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Behon

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Behon 2009-02-25T00:03:26+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Wednesday, January 27, 2010 at 6:24:21 PM

Artist: FREENOTE
Title: Kirai Tune
Source: Bobobo-bo Bo-bobo
BPM: 172.09
Filesize: 7446kb
Play Time: 01:07
Difficulties Available:

Easy (2.67 stars, 83 notes)
Hard (4.46 stars, 120 notes)
Normal (3.6 stars, 99 notes)

Download: FREENOTE - Kirai Tune
Download: FREENOTE - Kirai Tune (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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I just can't leave those Bobobo songs alone, can I?

This one is set to default to my Bobobo skin (whenever I finish it, hopefully soon).

3/28: Fixed a problem in Normal. Thanks minyeob.
6/13: Made some more changes in Normal and Hard. Thanks blissfulyoshi.
8/13: More changes. Thanks Ryuukun.
8/24: Upped the circle size in Easy, redid the B shape in Normal, and added stuff in the empty spots in Hard. Also adjusted the offset a bit. Thanks Mystearica.
9/25: Made some of Armin's recommended changes, including changing the B slider to something more conventional.
10/6: Changed the long slider in Normal again.
10/18: Got rid of the short breaks in Easy and fixed some spacing issues in Hard. Thanks minyeob.
10/6: Made minor changes in all difficulties and changed the slider tick rate in Easy and Hard.
10/26: Made Larto's changes.
12/02: Made EEeee's offset change and cleaned up individual sliders in Normal and Hard.
12/07: Made some of NoHItter's suggested changes.
12/18: Changed the BPM and made some of Gladi's suggested changed.
12/27: Fixed the combo burst width.
12/30: Removed audio from the video.

Last edited by Behon 2010-01-27T23:24:22+00:00, edited 39 times in total.

fufe

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fufe 2009-03-28T01:35:08+00:00

Hard was pretty fun. I looked at all of em and couldn't find any big problems.
Though, Ii think the slider tick rate on normal/hard can sound awkward/annoying at times but that's probably just me

minyeob

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minyeob 2009-03-28T05:56:23+00:00

[Easy]
Fine.

[Normal]
1:09:048(3,4,5)-> Move down a bit.

[Hard]
50:570(1,2)-> 1/4 beat backward

NICE MAP
Star'd.

Behon

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Behon 2009-06-08T02:02:41+00:00

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

blissfulyoshi

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blissfulyoshi 2009-08-04T13:44:14+00:00

Easy:
I can't find anything on this check

Normal:
00:14:32 (5) - might want to align with 4
00:22:34 (6) - nazi post: 6 is farther from 5 than 4 is
00:48:65 (6) - might want to align with 5

Hard (feels slightly easy for a hard map):
00:21:46 (3,4) - might want to align with the start of 2
00:29:13 (12) - I don't like how 10 overlaps the end of this slider
00:30:88 (1) - aligns better with 12 by moving this 1 grid (3) down
00:46:56 (4) - same as 00:29:13 (12)
00:55:97 (6) - restack on the end of 5

Very few errors. Star.

Ryuukun

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Ryuukun 2009-08-13T20:49:33+00:00

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Mystearica

Mystearica 2009-08-25T00:31:53+00:00

Okay, a few general comments overall:

Your beatmap set is really plain because all 3 difficulties are very similar. I personally would classify your "Hard" as a "Normal+" but that's your call. Just by looking at the amount of objects I had guessed that your 3 difficulties would be similar.

I would suggest that you add more stuff into your Hard difficulty. This is your hardest difficulty so use up all that space, add some of your own beats if possible to make it more fun and adds to variety.

That being said, I didn't really have any major problems with any of the maps, but a few things I thought I'd note.

[Easy]

You might want to make the circles bigger here as you used the same circle size for all 3 difficulties. This is your easiest so your settings may want to reflect that.

[Normal]

Your difficulty settings here are exactly the same as Hard, I'm not sure if I agree with that. This difficulty I personally thought was the best out of your 3.

00:27:91 (9) - this thing's shape is rather...exotic. can you make it prettier? XD

[Hard]

You've got quite a few chunks of empty spaces, try creating your own stuff in here to make it more fun. You don't have to follow the vocals 100%.

Another note for all of your difficulties is that there are no spinners. So that means there's no spinner bonus for a tiebreaker in score.

If you are fine with this, keep it as it is. If you would like to add some competitive element, consider ending with a spinner or adding a

spinner to one of your empty sections.

If you haven't gotten a timing check yet, I would recommend asking someone for a timing check. I'm not sure if your BPM is 100% on.

☆~

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Alace 2009-09-15T02:57:18+00:00

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Armin

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Armin 2009-09-30T19:50:39+00:00

- Easy
00:15:887 Clap
00:16:409 Whistle at the start? <_<
00:28:434 ^
00:34:360 Whistle
00:34:708 Clap

-Normal
00:16:758 Whistle at the start?
00:27:912 o_o''' make a better slider, maybe?

-Hard
00:19:024 Add a finish
00:19:198 Remove the finish
00:29:132 Whistle at the start?
00:41:505 Finish
00:43:597 Clap at the start; remove the clap at the end
01:00:153 Add a new combo

and starred!

anonymous_old

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anonymous_old 2009-10-06T15:13:37+00:00

Comments, suggestions, not orders.

easy

SPOILER

01:06:427 : Place a beat here.

normal

SPOILER

00:27:912 : Design this slider better.
01:06:427 : Place a beat here.

hard

SPOILER

01:06:427 : Place a beat here.

Ephemeral

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Ephemeral 2009-10-06T15:50:52+00:00

Timing: 172.14 (I would be wary about .** BPM as normally they are incorrect for anything remotely electronic, but since this seems to be fairly flat rock it should be fine)
Offset: 8,916 (about three cycles over what it should be for optimal stanza alignment but satisfactory no less)

A tick rate of 2 probably works better here. 2 or 0.5, take your pick.

[Easy]
00:16:40 (3) - Break after this.
01:06:95 (6) - Break after this.

[Normal]
00:16:75 (9) - Break after this
01:06:60 (6) - Break after this.
01:09:39 (5) - You could technically end this on a spinner on all difficulties without trouble. Up to you.

[Hard]
No problems that I can see. The sliders are a bit strangely constructed but they're all uniform in their construction which is more important than them just being entirely perfect anyway.

Quite well made, really no pressing reason not to award a star.

Behon

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Behon 2009-10-06T19:23:12+00:00

I'm not a big fan of the uber-short breaks, but I did go and add them in Easy to make that difficulty, well, easier.

minyeob

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minyeob 2009-10-18T10:47:20+00:00

Aww..... This beatmap is still here :;

All of these are suggestions

[Easy]
I don't like short breaks >_> [color=#FF0000]

[Hard]
00:15:54 (5) -> Sorry for making fault but I think spacing between (5)---(6,7)---(8)---(9) should be same.

Behon

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Behon 2009-10-18T15:38:45+00:00

Thanks. Fixed.

minyeob

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minyeob 2009-10-19T15:30:22+00:00

OK than, bubbled.
Good luck

Thanks Larto.

Larto

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Larto 2009-10-26T17:47:42+00:00

Timing:
Set the offset to 7521. That won't change anything timing wise, but the notes will not be BEFORE the timing section anymore.

Overall:
00:08:57 (1,2) - Are unsnapped on all difficulties.

That is all.

Behon

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Behon 2009-10-26T17:47:59+00:00

Fixed.

EEeee

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EEeee 2009-12-02T19:22:20+00:00

check offset 7,507

Overall
U have some kind of storyboard referring to the "Bobobo-Bo 1" that isn't doing anything, just delete the osb.

Easy
too Easy

Normal
00:29:013 (10) - a bit too far, space it, or was it intended?

Hard
nothing, nice diff

Behon

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Behon 2009-12-02T20:51:32+00:00

EEeee wrote:
U have some kind of storyboard referring to the "Bobobo-Bo 1" that isn't doing anything, just delete the osb.

This is so that the game doesnt' automatically quit before the end of the video, so you can see the drawing at the end. I'm keeping the storyboard because it's not a big deal to skip if you don't want to watch it, but I'll check the offset and issue you had with Normal.

EEeee

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EEeee 2009-12-02T21:16:51+00:00

oh dang i didn't expect that, yea that's fine for the sb

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NoHitter 2009-12-05T08:51:35+00:00

Overall
Kiai Time? 00:42:362- 00:49:333 ; 00:50:727 - 01:06:935

Easy
Good

Normal
00:39:573 (2) - Add a finish at the end of the slider
00:42:3626 (3) - New combo

Hard
01:09:375 (8) - Shorten it to 01:09:808

(And nice map, solid mapping, and no errors

)

Behon

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Behon 2009-12-08T02:28:34+00:00

NoHItter wrote:
Overall
Kiai Time? 00:42:362- 00:49:333 ; 00:50:727 - 01:06:935

I feel that the map's too short to make proper use of Kiai Time, so I'm leaving it out.

NoHItter wrote:
Overall
00:39:573 (2) - Add a finish at the end of the slider

MmmmmmmmNo? It sounds better without it.

Made your other changes though.

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Jinxy 2009-12-16T05:22:00+00:00

Great map, didn't find anything crucial, Starred!

GladiOol

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GladiOol 2009-12-18T12:03:58+00:00

- General / All diff's

Extra Kudosu star for you, because it's BoBoBo <3
Offset 7500

- Hard

00:32:024 (3,4) - Spacing.
Please put in a spinner, since you have none. Maybe at the end (?)

- Normal

00:29:011 (10,1) - Spacing. (1) is too close to ending of slider (10).
Please put in a spinner, since you have none. Maybe at the end (?)

- Easy

00:16:039 (3,1) - Spacing. (1) is too close to ending of slider (3).
Please put in a spinner, since you have none. Maybe at the end (?)

Star + Extra kudosu star~

Behon

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Behon 2009-12-19T00:12:59+00:00

The new offset you gave me made things too fast by the end, but I did go back and slow down the BPM a teensy bit. Also, I did fix the spacing and add a spinner as you suggested.

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Takuma 2009-12-27T14:46:36+00:00

Bubbled.

minyeob

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minyeob 2009-12-27T17:50:27+00:00

comboburst should not be wider than 500px.
I'm sorry >_> At that time I really suck at BAT modding.