1. Hard (2,64 stars, 267 notes)
2. Insane (3,54 stars, 408 notes)
3. oko's Normal (1,66 stars, 177 notes)

• 1. Put Circle Size in 4
  2. 00:53:763 - NC?
  3. 01:45:455 - ^ ?
  4. 01:49:148 - ^
  5. 00:59:301 (1) - remove clap www
  
  [Insane]
  
  
  • 1. 00:45:225 (4,5,6) - this could become a bit overmap D:
    Sorry for my
  shit short mod
  Good map and Song ps
  Star for you~

Okoratu wrote:

MOVE TO PENDING ASAP HUE DONE !

General

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1. Hi here's the GD and a mod - Yeah \o/ thk~
2. add me to tags - Done
3. that's just the result of a quick google search but maybe you could use this for sneaking some tags, idk. - Add some tags.

Insane

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1. pains me to say this but maybe AR8 would be better for this diffspread .-. - You know what ? Let's go for 8.5 ^^
2. the whistle thing goes for this too (see the hard) - Ok
3. 00:07:609 (1) - is the sliderwhistle on this track your intention? (click the slidertrack and remove that whistle if it isnt) - Was a fail. Removed !
4. 00:18:686 (1,2) - could you make these 2 blankets have the same gap? - Easy ^^
   
   Example

   
5. 00:38:532 (4,5,6,7) - this is like really forced, disregard this stack and make a proper curve it's more pleasant to look at ! - Fix
6. 00:38:994 (1,2) - avoid overlap plox it's unnecessary - Fix
7. 00:44:071 (5,6,1) - how about an even DS between those 3 objects? - Fix
8. 00:59:301 (1) - whistlefinish kthx - Add missing wistle.
9. 01:48:225 (5) - could have these blanket - Fix
10. 01:50:532 (8) - would split these up in 2 sliders this is kinda anticlimactic right now - Ok fix hope it's good.

Hard

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1. CS 3.5 for a better diffspread i guess (my normal is CS 3 so the hard could use 3.5?)
   should need more objects in the beginning, this is nearly as easy as my Normal.... Lol, i guess that's a bit too much 1/1 rhythm you could do things like 00:06:686 (2,3,1) - more often here imo[/color] - I add some of them. Dunno if it's enough.
2. 00:01:148 - , 00:02:994 - , 00:04:840 (3) - , 00:06:686 (2) - , 00:08:532 (2) - , 00:10:378 (5) - whistles owo - Fix
3. 00:05:763 (1,2) - is this the same slider ? Because i don't think it is, could look better if those were the same - Shit was not ^^', fix.
4. 00:11:301 (1,2,3,4) - totally not recycling patterns (huehuehuehuehue) - Change a little but i like it XD
5. 00:18:686 (1,2,3) - HNNG this is formally asking for a double blanket! - Haha, ok fix ^^
   
   hnnnnng

   
   and
   
6. 00:27:917 (1) - could >maybe< be better as an 1/2 slider, try it and if it's not, neglect this - Nice i add it.
7. 00:28:840 (3) - i thought this was obvious what i'd suggest if you looked at the insane :O - God yeah you right !
   
   ttt

   
8. 00:34:840 (3) - try to keep your sliders 3 point if you do that i'm positive you can achieve the same effect without having it budge that way - Fix
   
   Example

   
9. also 00:34:840 (3,4) - avoid the overlap while you're at it - Fix too
10. 00:38:994 (1) - move it to x=186 for an more even pattern - Fix
11. 00:59:301 (1) - whistlefinish only plox - Fix
12. 01:14:071 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - the whole movement that this pattern gives you is a bit awkward imo, how about CRTL+J for 01:14:994 (3,3) - ? - Ok
13. 01:19:148 (7) - why not the same as 01:20:994 (7) - ? - Fix
14. 01:28:609 (5,6,1) - the part starting here has inconsistent hitsounding and could use more whistles imo! - Little fix but seems ok for me.
15. 01:32:532 (1,2) - these two look so cool! - Thanks
16. 01:38:532 - i think this sound should be empathized with an object you have to hit - Fix
17. 01:45:455 (5,7) - could be more similar lol - Was thinking why i didn't do this earlier but fix ^^'
18. 01:47:301 (1,3) - CRTL+G twice for both! - Ok...^^'
19. 02:01:840 - add a bar with 5% volume, that's no issue since there is no real music there anymore and thus the slider should be as quiet as possible - 50% is not enough ? Well fixed.

Raisa12 wrote:

Hi~

[oko's Normal]

1. It's okay ._. - Okay

[Hard]

• 1. Put Circle Size in 4 - 3.5
  2. 00:53:763 - NC? - Ok
  3. 01:45:455 - ^ ? - Ok
  4. 01:49:148 - ^ - Ok
  5. 00:59:301 (1) - remove clap www - Fix
  
  [Insane]
  
  
  • 1. 00:45:225 (4,5,6) - this could become a bit overmap D: - Maybe but I won't touch it to keep it constant with rhythm of kiai time.
    Sorry for my
  shit short mod
  Good map and Song ps - Thanks for mod
  Star for you~ <3

pishifat wrote:

m4mzor - Ok captain !

so you know how i posted in your queue when i did m4m things with okoratu... well i don't want to double post so let's just imagine i did another post. same map as on the queue for m4mings just differnet person - Well seems legit.

general

1. you should notice that insane has almost no preparation time before the first note, so you gonna need audioleadin. on the 5th line of your .osu files, add some number between 1500-2000 in the place where you do things - really good point -> 1500
   
2. applies for nozhomi diffs: for the first hitsound section (the bpm marker) you may want to lower it so that it's not louder than the section at 00:14:994 (1) - . the custom hitnormal sound at the second section is a lot quieter than the one in the beginning and it's weird having soft part loud and loud part quiet. if you really want to keep the beginning loud, you could increase the volume at 00:14:994 (1) - like oko's difficulty. whichever one you like more - I prefer lower the first part -> 30%
3. not that it really matters, but your preview point is unsnapped :/ - Oh...well fix.
4. your background resolution is not-osu-approved but someone will come fix that soon, so don't worry about it - Wow didn't see this. Fixed I hope.
5. if this is used for some league thing, you may want to put that in the tags/source (i dunno which since i dunno specifics about the song origin blahblah) - I don't really know either. It was used for it but i can't consider it like a source or tag. So will see with further mods.

insane

1. in general, spacing has a lot of inconsistency type things when moving from sliders to other objects in 1/4 rhythms. what i mean by this is you've got half of your 1/4 sliderstuffs like 00:57:225 (9,10,1,2,3) - where they're overlapping, then places 00:44:994 (2,3,4,5,6) - where the 1/4 rhythms are jumps. they're the same rhythms with different spacing and it screws with my head. another thing that is sort of an overall thing is that a lot of the sliderbodies are shaped really oddly, especially around 01:20:071 (3) - . i mention them a few times in the actual mod too, but in the places that i don't, i probably should have - Well for spacing i don't know if it's really a so big problem (some cases got problem) but I'll check. And for sliders, well i'll see but not looks so bad for me ^^'.
2. 00:07:148 (7,8,1) - spacing with these felt kind of weird. it's like there's a line between them, but having the distance between 7,8 being double that of 8,1 feels really wrong. i tried swtiching 00:06:917 (6) - with 00:07:378 (8) - and that issue was fixed cuz angles and spacing and flow and everything - Well 2nd time it's point out so fix.
3. 00:08:071 (2,4) - tail overlap ewwwww - I stack them correctly.
4. 00:09:917 (2,3) - felt kind of weird that the flow between 00:07:609 (1,2) - and 00:09:455 (1,2) - are the same, but the flow for 00:08:071 (2,3,4) - and 00:09:917 (2,3,4) - are different. i'm thinking if you moved 3 to the right more and rotated it a bit you could have the same flow as 00:08:071 (2,3,4) - with consistent spacing - Fix
   
   so same flow things in both combos

   
5. 00:13:148 (1,2,3,4) - may just be me, but i'm not a fan of these slidershapes. as for alternatives... my taste isn't the same as your taste, so i don't really know. something like 01:06:686 (1,2) - except rotated would look better i'd say - Sorry but want to keep them.
6. 00:17:532 (3,5) - these aren't perfectly lined up 5 shoud be at x164 - Fix
7. 00:33:225 (8,1) - the way that these are facing each otehr maeks for some kind of awkward flow, which accompanied by the big jump there isn't too nice. i tried ctrl+G, ctrl+H, and repositioning 8 so it flows a bit better, but it causes an overlap with 00:33:917 (2) - so it may not be the ideal choice. i think the 1/4 slider jumps should flow more clearly than other places since they're a lot faster, so if you don't do it like this, you should find some other way to do it - was looking at it and the solution appear before i read your example so good choice.
   
   original

   
   change

   
8. 00:34:378 (3) - uh..something's wrong with this anchor. if you try moving it, you'll see that it works in the way that multi-anchor sliders do. you should probably re-make the slider so it uses the fancy anchor thingy and that way it'll blanket with 2 a lot better - Don't really understand but i fix blanket.
9. 00:37:609 (2,3) - the way these flow seems off. it's like the flow is close to what it was from 1 -> 2, but not quite. best fix would be to either rotate 2 clockwise a little bit or move 3 lower (like on 1's head). image points out the "issue" - Take 2nd solution.
   
   current layout with flowyness labeled

   
10. 00:47:532 (6,7) - moving from a straight slider into another straight slider at a slightly different angle -- looks off for sure. easiest way to fix it would be to just change 6 into two circles cuz of that thing i said about spacing in the beginning and yeah - I agree.
11. 00:54:801 (4,5,6) - starting 1/4 sliders on 1/4 beats. not cool. if you were to move the reverse to be the first slider thing here it would make it so that the 1/4 start on white/red ticks, as they should for emphasis - Ok was not easy but found an pretty good way to remap it.
    
    rhytthhthm without starting stuff on 1/4

    
12. 00:59:417 (1,1,2) - seems weird to have the spinner end on the downbeat at 01:02:994 - the spinner doesn't have much emphasis and considering the bar lines (big white ticks) should have the most emphasis, as stated by your whistle hitsound thingy, it would be best to have an object there. you could just end the spinner on the prior red tick and have a circle in the middle of hte grid or something (if you do change remember to take the whistle off the spinner and put it on the circle) - Fix
    
    passive spinner bleuruhg

    
13. 01:03:225 (1,2) - even if you don't change the previous thing^, you should at least blanket these as if there were a circle in the center of the grid. the spinner is like an ultimate blanket machine and you are not blanketting the ultimate blanket you must be a bad person. - Fix too
    
    blanket the ultimate green line blanket machine

    
14. 01:12:225 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - your current pattern here makes it really hard to recognize that this is all 1/3 rhythms. for something like this you really should emphasize each white tick with your patterns and rhythms, or else it just looks like the usual 1/4 rhythms. so reverse sliders, triangles, whatever you need to do for this do. just don't end sliders on the white ticks or i will personally nuke you - OKAY DON'T NUKE ME PLS !!!! Fix
15. 01:14:532 (2) - copy paste of 1, yeah, but it doesn't blanket 1 very well because of that. you did the right thing with 01:16:378 (2) - - Change because previous point. Not a blanket anymore.
16. 01:17:301 (4,1) - would be better if these were the same shape as 01:14:994 (3,4) - the current one is more angled than usual and doesn't fit in - I just rework them a little.
17. 01:21:340 (6) - nazitime -- so this should probably be moved down to y=128 so it's closer to the same angle as the tail of 01:20:994 (5) - and the head of 01:21:455 (1) - (which are just about flat). the sliders don't really curve upwards enough to justify having 6 higher than them by that much and i'm picky - Fix
18. 01:34:378 (1,2,3,4,5) - considering how perfectly flat most of your patterns are, you should make this one flat too. so pretty much make 2,4 and 1,5 touch the lines in the same placesasdf - Fix
    
    lineeees

    
19. 01:39:686 (6) - losing all emphasis on the big white tick by having it be the end of a slider. the player should be hitting an object (circle or sliderhead) at that point or it's not emphasized too well. you did this everywhere else so i assume you know what i mean - Yep and fix.
20. 01:46:378 (6,7,8) - weird having spacing different mid-stream like this - Wth happend here ? Fix !
21. 01:56:301 (9) - similar thing about losing emphasis on the downbeat becuase end of a slider, except this one i hate more because moving from sliders to streams that start on 1/4 ticks feel gross. like i want to start the stream on the downbeat because that's where it's loudest, but then i have to wait for a slider to end then start streaming on a circle 1/4 after the emphasized part. screw explaination make 9 a circle - Fix !
22. may want to silence the spinner at the end since it's a fade out thing in the song and your spinner is saying nope with its current volume. hard and oko's diff do it right so see those - Fix

aghrd

1. 00:14:763 (6) - i'd say move this down a bit so it makes a curve in the same way that you did 00:23:301 (3,4,1) - and 00:26:071 (1,2,3) - and 00:16:840 (1,2,3) - and everywhere else on the entire map - Fix
2. 00:16:609 (4) - ^ - WAS HARD TO FIX ! (cause of damn spacing)
3. 00:34:840 (3) - same thign as 00:34:378 (3) - on insane. broken slider makes the blanket broken too - Fix
4. 00:46:148 (4,1) - when having jumps on this hard difficulty that are breaking distance spacing, it would help to have the objects flow extremely smoothly like they did at the jump here 00:43:725 (3,4,5) - or be obvious because of pattern stuff like 01:32:532 (1,2) - . if it's not like that reading it can be kind of weird, since you usually see breaks in flow during breaks in spacing - Well; I hope itt's better now.
5. 00:59:417 (1,1) - same thing i said about passive spinner on insane. adding an object in the middle of your triangle here would work for that thingya - Prefer do a square finally.
6. 01:47:301 (1,3) - rather... umm.. unappealing sliders i guess. not as many or as bad as in insane, but yeah, these aren't very good looking :/ - Sorry but i like my sliders

a b

1. 00:11:301 (1) - Maybe move it to (148;208) to keep consistent DS which is required to rank map.
2. 00:18:686 (1) - Hiding things like this and above is not a good way to map in easier diffs. Highly recommended to change! I offer to move the slider to (272;259) position and change the place of the last point to (173;225) to make consistant DS but to not destroy the accurate construction.
3. 00:20:071 (3) - Let's change a little bit this slider to make it more blanket to the previous slider, ok?
4. 00:20:532 (1) - Could you change this slider a bit? Maybe move it to (72;276) and change some points in it? I advice to move them: 2nd point (120;284), 3rd (168;256). And maybe place 00:21:455 (2) - at (255;183) You know, a better flow and spacing.
5. 00:25:840 (3,1,3,1) - Again - please, avoid overlapping like this in the easier difficulties. It should be more readable for newer players. ;<
6. 00:31:609 (1) - This time I think this would be avoided in this way shown on a puush: http://puu.sh/9ErnK/5771db8518.jpg What do you think? Maybe you've got some different idea?
7. 00:35:301 (1) - Maybe transform it a bit to make it rankable? For example change places of the points: the 1st point of the slider would be placed at (256;108), second (299;79), and third (359;91). And now DS is OK.
8. 00:40:609 (3,1,2) - Hmmm... again - replacing and modifying them... (3) would be at (76;108), (1) - 1st point (124;72), 2nd (180;64), 3rd (223;39). And (2) would be placed at (316;108). Do you have any other idea, or may it be?
9. 00:42:686 (1) - Maybe rotate for -35 degrees, but it has to be CLOSER to the previous note!
10. 00:43:609 (2,3,1) - Here spacing is almost perfect. Just work with the accurate DS and resnap a bit.
11. 00:48:225 (1) - Just rotate a bit to make it go from top to the down and move it higher to make it look like this or something similar: http://puu.sh/9EsMm/cc584cfd84.jpg Then it will look better.
12. 00:53:301 (2,1) - Improve the spacing here, it's ALMOST perfect.
13. 00:55:609 (1) Again that confusing overlap ;<
14. 00:59:301 (1) - Please, move it to remove that overlap
15. 01:04:840 (1) - Move it to (136;192) so you won't even have to fix DS here.
16. 01:30:686 (1,2) - Maybe rotate (1) a bit and move to remove the confusing overlap and just improve (2) to make a beautiful blanket-something-like?
17. 01:32:532 (1,2) - Maybe move (1) to (240;220) and move (2) to (332;48) to make a better spacing? :3
18. 01:47:301 (1,2) - Maybe move (1) to (400;320 and (2) to (452;116) to make a better spacing? :3
19. 01:52:840 (1) - Move it please to (484;120) to avoid that overlap, please. ;_;

1. 00:17:763 (3) - Maybe move this to (172;80) to make a better flow. Now it's not as good as it could be I think.
2. 00:23:994 (4,1) - Maybe make a blanket here because I think it wasn't meant to be that, but I think that'd look really cool ;D Also if you do that I think you could move 00:24:225 (1) - to (316;332) or somewhere else to make a better spacing with another note.
3. 00:51:455 (4,5,1) - I don't know what to do with that, but it doesn't really look so neat... Maybe if you move the notes a bit it would look nicer? :c
4. 00:52:609 (2,3) - Maybe move (2) to (232;24) and (3) to (172;88)? If I well remember it should be a bit longer than it is now (you know, that straight slider).
5. 00:53:532 (4) - Maybe place the circle on the top of the next note?

Krfawy wrote:

Hard

1. 00:17:763 (3) - Maybe move this to (172;80) to make a better flow. Now it's not as good as it could be I think. - Well okay.
2. 00:23:994 (4,1) - Maybe make a blanket here because I think it wasn't meant to be that, but I think that'd look really cool ;D Also if you do that I think you could move 00:24:225 (1) - to (316;332) or somewhere else to make a better spacing with another note. - Ok for blanket, but i didn't keep this placement for slider because flow was not really good.
3. 00:51:455 (4,5,1) - I don't know what to do with that, but it doesn't really look so neat... Maybe if you move the notes a bit it would look nicer? :c - Move it just a little.
4. 00:52:609 (2,3) - Maybe move (2) to (232;24) and (3) to (172;88)? If I well remember it should be a bit longer than it is now (you know, that straight slider). - Well no. If i do this I lost flow on my next pattern (and destroy it too).
5. 00:53:532 (4) - Maybe place the circle on the top of the next note? - I didn't change previous point so no (and don't find it so good ;w;)

That's all I can advice. I like it. :3 <3

Good Luck and tell me if something anything is changed! Like always.

LVU Bluddy! o3o Yeeeeeeeeeeeeee Thanks~

pishifat wrote:

oko

1. 00:05:763 (4,5) - should have the same amount of curviness. preferrably the way you did 5 cuz 4 is puke ► kkkk
2. 00:11:301 (1) - 00:13:148 (1) - since you put the tick soundthing on 00:07:609 (1) - you should probably have it on these two for consistency in this section before 00:14:994 (1) - ► nop contrary to the other two the first one has another bass like sound on that tick -> tick hitsounding and the rest goes without that
3. 00:38:994 (1,2) - looks like these are supposed to be symmetrical across the x axis, so do that. here's some lines to show you how much you suck ► asdfasdfasdf
   
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4. 00:48:225 (1) - something about dis shape. place the grey anchor exactly between the head and the you (aka the red anchor) so you get a nice circular thingy ► didded i think
5. 01:06:686 (1) - how2blanket #2 - the blanket's revenge ► that's not even supposed to be one
6. 01:26:994 (1,2) - when not accompanied by that bass guitar thing this hitsound thing sounds bad. like change worthy on those 2 objects. not sure exactly what to change it to, but some other hitsound could emphasize and fit a lot better i think :/ ► moved green line so that only the object with a bass has the bass - you get this?
7. 01:35:762 (3) - aimod says this is broken so idunnofixit ► howww
8. 01:56:532 (1) - im in love ► he he hue

a ► k

Krfawy wrote:

Normal

• 
  ► So since your Kudo earned is 65 now i feel like i have to comment on this more thouroughly because for this amount of Kudo this mod is arguably poorly done.

1. 00:11:301 (1) - Maybe move it to (148;208) to keep consistent DS which is required to rank map. ► first of all i don't see how stacks are harder to do in a normal than spaced out notes, also the DS i chose for this map (1.2x does NOT really support placing 1/2 notes next to one another) so i did try to move it there but this doesn't look neat imo and it does completely destroy the purpose of this stack as well as the look of this pattern. It's not that i'm particularly passionate about this map it's just that I don't see a point in a suggestion which completely ignores the whole style of this map. the spacing before and after this pattern is 1.21x which is consistently done throughout this with only one exception which you also pointed out as an issue
2. 00:18:686 (1) - Hiding things like this and above is not a good way to map in easier diffs. Highly recommended to change! I offer to move the slider to (272;259) position and change the place of the last point to (173;225) to make consistant DS but to not destroy the accurate construction. ► So let me show you this picture
   It's a nice picture, i like this picture

   
   as you can see the first slider is blue and the next circle is blue as well. the slider underneath is bright red, right? so you have a blue approachcircle and a red one closing in on the same object! So i don't really get how this is hidden it's a blue thing changing into a red thing, it's like really obvious where this is gonna go and therefore i conclude that it is not really hidden but more of a straightforward way to place it. ALSO THE WHOLE REST OF THE MAP UTILIZES THIS VERY PATTERN IF YOU FAIL IT ONCE WHICH I DOUBT YOU DO (i had a 600k guy play it and he passed ez) YOU WILL GET IT THE 2ND TIME THIS APPEARS
3. 00:20:071 (3) - Let's change a little bit this slider to make it more blanket to the previous slider, ok? ► A blanket is not really possible for these because the Distance snap of 1.2x demands them to be overlapping each other. So if you can do a blanket which overlaps those both sliders and blankets them, i would be tempted to give it a try but also i think that this one is kind of ok the way it flows into the other objects so i will not change this
4. 00:20:532 (1) - Could you change this slider a bit? Maybe move it to (72;276) and change some points in it? I advice to move them: 2nd point (120;284), 3rd (168;256). And maybe place 00:21:455 (2) - at (255;183) You know, a better flow and spacing. ► I just rotated it by -5 degrees because that's like all that this would need in order to have a more smooth flow line, also I and many others you mod for would appreciate you to have boxes containing your pictures so that you can illustrate your points in the mod and they can actually click just one spoilerbox and see what you're talking about, also examples you give that way will be much easier to recreate by having a concrete example of what you're talking about.
5. 00:25:840 (3,1,3,1) - Again - please, avoid overlapping like this in the easier difficulties. It should be more readable for newer players. ;< ► I already answered this in-depth and gave my reasons for thinking it is ok, if you can prove my otherwise by citing the ranking criteria or any other guideline which clearly states that you should break the DS for avoiding overlaps or that you should unstack everything in a normal i would love to read it and then change my stuff up but i don't think that exists
6. 00:31:609 (1) - This time I think this would be avoided in this way shown on a puush: http://puu.sh/9ErnK/5771db8518.jpg What do you think? Maybe you've got some different idea? ► first of all i already pointed out how this is not an issue and secondly you don't even name what you don't like here but have me play a guessing game of what could be wrong and what could be meant by this suggestion. also this suggestion overwrites my style a bit (notice how no 1/1 slider in the entire thing has only one red anchor without having a curve afterwards? well, i do) If you give suggestions like this mappers aren't very likely to take them because nobody likes to have somebody else just basically say "your idea is bad. Here have this this is a lot better" WITHOUT having pointed out (1) why his own idea sucks (2) why yours is supposedly better. People tend to take well explained suggestions more often because they can see the thoughts you put behind them and can then evaluate if your thought process makes sense with their mapping and THEN decide if it is an issue that should be addressed within the answer of this mod or not!
7. 00:35:301 (1) - Maybe transform it a bit to make it rankable? ► WHAT THE? Explain how my go about this pattern is unrankable at first and then elaborate on what you'd do this way of going about it makes absolutely no sense For example change places of the points: the 1st point of the slider would be placed at (256;108), second (299;79), and third (359;91). And now DS is OK. ► provide. pictures. as i can see you know how to use puush, so this is not the issue actually it's just you being to lazy to use

   [box=fancy title][img]url[/img][/box]

   or anything similar to get your point across
8. 00:40:609 (3,1,2) - Hmmm... again - replacing and modifying them... (3) would be at (76;108), (1) - 1st point (124;72), 2nd (180;64), 3rd (223;39). And (2) would be placed at (316;108). Do you have any other idea, or may it be? ► .........
9. 00:42:686 (1) - Maybe rotate for -35 degrees, but it has to be CLOSER to the previous note! ► because i partly implemented the suggestion you had for 00:20:532 (1) - and this does the exact same smooth movement into the next note i will not change this up without any other reasons
10. 00:43:609 (2,3,1) - Here spacing is almost perfect. Just work with the accurate DS and resnap a bit. ► could you not nazi on spacing differences of 0.02x at max those are not noticable ingame and thus are just ubernazi stuff which the editor then continues to fuck up on its own anyway (some notes are resnapped to other points once you save so meh)
11. 00:48:225 (1) - Just rotate a bit to make it go from top to the down and move it higher to make it look like this or something similar: http://puu.sh/9EsMm/cc584cfd84.jpg Then it will look better. ► I like the way it looks now pretty much since it varies up the slidershapes a bit and also doesn't flow that badly, i see no reason to change this just by being told "this will look better" since the looks of a map are purely subjective my opinion is allowed and should differ from every other individual's opinion on beaty because if it didn't all mapping would be the same 0815 gray stuff and there would be no individuality in any beatmap like ever
12. 00:53:301 (2,1) - Improve the spacing here, it's ALMOST perfect. ► 00:51:456 (3,2) - see this note and the other slider, guess what they do while sacrificing the DS by 0.1x (which also is arguably not really noticable ingame) indeed. if you haven't got the answer until now: they stack.
13. 00:55:609 (1) Again that confusing overlap ;< ► could you please stop pointing this out
14. 00:59:301 (1) - Please, move it to remove that overlap ► that's called stacking for these 2 notes also i'm not sure if i should do this or not since i like the way this chorus stops in the same place and transitions in a spinner so i won't do that for now, but might reconsider this in the future because this is arguably the hardest point of this map and thus could be target for some other mods aiming at decreasing the difficulty but for now i'll keep it. If more people think that this stack is really an issue i will change it if they don't i won't.
15. 01:04:840 (1) - Move it to (136;192) so you won't even have to fix DS here. ► please. you should have noticed that this is this maps system, so do give me a valid reason preferably proven by ranking criteria or guidelines to not use the stacking overlaps. they. are. easy.
16. 01:30:686 (1,2) - Maybe rotate (1) a bit and move to remove the confusing overlap and just improve (2) to make a beautiful blanket-something-like? ► . also putting emoticons after each and every line does not only look a bit unprofessional (if overused) but it's also a bit annoying to read a suggestion which goes against your system with an additional smiley winking at you.
17. 01:32:532 (1,2) - Maybe move (1) to (240;220) and move (2) to (332;48) to make a better spacing? :3 ► stacks are bad spacing kk
18. 01:47:301 (1,2) - Maybe move (1) to (400;320 and (2) to (452;116) to make a better spacing? :3 ► .
19. 01:52:840 (1) - Move it please to (484;120) to avoid that overlap, please. ;_; ► this mod looks only so detailed and much on the outside but is actually the same thing over and over again.

Except those overlaps, this normal is AWESOME! >:3 Keep coming baby! ^o^ ► I have no idea what this means or why you add it to each and every of your posts but i guess that's not my decision, that's yours
► If you want to make your mods more useful you could adhere to some of these guidelines:

1. Suggest a thing that is oftentimes done in the same way throughout a map only once or twice because if the one you're modding for rejects the first one and two he is most likely to reject everything else as well
2. Do not overwrite the mappers style with your suggestions it's not only a quite forcful move (as you basically assume you are better than the mapper) it also almost never fits the map because it is indeed a different style
3. You should follow a general structure in your mod to make it more clear why you would want to see some things changed:
   
   1. Point out what the issues is
   2. Point out why it is even an issue
   3. Point out what could be done to fix it
   4. remember to choose a solution which fits the overall theme and style of the map
   Adhering to some pattern like this will make things like "maybe rotate for -35 degrees" more clearly because it points out the issue, why its an issue and provides a solution for said issue in the next step which is easier to understand and to read and to accept for the mapper
4. If your argument is a thing about rankability make sure you list your SOURCE for this argument because otherwise you will never get HanzeR to change some of his SlideRs (lollllll) because according to you and maybe even to peppy most of the overlaps he uses are considerably unrankable and if you cannot find anything about this being unrankable better not say it this way at all
5. almost never argumentate with anchors and their coordinates only as i already mentioned while answering this mod: Since you got puush and know how to use it it would be by far more apropiate to include several boxes containing images which you would suggest for patterns or whatever! it's just that these instructions are easier to follow then because you will actually see the outcome before going through the effort of making it yourself just to go like "no this makes no sense" / "no this does not look good at all" and then to undo everything you placed for about 10 mins again.

► Step it up, i think this pushes you into a more constructive and easier to understand way of modding and also increases the overall quality and readability of your mods. GL for the future and i actually accepted one suggestion partly..............

1. 01:17:763 (1) - changed this shape after talking about it with kihhou, kk

1. The jump in approach rate from Normal to Hard is too much (AR4 -> +3 -> AR7). Try using AR4.5 or even AR5 for the Normal difficulty. AR6 is by far too high for a Normal with this song.
2. You should uncheck letterbox during breaks as your beatmap does not feature any breaks.
3. Check your AI mod for "Audio Lead-in Conflicts"
4. You also need to uncheck Widescreen support as your beatmap does not feature a storyboard.

1. General: Hitsound volumes are really loud, especially for 00:00:225 -. Consider lowering it by 5%/10%/15%.
2. 00:01:609 (3) - Curve this slider to play nicer and for consistency with 00:05:301 (3) -.
3. 00:07:609 (1) - There is a slider tick hitsound here, so there should be a slider tick hitsound on 00:11:301 (1) - and 00:13:148 (1) - because they follow the same instrumental.
4. General: For parts like 00:14:994 -, consider using 80% for the base volume. 100% is a bit much and the hitsounds are much louder than the song itself.
5. For consistency with all your previous and next patterns, you should map 00:16:609 - and 00:23:994 -. If this feels a bit too much, then you should make the current pattern consistent (i.e: do this "skip of the beat" every 4th downbeat for the whole song).
6. 00:39:917 (2,3,1) - Two objects pointing in the same way like this can play a bit confusing. I suggest that you make it straight like your previous patterns or curve it like e.g: 00:30:686 (2,3,1) -.
7. 00:43:609 (2,3,1) - It would be nice if these 3 objects had a consistent Y-axis difference. The current is a bit off.
8. 00:47:301 (3,4,1) - Move this up a bit to e.g: x152 y:160 to flow nicer and help avoid confusion for the player (current is a bit too close). You may need to move some parts for distance snap.
   
   
   ~
9. 00:59:071 (4,1) - Instead of stacking two circles, you can try a 1/2 slider instead. Either works, but the 1/2 slider would be a bit easier.
10. 00:59:417 (1) - 100% volume on a spinner is really loud. Consider lowering it.
11. 01:02:994 - Follows the same instrumental as 00:00:225 -, but you gave it 100% volume. You should really add another inherited point and lower this number.
12. 01:17:763 (1) -, 01:19:609 (1) - I somehow hate these slider tick sounds so much. This is usually the sound that you hear when you hit an object, it shouldn't be in the middle of a slider, that's really confusing! Try using a different hitsound or removing the slider tick completely. Which brings me to my next point
13. 01:14:071 - Is extremely quiet. I strongly recommend that you do not use 100% volume for quiet parts. I found 70% to be a balance of hitsound and the song. 75% is also a reasonable choice.
14. 01:19:609 (1) - I see what you did here but I dislike forced slider curves like this so much. Maybe it would look nicer if you tried a re-map of 01:17:763 (1,2,1) - completely.
15. 01:21:455 (1,2) - Why curved sliders like this at a time like this? I hear no indication in the music that would call for a curved slider. If you are going to keep these, I think it would look nicer if it was symmetrical to the Y-axis instead of where it currently is. If you could re-map the previous pattern in which these objects were to be symmetrical across the Y-axis, that would be great.
16. Just something minor, but if you slightly move 01:36:225 (1,2,3) - then you can get it on the exact Y-axis, then move 01:38:071 (1,2) - so circle 2 stacks with the previous circle 2. Would make it play really well, especially when users have the default setting of Hit Lighting enabled.
17. 01:41:301 (3,1) - This kind of overlaps really bad with 01:39:455 (3) -. More so, it's as if this whole part at 01:38:994 (2,3,1,2,3,1) - is taking up the upper right side of the grid. Consider re-mapping to give more grid diversity and prevent the awkward overlap.
18. 01:45:455 (1) - This slider's end covers part of the slider track, which can be really confusing for the novice. You must fix this.
19. 01:48:686 (3) - Curve this slider for consistency with your next pattern.
20. 01:50:071 (2,3,1,2,3,1) - I personally think all these 1/2s are a bit long and may make the player go crazy. Your decision though.
21. Change the beat snap divisor to 1/6 before this gets ranked in memory of the One Sixth.

xLoupGarou wrote:

From xLoupGarou's Modding Queue

Nyan~MOD

*Shift+G to change the Grid Size that way it's easier to align notes
*Go to Notepad > Change the AudioLeadIn from 0 to 2000 to all Diffs - 1500

[Normal] - Saw with Oko so i make change for him.
AR - 6 - 5
HP Drain - 5 - 4
OD - 5 - Ok
00:16:840 Blanket? - No
00:18:686 ^ - No
00:33:455 ^- No
00:59:301 Remove the note - No
00:59:417 Move the Spinner here --> 00:59:301 then End here --> 01:02:532 - Ok


[Hard]
Circle Size - 4 - 3.5 for better diff spread.
HP Drain - 7
OD - 7
00:00:917 Add a note? - No
00:01:840 ^ - Yes
00:02:763 ^ - No
00:05:532 ^ & Apply NC - Ok for note but not NC.
00:05:763 Remove NC - So no.
00:06:455 Add a note - No i want to keep that rhythm.
00:08:301 ^ - Same reason.
00:49:378 ^ - If i do that, i change rhythm here.
00:51:225 ^ - No
00:59:301 Remove - For Normal i can understand, but here big tick need to be played.
00:59:417 Move here - 00:59:301 End here - 01:02:532 - So no.
01:04:609 Add a note - Ok
01:12:225 End spinner here - 01:13:840
01:15:686 Add a note w/ NC - No
01:17:532 Add a note - No
01:19:378 ^ - No
01:21:225 ^ - No
01:26:763 ^ - No
01:58:268 ^ - Ok
01:58:378 Remove - No
01:58:494 Move the Spinner here - 01:58:378 End it here - 02:02:071 - No

That's All
Good Luck~

Desperate-kun wrote:

• 
  General

1. "soft-sliderslide12" is completely unneeded. S:C12 is only used to change slidertick's hitsounding, but you can't affect the sliderslide within a slider, so this file is useless. - Will see with Oko.
2. Your Background is 1366x766, though the recommended size is 1366x768. Although it's just a minor change, it won't hurt to resize it this way. - AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
3. Currently, not all the diffs use Audio-Leadin 1500! Some use 0 instead. Please apply 1500 to all diffs, since the map starts immediately where the music starts. - Fix
4. You could add to the tags: "All-Stars 2014 League Of Legends Paris", since that seems to be where most people know this song from, so they can search after it and find it - Okay fix
5. Your combo-colours don't really fit the beautiful background. Try to give them a bit less chroma and don't use such a light blue, because it really doesn't look good. I made some better combo colours for you: - Wow thanks
   
   Picture + Code

   
   

   [Colours]
   Combo1 : 109,109,231
   Combo2 : 226,90,90
   Combo3 : 236,147,236
   Combo4 : 227,136,91

6. Disable Widescreen Support as well as Letterbox in Breaks, since your mapset doesn't have a storyboard or breaks. - Fix

• 
  Hard

1. Watch out to keep your spacing consistent! Actually, that's the major problem with this diff: It looks really untidy at some sections, because there are high spacing variations. Examples are 00:22:378 (1,2,3) + 00:19:609 (3,4,1) + 00:20:532 (1,2,3). This only applies to the spacing before and after circles, as these varations aren't really noticable when using sliders. So I'd recommend you to go through this diff and look at the spacings around circles, so you can make it more clean :3 - I fix your examples, and i check if i can fix other.
2. It seems that you forgot some NCs: 00:02:071 (3) + 00:09:455 (4) + 00:13:148 (4) + 00:35:301 (4) + 01:04:840 (5) + 01:08:532 (3) + 01:30:686 (4) + 01:34:378 (4) + 01:38:301 (4) + 01:41:763 (5) + 01:45:455 (5) - Fix
3. 00:05:763 (1,2) - The slidershapes don't really fit the calm music of the piano here. Either replace them with regular curved sliders or something, or atleast curve them like this a bit: - Ok i tried to reproduce them.
   
   Picture

   
4. 00:31:609 (1,2) - Again, those slidershapes seem very unfitting for this song. Either move the red anchor-point, so it is placed exactly in the middle of the sliders, or do it like this: - Like it. Fix !
   
   Picture

   
5. 00:34:840 (3) - You are missing a clap at the head. - Fix
6. 00:45:455 (3,4,1,2,3) - The spacing changes seem very random here. I'd highly recommend you to use consistent spacing here. - Was for symetry but i fix this.
7. 01:11:071 - You should consider adding a circle here, because of the loud guitar-like instrument in the background - Good point.
8. 01:38:994 (6) - This slider doesn't look very appealing and also the flow could be improved here. It's better to use a regular curved slider here. - Fix
   
   Picture

   
9. 01:45:455 (5,6,7) - Same issue about slidershapes... Try to fix it yourself, maybe based on the suggestions I've given before :b - Fix
10. 01:50:994 (1,2,3) - Same. - For me them are ok.
11. You really improved, especially with Hard diffs. It is very good. It might be a little repetetive at some parts, since you often use the very same rhythms, as well as patterns (you very often ctrl+g + ctrl+h 1/1-sliders), but if you fix the spacing inconsistencies as well as some slidershapes you'll be on a good way with this! - For spacing, I check and last I let fit with music i guess. And I change slidershapes. Thanks~

• 
  Insane

1. Although you improved, this diff still needs some work. Generally, you should care more about your consistency. You already have good rhythm consistency, but consistent distance spacing is also important in some aspects, especially for 1/4-streams. The distances of your streams have very much variation, which gives an untidy feel to the player. - All stream are now 0.5x !
2. Also, some of your slidershapes seem rather unappealing / not fitting to the song, but it's mostly the same shapes that I listed in the Hard diff, so you should know which ones I mean - But...I love them
3. 00:03:225 (4,5) - I'd reommend you to ctrl+g these, as currently your flow is pretty awkward, specifically the transition here 00:02:532 (2,3,4). The jump to (4) just doesn't feel intuitive. - Fix
4. 00:07:609 (1,2) - It looks really weird that you used two different slidershapes here. It would fit your style much better if you would have used a copy-pasted version for both sliders. - Why i didn't do this before ???????
5. 00:21:917 (5,6,1) - There is no reason not to make the spacing consistent here o: - Fix
6. 00:41:763 (3) - Ctrl+g on this would really improve the flow with the previous objects. - Fix
7. 01:09:917 (5) - I don't understand why you didn't use 1,0x spacing here. It would fit better, because you used this spacing before in this section - Dunno why too ^^'
8. 01:25:148 (1,2,3) - I don't like how (1) and (3) overlap each other. You might want to change this pattern, in oder to fix it? - Fix
9. This needs some more mods to get better, but I'm sure it'll be an awesome diff afterwards! It's very fun to play already :3 - Thanks :3

Good luck ^-^ I hope you liked my mod o:

Project Railgun wrote:

mod as requested

[General]

1. The jump in approach rate from Normal to Hard is too much (AR4 -> +3 -> AR7). Try using AR4.5 or even AR5 for the Normal difficulty. AR6 is by far too high for a Normal with this song. ► sounds reasonable, i have no clue what kind of setup is expected for a normal so i'll go with 5
2. You should uncheck letterbox during breaks as your beatmap does not feature any breaks. ► noz did that already
3. Check your AI mod for "Audio Lead-in Conflicts" ► i dunno fixit noz
4. You also need to uncheck Widescreen support as your beatmap does not feature a storyboard.► i think this already happened

[Okoratu]

1. General: Hitsound volumes are really loud, especially for 00:00:225 -. Consider lowering it by 5%/10%/15%. ► 45% is indeed better
2. 00:01:609 (3) - Curve this slider to play nicer and for consistency with 00:05:301 (3) -. ► Nope, i kind of alternate between those 2 ways of making those short sliders so i guess this is fine
3. 00:07:609 (1) - There is a slider tick hitsound here, so there should be a slider tick hitsound on 00:11:301 (1) - and 00:13:148 (1) - because they follow the same instrumental. ► Now that i removed those sliders this is indeed the case so i'm sorry for pishi who suggested the same
4. General: For parts like 00:14:994 -, consider using 80% for the base volume. 100% is a bit much and the hitsounds are much louder than the song itself. ► done
5. For consistency with all your previous and next patterns, you should map 00:16:609 - and 00:23:994 -. If this feels a bit too much, then you should make the current pattern consistent (i.e: do this "skip of the beat" every 4th downbeat for the whole song). ► yep redid these 2 somehow
6. 00:39:917 (2,3,1) - Two objects pointing in the same way like this can play a bit confusing. I suggest that you make it straight like your previous patterns or curve it like e.g: 00:30:686 (2,3,1) -. ► did the same straight thing
7. 00:43:609 (2,3,1) - It would be nice if these 3 objects had a consistent Y-axis difference. The current is a bit off. ► lelk
8. 00:47:301 (3,4,1) - Move this up a bit to e.g: x152 y:160 to flow nicer and help avoid confusion for the player (current is a bit too close). You may need to move some parts for distance snap. ► while the coordinates make no sense for the PIT you mentioned i did something similar as shown on your example picture
   
   
   ~ ► what.
9. 00:59:071 (4,1) - Instead of stacking two circles, you can try a 1/2 slider instead. Either works, but the 1/2 slider would be a bit easier. ► for now i guess either works
10. 00:59:417 (1) - 100% volume on a spinner is really loud. Consider lowering it. ► already happened as you mentioned that the first time
11. 01:02:994 - Follows the same instrumental as 00:00:225 -, but you gave it 100% volume. You should really add another inherited point and lower this number. ► a
12. 01:17:763 (1) -, 01:19:609 (1) - I somehow hate these slider tick sounds so much. This is usually the sound that you hear when you hit an object, it shouldn't be in the middle of a slider, that's really confusing! ► i wanna keep this for now if more people point out how it's confusing i'll remove x.x Try using a different hitsound or removing the slider tick completely. Which brings me to my next point
13. 01:14:071 - Is extremely quiet. I strongly recommend that you do not use 100% volume for quiet parts. I found 70% to be a balance of hitsound and the song. 75% is also a reasonable choice. ► 45 like the beginning is my choice
14. 01:19:609 (1) - I see what you did here but I dislike forced slider curves like this so much. Maybe it would look nicer if you tried a re-map of 01:17:763 (1,2,1) - completely.► I will if more hate this shape aa
15. 01:21:455 (1,2) - Why curved sliders like this at a time like this? I hear no indication in the music that would call for a curved slider. If you are going to keep these, I think it would look nicer if it was symmetrical to the Y-axis instead of where it currently is. If you could re-map the previous pattern in which these objects were to be symmetrical across the Y-axis, that would be great. ► a, done thanks
16. Just something minor, but if you slightly move 01:36:225 (1,2,3) - then you can get it on the exact Y-axis, then move 01:38:071 (1,2) - so circle 2 stacks with the previous circle 2. Would make it play really well, especially when users have the default setting of Hit Lighting enabled. ► the thing you're referring to shouldn't even be there anymore o.o
17. 01:41:301 (3,1) - This kind of overlaps really bad with 01:39:455 (3) -. More so, it's as if this whole part at 01:38:994 (2,3,1,2,3,1) - is taking up the upper right side of the grid. Consider re-mapping to give more grid diversity and prevent the awkward overlap. ► will consider, but definetely not now
18. 01:45:455 (1) - This slider's end covers part of the slider track, which can be really confusing for the novice. You must fix this. ► agreed
19. 01:48:686 (3) - Curve this slider for consistency with your next pattern. ► why the hell not
20. 01:50:071 (2,3,1,2,3,1) - I personally think all these 1/2s are a bit long and may make the player go crazy. Your decision though. ► i like this
21. Change the beat snap divisor to 1/6 before this gets ranked in memory of the One Sixth. ► hahahha

Good luck~

Desperate-kun wrote:

• 
  General

1. "soft-sliderslide12" is completely unneeded. S:C12 is only used to change slidertick's hitsounding, but you can't affect the sliderslide within a slider, so this file is useless. ► Ich hab's jetzt grad nochmal getestet, mein editor braucht die.

• 
  oko's Normal

1. Du hast ein paar NCs vergessen: 00:05:763 (4) + 00:16:840 (4) + 01:15:917 (3) ► ich frag mich grad wie aber jetzt sind sie halt da
2. 00:02:071 (1) - Rotier den Slider ein bisschen nach rechts, dann wird der Übergang zum nächsten Objekt besser: ► kann sein
   
   Bild

   
3. 00:14:532 (2,3) - Ich würde dir empfehlen, hier einen 1/2-Slider statt zwei Circlen zu benutzen, denn so ein 1/2-Triplet ist für die Newbies schwer zu tappen. Da das hier die einfachste Diff im Set ist, und du das auch nur einmal mit Circlen gemappt hast, solltest du das ändern :3 ► ergibt soweit sinn
4. 00:39:917 (2) - Wenn der Slider nicht so stark kurvig wäre, dann wäre der Übergang zu den nächsten Objekten besser :3 ► stimmt zudem hab ich grad nen weg gefunden wie der trotzdem sich an die Form von 00:38:994 (1) - anschliesst
   
   Bild

   
5. 00:59:417 (1) - Starte den Spinner lieber auf dem roten Tick direkt danach, das ist besser für Normals weil es dann nicht so schnell erscheint und sich auch in anderen Modes besser spielt ► schon gemacht
6. 01:08:532 (1) - Der Slider sieht nicht schön aus. Die erste Kurve ist zu kurvig, und bei der zweiten könnte der Punkt in der Mitte etwas.. mittiger sein, so wie im Screenshot, damit die Kurve besser aussieht. ► Ich wollte roten Ankerpunkt auf dem Slidertick haben. Ich hab allerdings mit der kurve ein wenig rumgebastelt
   
   Bild

   
7. 01:11:071 - Dieser Beat sollte auf jeden Fall gemappt werden, einfach weil hier das Instrument im Hintergrund (irgendne Art Gitarre) sehr gut zu hören ist. Ersetze z.b. den Rhythmus 01:10:378 (1,2) durch folgendes: (der Slider sieht sowieso nicht so gut aus :b) ►
   Diese Box enthaelt eine kleine erklaerung

   
   Die Gitarre landet normalerweise auf dem 1/3 tick in 01:10:994 - und dem 1/6 tick in 01:11:686 - weswegen ich meine bedenken bzgl eines 3/2 sliders habe aber wenn du meinst
   [box=Beispielrhythmus]
8. 01:12:225 (1,1) - Zwischen einem Spinner und dem folgenden Objekt sollte in einer Normal mehr Platz sein als eine 1/1-Lücke. 2/1 sind da eher angebracht. Es gibt hier keine richtig perfekte Lösung. Ich würde den Spinner bei 01:14:071 enden lassen und 01:14:071 (1) den Slider einfach löschen. Das wär dann dieser Rhythmus: ► Ich habe ein ernsthaftes problem damit deinen spinner auf diesem Downbeat enden zu lassen nur damit der platz zum naechsten objekt 2/1 betraegt.
   
   Rhythmus

   
9. 01:21:455 (1,2) - Die beiden Slider wirken irgendwie ein wenig zusammengequetscht und die Kurven sind unausgeglichen. Kann sein, dass es dein Stil ist, aber es wäre trotzdem für die Allgemeinheit angenehmer hier "normal" S-Slider zu benutzen.
10. 01:58:494 (1) - Das Gleiche wie bei 00:59:417 ► ja
11. Du hast dich auf jeden Fall sehr verbessert! Ich hab zwar noch keine andere Normal von dir gesehen ► eine andere ist noch in arbeit und meine erste normal wurde vom inhaber des sets abgelehnt weil zu hart e_e , aber im Vergleich zu den Extras hat es schon mal viel mehr Struktur ► ich mag meine Extras c: und spielt sich ganz gut ^-^ ► ... hurra Rankable ist die Diff auf jeden Fall ► von dem umstand ging ich jetzt bei so gut wie allen meinen maps aus, nur der Aufwand den das mit sich bringt ist unterschiedlich, aber ich hoffe das ein paar Flow-Übergänge noch durch andere Modder behoben werden.

Good luck ^-^ I hope you liked my mod o: ► mir gefiels

wuzzat wrote:

Hey Buddy O/ sorry for keep you waiting,
Here goes my Not-so called Mod B|
i maybe mod the before updated one,due to my internet. =3= just skipped if it if its already fixed~

[Oko's Normal]
S-senpaii ► h-help
00:59:417 to 01:28:378 -lower the volume? because it's applied on Insane Diff ► Railgun's Mod already went over this, but i'm only finishing this now so ye
overall i didn't see any issues here. ►

Goodluck on rank Nozhomi chan! and Oko senpaii ► h-help (seriously)
may the kudos stars guide your way!

osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: Gresby Nash - Fan Forever.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1500
PreviewTime: 28725
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Fan Forever
TitleUnicode:Fan Forever
Artist:Gresby Nash
ArtistUnicode:Gresby Nash
Creator:Nozhomi
Version:oko's Normal
Source:
Tags:atmosphere piano all-stars 2014 league of legends paris okoratu
BeatmapID:423762
BeatmapSetID:175846

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:5
ApproachRate:4
SliderMultiplier:0.999999999999999
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
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wuzzat wrote:

Hey Buddy O/ sorry for keep you waiting, np o/
Here goes my Not-so called Mod B| lol
i maybe mod the before updated one,due to my internet. =3= just skipped if it if its already fixed~ I will see.


[General]
why you used stack leniency 0,7? 7 is better imo. - Visual bug !
and this mapset need 1 easy/normal diff,AImod says that. < i hate it when this warning comes out when i was editing - I don't think it's a problem actually.


[Hard]
00:47:071 (2) - this spacing doesn't seem right.try to put this to x:40,y:344 if you want to place it in the middle. - Already fix
00:50:763 (2) - put this where 00:48:917 (2) does? - Fix
00:54:686 (3,4) - Circle (4) could be great if its blanket to (3) - Fix
This part: 00:59:417 to 01:28:378 -lower the volume? because you applied it on Insane Diff - Fix
01:50:994 (1) - this "v" slider could be better. - I don't have another idea and i like them ! XD


[Insane]
Turn on Widescreen support yeah, i was wondering why this difficulty doesn't turn on the widescreen support when the others did XD. - Because i don't know why other difficulties didn't have it off !
00:10:840 (4) - stack slider (4)'s tail with (2)? - Already stack with (1) from same slider.
00:13:148 (1) - if you stack this slider tail with (3) you can make Oval flow - He is...
00:20:532 (1) - stack with the same place where 00:19:148 (2) starts? - Fix
00:45:455 (5) - I would blanket this with (6) - Fix
00:54:455 (3) - this overlap doesn't seem right with 00:53:763 (1) and 00:55:148 (5). - Tried to ameliorate it but don't a problem i guess.
01:16:378 (2) - move this to x:227,y:144 and 01:16:840 (3) - move to x:348,y:220 - I know you want to stack but i prefer keep a good spacing here
01:20:994 (5) - stack this with (3)'s tail (if you apply this,dont forget to re-check DS) - Fix
01:56:532 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - maybe an "S"-Like pattern will make this beautifull - Tried ^^


Haha~ thanks for the txt tips -w- b now i can mod offline without internet problems. - Np
Goodluck on rank Nozhomi chan! and Oko senpaii - Arigato :3
may the kudos stars guide your way! <3

Cherry Blossom wrote:

As requested.

Hard

1. 00:08:532 (2) - pourquoi une symmétrie ici ? ce serait un insane j'aurais rien dit mais pour un hard ça passe pas, surtout que pour la même note tu as utilisé un spacing constant. - Ok j'ai fait un rework sur cette partie.
2. 00:10:840 (4,5,1) - essaies d'aligner ces notes pour un flow linéaire à cause du flow que tu as utilisé avant qui force à faire des mouvement linéaires plutôt que circulaire. - A changé.
3. 00:35:301 (4) - tu as oublié un NC ici.
4. 00:43:725 (3,4) - même si ça reste du low BPM, il faudrait mieux qu'il ait un spacing encore + petit, car les doublets en sortie de slider ça fait mal pour un hard player. J'ai réduis à 0.7x.
5. 00:44:532 (1) - pourquoi pas de finish au début du slider ? ça semble trèès vide sans. - Fix
6. 00:46:378 (1) - si c'est supposé être un slider symmétrique, il est plus ou moins mal fait, place les 2 derniers points comme ça : 256|232 et 180|280 - Fix
7. 00:58:378 (1) - si c'est supposé être stacked avec 00:57:686 (6) - , tu vois qu'il est mal stacked. - Fix
8. 01:04:840 (6) - NC. - Fix
9. 01:11:071 (2) - comme je l'ai dit dans la diff de oko, si tu suis la guitare le red tick est offbeat, elle est peut être en 1/3 je sais pas, mais si tu suis le piano il est bien sur le red tick. - Ce n'est pas 1/3 j'ai essayé. Et je préfère suivre le piano qui time un rythme plus simple.
10. 01:21:917 (2,3,4) - le triple stack passe un peu mal, en voyant les patterns précédent on se dit que c'est fait pour récupérer un peu. mais je pense que ce n'était pas ce que tu voulais faire ? si ce n'est pas le cas, unstack les. (de même pour l'autre après) - Ok j'ai rework cette partie aussi.
11. 01:28:840 (1) - Ici, même aussi la musique te crie "FINISH HITSOUND" donc mets en un ! - Fix
12. 01:33:225 (2) - wow, ici on s'attend vraiment pas à un jump symmétrique, par rapport aux jumps précédent, la distance est vraiment trop grande (1.91x), je sais que dans une hard si y'a pas de jump c'est pété mais ça me rappelle un mod que rezoons m'avait fait il y a longtemps p/2646719
    "Cherry, le random spacing c'est dans les insanes, PAS DANS LES HARDS!" - J'ai corrigé tout ces 'random jumps' ^^
13. 01:37:609 (3) - ici, le strong beat 01:38:071 n'est pas joué et devrait l'être, depuis que tous les patterns ont commencé sur un strong beat. - Fix
14. 01:43:378 (4,5,1) - le mouvement pour effectuer le triplet requiert un minimum d'aim, et un hard player n'a vraiment pas beaucoup d'aim, essaies d'ajuster le placement du triplet pour qu'on puisse faire un mouvement + lisse, qu'on ait pas la sensation de faire un mouvement + triangulaire. - Fix
    - ici 01:50:763 (4,5,1) - tu peux voir que le triplet comme ça passe mieux par rapport à ^, car il y a une très bonne transition horizontale/verticale.
    
    Vraiment pas mal comparé à ce que j'ai vu précédemment, il faut encore travailler un peu + sur la diff, et check le placement et l'esthétisme. Okay je verrais au fur et à mesure.

Insane

1. 00:03:455 (5,6,1) - aligne mieux ces notes, je vois que tu veux faire un pattern triangulaire, l'alignement ici 00:02:532 (2,3,4) - est bien réussit, mais pas ici 00:03:455 (5,6,1) - - Fix
2. 00:31:609 (1) - j'aurais plutôt vu cette note plus loin, je veux dire, pas stacked sur la fin de ce slider 00:31:148 (4) - , 1/4 slider veut dire pattern rapide, et vu l'endroit où tu as placé la note ça veut plutôt dire slowdown car il est placé en antijump.
3. 00:38:532 (4,5,6,7,1) - essaies d'améliorer la courbe pour un meilleur flow, la position de 00:38:878 (7) - est beaucoup trop haut. - Fix
4. 00:50:763 (3,4,5,6,7) - 0108 incoming lol - ^^'
5. 01:11:071 (3) - même chose que la Hard - Tic rouge.
6. 01:28:840 (1) - pareil que la hard pour les finish. - Fix
7. 01:30:917 (2,3,4,5,6) - le mouvement est un peu casseur de flow, car (4) n'est pas du tout aligné et ne sert pas d'angle de coté du triangle. Tu as une autre solution, c'est d'utiliser un mouvement en "W" , donc déplace (4) à 256|188 - Très bien vu.
   
   
   La diff à l'air sympa, je vois des patterns 2014 mapping mais bon ;w;, libre à toi de mapper comme tu veux Je suis pas assez expérimenté en terme de mapping pour m'adapter à un style, je pioche de ce que je vois et de mes propres idées, donc j'imagine que ça arrive. Mais je n'ai pas l'intention de faire du full 2014 pur jus.. Tu dois aussi travailler cette diff, améliorer le placement et l'esthétisme. Je verrais au fur et à mesure.

I hope it was helpful
Good luck ~

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Cherry Blossom wrote:

As requested.

oko's Normal

1. 00:29:763 (1) - here you missed a finish hitsound ► idd
2. 00:49:609 (3,1) - here the transition could be improved, try to move 00:50:071 (1) - a bit up, or change 00:49:609 (3) - 's angle. ► moved 1 a bit up
3. 01:10:378 (1) - uuuh i really have doubts here, the red tick here 01:11:071 sounds offbeat, it may be 1/3 if you follow guitar, which is most powerful. ► i know that it's the guitar and i know that it's the most powerful, it's just that i've been told to simplyfy this rhythm like 3 times now so i changed it on Desperates Mod ;-;
4. 01:15:917 (1,2,3,4,1) - this shape is not really well done, try to adjust notes to give a nicer shape. ► i tried
5. 01:50:994 (1) - i don't really agree with the hitsound on the slider tick. I know you dont want to make this pattern extreme for players but you can find another solution. This strong note should be played 01:51:455, but well, it's up to you to change. ► I didn't know that this simplification could bother people but i kinda want to keep it right now, this opinion may change in the future
   
   Solid diff, didnt find anything wrong with this diff, Good job.

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Kin wrote:

Bonsoir twa jtm <3

[Hard]

- 00:26:994 (3) - içi, la curve fait bien trop pointu à mon gout, soit change par une simple curve, ou si tu veux garder ce type de slider, je te dirais plutot dans ce genre la http://puu.sh/aD6d3/7139310e73.jpg -Moué j'ai essayé d'arranger un peu

- add clap sur ces 2 la 00:36:917 (4,5) - // ensuite add un finish içi 00:37:148 (1) - (sur le début) -fix

- 00:43:725 (3) - add un clap sur celui la ? Je dirais qu'il passe plutot bien avec la musique.
Au passage je dirais qu'içi aussi ça passe plutot bien 00:44:417 - -fix les 2

- 00:51:917 (1) - add un finish içi -fix

- 01:06:686 (1,2) - Personnelement, pour ces 2 la, ça me fait assez zarb le fait que le red point soit pas totalement au milieu des sliders - rectifié un peu

- Pour le son de la bass que tu suis a un certain moment, je dirais que le whistle passe plutot bien genre la 01:11:071 - 01:11:763 (3) - - En effet.

- 01:14:071 - Plutot qu'un whistle, le finish passe beaucoup mieux avec le cymbal sound -fix

- 01:31:378 (2,1) - fais gaff, y a un leger overlap, et même si y a un certain temps entre ses 2 sliders, on arrive quand même à le voir.-fix

- 01:43:609 (1) - un petit finish pour le cymbal sound ? -fix

01:50:994 (1) - ^ pareil -fix

01:52:840 (1,2,3) - Si tu change de spacing entre eux comme ça, je te conseil de break le flow entre la fin du 1 ; le 2 ; et le début du 3.
En faire "presque" une line fait un ressenti assez étrange avec un différent spacing. Soit, met le même spacing entre le 2, soit break le flow. J'aime le pattern comme il est (symétrie). Si je change avec un break flow, le spacing va être trop important et je veux éviter ça.

[Insane]

- 00:36:686 (4,5,6,1) - Au niveau de la timeline, il me semble + logique que ce soit quelque chose comme ça http://puu.sh/aD78j/6724ae0085.jpg
Soit faire un triplet (dont un slider 1/4 en dernier dans le triplet). En gros comme dans le screenshot quoi.
ça me parrait + logique, car un triplet a hit, sera forcément + stack qu'un slider, soit + lent. Alors que le slider sera un peu + rapide. Sachant que le entre le fin du "stream", le 1 est un jump. il serait donc + logique de faire du lent vers le rapide. Soit : triplet (lent) -> slider (moyen) -> jump (rapide) (actuelement c'est : Slider (moyen) -> triplet/doublet (lent) -> jump (rapide) -fix

- 00:49:378 (5) - Je comprends ton intention du blanket pour le spacing. Mais la consistance du spacing est + importante qu'un simple blanket. La actuelement, le curseur aura un vitesse assez rapide sur les sliders 1/4 jumps, et ralentis assez soundainement sur le 5. Alors que le 5 fait aussi parti du "stream" en slider. - je trouve pas ça très gênant en fait, et changer ça fout pas mal de chose en l'air sur la suite, donc je vais pas y toucher pour le moment, si c'est récurent sur d'autres mods, je prendrais en compte le changement à faire.

- 00:52:609 (3,4) - ton spacing est hyper confus la. Garde le consistent pendant le stream D: -fix

- 01:12:225 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Je comprends pas pourquoi içi le spacing diminue. J'aurais fais l'inverse, car içi la musique reprend de manière assez crescendo, soit en montant. Il me semble + logique que le spacing augmente petit à petit plutot que diminuer. - Je préfère garder ce spacing qui est cohérent avec le reste de la map pour le moment. On verra avec d'autres mods.

- 01:36:225 (1) - add un finish, pour le cymbal sound
00:44:532 - ^ 00:51:917 - ^ 00:51:801 (7) - 01:43:609 - ^ 01:50:994 - ^ Pour eux aussi -fix

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Voila, c'est tout,
Encore une fois je me lève à la hâte j'ai essayer d'être seulement "général"
en ce matin paresseux good luck !

Yauxo wrote:

[okonub's Normal]

■ OD 4? Ist immerhin die leichteste diff in dem Spread und evtl ist OD5 zu schwer für Anfänger. Zeugs wie 4,5 sollte auch gehen. ✔ 4.5
■ Da ich gerne mal mit den Hitsoundlautstärken rumspiele hier mal ne kleine Idee: Für alles was ähnlich oder gleich wie 00:16:378 (3) - ist, könntest du den Endtick um ~20% (auf 60%) leiser machen. Das ganze ergibt in meinem Kopf dann eine schönere Überleitung auf den nächsten Downbeat. ✔ 50 nur fuer die stellen im intro, nice
Alternativ würden auch leise Whistle Hitsounds darauf passen, da du die ja so oder so in den lauteren Parts verwendest. ✘ ja weil die lauter sind lol
■ 00:59:532 (1) - zu 00:59:417 (1) - ? ✘ Ist egal
■ 01:08:532 (1) - Sliderhitsound auf den hardtick? ✔ ja
■ 01:14:071 (1,2) - Blanket? Würde einiges an aesthetics hinzufügen ✘ asdf
■ 01:17:763 (1,1) - Sliderhitsounds auf 40%. Würde besser klingen imo ✔ 35%
■ 01:27:455 (2) - evtl so? Wäre für den neuen Spieler leichter zu spielen (weil 2/1 Pause auf leisem Sound schwer abzuschätzen ist) ✘ nee, 01:28:378 - is zu laut dafuer

2 extend, remove 3, add circle

■ 01:39:917 (1,2) - Be a man, improve that blanket (head ist näher dran als tail) ✘ und das interessiert ....? Ich mein das faellt mir auf wenn ich auf 25% mit 1/16 snap die map angucke
■ 01:50:994 (1,2,3) - <- diese Art von Combo könntest du auch nochmal anstatt 01:54:686 (1,2,3) - bringen. Dann wäre das ganze nicht so random (einmal in der ganzen Map und dann nicht mehr) und das Ende hätte mehr "pepp"(y) ✘ passt nicht, sonst haett ich das gemacht ausserdem nen finish auf dem slidertick in 01:55:148 - waer dann nich so knorke

Kin wrote:

Bonsoir twa jtm

[Oko's Normal]

- 00:55:609 (1,2,3) - atm, the flow is something like this http://puu.sh/aD4S3/50189910a3.jpg
I'd suggest to change the curve of 1 to make 2 on the same curve as 1, but it may change too much the flow between 2 and 3 that are already good. I mean something like this http://puu.sh/aD5mX/41e6c4ba5d.jpg ✔ yes, this should be somehow similar to what you meant

Well, it's the only thing I can say, the diff is really solid ! nice one

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54,101,40840,6,0,L|153:68,1,99.9999999999999,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
263,104,41763,1,0,0:0:0:0:
283,223,42225,2,0,P|263:249|240:263,1,50,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
195,286,42686,6,0,P|182:216|188:159,1,99.9999999999999,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
206,69,43609,2,0,L|253:88,1,50,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
298,48,44071,2,0,L|345:67,1,50,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
390,27,44532,5,4,0:0:0:0:
458,125,44994,2,0,B|456:158|473:179|473:179|451:212|414:206,1,99.9999999999999,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
338,268,45917,2,0,L|287:222,1,50,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,174,46378,5,0,0:0:0:0:
239,68,46840,2,0,P|203:106|197:128,1,50,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
179,157,47301,2,0,P|126:132|100:77,1,99.9999999999999,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
65,53,47994,1,2,0:0:0:0:
65,53,48225,6,0,B|51:85|17:99|17:99|10:139,1,99.9999999999999,0|12,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
37,253,49148,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,319,49609,2,0,P|169:316|200:301,1,50,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
239,284,50071,6,0,L|198:180,1,99.9999999999999,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
193,71,50994,2,0,L|240:90,1,50
285,50,51456,2,0,L|332:69,1,50,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
386,92,51917,6,0,P|400:151|380:195,2,99.9999999999999,4|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
285,50,53301,2,0,L|228:76,1,50,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
198,115,53763,5,0,0:0:0:0:
214,233,54225,2,0,P|184:241|149:229,1,50,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
106,225,54686,2,0,B|92:188|74:168|74:168|75:105,1,99.9999999999999,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,77,55378,1,2,0:0:0:0:
96,77,55609,6,0,P|153:74|193:58,1,99.9999999999999,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
303,12,56532,1,0,0:0:0:0:
407,71,56994,2,0,L|397:131,1,50,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
422,175,57455,6,0,P|411:200|362:217,1,50
345,250,57917,2,0,B|322:228|301:226|301:226|302:206|269:184,1,99.9999999999999,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
222,155,58609,2,0,L|163:197,1,50,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
165,242,59071,1,10,0:0:0:0:
165,242,59301,5,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,59532,12,2,62071,0:0:0:0:
264,38,62994,6,0,P|296:67|326:119,1,99.9999999999999,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
327,235,63917,2,0,P|299:267|248:299,1,99.9999999999999,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,308,64609,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,308,64840,6,0,P|167:255|153:191,1,99.9999999999999,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,95,65763,1,2,0:0:0:0:
262,32,66225,2,0,P|273:49|282:83,1,50,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,132,66686,6,0,B|267:183|230:224|230:224|284:254|277:306|277:306,1,200,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
158,283,68071,2,0,P|139:254|138:226,1,50,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,181,68532,6,0,B|177:150|153:92|153:92|191:26|246:39,1,200,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
349,58,69917,2,0,L|394:93,1,50,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
417,141,70378,6,0,B|359:197|260:185,2,150,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,72225,12,0,73609,0:0:0:0:
251,82,74071,6,0,P|300:63|350:83,1,99.9999999999999,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,186,74994,2,0,P|243:205|193:185,1,99.9999999999999,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
154,79,75917,5,0,0:0:0:0:
87,178,76378,1,0,0:0:0:0:
133,288,76840,1,0,0:0:0:0:
251,314,77301,1,0,0:0:0:0:
363,273,77763,6,0,B|408:182|303:150|363:66,1,200,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
459,117,79148,1,0,0:0:0:0:
461,236,79609,6,0,B|462:341|385:378|325:352,1,200,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
226,319,80994,2,0,P|198:291|195:268,1,50,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
218,220,81455,6,0,P|226:160|198:108,1,99.9999999999999,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
91,125,82378,2,0,P|83:185|110:236,1,99.9999999999999,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
121,338,83301,6,0,P|186:318|216:282,1,99.9999999999999,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
222,177,84225,2,0,P|261:121|304:103,1,99.9999999999999
406,88,85148,6,0,B|405:120|417:141|417:141|386:181,1,99.9999999999999,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
310,266,86071,1,0,0:0:0:0:
198,221,86532,2,0,P|180:195|176:161,1,50
161,118,86994,5,2,0:0:0:0:
240,28,87455,1,0,0:0:0:0:
428,175,88378,2,0,P|423:197|391:229,1,50
355,250,88840,6,0,P|320:249|266:195,1,99.9999999999999,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
253,90,89763,2,0,L|144:49,1,99.9999999999999,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
107,85,90455,1,2,0:0:0:0:
107,85,90686,6,0,P|86:134|88:195,1,99.9999999999999,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
122,294,91609,2,0,P|165:310|228:301,1,99.9999999999999,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
269,274,92301,1,2,0:0:0:0:
269,274,92532,6,0,P|260:221|268:160,1,99.9999999999999,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
315,66,93455,1,0,0:0:0:0:
408,140,93917,2,0,P|414:182|410:202,1,50,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
397,247,94378,6,0,L|344:337,1,99.9999999999999,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
233,301,95301,2,0,L|213:250,1,50,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,207,95763,2,0,L|233:157,1,50,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,108,96225,6,0,P|213:80|154:84,1,99.9999999999999,4|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
58,119,97148,1,0,0:0:0:0:
56,238,97609,2,0,P|75:264|99:274,1,50,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
150,280,98071,6,0,P|188:263|216:195,1,99.9999999999999,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,99,98994,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,23,99455,2,0,P|368:46|377:74,1,50,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
377,121,99917,6,0,P|380:182|405:229,1,99.9999999999999,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
492,145,100840,1,0,0:0:0:0:
471,26,101301,2,0,P|437:22|399:22,1,50,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
361,31,101763,6,0,P|323:51|253:56,1,99.9999999999999,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
147,69,102686,2,0,L|112:116,1,50,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
59,126,103148,2,0,L|24:173,1,50,8|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
28,226,103609,5,4,0:0:0:0:
92,327,104071,2,0,P|125:296|147:235,1,99.9999999999999,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
186,133,104994,2,0,P|216:109|246:100,1,50,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
285,96,105455,6,0,B|324:128|324:128|327:164|305:186,1,99.9999999999999,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
230,261,106378,2,0,P|235:291|302:325,1,99.9999999999999,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
350,329,107071,1,2,0:0:0:0:
350,329,107301,6,0,L|409:236,1,99.9999999999999,0|12,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
435,128,108225,1,0,0:0:0:0:
367,29,108686,2,0,P|338:29|305:41,1,50,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
271,72,109148,6,0,L|216:155,1,99.9999999999999,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
145,254,110071,2,0,P|110:227|100:204,1,50
115,163,110532,2,0,P|91:125|91:101,1,50,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
106,62,110994,6,0,B|147:68|198:29|198:29|254:58,1,150,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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451,68,112609,1,2,0:0:0:0:
451,68,112840,6,0,P|454:118|434:176,1,99.9999999999999,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
355,249,113763,1,0,0:0:0:0:
242,291,114225,2,0,P|222:253|218:227,1,50,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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186,15,115609,1,0,0:0:0:0:
73,56,116071,2,0,P|49:90|48:109,1,50,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
62,155,116532,6,0,B|76:200|40:247|40:247|86:272|86:272|69:317|69:317|112:372|168:348|182:295,1,350,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,236,118378,5,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,118609,12,0,122071,0:0:0:0:

Ovoui wrote:

star uguu ~

I wish tou'll rank it gl o/

Xanandra wrote:

Hello

[Insane]

00:01:840 - 00:03:686 - 00:05:532 - 00:07:378 - Id rather you put whistle in this beat rather than the next white tick, and so on with the other similar parts - Sounds really good after trying. Nice idea.
00:07:609 - Finish here? Only if you did what I suggested above - Ok then.

00:33:225 (8) - I would move this to somewhere like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1912028 just personal preferences - Ok nice to adjust same DS for them.
00:43:725 - Add a note here to follow the percussion. Its kinda weird how you have been following them almost perfectly up until now, and then you suddenly skip this one - Nice catch. Added.
01:50:763 - Accidental clap? As in, there shouldnt not be a clap, in any case, a whistle imo. - Not accidental.

[Hard]

Same hitsounds suggestions from insane - Fix
00:30:686 - Kinda sad that you have skipped lots of these beats, I feel that the music is pretty strong with this one, and you skipped it by putting it in the middle of the slider where you cannot even play that beat... Oh well. - Well i can understand but i like it like this, sorry.
01:08:301 - Feels weird that you suddenly skipped this beat, when you have done it almost in the whole map - Woops...added.

1. Fix AiMod stuff
2. Offset is a bit early imo. Sorry I can't help D: So you should ask another person.

1. 00:00:196 (1,2) - The transition is kinda akward here ! Consider to make (1) more straight !
2. 00:01:580 (3,1) - Maybe you should curv (3) to the way of (4) ? That slider goes on a wrong way xD
3. 00:04:811 (2) - I'd move that note here x:224 y:352 for follow the straight line with (1)
4. 00:11:734 - I think that the hitsound here doesn't fit with the rhythm :/
5. 00:12:657 (2,1) - Make a better transition here ! Seriously , this is weird readable !
6. 00:18:426 (3,1,2,3) - I like the idea to make a triangle but it's ugly imo cause the triangle isn't well made and the flow is really horrible and I haven't a lack of skill but it's definitely not readable for a Normal !
   
7. 00:21:426 (2) - Maybe move that note here : x:284 y:208
8. 00:29:734 - I thought that the kiai will start here
9. 00:32:965 (3,1) - Here you have a serious problem ! For readeability ! You start with a curved slider and you continue with a straight slider ;_; If you follow the cursor with the idea of the curved slider , the cursor will continue to a linear pattern ! Actually , you should curv (1) for follow the idea !
   
10. 00:33:426 (1,2) - I'd blanket these sliders ! Pro tip : Use Ctrl+G to (1) for see a better view with the approach circle !
11. 00:41:734 (2,2) - I'd do a better stack here ! Don't forget that it's a Normall and with a low AR like that , you can see the stack bad made when playing =3
    
12. 00:48:196 (1) - You should adjust the last point of the slider cause he's not really turned to 00:49:119 (2) - ! Consider to make a straight flow here !
13. 00:49:580 (3,1) - Same as 00:32:965 (3,1) -
14. 00:59:503 (1) - The spinner start too earlier ! D: Consider to start it here : 00:59:734 -
15. 01:06:196 (3,1) - Improve the transition here please !
16. 01:08:503 (1) - Nice idea but I don't like the shape . Consider to make another one ?
17. 01:12:196 (1) - The spinner start too earlier and it don't let too much time for recovery ! It's the easiest diff so consider to give more recovery time
18. 01:14:042 (1,2) - The blanket can be much better !
19. 01:17:734 (1,2) - Same as above !
20. 01:19:119 (2,1) - Consider to align them ? Make them on the same line ? (x:461)
21. 01:21:426 (1,2) - Maybe do a pattern with a blanket like 01:14:042 (1,2) -
22. 01:28:811 - Same here , I thought that the kiai will start here!
23. 01:32:503 (1) - I'd suggest you to Ctrl+H that note ! B)
24. 01:34:349 (1,2) - It's weird here cause I thought it'd be a symmetrical pattern ! Consider to curv (1) !
25. 01:48:657 (3,1) - The transition is really bad here !
26. 01:56:503 (1) - I don't think that that slider is unrankable but I'd suggest you to make another pattern for keep variety ! It's same as others sliders I saw as well on the diff !

1. 00:03:004 (2,2) - Je stackerai ces notes !
2. 00:05:773 (1,2) - Je pense pas que ces sliders sont une bonne idée pour cette diff ! Fais les plus simples et ne cherche pas a faire un truc compliqué xD
   
3. 00:08:542 (2,2) - Stack !
4. 00:09:465 (1,2,3) - Triangle isocèle la et c'est moche è_é Fais en un équilatéral !
5. 00:15:696 (2,1) - Stack !
6. 00:23:081 (2,1) - Pareil xD
7. 00:32:311 (2,3,4,1) - Très bon pattern Noz ! Je te félicite ! Rien a dire , juste pour le commentaire xD
8. 00:37:850 (2,1) - Ces sliders s'overlap ! Attention !
9. 00:40:850 (1,2) - Wow qu'est ce que c'est que ces sliders ? xD Je te conseillerai de les delete et de les remplacer par des sliders plus simples et pas des sliders ultra-courbés qui ressemblent a des pieds :3
10. 00:41:542 (2,3) - La transition est bof ! Fix !
11. 00:44:542 (1) - C'est pas super joli comme slider :/ Change !
12. 00:51:465 (4,5,1) - Je l'aurai fait comme ça
    
    Click

    
13. 00:54:465 (2,1,3) - Les deux sliders sont pas beaux ;( Et je doute que c'est rankable !
14. 00:59:311 (1) - Le NC est inutile ici! De un tu le vois pas a cause de l'AR et de deux il est stacked donc ca sert a rien !
15. 01:10:158 (5,1,2) - Je les courberai un peu ces sliders pour le flow !
16. 01:11:773 (3) - Si tu suis mon conseil précédant , blanket cette note !
17. 01:14:081 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Blof le Copier / Coller ;_; Je te conseille de delete un des deux pattern et de remplacer avec un autre pattern ! C'est toujours mieux d'avoir de l'originalité dans ses maps !
18. 01:17:773 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - J'aurai fait comme ça perso
    
    Click

    
19. 01:19:619 (1) - J'irai pas le stack et j'irai faire un octogone avec 01:17:773 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) -
20. 01:19:619 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Même chose , le Copier Coller c'est mal ;_;
21. 01:23:311 (1,2,3,4,5) - Pareil !
22. 01:30:696 (1,2) - Réduis la courbe , c'est pas très esthétique comme sliders !
23. 01:39:927 (1,2) - Ces sliders sont unrankables pour moi , enlève !
24. 01:45:465 (1,3) - Pareil !
25. 01:47:311 (1,3) - Pareil
26. 01:50:081 (3) - J'irai Ctrl+H pour blanket !
27. 01:51:004 (1,3) - Pas rankable ce genre de sliders!
28. 01:55:388 (2,4) - Tu peux meilleur stack rolala !
29. 01:58:158 (4,5,1) - Espace ces notes ! Un triplet en ligne droite c'est bof en ligne droite !
30. C'est tout pour la Hard , tu peux la peaufiner !

1. 00:02:542 (2) - Blanket sir !
2. 00:04:850 (3,4) - Unrankables ! Enlève !
3. 00:08:081 (2) - Ctrl+G serait plus approprié ici !
4. 00:08:081 (2,3,4) - Tu peux meilleur stack !
5. 00:09:927 (2,4) - Le stack peut etre adjusté !
6. 00:18:465 (7) - Un Ctrl+G serait cool ici !
7. 00:26:081 (1,2) - Trop carré comme pattern ! Courbe ces sliders !
8. 00:33:004 (7,8) - Not rankable !
9. 00:44:542 (1) - ATTENTION ! Ce slider n'est pas snap ou du moins est très rapide ! Corrige ca !
10. 00:47:196 (3,4,5,6,7) - C'est overmapped ça D:
11. 00:47:773 (8,1) - Pas rankable ça !
12. 00:51:811 (7) - Overmap ! Delete cette note et ne rajoute RIEN!
13. 00:57:465 (1,2,3) - 3 sliders sont inutiles c'est naze et c'est overmappé D: Garde les deux premiers et rajoute un cercle !
14. 01:04:388 (5,1) - Pas une bonne idée ! Remove !
15. 01:06:696 (1,2) - Pas rankable !
16. 01:09:927 (5,2) - Tu peux mieux stack la !
17. 01:09:465 (3,3) - Pareil !
18. 01:13:004 (3,5) - Ca se touche , c'est pas bien è_é
19. 01:15:465 (4) - Pas rankable !
20. 01:17:311 (4,5,1) - Pareil !
21. 01:20:081 (3,4) - Pareil x)
22. 01:22:388 (4,5) - Pareil !
23. 01:24:696 (5,1) - Pareil !
24. 01:25:850 (3,4,5) - J'trouve que finir le pattern par un slider qui te fait sortir le curseur de l'écran , c'est pas une bonne idée !
25. 01:27:465 (2) - Pas rankable ça , enfin , ca va jerter xD
26. 01:32:542 (1,2) - Pareil!
27. 01:33:465 (3,5,6) - J'dirai que le dernier slider tu pourrais le remove et ajouter deux cercles a la place !
28. 01:35:542 (6) - Pas rankable !
29. 01:36:235 (1) - Pareil !
30. 01:37:158 (3) - Attention , ce slider sort un peu de l'écran ! Bouge le en bas ! Et tu peux blanket nomdedieu xD
31. 01:37:850 (5,6,1) - Le triplet est mal placé la ! Ca fait bizarre de le jouer
32. 01:39:465 (5) - Réduis la courbe , ce n'est pas rankable !
33. 01:41:311 (5,1) - Unrankable !
34. 01:50:542 (8,9) - Pareil !
35. 01:54:004 (8,1) - Pareil !
36. 01:55:158 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Un stream en ligne droite c'est pas cool pour le flow xD
37. 01:56:542 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Ton S peut etre mieux que ca !
38. Voila pour la Insane , tu peux la retravailler !

paseli wrote:

Mod from modding queue~ :)

[Hard]
HP+1/OD+1, just preference. - HP+0.5 only.

00:37:840 (2,1) - avoid overlap here - Fix
00:58:840 (2,3,1) - straight down straight up flow isn't very good here imo, try http://puu.sh/aTIBA/aab4a7fee9.jpg - Wow really good idea.
01:08:994 (2,3) - ctrl+g fits maybe - No he broke the DS consistancy.

[Insane]
00:42:225 (4,5,6,7,1) - make this stream flatter - Fix
00:55:378 (6) - push this closer to the approachcircle of 4 and ctrl+g for better flow http://puu.sh/aTJcl/17000bd0f4.jpg - this pattern was rework sorry.
01:03:225 (2,3) - These somewhat make me uncomfortable since they end on white beats. maybe change, but this is up to you - I let it like this.
01:12:225 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - better make the distances a bit smaller compared to the rest since these are 1/3 beats - Was rework.
01:37:840 (5,6,1) - this triple feels like you just squished it inbetween, reposition it - I stack them and place for get x1 DS.
01:39:455 (5,6,1) - try http://puu.sh/aTJEy/c20fcc93ab.jpg - flatter slider and higher distance between circles, but therefore symmetry of 1 with 2 - Fix
01:46:263 (5,6,7) - what's the small hiccup here? you should make this stream rounder. - Fix
01:56:532 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - i'm sure you can make a better snake stream here if you use the compose->'convert slider to stream' function. - Fix

Pretty decent maps, the Insane looks a bit messy at parts, but else it's okay. Get more mods and good luck to get this ranked!

Greetings,
paseli

Secretpipe wrote:

Yop Noz <3 Secret <3

Voila ton mod kado tout bo tout frais !

[General]

1. Fix AiMod stuff - Je vois aucun problème.
2. Offset is a bit early imo. Sorry I can't help D: So you should ask another person. - Ca a été fix.

[Hard]

1. 00:03:004 (2,2) - Je stackerai ces notes ! - Fix
2. 00:05:773 (1,2) - Je pense pas que ces sliders sont une bonne idée pour cette diff ! Fais les plus simples et ne cherche pas a faire un truc compliqué xD
   - je garde pour l'instant ils sont jolis XD
3. 00:08:542 (2,2) - Stack ! - Fix
4. 00:09:465 (1,2,3) - Triangle isocèle la et c'est moche è_é Fais en un équilatéral ! - Je ne vois pas comment en faire un sans briser le DS.
5. 00:15:696 (2,1) - Stack ! - Fix
6. 00:23:081 (2,1) - Pareil xD - Ici je peux pas. Soit je ruin le blanket et c'est moche, soit je ruin le DS et c'est pire.
7. 00:32:311 (2,3,4,1) - Très bon pattern Noz ! Je te félicite ! Rien a dire , juste pour le commentaire xD - Thk
8. 00:37:850 (2,1) - Ces sliders s'overlap ! Attention ! - Fix
9. 00:40:850 (1,2) - Wow qu'est ce que c'est que ces sliders ? xD Je te conseillerai de les delete et de les remplacer par des sliders plus simples et pas des sliders ultra-courbés qui ressemblent a des pieds :3 - Fix
10. 00:41:542 (2,3) - La transition est bof ! Fix ! - Fix avec le précédent.
11. 00:44:542 (1) - C'est pas super joli comme slider :/ Change ! - Je garde.
12. 00:51:465 (4,5,1) - Je l'aurai fait comme ça - Non car ça unstack et breack le DS.
    
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13. 00:54:465 (2,1,3) - Les deux sliders sont pas beaux ;( Et je doute que c'est rankable ! - J'ai demandé ils sont rankable et je les trouve bien avec la symétrie.
14. 00:59:311 (1) - Le NC est inutile ici! De un tu le vois pas a cause de l'AR et de deux il est stacked donc ca sert a rien ! - Le pattern a changé mais j'ai quand même remove le NC.
15. 01:10:158 (5,1,2) - Je les courberai un peu ces sliders pour le flow ! - Bof non ça va comme ça.
16. 01:11:773 (3) - Si tu suis mon conseil précédant , blanket cette note !
17. 01:14:081 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Blof le Copier / Coller ;_; Je te conseille de delete un des deux pattern et de remplacer avec un autre pattern ! C'est toujours mieux d'avoir de l'originalité dans ses maps ! - Honnêtement j'ai pas d'idée la.
18. 01:17:773 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - J'aurai fait comme ça perso - Je garde comme ça pour la continuité du mouvement avec le suivant.
    
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19. 01:19:619 (1) - J'irai pas le stack et j'irai faire un octogone avec 01:17:773 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - - Peut être mais le suivant serait très moche.
20. 01:19:619 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Même chose , le Copier Coller c'est mal ;_; - Autant avant c'est juste que j'ai pas d'idée, autant j'adore celui-là.
21. 01:23:311 (1,2,3,4,5) - Pareil ! - Fix
22. 01:30:696 (1,2) - Réduis la courbe , c'est pas très esthétique comme sliders ! - Fix
23. 01:39:927 (1,2) - Ces sliders sont unrankables pour moi , enlève ! - Honnêtement je sais pas mais bon...fix.
24. 01:45:465 (1,3) - Pareil ! - Fix
25. 01:47:311 (1,3) - Pareil - Je vois pas en quoi ils ne le seraient pas.
26. 01:50:081 (3) - J'irai Ctrl+H pour blanket ! - CTRL+J plutôt. Mais j'aime pas.
27. 01:51:004 (1,3) - Pas rankable ce genre de sliders! - Je pense que si.
28. 01:55:388 (2,4) - Tu peux meilleur stack rolala ! - Tu chipote pour 1px.
29. 01:58:158 (4,5,1) - Espace ces notes ! Un triplet en ligne droite c'est bof en ligne droite !
30. C'est tout pour la Hard , tu peux la peaufiner !

[Insane]

1. 00:02:542 (2) - Blanket sir ! - Fix, même si j'ai hésité avec le stack.
2. 00:04:850 (3,4) - Unrankables ! Enlève ! - Non
3. 00:08:081 (2) - Ctrl+G serait plus approprié ici ! - Fix
4. 00:08:081 (2,3,4) - Tu peux meilleur stack ! - Fix, j'ai fais le max
5. 00:09:927 (2,4) - Le stack peut etre adjusté ! - Fix
6. 00:18:465 (7) - Un Ctrl+G serait cool ici ! - Franchement non, je préfère garder un bon enchainement avec le slider suivant.
7. 00:26:081 (1,2) - Trop carré comme pattern ! Courbe ces sliders ! - Je garde cette esthétique.
8. 00:33:004 (7,8) - Not rankable ! - je vois pas pk non.
9. 00:44:542 (1) - ATTENTION ! Ce slider n'est pas snap ou du moins est très rapide ! Corrige ca ! - Hmmmm bizarre que ça ait fait ce genre de connerie. Fixed.
10. 00:47:196 (3,4,5,6,7) - C'est overmapped ça D: - je ne sais pas mais ça passe bien.
11. 00:47:773 (8,1) - Pas rankable ça ! - Mais pourquoi ????
12. 00:51:811 (7) - Overmap ! Delete cette note et ne rajoute RIEN! - J'ai bien écouté et je n'ai pas l'impression que c'est overmappé.
13. 00:57:465 (1,2,3) - 3 sliders sont inutiles c'est naze et c'est overmappé D: Garde les deux premiers et rajoute un cercle ! - non overmappé, écoute mieux la guitare.
14. 01:04:388 (5,1) - Pas une bonne idée ! Remove ! - non
15. 01:06:696 (1,2) - Pas rankable ! - Explique moi pourquoi.
16. 01:09:927 (5,2) - Tu peux mieux stack la ! - Je n'ai pas l'intention de stack. Soit ça casse le DS soit la symétrie.
17. 01:09:465 (3,3) - Pareil ! - ^
18. 01:13:004 (3,5) - Ca se touche , c'est pas bien è_é - Légèrement changé mais j'ai peur que les jumps soit trop grand.
19. 01:15:465 (4) - Pas rankable ! - Pls...
20. 01:17:311 (4,5,1) - Pareil ! - Ok ceux la je veux bien croire.
21. 01:20:081 (3,4) - Pareil x) - Vois pas pk.
22. 01:22:388 (4,5) - Pareil ! - Non
23. 01:24:696 (5,1) - Pareil ! - Changé
24. 01:25:850 (3,4,5) - J'trouve que finir le pattern par un slider qui te fait sortir le curseur de l'écran , c'est pas une bonne idée ! - J'ai changé ce pattern il était moche.
25. 01:27:465 (2) - Pas rankable ça , enfin , ca va jerter xD - Je vois pas pourquoi.
26. 01:32:542 (1,2) - Pareil! ...
27. 01:33:465 (3,5,6) - J'dirai que le dernier slider tu pourrais le remove et ajouter deux cercles a la place ! - Non pattern symétrique.
28. 01:35:542 (6) - Pas rankable ! - Sais pas.
29. 01:36:235 (1) - Pareil ! ...
30. 01:37:158 (3) - Attention , ce slider sort un peu de l'écran ! Bouge le en bas ! Et tu peux blanket nomdedieu xD - Fix
31. 01:37:850 (5,6,1) - Le triplet est mal placé la ! Ca fait bizarre de le jouer - Replacé.
32. 01:39:465 (5) - Réduis la courbe , ce n'est pas rankable ! - Fait
33. 01:41:311 (5,1) - Unrankable ! ...
34. 01:50:542 (8,9) - Pareil ! - Sais pas
35. 01:54:004 (8,1) - Pareil ! - je pense pas.
36. 01:55:158 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Un stream en ligne droite c'est pas cool pour le flow xD - C'est fait comme si le stream était un slider pour passer sur le slider précédent.
37. 01:56:542 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Ton S peut etre mieux que ca ! - Fix
38. Voila pour la Insane , tu peux la retravailler !

Voilà pour mon mod ! Comme tu peux l'voir , le mapset a besoin de beaucoup de travail ! - RIP me le temps que j'ai passé à corriger ça.
J'espère que ce mod t'aidera !
Peace !

Ovoui wrote:

slt


[General]

D'la frappe ce mapset, j'espère ce sera bientôt rank o/ Par contre du coup je vais pas trouver grand chose a dire D: - Thanks

[Hard]

J'aime bien t'as voulu faire des sliders inhabituel, c'est cool ca ! - lol okay

00:09:235 (3,1) - t'as voulu faire un triangle mais je trouve ca rend pas super super - Moi si.
00:20:311 (4) - j'trouve que ce placement est pas du tout instinctif - Ca passe car le slider prend malgré tout sa direction. Et il est blanquet.
00:27:004 (3) - je te conseillerais plutot quelque chose comme ca https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1965497 - Très bonne idée.
00:32:311 (2,3,4,1) - je suis d'accord avec secret - Thanks
00:40:850 (1,2) - pour ici quelque chose comme cela ? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1965527 - Non j'ai fix autrement.
00:57:235 (4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1) - un petit peu compliqué à lire je trouve - A été changé.
01:03:004 (1,2,3,4,5) - pas très inspiré mais bon, pourquoi pas - Dsl.
01:14:081 (1,2,3) - pareil ici je trouve - Pas vraiment plus d'idée non plus.
01:43:158 (3,4,5) - franchement je verrais mieu le 3 en (325;73), le 4 en (218;61) et le 5 en (204;66), 'fin tu vois l'idée - Non pas vraiment et en plus ça casse le DS.
01:47:311 (1,3) - un peu tro bizare ceux la de sliders - NON !
01:58:158 (4,5,1) - j'pense que y'a mieu qu'un triplet ici - Alors propose quelque chose ^^ personnellement j'aime comme ça

[Insane]

00:05:773 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Des jumps croisé ca peut etre sympa non ? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1965670 - J'ai changé mais pas comme ça ^^
00:36:696 (4,5) - bizarre ce triplet je trouve - Je l'ai stack on verra.
01:13:158 (4,5,6,7) - c'est dur a lire - Ça a été rework pour que justement ce soit plus facile ;w;

Bon c'est assez court, t'as qu'as mapper moins bien D: - Pls...je sais déjà pas mapper.

Sinon gl pour et j'espere que ce mod te sera utile ~