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Avril Lavigne - Hello Kitty

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Irreversible
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Irreversible
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Samstag, 24. Mai 2014 at 02:15:44

Artist: Avril Lavigne
Title: Hello Kitty
Tags: techno dubstep kyshiro gero cats collab collaboration kawaii
BPM: 128
Filesize: 18595kb
Play Time: 03:00
Difficulties Available:
  1. Geroversible's Insane (4.95 stars, 531 notes)
  2. Hard (4.8 stars, 431 notes)
  3. Kyshiro's Normal (3.06 stars, 194 notes)
Download: Avril Lavigne - Hello Kitty
Download: Avril Lavigne - Hello Kitty (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Normal - Kyshiro 100%
Hard - Irreversible 100%
Insane - Gero + Irreversible 100%
Thanks Gero for the hitsounds and the video.
Redownload as of 20.05.2014, added collab names and a new bg!
Last edited by Irreversible , edited 32 times in total.
Mao
Elite Mapper II
2,963 posts
Joined December 2012
Mao
FIRST ASVDASFGADSTGAS

Wow, Avril Lavigne *-* Nehmen sie meinen funkelnden Stern!
Myxo
osu! Alumni
3,103 posts
Joined December 2012
Myxo
<33 I luv Avril Lavigne
Good job Guter Beruf Irre Knuffel :3
Irreversible
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Joined December 2011
Topic Starter
Irreversible
<3
Avena
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Joined December 2012
Avena
You even took my background
THIS IS WAR
ColdTooth
1,100 posts
Joined June 2012
ColdTooth
Not so fast, I declare war on Irre to map this by myself

jk
Myxo
osu! Alumni
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Joined December 2012
Myxo
Star'ed now
Gero
4,438 posts
Joined March 2012
Gero

Priti wrote:

You even took my background
THIS IS WAR
Indeed this is SPARTA!! xD
Last edited by Gero , edited 2 times in total.
Mao
Elite Mapper II
2,963 posts
Joined December 2012
Mao
Nach einem ausgiebigen Testspiel muss ich sagen, dass der Spielfluss der Schwierigkeit "Geroversible" sehr gelungen ist. Ein weiteres Element was mir sehr gefällt ist der Treffer-Klang! Wirklich eine außerordentlich gute Schwierigkeit, die ihre Kompetenzen im Bereich "Kartening" wiederspiegelt.
Kyouren
5,583 posts
Joined October 2012
Kyouren

Priti wrote:

You even took my background
THIS IS WAR
PRITI VS. IRREVERSIBLE
WHO IS WIN?

LOL! :P
Mao
Elite Mapper II
2,963 posts
Joined December 2012
Mao

gokugohan12468 wrote:

Priti wrote:

You even took my background
THIS IS WAR
PRITI VS. IRREVERSIBLE
WHO IS WIN?

LOL! :P
Hail Irre
Pappy
1,020 posts
Joined August 2013
Pappy
2nd time you stolen me song to map ;____;

Kk i wanted to give you a star but i haven't got now ;_; Sorry ;c
Gero
4,438 posts
Joined March 2012
Gero
Irre don't stop the party and rank this! :<
TicClick
Global Moderator
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Joined February 2011
TicClick
hi hi Irre Irre
Secretpipe
3,316 posts
Joined December 2012
Secretpipe

Gero wrote:

Priti wrote:

You even took my background
THIS IS WAR
Indeed this is SPARTA!! xD

Let's see who will rank first ;)
Also I'll mod but it's actually a secret /slap
Kazuya
894 posts
Joined May 2013
Kazuya
Üdvez \o

My english is very creepy. ;_;

[Normal]

00:56:873 (3) - Position & Slider shape: http://puu.sh/8Qjb8.jpg ?
01:15:154 (3,4) - delete, and put 1/2 repeat slider here 01:15:154 : timeline: http://puu.sh/8Qjnj.png ?
02:13:983 (1,2,3) - It's better: http://puu.sh/8QjBm.jpg (timeline). Two 1/2 repeat slider
02:16:561 (2) - delete and move 02:17:029 (3) - slider here: 02:16:561 -. Put circle here: 02:17:498 - ? timeline: http://puu.sh/8QjIU.png
02:39:998 (4) - delete and move 02:40:467 (5) - slider here: 02:39:998 - and put circle here: 02:40:936 - ? timeline: http://puu.sh/8QjSj.png
^^^^ or
02:40:936 - put 1/1 slider here, and circle here: 02:41:639 - ? timeline: http://puu.sh/8QjWA.jpg

[Hard]

00:04:373 - to 00:08:123 - Please, map the parts.
00:25:701 (2) - remove repeat slider, and put 1/2 slider here. timeline: http://puu.sh/8Qk9K.jpg

00:29:217 (2) - delete circle, and put 1/2 slider here: 00:28:983 - http://puu.sh/8QkeT.jpg
00:32:498 (1,2,3,4) - delete circles, and put 1/4 sliders here: 00:32:498 - & 00:32:733 - and circle here: 00:32:967 - ? http://puu.sh/8QklW.png
00:34:608 (1) - delete circle, and put 1/2 slider here: 00:34:373 - ? http://puu.sh/8Qkvv.png
or
put circle here: 00:34:373 - ? http://puu.sh/8Qku1.jpg
00:35:779 (4) - delete slider, put circles here: 00:35:779 - ? 00:36:014 - ?

00:56:873 (1,2,1,2) - -___- (pattern)

Ehh... 01:12:108 (2) - move circle here: x: 108 y: 204 ?
02:05:662 (3) - delete circle ?
02:10:233 - put circle here.?

[Insane]

00:04:373 - to 00:08:123 - Please, map the parts.

00:25:467 (3) - delete slider and put circles here: 00:25:467 - 00:25:584 - and 1/2 slider here: 00:25:701 - ? timeline: http://puu.sh/8QldC.png
00:28:045 (2) - delete slider, and move 00:27:576 (1) - slider here: 00:27:811 - and add once repeat. put circle here: 00:27:576 - ? timeline: http://puu.sh/8Qlly.png
00:33:319 - Missing circle (?)
00:33:904 (2) - move slider here: 00:33:787 - and put circle here: 00:34:139 - ? timeline: http://puu.sh/8QlrN.jpg
01:01:561 (1,2) - Baah "Jump slider stream". 01:01:795 (2) - & 01:02:029 (3) - = Too far. >_>
01:58:748 (1,1,1,1) - >_> I hate! 02:00:154 (1) - CTRL+G! Pls ~

Good Luck.
Kyshiro
Elite Mapper
1,642 posts
Joined January 2011
Kyshiro
IM BEING FORCED TO MOD THIS OR ELSE I WILL BE EXECUTED please help me

General
  1. Check AImod and AIbat, there are unsnapped circles and there's inconsistency in the kiai times
Geroversible's Insane
  1. 00:10:467 (3,4,5,6) - looks a bit odd cause of the distance between objects, move 4,5,6 slightly more right and up (not too much, mind the autostack of 4,5)
  2. 00:26:170 (1) - This NC seems rather random to me
  3. 00:27:576 (1) - ^
  4. 00:30:154 (1) - ^ kshro the nc modder
  5. 00:30:389 (6) - Stack this on 00:29:686 (3) - maybe, also increase the spacing from that to the next slider if you do
  6. 00:32:498 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - http://puu.sh/8QjJD.jpg blanket pls
  7. 00:44:920 (1) - remove NC
  8. 00:54:412 (1) - ^ I really don't see the point lol
  9. 00:59:451 (2,3,4) - CTRL+G this, more comfortable and fun to play
  10. 01:06:248 (1,4) - blankettttttttttt
  11. 01:06:834 (2,3) - I'd like to see these unstacked from the slider end, just my opinion though, http://puu.sh/8Qk2g.jpg
  12. 01:11:873 (5) - NC
  13. 01:12:576 (7,8,9) - CTRL+G maybe? still a simple jump considering the low BPM
  14. 01:14:217 (1,1,1,1,1) - PILIPALA aAaAaAaAaAaAaaaaaA i don't even.
  15. 01:22:654 (4,5) - CTRL+G both at the same time actually plays rather awesome (fits the vocals better too if that's what you were trying to achieve here)
  16. 01:38:240 (1) - instead of this spinner i can imagine an awesome 3/4 slidersection here, first slowing then down gradually, then halfway in speeding them up again, since the vocals volume gets lower and higher here
  17. 01:51:717 (1,2,1) - Spacing should be equal here imo
  18. 01:51:717 (1,1,1) - Still don't get it
  19. 01:53:592 (1) - ^
  20. 01:57:811 (1,1,1) - I'll stop pointing these out now I get the feeling you will deny all of them anyway, I don't see how they fit however, if you decide to fix them I'm sure you can find the rest of them throughout the mapset too
  21. 02:09:998 (2) - Now this is something that actually does feel good to have an NC at cause of the sudden 1/3
  22. 02:27:811 (1) - Instead of a spinner I'd put a stream here, or continue with the 1/4 sliders
  23. 02:30:858 (1,2,3) - Kind of tricky, might be missread as continuous 1/4, I'd suggest you to use more spacing
Hard
  1. 00:11:873 (1,2,3,4) - Make better blankets pls :c
  2. 00:25:701 (2) - yay for overmapping in hard diffs, 1/2 pls
  3. 00:34:373 - It feels so wrong to skip this beat, would require some moving to get that to work though
  4. 00:38:123 (1,2,1) - Make the stacks better
  5. 01:06:248 (1) - WUB
  6. 01:09:998 (1,2,3) - Would be better to make this 1.4 spacing like the notes after this
  7. 01:23:123 (1,1) - PILIPALA doesn't fit here
  8. 01:24:295 (1) - I'd consider this unrankable for a hard diff because the slidertrack is almost invisible, move it slightly to the left or right to fix
  9. 01:27:811 (1,1) - This overlap pls
  10. 01:34:373 (5,6) - ARE YOU LOOKING FOR A FIGHT?!?!?!no srs l2 blanket :c
  11. 02:23:123 (1,1,1,1) - someone's been a lazy mapper
Kyshiro's Normal
  1. This is the worst shit i have ever seen, delete this crap ok thanks bye
star because y0l0sw3g rank pls
Kyshiro
Elite Mapper
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Joined January 2011
Kyshiro
DOUBLEPOST

Kazuya-sama wrote:

Üdvez \o

My english is very creepy. ;_;

[Normal]

00:56:873 (3) - Position & Slider shape: http://puu.sh/8Qjb8.jpg ? I think it plays and looks better the way it is
01:15:154 (3,4) - delete, and put 1/2 repeat slider here 01:15:154 : timeline: http://puu.sh/8Qjnj.png ? There's no sound at the 1/2 here, makes no sense to map to it
02:13:983 (1,2,3) - It's better: http://puu.sh/8QjBm.jpg (timeline). Two 1/2 repeat slider I honestly think this is fine lol
02:16:561 (2) - delete and move 02:17:029 (3) - slider here: 02:16:561 -. Put circle here: 02:17:498 - ? timeline: http://puu.sh/8QjIU.png Yeah that's better
02:39:998 (4) - delete and move 02:40:467 (5) - slider here: 02:39:998 - and put circle here: 02:40:936 - ? timeline: http://puu.sh/8QjSj.png Fine the way it is
^^^^ or
02:40:936 - put 1/1 slider here, and circle here: 02:41:639 - ? timeline: http://puu.sh/8QjWA.jpg Also fine the way it is
Thanks

http://puu.sh/8QmWJ.txt
Irreversible
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4,315 posts
Joined December 2011
Topic Starter
Irreversible
Kazuya-Sama

Kazuya-sama wrote:

Üdvez \o

My english is very creepy. ;_;

[Hard]

00:04:373 - to 00:08:123 - Please, map the parts.
00:25:701 (2) - remove repeat slider, and put 1/2 slider here. timeline: http://puu.sh/8Qk9K.jpg Done.

00:29:217 (2) - delete circle, and put 1/2 slider here: 00:28:983 - http://puu.sh/8QkeT.jpg Not agreeing with this one, I like the effect created here.
00:32:498 (1,2,3,4) - delete circles, and put 1/4 sliders here: 00:32:498 - & 00:32:733 - and circle here: 00:32:967 - ? http://puu.sh/8QklW.png I think it's fine as it is..
00:34:608 (1) - delete circle, and put 1/2 slider here: 00:34:373 - ? http://puu.sh/8Qkvv.png fixed
or
put circle here: 00:34:373 - ? http://puu.sh/8Qku1.jpg
00:35:779 (4) - delete slider, put circles here: 00:35:779 - ? 00:36:014 - ?

00:56:873 (1,2,1,2) - -___- (pattern)

Ehh... 01:12:108 (2) - move circle here: x: 108 y: 204 ? remade the part a bit
02:05:662 (3) - delete circle ? no, it fits since it's in the song.
02:10:233 - put circle here.? I'll fix this differently since the 1/3 feels shit ;w;

[Insane]

00:04:373 - to 00:08:123 - Please, map the parts.

00:25:467 (3) - delete slider and put circles here: 00:25:467 - 00:25:584 - and 1/2 slider here: 00:25:701 - ? timeline: http://puu.sh/8QldC.png Fixed
00:28:045 (2) - delete slider, and move 00:27:576 (1) - slider here: 00:27:811 - and add once repeat. put circle here: 00:27:576 - ? timeline: http://puu.sh/8Qlly.png I don't quite understand thsi one, but I follow the strong vocal here, so it should be fine.
00:33:319 - Missing circle (?) Don't think so.
00:33:904 (2) - move slider here: 00:33:787 - and put circle here: 00:34:139 - ? timeline: http://puu.sh/8QlrN.jpg Gero
01:01:561 (1,2) - Baah "Jump slider stream". 01:01:795 (2) - & 01:02:029 (3) - = Too far. >_> yeah, fixed
01:58:748 (1,1,1,1) - >_> I hate! 02:00:154 (1) - CTRL+G! Pls ~ Ok.

Good Luck.
Thanks a lot!

Kyshiro

Kyshiro wrote:

IM BEING FORCED TO MOD THIS OR ELSE I WILL BE EXECUTED please help me

General
  1. Check AImod and AIbat, there are unsnapped circles and there's inconsistency in the kiai times
Geroversible's Insane
  1. 00:10:467 (3,4,5,6) - looks a bit odd cause of the distance between objects, move 4,5,6 slightly more right and up (not too much, mind the autostack of 4,5) pls don't kill my mapper Spirit (fixed)
  2. 00:26:170 (1) - This NC seems rather random to me orz you're right
  3. 00:27:576 (1) - ^
  4. 00:30:154 (1) - ^ kshro the nc modder ok ok
  5. 00:30:389 (6) - Stack this on 00:29:686 (3) - maybe, also increase the spacing from that to the next slider if you do fixed differently
  6. 00:32:498 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - http://puu.sh/8QjJD.jpg blanket pls gero
  7. 00:44:920 (1) - remove NC ..kawaii? fixed
  8. 00:54:412 (1) - ^ I really don't see the point lol well, it has one, if you listen to the bg .. I think the beat is quite strong but lol. Removed [/b[
  9. 00:59:451 (2,3,4) - CTRL+G this, more comfortable and fun to play [b]interesting. Applied
  10. 01:06:248 (1,4) – blankettttttttttt gero
  11. 01:06:834 (2,3) - I'd like to see these unstacked from the slider end, just my opinion though, http://puu.sh/8Qk2g.jpg gero
  12. 01:11:873 (5) – NC XD, applied
  13. 01:12:576 (7,8,9) - CTRL+G maybe? still a simple jump considering the low BPM I’ll try it for now , might remove later
  14. 01:14:217 (1,1,1,1,1) - PILIPALA aAaAaAaAaAaAaaaaaA i don't even. Well I actually like that one >< it fits the mood very well.
  15. 01:22:654 (4,5) - CTRL+G both at the same time actually plays rather awesome (fits the vocals better too if that's what you were trying to achieve here) gero
  16. 01:38:240 (1) - instead of this spinner i can imagine an awesome 3/4 slidersection here, first slowing then down gradually, then halfway in speeding them up again, since the vocals volume gets lower and higher here gero
  17. 01:51:717 (1,2,1) - Spacing should be equal here imo
  18. 01:51:717 (1,1,1) - Still don't get it
  19. 01:53:592 (1) - ^
  20. 01:57:811 (1,1,1) - I'll stop pointing these out now I get the feeling you will deny all of them anyway, I don't see how they fit however, if you decide to fix them I'm sure you can find the rest of them throughout the mapset too
  21. 02:09:998 (2) - Now this is something that actually does feel good to have an NC at cause of the sudden 1/3 [b]that part plays awful anyway, I think I’ll replace it
  22. 02:27:811 (1) - Instead of a spinner I'd put a stream here, or continue with the 1/4 sliders // will think about it
  23. 02:30:858 (1,2,3) - Kind of tricky, might be missread as continuous 1/4, I'd suggest you to use more spacing gero
[/Quote]
replied to the rest irc, fixed everything except something, but I have Problems answering in the Forum since it's so laggy. -_-

thanks for the mod, was useful! :)

Thanks a lot guys!
Myxo
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Joined December 2012
Myxo


Mod by Request :3

General
  1. 01:51:600 - Turning the kiai off here seems pretty unnecessary to me and it's not consistent throughout the diffs ;w; I'd just remove it.
  2. Widescreen Support is only needed for Storyboards.

Kyshiro's Normal
  1. 00:34:373 (5) - Add an NC here, since the combo is very long currently? It'd help the newbies to fill up their HP :)
  2. 01:29:686 (2,3) - Is that spacing intentional? If it's used to emphasize "Kitty Kitty" it doesn't really fit, because it is not used at other similar places in the music.
  3. 02:00:623 (6) - If you NC 03:00:623 (1), you can also NC this, it will help the newbies again :)
  4. 02:13:983 (1,2) - Very minor, but wouldn't the following rhythm make more sense according to the lyrics? ;w;
    Example
  5. 02:33:436 (5) - You could easily improve the transition to the next object by changing this slider, something like this:
    Example
  6. 02:51:248 (3) - In my opinion the flow could be improved here. The transition to the next object would be better if you either curve this slider the other way around (Example 1) or if you let it "point" more into the direction of the next object (Example 2).
    Example1
    Example2
  7. Awesome! ^^

Hard
  1. 01:35:779 (3) - You could make this slider point more upwards, like in my example, to improve the flow? ;w;
    Example
  2. 02:46:326 (2) - Very noticable spacing difference to the previous and following object. Maybe you could move it a bit?
  3. Perfect Hard :) If I'd list more, it would all be super-nazi o: Also, damn, this is more jumpy than most of my Insanes lol

Geroversible's Insane
  1. 00:15:154 (4,5,1) - This plays pretty weird. First of all, I'd recommend you to use equal spacing here, since it feels strange to slow down. And secondly, I think the flow doesn't fit to the shape of 00:15:623 (1) very well. So I suggest something like this:
    Example
  2. 00:15:623 (1,2,3) - I think the linear transition doesn't really play well. The sliders don't make this movement intuitive. I'd suggest something like this:
    Example
  3. 00:16:912 (4,5,1) - I don't like how this transition plays either. A linear speed-up isn't really intuitive in m opinion. I suggest to align these two 00:16:912 (4,5) so the movement gets better.
    Example
  4. 01:02:029 (3,4,1) - I see no reason why there shouldn't be equal spacing here. It would play better, since it wouldn't be needed to slow down.
    Example
  5. 01:07:186 (4) - After the straight slider, the movement to 01:07:654 (1) doesn't feel intuitive for me. Maybe you could turn it into a curved slider, blanketing 01:06:248 (1) ?
    Example
  6. 01:44:686 (2) - Turning this into a curved slider (like in my example) would improve the flow 01:44:217 (2,1,2) here imo. Also, it would improve the aesthetics of 01:44:686 (2,1) this ;w; Because, as I learned from you (Irre), two straight sliders places like this don't look good :bb
    Example
  7. Well, I like it very much! I think your styles don't really fit together, since Irre's parts are significantly harder in my opinion, which makes the diff kind of inconsistent. But oh well, it's a collab, so it's fine o:

Lovely mapset o: Very creative Insane ^-^ I should give you 1 more star!

Good luck :3
Mao
Elite Mapper II
2,963 posts
Joined December 2012
Mao


By In-game request ^-^


  1. Unrankable Issue
  2. Comment

General
  1. Hitsounds please
  2. Uncheck widescreen support. There's no SB :c
  3. Is the Kiai Time Break in Hard and Insane at 01:51:600 - on purpose? It doesn't make any sense there imo. I'd remove it. If you don't do it add it to the Normal as well ;b

Normal
  1. 00:19:373 (1,2,3) - I dislike the rhythm here, it feels a bit weird. I think it would feel way better if you would map 3 1/1 Sliders here especially to get that hold of the instrument from red tick to red tick. (It would be same as 00:08:123 (1,2,3) - )
    Screenshot
  2. 01:13:748 (1,2,3) - Same here especially because the red tick at 01:14:451 - is so loud and strong. It sounds weird to be ignored :c You could either do what I've shown before or if you want some variety you can also do what I show in the Screenshot below. But I would do something like I've suggested before since this one is followed by one exactly modded as the example in the Screenshot shows.
    Screenshot
  3. 01:29:686 (2,3,4) - Watch your spacing here, it seems not to be intentional since you didn't use it before for similiar passages (e.g. 00:42:811 (2,3) - ).
  4. 01:53:123 (1) - Just minor aesthetics. Place it at 228|181 to cover 01:52:186 (5) - 's tail.
  5. 02:13:983 (1,2) - I'd CTRL+G rhythm wise due to the strong vocals at 2's end which could be clickable for a better playability.
  6. 02:38:123 (1) - You could move this to 222|124 to get an equal triangle here :V
  7. Wow this pretty clean and nice to play. I love almost all the rhythm and your placement. Good job! C:

Hard
  1. 00:10:467 (2,3) - Hm, ich mag hier den Rhythm nicht so. Die Drums setzen bei 00:10:936 - so aus. Ich weiß nicht, was du hier so richtig followst, weil auf dem Tick sind Vocals aber die hast du bei 00:10:701 - ignoriert. Ich persönlich finde es hört sich besser an, wenn du vom Rhythm her CTRL+G machst.
  2. 00:16:561 (3) - Ich find das hört sich komisch an, weil du sowohl Drums als auch Vocals bei 00:16:795 - ignorierst. Ich wäre hier für sowas wie bei 00:31:561 (3,4) - , weil es einfach besser passt. So hast du auch die starken Vocals als anklickbares Objekt xD
  3. 00:28:748 (1,2) - Die Lücke hier dazwischen wirkt irgendwie komisch, vor allem auch, weil du die bei 00:13:514 (4) - auch gemappt hast. Ich würde hier auch eher nen 1/1 Slider mappen, weil es sich auch einfach komisch spielt imo
  4. 00:44:451 (2,1) - Ich mag hier den Flow von 2 zu 1 nicht. Das bremst mich ab, dass ich so schnell nach rechts zur 1 muss und dann anhalten um noch runter zu kommen. Wäre cooler, wenn dus ein wenig nach links nimmst. Ich würde es zu 120|192 oder so schieben :3
  5. 00:45:623 (1,2,3,4) - Gibts hier nen Grund, warum das spacing von 1 -> 3 und von 4 -> 5 inkonsistent ist? o-o
  6. 00:56:639 (4,5,1) - Liegt das nur an mir, oder sieht das komisch aus, weils ein stacked ist? ><
  7. 00:58:748 (1) - Hm, warum sind da zwei rote Anchor Points? Das fällt nicht auf. Lösch einen davon oder, wenn du die Form mit 2 haben willst, dann mach ehr sowas wie im Screenshot.
    Screenshot
  8. 00:59:569 (2) - Das Spacing könntest du hier mal ein wenig anpassen, das ist nicht konsistent hier. Vorheriges Objekt -> 0,50 ; nächstes Objekt _> 0,63. Das sind 0,13 Unterschied. Das würde imo besser aussehen, wenns konsistent ist.
  9. 01:02:498 (1) - Ich geh hier nicht so ganz mit dem Rhythm mit. Wo bei dem anderen der weiße Tick der damit ignoriert wird nicht so stark ist, find ichs hier aber komisch. Ich empfehle 1/1 und dann nen Circle auf dem roten Tick.
    Screenshot
  10. 01:18:436 (3) - Vielleicht gehts nur mir so, aber ich find hier, dass es komisch ist, dass die Vocals und die Drums auf dem roten Tick ignoriert sind. Außerdem hast dus am Anfang auch schonmal so gemappt und ich finde es hört sich echt viel besser an und spielt sich auch besser ;w; Was ähnliches wie im Screenshot wäre im Bezug aufs Placement möglich.
    Screenshot
  11. 01:21:248 (1) - Ich lieb den, der passt so schön :D
  12. 01:30:154 (4) - CTRL+G wäre cool hier, würde zu deinen anderen Patterns gut passen imo.
  13. 01:35:779 (3) - Ich stimm Nao hier zu, mach den grade nach oben. Das würde sich viel besser spielen :c Grund dafür ist, dass es dem Movement des Sliders und des Circles mehr entsprechen würde.
  14. 01:58:748 (1,2,3) - Ich weiß nicht, das fühlt sich irgendwie lehr an. Das 1/3, was du mit dem Repeat Slider gemappt hast eght ja noch weiter und die Vocals sind auch noch zu hören. Die Stelle scheint aber auch irgendwie doof zu mappen. Sowas wie im Screenshot fänd ich aber besser, weil da einfach viel mehr ist und vor allem das abrupte Ende von 01:59:217 (2) - , obwohl das Geräusch noch weiter geht find ich komisch ><
    Screenshot
  15. Wow, die Map wird gegen Ende hin besser find ich. Die 3. Kiai ist toll <3

Insane
  1. 00:14:217 (1,2,3,4) - You've spaced 1's tail and 3's tail with 1,00 DS, but 00:15:154 (4) - is spaced more than 1,10. You could move it to 367|140 to get 1,00 spacing and an equal triangle of the two tails and the circle.
    Screenshot
  2. 00:15:623 (1,2,3) - The movement here feels rather unnatural to me. I would go for a curved movement as 00:15:623 (1) - 's path tells us here. What I mean is that the in play mode I expect this to go more to the left instead the abrupt movement to the right. A triangular shape could help here.
    Screenshot
  3. 00:16:561 (3,4) - Hm, this played a bit weird to me. You didn't use such a stack before or in the following parts in the map. I was totally confused when I saw this and didn't know what to do. Consider either to snap it with DS 0,60 or to do something as at 00:24:412 (5,6) - . I would personally go for the two circles because at 00:17:029 - , there's a pretty strong drum not that would feel better if it's clickable.
  4. 00:23:592 (3) - Huh, why 0,38 Spacing here? Your usual spacing for stuff like this was 0,50 or 0,60 o:
  5. 00:33:787 - The gap here feels a bit weird to me since you've followed the vocals before (00:32:498 (1,2,3,4,5) - ). Here's a pretty strong note in the vocals, so I'd place a note here. I don't know, it feels a bit empty without it :c
    Screenshot
  6. 00:41:873 (1,2,3,4) - Huh, the spacing looks a bit weird since this looks like it was ment to be a line with equal spacing. It wouldn't be a problem if you do stuff like this for most of your patterns but as far as I can judge you try to keep consistent spacing where it's possible. Also the positions of 00:41:873 (1,3) - are same as 00:40:233 (2,4) - . So why aren't the others the same? Just place 00:42:108 (2) - at 00:42:576 (4) - 256|136 and 256|56.
  7. 00:47:498 (1) - I don't know, maybe it's just my preference but I think this stream looks a bit weird. It looks as you've tried to make a circular stream :/
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  8. 00:54:998 (1,2) - Hm, I personally think these look a bit chunky together. You don't do something like this very often, so I don't think it fits the map very well. Also at the start of the 2nd Kiai you didn't do something like this (01:45:623 (1,2) - ). So I'd go for a curve at 1.
    Screenshot
  9. 01:14:217 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - I love this *-*
  10. 01:16:092 (3,4,5) - Wow, 0,20 spacing? I don't see any reason why the spacing is so low here especially because you've used a jump at 00:14:217 (1,2,3) - , which is basically the same in the music as this :/
  11. 01:45:623 (1,2,3) - This feels a bit squashed due to the low spacing here >< I'd go for 0,50 or higher since you use this for the most time. I think it would feel way better here! :D
  12. 02:27:576 (4) - This feels a bit out of place here since you've always rotated the Sliders about 45°, so I've expected this to be like this too ;w;
    Screenshot
  13. 02:29:920 (1) - This is so awesome. It fits so perfetly <3
  14. Pretty nice diff. Loved the rhythm and the placement. I dislike some of the slidershapes in the 3rd Kiai though (e.g. 02:41:873 (1) - ). Otherwise it's fine.

Please reply! I hope it was helpful and good luck! :3 Take another star from me as well ><
Last edited by Mao , edited 1 time in total.
Myxo
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Joined December 2012
Myxo
Mao so pro modder o:
AnreFM
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AnreFM
good luck irre!
Irreversible
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Topic Starter
Irreversible

Desperate-kun wrote:

Hard
  1. 01:35:779 (3) - You could make this slider point more upwards, like in my example, to improve the flow? ;w; yes
    Example
  2. 02:46:326 (2) - Very noticable spacing difference to the previous and following object. Maybe you could move it a bit? alright
  3. Perfect Hard :) If I'd list more, it would all be super-nazi o: Also, damn, this is more jumpy than most of my Insanes lol

Geroversible's Insane
  1. 00:15:154 (4,5,1) - This plays pretty weird. First of all, I'd recommend you to use equal spacing here, since it feels strange to slow down. And secondly, I think the flow doesn't fit to the shape of 00:15:623 (1) very well. So I suggest something like this:
    Example
  2. 00:15:623 (1,2,3) - I think the linear transition doesn't really play well. The sliders don't make this movement intuitive. I'd suggest something like this:
    Example
  3. 00:16:912 (4,5,1) - I don't like how this transition plays either. A linear speed-up isn't really intuitive in m opinion. I suggest to align these two 00:16:912 (4,5) so the movement gets better.
    Example
  4. 01:02:029 (3,4,1) - I see no reason why there shouldn't be equal spacing here. It would play better, since it wouldn't be needed to slow down.
    Example
  5. 01:07:186 (4) - After the straight slider, the movement to 01:07:654 (1) doesn't feel intuitive for me. Maybe you could turn it into a curved slider, blanketing 01:06:248 (1) ?
    Example
  6. 01:44:686 (2) - Turning this into a curved slider (like in my example) would improve the flow 01:44:217 (2,1,2) here imo. Also, it would improve the aesthetics of 01:44:686 (2,1) this ;w; Because, as I learned from you (Irre), two straight sliders places like this don't look good :bb
    Example
  7. Well, I like it very much! I think your styles don't really fit together, since Irre's parts are significantly harder in my opinion, which makes the diff kind of inconsistent. But oh well, it's a collab, so it's fine o:

Lovely mapset o: Very creative Insane ^-^ I should give you 1 more star!

Good luck :3

Mao wrote:

General
  1. Hitsounds please
  2. Uncheck widescreen support. There's no SB :c
  3. Is the Kiai Time Break in Hard and Insane at 01:51:600 - on purpose? It doesn't make any sense there imo. I'd remove it. If you don't do it add it to the Normal as well ;b


Hard
  1. 00:10:467 (2,3) - Hm, ich mag hier den Rhythm nicht so. Die Drums setzen bei 00:10:936 - so aus. Ich weiß nicht, was du hier so richtig followst, weil auf dem Tick sind Vocals aber die hast du bei 00:10:701 - ignoriert. Ich persönlich finde es hört sich besser an, wenn du vom Rhythm her CTRL+G machst. 00:11:170 (3) - Sollte clickable sein, weils ein drum hier hat, deswegen lass ichs lieber so.
  2. 00:16:561 (3) - Ich find das hört sich komisch an, weil du sowohl Drums als auch Vocals bei 00:16:795 - ignorierst. Ich wäre hier für sowas wie bei 00:31:561 (3,4) - , weil es einfach besser passt. So hast du auch die starken Vocals als anklickbares Objekt xD fixed
  3. 00:28:748 (1,2) - Die Lücke hier dazwischen wirkt irgendwie komisch, vor allem auch, weil du die bei 00:13:514 (4) - auch gemappt hast. Ich würde hier auch eher nen 1/1 Slider mappen, weil es sich auch einfach komisch spielt imo fixed ~.~
  4. 00:44:451 (2,1) - Ich mag hier den Flow von 2 zu 1 nicht. Das bremst mich ab, dass ich so schnell nach rechts zur 1 muss und dann anhalten um noch runter zu kommen. Wäre cooler, wenn dus ein wenig nach links nimmst. Ich würde es zu 120|192 oder so schieben :3 da ist es schon? XD
  5. 00:45:623 (1,2,3,4) - Gibts hier nen Grund, warum das spacing von 1 -> 3 und von 4 -> 5 inkonsistent ist? o-o nein, fixed
  6. 00:56:639 (4,5,1) - Liegt das nur an mir, oder sieht das komisch aus, weils ein stacked ist? >< ist ok?
  7. 00:58:748 (1) - Hm, warum sind da zwei rote Anchor Points? Das fällt nicht auf. Lösch einen davon oder, wenn du die Form mit 2 haben willst, dann mach ehr sowas wie im Screenshot. vielleicht sollte ich die map bei welt der wunder anmelden xD fixed
    Screenshot
  8. 00:59:569 (2) - Das Spacing könntest du hier mal ein wenig anpassen, das ist nicht konsistent hier. Vorheriges Objekt -> 0,50 ; nächstes Objekt _> 0,63. Das sind 0,13 Unterschied. Das würde imo besser aussehen, wenns konsistent ist. ya
  9. 01:02:498 (1) - Ich geh hier nicht so ganz mit dem Rhythm mit. Wo bei dem anderen der weiße Tick der damit ignoriert wird nicht so stark ist, find ichs hier aber komisch. Ich empfehle 1/1 und dann nen Circle auf dem roten Tick.
    Screenshot
  10. 01:18:436 (3) - Vielleicht gehts nur mir so, aber ich find hier, dass es komisch ist, dass die Vocals und die Drums auf dem roten Tick ignoriert sind. Außerdem hast dus am Anfang auch schonmal so gemappt und ich finde es hört sich echt viel besser an und spielt sich auch besser ;w; Was ähnliches wie im Screenshot wäre im Bezug aufs Placement möglich. T_T fixed
    Screenshot
  11. 01:21:248 (1) - Ich lieb den, der passt so schön :D jo ist geil xD
  12. 01:30:154 (4) - CTRL+G wäre cool hier, würde zu deinen anderen Patterns gut passen imo. k
  13. 01:35:779 (3) - Ich stimm Nao hier zu, mach den grade nach oben. Das würde sich viel besser spielen :c Grund dafür ist, dass es dem Movement des Sliders und des Circles mehr entsprechen würde.
  14. 01:58:748 (1,2,3) - Ich weiß nicht, das fühlt sich irgendwie lehr an. Das 1/3, was du mit dem Repeat Slider gemappt hast eght ja noch weiter und die Vocals sind auch noch zu hören. Die Stelle scheint aber auch irgendwie doof zu mappen. Sowas wie im Screenshot fänd ich aber besser, weil da einfach viel mehr ist und vor allem das abrupte Ende von 01:59:217 (2) - , obwohl das Geräusch noch weiter geht find ich komisch >< ist doof, ja. fixed.
    Screenshot
  15. Wow, die Map wird gegen Ende hin besser find ich. Die 3. Kiai ist toll <3

Insane
  1. 00:14:217 (1,2,3,4) - You've spaced 1's tail and 3's tail with 1,00 DS, but 00:15:154 (4) - is spaced more than 1,10. You could move it to 367|140 to get 1,00 spacing and an equal triangle of the two tails and the circle.
    Screenshot
  2. 00:15:623 (1,2,3) - The movement here feels rather unnatural to me. I would go for a curved movement as 00:15:623 (1) - 's path tells us here. What I mean is that the in play mode I expect this to go more to the left instead the abrupt movement to the right. A triangular shape could help here.
    Screenshot
  3. 00:16:561 (3,4) - Hm, this played a bit weird to me. You didn't use such a stack before or in the following parts in the map. I was totally confused when I saw this and didn't know what to do. Consider either to snap it with DS 0,60 or to do something as at 00:24:412 (5,6) - . I would personally go for the two circles because at 00:17:029 - , there's a pretty strong drum not that would feel better if it's clickable.
  4. 00:23:592 (3) - Huh, why 0,38 Spacing here? Your usual spacing for stuff like this was 0,50 or 0,60 o:
  5. 00:33:787 - The gap here feels a bit weird to me since you've followed the vocals before (00:32:498 (1,2,3,4,5) - ). Here's a pretty strong note in the vocals, so I'd place a note here. I don't know, it feels a bit empty without it :c
    Screenshot
  6. 00:41:873 (1,2,3,4) - Huh, the spacing looks a bit weird since this looks like it was ment to be a line with equal spacing. It wouldn't be a problem if you do stuff like this for most of your patterns but as far as I can judge you try to keep consistent spacing where it's possible. Also the positions of 00:41:873 (1,3) - are same as 00:40:233 (2,4) - . So why aren't the others the same? Just place 00:42:108 (2) - at 00:42:576 (4) - 256|136 and 256|56.
  7. 00:47:498 (1) - I don't know, maybe it's just my preference but I think this stream looks a bit weird. It looks as you've tried to make a circular stream :/
    Screenshot
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  8. 00:54:998 (1,2) - Hm, I personally think these look a bit chunky together. You don't do something like this very often, so I don't think it fits the map very well. Also at the start of the 2nd Kiai you didn't do something like this (01:45:623 (1,2) - ). So I'd go for a curve at 1.
    Screenshot
  9. 01:14:217 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - I love this *-*
  10. 01:16:092 (3,4,5) - Wow, 0,20 spacing? I don't see any reason why the spacing is so low here especially because you've used a jump at 00:14:217 (1,2,3) - , which is basically the same in the music as this :/
  11. 01:45:623 (1,2,3) - This feels a bit squashed due to the low spacing here >< I'd go for 0,50 or higher since you use this for the most time. I think it would feel way better here! :D
  12. 02:27:576 (4) - This feels a bit out of place here since you've always rotated the Sliders about 45°, so I've expected this to be like this too ;w;
    Screenshot
  13. 02:29:920 (1) - This is so awesome. It fits so perfetly <3
  14. Pretty nice diff. Loved the rhythm and the placement. I dislike some of the slidershapes in the 3rd Kiai though (e.g. 02:41:873 (1) - ). Otherwise it's fine.

Please reply! I hope it was helpful and good luck! :3 Take another star from me as well ><

Thanks for the mods guys! Replied to the rest in game <3
Eren Yaeger
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Eren Yaeger
And now I can't get this song out of my head ;w;

but great map though ^o^
Gero
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Joined March 2012
Gero
Thanks for the mods guys, I've apply the most of them.

Eroversible's Kawaii
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Kyshiro
Elite Mapper
1,642 posts
Joined January 2011
Kyshiro

Desperate-kun wrote:

Kyshiro's Normal
  1. 00:34:373 (5) - Add an NC here, since the combo is very long currently? It'd help the newbies to fill up their HP :) Ok
  2. 01:29:686 (2,3) - Is that spacing intentional? If it's used to emphasize "Kitty Kitty" it doesn't really fit, because it is not used at other similar places in the music. Was an accident, fixed
  3. 02:00:623 (6) - If you NC 03:00:623 (1), you can also NC this, it will help the newbies again :) I dislike that really, as last note i think it's fine though
  4. 02:13:983 (1,2) - Very minor, but wouldn't the following rhythm make more sense according to the lyrics? ;w; probably makes more sense, but it emphasizes correctly now, the 3rd ''KA'' sounds stronger than the rest
    Example
  5. 02:33:436 (5) - You could easily improve the transition to the next object by changing this slider, something like this: Fixed
    Example
  6. 02:51:248 (3) - In my opinion the flow could be improved here. The transition to the next object would be better if you either curve this slider the other way around (Example 1) or if you let it "point" more into the direction of the next object (Example 2). I really like this, pretty much style related I guess
    Example1
    Example2
  7. Awesome! ^^

Mao wrote:

Normal
  1. 00:19:373 (1,2,3) - I dislike the rhythm here, it feels a bit weird. I think it would feel way better if you would map 3 1/1 Sliders here especially to get that hold of the instrument from red tick to red tick. (It would be same as 00:08:123 (1,2,3) - ) I know what you mean, but for the sake of not making the same stuff over and over I want to keep this, it doesn't feel weird imo though
    Screenshot
  2. 01:13:748 (1,2,3) - Same here especially because the red tick at 01:14:451 - is so loud and strong. It sounds weird to be ignored :c You could either do what I've shown before or if you want some variety you can also do what I show in the Screenshot below. But I would do something like I've suggested before since this one is followed by one exactly modded as the example in the Screenshot shows. Changed
    Screenshot
  3. 01:29:686 (2,3,4) - Watch your spacing here, it seems not to be intentional since you didn't use it before for similiar passages (e.g. 00:42:811 (2,3) - ). already fixed
  4. 01:53:123 (1) - Just minor aesthetics. Place it at 228|181 to cover 01:52:186 (5) - 's tail.This is on purpose
  5. 02:13:983 (1,2) - I'd CTRL+G rhythm wise due to the strong vocals at 2's end which could be clickable for a better playability. Same reason as nao's mod, Emphasizing
  6. 02:38:123 (1) - You could move this to 222|124 to get an equal triangle here :V http://puu.sh/8RKvx.jpg ''equal'' let's just put it at x225 y129 to fix this
  7. Wow this pretty clean and nice to play. I love almost all the rhythm and your placement. Good job! C:
Thanks guys :3
captin1
osu! Alumni
2,595 posts
Joined February 2011
captin1
hi

I find it odd that there's such a difference in volume for the hitsounds between the Normal/Hard and the Insane, I'd try and pick one or the other (raising in the Insane would probably be the better choice)
[Kyshiro's Normal]
  1. 00:11:404 (6) - clap?
  2. 01:10:701 (2) - clap on end?
  3. 01:14:217 (2,3) - clap on 2 and end of 3, not head of 3?
  4. 02:35:311 (2) - clap on head?
  5. 02:54:061 (2) - normal sample on end?
[Hard]
  1. 00:33:904 (3,4,1,2) - were you going for symmetry here? isn't exact if you were. If you weren't then try to make 00:34:842 (3,4,5) - a neater triangle since it's a bit off at the moment
  2. 01:02:498 (1) - would be cool if you had the red point on the beat 01:02:967 - to match the music
  3. 02:23:123 (1,1) - I think you should map out these two spinners, to be more consistent with the Normal and the Insane
  4. 02:35:311 (4) - clap on head?
  5. 02:54:529 (4) - normal sample on the head?
[Geroversible's Insane]
  1. 01:04:842 (2) - normal sample on head?
  2. 01:14:920 (1) - clap?
  3. 02:32:967 (2) - normal sample on head?
  4. 02:35:311 (3) - clap?
  5. 02:54:529 (5) - normal sample?
clean set, call me back
Irreversible
osu! Alumni
4,315 posts
Joined December 2011
Topic Starter
Irreversible
Thank you a lot.

Fixed all!
captin1
osu! Alumni
2,595 posts
Joined February 2011
captin1
k then
Mao
Elite Mapper II
2,963 posts
Joined December 2012
Mao
Dafuq, that was fast OwO
Myxo
osu! Alumni
3,103 posts
Joined December 2012
Myxo
Go ><
Unumstößlich bleibend o;
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