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Ren Kagamine - Aku no Meshitsukai

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Mafiamaster
osu! Alumni
3,460 posts
Joined July 2008
Mafiamaster
There's a lot of screeching noises in the mp3. Think you can find a better one? If not, that's fine.

Normal~
Delete the unused timing sections starting at 134,646ms to the end of the song.
Oh wow! And delete that break at 03:11:87 as well.

Hard~
Black hit circles aren't a very good idea for this song.
For example: 01:21:91 (13,14,15,16) - The video shows black and coincidentally, the notes are black too which makes it very hard to see. (Other places as well.)
03:43:74 (1) - Shorten this to 03:44:74 instead. Where it ends right now doesn't sound good since it stops at nothingness.

Insane~
04:08:98 (5) - Align with 6 vertically.
moth
62 posts
Joined February 2009
moth
:lol:
minyeob
osu! Alumni
2,540 posts
Joined May 2008
minyeob
제가 돌아왔습니다 -ㅂ-
안니버씨의 간절한 모습이 #korean에서 보이더라구요 ㅇㅅㅇ

[Normal]
01:24:78 (1,2,3,4)-> 약간 트집일 수도 있겠습니다만.... 2,3 간격이 좀 멀지 않나요?

[Hard]
00:34:55 (1) - 헐 나 트집잡는 사람이였나? (2)와의 스페이싱
01:06:54 (4) - 뉴콤보 하는게 더 좋지 않을까요?

[Insane]
죄송하지만......
많은 논란이 있을 것 같습니다.
점수가 1900만점 ㄷㄷㄷ
안 줄이면 곤란해요 진짜


그나저나 전체적으로 잘 만들었어요! >A<행운을 빕니다.
happy30
Featured Artist
2,064 posts
Joined August 2008
happy30
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Download: soft-hitclap.rar
anonymous_old
0 posts
Here since the beginning
anonymous_old
normal, hard, insane
SPOILER

no visible faults.

nice map.
al2e10
1,101 posts
Joined August 2008
al2e10
Mod

[Insane]
02:46:510 (6) new combo

[Hard]
01:02:419 (10) new combo
01:20:788 (7) ^
01:34:784 (10) ^
03:33:244 (1) remove new combo
03:29:745 (1) ^
03:34:744 (1) ^

[Normal]
fine

[All]
I think the clap sound of S1 is not good for Easy ...
And please add some wistle in the soft part ~
It is good for it ~

Star ~
Shase
12 posts
Joined May 2009
Shase
this must be ranked noW!
Pasonia
osu! Alumni
1,199 posts
Joined October 2008
Pasonia
Nyan.

I've given this map some consideration before bubbling, but after that I decided that the small fragments of minijumps weren't enough to killjoy. Enjoyable. Bubbled.
Ra-s
1,289 posts
Joined May 2009
Ra-s
버블(bubble)되었는데 업뎃하면 터진다고 PM 보낸걸로 아는데 ㅡㅡ; 업뎃(update) 하셨네
Sure
4,220 posts
Joined February 2009
Sure
[Normal]
01:09:04 (4) - 3번과 간격이 조금 떨어졌네요.


[Hard]
Fine for me.


[Insane]
00:14:81 (4) - 시작 부분이 화면 밖으로 조금 나갑니다.

01:04:79 -
01:56:77 -
02:54:75 -
위 세 시작점부터 각각 코러스 부분으로 들어가는데요, 뉴 콤보 들어가는게 서로 다 달라요.
가급적이면 셋 일관성 있는 규칙성으로 뉴콤보 넣는거 추천합니다.


잘 만드시네요! 별~ ^^
Aoitenshi
711 posts
Joined February 2009
Aoitenshi
The name of artist is acctually Rin Kagamine...
askerlate47
45 posts
Joined September 2009
askerlate47
~star~
dksgustn
9 posts
Joined August 2009
dksgustn
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Andrea
Beatmap Nominator
16,650 posts
Joined August 2008
Andrea
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
kino77
909 posts
Joined March 2009
kino77
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Tanmak
896 posts
Joined August 2009
Tanmak
음악의 음질이 56kbps라 그런지 좀 안좋네요.....특히 심벌같이 고음의 경우는 때에 따라서 듣기가 거북할 수도 있겠네요..

그러기에 음악파일을 새로 보내드리겠습니다.

원래는 굉장히 깔끔한 음질이지만 현재 파일용량을 보니 이미 13.7메가나 차지하고 있네요.
그러기에 96kbps로 올려드립니다. 이정도면 1.6메가만 더 들어갑니다.

아 혹시 모르니까 새로운 파일로 바꾼 다음에 배경음과 노트가 일치하는지 확인해주세요.
(아니 이미 이 파일은 첫 부분이 약간 추가된 소리가 있어서 오프셋을 조절해야겠지만요..)

스타 드리겠습니다.

Download: Servant_of_Evil(Len)a.mp3
[Les]
5 posts
Joined October 2009
[Les]
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Lissette
osu! Alumni
1,496 posts
Joined July 2008
Lissette
Normal
you don't need the SB warning on this diff, So you have to select the option (Diff. Specific) on the the design panel of the editor only in the difficulty you want the warning.

Hard
make the SB warning more visible plz.
02:33:34 (9) - move to the next blue tick

Insane
make the SB warning more visible plz.

Star!
DJPop
osu! Alumni
3,549 posts
Here since the beginning
DJPop
~Normal~
Fine.

~Hard~
01:08:84 (6) - new combo
01:16:59 (5) - ^
02:58:84 (8) - ^

~Insane~
01:25:84 (1) - remove new combo
01:26:84 (1) - ^
02:40:84 (7) - new combo
02:42:09 (1) - remove new combo
02:42:59 (3) - new combo


+Star
Kytoxid
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1,369 posts
Joined April 2009
Kytoxid
Geez, why is the novid version 19.6 MB? o_O (any way of getting that FLV out of the novid version?)

[All]

Preview points need to be set.

[Normal]

Looked fine. :)

[Hard]

01:22:84 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This pattern seemed a bit random.

I thought that as the song was a bit long, this map could have used a few more breaks, but it's fine without them too.

[Insane]

15m is a bit high for max score, is this map hard enough for that?

01:18:84 (3,6) - Not sure if this slider covering is okay, since although it's barely revealed, I dunno if there's enough time.
02:26:84 (7) - New combo?
02:34:84 (4) - Move the new combo before this onto this note?
02:43:34 (6,7,8,9,10,11) - Picky thing, 8,9,10,11 needs to be moved right one grid for the left inverted V to be symmetric.
03:37:59 (3,5) - Slightly misaligned.

Starred, very fun. :)
youngdow
321 posts
Joined May 2009
youngdow
I think that it is perfect ^^.


star~
Armin
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2,454 posts
Joined May 2009
Armin
[Normal]

01:09:846 (7,1) Finish
02:09:096 (4,6) Whistles

[Hard]

00:42:846 New combo?

[Insane]

00:50:846 New combo?

omg @_@ almost a perfect map. Starred!
Lokamp
2,530 posts
Joined January 2009
Lokamp
Normal
01:10:034 (1,2) - new combo on 2nd, remove new coimbo from 1st

Hard
[General] This mode is mapped very well, but try to add another little break time along the song... one isn't enough even for Insane mode...

Insane
01:20:059 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - move these beats 1-2 squares right
02:55:084 (1,4) - clap here

... and that's all! Fine sound placing for a well-playable map... Bat members had better to watch this! ;3
Sleep Powder
1,540 posts
Joined October 2008
Sleep Powder
Add Source and Tags

[Normal]
01:14:059 (10) - Too far away from 1

[Hard]
01:56:084 (1) - The Warning should be a little sooner
02:13:072 (6) - Whistle here sounds odd

[Insane]
Raise Hitsound Volume a little in the beginning
Gothic_old
265 posts
Joined June 2009
Gothic_old
★
WyndII
777 posts
Joined October 2008
WyndII
[M0D]

[Insane]
The map is pretty booring because of the lack of hitsound =( try adding more whistles and finishes to make the map have much power. ;)
01:37:022 (4) - recheck space
00:15:034 (5,6) - ^
01:33:022 (2) - add a clap @ the beginning of slider
01:37:022 (4) - ^
01:37:059 (5) - ^
01:34:034 (6) - clap?
01:36:009 (7) - add clap at the END of the slider I hope you do this hitsound pattern all through out the map
01:45:034 (4) - unpredictable hidden slider, 01:44:059 (1) - is covering the repeating arrow thing
combo color sucks >w<

[Hard]
Hitsound comment refer to [Insane]
no other probs found

[Normal]
Hitsound comment refer to [Insane]
REMOVE SB CODEs coz after finish playing the map it still goes on and um of course a skip button appears but it's better if it ends automatically. Make x2 sb Diff. Specific only in [Insane] and [Hard]
02:13:721 - end kiai section

star
jericho2442
osu! Alumni
1,918 posts
Joined March 2009
jericho2442
seemed fine to me, no probs, good job, star :)
kimmh0220
1 post
Joined July 2009
kimmh0220
+STAR
good map
Diasios
3,966 posts
Joined August 2008
Diasios
Mod Info's:

Green: Suggestions.
Orange: I think you should fix this.
Red: You must fix this.

Starts Suggestions:

Why don't you change the "Custom Colours"? I suggest Pink & Yellow

[Normal]

It's ok

[Hard]

It's ok

[Insane]

It's ok

Starred~
asougi_old
1 post
Joined August 2009
asougi_old
good
Leorda
4,416 posts
Joined June 2009
Leorda
[Hard]
01:24:846 (7) - New combo
01:25:846 (1) - No new combo

Star for you!
Essien_old
21 posts
Joined November 2009
Essien_old
No problems found ^.^


star~
Hanyuu
2,223 posts
Joined February 2009
Hanyuu
hello

the source is not the same for every beatmap

Normal:

01:15:084 (2) - the endings of sliders are not perfect together
01:17:084 (6) - the part here is very low down on the screen. maybe you want to move it up a litte
01:26:084 (3) - this slider can be changed to 2 circles if you like
01:33:084 (3) - move the ending of this slider 1 down so it is nice on the other circles. it is also not perfect with the slider (1)
02:03:084 (3,4,5) - i think you can make this easier for the normal. but it is ok for me

end the first kiai time here 01:21:084 (8) -

hard:

01:22:059 (10) - i would remove this and use a sound on (9) circle
01:22:034 (9) - the kiai time should also end here
02:00:084 (7) - new combo
03:02:034 (7) - new combo
03:06:084 (4) - new combo
03:11:047 (8) - the kiai time should end here
03:36:084 (3) - new combo
03:48:084 (4) - new combo
03:56:084 (9) - new combo
04:00:084 (8) - new combo

(all this new combos are in the kiai time i think because you like to make it only half so long there. you can think if you want to change them or not, to make it the same with other combos in kiai time)

Insane:

00:42:084 (6) - new combo
01:10:034 (6) - new combo
01:10:084 (1) - remove combo
01:12:047 (4) - new combo
01:12:084 (1) - remove combo

01:58:059 (5) - new combo
02:02:034 (9) - new combo
02:02:084 (1) - remove combo

03:08:059 (5) - new combo
03:55:084 (5) - new combo

nice map star :)
Vanmonky
986 posts
Joined June 2009
Vanmonky
As your request in my queue. Anyway, I love this map~

[Normal]
Remove the X2 Speed in this diff since you don't use that. Or do you use that thing..?

[Hard]
01:22:034 (9) - Add clap.
02:06:084 (3) - Move this slider to the same place as (2).
02:13:047 (5) - Add clap.
02:13:072 (6) - Remove clap.
03:11:047 (8) - Remove clap at the end. Add finish at the end.
03:12:158 - IMO, the break is too long..
03:43:072 (1) - Silence the spinner will be better.
03:46:084 (2) - Add finish at the beginning of the slider.

[Insane]
Perfect.

---

Yes, you may ignore them all ^^
And *star~
Takuma
osu! Alumni
1,704 posts
Joined October 2008
Takuma
Hello.

- Hard
01:04:846 ~ Unnecessary x2 SB; remove.

- Normal
Again, unnecessary x2 SB; remove.

Have a star.
Nakagawa-Kanon
Featured Artist
1,893 posts
Joined March 2009
Topic Starter
Nakagawa-Kanon
umm...
bmin11
5,438 posts
Joined October 2008
bmin11
A bit sad that there isn't alot of soft whistle, which I think it fits perfact with this map :(
Star for a nice job and a chear :P
Derekku
COOL DUDE
7,270 posts
Joined March 2009
Derekku
[General]
*Offset: 846 You had yours on an upbeat so the metronome and pulsating osu! logo were wtfing.
*Why is the first section in 2/4?
*Source is Akuno-P. Add to all diffs.
*Remove all tags since they're redundant (they're in the artist and title fields). Please add Len to tags, though. Rin isn't needed either, but you could keep her name there if you want. Also add Vocaloid and Servant of Evil to tags. Change these on all diffs.
*combobuster? I think you mean "comboburst". Rename and do a full resubmission if you want the comboburst to be in the map. The pic also has a glowy spot on the top right that could be edited out. EDIT: Or just use this higher quality one here

[Normal]
01:21:034 (6,7,8) - Sounds awkward since the singing is actually 1/4th before on each note. Because of the offbeats, I'd just recommend making a slider with a repeat here starting at the blue previous blue tick. (01:21:221)
02:13:047 (3,4) - I'd recommend making this a slider too. Offbeats on a easier diffs are tricky.

[Hard]
*Increase overall diff by a couple ticks and maybe decrease drain by one tick please.
01:06:084 (3) - I think the kiai would look better starting here. It feels weird while playing for it to come early like this.
01:58:084 (3) - Same kiai suggestion.
02:56:084 (3) - blah blah kiai
03:01:084 (4,5,6) - I don't like pauses before notes stacked on sliders because they look like they should be hit right after the slider. If you could move these off of the slider I think it'd look better and be easier to read.
03:46:084 (2) - Kiai would look better here instead of on (1) imo.

[Insane]
*Same kiai suggestions
*I was going to ask you to increase the overall diff 1-2 ticks, but 2 ticks more makes the score increase ~3M points o.o; Maybe you could turn drain down 1 and overall diff up 1 or something so that the score doesn't go higher.
00:52:059 (1,2,3) - Ooh, I like this.
01:21:009 (3,4,5,6) - Kinda hard to see because the previous 50/100/30 semi-covers them up.
02:14:084 - A (5) here would sound better imo
04:08:084 (1,2,3) - Move a tiny grid to the left so it's centered please xp
03:46:059 (1) - Change kiai to (3).

Not bad of a beatmap for one of your fist. It's kinda repetitive, but then again, it's a long song, so... XP
minyeob
osu! Alumni
2,540 posts
Joined May 2008
minyeob
Hit circle overlay GOGOGO

EDIT: Bubble #2. You should have protected Pasonia's bubble :;
RemmyX25
osu! Alumni
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Here since the beginning
RemmyX25
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Nakagawa-Kanon
Featured Artist
1,893 posts
Joined March 2009
Topic Starter
Nakagawa-Kanon

RemmyX25 wrote:

Hitcircle colors are terrible imo, especially for Team/Tag TeamVS. games. Also could do with an [Easy] difficulty >_> fixed

Also is there anyway you can convert (or get someone to convert) the FLV file into something like a .avi and full submit? Makes the NoVideo download so much easier. fixed

Normal:
In my opinion, the difficulty sliders could be lowered a bit, especially the circle size. fixed

Hard:
03:28:846 (1,2,1,2) - Just pointing out that it's EXTREMELY difficult to see the repeat sign on these sliders fixed

Overall very well done. Please do consider my suggestions.



I fixed....
Gens
osu! Alumni
3,485 posts
Joined August 2008
Gens
[General]
  1. Delete the .osb from the song folder.
  2. Is this a duet or something? At 01:40:846 there seem to be two voices (male and female), so you should at least add the other vocaloid's name (forgot what name was it) in tags or something.
  3. You didn't use the second sampleset allowed for soft, so delete "soft-sliderslide2.wav" from the folder.
[Skin]
  1. I don't think the "star.png" image is used while playing, so you need to delete it.
[Hard]

01:56:846 (1) - IMO this 2x slider is unecessary. Doesn't really fit with the song.
02:54:846 (1,2,3) - Same as above.

[Insane]

Yeah, the same 2x slider thing in [Hard].

That's it. Don't forget to full submit after all those changes!
Nakagawa-Kanon
Featured Artist
1,893 posts
Joined March 2009
Topic Starter
Nakagawa-Kanon

Gens wrote:

[General]
  1. Delete the .osb from the song folder.fixed
  2. Is this a duet or something? At 01:40:846 there seem to be two voices (male and female), so you should at least add the other vocaloid's name (forgot what name was it) in tags or something.fixed
  3. You didn't use the second sampleset allowed for soft, so delete "soft-sliderslide2.wav" from the folder.
fixed

[Skin]
  1. I don't think the "star.png" image is used while playing, so you need to delete it.
fixed

[Hard]

01:56:846 (1) - IMO this 2x slider is unecessary. Doesn't really fit with the song.fixed
02:54:846 (1,2,3) - Same as above.fixed

[Insane]

Yeah, the same 2x slider thing in [Hard].fixed

That's it. Don't forget to full submit after all those changes!
Sonnyc
7,776 posts
Joined June 2008
Sonnyc
안녕하세요
Nazi?

전체적으로..
노트위에다가 time line 으로 hit sound를 Normal로 바꿉니다.
조금 여유를 두고 뒤로 조금만 옮기셔도 됩니다.
물론 키아이 time은 그대로 두시고..

[Normal]
  • 00:58:846 (7) New combo
    01:16:846 (3) None
    02:00:846 (4) None
    02:01:596 (5) Whistle
    02:04:346 (4) ^
    -02:13:721- 여기서 kiai 플래시는 어떨까요?
[Hard]
  • 00:51:846 (7) Whistle
    01:07:846 (4) 모두 whistle
    01:59:596 (5) Whistle
    03:07:846 (9) 클랩 빼고 Finish
    03:41:846 (1) Newcombo
    03:43:721 (1) 끝은 그대로, 시작은 03:43:846로
    휘슬이 나올만한 대서 클랩이 뜨네요
[Insane]
  • 01:10:346 (6) Whistle
    02:45:221 (1?) Whistle
    02:50:346 (1) ^
    03:35:346 (4) Distance
ㄲㄲ 대충 끝난 모양
왜 whistle이 어울릴만한 데에 clap을 넣었는지 이유나 한번..
Nakagawa-Kanon
Featured Artist
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Joined March 2009
Topic Starter
Nakagawa-Kanon
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Sonnyc
7,776 posts
Joined June 2008
Sonnyc
랄까, 님 맵의 BAT STAR는 어디갔죠?
스타도 터지던가..?
Nakagawa-Kanon
Featured Artist
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Joined March 2009
Topic Starter
Nakagawa-Kanon
?? 무슨소리?
RemmyX25
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Here since the beginning
RemmyX25
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Nakagawa-Kanon
Featured Artist
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Joined March 2009
Topic Starter
Nakagawa-Kanon

RemmyX25 wrote:

Right, sorry for not re-looking at this, I've been busy with college and not having internet and the like. I've got a list of legitimate excuses, but i dont think you'd need to hear them.

Anywho back to the map.

I'm not sure if the monochrome skin works with the rest of this map. I'm thinking more of a sepia/goldish feel to it (like the HP bar), but the black/gray/white mix just doesnt work....

Other wise, the map is perfect!
I FIXED!
RemmyX25
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Here since the beginning
RemmyX25
Looks better to me. Bubbled
minyeob
osu! Alumni
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minyeob
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Sure
4,220 posts
Joined February 2009
Sure
경> 첫 랭크 곡! <축
Nakagawa-Kanon
Featured Artist
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Joined March 2009
Topic Starter
Nakagawa-Kanon
Wow 축하해주신거 감사합니다!!
Derekku
COOL DUDE
7,270 posts
Joined March 2009
Derekku
I forgot that I looked at this until I looked over the topic again. Grats! :)
hwangkwe
69 posts
Joined December 2009
hwangkwe
ㅋㅋㅋ
mi sa
59 posts
Joined January 2011
mi sa
artist is "Len Kagamine", not "Ren Kagamine".
Xierra
569 posts
Joined July 2011
Xierra
I love this song, the story is tragically sad and amazing. Kinda speechless.
Anyways, it's Len and not Ren (Or maybe referring to Len & Rin since she sings a bit near the end)

10 Star for you :D
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