跟vocal 我觉得加了note摆法就不能这么摆了
00:19:032 (1) - add note here 同上
00:22:265 (1) - (22265,-100,4,1,1,70,0,1) kiai here 喷泉短时间内出现两次会有点闪
00:48:852 (1) - add note here 关键是加了不知道放在哪里，上边梗摆的是对称了，多这个note就搅局啊
00:58:194 (1) - add spin here spinner只有一拍太短而且这样没有原曲中的留白感
01:09:511 (7) - note->slider e.g 减小了激烈程度额…
01:16:158 (1,2) - slider->stream 不要拆我梗啊……01:16:158 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) -
thx for deliay's modding！

Fycho

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Fycho 2014-04-10T09:34:36+00:00

SPOILER

2014-04-10 17:05 Fycho: ACTION is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/358411 T.M. Revolution x Mizuki Nana - Preserved Roses]
2014-04-10 17:06 Atrue: 怎么啥事都是我落后一小段时间啊
2014-04-10 17:06 Fycho: 坑爹
2014-04-10 17:07 Fycho: 3/4滑条
2014-04-10 17:07 Atrue: 不觉得
2014-04-10 17:07 Atrue: 真事~
2014-04-10 17:07 Fycho: 01:00:708 (5,1) - 
2014-04-10 17:07 Fycho: 间距问题=。=
2014-04-10 17:08 Fycho: 你自己看看这是1/2?我怎么都会读成1/4
2014-04-10 17:08 Fycho: 正常
2014-04-10 17:08 Fycho: 01:00:170 (3,4,5) - 
2014-04-10 17:08 Fycho: 1/2的间距和1/4差出那么远
2014-04-10 17:08 Fycho: KIAI有点滑条难产的感觉
2014-04-10 17:08 Fycho: 可能滑条速度偏慢
2014-04-10 17:08 Atrue: 噗
2014-04-10 17:08 Atrue: 对
2014-04-10 17:08 Fycho: 不过这张排列比fripside的好多了
2014-04-10 17:08 Atrue: 偏慢
2014-04-10 17:08 Fycho: 01:03:403 (4,5) - 间距问题太多
2014-04-10 17:09 Atrue: 啊,总算有正面评价了啊
2014-04-10 17:09 Fycho: 像你这种1/2间距，强烈建议1/4别分开放
2014-04-10 17:09 Atrue: 好
2014-04-10 17:09 Fycho: 要么你把1/2弄大 SV弄高
2014-04-10 17:09 Atrue: 也就是能这么改了
2014-04-10 17:09 Fycho: 00:09:870 (3,4) - 这个换成1/1
2014-04-10 17:09 Atrue: 改sv不太容易啊..毕竟很多地方是算好了滑条长度的
2014-04-10 17:10 Fycho: 00:28:014 (1) - 
2014-04-10 17:10 Fycho: 这个我第一次以为是1/1
2014-04-10 17:10 Atrue: 行
2014-04-10 17:10 Fycho: 难读图=。=
2014-04-10 17:10 Fycho: 额 
2014-04-10 17:10 Fycho: 我看了下 
2014-04-10 17:10 Fycho: 尼玛 这个加速1.5干嘛
2014-04-10 17:11 Fycho: 严重建议 1.0 不要加速，serious
2014-04-10 17:11 Atrue: 啊
2014-04-10 17:11 Fycho: 00:28:373 (2,4) - 这里的1/2间距小点
2014-04-10 17:11 Fycho: 和KIAI形成些对比
2014-04-10 17:11 Fycho: 这样你主歌部分打起来感觉快 所以Kiai才觉得难产
2014-04-10 17:12 Atrue: 好
2014-04-10 17:12 Atrue: 我试试弄一下
2014-04-10 17:12 Atrue: 对你说得对
2014-04-10 17:12 Atrue: 不过也是不怎么好改
2014-04-10 17:12 Fycho: 01:06:816 (1,2) - 3/4滥用
2014-04-10 17:12 Fycho: abuse
2014-04-10 17:13 Atrue: 这个我不赞成啊
2014-04-10 17:13 Fycho: 01:04:301 (2,3,4) - 这里间距大 又有点失衡
2014-04-10 17:13 Fycho: 01:05:289 (6,1) - 哦艹 你确定？
2014-04-10 17:13 Atrue: 不能因为不喜欢3/4就不用，我又不是用错了，我有自己的选择啊
2014-04-10 17:13 Fycho: 你确定你要1/4跳？
2014-04-10 17:13 Atrue: 啊后边这个是我作死
2014-04-10 17:14 Fycho: 跳从圈到滑条比滑条到圈难的多
2014-04-10 17:14 Atrue: 对你说的对
2014-04-10 17:14 Fycho: cryo最近才敢放这个
2014-04-10 17:14 Fycho: 你作死
2014-04-10 17:14 Atrue: 这两个地方是的
2014-04-10 17:14 Fycho: 01:05:379 (1,2,3) - 这尼玛
2014-04-10 17:14 Fycho: 看起来都等距了啊
2014-04-10 17:14 Fycho: 谁能读出1/2和1/4
2014-04-10 17:14 Fycho: 01:05:918 (3,4) - 艹
2014-04-10 17:15 Fycho: 自己看看吧
2014-04-10 17:15 Fycho: 01:05:379 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这五个 “必须”改
2014-04-10 17:15 Atrue: 还行。。吧，其实我感觉我自己能打过去
2014-04-10 17:15 Atrue: 23333
2014-04-10 17:15 Fycho: 自己能打 自己能读 因为是你做的图
2014-04-10 17:15 Atrue: 对这个地方有问题
2014-04-10 17:15 Fycho: 但是不是谁1PC都能打
2014-04-10 17:15 Fycho: 我刚才也没miss 不过就是坑
2014-04-10 17:15 Atrue: 是的
2014-04-10 17:16 Fycho: 01:06:457 (5,1) - 你这样很容易把这种顺flow滑条跳读成1/4的
2014-04-10 17:16 Fycho: 01:07:714 (4,5,6,7,8) - 圈跳比滑条跳都大-0.0
2014-04-10 17:16 Atrue: 好我改1/4不搞间距了
2014-04-10 17:16 Fycho: 01:10:768 (1) - NC去掉
2014-04-10 17:17 Fycho: 01:09:870 (8) - 这个可以加个NC
2014-04-10 17:17 Atrue: 不过这里我觉得圈跳大点问题不大啊。。
2014-04-10 17:17 Atrue: 对
2014-04-10 17:17 Fycho: 为了难度平衡 一般是滑条跳比圈跳大
2014-04-10 17:17 Fycho: 对整个diff来讲
2014-04-10 17:18 Atrue: 嗯，我下回注意，这次圈跳已经挺大了
2014-04-10 17:18 Atrue: 嗯
2014-04-10 17:18 Fycho: 01:16:158 (1) - 
2014-04-10 17:18 Fycho: 去NC
2014-04-10 17:19 Atrue: 汗
2014-04-10 17:19 Fycho: 01:22:265 (3) - NC?
2014-04-10 17:19 Atrue: 这里去nc啊。。。
2014-04-10 17:19 Atrue: 这两个nc我觉得我自己的也有道理。。。
2014-04-10 17:20 Fycho: NC SPAM
2014-04-10 17:20 Atrue: 有点
2014-04-10 17:20 Atrue: 不到spam的地步啊
2014-04-10 17:20 Fycho: 00:00:709 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - 整个开头啊
2014-04-10 17:20 Fycho: 有点平淡啊
2014-04-10 17:20 Fycho: 跳要有间距大小之分啊
2014-04-10 17:20 Fycho: 00:04:661 (1,2) - 我觉的这两个可以大点
2014-04-10 17:21 Atrue: 跳太大
2014-04-10 17:21 Fycho: 00:00:709 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这些啥的 是正常flow，可以小点
2014-04-10 17:21 Fycho: 这里我个人觉得不合曲
2014-04-10 17:21 Fycho: 00:20:649 - add circle
2014-04-10 17:21 Atrue: 再大就逆天了
2014-04-10 17:21 Atrue: 我不怎么敢放
2014-04-10 17:21 Atrue: 前边已经挺大的了。。。
2014-04-10 17:22 Atrue: 要的是那四个单点，加note往哪儿放？四个单点感觉美丽
2014-04-10 17:23 Fycho: 00:28:014 (1) - 
2014-04-10 17:23 Fycho: 这个不要加速
2014-04-10 17:23 Fycho: 这没什么特别音，就一个finish而已
2014-04-10 17:23 Atrue: 嗯说过惹
2014-04-10 17:24 Atrue: 嗯
2014-04-10 17:24 Atrue: 我看看，我得想想
2014-04-10 17:24 Atrue: 我觉得加速挺爽的
2014-04-10 17:24 Fycho: 00:39:152 (12) - 这个我觉得可以换成3/4滑条然后加速
2014-04-10 17:24 Fycho: 一般有谁在finish音加速么=。=而且后面还是偏慢速读成段落
2014-04-10 17:24 Fycho: 玩起来 坑爹
2014-04-10 17:25 Fycho: 00:47:595 (4,5,6) - 额 你也开始散点乱跳
2014-04-10 17:25 Atrue: 这里加速我就不赞成丽
2014-04-10 17:25 Atrue: 不是玩你的图玩的么
2014-04-10 17:25 Atrue: 再说我这也是基础三角
2014-04-10 17:26 Fycho: 为什么 因为有一个嚓的音
2014-04-10 17:26 Fycho: 我的话我会在这里加速
2014-04-10 17:27 Fycho: 00:47:774 - 
2014-04-10 17:27 Fycho: 这也是
2014-04-10 17:27 Fycho: 嚓的音
2014-04-10 17:27 Atrue: hmmm。。这里我还是不怎么支持加速。。。真的，整个pattern全得改而且效果也未必那样好
2014-04-10 17:27 Fycho: 额 我还没在意
2014-04-10 17:27 Fycho: 你怎么把所有的clap都加成那个嚓音了
2014-04-10 17:27 Fycho: 。。。。
2014-04-10 17:27 Fycho: 偷换军鼓啊
2014-04-10 17:28 Fycho: 随你
2014-04-10 17:28 Atrue: 你听听原曲
2014-04-10 17:28 Fycho: 你的图
2014-04-10 17:28 Atrue: 我一开始觉得不一样
2014-04-10 17:28 Fycho: 1. Offset: 709ms	BPM: 167.00
2014-04-10 17:28 Fycho: 这里比较强的
2014-04-10 17:28 Atrue: 应该就是那个音
2014-04-10 17:28 Fycho: 复制错
2014-04-10 17:29 Atrue: 2333
2014-04-10 17:29 Atrue: 对

Atrue

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Topic Starter

Atrue 2014-04-10T11:01:28+00:00

Fycho wrote:

:oops:

SPOILER

2014-04-10 17:05 Fycho: ACTION is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/358411 T.M. Revolution x Mizuki Nana - Preserved Roses]
2014-04-10 17:06 Atrue: 怎么啥事都是我落后一小段时间啊
2014-04-10 17:06 Fycho: 坑爹
2014-04-10 17:07 Fycho: 3/4滑条
2014-04-10 17:07 Atrue: 不觉得
2014-04-10 17:07 Atrue: 真事~
2014-04-10 17:07 Fycho: 01:00:708 (5,1) - 
2014-04-10 17:07 Fycho: 间距问题=。=
2014-04-10 17:08 Fycho: 你自己看看这是1/2?我怎么都会读成1/4
2014-04-10 17:08 Fycho: 正常
2014-04-10 17:08 Fycho: 01:00:170 (3,4,5) - 
2014-04-10 17:08 Fycho: 1/2的间距和1/4差出那么远
2014-04-10 17:08 Fycho: KIAI有点滑条难产的感觉
2014-04-10 17:08 Fycho: 可能滑条速度偏慢
2014-04-10 17:08 Atrue: 噗
2014-04-10 17:08 Atrue: 对
2014-04-10 17:08 Fycho: 不过这张排列比fripside的好多了
2014-04-10 17:08 Atrue: 偏慢
2014-04-10 17:08 Fycho: 01:03:403 (4,5) - 间距问题太多
2014-04-10 17:09 Atrue: 啊,总算有正面评价了啊
2014-04-10 17:09 Fycho: 像你这种1/2间距，强烈建议1/4别分开放
2014-04-10 17:09 Atrue: 好
2014-04-10 17:09 Fycho: 要么你把1/2弄大 SV弄高
2014-04-10 17:09 Atrue: 也就是能这么改了
2014-04-10 17:09 Fycho: 00:09:870 (3,4) - 这个换成1/1
2014-04-10 17:09 Atrue: 改sv不太容易啊..毕竟很多地方是算好了滑条长度的
2014-04-10 17:10 Fycho: 00:28:014 (1) - 
2014-04-10 17:10 Fycho: 这个我第一次以为是1/1
2014-04-10 17:10 Atrue: 行
2014-04-10 17:10 Fycho: 难读图=。=
2014-04-10 17:10 Fycho: 额 
2014-04-10 17:10 Fycho: 我看了下 
2014-04-10 17:10 Fycho: 尼玛 这个加速1.5干嘛
2014-04-10 17:11 Fycho: 严重建议 1.0 不要加速，serious
2014-04-10 17:11 Atrue: 啊
2014-04-10 17:11 Fycho: 00:28:373 (2,4) - 这里的1/2间距小点
2014-04-10 17:11 Fycho: 和KIAI形成些对比
2014-04-10 17:11 Fycho: 这样你主歌部分打起来感觉快 所以Kiai才觉得难产
2014-04-10 17:12 Atrue: 好
2014-04-10 17:12 Atrue: 我试试弄一下
2014-04-10 17:12 Atrue: 对你说得对
2014-04-10 17:12 Atrue: 不过也是不怎么好改
2014-04-10 17:12 Fycho: 01:06:816 (1,2) - 3/4滥用
2014-04-10 17:12 Fycho: abuse
2014-04-10 17:13 Atrue: 这个我不赞成啊
2014-04-10 17:13 Fycho: 01:04:301 (2,3,4) - 这里间距大 又有点失衡
2014-04-10 17:13 Fycho: 01:05:289 (6,1) - 哦艹 你确定？
2014-04-10 17:13 Atrue: 不能因为不喜欢3/4就不用，我又不是用错了，我有自己的选择啊
2014-04-10 17:13 Fycho: 你确定你要1/4跳？
2014-04-10 17:13 Atrue: 啊后边这个是我作死
2014-04-10 17:14 Fycho: 跳从圈到滑条比滑条到圈难的多
2014-04-10 17:14 Atrue: 对你说的对
2014-04-10 17:14 Fycho: cryo最近才敢放这个
2014-04-10 17:14 Fycho: 你作死
2014-04-10 17:14 Atrue: 这两个地方是的
2014-04-10 17:14 Fycho: 01:05:379 (1,2,3) - 这尼玛
2014-04-10 17:14 Fycho: 看起来都等距了啊
2014-04-10 17:14 Fycho: 谁能读出1/2和1/4
2014-04-10 17:14 Fycho: 01:05:918 (3,4) - 艹
2014-04-10 17:15 Fycho: 自己看看吧
2014-04-10 17:15 Fycho: 01:05:379 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这五个 “必须”改
2014-04-10 17:15 Atrue: 还行。。吧，其实我感觉我自己能打过去
2014-04-10 17:15 Atrue: 23333
2014-04-10 17:15 Fycho: 自己能打 自己能读 因为是你做的图
2014-04-10 17:15 Atrue: 对这个地方有问题
2014-04-10 17:15 Fycho: 但是不是谁1PC都能打
2014-04-10 17:15 Fycho: 我刚才也没miss 不过就是坑
2014-04-10 17:15 Atrue: 是的
2014-04-10 17:16 Fycho: 01:06:457 (5,1) - 你这样很容易把这种顺flow滑条跳读成1/4的
2014-04-10 17:16 Fycho: 01:07:714 (4,5,6,7,8) - 圈跳比滑条跳都大-0.0
2014-04-10 17:16 Atrue: 好我改1/4不搞间距了
2014-04-10 17:16 Fycho: 01:10:768 (1) - NC去掉
2014-04-10 17:17 Fycho: 01:09:870 (8) - 这个可以加个NC
2014-04-10 17:17 Atrue: 不过这里我觉得圈跳大点问题不大啊。。
2014-04-10 17:17 Atrue: 对
2014-04-10 17:17 Fycho: 为了难度平衡 一般是滑条跳比圈跳大
2014-04-10 17:17 Fycho: 对整个diff来讲
2014-04-10 17:18 Atrue: 嗯，我下回注意，这次圈跳已经挺大了
2014-04-10 17:18 Atrue: 嗯
2014-04-10 17:18 Fycho: 01:16:158 (1) - 
2014-04-10 17:18 Fycho: 去NC
2014-04-10 17:19 Atrue: 汗
2014-04-10 17:19 Fycho: 01:22:265 (3) - NC?
2014-04-10 17:19 Atrue: 这里去nc啊。。。
2014-04-10 17:19 Atrue: 这两个nc我觉得我自己的也有道理。。。
2014-04-10 17:20 Fycho: NC SPAM
2014-04-10 17:20 Atrue: 有点
2014-04-10 17:20 Atrue: 不到spam的地步啊
2014-04-10 17:20 Fycho: 00:00:709 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - 整个开头啊
2014-04-10 17:20 Fycho: 有点平淡啊
2014-04-10 17:20 Fycho: 跳要有间距大小之分啊
2014-04-10 17:20 Fycho: 00:04:661 (1,2) - 我觉的这两个可以大点
2014-04-10 17:21 Atrue: 跳太大
2014-04-10 17:21 Fycho: 00:00:709 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这些啥的 是正常flow，可以小点
2014-04-10 17:21 Fycho: 这里我个人觉得不合曲
2014-04-10 17:21 Fycho: 00:20:649 - add circle
2014-04-10 17:21 Atrue: 再大就逆天了
2014-04-10 17:21 Atrue: 我不怎么敢放
2014-04-10 17:21 Atrue: 前边已经挺大的了。。。
2014-04-10 17:22 Atrue: 要的是那四个单点，加note往哪儿放？四个单点感觉美丽
2014-04-10 17:23 Fycho: 00:28:014 (1) - 
2014-04-10 17:23 Fycho: 这个不要加速
2014-04-10 17:23 Fycho: 这没什么特别音，就一个finish而已
2014-04-10 17:23 Atrue: 嗯说过惹
2014-04-10 17:24 Atrue: 嗯
2014-04-10 17:24 Atrue: 我看看，我得想想
2014-04-10 17:24 Atrue: 我觉得加速挺爽的
2014-04-10 17:24 Fycho: 00:39:152 (12) - 这个我觉得可以换成3/4滑条然后加速
2014-04-10 17:24 Fycho: 一般有谁在finish音加速么=。=而且后面还是偏慢速读成段落
2014-04-10 17:24 Fycho: 玩起来 坑爹
2014-04-10 17:25 Fycho: 00:47:595 (4,5,6) - 额 你也开始散点乱跳
2014-04-10 17:25 Atrue: 这里加速我就不赞成丽
2014-04-10 17:25 Atrue: 不是玩你的图玩的么
2014-04-10 17:25 Atrue: 再说我这也是基础三角
2014-04-10 17:26 Fycho: 为什么 因为有一个嚓的音
2014-04-10 17:26 Fycho: 我的话我会在这里加速
2014-04-10 17:27 Fycho: 00:47:774 - 
2014-04-10 17:27 Fycho: 这也是
2014-04-10 17:27 Fycho: 嚓的音
2014-04-10 17:27 Atrue: hmmm。。这里我还是不怎么支持加速。。。真的，整个pattern全得改而且效果也未必那样好
2014-04-10 17:27 Fycho: 额 我还没在意
2014-04-10 17:27 Fycho: 你怎么把所有的clap都加成那个嚓音了
2014-04-10 17:27 Fycho: 。。。。
2014-04-10 17:27 Fycho: 偷换军鼓啊
2014-04-10 17:28 Fycho: 随你
2014-04-10 17:28 Atrue: 你听听原曲
2014-04-10 17:28 Fycho: 你的图
2014-04-10 17:28 Atrue: 我一开始觉得不一样
2014-04-10 17:28 Fycho: 1. Offset: 709ms	BPM: 167.00
2014-04-10 17:28 Fycho: 这里比较强的
2014-04-10 17:28 Atrue: 应该就是那个音
2014-04-10 17:28 Fycho: 复制错
2014-04-10 17:29 Atrue: 2333
2014-04-10 17:29 Atrue: 对

Thanks for modding～

lkx_Shore

1,453 posts

Joined January 2010

lkx_Shore 2014-05-11T03:00:06+00:00

[General]

615改名了，把tag和gd名同步一下

[Mei's Insane]

00:09:870 (4) - 用1/1滑条比较好
00:15:798 (1,2,3,4) - 这跳梗有点违和
00:17:595 (7) - 这部分换normal音效比较好.或者你在00:18:493 (3,4) - 这种音加normal底音.finish去掉
00:30:889 (5,1) - 换个flow吧，这个感觉不太好
00:56:756 (1) - 头加finish
00:58:912 (1,1,1) - 这种交叉感如何？ http://puu.sh/8GAZo.jpg

[Insane]

00:02:864 (1,4) - 换Normal-sampleset
00:05:738 (1,2,1) - 啊...这梗现在的flow打起来有点违和
00:08:613 (3) - 这个长音用滑条啊，用停顿太违和了。
00:11:487 (1) - 和00:11:128 (6) - 的方向相反这么放我觉得好点，现在竖下来感觉不伦不类
00:15:080 (1) - 加soft-finish
00:17:774 (2,3,1,2,1,2) - 这么放在insane里感觉...不好
00:27:655 (5) - clap
00:30:708 (3,3) - 太空了，这么改？http://puu.sh/8GA5J.jpg
00:36:098 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 改法同上
00:48:134 (1,2,1,2) - 音乐给我一种“送出去”的感觉...
00:51:008 (1,2,1,2) - ^
00:54:241 (3) - 其实用1/1滑条可以有一种吸住的感觉，我觉得这才是符合音乐的梗
00:55:858 (3) - 改3连打
00:56:756 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - 怎么不和开头一样加口哨啦？
01:03:762 (1) - 话说这部分我觉得你可以把soft-finish替换进自定义音轨，然后和easy一样加法，会很赞
01:04:840 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - 用大间距连打会好点
01:20:469 (3,4) - 用note比较好
01:24:601 (2,1) - 容易审美疲劳
01:26:397 (2) - remove

[615's Easy]

00:09:331 (1,2) - 虽然只是强迫症...滑条弯的趋势迎合一点(1)比较舒服...嗯
00:56:038 (3) - 用Normal-sampleset和Additions-soft，然后加个Whistle
00:58:912 (1,2,1) - 渐移弄好点，或者完全叠起来。当然，在easy里我倾向后者.
01:26:936 (3) - 加clap？现在感觉像是打空气...

音效不错.

[At last]

准备发货

Shore's Hard

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368,312,61786,2,0,P|320:296|248:328,1,120,2|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,344,62146,2,0,L|112:328,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,272,62415,1,0,0:0:0:0:
32,272,62505,6,0,L|192:296,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,224,63044,2,0,P|328:192|408:208,1,160,2|2,0:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
472,272,63583,1,8,0:0:0:0:
384,232,63762,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,232,63852,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,232,63942,5,4,0:2:0:0:
416,144,64122,1,2,0:2:0:0:
384,56,64301,1,8,0:0:0:0:
288,48,64481,1,2,0:2:0:0:
232,128,64661,2,0,P|256:176|288:192,1,80,4|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,184,64930,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,184,65020,1,4,0:2:0:0:
304,280,65200,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,296,65289,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,312,65379,6,0,P|160:336|80:296,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,240,65918,2,0,P|168:160|104:152,1,160
48,224,66457,1,8,0:0:0:0:
80,136,66637,1,0,0:0:0:0:
80,136,66726,1,0,0:0:0:0:
80,136,66816,6,0,L|112:56,1,80,4|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,96,67176,2,0,P|248:104|288:80,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,144,67535,2,0,P|408:128|472:144,1,120,2|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,192,67894,2,0,L|440:272,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,288,68164,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,288,68253,6,0,P|352:304|248:256,1,160,4|8,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,336,68792,2,0,P|115:297|38:312,1,160,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
38,312,69331,1,8,0:0:0:0:
80,224,69511,1,0,0:0:0:0:
80,224,69601,1,0,0:0:0:0:
80,224,69691,5,4,0:2:0:0:
56,128,69870,1,2,0:2:0:0:
128,64,70050,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,80,70229,1,2,0:2:0:0:
272,160,70409,2,0,P|272:224|232:264,1,120,4|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,288,70768,2,0,L|288:304,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,336,71038,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,336,71128,6,0,P|360:304|384:208,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,248,71667,2,0,P|353:244|422:173,1,160,2|2,0:2|0:2,0:2:0:0:
392,80,72206,1,8,0:0:0:0:
304,48,72385,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,48,72475,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,48,72565,6,0,P|256:48|224:72,1,80,4|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,128,72924,2,0,P|152:80|128:48,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,120,73283,2,0,L|96:240,1,120,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,280,73643,2,0,L|144:328,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,304,73912,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,304,74002,6,0,P|256:264|336:288,1,160,4|8,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,352,74541,2,0,P|336:312|416:336,1,160,2|2,0:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
472,256,75080,1,8,0:0:0:0:
432,168,75259,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,168,75349,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,168,75439,5,4,0:2:0:0:
464,80,75619,1,2,0:2:0:0:
384,32,75798,1,4,0:2:0:0:
296,80,75978,1,2,0:2:0:0:
216,136,76158,2,0,P|168:136|136:112,1,80,4|2,0:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
128,72,76427,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,72,76517,1,4,0:2:0:0:
64,144,76697,1,2,0:2:0:0:
64,144,76786,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,144,76876,6,0,L|96:304,1,160,4|8,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
16,248,77415,2,0,P|80:208|160:232,1,160,2|2,0:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
224,296,77954,1,8,0:0:0:0:
312,328,78134,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,328,78223,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,328,78313,6,0,L|392:296,1,80,4|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,200,78673,2,0,L|333:229,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,200,79032,2,0,P|176:192|144:128,1,120,2|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,104,79391,1,8,0:0:0:0:
248,104,79571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,104,79661,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,104,79750,6,0,P|280:80|288:40,1,80,4|0,0:2|2:0,0:0:0:0:
352,112,80110,2,0,P|376:144|416:152,1,80,8|0,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
336,216,80469,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,200,80649,1,2,0:2:0:0:
248,104,80828,1,8,0:0:0:0:
352,112,81008,1,2,0:2:0:0:
240,200,81188,6,0,P|192:208|104:144,1,160,4|8,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,64,81726,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,64,81816,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,64,81906,1,0,0:0:0:0:
48,136,82086,1,2,0:2:0:0:
56,232,82265,1,8,0:0:0:0:
56,232,82445,1,2,0:2:0:0:
168,192,82625,6,0,P|248:184|312:232,1,160,4|8,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,304,83164,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,304,83343,2,0,L|256:144,1,160,4|8,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,32,83882,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,32,84062,5,4,0:2:0:0:
416,224,84421,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,352,84780,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,160,85140,1,8,0:0:0:0:
176,104,85319,1,2,0:2:0:0:
176,104,85409,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,104,85499,6,0,P|240:112|272:160,1,120,4|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,200,85858,1,8,0:0:0:0:
200,264,86038,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,104,86217,1,2,0:2:0:0:
176,104,86577,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,192,86756,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,264,86936,1,4,0:2:0:0:
256,192,87026,12,0,89811,0:0:0:0:

Atrue

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Atrue 2014-05-11T14:41:19+00:00

@lkx 最近有点忙，有空更新回mod XD 谢啦~

Atrue

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Atrue 2014-05-12T05:02:16+00:00

lkx_Shore wrote:
[General]
615改名了，把tag和gd名同步一下好

[Insane]
00:02:864 (1,4) - 换Normal-sampleset fixed
00:05:738 (1,2,1) - 啊...这梗现在的flow打起来有点违和还行。。稍微带了一点强调
00:08:613 (3) - 这个长音用滑条啊，用停顿太违和了。叹气。。那我得改梗了，现在应该会好些
00:11:487 (1) - 和00:11:128 (6) - 的方向相反这么放我觉得好点，现在竖下来感觉不伦不类算惹我觉得还是不错的，有那么一种感觉让它垂下来
00:15:080 (1) - 加soft-finish 不好。。突然冒出来一个softfinish。。
00:17:774 (2,3,1,2,1,2) - 这么放在insane里感觉...不好多好的减速感觉，强调重鼓点
00:27:655 (5) - clap 你说得对
00:30:708 (3,3) - 太空了，这么改？http://puu.sh/8GA5J.jpg 爽！就这么办！（不过方向我改了一点，还是想对称）
00:36:098 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 改法同上是的~
00:48:134 (1,2,1,2) - 音乐给我一种“送出去”的感觉... 怎么送出去= =
00:51:008 (1,2,1,2) - ^ ^
00:54:241 (3) - 其实用1/1滑条可以有一种吸住的感觉，我觉得这才是符合音乐的梗问题是放那个的话怎么摆比较好，我觉得很难兼顾flow跟美观
00:55:858 (3) - 改3连打本来不就是么= =
00:56:756 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - 怎么不和开头一样加口哨啦？ nice catch!
01:03:762 (1) - 话说这部分我觉得你可以把soft-finish替换进自定义音轨，然后和easy一样加法，会很赞我承认他的可能也是一种很好的加法，但是我觉得我的加法对于这里是更连贯的，因为基本我没有在这个diff里面用 soft finish
01:04:840 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - 用大间距连打会好点跟后边滑条做了对比
01:20:469 (3,4) - 用note比较好不是很清楚那么应该怎么跳。。不过是一点不错的建议= =
01:24:601 (2,1) - 容易审美疲劳强调的是那三个重音
01:26:397 (2) - remove dunno why....

Thanks for modding! Nice catch!

@ GDers: Adjusted Audio lead in and Tags. Feel free to update.

lkx_Shore

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lkx_Shore 2014-05-12T09:35:55+00:00

Atrue wrote:
lkx_Shore wrote:
[Insane]
00:17:774 (2,3,1,2,1,2) - 这么放在insane里感觉...不好多好的减速感觉，强调重鼓点啊我觉得太空了
00:48:134 (1,2,1,2) - 音乐给我一种“送出去”的感觉... 怎么送出去= = 送出去啊...不要停下来继续连贯就好
00:54:241 (3) - 其实用1/1滑条可以有一种吸住的感觉，我觉得这才是符合音乐的梗问题是放那个的话怎么摆比较好，我觉得很难兼顾flow跟美观 http://puu.sh/8JcyA.jpg
00:55:858 (3) - 改3连打本来不就是么= = 啊我在线看的版本不是，你后来改了没传吧
01:26:397 (2) - remove dunno why.... 我觉得停顿一下效果更佳而已。和我hard的感觉差不多
Thanks for modding! Nice catch!

Atrue

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Atrue 2014-05-12T11:07:32+00:00

lkx_Shore wrote:
[Insane]
00:17:774 (2,3,1,2,1,2) - 这么放在insane里感觉...不好多好的减速感觉，强调重鼓点啊我觉得太空了我还是坚持自己的看法啦~
00:48:134 (1,2,1,2) - 音乐给我一种“送出去”的感觉... 怎么送出去= = 送出去啊...不要停下来继续连贯就好 -----好
00:54:241 (3) - 其实用1/1滑条可以有一种吸住的感觉，我觉得这才是符合音乐的梗问题是放那个的话怎么摆比较好，我觉得很难兼顾flow跟美观 http://puu.sh/8JcyA.jpg 3,1 的间距减小我觉得不是很舒服。。我的对称也美丽= =我再等等看进一步的意见吧。。（不过确实精美~）
00:55:858 (3) - 改3连打本来不就是么= = 啊我在线看的版本不是，你后来改了没传吧 ← ←
01:26:397 (2) - remove dunno why.... 我觉得停顿一下效果更佳而已。和我hard的感觉差不多两个不一样的diff怎么互相比较啊。。。

Thanks for explaining your mods~ XD helped a lot~

Mei

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Mei 2014-05-14T13:58:02+00:00

lkx_Shore wrote:
[General]

[Mei's Insane]
00:09:870 (4) - 用1/1滑条比较好容我思考一下
00:15:798 (1,2,3,4) - 这跳梗有点违和还行吧._.
00:17:595 (7) - 这部分换normal音效比较好.或者你在00:18:493 (3,4) - 这种音加normal底音.finish去掉容我思考一下;w;
00:30:889 (5,1) - 换个flow吧，这个感觉不太好改了下
00:56:756 (1) - 头加finish感觉不太好，这里我用的是whistle来强调音乐，finish加在这里会有些不伦不类的感觉
00:58:912 (1,1,1) - 这种交叉感如何？ http://puu.sh/8GAZo.jpg 感觉不错

http://puu.sh/8LXGa.osu
谢谢你的mod！其他的有些意见容我过段时间再看看

ITer_old

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ITer_old 2014-06-16T07:34:30+00:00

SB making
working time: 2 days
here is the SB file: http://puu.sh/9vLpK/37fe9fd3e6.zip

Select widescreen support and epilepsy warning on for each difficulty of beatmap.

Atrue

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Atrue 2014-06-24T05:16:43+00:00

Great job! Thank you!
@Mei QAQ Sorry for long time without updating... I'm back ww
Anyway, still looking for suitable BG..

IamKwaN

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IamKwaN 2014-06-25T12:35:07+00:00

Here's my part: http://puu.sh/9JmBB/ee5a7328d7.rar

I have glanced through some Anime BG websites and I got several BGs. They are cut already, so feel free to grab one!
Album here

Atrue

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Atrue 2014-06-26T00:49:35+00:00

Uploading..........
(And nice BG! www)

Crystal

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Crystal 2014-07-01T08:50:30+00:00

prpr黄书
star

Atrue

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Atrue 2014-07-06T12:41:32+00:00

[_Crystal] wrote:
prpr黄书
star

Thank you!www

HabiHolic

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HabiHolic 2014-07-19T12:13:53+00:00

Modding soon

so. https://osu.ppy.sh/s/184970 yor can pick my mapset video file

IamKwaN

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IamKwaN 2014-07-19T12:19:18+00:00

HabiHolic wrote:
Modding soon

so. https://osu.ppy.sh/s/184970 yor can pick my mapset video file

We have storyboard so video isn't needed.

Atrue

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Atrue 2014-10-26T00:53:30+00:00

HabiHolic wrote:
Modding soon

so. https://osu.ppy.sh/s/184970 yor can pick my mapset video file

Ah today I found the reply orz.. Thanks~ >w< but as kwan said, We have story board so we don't need the video~ ww

Atrue

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Atrue 2014-10-26T00:55:32+00:00

Resurrected, since YoshinosSakura is AFKing, I'll fix his diff's mod.

Mafumafu

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Mafumafu 2014-10-26T03:21:33+00:00

Hi, Atrue! There is Regraz's mod!

As your ingame req.
There is a few points of my mod:

Thank you for requesting a mod from me! Note that I am still learning modding skills, so I am sorry if I cannot provide help to you!
Mod is just a kind of suggestion, so feel free if you dont want to make change.
I hope you can reply to my mod since it can help me know the other mappers' ideas and I can also learn something new.
Bond means highly suggest.
Same issues wont be repeated by me unless it is a GD..
This is the one of the maps I modded since I used modding framework version 3 (mfv3)

General

Dunno if this hurts coz I am not that familiar with storyboard: http://puu.sh/cqNFI/677761a9f6.png
Dont enable custom color?
make the hitsound consistent at the last spinner in each diff.

YoshinoSakura's Easy

Rhythm:

Seems a little hard as an Easy.
00:15:080 (1) - Hmm, not recommend to use such kind of slider in Easy imo. Yeah the background music changes here but I guess you can continue following the vocal here. Also you need a Finish at the start of 00:15:080 (1) - , but remember to lower the volume in this part. However, if you still want to keep this slider, trying to make the shape more appealing.
Structure:
00:29:451 (2,2) - The stack can be improed.
00:36:637 (1,3) - Make them symmetrical.
00:39:511 (1,2) - Not a nice flow imo. Also I guess there should not be a reverse slider since the vocals are grouped by two. I mean, http://puu.sh/cqOoM/2b14e22719.jpg
00:40:948 (3,1) - Blanket issue.
00:45:259 (1,2) - Oops, these sharp curves seem not that appealing.
01:01:068 (3) - Try this? Flow will become better. http://puu.sh/cr3fz/24390fe6b7.jpg
01:12:565 (2) - Move this a little up, http://puu.sh/cr3hA/d4f5bac0d9.jpg
01:22:625 (1,1) - Avoid the slight overlap.
Hitsounds
00:48:134 (1) - 00:53:882 (1) - Finish at the head
01:26:577 (2) - Remove Finish, clap is enough
Others:
None

KwaN's Normal

Nice, nothing much to say, just some nazis and minors.
00:33:762 (1,2) - Blanket.
01:14:002 (1) - Curve it for more appealing pattern? http://puu.sh/csvlZ/b845751e19.jpg

Shore's Hard

So many lol stacks...lol
Rhythm:
00:49:930 Overlooking the vocal here sounds not nice.
01:08:253 (1,2) - A sudden note-density drop by using 2 1/1 sliders is weird. You can completely use 2 1/1 notes at 01:11:128 (1,2) - but here is different because there is a vocal in the middle of 01:08:792 (2) - . In order to keep rhythm consistent, try to make 01:08:792 (2) - into a 1/2 reverse slider?
Structure:
00:01:068 (2,3,4) - About these 3 notes, you put them in a line. However the music is not the same, so I guess it is better to have a flow-curve here. Also you can have a good transition between 3 and 4 since 4 is a curve slider. http://puu.sh/csxZS/5982efeb97.jpg
00:04:122 (3) - ^ http://puu.sh/csy2s/3fd0bfb038.jpg
00:07:714 (4) - DS. http://puu.sh/csy3A/f434c2e882.jpg
00:16:337 (4,5) - Seems not appropriate for a jump here. Also the stack is weird imo.
00:32:146 (3,4,5,6,7) - Overlap more like this: http://puu.sh/csyCi/5805130251.jpg Nice pattern! :3
00:34:481 (3) - Not flow-friendly imo, try this Olympic Five-Ring pattern? http://puu.sh/csyal/ed4cb32b8b.jpg
01:05:379 (1,2) - This blanket issue is way too severe, so I just point it out.
01:12:924 (2,3) - Try to make a blanket here.
01:21:188 (1,5) - Avoid overlap.
01:22:625 (1) - If you want to create a jump here, make it larger, if not, keep regular DS here.
Hitsounds
None
Others:
Remove the greenlines in break time.

Mei's Insane

Rhythm:

00:00:709 (1) - oops, what's this.... Why not keep consistent with 00:03:583 (1,2) - Also a sudden 1/4 short slider at the beginning is too frightening..
00:10:589 (1,2) - 1/2 slider to follow the vocal.
00:03:223 (2) - Ah..too loud imo..
00:31:517 (2,3) - These 1/4 sound weird in rhythm imo.
Structure:
00:06:996 (3,4,5) - Make it further from 2 so that you can avoid the slight overlap with 00:07:535 (7) -
00:14:002 (4,5) - Make a blanket?
01:08:074 (4,5,1) - Make 4 5 and 1 blanket with 01:07:176 (2) - and aso make 01:08:253 (1) - blanket with 01:07:535 (3) - .
Hitsounds
00:11:487 (1) - Use soft for the slider end or just silence it.
00:58:912 (1,1) - sliderslide sounds really annoying here.
Others:
01:14:002 (6) - NC here because you've NCed at 01:02:505 (1) -
01:26:217 (7,1) - Swap nc.

Insane

Rhythm:

00:20:828 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Rhythm suggestion: http://puu.sh/ctryF/0b2a8f3004.jpg
Hmm, regarding some 3/4 notes in the KIAI, I guess they are not s in place.......hmm thay are fine though...
01:16:517 (2) - Feels that there should be stream.
Structure:
00:47:595 (4,5,6) - Perfect triangle?
Hitsounds
01:21:188 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - So noisy imo, they broke the music...Also a bit overmap.
Others:
None

Nice map, though there is a great space for structure improvement! Good Luck!

Last edited by Mafumafu 2014-10-28T00:31:20+00:00, edited 9 times in total.

ITer_old

62 posts

Joined December 2011

ITer_old 2014-10-26T04:26:57+00:00

osb file

osb file here

Change Log (2014/10/26)

Fixed background image wrongly shown during sb time

Atrue

osu! Alumni

1,017 posts

Joined July 2012

Topic Starter

Atrue 2014-10-26T04:40:18+00:00

ITer wrote:
osb file
osb file here
Change Log (2014/10/26)
Fixed background image wrongly shown during sb time

Thanks for your Storyboard!!! >w<

Sellenite

1,092 posts

Joined September 2013

Sellenite 2014-10-27T10:05:32+00:00

[Insane]
这个diff的哨子音效我觉得下得有点违和。。我调整了一下，你看看好不好

00:11:487 (1) - 这个我觉得直接用两个单点stack代替就很强的表现力了，没必要那么多滑条而且减速
00:21:367 (5,1,2,3) - 排成一个直线？像前面的那个
00:22:625 (2) - 尾巴加whistle
00:23:164 (4) - 加whistle
00:23:703 (1) - 尾巴加whistle
00:24:062 (2) - 取消whistle
00:24:241 (3) - 加whistle
00:24:421 (4) - 头加whistle
00:25:679 (3) - 头加whistle
00:26:577 (1) - 尾巴加whistle
00:26:936 (2) - 头取消whistle，尾巴加whistle
00:27:295 (1) - 加whistle
00:27:655 (5) - 再加whistle
01:16:158 (1) - 取消NC吧，一种梗一套颜色才好看

[Mei's Insane]

00:11:128 (1) - 取消NC
00:45:080 (1,2) - 交换NC
00:50:828 (7) - 改成1/4滑条？我真善良，类似00:45:080 (1) - 这个
00:52:625 (3,4) - 节奏有点诡异。。不过我不知道怎么改好
00:59:631 (1) - 头加finish
01:03:762 (1,2) - 交换NC
01:09:511 (1,2) - 同上
01:10:409 (6) - NC
01:10:768 (1) - 取消NC
01:11:128 (5) - NC
01:14:002 (6) - NC
01:15:259 (1,2) - 交换NC
01:18:313 (6) - NC

[Shore's Hard]
你的难度太难了

00:01:966 (5,1) - 交换NC
00:16:607 (1,1) - 哈哈1beat
00:19:391 (1,2,3,4) - 我的爷爷这太难了，1.3-1.5ds吧
00:33:044 (7) - 滑条尾有点大声，推荐静音
00:35:020 (6,1) - 交换NC
00:39:152 (5) - recommend silent this slider end
00:40:858 这里加个circle效果不错啊，类似00:42:295 (5) -
00:57:655 (5,6,7) - 这个就不要跳了。。有点坑啊
01:02:415 (5,1) - 我的奶奶，DS啊
01:26:577 (5) - NC

[KwaN's Normal]

pro

[YoshinoSakura's Easy]

00:20:469 (1) - 转盘应该是这里开始00:20:828
00:30:888 (1) - 尝试blanket好然后00:31:966 (2) - stack在00:29:451 (2) - 的尾巴
00:40:948 (3) - lanket
00:42:385 (1) - anket
00:44:182 (4) - 滑条00:44:900这里结束啊，你就这里跟歌词好蛋疼
00:46:697 (3) - nket
00:48:134 (1) - 头加finish
00:53:882 (1) - 头加inish
01:26:577 (2) - 不要clap

Atrue

osu! Alumni

1,017 posts

Joined July 2012

Topic Starter

Atrue 2014-10-28T02:55:47+00:00

Regraz wrote:
Hi, Atrue! There is Regraz's mod! As your ingame req.
There is a few points of my mod: Hi~ And thank you!
Thank you for requesting a mod from me! Note that I am still learning modding skills, so I am sorry if I cannot provide help to you!
Mod is just a kind of suggestion, so feel free if you dont want to make change.
I hope you can reply to my mod since it can help me know the other mappers' ideas and I can also learn something new.
Bond means highly suggest.
Same issues wont be repeated by me unless it is a GD..
This is the one of the maps I modded since I used modding framework version 3 (mfv3)

General
Dunno if this hurts coz I am not that familiar with storyboard: http://puu.sh/cqNFI/677761a9f6.png Asking ITer for help ^^ Thanks~
Dont enable custom color? Considering that.
make the hitsound consistent at the last spinner in each diff. Since the maker is different, I think it's ok. Though indeed a consistent hitsound is better.

YoshinoSakura's Easy

Rhythm:
Seems a little hard as an Easy. True
00:15:080 (1) - Hmm, not recommend to use such kind of slider in Easy imo. Yeah the background music changes here but I guess you can continue following the vocal here. Also you need a Finish at the start of 00:15:080 (1) - , but remember to lower the volume in this part. However, if you still want to keep this slider, trying to make the shape more appealing. This slider I think is fine, somehow I lowered the volume here.
Structure:
00:29:451 (2,2) - The stack can be improed. Unstacked
00:36:637 (1,3) - Make them symmetrical. I think they are fine..
00:39:511 (1,2) - Not a nice flow imo. Also I guess there should not be a reverse slider since the vocals are grouped by two. I mean, http://puu.sh/cqOoM/2b14e22719.jpg But how to place the two sliders? No enough room here.
00:40:948 (3,1) - Blanket issue. Fixed
00:45:259 (1,2) - Oops, these sharp curves seem not that appealing. I think they are fine..
01:01:068 (3) - Try this? Flow will become better. http://puu.sh/cr3fz/24390fe6b7.jpg In fact the flow is fine here, and this way is much better to look.
01:12:565 (2) - Move this a little up, http://puu.sh/cr3hA/d4f5bac0d9.jpg Fixed
01:22:625 (1,1) - Avoid the slight overlap. It's hard to both make the blanket and overlap good here.
Hitsounds
00:48:134 (1) - 00:53:882 (1) - Finish at the head Fixed
01:26:577 (2) - Remove Finish, clap is enough Fixed
Others:
None

Insane

Rhythm:
00:20:828 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Rhythm suggestion: http://puu.sh/ctryF/0b2a8f3004.jpg Oh why? I followed the drum in the music...
Hmm, regarding some 3/4 notes in the KIAI, I guess they are not s in place.......hmm thay are fine though...
01:16:517 (2) - Feels that there should be stream. Hmm.. It's a part of my pattern..
Structure:
00:47:595 (4,5,6) - Perfect triangle? Fine..
Hitsounds
01:21:188 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - So noisy imo, they broke the music...Also a bit overmap. I don't think so..
Others:
None

Nice map, though there is a great space for structure improvement! Good Luck! Thanks for your mod!

Sellenite wrote:
[Insane]
这个diff的哨子音效我觉得下得有点违和。。我调整了一下，你看看好不好
00:11:487 (1) - 这个我觉得直接用两个单点stack代替就很强的表现力了，没必要那么多滑条而且减速感觉还行，不太想改。。
00:21:367 (5,1,2,3) - 排成一个直线？像前面的那个调整了5的位置
00:22:625 (2) - 尾巴加whistle
00:23:164 (4) - 加whistle
00:23:703 (1) - 尾巴加whistle
00:24:062 (2) - 取消whistle
00:24:241 (3) - 加whistle
00:24:421 (4) - 头加whistle
00:25:679 (3) - 头加whistle
00:26:577 (1) - 尾巴加whistle
00:26:936 (2) - 头取消whistle，尾巴加whistle
00:27:295 (1) - 加whistle
00:27:655 (5) - 再加whistle 除了那个串子没按你的改，其他的都改了
01:16:158 (1) - 取消NC吧，一种梗一套颜色才好看好

[YoshinoSakura's Easy]
00:20:469 (1) - 转盘应该是这里开始00:20:828 我倒是觉得哪里开始不怎么重要，再看看
00:30:888 (1) - 尝试blanket好然后00:31:966 (2) - stack在00:29:451 (2) - 的尾巴改了梗
00:40:948 (3) - lanket 改了
00:42:385 (1) - anket 不好改算了吧。。
00:44:182 (4) - 滑条00:44:900这里结束啊，你就这里跟歌词好蛋疼还行。。还行。。
00:46:697 (3) - nket 改了
00:48:134 (1) - 头加finish 改了
00:53:882 (1) - 头加inish 改了
01:26:577 (2) - 不要clap 去了finish留了clap
Thanks for your mod!

Thanks again guys~

Mei

1,053 posts

Joined March 2012

Mei 2014-10-29T01:16:53+00:00

Regraz wrote:
Mei's Insane

Rhythm:
00:00:709 (1) - oops, what's this.... Why not keep consistent with 00:03:583 (1,2) - Also a sudden 1/4 short slider at the beginning is too frightening..
00:10:589 (1,2) - 1/2 slider to follow the vocal.i like current pattern so not gonna change this
00:03:223 (2) - Ah..too loud imo..i think fine..wait for more opinion
00:31:517 (2,3) - These 1/4 sound weird in rhythm imo.
Structure:
00:06:996 (3,4,5) - Make it further from 2 so that you can avoid the slight overlap with 00:07:535 (7) -
00:14:002 (4,5) - Make a blanket?
01:08:074 (4,5,1) - Make 4 5 and 1 blanket with 01:07:176 (2) - and aso make 01:08:253 (1) - blanket with 01:07:535 (3) - .spacing is fine now and i dont want to break it because of blanket issue
Hitsounds
00:11:487 (1) - Use soft for the slider end or just silence it.
00:58:912 (1,1) - sliderslide sounds really annoying here.
Others:
01:14:002 (6) - NC here because you've NCed at 01:02:505 (1) -
01:26:217 (7,1) - Swap nc.

Sellenite wrote:
[Mei's Insane]
00:11:128 (1) - 取消NC这里是个倒退的梗，我感觉加个nc会好读些
00:45:080 (1,2) - 交换NC
00:50:828 (7) - 改成1/4滑条？我真善良，类似00:45:080 (1) - 这个没梗.-.懒改
00:52:625 (3,4) - 节奏有点诡异。。不过我不知道怎么改好这里勉强符合了一下背景的鼓，打起来其实还是1/2的感觉啊
00:59:631 (1) - 头加finish
01:03:762 (1,2) - 交换NC
01:09:511 (1,2) - 同上
01:10:409 (6) - NC
01:10:768 (1) - 取消NC
01:11:128 (5) - NC
01:14:002 (6) - NC
01:15:259 (1,2) - 交换NC
01:18:313 (6) - NC

others fixed

I

osu file format v13

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AudioLeadIn: 1500
PreviewTime: 58912
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
EpilepsyWarning: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

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DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2

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TitleUnicode:Preserved Roses -アニメバージョン-
Artist:T.M. Revolution x Mizuki Nana
ArtistUnicode:T.M. Revolution x 水樹 奈々
Creator:Atrue
Version:Mei's Insane
Source:Kakumeiki Valvrave
Tags:革命機ヴァルヴレイヴ VVV the Liberator Epic Records Japan Eruerufu Karurusutain Tokishima Haruto Sashinami Shoko Rukino Saki Sunrise Mei 615915887 YoshinoSakura lkx_Shore ITer IamKwaN
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半年前的我作图怎么这么奔放，啧啧

lkx_Shore

1,453 posts

Joined January 2010

lkx_Shore 2014-11-01T05:20:59+00:00

Regraz wrote:
Shore's Hard
So many lol stacks...lol
Rhythm:
00:49:930 Overlooking the vocal here sounds not nice. 空着更好，白线那里略轻，一般加也是用滑条尾覆盖。
01:08:253 (1,2) - A sudden note-density drop by using 2 1/1 sliders is weird. You can completely use 2 1/1 notes at 01:11:128 (1,2) - but here is different because there is a vocal in the middle of 01:08:792 (2) - . In order to keep rhythm consistent, try to make 01:08:792 (2) - into a 1/2 reverse slider? 我也觉得太密了，所以把一些很紧致的滑条换成了note，至于你说的01:08:792 (2) - ，我不懂你为什么让我用折返滑条...
Structure:
00:01:068 (2,3,4) - About these 3 notes, you put them in a line. However the music is not the same, so I guess it is better to have a flow-curve here. Also you can have a good transition between 3 and 4 since 4 is a curve slider. http://puu.sh/csxZS/5982efeb97.jpg 改了，但我用的是另一种排版。
00:04:122 (3) - ^ http://puu.sh/csy2s/3fd0bfb038.jpg 同上
00:07:714 (4) - DS. http://puu.sh/csy3A/f434c2e882.jpg fix
00:16:337 (4,5) - Seems not appropriate for a jump here. Also the stack is weird imo. 只是跳的方向比较怪，我放下面了。
00:32:146 (3,4,5,6,7) - Overlap more like this: http://puu.sh/csyCi/5805130251.jpg Nice pattern! :3 改了。
00:34:481 (3) - Not flow-friendly imo, try this Olympic Five-Ring pattern? http://puu.sh/csyal/ed4cb32b8b.jpg 断是不会断的，滑条判定圈贴的很近，我把整体往右拉了。
01:05:379 (1,2) - This blanket issue is way too severe, so I just point it out. 好。
01:12:924 (2,3) - Try to make a blanket here. 好
01:21:188 (1,5) - Avoid overlap. 好
01:22:625 (1) - If you want to create a jump here, make it larger, if not, keep regular DS here. 改大了。
Hitsounds
None
Others:
Remove the greenlines in break time. 嗯以前我是直接拉成一个音轨，如果检查这个要仔细点，相同音轨相同音量的绿线都可以删掉的...

Sellenite wrote:
[Shore's Hard]
你的难度太难了
00:01:966 (5,1) - 交换NC fix
00:16:607 (1,1) - 哈哈1beat 什么时候Hard对转盘也有这要求了？
00:19:391 (1,2,3,4) - 我的爷爷这太难了，1.3-1.5ds吧
00:33:044 (7) - 滑条尾有点大声，推荐静音 fix
00:35:020 (6,1) - 交换NC fix
00:39:152 (5) - recommend silent this slider end fix
00:40:858 这里加个circle效果不错啊，类似00:42:295 (5) - 这里是两个白线一个整体，你可以看到00:46:337 (4,1) - 我也没加连打。
00:57:655 (5,6,7) - 这个就不要跳了。。有点坑啊
01:02:415 (5,1) - 我的奶奶，DS啊为什么要复制两个note，改了。
01:26:577 (5) - NC fix

我觉得这并不难，如果at要削我再削吧。

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Atrue

osu! Alumni

1,017 posts

Joined July 2012

Topic Starter

Atrue 2014-11-10T02:06:23+00:00

Updated~ Thanks!!
(Kwan told me to wait next mods)

OblivioN

OblivioN 2014-11-10T08:19:50+00:00

Insane

00:02:864 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 也许是受了妹儿的影响，觉得stack的三连不太好看<3，可以试试这样
SPOILER
00:04:301 (5,1,2) - 这里的节奏可以做的和前面不同，变化多好玩点啊w 例如:00:04:840 (2) - 放远一点可以跳一下
00:09:241 (4,1,2,3) - 这个flow虽然很顺……不过我更喜欢这样的排列 <3:
SPOILER
顺便注意下00:09:870 (3) - 是ctrl g过的
这部分大概是这样的感觉:
00:12:745 (3) - 这个的头和00:11:487 (1) - 的头stack很好啊
00:48:134 (1,2,1,2) - 00:51:008 (1,2,1,2) - 这两段……感觉就这样跟vocal有些空了，试试这种节奏呢:00:53:882 (1,2,3) - 这里也是XD
01:01:068 (1,2,3) - 01:05:379 (1,2,3,4) - 为什么都是kiai里的3/4slider+note 可是间距不一样呢？有点小好奇
01:07:714 (4,5,6,7,8) - kiai里面连打果然还是分开比较刺激<3
01:07:714 (4,5,6,1) - 咦，这里应该是stack的么？虽然看不太出来
01:12:565 (1,2) - 这两个处理的不太好看啊……这样能接受么？;w;01:12:026 (4,3) - 正好可以stack
SPOILER
之后的01:14:541 (3,4) - 也正好可以借此发挥一下233:
SPOILER
感觉object之间还是要多一些联系比较好<3

Mei's Insane

00:02:505 (3,1) - 往下移一点和00:01:786 (1,2) - 的开头凑个等边三角吧【boom】
SPOILER
00:58:912 (1,1,1) - 不太好看呀……

placement看不太懂……我先skip了;w;mei别打我呀

Shore's Hard

00:01:966 (1,2) - blanket一下猴不猴？:D
SPOILER
00:50:469 (3) - 尾巴可以和00:49:032 (3) - stack而且这个slider也可以和00:50:110 (2) - blanket 哇:
SPOILER
01:02:505 (3) - 尾巴的stack稍微修一下:DDD
01:22:625 (1) - x240 y 198 ?
好diff

kwan的diff我肯定摸不动orz，skip

KaedekaShizuru

625 posts

Joined January 2013

KaedekaShizuru 2014-11-13T11:48:22+00:00

[General]
一开始还是别KIAI了

[Insane]
有种该放开的地方却没放开的感觉
00:48:673 - 别空着真的很别扭
00:49:571 - ↑
00:51:547 - ↑
00:52:445 - ↑
00:54:421 - ↑
00:55:319 - ↑
明明这些地方都有鼓点
01:05:918 (3) - 像这样的3/4slider真的好吗？鼓点明明在01:06:098 类似的slider还有很多
感觉有些原地连打可以稍微拉出一点距离或者干脆摆长串比如最后那串

[Mei's Insane]
别的挑不出什么非要挑刺的话只能说音效的存在感跟黄书前辈的比实在是太弱

[Shore's Hard]
00:36:098 (4,5,6) - 间距
00:46:697 (1,2) - 还是提一下吧 blanket
00:50:469 (3) - 弧度可以适当小一点？看上去像是没包好又感觉并不是去包

[KwaN's Normal]
00:28:373 - 貌似是无用的绿线
00:59:990 - ↑
01:29:720 - 最后闪一下KIAI貌似没啥必要

[YoshinoSakura's Easy]
00:44:182 (4) - 在00:44:900结束会不会更好一些

美丽

Atrue

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1,017 posts

Joined July 2012

Topic Starter

Atrue 2014-11-16T11:01:00+00:00

KaedekaShizuru wrote:
[General]
一开始还是别KIAI了还。。行吧？

[Insane]
有种该放开的地方却没放开的感觉
00:48:673 - 别空着真的很别扭
00:49:571 - ↑
00:51:547 - ↑
00:52:445 - ↑
00:54:421 - ↑
00:55:319 - ↑
明明这些地方都有鼓点好好好改改改已经好多人都这么说了，那就改了
01:05:918 (3) - 像这样的3/4slider真的好吗？鼓点明明在01:06:098 类似的slider还有很多 hmm我觉得这个倒没啥太大问题
感觉有些原地连打可以稍微拉出一点距离或者干脆摆长串比如最后那串算惹

And fixed Yoshinosakura's diff

OblivioN wrote:
Insane
00:02:864 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 也许是受了妹儿的影响，觉得stack的三连不太好看<3，可以试试这样
SPOILER
QAQ 我觉得stack没错。。。
00:04:301 (5,1,2) - 这里的节奏可以做的和前面不同，变化多好玩点啊w 例如:00:04:840 (2) - 放远一点可以跳一下 fixed
00:09:241 (4,1,2,3) - 这个flow虽然很顺……不过我更喜欢这样的排列 <3:
SPOILER
顺便注意下00:09:870 (3) - 是ctrl g过的这样下一个4就不好放了
这部分大概是这样的感觉:
00:12:745 (3) - 这个的头和00:11:487 (1) - 的头stack很好啊主要是，stack也没那么好看的样子，滑条样式也是不一样，包括还要改pattern
00:48:134 (1,2,1,2) - 00:51:008 (1,2,1,2) - 这两段……感觉就这样跟vocal有些空了，试试这种节奏呢:00:53:882 (1,2,3) - 这里也是XD 打破了对称并且让滑条结束在白线上，我觉得不合适。。
01:01:068 (1,2,3) - 01:05:379 (1,2,3,4) - 为什么都是kiai里的3/4slider+note 可是间距不一样呢？有点小好奇 fixed
01:07:714 (4,5,6,7,8) - kiai里面连打果然还是分开比较刺激<3 QAQ 不晓得怎么分。。
01:07:714 (4,5,6,1) - 咦，这里应该是stack的么？虽然看不太出来 hmm...?
01:12:565 (1,2) - 这两个处理的不太好看啊……这样能接受么？;w;01:12:026 (4,3) - 正好可以stack
SPOILER
之后的01:14:541 (3,4) - 也正好可以借此发挥一下233:
SPOILER
伴随而来的是3,4间距突然增加。。
感觉object之间还是要多一些联系比较好<3 你书的队

Thaaaaaanks!

IamKwaN

osu! Alumni

3,905 posts

Joined August 2012

IamKwaN 2014-11-17T12:33:10+00:00

If not mentioned, it's fixed.

Regraz

01:14:002 (1) - Curve it for more appealing pattern? curve 01:13:283 (4) - instead lol

Sellenite

pro ;w;

OblivioN

kwan的diff我肯定摸不动orz，skip ;w;

KaedekaShizuru

00:28:373 - 貌似是无用的绿线 slidertick
00:59:990 - ↑ ^
01:29:720 - 最后闪一下KIAI貌似没啥必要炫酷

EDIT: Also fixed Kibb's mod.
@Kloyd: i dont NC is necessary here
Thanks for mods guys.
@ITer: 00:23:343 - 這裡的歌詞 Rose漏了s了你看標題

SPOILER

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116,146,56756,6,0,B|111:83|111:83|74:35,2,120,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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258,357,61427,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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468,204,62505,6,0,L|348:204,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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liangv587

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liangv587 2014-11-18T04:55:10+00:00

总之黄书先pr

[Insane]
00:01:607 - 00:02:505 (5) - 00:04:481 - 加whistle，00:02:954 (2,3) - 00:03:313 (5,6) - 加whistle，感觉好听些而已
00:17:864 - 加个圈
00:34:301 (3,4) - 这两个换下位置，su be te ga tsu me da(差不多这样读的吧）重音在tsu上，没在ga上
01:23:343 (1) - 这个稍微移下来点，320,152，也就是01:21:188 (1) - 的位置，然后01:23:343 (1,1,1) - 这三个首尾相连
01:26:577 (3,4,5,6,7) - 可以摆朵花（这条是坑

[Mei's Insane]
00:08:613 (3) - 00:14:361 (5) - 没减速00:11:487 (1) - 这一个减速有点奇怪，统一要好些
00:12:116 - 这里N音效突兀，可以选中尾巴shift + e，也可以把下条绿线提到这里来
00:45:080 (9) - 删了吧，前面都空的00:42:206 -

[Shore's Hard]
这么难不能dt啦
低难度真的没啥可说的

最后发现，offset应该+10左右吧，以insane为例，od8的情况下原来offset acc 95，+10之后97

Kibbleru

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Kibbleru 2014-11-20T01:15:49+00:00

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[Insane]

00:05:738 (1,2) - i think a SV slow will be fitting here o-o
00:58:912 (1,2) - ^
00:25:140 (1,2,3) - sorta nazi maybe make them appear more evenly spaced? owo just seems to look better imo
SPOILER
01:03:942 - this cymbol crash is really strong and should be mapped out
01:09:691 - ^
01:26:936 (7) - optional, nc?
00:59:631 - finish?
00:04:840 - ^
01:04:301 (2,4) - these should have finishes same with 01:03:942 - if you decide to map it out
01:10:050 (2,1) - ^
01:16:876 - ^

[Mei]

00:05:738 (1,1) - hmm instead of decreasing the volume, to silence these slider ends, i would actually recommend setting it to soft sampleset and set additions to w/e they should be
SPOILER
00:10:589 (1,2) - swap nc, the stronger beat is on 00:10:768 (2) -
00:17:235 (5) - consider nc? the combo gets a bit long cuz of the amount of circles or you can nc 00:17:415 (6) - to follow vocals better
00:32:325 (4) - nc here for the downbeat o-o?
01:06:457 (4,2) - they overlap a bit space out?

[Hard]

00:01:427 (4,1,2) - spacing? o-o or at least make it bigger from 4 to 1 since 1 is a stronger beat than 2
01:04:301 - finish?
01:04:661 - ^
01:10:050 - ^

[wtf bakwan again?]

00:18:493 - i really wish u mapped this out

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DeletedUser_1574070 2014-11-22T08:09:55+00:00

YoshinoSakura

00:05:738 (1) - remove whistle
00:15:080 (1) - itll get better shape when u move 5th dot onto 176:90
00:20:828 - begin a spinner from here 00:20:828 -
00:31:966 (2,3) - seems a bit confusing.00:31:966 (2) - 331:161 / 00:32:325 (3) - ctrlH and rotate 90' and put 401:213 / 00:33:403 (4) - 433:9
00:44:182 (4) - remove clap on head and put at the end.
01:01:068 (3) - ctrl H and rotate for -25' for better flow
01:16:517 - with here 01:16:158 (4) - 1/2 slider is needed (both)

KwaN

01:23:343 (2,3) - NC!

Shore

longtimenosee dude

00:02:146 (2) - blanket?
00:57:834 (5,1,2) - combine this pattern with semistack?
01:02:146 (4,3) - stack
01:04:301 (3) - 406:65 for better shape
01:26:217 (4) - NC

Mei

00:15:798 (1,2,3,4) - i think this jump is too drastic consider reducing spacing.
00:22:265 (5) - NC plz!
01:26:936 (6) - NC

Insane

00:13:643 (6) - NC
00:47:235 (3,4) - in this case.... reduce the spacing of this semistack and put NC
00:58:912 (1,2) - i think whistles on the head should be removed or converted into additions->soft
01:19:301 (4,5) - consider stacking these
01:26:577 (3,4,5,6,7) - consider unstacking these like what u did on 01:25:499 (1,2,3,4,5) - but u can reduce your spacing.

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