osuplayer111 wrote:

[Easy]

01:06:52 (1) - Too hard this spinner for easy ?
02:12:18 (2) - Finish.
Fixed

[Hard]

Lower volume at start, or claps are really powerful.Fixed

00:06:03 (4,5) - Align perfectly, looks better.Fixed
00:55:21 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - This pattern is a "nono" for me...T.T to bad

Like it. Star'd

osuplayer111 wrote:

[Lizbeth's Normal]

Too much finish on start of the map... remove some of those

00:39:97 (1,2,3,4) - Considered jumps for a normal. fixed

animask wrote:

[Normal]
00:13:90 (2,3) - This part feels weird.. is true, changed that part a bit
00:13:90 (x) - Maybe a circle here instead? done
00:14:39 (3) - Slider moves to here and add a repeat nice, thanks, sound a lot better
01:03:08 (2) - Move timing section(s) here to the left for people who use a different offset or click early I thought this doesnt apply for end of slider, some to confirm this plz
02:06:03 (1,2,3) - ^ ^
02:12:18 (7) - ^ ^
02:13:41 (1) - ^ ^

minyeob wrote:

[Easy]
1:08:74(Break)-> Where is break?! orz Fixed

Anyways, your beatmap is great!
Combo-Starred.

DoctorToxn wrote:

Kind of late to ask, but could I map a difficulty for this song? BTW, starred

DoctorToxn wrote:

Here is my first attempt at my difficulty. Comments are appreciated. Just unzip the folder and dump the contents in the song folder. The images go in there too. Do with it whatever you want. You are under no obligation to add it to your other maps if you do not want to. I just had fun mapping it.

Takuma wrote:

Toxn Special:
00:22:26 (3,4,5,6) - It seems to be a little random to me. I actually agree here. I removed this type of spacing that early in the map.
Okay, going further into the map I see lots of these. I think you should tone them down a bit at the least - I don't think that big of jumps fit the slow song.
00:50:91 (1,2) - Why do you do this ?_? Please move 1/4th forward, and fix the spacing for the whole combo. This looks like a part I overlooked.

The other difficulties feel fine to me. Looks bubbleable, but fix these first. XD Have a star!

DoctorToxn wrote:

Takuma wrote:

Toxn Special:
00:22:26 (3,4,5,6) - It seems to be a little random to me. I actually agree here. I removed this type of spacing that early in the map.
Okay, going further into the map I see lots of these. I think you should tone them down a bit at the least - I don't think that big of jumps fit the slow song.
00:50:91 (1,2) - Why do you do this ?_? Please move 1/4th forward, and fix the spacing for the whole combo. This looks like a part I overlooked.

The other difficulties feel fine to me. Looks bubbleable, but fix these first. XD Have a star!

Uploaded changes.

Saturos-fangirl wrote:

[Easy]
00:29:64 (4) - whistle


[Normal]
k

[Hard]
00:52:51 (3) - new combo
00:55:21 (1) - hidden
00:55:46 (2,3,4,5) - consistent spacing, anyone?
00:58:90 (1) - hidden
00:59:64 (4,5,6) - CONSISTENT SPACING PLEASE
01:57:92 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
02:11:44 (6,7,8) - ^


[toxn]
00:18:08 (9,10,11,12,13,14,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6) - hitsounds? Agreed. Done.
map is vastly lacking in hitsounds
00:51:28 (2,3,4) - inconsistent spacing AKA Jump. Left alone.
00:52:51 (5,7) - new combo Agreed. Done.
01:08:00 (3,4,5,6,7) - wtf no
01:15:13 (3) - not intuitive or fitting Disagree. Leaving
01:53:98 (7,8,9) - wtf no
02:20:05 (4) - unintuitive bpm changeDisagree. Leaving
02:36:77 (9,10,11) - wtf no
03:30:66 - map this break, its in a very weird place and you have too much break. Look at the maximum points. I am trying to limit the points on the map. If you say it's ok, I would LOVE to map most all of the breaks in the map.
03:35:79 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - wtf no
03:57:67 - remove kiai
03:58:66 - kiai starts HERE Disagree. Leaving due to the drums in the BG
03:59:15 (3,4,5) -
04:03:08 (3,4,5) -
04:04:07 (8,9,10) -
04:06:28 (3) -


i really wanted to nuke this crap but decided to be merciful and just pop it

Saturos-fangirl wrote:

[Hard]
00:52:51 (3) - new combo done
00:55:21 (1) - hidden Fixed
00:55:46 (2,3,4,5) - consistent spacing, anyone? (3) is a jump, and is NOT random
00:58:90 (1) - hidden Fixed
00:59:64 (4,5,6) - CONSISTENT SPACING PLEASE That's a jump
01:57:92 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ ^
02:11:44 (6,7,8) - ^^

i really wanted to nuke this crap but decided to be merciful and just pop it

Lissette wrote:

omg, the classes are occupying all my time, thanks for modding you guys, I will fix all that as soon as possible

DoctorToxn wrote:

Lissette wrote:

omg, the classes are occupying all my time, thanks for modding you guys, I will fix all that as soon as possible

I am in the same situation right now. Sorry!

Hanyuu wrote:

hi

Hard:[/b]

01:57:090 (1) - you should stackthe pink circle in the center. it will look very cool together with the blue. it fits perfect

alvisto wrote:

Wow, nice song. I love it.

GENERAL
From what I feel, this map could use hitsounds of soft hitnormal, normal hitnormal and normal hitclap, especially normal hitnormal, it would sound fantastic. Feel free to PM me if you need further comments on the hitsounds. Right now, I won't touch and mod hitsounds since I can see that the map is near to be ranked already, so, re-doing the whole map's hitsound might not be motivating. xD

ykcarrot wrote:

[Easy]
00:18:031 (1) - remove new combo
00:20:028 (2) - new combo
00:22:025 (1) - remove new combo
Fxed

Normal and Hard seems good.

I shot a star already. Then I shoot kds star now.

1. Consider cropping the mp3, it's a bit long. Not of much importance though.

1. Overall Difficulty feels a tiny tad too high. Might be just me.

1. I believe you can (and should) increase Overall Difficulty here a bit.

minyeob wrote:

[Hard]
[Source]
Please use Tsubasa Cronicle
lolol

Fix and I'll bubble.

Lybydose wrote:

Normal

02:10:940 (5,6) - inconsistent spacing

Hard

Increase overall difficulty by one tick maybe?

00:42:170 (3) - Looks odd. Stack it under the slider endpoint

00:43:153 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - This part felt odd while playing it. I think it sounds much better if you put a circle at 00:44:260, 00:45:244, and 00:46:227. Better yet, make the timeline look like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1865 Nice ^^

02:16:104 (1,2,3,4) - Not stacked properly and looks weird in play.

1. 00:10:940 (1) - Isn't stacked properly under 5.
2. 01:36:022 (3) - Mirror with 1 horizontally.
3. 01:47:826 (2) - Mirror with 3.
4. 01:48:809 (4) - Mirror with 1.
5. 01:56:678 (4) - ^
6. 02:21:022 (4) - This isn't touching like the rest of the combo on this row.

1. 00:33:809 (3) - Mirror with 1 vertically.
2. 01:39:465 (5) - A tad bit too far from 4. Scoot 5 through 9 a bit closer please.
3. 01:55:203 (5) - Suggestion: New combo?
4. 02:19:301 (3) - Mirror with 2 horizontally.

whymeman wrote:

Your BG image is too large. The max allowed is 1024 x 768 but the current size is 1260 x 900.

[Easy]

00:16:350 (1,2) - Too close together.
00:26:186 (4,1) - ^
00:31:596 (1,2) - ^
00:34:547 (1,2) - ^
00:41:432 (1,2) - ^
01:34:547 (4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
01:50:776 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - ^
01:55:940 (1,2) - ^
01:58:645 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
02:08:481 (3,4,5) - ^
02:18:317 (1,2,3) - ^

Not sure how the spacing fluctuations was overlooked, but this should be fixed.

[Lizbeth's Normal]

00:26:924 (3,4,5) - Just a bit far apart.
01:52:744 (3) - Compared to 01:50:776 (1), you bent the slider more than you might have planned since the end of this slider is too close to (4).

Make sure to double check the spacing in this difficulty.

osu_CN_yaya wrote:

delete .osb fire

[Easy]
last spinner start at 02:20:039

[Normal]
02:00:613 (3,4) - so close.