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i would say from #modreqs but i've been wanting to mod this for a while but never got around to it >w>;

[Easy]
Consider adding slidertick hitsounds in some areas to keep the nice clap going :3
Although adding a lot of my suggestions would mean a lot of remapping I think that it would feel much better to play those strong beats instead of having the sliders finish them for you

00:03:244 (4) - NC and add a whistle here to imitate 00:01:840 (2)
00:06:752 (1) - NC
00:04:998 (1) - Consider to changing to something like the image because 00:05:700 (3) - finishes on a strong part of the intro (where the drums start)
http://puu.sh/90BIz.jpg
00:09:559 (4) - NC
00:11:665 (2) - Perhaps break this up into two circles because again it finishes on a strong part of the intro
00:23:244 (1) - This would be a good place for slidertick hitsounds
00:25:349 (3) - Add clap on sliderend?
00:28:858 (3) - NC
00:33:770 (6) - Again this finishes on the downbeat, maybe change it up to be a 1/1 slider and a circle?
00:39:384 (5) - Same as this ^
00:42:542 (3) - ^
00:45:700 (4) - NC
01:24:647 (3) - Another downbeat issue
01:36:577 (1) - clap on sliderend?
01:46:051 (1) - Another good example for slidertick hitsounds
02:09:910 (2) - Move NC to here instead of 02:09:559 (1) -
02:15:524 (6) - Maybe add NC here? I like having finishes be new combos personally (this is mainly preference)
02:41:138 (2) - clap on sliderend
03:09:209 (2) - Improve blanket
03:10:963 (4) - I don't see why you leave a gap at 03:12:016
03:27:103 (3) - This plays better and allows for a better placement of NC http://puu.sh/90Cq5.jpg
03:34:121 (4) - NC
03:59:384 (1) - and 04:00:787 (3) - since this is the first time you've used this kind of slider in the entire map I would reconsider changing it to be a standard curve to keep consistency

This is a very nice diff though. The positioning and structure is very good :)

[Normal]
00:12:016 (5) - Maybe add a new combo here (preference)
00:54:647 (2) - This overlap is pretty lulzy, should fix
00:56:928 (5) - NC here (preference again)
02:04:296 (1) - Timing like this is more correct http://puu.sh/90CZE.jpg
02:15:524 (5) - NC

Solid diff :)

[Hard]
Hitsounding in this is rather underwhelming, I think there should be a clap or snare at least. There is no satisfying finish sound either because most of them are the same as the ones you use on every downbeat

00:25:173 (3) - I question this slider angle against 00:24:647 (1) something about it looks off to me
00:35:700 (4,5,1) - This is a rather odd 2.0x spacing you have here, I don't see much in the music that would warrant this
01:35:524 (5) - I think this would be better as a 1/1 slider as opposed to a reverse, fits lyrics much better
01:41:138 (3) - ^
02:23:244 (1,2,3,4) - This straight line doesn't fit your style of mapping at all
03:02:542 (1) - Remove NC
03:03:244 (1) - Put NC here
03:05:349 (10) - 1/1 slider again
03:08:156 (3) - I would add a 1/1 slider here but it's up to you
03:10:963 (3) - 1/1 slider
03:22:893 (6) - NC?
03:46:752 (7) - and 03:49:559 (5) - NC to be consistent with 03:52:366 (1) -

Challenging hard diff, but that's good :3

[Insane]
Again the hitsounds are underwhelming for the same reasons as Hard

00:19:033 (1) - I lul'd, I would personally change this but up to you
00:46:402 (4,5,6,7) - This stream is a bit random don'tcha think
00:53:770 (8) - why the gap at 00:53:945? It's filled in everywhere else
01:28:770 (6,7) - I'm almost tempted to suggest to make this a triplet starting at 01:28:682 but I can't decide which I like more. personally I think triplet plays better but it's up to you on this one
01:49:910 (6) - I would move this to x:276 y:200 to emphasize the stop (this is what I do at least)
03:21:928 (3) - Remove this because the synth here goes white-blue-red on the ticks
03:56:577 (5) - NC
04:19:032 (9) - I always like "capping" my streams, so perhaps an NC here? :D

This is a really fun diff to play! the spacing is awesome :) Good job

aaand I can't mod extras too well

Good luck with this mapset, I like it a lot :)
Topic Starter
Mira-san

Smug- wrote:

i would say from #modreqs but i've been wanting to mod this for a while but never got around to it >w>;

[Hard]
Hitsounding in this is rather underwhelming, I think there should be a clap or snare at least. There is no satisfying finish sound either because most of them are the same as the ones you use on every downbeat | I'm definitely going to find someone who is proficient at hitsounding. ;w;

00:25:173 (3) - I question this slider angle against 00:24:647 (1) something about it looks off to me | Hmm? Looks just fine to me though lol.
00:35:700 (4,5,1) - This is a rather odd 2.0x spacing you have here, I don't see much in the music that would warrant this | Remapped this part, about the triple, hmm I left it.
01:35:524 (5) - I think this would be better as a 1/1 slider as opposed to a reverse, fits lyrics much better | Great idea. Added.
01:41:138 (3) - ^ | Same.
02:23:244 (1,2,3,4) - This straight line doesn't fit your style of mapping at all | Changed to something I think 'is' my mapping style heh heh.
03:02:542 (1) - Remove NC |
03:03:244 (1) - Put NC here | Fixed ^
03:05:349 (10) - 1/1 slider again |
03:08:156 (3) - I would add a 1/1 slider here but it's up to you
03:10:963 (3) - 1/1 slider | Just to make things seem a little bit different I won't do these. ^
03:22:893 (6) - NC?
03:46:752 (7) - and 03:49:559 (5) - NC to be consistent with 03:52:366 (1). | Changed ^

Challenging hard diff, but that's good :3 lel GG. Thanks!

[Insane]
Again the hitsounds are underwhelming for the same reasons as Hard | I cri evrytim

00:19:033 (1) - I lul'd, I would personally change this but up to you | Noep lol.
00:46:402 (4,5,6,7) - This stream is a bit random don'tcha think | Remapped.
00:53:770 (8) - why the gap at 00:53:945? It's filled in everywhere else | Added.
01:28:770 (6,7) - I'm almost tempted to suggest to make this a triplet starting at 01:28:682 but I can't decide which I like more. personally I think triplet plays better but it's up to you on this one | Made this a triple because idk.
01:49:910 (6) - I would move this to x:276 y:200 to emphasize the stop (this is what I do at least) | Added.
03:21:928 (3) - Remove this because the synth here goes white-blue-red on the ticks | It does?
03:56:577 (5) - NC
04:19:032 (9) - I always like "capping" my streams, so perhaps an NC here? :D | Fixed.

This is a really fun diff to play! the spacing is awesome :) Good job wooo :D

aaand I can't mod extras too well gg

Good luck with this mapset, I like it a lot :)
Thank you! :D
FrzR

Smug- wrote:

i would say from #modreqs but i've been wanting to mod this for a while but never got around to it >w>;

[Easy]
Consider adding slidertick hitsounds in some areas to keep the nice clap going :3 ~Hmm. I dunno. It'd take a lot of work for me. But I'll do my best. >~<
Although adding a lot of my suggestions would mean a lot of remapping I think that it would feel much better to play those strong beats instead of having the sliders finish them for you

00:03:244 (4) - NC and add a whistle here to imitate 00:01:840 (2) ~Added
00:06:752 (1) - NC ~Fixed
00:04:998 (1) - Consider to changing to something like the image because 00:05:700 (3) - finishes on a strong part of the intro (where the drums start)
http://puu.sh/90BIz.jpg ~Fixed. But not exactly as suggested though. lol
00:09:559 (4) - NC ~Fixed
00:11:665 (2) - Perhaps break this up into two circles because again it finishes on a strong part of the intro ~I'm not sure about this. This is fine the way it is now I think. Denied.
00:23:244 (1) - This would be a good place for slidertick hitsounds ~Added. But wrong hitsound. I need the right template for this but I don't know where to get it. </3
00:25:349 (3) - Add clap on sliderend? ~Added
00:28:858 (3) - NC ~Fixed
00:33:770 (6) - Again this finishes on the downbeat, maybe change it up to be a 1/1 slider and a circle? ~Fixed
00:39:384 (5) - Same as this ^ ~B-But.. My design.. ;w; Fixed
00:42:542 (3) - ^ ~I don't get this. This is a 1/1 slider already. :/
00:45:700 (4) - NC ~Fixed
01:24:647 (3) - Another downbeat issue ~Fixed
01:36:577 (1) - clap on sliderend? ~Added
01:46:051 (1) - Another good example for slidertick hitsounds ~Added. Same problem. Will edit the slidertick hitsounds once I get the right file.
02:09:910 (2) - Move NC to here instead of 02:09:559 (1) - ~Fixed
02:15:524 (6) - Maybe add NC here? I like having finishes be new combos personally (this is mainly preference) ~Eehh. No thanks. >~< Denied.
02:41:138 (2) - clap on sliderend ~Added
03:09:209 (2) - Improve blanket ~Fixed
03:10:963 (4) - I don't see why you leave a gap at 03:12:016 ~I followed a different beat here. Not sure if I should remap that. Seems fine for me. :/ Denied
03:27:103 (3) - This plays better and allows for a better placement of NC http://puu.sh/90Cq5.jpg ~Remapped a bit there. =w=)b
03:34:121 (4) - NC ~Fixed
03:59:384 (1) - and 04:00:787 (3) - since this is the first time you've used this kind of slider in the entire map I would reconsider changing it to be a standard curve to keep consistency ~Got it. Thanks, Fixed.

This is a very nice diff though. The positioning and structure is very good :) ~yay~
Thanks! =w=)b
verto
Hiya, here is my mod for the taiko. When I spoiler a bunch of suggestions, that means you should either accept or reject them all, because they are all the exact same things but at different times.

Muzukashii

SPOILER
00:04:121 (11,12,13,14) - d k - d k? the kat flow is more constant that way
00:06:402 (19,20) - invert, 00:06:752 (20,21,22) - will sound better together
00:08:507 (25) - a note here would fill the emptiness of that part. (d would be better than k)
00:11:138 (35) - remove - since you mapped the instruments there it sounds confusing. I thought you mapped the vocal for first, but then d d k would sound better and would flow well with the notes around it
00:25:524 (107,108) - invert, the frying pan sound is on the blue notes though, so I don't know how could you map it both accurately and fitting for muzukashii
00:30:086 (130) - preferably remove, or at least make it d
00:32:893 (143) - ^
00:33:770 (146,147,148) - slider instead?
00:42:893 (182,183,184) - d d k - fits the vocal better
00:44:998 (191) - k->d
00:52:980 (226,227) - invert, or make 00:52:717 (225,226,227,228) - this k d d k (first emphasises the vocal, second the instruments)
00:56:226 (240,241) - 240: k->d 241: remove
00:57:103 (244) - remove?
01:10:261 (306) - move it to the next red line and k->d
01:11:226 (310,311) - this and 01:12:366 (315,316) - should be monocolour in my opinion, if that's possible without breaking the constancy of kat-don order actually never mind I think I'm splitting hair here
01:13:068 (318) - move to the next red line and make 01:13:244 (318,319,320,321) - k d k d, or k d - d
01:27:805 (391,392,393,394,395) - I find this part confusing as hell to play while listening to the music. Wouldn't it be better to map the vocal here instead of denying the 1/6 the instruments give off? How I imagine it: http://puu.sh/92lOh.jpg (tbh I just moved 2 notes, not even a big change)
02:57:629 (140,141,142,143,144) - ^

01:49:559 (86) - d->k - completes the alternating thing you did there with the previous part.
01:53:594 (3) - k->d
01:56:401 (15) - ^
01:59:208 (30) - ^
02:02:015 (42) - ^
02:04:998 (58) - move to the next red line and remove 02:05:875 (62) -
02:28:858 (10) - I feel this needs a note, maybe a triplet with 02:28:682 (9,10) - ?
02:40:611 (57) - move to the previous red line?
02:47:804 (88) - d->k OR 02:47:804 (88,89,90) - make this d k d
03:01:139 (4) - make it kkk starting from there?
03:03:770 (16) - d->k?
03:16:577 (71) - ^
either put a d 03:21:138 (89) - here or remove 03:21:314 (89) - (or both actually, then 03:21:490 (90) - d->k would be nice, but only if you do both)
03:34:121 (131) - D->k
03:36:928 (140) - d->k, or d->D
03:37:630 (142,143,144) - k k d then 03:39:384 (148) - d->k to complete it
03:39:735 (149,150,151,152,153,154,155,156,157,158) - (kat don kat don katdonkatdonkat don kat - try saying that outloud to the rhythm :D)
03:43:068 (159) - either make this k or 03:43:244 (160) - this D
03:45:875 (173) - k->d
03:48:682 (185) - ^
03:51:489 (200) - ^
03:54:296 (212) - ^
03:56:840 (226) - ^
03:59:735 (240,241,242,243,244) - k - d d k ?
04:02:191 (252) - d->k
04:02:893 (255) - move it to the next red line
04:05:349 (268,269,270,271,272) - k - d d k ?


Oni

SPOILER
00:01:138 (2) - d->k
00:03:595 (12) - ^
00:04:998 (16) - ^
00:06:051 (21) - ^
00:12:279 (45) - d?
00:13:594 (53) - remove, there is no 1/2 break in this part
00:14:998 (64) - ^
00:16:401 (73) - ^
00:17:805 (85) - ^
00:19:209 (95) - ^
00:20:612 (109) - ^
00:22:016 (119) - ^
00:24:823 (140) - ^
00:26:226 (151) - ^
00:27:630 (160) - ^
00:29:033 (171) - ^
00:30:437 (181) - ^
00:31:840 (195) - ^


00:16:752 (76,77,78,79,80,81,82,83) - From this: http://puu.sh/93ZI1.jpg to http://puu.sh/93ZHC.jpg this. It should sound exactly like the drum in the music.
00:27:980 (162,163,164,165,166,167,168,169) - ^
00:19:384 (96,97,98,99,100,101,102,103,104,105,106,107,108) - This is the same as ^, the pattern should be the same as well.
00:30:612 (182,183,184,185,186,187,188,189,190,191,192,193,194) - ^
00:22:191 (119,120,121,122,123,124,125,126,127,128,129,130,131) - how about kdkdkdkd~ for this part?
00:30:261 (180) - k->d
00:47:279 (294,295,296,297,298,299,300,301,302,303,304,305,306,307,308,309,310,311) - Do you really need all those triplets? Trim it, maybe make some quad-duplet patterns
00:52:893 (336,337,338,339,340,341,342,343,344,345,346,347,348,349,350,351,352,353) - ^
00:49:910 (315) - d->k
00:51:840 (331) - ^
01:07:103 (441,442,443) - slider like in muzu? 1/3 stream wouldn't be bad either
01:22:279 (542) - d !
01:22:805 (547) - ^
01:25:086 (563) - ^
01:25:700 (570) - d->k
01:34:472 (29) - ^ for the constant flow of kats
01:34:823 (31) - ^
01:39:296 (59) - remove, completely unnecessarily, I don't know why is it even there.
01:39:998 (63,64,65,66) - from what I see this pattern is mostly on vocal, but then remove 01:39:998 (63) - or add a note to the red line before it.
01:41:840 (79) - d->k the next few 1/2 breaks have k - k patterns as well.
01:48:331 (123) - fill the gap
02:45:524 (128) - k->d I feel there is too many k here compared the previous patterns and the music isn't giving the opportunity to put more kat in there.
02:45:699 (129,130,131) - I think the k should be either at the first or the last note of that triplet
02:50:700 (165) - k this will cover the vocal part entirely
02:54:910 (198) - ^
02:58:243 (226) - remove or at least make that triplet anything but not kdk
03:05:437 (37,38) - dk
03:05:700 (37,38) - remove

03:07:718 (53) - remove, I don't see why a kdddk would fit there
03:10:963 (74,75,76,77,78) - http://puu.sh/953Yp/7abfa8b43b.jpg -> http://puu.sh/953XX/fc257681fd.jpg ? (that's an 1/6 kddd by the way)
03:27:805 (173,174) - k k ? the next longer 1/2 is similar
03:34:121 (196) - k
03:35:173 (200) - ^


03:42:542 (231) - k
03:43:244 (233) - ^
03:51:577 (290) - ^, too much don there compared to the next few patterns

Great taiko overall, fun to play - Hope it'll get ranked soon :D
jonathanlfj
hmm lets see

[AI's Extra]
00:56:928 (6) - add a finish on this?
01:07:103 (3,4) - the spacing here is a bit hard to read, you can try reducing this spacing and then enlarge 01:06:752 (1,2,3) to contrast it better
01:37:980 (8) - forgot a clap
02:42:366 (1) - remove the new combo, there is no reason why 02:42:191 (1) should be alone (would take a while to fix the colour matches rip)
02:49:559 (5,7,9) - this overlap was very hard to read on first play-through, give it some more spacing
03:22:191 (4) - add a NC here, this makes the rhythm change at 03:21:489 (1,2,3) stand out more
03:36:577 (1,2,3,4,5) - hmm why is there a stream here, there is nothing in the music to cover for it...swap for 1/2 notes or a repeat slider if you really want to keep the 1/4
04:02:191 (1) - because the repeat may be covered by the hitburst at 04:01:665 (5), there is not a lot of time for players to read the repeat. Try giving it a different curve to make it more readable.
04:05:261 (3) - clap on end
04:06:665 (3) - ^

[Insane]
00:36:402 (8) - ctrl+g flows better imo
01:36:928 (1) - starting here NC is a bit screwed up; remove NC on this
01:37:630 (7) - add NC here
01:38:331 (1) - remove
01:39:033 (1) - and add
01:52:717 (1) - if you want to follow the music better, you can give this a more interesting shape: 01:53:068 (1) - you should have used this hitsounding pattern in the first section at 00:12:016 (1), makes it much more interesting
02:26:752 (1) - there is a vocal at 02:27:016, so shorten this to there and add a note at 02:27:103, or map it like 02:30:963 (1,2,3)
02:52:016 (1,2,3,4,5) - maybe a bit nazi but this stream is not perfectly alined
03:22:366 (7,8,9) - this flow is a bit broken, give 03:22:542 (8,9) more spacing for a smoother transition to the slow part
03:31:414 - unsnapped green line, snap to 03:31:402
03:45:349 (1) - again, try the hitsounding pattern at 01:53:068 (1)
the only problem i see with this diff is the hitsounding, you might want to look more into interesting hitsounding patterns than the finish/whistle on big white ticks (try utilizing the custom clap more)

[Hard]
00:50:787 (6,7,8,1) - the stacking here makes this a bit confusing to read, since you used a 1/4 stack right after a 1/2 one. suggest you bring 00:50:787 (6,7) - out of stack
01:40:086 (4) - this repeat is very difficult to react to since it was covered by 01:39:384 (2), move it to a more visible position
02:26:752 (1) - try a finish on the start
02:43:068 (6,7,8,1) - same as 00:50:787 (6,7,8,1) (do i smell copy paste?)
03:09:911 (4) - same as 01:40:086 (4)
03:44:998 (6) - unsnapped slider, should be 1/4 or 1/8
03:56:577 (2,3) - this jump is a bit too intense for a hard diff, try stacking it with 03:57:805 (6)
04:18:331 (1) - its kinda hard to realize how long you need to hold this slider, so for easier following break this into two repeat sliders
this diff suffers from the same hitsounding problem as Insane, whatever you do to improve hitsounding on Insane please do on this diff as well

[Neormal]
00:29:209 - add a note here, follows the music better and avoid the longer pause
00:56:736 - unsnapped green line, snap to 00:56:752
01:22:191 (1) - missing a whistle on start?
01:27:805 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - the whistle spam is a bit too much, try removing some that land on weaker beats e.g. 01:29:384 and 01:29:735
02:06:051 (4,6) - remove the whistle so it corresponds with 02:11:314 (3,4,5,6)
02:49:209 (1) - finish on start
03:04:647 (3,4,5) - this may confuse some beginners on this AR, try to map this without the triple stack
03:12:366 (3,4,5) - again something very confusing to play. i would sacrifice following the vocals here and make 03:13:068 (5) into a 1/2 slider (or you can map it like 03:17:980 (3,4))
03:15:173 (3) - clap on end
03:22:893 (1) - i'd advise you to increase the spacing for this whole section, the way these notes overlap makes it really hard to tell between 1/1 and 1/2 spacing
03:56:928 - add a note here, it actually makes this section easier to play
04:17:980 (1) - this spinner is a bit short for a Normal diff, try deleting 04:17:630 (4) and starting the spinner there instead
04:19:193 - unsnapped green line, you dont really need it so remove it

[Fr33z3R's Easy]
00:26:051 (1,2) - clap on end
00:29:559 (3) - clap on repeat
02:10:261 (1,2) - this can be blanketed better
02:42:893 (3,1) - some spacing inconsistency here
03:16:577 (3,1,2,3,1) - ^
03:28:507 (6) - NC should be here instead of 03:29:910 (1)
03:32:717 (1) - remove NC
03:52:016 (2,4) - clap
03:59:384 (3) - NC here instead of 03:57:980 (1)
04:13:068 (4,5) - did you reverse the hitsounding intentionally?
04:19:193 - unsnapped green line, its not needed anyways so just delete it
you should do the same combo colour hax as the higher diffs to correspond with the sb, some parts of this diff seems really out of place

Thats all from me for now; There are still some issues with hitsounding and consistency in some diffs, so please try to resolve these and get some people to specifically mod your hitsounds to fit better with the music. If you think you are ready again then let me know.
neonat
Will get to the recent 2 mods on Friday ugh, didn't have enough time on my computer today lol...
Topic Starter
Mira-san

jonathanlfj wrote:

hmm lets see

All suggestions without a reply are applied.

[Insane]
00:36:402 (8) - ctrl+g flows better imo
01:36:928 (1) - starting here NC is a bit screwed up; remove NC on this
01:37:630 (7) - add NC here
01:38:331 (1) - remove
01:39:033 (1) - and add
01:52:717 (1) - if you want to follow the music better, you can give this a more interesting shape: 01:53:068 (1) - you should have used this hitsounding pattern in the first section at 00:12:016 (1), makes it much more interesting
02:26:752 (1) - there is a vocal at 02:27:016, so shorten this to there and add a note at 02:27:103, or map it like 02:30:963 (1,2,3)
02:52:016 (1,2,3,4,5) - maybe a bit nazi but this stream is not perfectly alined
03:22:366 (7,8,9) - this flow is a bit broken, give 03:22:542 (8,9) more spacing for a smoother transition to the slow part
03:31:414 - unsnapped green line, snap to 03:31:402 | Removed. It does nothing anyway lol.
03:45:349 (1) - again, try the hitsounding pattern at 01:53:068 (1)
the only problem i see with this diff is the hitsounding, you might want to look more into interesting hitsounding patterns than the finish/whistle on big white ticks (try utilizing the custom clap more) | I can use a name LOL. I applied some claps though I don't know if it's good or anything.

[Hard]
00:50:787 (6,7,8,1) - the stacking here makes this a bit confusing to read, since you used a 1/4 stack right after a 1/2 one. suggest you bring 00:50:787 (6,7) - out of stack
01:40:086 (4) - this repeat is very difficult to react to since it was covered by 01:39:384 (2), move it to a more visible position
02:26:752 (1) - try a finish on the start
02:43:068 (6,7,8,1) - same as 00:50:787 (6,7,8,1) (do i smell copy paste?) | Yep. RIP Mapping 2013-2014.
03:09:911 (4) - same as 01:40:086 (4)
03:44:998 (6) - unsnapped slider, should be 1/4 or 1/8
03:56:577 (2,3) - this jump is a bit too intense for a hard diff, try stacking it with 03:57:805 (6)
04:18:331 (1) - its kinda hard to realize how long you need to hold this slider, so for easier following break this into two repeat sliders
this diff suffers from the same hitsounding problem as Insane, whatever you do to improve hitsounding on Insane please do on this diff as well. | Tried to do something about hitsounds. It feels more 'alive' now. heh heh.

Thats all from me for now; There are still some issues with hitsounding and consistency in some diffs, so please try to resolve these and get some people to specifically mod your hitsounds to fit better with the music. If you think you are ready again then let me know.
Thanks! :o
neonat

jonathanlfj wrote:

hmm lets see

[Neormal]
00:29:209 - add a note here, follows the music better and avoid the longer pause I feel having that slight break here gives a little bit more rest, yet still following the rhythm
00:56:736 - unsnapped green line, snap to 00:56:752 snapped
01:22:191 (1) - missing a whistle on start? added
01:27:805 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - the whistle spam is a bit too much, try removing some that land on weaker beats e.g. 01:29:384 and 01:29:735 removed the whistles on the 1st 2 slider ends
02:06:051 (4,6) - remove the whistle so it corresponds with 02:11:314 (3,4,5,6) ok
02:49:209 (1) - finish on start added
03:04:647 (3,4,5) - this may confuse some beginners on this AR, try to map this without the triple stack ok
03:12:366 (3,4,5) - again something very confusing to play. i would sacrifice following the vocals here and make 03:13:068 (5) into a 1/2 slider (or you can map it like 03:17:980 (3,4)) changed
03:15:173 (3) - clap on end ok
03:22:893 (1) - i'd advise you to increase the spacing for this whole section, the way these notes overlap makes it really hard to tell between 1/1 and 1/2 spacing increased to 1.0
03:56:928 - add a note here, it actually makes this section easier to play ok
04:17:980 (1) - this spinner is a bit short for a Normal diff, try deleting 04:17:630 (4) and starting the spinner there instead I was trying to follow the music where the snare started the sorta roll
04:19:193 - unsnapped green line, you dont really need it so remove it removed
Thnx

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Stefan
Took everything from HashishKabob's Mod, thanks for it.

_verto_ wrote:

Hiya, here is my mod for the taiko. When I spoiler a bunch of suggestions, that means you should either accept or reject them all, because they are all the exact same things but at different times.

Muzukashii

SPOILER
00:06:402 (19,20) - invert, 00:06:752 (20,21,22) - will sound better together I've started following the drums in the background from 00:06:402.
00:11:138 (35) - remove - since you mapped the instruments there it sounds confusing. I thought you mapped the vocal for first, but then d d k would sound better and would flow well with the notes around it Moved to 00:11:489, where it actually belongs.
00:25:524 (107,108) - invert, the frying pan sound is on the blue notes though, so I don't know how could you map it both accurately and fitting for muzukashii The current pattern is the closest way to map it to the music without using blue notes. May sounds weird but that fits well here for the Muzukashii Difficulty.
00:30:086 (130) - preferably remove, or at least make it d Removing it sounds really empty here. About to change it into d; I don't really feel like since it has a good flow at all. May change it later.
00:32:893 (143) - ^ ^
00:33:770 (146,147,148) - slider instead? I like to map that single beats here.
00:42:893 (182,183,184) - d d k - fits the vocal better Meh.. I am not sure about this one.
00:44:998 (191) - k->d Follow vocal.
00:56:226 (240,241) - 240: k->d 241: remove I like that extra beat here. :v
00:57:103 (244) - remove? nope.
01:11:226 (310,311) - this and 01:12:366 (315,316) - should be monocolour in my opinion, if that's possible without breaking the constancy of kat-don order actually never mind I think I'm splitting hair here I don't even
01:13:068 (318) - move to the next red line and make 01:13:244 (318,319,320,321) - k d k d, or k d - d made d k - d
02:28:858 (10) - I feel this needs a note, maybe a triplet with 02:28:682 (9,10) - ? That wouldn't make much sense since I didn't used here any triplets in the previous part too.
03:01:139 (4) - make it kkk starting from there? No.
03:03:770 (16) - d->k? I previousl also did d k, so why the sudden change here?
03:16:577 (71) - ^ I find the d k k combo pretty nice, no change here.
either put a d 03:21:138 (89) - here or remove 03:21:314 (89) - (or both actually, then 03:21:490 (90) - d->k would be nice, but only if you do both) can't agree with any idea here.
03:34:121 (131) - D->k D emphasize it better.
03:36:928 (140) - d->k, or d->D Sounds too deep as that I could change to k, D wouldn't fit.
03:59:735 (240,241,242,243,244) - k - d d k ? Following the previous part.
04:02:191 (252) - d->k ^
04:05:349 (268,269,270,271,272) - k - d d k ? ^


Oni

SPOILER
00:06:051 (21) - ^ That's purposed to be deeper.
00:12:279 (45) - d? That perfectly follow the Drums behind.
00:13:594 (53) - remove, there is no 1/2 break in this part Because there is no real 1/2 beat that doesn't mean I don't have to map this. :P I will make however some breaks here.
00:14:998 (64) - ^
00:16:401 (73) - ^
00:17:805 (85) - ^
00:19:209 (95) - ^
00:20:612 (109) - ^
00:22:016 (119) - ^
00:24:823 (140) - ^
00:26:226 (151) - ^
00:27:630 (160) - ^
00:29:033 (171) - ^
00:30:437 (181) - ^
00:31:840 (195) - ^


00:16:752 (76,77,78,79,80,81,82,83) - From this: http://puu.sh/93ZI1.jpg to http://puu.sh/93ZHC.jpg this. It should sound exactly like the drum in the music. Personally it currently sounds more like fitting exactly to the Drums in the background music. Maybe I am wrong here..
00:27:980 (162,163,164,165,166,167,168,169) - ^ ^
00:19:384 (96,97,98,99,100,101,102,103,104,105,106,107,108) - This is the same as ^, the pattern should be the same as well. Made some own changes to have more variety.
00:30:612 (182,183,184,185,186,187,188,189,190,191,192,193,194) - ^ ^
00:22:191 (119,120,121,122,123,124,125,126,127,128,129,130,131) - how about kdkdkdkd~ for this part? That doesn't feel right imo. :/
00:47:279 (294,295,296,297,298,299,300,301,302,303,304,305,306,307,308,309,310,311) - Do you really need all those triplets? Trim it, maybe make some quad-duplet patterns Made some changes here.
00:52:893 (336,337,338,339,340,341,342,343,344,345,346,347,348,349,350,351,352,353) - ^ ^
00:49:910 (315) - d->k d fits better, I don't follow vocal mainly.
00:51:840 (331) - ^ ^
01:07:103 (441,442,443) - slider like in muzu? 1/3 stream wouldn't be bad either I really wouldn't like to put a slider here, the circles (in both Difficulties) fits perfectly with the "one, two, three, four" voice here.
01:22:279 (542) - d ! Sounds kinda spamy imo.
01:22:805 (547) - ^ ^
01:25:086 (563) - ^ ^
01:25:700 (570) - d->k too deep as I could put k here, as said: I follow the Background music mainly and not the vocal.
01:34:472 (29) - ^ for the constant flow of kats Changed to kdk
01:34:823 (31) - ^ Background music here.
01:39:296 (59) - remove, completely unnecessarily, I don't know why is it even there. But such Doubles are actually pretty interesting to play, gonna remove when one more person point this.
01:41:840 (79) - d->k the next few 1/2 breaks have k - k patterns as well. No change here.
01:48:331 (123) - fill the gap ???
02:45:524 (128) - k->d I feel there is too many k here compared the previous patterns and the music isn't giving the opportunity to put more kat in there. The background music actually gives the chance to put k here.
02:45:699 (129,130,131) - I think the k should be either at the first or the last note of that triplet That thing is just stupid, removed instead.
02:50:700 (165) - k this will cover the vocal part entirely No need to follow vocal here.
02:54:910 (198) - ^ ^
02:58:243 (226) - remove or at least make that triplet anything but not kdk 01:28:331 (589,590,591) - was also fine and I think it fits fine here, thinking about later if I will remove or not.
03:07:718 (53) - remove, I don't see why a kdddk would fit there That would sounds pretty empty without this circle.
03:10:963 (74,75,76,77,78) - http://puu.sh/953Yp/7abfa8b43b.jpg -> http://puu.sh/953XX/fc257681fd.jpg ? (that's an 1/6 kddd by the way) That looks really really random to have one single 1/6 part in all the four minutes I've mapped, also this doesn't sounds really clear imo.
03:27:805 (173,174) - k k ? the next longer 1/2 is similar Changed 03:27:805 (174).
03:35:173 (200) - ^ there is no k to hear? :o

03:42:542 (231) - k It's a harder beat which d follows better.
03:43:244 (233) - ^ Made 03:43:068 (233) to k
03:51:577 (290) - ^, too much don there compared to the next few patterns Nah, that's okay here.

Great taiko overall, fun to play - Hope it'll get ranked soon :D
Zetera
Hi, I am here to mod Stefan's diffs. :P

Muzukashii:

01:13:770 (323) - k (looks better with kdkdk 01:13:419 (321,322,323,324,325) - , also there is a new vocal note.)
01:17:103 (337) - k (for consistency.)
01:36:752 (28,29) - d on both sounds better for me.
01:37:454 (32) - High vocal note comes one circle later, yet both are k's. This one should be a d.
01:41:840 (52) - New vocal note, thus k.
01:43:945 (63) - analog to the one before, decide whether to change both or none.
01:44:472 (66) - I don't think this one is really needed.
02:06:402 (64) - (optional) Move to 02:06:226 - , then move 02:06:752 (66,67) - both one 1/4-tick ahead. Lastly, change 66 to d. (You'd also have to proceed like this with 02:12:016 (92,93,94,95,96,97) - , since they are similar.)
02:53:419 (119,120,121) - (optional) Swap colours.

The refrains are almost the same, as a conclusion, all changes in the first one also are requested for the second one.


Oni:

This is overall a solid diff, one general thing: Why is there a break? Taiko no tatsujin doesn't contain breaks in any beatmap. They shouldn't be here either. Since this map is not really too challenging (like 250BPM-Chaosstreams), it doesn't nessecarily need a break. Consider removing it.

01:34:823 (31) - k (Compare this to other parts of the map, only in this little section, there is a lack of kat.)
01:38:682 (56,57) - (optional) Swap colours.
01:34:823 (31) - (optional) k (sounds better imo.)
02:55:524 (204) - ^


Most of the things I mentioned are optional, I really like the diffs, please look at the things that you should change and think about those that you don't need to implement. Thanks and good luck.
Nwolf
woof :3

[Stefan's Taco Muzukashii]

00:17:366 (64) - Two differently colored triplets does seem a little bit hard to me, and 00:19:384 (74,75,76,77,78,79,80,81) - shares the sound and only has one triplet - maybe delete this note?
00:28:595 (123) - ^
01:05:086 (286) - ^ (I am boring)
<insert the rest here>

[Stefan's Taco Oni]

00:02:542 (9) - Vocals go up a lot here, change to a kat
00:19:823 (100) - I actually dislike the whole stream (: >) but deleting this note gives the player a short break, decreases the gap between muzu and oni aaaand it fits more to the music!
00:31:051 (187) - ^
00:48:419 (303) - Think this triplet is a little bit too much, maybe remove this note?
00:54:033 (346) - ^
01:26:840 - Vocals here, note here pls


Nice taiko diffs, good luck!
neonat
Since I have not gone through the remade Insane before

Insane

00:23:244 (1) - finish on start of slider (soft hitsound addition if you have to)
00:34:472 (1) - ^
00:36:226 (7,8) - why is this jump the biggest of them all in this pattern, I actually think it would be the smallest
01:02:542 (1) - finish on start
01:05:173 (5,6) - the extreme curve of 01:05:349 (6) makes the flow from 01:05:173 (5) to the slider to the next object very weird and affects the good flow of it
01:07:454 (7,8) - you really want it so far apart?
01:08:156 (1) - soft addition finish on start
01:10:875 (2,1) - not blanket perfectly
01:21:840 (13) - make the slider a repeat, there is vocals at 01:22:016
02:26:752 - normal addition finish on start of slider please
02:56:752 (5) - NC
02:59:209 (2) - make it a 1/4 beat slider
03:23:945 (1,2,3) - place them closer together, less jump here fits the song better, same distance as 03:27:103 (4,5,6)
03:45:349 (1) - normal addition finish sounds better



That's about it that seems very clear and obvious.
streeteelf
Mod from me:

Easy:
02:26:402 - I'd make this spinner shorter to this point and later from 02:26:752 to 02:27:103 - slider then 02:27:454 - circle to keep the rhythm.
03:12:016 - Circle

Hard:
00:06:402 - Try to make something like that:
01:22:191 (1,2) - Make these sliders a little bit longer with 1 reverse that short with 3 reverse.
01:52:016 (5,6) - Like I said above to two sliders.
02:22:542 and 02:25:349 - Circle
02:52:015 (1,2) - Longer, but with 1 reverse than short with 3 rev.
03:44:296 (5) - Like above.
03:44:998 (6) - 1 rev is better than 2 here, better keeps the rhythm.

Insane:
00:28:858 (1,2) - Too far from slider's end.
00:32:630 (5) - Move this circle between end of first slider and beginning of second slider.
00:56:051 (9,10,12) - These sliders are too far from each other.
01:23:244 (1) - 1 rev than 2.
02:07:016 (8) - Remove circle.
02:39:296 (6) - Move this circle between end of first slider and beginning of second slider.
02:41:402 (4) - Like above.
02:43:507 (7) - Like above.
03:21:665 (2) - Change this slider to circle
03:21:840 - Circle
03:46:665 (6) - Move this circle between end of first slider and beginning of second slider.
03:55:086 (5) - Like above.
03:59:296 (8) - Like above.
04:14:735 (7) - Like above.

That's all I think.
Topic Starter
Mira-san

neonat wrote:

Since I have not gone through the remade Insane before

Insane

00:23:244 (1) - finish on start of slider (soft hitsound addition if you have to)
00:34:472 (1) - ^
00:36:226 (7,8) - why is this jump the biggest of them all in this pattern, I actually think it would be the smallest | eh.
01:02:542 (1) - finish on start
01:05:173 (5,6) - the extreme curve of 01:05:349 (6) makes the flow from 01:05:173 (5) to the slider to the next object very weird and affects the good flow of it | hmm.
01:07:454 (7,8) - you really want it so far apart? | yis.
01:08:156 (1) - soft addition finish on start
01:10:875 (2,1) - not blanket perfectly
01:21:840 (13) - make the slider a repeat, there is vocals at 01:22:016
02:26:752 - normal addition finish on start of slider please
02:56:752 (5) - NC
02:59:209 (2) - make it a 1/4 beat slider
03:23:945 (1,2,3) - place them closer together, less jump here fits the song better, same distance as 03:27:103 (4,5,6)
03:45:349 (1) - normal addition finish sounds better

No comment = applied. About 02:59:209 (2), I should get feedback for it. I'm not sure if it would still be okay if I left (3) in its original position. More challenge I guess. Probably. :o

That's about it that seems very clear and obvious.

streeteelf wrote:

Mod from me:

Hard:
00:06:402 - Try to make something like that: | I wouldn't decide to overmap the soft intro.
01:22:191 (1,2) - Make these sliders a little bit longer with 1 reverse that short with 3 reverse. | I'm following the vocals here.
01:52:016 (5,6) - Like I said above to two sliders.
02:22:542 and 02:25:349 - Circle | Applied.
02:52:015 (1,2) - Longer, but with 1 reverse than short with 3 rev.
03:44:296 (5) - Like above.
03:44:998 (6) - 1 rev is better than 2 here, better keeps the rhythm.

All reverse slider mods are not applied since they fit properly, unless you give some like, in-depth description of why you think I should. Thanks!

Insane:
00:28:858 (1,2) - Too far from slider's end.
00:32:630 (5) - Move this circle between end of first slider and beginning of second slider.
00:56:051 (9,10,12) - These sliders are too far from each other.
01:23:244 (1) - 1 rev than 2. | wot. :o
02:07:016 (8) - Remove circle.
02:39:296 (6) - Move this circle between end of first slider and beginning of second slider.
02:41:402 (4) - Like above.
02:43:507 (7) - Like above.
03:21:665 (2) - Change this slider to circle
03:21:840 - Circle
03:46:665 (6) - Move this circle between end of first slider and beginning of second slider.
03:55:086 (5) - Like above.
03:59:296 (8) - Like above.
04:14:735 (7) - Like above.

Nothing changed on Insane. All of those are intended, in which I believe follows the rhythm and everything else properly.

That's all I think.
Thanks! :o
Stefan

Sala- wrote:

Hi, I am here to mod Stefan's diffs. :P

Muzukashii:

01:13:770 (323) - k (looks better with kdkdk 01:13:419 (321,322,323,324,325) - , also there is a new vocal note.)
01:17:103 (337) - k (for consistency.)
01:36:752 (28,29) - d on both sounds better for me.
01:37:454 (32) - High vocal note comes one circle later, yet both are k's. This one should be a d.
01:41:840 (52) - New vocal note, thus k.
01:43:945 (63) - analog to the one before, decide whether to change both or none.
01:44:472 (66) - I don't think this one is really needed.
02:06:402 (64) - (optional) Move to 02:06:226 - , then move 02:06:752 (66,67) - both one 1/4-tick ahead. Lastly, change 66 to d. (You'd also have to proceed like this with 02:12:016 (92,93,94,95,96,97) - , since they are similar.)
02:53:419 (119,120,121) - (optional) Swap colours.

The refrains are almost the same, as a conclusion, all changes in the first one also are requested for the second one.


Oni:

This is overall a solid diff, one general thing: Why is there a break? Taiko no tatsujin doesn't contain breaks in any beatmap. They shouldn't be here either. Since this map is not really too challenging (like 250BPM-Chaosstreams), it doesn't nessecarily need a break. Consider removing it. because TnT =! osu!Taiko

01:34:823 (31) - k (Compare this to other parts of the map, only in this little section, there is a lack of kat.) Still k wouldn't fit well to the background music, I don't find this part lacks on k.
01:34:823 (31) - (optional) k (sounds better imo.) no change.
02:55:524 (204) - ^ ^


Most of the things I mentioned are optional, I really like the diffs, please look at the things that you should change and think about those that you don't need to implement. Thanks and good luck.

Nwolf wrote:

woof :3

[Stefan's Taco Muzukashii]

00:17:366 (64) - Two differently colored triplets does seem a little bit hard to me, and 00:19:384 (74,75,76,77,78,79,80,81) - shares the sound and only has one triplet - maybe delete this note? no change.
00:28:595 (123) - ^ no change.
01:05:086 (286) - ^ (I am boring) no change.
<insert the rest here>

[Stefan's Taco Oni]

00:02:542 (9) - Vocals go up a lot here, change to a kat no change.
00:19:823 (100) - I actually dislike the whole stream (: >) but deleting this note gives the player a short break, decreases the gap between muzu and oni aaaand it fits more to the music! Changed.
00:31:051 (187) - ^ Changed.
00:48:419 (303) - Think this triplet is a little bit too much, maybe remove this note? Changed.
00:54:033 (346) - ^ Changed.
01:26:840 - Vocals here, note here pls Changed.


Nice taiko diffs, good luck!
be right back
Leorda
Hello there~

[Fr33z3R's Easy]
00:37:980 (3,4,5) - This pattern feels random to me because the curve of (3) looks curve leads to down while (4) is on top, so the flows didn't work well. Perhaps, make it like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1723254
01:45:349 (2) - Spacing too close from previous object. Respace the spacing
02:11:665 (1,2) - Swap new combo for your combo pattern
02:43:945 (1) - Spacing too close from previous object. Respace the spacing
03:20:086 (1,2,3) - No hitsound for this part? It feels empty btw
04:01:840 (6) - Why finish here? The music itself isn't hit the cymbal here....
04:13:068 (4) - Spacing too close from previous object. Respace the spacing

[Normal]
* I don't know if this too hard for normal diff since there's a 1/2 stream in this diff... well, at least the players is funt o play it XD

01:21:489 (4) - Make a blanket slider like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1723411
02:05:700 (3,4,5,6) - How about make a pattern like this one? This part looks mess up to me.... https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1723409
02:35:173 (1) - Why clap at head slider? Any reason?
02:49:209 (1) - Add clap at tail slider for consistency hitsound
02:50:612 (3) - Remove clap at tail slider for consistency hitsound
04:17:980 (1) - A bit short spinner for normal diff. For comfortable while gameplay, extend it if possible?

[Hard]
01:20:437 (4) - Remove whistle at sliderbody? It looks annoying for me.... If you remove it, do this for slider if there's a whistle sound in sliderbody
01:40:086 (4) - Reverse this slider for circular flow? Maybe the position and the slider itself is fit for making a circular flow....
01:52:717 (6) - New combo? Since it the part is separated from previous one
03:17:630 (2,3,4) - This linear flow isn't go well for this part... Why not change a pattern like this one? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1723457
03:22:893 ~ 03:34:121 - The green line in this part is useless. Remove all green line in this part

Mira-kun, sh-shall w-w-we d-d-dance?
Yopkyu
Insane:
00:17:630 (1) -
Could make spacing larger to be more consistent with previous jumps.
00:19:033 (1) -
As above or ignore both.
00:42:717 (11) -
Possibly make it less snappy (move higher).
01:05:349 (6) -
Awkward slider angle, forces weird sharp mouse change.
03:07:103 (6) -
Could increase spacing


Lower the audio % difference between the 40 and 75.

Other:
The hit-whistle sound is relatively loud, though fine normally, you've used this throughout the song and it stuck out a lot to me so not sure if its a big concern for you.
People really like stacks nowadays.

GL!
neonat

Leorda wrote:

Hello there~

[Normal]
* I don't know if this too hard for normal diff since there's a 1/2 stream in this diff... well, at least the players is funt o play it XD

01:21:489 (4) - Make a blanket slider like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1723411 ok
02:05:700 (3,4,5,6) - How about make a pattern like this one? This part looks mess up to me.... https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1723409 changed differently
02:35:173 (1) - Why clap at head slider? Any reason? changed hitsound rhythm
02:49:209 (1) - Add clap at tail slider for consistency hitsound starting without, ending without, for that 4 slider phrase
02:50:612 (3) - Remove clap at tail slider for consistency hitsound ^
04:17:980 (1) - A bit short spinner for normal diff. For comfortable while gameplay, extend it if possible? removed earlier circle to extend spinner
Thnx for the mod

SPOILER
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Topic Starter
Mira-san

Yopkyu wrote:

Insane:
00:17:630 (1) -
Could make spacing larger to be more consistent with previous jumps.
00:19:033 (1) -
As above or ignore both.
00:42:717 (11) -
Possibly make it less snappy (move higher). | nah. lol
01:05:349 (6) -
Awkward slider angle, forces weird sharp mouse change.
03:07:103 (6) -
Could increase spacing


Lower the audio % difference between the 40 and 75. | hmm, imo it's fine.

All suggestions w/o comments are applied. Thanks!

Other:
The hit-whistle sound is relatively loud, though fine normally, you've used this throughout the song and it stuck out a lot to me so not sure if its a big concern for you. | Anything about hitsounding that you think could help? ;w;
People really like stacks nowadays. | Ah. well GG.

GL!
Thanks! :D

Leorda wrote:

Hello there~

[Fr33z3R's Easy]
AS FR33Z3R TOLD ME TO TAKE CARE SOME OF THE MODS. I will do it in his stead.

00:37:980 (3,4,5) - This pattern feels random to me because the curve of (3) looks curve leads to down while (4) is on top, so the flows didn't work well. Perhaps, make it like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1723254
01:45:349 (2) - Spacing too close from previous object. Respace the spacing
02:11:665 (1,2) - Swap new combo for your combo pattern
02:43:945 (1) - Spacing too close from previous object. Respace the spacing
03:20:086 (1,2,3) - No hitsound for this part? It feels empty btw
04:01:840 (6) - Why finish here? The music itself isn't hit the cymbal here....
04:13:068 (4) - Spacing too close from previous object. Respace the spacing

Everything is applied except the New Combo suggestion. lol.
@fr33z3r: if you didn't want one of the suggestions sry. ;w;

[Hard]
01:20:437 (4) - Remove whistle at sliderbody? It looks annoying for me.... If you remove it, do this for slider if there's a whistle sound in sliderbody
01:40:086 (4) - Reverse this slider for circular flow? Maybe the position and the slider itself is fit for making a circular flow....
01:52:717 (6) - New combo? Since it the part is separated from previous one
03:17:630 (2,3,4) - This linear flow isn't go well for this part... Why not change a pattern like this one? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1723457
03:22:893 ~ 03:34:121 - The green line in this part is useless. Remove all green line in this part.

Everything is applied. Ohohoho. I like the flow suggestions :D

Mira-kun, sh-shall w-w-we d-d-dance? GGGGGG
Thanks! ;)
Yopkyu
Things relating to hit sounds are all a matter of perspective and personal preference. If no one else has commented on it then I don't think it don't really matter. Some people like loud sound effects, and some (most) people would just ignore beat map sound effects if they aren't used to/like it.

Otherwise, I'm not too sure. >//<

Lower amplitude of the audio file via some external sound editor like wavepad? Not sure if that works lol.
Topic Starter
Mira-san

Yopkyu wrote:

Things relating to hit sounds are all a matter of perspective and personal preference. If no one else has commented on it then I don't think it don't really matter. Some people like loud sound effects, and some (most) people would just ignore beat map sound effects if they aren't used to/like it.

Otherwise, I'm not too sure. >//<

Lower amplitude of the audio file via some external sound editor like wavepad? Not sure if that works lol.
Maybe I should ask around about this matter. Thanks! :D
In return you get this. lol
guineaQ
Don't give kds

Let's see again....Only focusing on hard diff

[Hard]

[Distance Snap issues]
Skip this since it's hard diff.

[Blankets]
nein~!
I check blankets with 1/16 bsd
00:30:787 (3) - Ahem (This is optional, since you made an overlap on the slider end which comes later)
00:46:752 (3) - Can be improved
01:06:051 (3) - Can be improved
01:35:524 (5) - Can be improved by...very...very...small margin.
01:50:963 (2) - Blanket this better to (3)
02:05:349 (3) - You could blanket this better to (2) (since you don't have to rearrange anything really after blanketting it)
02:10:261 (2) - Improve blanket to (3) and (1)
02:11:314 (5) - Improve blanket.
02:14:121 (5) - Definitely can improve.
02:33:068 (2) - Improve blanket involving the slider end by shifting it slightly if wanted.
02:41:840 (3) - Improve blanket :3. Evolve
02:53:068 (3) - Improve blanket
For the mods in ----, Refer to Pattern/Structure/Flow section for alternative solution.
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02:55:524 (3) - You can blanket this to (2)
02:56:928 (3) - Same ^^
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03:12:718 (6) - Can be improved
03:18:331 (4) - Can be improved
04:08:507 (3) - Definitely can be improved
04:11:314 (5) - I'm not gonna even say ;w;
04:14:121 (6) - Definitely can be improved What is thix

[Pattern/Structure/Flow]
00:25:173 (3) - Curve please. Looks kinda off as a straight slider with that kind of angle.
00:53:595 (3) - Either change this so that it flows into the next slider of create a curve on the next slider.
01:07:103 (2,3,4) - Try shifting their x and y by 4 relative to the previous circle's position. =w=
01:08:156 (1) - I would curve this so that it gives a swinging in feeling into next circle
01:09:033 (3,4,5) - Reverse seems overused here
01:25:700 (3,3) - Overuse of reverse
02:22:542 (6) - Steep angle flow shift compared to other circles.
02:26:665 (9) - This feels unnecessary.
02:45:876 (3) - I smell copy paste in the air. Refer to mod for 00:53:595 (3) -
For the mods in ----, Refer to Blankets section for alternate solution
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02:55:524 (3) - Convert this into 1/2 slider and a circle and have 1/2 slider blanket the previous slider.
02:56:928 (3) - ^^
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03:13:244 (8) - this seems out of place with all these curvy sliders around.
03:20:086 (1,2,3) - Eck. Seems overused.
03:50:086 (4) - Moar curve pl0x (Optional)

[Hitsounding]
Oh dear
This is all personal opinion, you don't have to apply them
00:02:191 (1) - Whistle instead of finish
00:02:191 (1) - Whistle instead of finish
00:04:823 (1) - Whistle instead of finish
00:05:700 (4) - add finish at the slider end
Explanation: Since finish has quite a long echo which doesn't fit the quiet part

00:06:402 (1) - Clap at the end, not the beginning.
00:07:279 (2) - Clap at the slider end
00:07:805 (3) - Clap at slider end
00:08:682 (4) - Clap at slider end
00:09:209 (1) - Clap at slider end not at the beginning
00:10:086 (2) - Clap at slider end
00:10:612 (1) - Clap at slider end not at the beginning
00:11:489 (2) - Clap at slider end
Explanation: Starting from 00:06:752 (2) - , there is a snare every 2 white ticks, and I matched the clap to the snare end part.

After this point, it's really hard to tell the difference between whistle and clap with all the background music and vocal. So I guess it doesn't really matter. (Your hitsounding works)

01:25:700 (3) - Remove the whistle in the slider slide sound (if you know what i mean)
01:27:103 (3) - ^^
02:50:261 (5) - ^^
02:51:664 (4) - ^^
02:55:524 (3) - ^^
02:56:928 (3) - ^^
Explanation: normal default whistle slide sound is just wrong.
Well I guess that's it

[Timing]
If you still have some issues with this.
.
.
I dunno anymore.

GuineaQ out
FrzR
Hi. Just posting some stuff regarding to my diff.

I don't have a steady internet connection this time around so I wont be online that much to apply the mods.
@Mira-san: Mods yoroshiku~ such weab

Still mod this map including my diff though. #rankpls
Thanks. =w=)b
Topic Starter
Mira-san
Second remap for Hard in-progress.

Won't be updating for a week or so. ;w;

edit: or not. soon™


Decided to carry out guineaQ's mods. Also changed some 'ctrl+c ctrl+v' patterns. Heh. I wish I wasn't so lazy.
Micka
star from inverness is an achievement! Nice Beatmap!
Topic Starter
Mira-san

RenzMichael wrote:

star from inverness is an achievement! Nice Beatmap!
yeah thanks. lol. :D
Topic Starter
Mira-san
double posted for some unknown reason. rip
Topic Starter
Mira-san

lol thx everyone much hue 143 <3 #heart +/-

izzydemon

come onnnnnnnnnn,,,,,
Topic Starter
Mira-san

Niokin wrote:


come onnnnnnnnnn,,,,,
lol gg :(
GAMEINSTALLER
Easy
03:42:444 - Stop kiai
04:16:204 - looks better
Topic Starter
Mira-san

GAMEINSTALLER wrote:

Easy
03:42:444 - Stop kiai
04:16:204 - looks better
wat lol :o
FrzR

Mira-san wrote:

GAMEINSTALLER wrote:

Easy
03:42:444 - Stop kiai
04:16:204 - looks better
wat lol :o
pfft.. XD
Pretty Rhythm
Hi!

From M4M owo

[General]
Add Megurine Ruka to tag? it also singing in original ver

[Easy]
Make Same DS plz
00:04:998 (1,1,1,1,1) - Set Combocolor to gray
00:32:366 (4,5,6,7) - i think it make confusing for noob player
01:06:752 (1,2,3,4,1) - Not Good pattern in Easy.
01:28:858 (2,3,4,5) - ^
01:08:507 (2,3) - it doesn't follow music
02:06:401 (3,2) - stack clearly
02:23:945 (1,1) - it doesn't follow music
02:53:770 (3,4,5,1) - Not Good pattern in Easy.
03:09:209 (2,3,4) - i think it make confusing for noob player
04:03:594 (1,2,3,4) - Not Good pattern in Easy.

[Normal]
00:23:770 (2,5) - try another sharp? i think it make confusing for noob player
00:54:121 (1) - move tail to x-64 y-180
01:26:402 (3,4,5,6) - not good pattern in Normal.
02:46:402 (1,2,3) - i think it make confusing for noob player

[Insane]
03:39:735 (1) - spin is not good choice

[Extra]
00:03:595 (2,2) - change circle or set on white lines? i think it doesn't follow music ..
00:56:226 (4) - NC (to read fast slider speed)
02:37:630 (8) - ^
01:52:630 (1) - move to 01:52:673 (1) -
02:42:366 (1) - Remove NC
02:49:033 (1) - Remove it and 02:49:121 (2) - Add NC
03:09:384 (1) - Remove NC
03:44:296 (3,4,5,6,7) - DS
down volume from 03:22:893 (1) - to 03:45:349 (1) - here ? I think here is calm part

GL ;)
neonat

Lolicore_Komari wrote:

[Normal]
00:23:770 (2,5) - try another sharp? i think it make confusing for noob player no change
00:54:121 (1) - move tail to x-64 y-180 I shifted my own way
01:26:402 (3,4,5,6) - not good pattern in Normal. I think it's clear and simple enough
02:46:402 (1,2,3) - i think it make confusing for noob player direction is clear enough
Normal
osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: Worlds End . Dance Hall.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2012
PreviewTime: 90606
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
EpilepsyWarning: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 20941,56730,68309,90590,122871,142520,157958,169187,180415,202871,225327,259187
DistanceSpacing: 0.8
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:World's End Dancehall (ROCKETMAN Remix)
TitleUnicode:ワールズエンド・ダンスホール (ROCKETMAN Remix)
Artist:wowaka
ArtistUnicode:wowaka
Creator:Mira-san
Version:Neormal
Source:
Tags:genjitsutouhi-p vocaloid miku hatsune megurine luka fr33z3r _ai neonat stefan ryo fukawa
BeatmapID:275817
BeatmapSetID:88911

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.20000000596046
SliderTickRate:2

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//Storyboard Sound Samples
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316,16,250963,1,2,0:0:0:0:
412,24,251314,1,0,0:0:0:0:
488,80,251665,1,2,0:0:0:0:
400,124,252016,2,0,P|352:136|304:204,2,120.000000596046,0|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,124,253068,1,2,0:0:0:0:
396,220,253419,6,0,P|344:276|236:248,1,180.000000894069,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,192,254472,1,2,0:0:0:0:
120,288,254823,2,0,P|176:272|216:208,1,120.000000596046,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,128,255524,2,0,P|155:95|81:105,1,120.000000596046,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
12,144,256226,86,0,P|-2:200|33:267,1,120.000000596046,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,308,256928,1,0,0:0:0:0:
180,364,257279,1,2,0:0:0:0:
264,316,257630,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,257980,12,4,259033,0:0:0:0:
Topic Starter
Mira-san

Lolicore_Komari wrote:

Hi!

From M4M owo

[General]
Add Megurine Ruka to tag? it also singing in original ver | lol megurine luka is already in the tags.

[Insane]
03:39:735 (1) - spin is not good choice | changed.

GL ;)
Thanks! ;)
FrzR

Lolicore_Komari wrote:

[Easy]
Make Same DS plz
00:04:998 (1,1,1,1,1) - Set Combocolor to gray ~Mira will take care of it. >w<
00:32:366 (4,5,6,7) - i think it make confusing for noob player ~Hmm.. I don't think so. There's no overlays there in which it makes it hard to read. Denied.
01:06:752 (1,2,3,4,1) - Not Good pattern in Easy.~The hexagon formation is already good. Since it's spacing is small. Denied.
01:28:858 (2,3,4,5) - ^ ~Fixed.
01:08:507 (2,3) - it doesn't follow music ~If you listed more, you'll understand the beat. Denied.
02:06:401 (3,2) - stack clearly ~Stack what? @.@ Denied.
02:23:945 (1,1) - it doesn't follow music ~Because that part is still break time. The purpose of the spinner was to prepare the player for the next notes since the break is about 8 seconds long. Denied
02:53:770 (3,4,5,1) - Not Good pattern in Easy. ~What is wrong with it? I don't see any. >.> Denied.
03:09:209 (2,3,4) - i think it make confusing for noob player ~The approach rate is slow enough for a human to react to it. Denied.
04:03:594 (1,2,3,4) - Not Good pattern in Easy. ~Fixed
That wasn't a good mod from you sorry. Thanks anyways. =w=)/
guineaQ
Maybe I'll mod other diffs as well, but before that, *throws a star
Topic Starter
Mira-san

guineaQ wrote:

Maybe I'll mod other diffs as well, but before that, *throws a star
Thanks! Heheheheh. :D


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Micka
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