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Hi.
[Dear you]
[Dear you]
- 00:35:014 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I know what you are trying to do, but the flow here doesn't look good, in my opinion. I would suggest changing the pattern with another flow like silder - note -slider or note - note -slider etc.
- 00:45:258 (1,1) - well, I think the slidetick was already 5% volumn, but it is still quite obvious to listen. I would suggest changing this to notes, but this depends on you.
- 01:25:868 (3) - How about curving this slider to a certain extent? Some like this: osu.ppy.sh/ss/1699026
- 03:26:096 (5,6) - hum, I would think that a 1/4 jump here wouldn't be a nice choice, as this is the only one 1/4 jump in this map. How about changing it to triplet notes or slider for consistency? Or at least make the slider like this for the sake of aesthetic? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1699100 . But if you listen to it carefully, this should be 1/3, but 1/4 triplet is still acceptable here. Your choice.
- 05:04:877 (3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/169912 Consider this?
- 05:07:072 (2) - How about making it parallel with 05:06:340 (1) - ?
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All fixed!kanpakyin wrote:
Hi.
[Dear you]
- 00:35:014 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I know what you are trying to do, but the flow here doesn't look good, in my opinion. I would suggest changing the pattern with another flow like silder - note -slider or note - note -slider etc.
- 00:45:258 (1,1) - well, I think the slidetick was already 5% volumn, but it is still quite obvious to listen. I would suggest changing this to notes, but this depends on you.
- 01:25:868 (3) - How about curving this slider to a certain extent? Some like this: osu.ppy.sh/ss/1699026
- 03:26:096 (5,6) - hum, I would think that a 1/4 jump here wouldn't be a nice choice, as this is the only one 1/4 jump in this map. How about changing it to triplet notes or slider for consistency? Or at least make the slider like this for the sake of aesthetic? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1699100 . But if you listen to it carefully, this should be 1/3, but 1/4 triplet is still acceptable here. Your choice.
- 05:04:877 (3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/169912 Consider this?
- 05:07:072 (2) - How about making it parallel with 05:06:340 (1) - ?
thanks for modding
edit:03:26:096 (5) changed triplet.
Approved.
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gratz~~~!!! 
Foreground Eclipse <3 Gratz! :3
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omedetou gozaimasu!
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omedetou gozaimasu!
Wawawa grats! Super nice song and map
gratz！
awesome map! loved the hitsounds :3
a late gratz!