General• french song with french lyrics, thats pointless, this lyrics will not help anyone to understand the song, you should be using english lyrics
• the map is at pending status but you have a wip collab or something? move the map to works in progress if you do
• Ma référence should be moved to tags, don't use album name as source
Normal• 01:06:447 (1) - repeat is not placed in a beat, i know you want to make the slider fit the vocals but this can be considered overmapping
if you really want to follow vocal please remove the repeat and make slider end at 01:07:153 - and add a circle at 01:07:682 -
• 01:22:153 (5) - a long slider is not fitting here, its because the singer split the lyrics in two here, it's not a straight verse as 00:59:918 (1,2) - try to make something like 02:18:623 -
• 01:30:094 - i would prefer you make this part easier, try to avoid changing polarity in newbies difficulties that much. how about just using a circle at 01:30:094 - ?
• 01:58:506 (1,1) - here i get a 100, i was totally distracted trying to make a decent spin, then i suddenly had to hit a circle placed in an unusual beat that is really close to the spinner. 02:04:859 please remove this circle to give more time to players to read the rhythm. another way to fix this would end the spinner at 02:03:800 - and add something at 02:04:506
• 02:32:741 (1) - a long spinner is not fitting here, try to follow the main vocal ending the spinner at 02:34:859 and mapping sice 02:35:565 - or make spinner end at 02:35:565 - and mapping since 02:36:270 -
• 02:53:212 (2) - maybe avoiding this 1/2 would be better since you dont have an easy diff, not a big deal anyway
Alarido'sthis diff is very well made, but i actually disagree with many of your rhythm choices. i think the diff would be better if had focused more on vocals
actually most times i dont really know what you are following, you keep shifting between vocals and guitar/other instruments
i'm not saying you should not follow instruments, i just think vocal is more outstanding most of the time in the song
• 00:09:270 (1,2,3,4,5) - here's one exemple of hybrid rhythm, this combo starts following guitar then you suddenly change ur mind and try to follow vocal since 00:10:329 -
it was a bit confusing 1st plays. i expected something like that
http://puu.sh/9dTUk/f04576e1d6.jpg• 00:17:212 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - here is an exemple of where i think that vocals are more outstanding, waddaya think?
• 01:29:741 (4,5) - this 1/1 break totally ruins the atmosphere. please remove both sliders and add a circle at 01:29:741 - and a 1/1 slider at 01:29:918 -
i will understand if you disagree with my rhythm preference. i was trying to make them suggestions for future maps, but those need some exemples
just giving you my thoughts, dont want to fully mod rhythm here because i really think that the diff is already good, dont want to ruin it
good lucky