Hi Trust
[General]
[General]
- Disable widescreen support on Easy and Normal
- 00:51:012 - for all diffs except for Chewin, consider adding a break here. Seems like a long time to wait without anything to play.
- 00:00:690 (1) - I would remove the whistle on the tail, since the vocals are going down in pitch. The next object's whistle is on a stronger part of the music, so having the whistle here kind of takes away from that.
- 00:50:044 (3) - consider extending this to the white tick. I think it fits the music a bit better since the last sound that occurs is on the white tick before the silence. Probably the most fitting thing would be the blue tick, but I think for the Easy the white tick works well.
- 01:00:448 - I think you could use a circle here since there is that strong bass hit.
- 01:02:141 (3) - make this into a 1/2 slider? I think it would match the music a bit better and make the next 1/1 circles have more emphasis.
- 01:04:560 (5) - NC I think
- 01:05:286 - circle here feels good to me. It matches this building drum part.
- 01:06:254 (7) - How about a 1/2 slider here to match to the vocal a bit? I think it would be better too since it would end where the instruments stop.
- I guess consider using the kiai flash that all the other diffs use. If you don't want to it's fine.
- 00:04:077 (1,2) - I would suggest switching the NC here to put the NC on the downbeat.
- 00:07:948 (1,2) - same NC thing
- 00:11:819 (1,3) - and switch these NCs also for downbeat
- 00:13:270 (1) - I think this NC is a bit unnecessary and breaks away from your pattern.
- upcoming NC block is to put the NCs on the downbeats, which fit better.
- 00:18:351 (6) - NC here
- 00:18:956 (1) - remove NC
- 00:20:044 (5) - NC
- 00:21:254 (1) - remove NC
- 00:21:980 (3) - NC
- 00:23:431 (1) - remove NC
- 00:23:915 (2) - NC
- 00:25:367 (1) - remove NC
- 00:25:851 (3) - NC
- 00:27:060 (1) - remove NC
- 00:27:786 (3) - NC
- 00:29:238 (1) - remove NC
- 00:29:722 (3) - NC
- 00:31:173 (1) - remove NC
- 00:31:657 (2) - NC
- 00:32:141 (1) - remove NC
- 00:33:593 (6) - NC
- 00:33:956 (1) - remove NC
- 00:34:802 (1) - remove NC
- 00:35:528 (3) - NC
- 00:36:012 (1) - remove NC
- 00:37:464 (6) - NC
- 00:37:948 (1) - remove NC
- 00:39:399 (4) - NC
- 00:40:851 (1) - remove NC
- 00:41:335 (3) - NC
- 00:42:544 (1) - remove NC
- 00:43:270 (4) - NC
- 00:43:754 (1) - remove NC
- 00:45:206 (7) - NC
- 00:45:689 (1) - remove NC
- 00:56:093 (1) - remove NC
- 00:56:577 (2) - NC
- 00:57:786 (1) - remove NC
- 00:58:754 (3) - NC
- 00:59:480 (1) - remove NC
- 01:10:367 (7) - NC
- 01:11:093 (1) - remove NC
- 01:12:302 (4) - NC
- 01:12:786 (1) - remove NC
- 01:16:173 (5) - NC
- 01:17:141 (1) - remove NC
This NC pattern is more appropriate because it matches the beat count better. I think a couple of them if there is a triplet before the downbeat I put the NC after the triplet, and I know that you mostly did the NC at the start of the triplet so you can NC around triplets whichever way you like. - 00:04:560 (2) - move this over a little bit so that it isn't overlapped by 00:03:351 (6).
- 00:34:802 (1,2,3) - I think the spacing here should be uniform. That 1/4 jump doesn't really fit this diff as you don't really use it anywhere else but here.
- 01:02:625 (1,1,1) - consider silencing the ends of these, I think it would sound better since the sounds in the music only occur on the head of the sliders.
- 01:13:633 - I suggest a circle here because the vocal indicates there should be a triplet. You can just stack two circles on 01:13:754 (4) and that would work well I think. http://puu.sh/8zN2P.jpg
- 01:14:964 (2) - finish on the repeat I think
- 01:16:173 (5) - finish on the head
- 01:18:109 (1,1,1) - same suggestion on the similar sliders earlier. Silencing the ends is good I think.
- 00:01:415 (3) - add a whistle to the sliderbody? You seem to do it to all the other similar sliders in this section.
- 00:11:093 (3) - this one also, or alternatively if you didn't intend on whistles on the sliderbodys, remove them from all the other sliders in this section.
- 00:25:851 (1) - (204,107) for a nice triangle
- 00:38:189 (4,1) - I actually like a little spacing between the slider then the almost stacked circles. The circles to me seem like a separate musical idea to what is on the slider, so I like some spacing before the antijumps begin.
- 00:39:157 (3) - consider a 1/4 slider for this, I hear a drum part and I think it would be nice to map it. Here's this idea and the previous idea together http://puu.sh/8zO0i.jpg. Note that I did move the slider afterward a bit up so the jump wasn't as big. See what you think about it.
- 00:58:149 - I miss a circle here to match the vocals. Would be nice I think.
- 01:14:238 (1,2,3,4) - lol . I think these are really distracting and don't fit the song very well IMO. I would suggest doing something along the lines of what Chewin did.
- 01:03:109 (3) - NC
- 01:03:593 (5) - NC
- 01:04:077 (7) - NC, not really necessary but I like emphasizing the finishes and the jumps with these NCs.
- 01:18:593 (3) - NC
- 01:19:077 (5) - NC
- 01:19:560 (7) - NC, same idea as before, but these ones I really like because the jumps kind of cross each other so the emphasis is even stronger.
- 00:00:690 (1) - I don't think this 3/4 slider really fits the music. There is a sound at 00:00:931 - but not at 00:01:052, so I think a 1/2 fits better here.
- 00:03:351 (3) - This 3/4 doesn't really fit that well to me either. I think a 1/2 is a good choice to map the sound at 00:03:593. a 1/1 also fits here if you delete 00:03:835 (4) and add a circle at 00:04:077.
- 00:04:560 (1) - same reason as the first one.
- 00:07:222 (3) - and same as the second one.
- 00:08:431 (1) - same as the first
- 00:11:819 (4) - Here I think a 3/4 would work with a circle at 00:12:302 - so that the player can hit the circle with that strong bass drum.
- 00:18:956 (4,1) - I think you should replace these with a 3/4 slider that starts at 00:18:956. This would match the vocals better, which makes more sense with this diff because you adhere to the vocals pretty well.
- 00:33:593 (1,2,3,4) - I have an alternate rhythm which matches the vocals better I'll see what you think. http://puu.sh/8zOC1.jpg
- 00:39:399 (5) - NC here
- 00:40:367 (1) - remove NC
- 00:41:335 (3) - NC, I think this pattern is a bit more consistent with the rest.
- 01:03:109 (3) - an NC here would accent these jumps nicely.
- 01:18:593 (3) - NC
- 01:19:319 (7) - NC, think these might look cool
- 01:22:948 (3) - NC fits nicely here IMO