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sasakure.UK feat. Hatsune Miku - SeventH-HeaveN

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LunarSakuya
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General
- Delete "Hatsune Miku" from tags. It's already in the artist


Beginner
00:13:416 (1) - Whistle on head would sound nice with the piano
00:16:083 (1) - ^
01:17:914 (1) - Drum Finish or Normal set at the tail can emphasize the beat nicely imo
01:19:914 (2) - ^

Easy
00:12:083 (2) - Try flipping this 90 degrees anticlockwise and adjust accordingly
SPOILER
Seems more cleaner without the ends overlapping imo
00:24:083 (1) - whistle on reserve perhaps, to distinguish the piano from the percussion that soon follows lol
00:26:749 (1) - ^
00:51:083 (1) - this stack feels a bit difficult for beginners, especially dealing with the timing change. I'd do something like this:
SPOILER
I copy/pasted 00:51:249 (1) - and put it back to where the old (3) was and added a reverse. I think the reverse would provide more leniency in transition. (If you were to reverse the original (3), the combo burst from its previous note would be a bit risky.)
00:56:914 (2) - i suggest shortening this to the white tick to follow the vocals, which seems to be dominating most of the kiai patterns. If you decide to keep it, i'll accept that it stays consistent with 01:07:580 (2) - but note that this example hits the vocals more

Normal
00:42:749 (1) - move this more to the left so it doesn't touch (2)? Their proximity could be confused for a 1/2 rhythm
00:44:583 (4) - Whistle on both ends maybe for the piano~

captin america
00:52:249 (3) - NC to maintain the "separated" feel from the previous triplet pattern
00:53:249 (1) - ^ if you did the above

Complex
00:25:083 (5,6) - i recommend separating these to maintain consistency in spacing within the same combo; could also be mistaken for 1/2
00:29:083 (5) - NC to indicate sudden spacing change
01:13:747 (5) - NC, like 01:03:080 (1) -

mmmmmmmmmmmmmm call me back :oops:
captin1
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captin1
kay~
SPOILER
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: SeventH-HeaveN.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 55748
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.7
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:SeventH-HeaveN
TitleUnicode:SeventH-HeaveN
Artist:sasakure.UK feat. Hatsune Miku
ArtistUnicode:sasakure.UK feat. 初音ミク
Creator:Loli -[Koinuri]
Version:captin's Hard
Source:セブンスドラゴン2020
Tags:Seventh Dragon 2020 Hatsune Miku Vocaloid captin1 Genjitsu Aesop
BeatmapID:384974
BeatmapSetID:154058

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7
SliderMultiplier:1.6
SliderTickRate:2

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_koinuri
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LunarSakuya wrote:

=v=v=v=v=

General
- Delete "Hatsune Miku" from tags. It's already in the artist Oh yeah, I forgot


Beginner
00:13:416 (1) - Whistle on head would sound nice with the piano
00:16:083 (1) - ^
01:17:914 (1) - Drum Finish or Normal set at the tail can emphasize the beat nicely imo
01:19:914 (2) - ^

Easy
00:12:083 (2) - Try flipping this 90 degrees anticlockwise and adjust accordingly
SPOILER
Seems more cleaner without the ends overlapping imo
00:24:083 (1) - whistle on reserve perhaps, to distinguish the piano from the percussion that soon follows lol
00:26:749 (1) - ^
00:51:083 (1) - this stack feels a bit difficult for beginners, especially dealing with the timing change. I'd do something like this:
SPOILER
I copy/pasted 00:51:249 (1) - and put it back to where the old (3) was and added a reverse. I think the reverse would provide more leniency in transition. (If you were to reverse the original (3), the combo burst from its previous note would be a bit risky.) Applied in a different way
00:56:914 (2) - i suggest shortening this to the white tick to follow the vocals, which seems to be dominating most of the kiai patterns. If you decide to keep it, i'll accept that it stays consistent with 01:07:580 (2) - but note that this example hits the vocals more

Normal
00:42:749 (1) - move this more to the left so it doesn't touch (2)? Their proximity could be confused for a 1/2 rhythm
00:44:583 (4) - Whistle on both ends maybe for the piano~

captin america
00:52:249 (3) - NC to maintain the "separated" feel from the previous triplet pattern
00:53:249 (1) - ^ if you did the above

Complex
00:25:083 (5,6) - i recommend separating these to maintain consistency in spacing within the same combo; could also be mistaken for 1/2
00:29:083 (5) - NC to indicate sudden spacing change
01:13:747 (5) - NC, like 01:03:080 (1) -

mmmmmmmmmmmmmm call me back :oops:
Applied everything, thanks for modding! :D
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congrats on your first rank <3
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yeaaaa grats!
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aghioeht

Thanks!
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Congratz!!!!!!!!!!!!! : :)
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congrats ♥ this deserve some cake ;)
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Thanks <3
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Congrats on your first rank! I am looking forward to more awesome maps from you ~
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:D Thanks
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Good job!
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YOU DID IT!
Pappy
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Hatsune Miku in artist? :x It sounds like "feat. guitar" because Vocaloid is teorically instrument :3

BUT GRATZZZ X3333
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the original metadata for this song has it included in the title, therefore it is part of the title here. really no room for interpretation or arguing anymore
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Gratz !!
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Grats koi!!
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Gratz!
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Thanks guys!
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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PDjc1OeEPe8
how about use this?
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I chose not to include videos because I couldn't find videos with good enough quality.

I wanted to include the one that doesn't have any credit or the music bar thing like that video

This version: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wspYZxaqE5I
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