1. I think end of kiai time is 01:15:227

1. 00:28:027 (3) - add whistle?
2. 00:28:427 (4) - remove whistle (reverse)
3. 00:42:693 (4) - add whistle
4. 00:55:493 (5) - add whistle?
5. 01:03:627 (4) - add clap (tail) I was heard drum sound
6. 01:08:027 (1) - add whistle (tali) and remove whistle 01:08:427 (2)
7. 01:15:893 (3) - add whistle (tail)

1. 00:15:627 (3,4) - DSが揃ってないみたいです
2. 00:32:027 (5) - add clap(tail)?

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  none. good!

1. 01:05:227 (1) - I think starting spinner is 01:04:960 or 01:05:493

ts8zs wrote:

Random moed
你们从来不和我玩QAQ Do you need extra?
01:28:693 - all diff end here?
[Insane]
00:00:027 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1526468 不喜欢这个梗
00:25:493 (1,2) - 不平行我觉得可以了不用那么强迫
01:24:427 (1,2) - Ctrl+Jok

[Normal]
00:44:693 (4) - 角度小一点比较好看ok
01:21:493 - 1/3 slidernm不想放1/3滑条
01:23:627 (6) - Ctrl+G 280,232 没什么必要啊
[Easy]
00:30:427 (1) - um...out?fixed
00:35:627 (3) - lastpoint 426,241没懂什么意思，不过我觉得现在ok
01:15:227 (1,2) - rhythme http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1526513ok
01:21:093 (3) - rhythme http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1526516不想改，同nm

Chirony wrote:

Hi~
from Fycho's request!
[General]

1. I think end of kiai time is 01:15:227 KIAI fine Imo

[Insane]

1. 00:28:027 (3) - add whistle? fixed all these hitsounds
2. 00:28:427 (4) - remove whistle (reverse)
3. 00:42:693 (4) - add whistle
4. 00:55:493 (5) - add whistle?
5. 01:03:627 (4) - add clap (tail) I was heard drum sound
6. 01:08:027 (1) - add whistle (tali) and remove whistle 01:08:427 (2)added, not removed
7. 01:15:893 (3) - add whistle (tail)

[Easy]

1. 01:05:227 (1) - I think starting spinner is 01:04:960 or 01:05:493too soon for easy diff:o

nice mapset! star~ヽ(´ー｀)ノ
I hope you helps. good luck!

happy623 wrote:

Good morning my dear

General

1. nothing

Easy

1. 00:30:427 (1) - 這個不會太上嗎;w;改掉了ww
2. 00:46:427 (1) - 試試跟住鼓點, 拆分這個滑條, 重音在 00:47:893 - 而不是大白線 (畢竟你前面都有這樣做啊这个滑条首尾都踩着音啊，不像太复杂了
3. 00:59:227 (1) - ^^
4. 01:15:227 (1) - ^, 重音在 01:16:693 -这个fixed
   
   Good

Normal

1. 00:23:093 (4,2) - nazi, fully stack?k
2. 00:28:827 (3) - 我的話會跟前面 (1) 的一樣放個finish, 不過既然這邊柔一點就用soft finish可以, 你喜歡的話後面 00:30:427 (1,2,3) - 都要照做了加过，不过觉得不怎么合曲
3. 00:54:293 (3) - 這邊加finish在頭, 那 01:10:293 (3) - 加了的話感覺更好 其实这里原来放着，但是考虑是低难度，而且这里音乐里没cymabl，和前面一段不一样，就去掉了，低难度不宜太吵
4. 01:13:493 (3) - ^(就這樣聽音樂感覺沒分別 DX)^

Insane

1. 00:10:027 (2,3,4,5,6) - 感覺這些可以圓滑點fixed

超短omg
GL

1. Set a preview Point again on 00:39:227. i think it's unsnapped

1. 00:13:227 (3) - i think make this slider same with 00:11:227 (1) - will be very cool

1. 00:49:627 (1) - how about bend this slider?
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2. 00:18:027 (2) - add Whistle on the end of slider
3. 00:52:027 (5) - ^
4. 01:20:693 (4) - make slider's shape same with 01:19:093 (2) - ? ah.. maybe on your purpose
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5. 01:25:093 (5) - NC here? you used NC here on Insane diff so i think it'll fit

1. Test Play
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2. 00:00:827 (3) - move this to 320, 132 stream looks little weird because of this note now

ts8zs wrote:

[alacat's Hard]
00:36:827 (1) - like 00:37:627 (2) - ?
01:13:493 (3) - add 2nd point 192,196 I made aligning this parts parallel.
01:23:627 (2,3,4,1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1526482 I didn't understand your suggestion.

Chirony wrote:

[alacat's Hard]

1. 00:15:627 (3,4) - DSが揃ってないみたいです(2)の始点にあわせて置いているのでちょっとずれてます x.x
2. 00:32:027 (5) - add clap(tail)? finishだけの方が曲に合っていると思いました!

happy623 wrote:

alacat's Hard

1. 00:11:893 - seems a bit empty without a note, how about adding one here? Nice :3 added it

Neta wrote:

Mod as your request

[General]

1. Set a preview Point again on 00:39:227. i think it's unsnapped

[Easy]

1. 00:13:227 (3) - i think make this slider same with 00:11:227 (1) - will be very cool

[Normal]

1. 00:49:627 (1) - how about bend this slider?
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:18:027 (2) - add Whistle on the end of slider not needed
3. 00:52:027 (5) - ^^
4. 01:20:693 (4) - make slider's shape same with 01:19:093 (2) - ? ah.. maybe on your purpose
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5. 01:25:093 (5) - NC here? you used NC here on Insane diff so i think it'll fit

[Insane]

1. Test Play
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:00:827 (3) - move this to 320, 132 stream looks little weird because of this note now

GL fycho~

615915887 wrote:

打死飞球
不好意思来晚了

[Insane]
00:12:417 (5) - 柑橘这里不太舒服，因为重音在00:12:683 ，如果在这里起滑调效果更好待定
00:26:417 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - 觉得偏难了，相当于bpm225的 1/2连打，间距还是有些大换了轨迹
00:26:417 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - 也是有点难
打着感觉各种不舒服，我觉得是1/3的原因，但是确实很多地方得靠熟悉歌曲，缩圈基本没法判断咯

[Normal]
00:28:417 强迫症，没note感觉少了什么东西 这个在之前的改动后加了啊，update了吗

no KD and GL

Raose wrote:

HI! Requested through pm~

[Insane]

00:26:427 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this section sounds pretty soft to me D: maybe raise volume by 10%? fixed
00:32:027 (2) - normal sampleset on head?normal sampleset and clap are the same lol
00:36:827 (1) - angle and adjust this to avoid overlap with 00:36:027 (3) ? It's fine when playing with ar9/.\http://puu.sh/8jCOI.jpg
00:44:027 (3) - just a suggestion to curve this upward instead of downward to continue the clockwise circular flow you had with 00:43:227 (1,2)?okay
00:52:027 (1,2,3) - i think this section would be more excitingl if there were no normal additions here, the clap sound is just more powerful to me, also this whole section 00:52:027 (1,2,3,4,5,6) seems to be rather soft to me for such an exciting part of the kiai, maybe raise the volume by 10~20%?okay!!raised bt 10%

really good diff, nothing much i can point out!


[Normal]

00:36:827 (1) - maybe move the anchor point so that the slider takes the sharp turn on the slider tick, it'll match better with the beat of the music imofixed

[Easy]

00:19:093 (2) - sounds a bit empty with no hitsounds consider putting a whistle or something at the tailfixed
00:32:427 (2) - i think it would match with vocals if this was moved to 00:32:827 and shortened to 00:33:227, it'd also make an interesting pause for playersyea, fixed

lol that's like my shortest mod in days, nice set! goodluck for rank~

No_Gu wrote:

M4M

[Easy]
00:00:027 (1,1) - 总觉得会被挑时间短 BPM低不要紧的
除了好多地方节奏间隔对于easy来说挺奇怪的。。不过歌这样没办法

[Normal]
00:16:827 (5) - 00:16:693 舒服点吧。。而且normal应该没什么问题这没什么特殊重音所以就一般的跟白线了
00:22:293 (3) - 感觉没什么意义啊这形状乱摆的，不考虑什么意义
01:03:227 (2,3,4,5) - 弄好看点？懒的弄了
01:20:693 (4) - 军鼓好像是从这起但是你这么放太吵。。不如不加或者减音量对，减少了音量

[Insane]
这完全没必要AR9吧。。
00:00:427 (2) - 结尾应该有个clapfixed
00:01:360 (7,8,1) - 1歪了我觉的没外啊
00:11:627 (2) - 太弯不好看啊不想改
00:38:293 (1,2) - 稍微考虑考虑怎么再好看点?...虽然没太大区别我觉得可以了，想不到什么更好看的
00:39:627 (5) - whistle，而且我感觉应该多加1repeat尾上加了whsitle，折返不多了，主要是跟人声
00:40:027 (1) - 5和1要不平行吧 这样感觉好点本意不是平行，我觉得不平行好看
00:44:693 (1,2,3,4,5) - 完全可以摆开点啊 前面那么跳这边突然挫了好
01:14:427 (3,4,5,6) - ^好
01:20:693 - 加跟50%线吧 有点吵 而且我觉得1摆再远点比较好好
01:24:427 (1,2) - 顺着前面来的话应该ctrl+j才对吧。。现在感觉怪怪的。这里是跟音乐的趋势，和第一组音是一样所以来个回还

没了。。感觉这种歌真没啥槽点。。

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LunarSakuya wrote:

General
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Insane
01:20:693 (1) - i know there's a finish here but starting a stream n the purple tick might be a bit sketchy with the alternation and fingers imo, perhaps try this rhythm

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ご注文はalacatですか？

LunarSakuya wrote:

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ok

alacat's Hard
00:02:293 - Try adding a note here. I feel like the vocals are more interesting to follow to get the players more comfortable with the 1/3 rhythm A
00:05:493 - again, i feel like these small rhythm gaps should be filled. I suggest you add mote A
00:10:293 - ^ L
00:11:893 (2) - yeah like this one xD~ F
00:15:093 - consider adding note for similar reasons above I
00:18:293 - ^ X
01:02:293 - maybe add note, it's more for spacing bc (7) might be a bit close ? !!
01:19:093 (4) - flip like this for nice blanket lol =v= koko ha konomama ni shimasu Q.Q

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ご注文はalacatですか？

douzo ww

No_Gu wrote:

[alacat]
01:22:827 (1,2,3) - make one slider then rotating by 120°?that will look good imo yes yes :> fixed !
the slider is a little fast imo..but it doesn't matter.good as always

Raose wrote:

[Alacat's Hard]

00:28:827 (4) - maybe normal sampleset on head (but keep additions soft) to emphasize the heavy beat in the music
00:29:493 - add a note to match vocals and be more consistent with 00:28:693 (3,4) and 00:30:293 (1,2) ?
00:37:493 - add a note here for vocals?

nice diff here too nice suggesution too :3 All fixed!

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