谢谢球球>w<Fycho wrote:
As your request, let’s go~(有不懂的可以问我)[Mod Info]
- Black: Suggestions
- Bold: Importance.You might consider
- Red:Unrank issues. You Must Fix
[General]
- Disable letterbox during breaks, since there is storyboard you can’t fix it in th editor, you need to fix the code in the *.osu file. Also, disable display epilepsy warning too ,which is not needed. 仅仅是歌词SB不会很闪瞎眼所以不需要。
- Add “nagi no asu kara” and “bilibili douga” to tags. 已加
[Miuna]已加
- 00:28:767 –using less than 20% volume hitsounds is UNRANKABLE. Please check all the diff and fix it. Hitsounds from notes and sliders must be audible.(rule里小于20%就是静音) 除了转圈和中间两个滑条结尾静音,都改了
- 00:28:221 (3,4) –please take notice of the vocal here, since this is a Chinese song,the vocal is actually at 00:28:767 –not 00:28:494 -.I’d like you follow the instrument not only vocal. Non-japanese songs are too hard to follow vocal(前面那个其实是送气音). Here is my rhythm suggestion: follow the two piano at00:27:949 - 00:28:767 - ,which will make your rhythm more consistent with 00:36:131 (2,3,4) - 已修改~
- Referring to new combo, I’d suggest you add new combo at every big white tick to keep a relatively consistency. Maybe this will lead you to change the whole diff.(NC现在乱七八糟,一会跟的歌词第一个字,没歌词的地方一会又长死了,所以跟着大白线来统一) 很快会修改的
- 00:44:040 (1,2) –it will be nice to keep the same shape since they are holistical in the music ‘w’
- 00:45:676 (3,4,5,6,7) –weird distance snap, 00:46:221 (4) -1.00x with 00:45:676 (3) –but 1.24 with 00:46:494 (5) -, I’d like you put 00:46:221 (4) –away from 00:45:676 (3) –to make a small jump, since there is an obvious piano in music. And, keeping same ds between 00:46:221 (4,5,6,7) – will be much better 已经修改
- 00:48:267 –there is a piano in music, so how about adding a circle to make a triplet here? Not too hard for such low-bpm song’s hard diff, and this will make your rhythm more various, it’ up to you. 加了,感觉会好点吧
- 00:48:676 –there is beat, so how about shortening the 00:48:403 (2) –by 1/2? Following more instrument of low-bpm songs is a good way(vocals so few) 已修改w
- 00:57:949 (5,6) –make a better blanket here? fixed
- 01:03:676 (1,2) – please use copy-paste tool to make this two slider, too weird while they are different fixed
- 01:13:221 (6) –how about this rhythm? , 01:13:494 –this beat is strong enough not like01:04:767 - fixed!
- 01:15:676 (2,4) –avoid meaningless overlapping please, bad-looking 现在可能好看点?
- 01:18:949 (5) –add whistle at sliderend like you add in the previous part, 已加
- 01:20:585 (6) -^ 已加
- 01:33:403 (1,2,3) –please keep the same spacing between them, since you kept at 01:31:221 (1,2,3) -, this will make the diff looks more neat. 01:34:494 (1,2,3) –this the same. (2)的位置太偏3那边 fixed
- 01:38:584 (2,3) –Just give a suggestion: you can try this rhythm to follow the music better, , it’s up to you too, since there is no beat at01:38:857 -. 用了你的这个
- 02:17:039 (1) –how about moving it to (449,138)nearly to make 02:15:675 (1,2,3,4,5,1) –like a diamond? 额,没搞懂具体怎么摆,暂时没改
- 02:12:675 (3) –(吐槽下这描点)add finish at sliderhead like02:03:948 (5) -02:08:312 (5) –。。 已加
- 02:17:039 (1) -^
[Normal]
- 00:50:312 (3) –remove finish here, it doen’t follow anything ok
- 01:02:585 (1,1) –This kind of overlapping will confuse normal player, I’d suggest you change a pattern changed
- 01:19:494 (6,7,8) –add s;c2’s whistle , the same reason as miuna diff fixed
- 01:37:766 (1,2) –How about making a symmetrical pattern like 01:39:948 (3,4) –or something else? fixed
- 01:42:130 (1) –摆正了? fixed
- 02:19:766 (6,7,8) –same above add whsitle 额,这个8为啥我没有;w;
[Easy]Good luck.A decent easy diff, can’t find more issues and suggestions:)
- 01:03:676 (1) –miss finish at sliderhead 已加
- 01:19:085 (1) –this is just an easy diff, so I don’t hope you start spinner at blue tick, please start it at01:19:221 –instead fixed
- 01:48:675 (3) –miss clap at sliderhead fixed