Hi >,<
Column: 0|1|2|3|4|5|6
Most of them are just suggestion
I have nothing to say on advance except 01:07:470 (67470|1) - I suggest to move this to 0 and I don't quite get the usage of 1/2 from 01:17:370 - what are they? @@
and add a note at 01:33:570 (93570|3) -
Column: 0|1|2|3|4|5|6
Most of them are just suggestion
Basic
00:05:070 (5070|0) - http://puu.sh/8CnRD.jpg
refer to 00:06:570 (6570|0,6570|6,7770|6,7770|0) -
00:07:170 (7170|1) - ^ same double notes
00:09:570 (9570|2,9870|4) - I don't really recommend this kind of hold which is relatively short and uncertain when release. I would suggest this kind of pattern which is easy to read and not hard to catch http://puu.sh/8CodD.jpg
00:12:120 (12120|0,12120|4,12420|1,12570|6,12570|2) - suggest you to catch piano rather than what you are catching now. I feel not so consistent with current note xD
00:14:520 (14520|1,14820|0) - change to normal notes (reason as I state above) and also this is the easiest diff in your mapset so make it tide
00:17:220 (17220|3) - delete and change 00:17:070 (17070|1) - to LN until 00:17:370 -
00:18:720 (18720|0,18870|3) - move to 4 and 5 to make reading easier and note more consistent
00:20:220 (20220|5,20520|1) - normal notes is OK
00:21:120 (21120|1,21720|5) - ^
00:20:670 (20670|4,21870|1) - those should be double notes
00:23:670 (23670|4) - add a note for piano sound. Would better make sure that there is always a note at the end of hold if possible since that will make hold very handy
00:24:420 (24420|3) - add a note for piano
00:24:570 (24570|3) - move to 0 and that should be double notes
00:25:620 (25620|0) - extend to 00:26:070 -
00:28:320 (28320|3) - change to 1/4 notes here. they fit better and won't be very hard
00:41:820 (41820|6) - add a hold from here to 00:42:270 -
00:42:270 (42270|4) - move to 3 and
00:42:420 (42420|5,42420|0) - move to 2 and 4
00:43:170 (43170|3) - add a note for the consistent melody here!
00:44:220 (44220|5,44520|1) - normal notes
01:18:420 (78420|6) - stop at 01:19:020 -
01:20:670 (80670|0) - add a note
01:34:020 (94020|2) - if you will not follow piano in the following then this note would become very awkward. suggestion:
http://puu.sh/8Cp1x.jpg
01:36:120 (96120|5,96420|1) - normal note
01:38:670 (98670|1) - double notes
01:40:620 (100620|2) - double
01:43:470 (103470|4) - add a note or hold at the end of this hold
01:45:120 (105120|1) - normal note
01:49:920 (109920|3) - 1/4 note?
refer to 00:06:570 (6570|0,6570|6,7770|6,7770|0) -
00:07:170 (7170|1) - ^ same double notes
00:09:570 (9570|2,9870|4) - I don't really recommend this kind of hold which is relatively short and uncertain when release. I would suggest this kind of pattern which is easy to read and not hard to catch http://puu.sh/8CodD.jpg
00:12:120 (12120|0,12120|4,12420|1,12570|6,12570|2) - suggest you to catch piano rather than what you are catching now. I feel not so consistent with current note xD
00:14:520 (14520|1,14820|0) - change to normal notes (reason as I state above) and also this is the easiest diff in your mapset so make it tide
00:17:220 (17220|3) - delete and change 00:17:070 (17070|1) - to LN until 00:17:370 -
00:18:720 (18720|0,18870|3) - move to 4 and 5 to make reading easier and note more consistent
00:20:220 (20220|5,20520|1) - normal notes is OK
00:21:120 (21120|1,21720|5) - ^
00:20:670 (20670|4,21870|1) - those should be double notes
00:23:670 (23670|4) - add a note for piano sound. Would better make sure that there is always a note at the end of hold if possible since that will make hold very handy
00:24:420 (24420|3) - add a note for piano
00:24:570 (24570|3) - move to 0 and that should be double notes
00:25:620 (25620|0) - extend to 00:26:070 -
00:28:320 (28320|3) - change to 1/4 notes here. they fit better and won't be very hard
00:41:820 (41820|6) - add a hold from here to 00:42:270 -
00:42:270 (42270|4) - move to 3 and
00:42:420 (42420|5,42420|0) - move to 2 and 4
00:43:170 (43170|3) - add a note for the consistent melody here!
00:44:220 (44220|5,44520|1) - normal notes
01:18:420 (78420|6) - stop at 01:19:020 -
01:20:670 (80670|0) - add a note
01:34:020 (94020|2) - if you will not follow piano in the following then this note would become very awkward. suggestion:
http://puu.sh/8Cp1x.jpg
01:36:120 (96120|5,96420|1) - normal note
01:38:670 (98670|1) - double notes
01:40:620 (100620|2) - double
01:43:470 (103470|4) - add a note or hold at the end of this hold
01:45:120 (105120|1) - normal note
01:49:920 (109920|3) - 1/4 note?
novice
00:08:820 (8820|0) - ah dont put this kind of thing it hurt T.T
00:21:870 (21870|3) - you can make this a hold ended at 00:22:170 - or just make it double >,< your choice
00:23:520 (23520|2) - a little bit weird looklike auto convert don't beat me xD
00:25:920 - I suggest to use 1/4 note stair to represent piano here. This is not the easiest diff and I think you should try to distinguish itself from Basic not only in note account but also pattern
00:32:970 (32970|6,33570|0) - stop at 00:34:020 - and add note at 00:34:020 - ? btw if you do so make 00:34:170 (34170|3) - double note
00:38:520 (38520|4) - change to hold
00:41:220 (41220|0) - stop at 00:41:820 - and add a hold from 00:41:820 (41820|2) - to 00:42:270 -
00:49:170 (49170|2) - move to 00:49:470 (49470|3) - will be much clearer
01:19:620 (79620|2) - change to hold
01:20:220 (80220|0) - extend to 01:20:670 -
01:41:070 (101070|0) - suggest to use 1/4 note in stair pattern
Nice!
00:21:870 (21870|3) - you can make this a hold ended at 00:22:170 - or just make it double >,< your choice
00:23:520 (23520|2) - a little bit weird look
00:25:920 - I suggest to use 1/4 note stair to represent piano here. This is not the easiest diff and I think you should try to distinguish itself from Basic not only in note account but also pattern
00:32:970 (32970|6,33570|0) - stop at 00:34:020 - and add note at 00:34:020 - ? btw if you do so make 00:34:170 (34170|3) - double note
00:38:520 (38520|4) - change to hold
00:41:220 (41220|0) - stop at 00:41:820 - and add a hold from 00:41:820 (41820|2) - to 00:42:270 -
00:49:170 (49170|2) - move to 00:49:470 (49470|3) - will be much clearer
01:19:620 (79620|2) - change to hold
01:20:220 (80220|0) - extend to 01:20:670 -
01:41:070 (101070|0) - suggest to use 1/4 note in stair pattern
Nice!
I have nothing to say on advance except 01:07:470 (67470|1) - I suggest to move this to 0 and I don't quite get the usage of 1/2 from 01:17:370 - what are they? @@
and add a note at 01:33:570 (93570|3) -
exhaust
Nice diff!
00:16:545 - miss a piano here
00:23:970 (23970|0) - evil T.T
00:27:870 (27870|3,27870|0,27970|1,27970|4,28070|5,28070|2) - I am not so comfortable with these and I think hold is not so fit here but just my personal opinion though
00:34:020 (34020|6) - this hold is very hard to catch under sv change consider to modify the sv?
00:42:270 (42270|3) - this should be double notes
00:53:970 (53970|0,54045|1,54120|2,54195|3,54270|0,54345|1,54420|2,54495|3) - I dont think they should be grouped by four. The last note in these group has a obviously lower pitch. consider to rearrange the pattern?
00:55:770 - these part also. I suggest to use stair here stair is one of the most fit pattern for piano like this imo
01:00:870 - suggest to map mini jack here instead of 1/4 spam just like you did in previous section
I think the repeated piano sound deserve more highlight
01:01:770 (61770|6,61770|0,61920|0,61920|6) - keep mapping 1/4 until 01:02:070 - . I think the transition here is not very smooth
01:04:920 (64920|3) - I am a little bit confused about this note x.x
01:22:170 (82170|2,82170|4) - I prefer to put them in 1 and 5
01:26:670 (86670|6,86745|5,86820|4,86895|3) - double stair here to highlight the 1/4 beat. you can try this:http://puu.sh/8Ctgs.jpg
01:37:920 (97920|6,97995|5,98070|4,98145|3,98220|2) - they are heading a wrong direction T.T pitch is going up
while 01:38:520 (98520|3,98595|4,98670|5) - they could be heading left side
01:47:595 (107595|4) - add a note
why the chart gets easier when it comes to ending? lol
00:16:545 - miss a piano here
00:23:970 (23970|0) - evil T.T
00:27:870 (27870|3,27870|0,27970|1,27970|4,28070|5,28070|2) - I am not so comfortable with these and I think hold is not so fit here but just my personal opinion though
00:34:020 (34020|6) - this hold is very hard to catch under sv change consider to modify the sv?
00:42:270 (42270|3) - this should be double notes
00:53:970 (53970|0,54045|1,54120|2,54195|3,54270|0,54345|1,54420|2,54495|3) - I dont think they should be grouped by four. The last note in these group has a obviously lower pitch. consider to rearrange the pattern?
00:55:770 - these part also. I suggest to use stair here stair is one of the most fit pattern for piano like this imo
01:00:870 - suggest to map mini jack here instead of 1/4 spam just like you did in previous section
I think the repeated piano sound deserve more highlight
01:01:770 (61770|6,61770|0,61920|0,61920|6) - keep mapping 1/4 until 01:02:070 - . I think the transition here is not very smooth
01:04:920 (64920|3) - I am a little bit confused about this note x.x
01:22:170 (82170|2,82170|4) - I prefer to put them in 1 and 5
01:26:670 (86670|6,86745|5,86820|4,86895|3) - double stair here to highlight the 1/4 beat. you can try this:http://puu.sh/8Ctgs.jpg
01:37:920 (97920|6,97995|5,98070|4,98145|3,98220|2) - they are heading a wrong direction T.T pitch is going up
while 01:38:520 (98520|3,98595|4,98670|5) - they could be heading left side
01:47:595 (107595|4) - add a note
why the chart gets easier when it comes to ending? lol
infinite
Good luck!wow this is lol
sorry I am really not good at modding this kind of LN mixed with notes pattern and this looks a little bit messy for me T.T
00:13:920 (13920|2,13920|4,13995|4,13995|2,14070|5,14070|3) - suggest to be single note. I think single notes representing piano while double LN in both hand is enough
00:14:520 (14520|3,14557|4,14595|5,14632|4,14670|3) - if its me I will rearrange here and make them a stair
01:28:020 (88020|0,88095|1) - also a quite unfriendly pattern
01:47:220 (107220|3,107220|4,107295|3,107370|5,107445|5,107520|6) - ^
sorry really can't help much
sorry I am really not good at modding this kind of LN mixed with notes pattern and this looks a little bit messy for me T.T
00:13:920 (13920|2,13920|4,13995|4,13995|2,14070|5,14070|3) - suggest to be single note. I think single notes representing piano while double LN in both hand is enough
00:14:520 (14520|3,14557|4,14595|5,14632|4,14670|3) - if its me I will rearrange here and make them a stair
01:28:020 (88020|0,88095|1) - also a quite unfriendly pattern
01:47:220 (107220|3,107220|4,107295|3,107370|5,107445|5,107520|6) - ^
sorry really can't help much