arcwinolivirus wrote:

From Arcwinolivirus' Speed Modding Queue! "Recheck/mod REQUEST"

Take note that I'm only focusing on note patterns, note placements and note consistency. Not the actual hitsound itself (Just in case if you already implemented hitsounds).


[General]
Audio: OK!
BG: OK!
BPM: OK!
Offset: OK!
Preview Time: OK!
Artist, source and Tags: OK!
AiMod:
No Problem~!

[NM]

SPOILER

00:06:544 - add note to 2 for the piano sound.
00:06:814 (6814|3,7355|4) - remove as there's only solo piano. It's double like Finger 1 and 3
00:07:625 (7625|0) - move to 4 better at middle. add note 4
00:08:436 - add note to 6 for the piano sound. Long Note till 00:08:976 -
00:08:706 (8706|4) - remove not strong enough to be 2-noted. its only low snare-like sound. Remove 4
00:14:111 (14111|6) - move to 2 for hand balance. add note 2
00:17:895 (17895|5,18166|4) - move to 4 and 2 accordlingly for its pitch. Like this okay ?
00:20:598 (20598|6) - dont overlap this LN especially in this NM diff. reduce until 00:21:139 This is OK?
00:27:084 (27084|0) - extend until 00:28:166
00:29:787 - add note to 6 for the piano sound.
00:30:057 - add note to 5 ^
00:33:571 (33571|2) - change this into single note only. No need to LN since the long sound of that impact sound is not consistent to LN.
00:42:760 (42760|2) - change to LN until 00:43:301 because of long piano sound.
00:46:544 (46544|5) - remove. avoid the 3-noted note in NM.
00:47:625 (47625|1,48706|5) - ^
00:49:787 (49787|2) - ^
00:51:679 (51679|4) - change into short note. just only a press of piano sound. It's actually hold press piano sound :3
00:53:030 (53030|3,54111|5) - ^ add 2 note in 3, 4
00:57:355 (57355|0) - move to 6 different pitch. +1 LN
01:06:003 (66003|3) - reduce length until 01:07:625
01:29:247 (89247|1) - remove 3-noted note. Remove 3
01:29:247 (89247|2) - move to 6 ^ , so still :3 the same
01:30:328 (90328|1,90598|0) - remove Change like this
01:30:598 (90598|1) - move to 4 for piano.

[HD]

SPOILER

00:04:382 (4382|0) - remove not strong enough to be 3-noted with LN.
00:11:409 (11409|0) - move to 6. Avoid that stacking of LN notes. It's fit the piano :3 ~
00:13:030 (13030|2,13030|3) - remove this 4-noted with LN. no strong sound. Remove 3, it's snare
00:21:949 (21949|4) - remove 3-noted. I mean, for piano ~
00:21:679 (21679|2,21949|2) - move to 2 and 1 accordlingly.
00:23:301 (23301|4,23841|1) - remove. Change position LN in 2,4 + note in 7 :3
00:23:841 (23841|4) - move to 2 ^
00:24:382 (24382|3) - remove Piano ~
00:26:274 (26274|5) - move to 3 to avoid bracketing aww c'mon it's not that hard
00:27:084 (27084|2) - move to 5 ^ ^

00:29:247 (29247|1,29787|4,30057|5,30598|4,30598|1) - rearrange these kinds of LN. Dont overlap them too much. As this is only HD too. hmm... remove a little amount of note, I'm trying to keep the piano style

00:33:301 (33301|3) - why this overlaps? reduce length until 00:33:571 piano dakara da \:D/
00:33:571 (33571|1) - remove.
00:42:220 (42220|3,42253|2,42253|5) - remove oh my that 6-noted press. avoid those. also snap the LNs. Actually It's not 6, it's 5, anyway I'm removing the 6 one, and hey~ it's piano thing :3
00:45:463 (45463|1) - remove
00:46:544 (46544|1,46544|3) - reduce length until 00:47:084 piano thing :3 ~
00:47:625 (47625|3) - remove. leave only 3-noted press for chord.
00:48:706 (48706|2) - remove.
00:49:787 (49787|4) - remove. Remove 3
00:53:030 (53030|3) - ^ Remove 6
00:59:787 (59787|2,59922|2) - avoid this stacking of notes or slow jack. They might be the same instrument but listen carefully on their pitches. its normal to high hithat. To make them fun to press, You can use alternating note pattern or trills. Apply to all notes with these kind of stacking. Okaaay~ Thanks Re-Arrange some jacksssssss~
01:07:625 (67625|6,67625|5) - change to short note. why mini hold? inconsistent LN. apply to all similar mini LNs.
until the end - rearrange those patterns to more friendly and fun to play notes. Just listen to music, it is so clear and peaceful. Avoid that jacks and make hand balance while you use LNs. avoid the mini LNs too as they are not consistent. And then play your own map and check if its comfortable already. Set your goal to be a mapper that makes the players remember your map with your note patterns and comfortable to play~ this this this <3 .... but the problem is .................................... I'm comforable, so yeah, will change some of them but NOT all ~

[Overall]
As I said earlier, peaceful and cool song~ thank you for requesting and good luck~ bakarcher

Pew wrote:

Hi ArcherGOD,

modmodmodmodmod

General

Kiai time: maybe you should lengthen the kiai time to around 01:31:949 or to here 01:34:111. This is because from the beginning of the kiai time there is more instruments and intensity (Violins,Drums, Piano chords) and it is continually stayed like this until the time suggested. Hum, but It's too long, not fit, so... see the update first later ~

Hitsounds For the hit sound i noticed from kiai time and later that your hitsounds every 4 beat goes like (1:finish,2 nothing or whistle, 3 clap, 4 whistle) so i checked for any inconsistencies pew pew pew pew pewwww~ *laser sound*

Columns (0|1|2|3|4|5|6) you mean 1|2|3|4|5|6|7 ?

NM

00:43:841 - Add note at either 1,2 or 3 (the whole phrase was mapped with a note every 2 beats, also piano note was played there (low pitched)) add to 2
01:07:625 (67625|1) - Change to whistle (weak beat and i haven't seen you placed another clap on the 3rd beat)
01:08:166 (68166|2) - Add finish (Like the other notes beginning of the bar)
01:09:247 (69247|3) - Add Clap (2nd beat of the bar)
01:12:490 (72490|1) - Add finish (Same as 2 lines above)
01:18:976 (78976|4) - Add finish (At 01:23:301 (83301|2) - you had a finish sound and the piano's melody pitch interval's are similar to each other at those timings)
01:25:463 (85463|4) - Remove Whistle (you have both whistle and finish hitsound)
01:27:625 (87625|4) - ^^
01:29:247 (89247|1) - Add whistle (3rd beat)
01:29:787 (89787|2) - Remove Whistle
01:39:066 (99066|2,101454|4,101499|5) - Move each note 1 to the right and add a note in column 4 at 01:41:409. Because i hear 3 notes at 25% speed and not 2 ( http://puu.sh/8ydZR.png <-- should look like this)

HD

01:01:274 (61274|2) - Remove whistle Why ? tick tick tick sound
01:01:409 (61409|1) - Add whistle
01:01:679 (61679|4) - Add Finish (first beat)
01:03:841 (63841|6) - Add Finish remove whistle (first beat)
01:04:922 (64922|5) - Add clap (2nd beat)
01:05:463 (65463|3) - Add whistle (3rd beat)
01:07:625 (67625|5) - Add whistle (3rd beat)
01:08:166 (68166|2) - Add finish (1st beat)
01:12:490 (72490|1) - Add finish (1st beat)
01:16:274 (76274|5) - Add whistle (3rd beat)
01:19:382 (79382|2) - Maybe remove? (was this suppose to be mapped to piano cause i don't hear piano on that note) Snare :3
01:20:598 (80598|2) - Add whistle (3rd beat)

From here you placed the note a little later than it suppose to be (about 1/12 beats later lol)

01:39:337 (99337|4) - Offsync so place at 01:39:292 It's not
01:39:607 (99607|6) - Offsync so place at 01:39:562 It's not
01:39:889 (99889|2,99889|0) - Offsync so place it at 01:39:832 It's off but not that place <.<
01:40:283 (100283|6,100283|3) - Offsync so place it at 01:40:238 It's not ;;
01:40:733 (100733|4) - offsync so place it at 01:40:688 not that time ;;
01:40:733 (100733|4,101443|3,101510|2,101544|1) - Should be ascending pitch like normal (flip the columns), it's also offsync so change it to snap divisor 1/12 and extend the ln to 01:41:409 and it should like this in the end http://puu.sh/8yhiY.jpg hum I flip that

vocaloid1anime2 wrote:

Mod here

hi~ :3 mod by your request
Column 1 l 2 l 3 l 4 l 5 l 6 l 7

[General]
all ok~

[7K NM]
00:07:625 (7625|0) - 2 note is enough so remove this Piano sound ~
00:18:706 - i heard the sound here
00:19:247 - the same ^
00:19:787 - this too add note? because at this 00:17:625 you follow that right? <3
00:23:301 - add note at 1 there is more than 1 key piano sound Change to another style
00:23:841 - ^ at 2 ^
00:27:084 - add note at 7 no, because single sound with sustain
00:29:247 - ^ at 5
00:31:949 - ^ at 1
01:31:139 - i heard piano sound here add note at 4

[7K HD]
00:11:409 (11409|0) - um . . . i think move to other because it not the same sound It's the same
00:11:409 (11409|0) - there is other piano sound add note? you hear the bell, I'm folowing the piano ~
01:07:760 - heheh there is the sound here (if i'm not wrong <3 )
and i think clap sound should be short note not LN :3

I think your map is already good Thank you !

lZenxl wrote:

ELO MOD FROM QUEUEASbhfIAUFB

MOD IS HERE~

[HD]

Before the Mod, I suggest to change the BG to this - I searched the image on google and reduced the ratio and cropped it so that the looks nicer, the current one looks quite... bad owo owo.. ok ~

My honest opinion : ( Don't look at it if you don't want to ) The LNs overlap each other in a very weird manner and some notes are very awkward to press, it is VERY confusing for HD players, I don't think I would want to play it a second time.

I will be very very detailed here so you know that I'm not a unreasonable person

RHC - Those who press the centre key with their right hand
LHC - Those who press the centre key with their left hand I'M IN THIS ONE \:D/

00:03:334 (3334|3) - This note here is biased to the RHCs, since the LHCs have to press quite alot of notes here. I see that you are mapping to the main melody on 00:03:334 (3334|3,4382|5,5463|6) - It is best to move this slider to the right by 1 column so that there's no bias here
00:07:659 (7659|0) - Move Right by 1 column - This note is a doublet from this note, 00:07:625 (7625|2) - Spacing them too far apart may cause confusion in HD players move the note to 2 ~
00:10:598 (10598|0) - Shrink slider OR change to note | Those player whom have played this chart at least once will be VERY aware of this hammer and will try very hard to get a 300g on this, which is very difficult as it is a 1/8 spacing here between the two sliders, I still get 200s even though I tried this pattern 3 times. - Shrink to this time 00:11:274 -
00:16:307 (16307|6) - This doesn't need to be on a 1/16, it is a rigid piano chord with 00:16:274 (16274|2) - well, it's needed, try to hear it more specifically
00:20:564 (20564|3,20598|4,20598|5) - This pattern is pretty good but the timing is off on 00:20:564 (20564|3) - The note is late Hear the piano x3
00:30:057 (30057|0) - Move 2 columns to the right, this note is pretty awkward to play as the middle finger is playing an LN oh you remind me XD I was going to change this but forgot lol
00:31:375 (31375|0,31443|3,31443|2,31476|5) - This timing is pretty hard too read as the notes are very spaced apart, I suggest to move them closer somehow move 4 to 5
00:31:476 (31476|5) - This note seems late for me, it's quite hard to confirm this though, also, change this to a single note as the chord here is pretty strong, hear it again ~ piano 00:31:949 (31949|4,31949|6) - , you might want to have the players' hands free of notes when they start to play this chord so that it feels stronger, rather than a LN to LN change but there is strong long sound ~
00:33:301 (33301|3) - Shorten this LN to 00:33:571 - | The player doesn't have a strong indication on whether they should let go at a specific point in time, this LN is pretty sneaky and might cause those aiming for SS to rage quit reduce to 00:33:841 - because piano sound ~
00:42:253 - Why so many notes? This timing point here only has 2 piano keys, putting too much LNs is causing imbalance in the strength of the chart piano bass, melody, sustain~
00:44:416 (44416|2) - It is close to impossible to get 300g on this section, there are 2 doublets here which are spaced 1/16 apart, I don't think it is possible for the player to read this even after numerous tries, move this slider to the rightmost column to form a triplet with 00:44:348 (44348|4,44382|5) - since the piano in the song suggests one but I can ?, uhm, well It's about feeling
00:46:544 (46544|3,46544|1,47084|2) - Why do these LNs overlap? There is no significant beat on the slider end | Make them stack on each other Piano sustain~ :3
00:47:625 (47625|0) - Move to the rightmost column | I suspect the piano in the music is a chord, I suggest to move it to the right hand as it is a melody note and it's high-pitched, have 1 column of spacing between this note and 00:47:625 (47625|4) - since in piano, all chords are spaced apart
00:49:787 (49787|5,49787|4,49787|6) - Too much emphasis on right hand | The right hand literally has to slam on the keyboard, which is very awkward and out of place for a piano chart, I suggest to balance these notes on the left and right hand
01:02:760 (62760|3,62760|5) - Why are these sliders? | If you are mapping for the piano, this slider is too short, if you are mapping for the instrumentals, the slider is not needed drum+piano 2 in 1
01:04:111 (64111|0,64247|1,64382|0) - This pattern is somewhat awkward for a relatively distinct instrument in the music Ctrl+H -ing
01:03:841 (63841|2,64652|3) - This LN overlap is not needed
01:07:895 (67895|2,68030|0,68166|2) - Executing this pattern with this 01:07:625 (67625|1) - LN in the way is pretty weird for me I suggest to swap the columns of these 2 01:07:625 (67625|1,68030|0) -
01:09:247 (69247|4,69247|3) - Why are these sliders? drum+piano 2 in 1
01:09:787 (69787|6,69922|6) - Awkward placement of notes, especially with a 1/4 hammer, swap the columns of these 01:09:247 (69247|5,69787|6,69922|6) -
01:13:571 (73571|4,73571|5) - Why are these sliders again? drum+piano 2 in 1
01:14:111 - This is a jumbled mess here, 01:13:571 (73571|0,73841|2,74111|1,74111|3,74247|2,74382|4,74382|3) - These notes are too compact and is very hard to execute for LHCs I'm LHC, but anyway move something here
01:15:733 (75733|1,75733|2,76274|4) - Unneeded sliders 1. Piano + drum. 2 : string
01:14:652 (74652|5) - This slider.. I don't know why it's there? Re-note
01:16:499 (76499|3) - I don't get this note.note?, at first = short note, and many people complain, string = note
01:17:625 (77625|1,77760|1,78436|5,78436|4,78571|6,78706|5) - This hammer and 1/4 "trill" is quite awkward to press, since they are paired with LNs
01:20:057 (80057|2,80057|1) - Why is this a slider? 1. Piano + drum. 2 : string
01:22:220 (82220|4,82220|5) - ^ 1. Piano + drum. 2 : string
01:21:139 (81139|1) - This slider feels like an obstruction and it creates awkward patterns, swap these columns 01:21:139 (81139|1,81679|0,81949|0,83571|0,83706|0) -
01:24:111 (84111|6,84247|6) - I don't really recommend a 1/4 hammer on the ring finger with both index and middle finger down
01:24:382 (84382|0,84382|3) - Why is this a slider 1. Piano + drum. 2 : string
01:24:922 (84922|4,85193|6) - Same here String
01:26:544 (86544|2,86544|1) - ^ 1. Piano + drum. 2 : string
01:28:706 (88706|2,88706|3) - ^ 1. Piano + drum. 2 : string
01:30:868 (90868|3,90868|4) - ^ 1. Piano + drum. 2 : string
01:25:733 (85733|4,85868|6,86003|4) - Awkward placement of notes
01:31:409 (91409|0,91544|1,91679|0) - ^ | Try to keep it on strong fingers during that timing section
01:33:030 (93030|2,93030|3) - Why is this a slider.. 1. Piano + drum. 2 : string
01:31:949 (91949|1) - Shorten this slider, it is a lot of work to make sure you press the correct keys here and make sure you release this slider AFTER you press the last note That's the purpose~

[NM]

00:18:166 (18166|3,19787|2) - Do not overlap these LNs unless there's a strong reason on why this must be done.
00:23:301 (23301|6,23301|5,23841|4,23841|5,24382|3) - These chords are as strong as each other, I suggest to have 00:24:382 (24382|3) - become a 2 note chord
00:48:706 (48706|1,48706|4,49787|5,49787|4) - The first chord here is higher pitched than the second one, I suggest to use pitch relevancy and correct it more
00:55:193 (55193|0) - Move Right by 1 column | It is higher pitched than 00:57:355 (57355|0) -
00:57:355 (57355|5) - Remove this | This note is extra as the chord here only has 1 bass piano note move to 3 because string xD
The rest looks nice

Very good use of pitch relevancy, but you also need to consider how players play during this chart. Thank you! actually many NM/HD player OF COURSE IT'S MY FRIEND!! say : It's OK, so... yeah ~

[Overall]
01:16:882 - Remove this inheriting point here, the chorus is 01:16:814 - to 01:34:111 -

Good luck on improving this!

[Shana Lesus] wrote:

Hi ArcherLove
mod ready

[NM]
01:07:355 - move to 5 not fit with melody :3
01:09:247 - delete note in 4 column
01:36:274 - add note

[HD]
00:06:814 - add note

pretty specific diff

Good luck,beautiful melody

Rumia- wrote:

Angcher!~
via Community Mind Project , check before other bat come to bubble it~ Rumia 4 bat ftw !! :3

MOD HERE

[General]
i think last hold is too long ?
better to end it at 01:44:922 oh okay~ It's because I hear the sound untill that time (when the holds end)

[NM]
HP atleast 7
OD set to 6 ( minimum requirement)
chech the kiai time , inconsistent with hd diff

cant find anything wrong with this diff other than that

[HD]
00:03:334 (3334|4) - 1/12 snap try to hear the piano with 50% playback, it's fit
00:07:659 (7659|0) - ^ same as above
00:11:983 (11983|4) - ^ same as above
00:15:193 - add a note ?
00:16:307 (16307|6) - 1/12 snap try to hear with 50% playback, it's fit ><
00:17:895 add a note ?
00:20:598 - it should be 1/12 snap too like this http://puu.sh/8JSos.jpg nooo, pianoooo ;_;
00:27:084 - add a note ? there is a chord here I think 2 is enough O.o ?
00:29:247 - ^
00:31:409 - 1/12 snap too http://puu.sh/8JSBH.jpg piano with 50% playback
00:32:220 - add a note ?
00:32:760 - ^
00:42:220 (42220|3,42253|4,42253|0,42253|2,42253|1) - 1/12 again It's 1/16 well~
00:42:794 (42794|3,43334|5) - 1/4 snap Piano thing~
00:43:875 (43875|3) - ^ Piano thing ~
00:44:348 (44348|4,44416|2) - this note is off sync , it should be like this http:/re? try to hear with 50% playback]u sure? try to hear with 50% playback[/color]
00:55:733 - add a note ? for what ? O.o ?
01:02:760 (62760|5,62760|3) - i think its better of a normal note , since its also emphasizing the kick
01:06:679 - add a note ? i heard a hi hat
01:07:220 - ^
01:09:247 (69247|4,69247|3) - normal note too ?
01:13:571 (73571|5,73571|4) - ^
01:15:733 (75733|2,75733|1) - ^
01:17:895 (77895|3,77895|5) - ^
01:20:057 (80057|2,80057|1) - ^
01:15:057 (75057|4) - move up to the white line , i think you misplaced this
01:16:499 (76499|3) - i dont really think the 1/16 snap here is really needed though string ?
01:17:659 (77659|6) - unsnapped
01:20:868 - add a note ? i think i heard a piano key here you're just imagining things >_<
01:23:334 (83334|3,83368|4) - 1/12 snap
01:31:949 (91949|1) - i think better end this hold on the double line , much more readable . ._. it's that "ssssssshhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh" sound
01:36:240 (96240|2,96274|1,96341|0) - 1/12 snap try to hear it with 50% playback ~
01:41:443 (101443|2,101476|3,101544|5) - 1/12 snap , also 01:40:733 (100733|4) - this slider end same as above~

Rumia- wrote:

mostly i check sync notes with 25%.

Rumia- wrote:

fix your ear and headphone please.

arcwinolivirus wrote:

roflmao XD

[ S a k u r a ] wrote:

Column: |1|2|3|4|5|6|7|

Hi~ mod from queue

NM

00:10:598 - Add a note

00:15:463 - Add a note

00:22:760 - Add a note

00:28:166 - Add a note It's too much for NM ~

01:08:166 - Add a note

HD

00:28:166 - Add a note I think 2 is enough ?

00:33:571 (33571|5) - erase

01:08:166 - add a note

01:16:814 - Add a note

01:34:247 - Add a note at column 6

Good overall !

Best of Lucks~

PROGUY wrote:

Hi there.
Here's my check as requested.

Mod here~

[General]
- I recommend doubling the volume as it's currently too soft.
01:12:490 Move this inherited point to 01:16:544. Applies to both difficulties in the set.

[NM]
00:18:166 (18166|3) Move long note end to 00:18:706. This long note placement is currently a little tricky for right-handed beginners.
00:37:355 (37355|1) Move to 3rd column.
00:37:625 (37625|2) Move to 5th column.
00:40:328 (40328|2) Move to 6th column.
00:40:868 (40868|1) Move to 4th column.
00:51:949 (51949|5) Either remove this or move to 1st column.
01:00:598 (60598|5) Move to 4th column.

[HD]
HP Drain +1
00:58:436 Increase SV change to x0.70.

PROGUY wrote:

Alright, looks good.

Here's your first bubble. Good luck!

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

Wow, go rank ArcherLove >w<

ArcherLove wrote:

LN MAPS ARE UNDERRATED?!

richardfeder wrote:

lol GL on ranking

ArcherLove wrote:

richardfeder wrote:

lol GL on ranking

ty ty arcwin's dad >w<)b

ArcherLove wrote:

richardfeder wrote:

lol GL on ranking

ty ty arcwin's dad >w<)b