waxman wrote:

QQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQ



00:00:400 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - stacks too much. ( I recommended at most 2 stacks like this pattern 00:00:400 (1,2) )
00:04:036 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - too much copy & paste. you can change them to stacking on tails sometimes.
00:29:945 (2,3,4,5,6) - Rotate it at 50° or something. The direction of this circles is unnecessary against the direction of 00:30:400 (6).
00:57:672 (1) - Change it to slider without reverse. because I think there is no sound to beat at 00:57:786.
00:59:263 (4,5,6) - increase spacing a bit. Those spacing is not same one exactly.
01:08:127 (4,5,6) - (High recommended) this is not readable to play on HD MOD.
01:27:672 (1) - add Whistle on ahead or something. because I heard another sound here.
01:38:809 - miss Whistle.
01:40:627 - add Whistle?
01:40:854 - ^
01:42:218 (1) - 01:56:536 (High recommended)Those Claps are noisy. Wherever you use clap, this clap sound vol. should change it to like 30~40% on this section.
01:48:581 (6,7) - I don't know why only this part is too hard. It's unnecessary.
01:53:127 (1,2,3,4) - (suggestion) Change them to various SV.
01:55:627 (3,4,5) - strange a bit? I'm not sure...
02:01:990 (10,11) - stack on 02:00:400 (1) is better.
02:14:945 (3) - I don't like this end of 02:14:036 (2) tho. But it's your idea. I don't care. but if you keep it hold, The beginning if 02:14:945 (3) don't stack on the end of 02:14:036 (2) (High recommended)

Added Finish on 02:25:854 (1) - 02:36:309 (3) CODE

x:172 y:56 x:416 y:172 I just placed Finish. no change about vol.

172,56,145400,5,8,0:0:0:0:
172,56,145854,6,0,B|112:156|112:156|164:144,1,168,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
60,240,146309,2,0,L|204:208,1,112,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,312,146763,6,0,L|208:268,3,56,4|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,348,147218,2,0,L|268:288,3,56,4|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,288,147672,1,4,0:0:0:0:
420,144,147900,6,0,L|312:184,1,112,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
452,0,148354,2,0,B|380:80|380:80|264:124,1,224
316,24,149036,1,4,0:0:0:0:
288,32,149150,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,40,149263,1,0,0:0:0:0:
88,64,149490,6,0,L|52:148,1,56,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,184,149718,2,0,L|140:120,1,56
228,64,149945,2,0,L|192:148,1,56,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,184,150172,2,0,L|280:120,1,56
312,56,150400,5,4,0:0:0:0:
445,117,150627,1,0,0:0:0:0:
381,250,150854,1,4,0:0:0:0:
247,188,151081,1,0,0:0:0:0:
140,48,151309,5,4,0:0:0:0:
72,200,151536,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,328,151763,2,4,L|164:216,1,112,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,36,152218,2,0,L|272:148,1,112,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,304,152672,1,2,0:0:0:0:
372,152,152900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
424,208,153127,6,0,P|424:92|352:80,1,168,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,68,153581,6,2,L|312:68,3,56,6|2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,44,154036,2,2,L|212:80,3,56,6|2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,48,154490,2,2,L|152:92,3,56,10|2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,68,154945,2,2,L|76:136,3,56,6|2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
28,136,155400,6,0,L|28:204,1,56,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
20,280,155627,2,0,B|120:272|116:172|116:172|184:172,1,224
416,172,156309,1,4,0:0:0:0:

02:25:854 (1) - add Finish on ahead. this sound vol. is 40%. ↑ code ↑
02:26:309 (2) - ^
02:26:763 (1) - ^
02:27:218 (2) - ^
02:27:672 (3) - ^
02:29:036 (3) - ^
02:29:490 (1) - ^
02:29:945 (3) - ^
02:30:400 (1) - ^
02:30:854 (3) - ^
02:31:309 (1) - ^
02:31:763 (3) - ^
02:32:218 (4) - ^
02:32:672 (5) - ^
02:32:672 (5) - ^
02:33:127 (1) - ^
02:33:581 (1) - ^
02:34:036 (2) - ^
02:34:490 (3) - ^
02:34:945 (4) - ^
02:36:309 (3) - ^

02:36:763 (1,2,3,4,1) - too loud. change it to 40%
02:39:945 (1) - There is no sound on this song tho. But this slider is needed to add Whistle vol.40%, then put green line on 02:40:172, this green line would have vol. 5%. Also, it's different from 02:54:490 (8).

02:40:400 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - same as 02:25:854 (1)

02:47:445 (1) - add Whistle
02:49:036 (4) - ^ (This sound vol. would be lower than 02:47:445 (1) and 02:49:490 (5) )
02:49:490 (5) - add Whistle on ahead.
02:49:945 (1) - ^
02:50:400 (2) - ^

02:51:309 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - same as 02:36:763 (1,2,3,4,1)
02:54:490 (8) - same as 02:39:945 (1)
02:58:581 (1) - 03:23:581 (2) - same as 01:42:218 (1) - 01:56:536

Simple modding from here, sorry......


03:38:581 - change vol. to 50%. Yours is too hard to beat.
03:46:650 (8) - miss Finish
03:46:763 (9) - add Finish
04:05:854 (9) - NC. It's different SV against 04:04:036 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8)
04:17:218 (1) - this slider is on reverse. I think this is not readable.
04:20:400 (5) - NC. Because of changing SV.
04:21:763 (8) - same as 02:39:945 (1)
04:32:673 (5,6,7) - unreadable at HD MOD. because 04:31:990 (3) is stacked on 04:32:445 (4) and 04:32:673 (5,6,7). I think 04:32:673 (5,6,7) would be not stacked.
04:36:763 - too low for me. change vol. to 50%
04:51:309 - If you do like 04:36:763 you can change it to 60~70%. because of this max vol. is 85%
05:21:763 (1) - 02:39:945 (1)
05:30:854 (1) - add Whistle.
05:31:309 (1) - ^
05:31:763 (5) - ^
05:32:672 (1) - ^


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I'M DONE

waxman wrote:

　
THIS Q WON'T BE CLOSED.
THIS Q WON'T BE CLOSED.

↑　I said twice, because this is the most important thing.(大事なことなので二回言いましたwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww)　↑

pkmnyab wrote:

Giga-P - Electric Angel

Needs a spacing check, I think everything else should be fine. Thanks in advance.

Fortunately, I already had this map played before you posted. This map is already fine. So I gave a delicious star.
Maybe I can't do anything because of good map.

Lokovodo wrote:

こんにちわーヘンタイwaxman

https://osu.ppy.sh/s/171564

日本語下さい　→ ↑

LZCSC wrote:

well i will try my luck
here is it : https://osu.ppy.sh/s/170677
thanks

waxman wrote:

LZCSC wrote:

well i will try my luck
here is it : https://osu.ppy.sh/s/170677
thanks

OMG is this your 1st map????????????????????????????
LOOKS GOOD! QAQ
AWESOME

waxman wrote:

Lokovodo wrote:

こんにちわーヘンタイwaxman

https://osu.ppy.sh/s/171564

日本語下さい　→ ↑

こんにちは～ヘ・ん・た・いさん♥

Sekai-nyan wrote:

hey waxman, can you mod the insane and hard diff :3

https://osu.ppy.sh/s/160201

Thanks~

tellertheworld wrote:

hi waxman-san~
Can you mod this map for Insane and hard diff?
You can use Japanese for the Insane diff.
Hard diff use English please.

fripSide - fortuna on the Sixteenth night

Thank~ if you can mod it

Silver Crow wrote:

hi waxman
can you mod the insane and hard diff in English? =3

https://osu.ppy.sh/s/129687

Thanks >~<

Andrea wrote:

https://osu.ppy.sh/s/168576

The two Hards and Insane difficulty please, thank you! <3