Uchida Maaya - Soushou Innocence · forum

Kinomi

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Kinomi 2014-04-19T22:04:36+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2014年11月3日 at 12:30:31

Artist: Uchida Maaya
Title: Soushou Innocence
Source: 悪魔のリドル
Tags: akuma no riddle opening EmingK Fycho Laurier yf_bmp baldrace
BPM: 205
Filesize: 10087kb
Play Time: 01:26
Difficulties Available:

EmingK's Easy (1.64 stars, 109 notes)
Normal (2.23 stars, 148 notes)
yf's Insane (4.76 stars, 352 notes)
Another (5.05 stars, 386 notes)
Fycho's Hard (3.28 stars, 269 notes)
Laurier's Extra (5.02 stars, 374 notes)

Download: Uchida Maaya - Soushou Innocence
Download: Uchida Maaya - Soushou Innocence (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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#8 ranked map
有个很有钱的富豪，一天回家，进屋的时候发现他的爱犬被人杀了，他痛苦流涕，大声哭喊。
这时，一个蒙面男子说话了：有人花大价钱让我取你狗命。
悪魔のリドル OP
http://puu.sh/8MJrV.rar insane by 615

Last edited by Kinomi 2014-11-15T13:22:36+00:00, edited 42 times in total.

gxytcgxytc

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gxytcgxytc 2014-04-24T09:50:02+00:00

有个很有钱的富豪，一天回家，进屋的时候发现他的爱犬被人杀了，他痛苦流涕，大声哭喊。
这时，一个蒙面男子说话了：有人花大价钱让我取你狗命。

AIR

1,577 posts

Joined November 2012

AIR 2014-04-24T11:25:26+00:00

[General]

offset+14

[Assassination]

00:00:983 (1) - 这里的音非常轻，减速或者消音连打
00:01:422 (2) - 有些漏音，结尾到蓝线
00:04:495 (1,2,3) - 音效不够重，打起来略软
00:12:105 (1) - 00:10:641 (5,6) - 叠好
00:15:924 (3) - ctrl+g
00:22:509 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 可以更有动感，拉长条可惜了
00:23:826 (1) - 后面是减速条，这里建议单点做成跳
00:26:753 (3,4) - 换单点
00:28:143 - 漏音
00:28:363 (8,1) - 接重音，拉开更有表现力，8结尾是重音也建议改改，同样这里00:33:192 (1) -
00:31:143 (3) - 00:36:558 (6) - 这一段有几个3/4结尾需要到蓝线
00:41:387 (1,2) - ↑
00:44:899 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 建议单点http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1541905
00:45:924 (8,1,2,3,4) - 颤音不错，建议上0108那样的条，比如这里00:09:192 (1) -
00:54:851 (2) - 00:53:094 (1) - 叠好

[Fycho's Hard]

00:04:788 (3) - 建议向后移到白线，别管那个鼓点，节奏不好把握至少和前面对上
00:08:593 (1) - 建议换单点接半拍条
00:35:533 (1) - 00:33:924 (2) - 叠好
00:35:387 (5,1) - 重叠，不美观，可以叠到4开头
00:31:363 - 00:34:582 - 00:36:338 - 这一段几个3/4，用折返遮一下？
00:36:558 (1,2,3,4) - 试下
00:45:777 (3,1,2) - 这一段来个长条比较赞
01:08:753 (2,3) - 建议2换单点接3

烤老板这个要不要GD;w;

Kinomi

1,223 posts

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Topic Starter

Kinomi 2014-04-24T12:58:13+00:00

ids wrote:
[General]

offset+14 offset应该没问题吧加了不准了

[Assassination]

00:00:983 (1) - 这里的音非常轻，减速或者消音连打我感觉有打击好点
00:01:422 (2) - 有些漏音，结尾到蓝线这里不管vocal啊，拉长了很难受
00:04:495 (1,2,3) - 音效不够重，打起来略软 3换了normal
00:12:105 (1) - 00:10:641 (5,6) - 叠好没要叠
00:15:924 (3) - ctrl+g 原来这样挺好
00:22:509 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 可以更有动感，拉长条可惜了

我觉得这1/1挺合适啊
00:23:826 (1) - 后面是减速条，这里建议单点做成跳这里只要减速的那个做成跳就行了，这个note适合前面的一组的
00:26:753 (3,4) - 换单点为啥。。这里就是1/2滑条组
00:28:143 - 漏音不管vocal啦
00:28:363 (8,1) - 接重音，拉开更有表现力，8结尾是重音也建议改改，同样这里00:33:192 (1) - 这里要一个急停的感觉，叠着也不至于太难
00:31:143 (3) - 00:36:558 (6) - 这一段有几个3/4结尾需要到蓝线
00:41:387 (1,2) - ↑ 不管vocal啊，这边鼓点是1/2，打起来awful那就不用3/4
00:44:899 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 建议单点http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1541905 有连打音，嘛，还是改了下
00:45:924 (8,1,2,3,4) - 颤音不错，建议上0108那样的条，比如这里00:09:192 (1) - 好
00:54:851 (2) - 00:53:094 (1) - 叠好没要叠

烤老板这个要不要GD;w;不要了，低难度怎么没摸，和高难度一样需要mod的

ffstar

513 posts

Joined October 2011

ffstar 2014-04-24T13:06:54+00:00

[Assassination]
00:22:495 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 其实这个有点偏离节奏，你的图基本上有跟vocal，但这里有vocal是在slider间的（当然你还刻意放红节点让它稍微跟了vocal一下）。建议你把它弄得更有创意一些（其他的很有创意，这里稍微有些闷）给你一些意见：http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1542049

 136,328,22495,6,0,L|236:328,1,90
316,328,22788,1,0,0:0:0:0:
44,256,22934,2,0,L|152:256,1,90
316,328,23227,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,328,23373,1,0,0:0:0:0:
44,256,23519,1,0,0:0:0:0:
28,216,23593,1,0,0:0:0:0:
32,172,23666,1,0,0:0:0:0:

00:45:471 (5,6,7) – 你的1/4 sliders放得不太好。个人觉得把节奏换成http://puu.sh/8lsCP.jpg 会比较好，这样的话那两个1/4 sliders 很明显是跟vocal (desuka) 你试试看放慢25%听
00:59:958 (1) – x:181 y:179 让他叠好
01:08:007 (1) – 有点歪了，最后的节点 x:166 y:295
01:13:056 (1) – 为何不要停在01:15:617 - ？ @@ （不过感觉你是故意的）
01:24:544 – 这里加一个note？叠在01:24:251 (1) – slider end？

[Fycho's Hard]
00:16:641 (4,1) - 先slider才cirlce？感觉比较好（不过你好像在跟white tick ;w;）
00:34:349 (1,2) - 这里打的时候有点尴尬，因为vocal在slider end，http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1542120 这样比较好
01:13:056 (1) - 如同insane diff

[Normal]
01:09:324 (2,3) - 呃，不太好叻。01:09:178 - 这里加一个circle，然后把01:09:324 (2) - 移到01:09:471 -
01:15:471 - 把这个break拉前到01:15:324 - ？看图，不太会解释>< http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1542213
01:24:690 (1,1) - 好像有点难

[ZZH's Easy]
00:54:544 (4) - NC

很好，个人很喜欢insane和hard的00:23:812 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 这个part，排版很美！

Kinomi

1,223 posts

Joined August 2012

Topic Starter

Kinomi 2014-04-25T03:57:47+00:00

ffstar0716 wrote:
[Assassination]
00:22:495 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 其实这个有点偏离节奏，你的图基本上有跟vocal，但这里有vocal是在slider间的（当然你还刻意放红节点让它稍微跟了vocal一下）。建议你把它弄得更有创意一些（其他的很有创意，这里稍微有些闷）给你一些意见：http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1542049
这里本来就是有意放松一下，先不改
00:45:471 (5,6,7) – 你的1/4 sliders放得不太好。个人觉得把节奏换成http://puu.sh/8lsCP.jpg 会比较好，这样的话那两个1/4 sliders 很明显是跟vocal (desuka) 你试试看放慢25%听之前改了
00:59:958 (1) – x:181 y:179 让他叠好好
01:08:007 (1) – 有点歪了，最后的节点 x:166 y:295 没啊
01:13:056 (1) – 为何不要停在01:15:617 - ？ @@ （不过感觉你是故意的）我感觉拉到这比较带感
01:24:544 – 这里加一个note？叠在01:24:251 (1) – slider end？拉远了点距离

[Normal]
01:09:324 (2,3) - 呃，不太好叻。01:09:178 - 这里加一个circle，然后把01:09:324 (2) - 移到01:09:471 - 好
01:15:471 - 把这个break拉前到01:15:324 - ？看图，不太会解释>< http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1542213 拉了break就没了
01:24:690 (1,1) - 好像有点难先这样放着

[ZZH's Easy]
00:54:544 (4) - NC 好

很好，个人很喜欢insane和hard的00:23:812 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 这个part，排版很美！谢谢！

yf_bmp

Elite Storyboarder II / Elite Mapper

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yf_bmp 2014-04-25T04:40:25+00:00

QvQ....明天就po

EDIT: 做好啦! http://puu.sh/8o5rc.zip

Laurier

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Joined February 2011

Laurier 2014-04-28T14:34:48+00:00

http://puu.sh/8qWhs.osu
hea

http://puu.sh/8qWrQ.zip
hit sounds

Natsu

8,074 posts

Joined September 2012

Natsu 2014-04-29T00:40:33+00:00

Hi~

General:

this video can be considered NSFW, take a look at : 01:10:056
about the ¨Another¨ diff name is mostly used for beatmania related songs, there is nothing wrong with keeping it, just saying
Inconsistency in combo colours
Inconsistency in LetterboxInBreaks

Another:

00:03:617 (2,4) - nazi, stack this properly
00:09:178 (1) - this slider shape is not rankable anymore, since you're manipulating the slider velocity with all these anchors, change this for a normal slider shape instead
00:11:080 (1,1,1) - this combo spam is not even necessary, since you're not changing SV or spacing there, also this is easyly readable without the NC spam, due to this innecesary NC the HP drain of the whole diff is being affected by that.
00:06:690 (1,1) - ^
00:14:300 (1,2,3,5) - if you're aiming for a blanket here, try to improve it, actually doesn't look nicely in game
00:15:032 (1,3) - 00:15:617 (1,3) - 00:16:349 (2,3) - same as above, maybe you can call me nazi, but is better if all look perfect ♥
00:16:788 I like the extended sliders, but this one is not rhythmical correct, since you can clearly hear music and vocals in 00:16:934 -, that's why a 1/2 slider will follow the song better. For example the one at 00:18:397 (2) - sound pretty nice, cause the vocal keep a hold feeling but not the one at 00:16:788
00:18:910 (5) - I suggest you to remove this circle, since is not following nothing in the music
00:22:568 ^
00:27:544 (2) - ^
00:29:007 (3) - ^ , there are some more, but I think you can find them by yourself
00:43:422 (4,3) - same as 00:03:617
00:46:934 (4) - this slider shape is not rankable anymore, since you're manipulating the slider velocity with all these anchors, change this for a normal slider shape instead
00:47:373 when you change the slider above be sure to end it in 00:47:373 -, were the vocals end
01:13:056 this spinner doesn't fit the music IMO, also if you're following the vocals it end so early actually, I prefer if you map the vocals like Laurier did
01:17:373 (3) - same as 00:16:788 -, the music is clearly 1/2, that's why your extended slider doesn't fit the song in this point.
01:20:154 (1,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - same as 00:11:080
01:21:763 another slider with a no rankable shape, refer to 00:46:934

Laurier's Extra:

00:02:447 (5,3) - stack this properly, unless it's on purpose
00:07:862 remove the NC is not even necessary, this jumps are easily readable without the spam, plus you're not using one in 00:08:301 (3) - for consistency, is better if you just remove the one at 00:07:862 (1) -
00:13:569 same as above, this kind of patterns doesn't need NC to make them readables.
00:17:958 (1,2) - is this 0.10 stack on purpose? if not stack it properly pls
00:37:861 (1) - this NC is also unnecessary, since the antijump is readable enought with the one at 00:38:154 (1) -
00:49:276 ^
00:53:374 (1,1) - ^
01:25:569 (1) - ^

yf's Insane:

00:02:300 (6,7) - nazi, stack this properly
00:04:788 - not a fan of the slider shape, I guess you can do a better one, also it should be NC due to the SV change
00:12:032 (4) - nothing in the music, I suggest you to remove this circle, since is very noticeable that it is not following nothing <:
00:12:397 (2) - I like the extended sliders, but this one is not rhythmical correct, since you can clearly hear music in 00:12:544, that's why a 1/2 slider will work better with the song.
00:12:983 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - this part sound a bit overmapped, if you listen to 25% or 50%, try this rhythm instead:
SPOILER
00:23:227 (1,2,3) - use the same spacing between them, for a more comfortable gameplay
00:27:324 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - yup I can't listen a constant 1/4 there, try to listen again to the music here, my suggestion:
SPOILER
00:30:690 (1,2,3) - stack this properly
00:37:422 (2,3) - the transition between the objects feel a bit forced here, try to make a more comfortable cursor movement here
00:44:885 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - same as 00:12:983 -, I guess you can remove the objects and listen to 25% for a more accurate rhythm
00:49:202 (2) - this need to be NC due to the big SV change
00:55:495 (6) - nothing in the music here, will be better if you remove this circle for a better representation of the music
01:13:056 (1) - same as another
01:21:763 same as 00:49:202

Fycho's Hard:

00:22:495 (1) - I keep a bad feeling from this slider, since it is broking the drums line not a major issue, but I feel a repeat slider will represent better the music at this point, like:
SPOILER
00:04:641 (3,1) - lol nazi, stack this properly
00:31:715 (4,1) - ^ you have some more like this one, they don't affect the gameplay but I'm very picky about minor stuff
00:47:373 maybe do you want to delay the break a bit here, drag it to 00:47:373 - will make a cool effect with the song IMO
SPOILER
01:13:056 (1) - same as another, I don't like the spinner I preffer a break or mapping the vocals like Laurier did, if you really like the spinner here, end it at 01:15:910 -, with the last vocal hit, IMO

Normal:

HP +1 (4) for better diff spread
00:14:446 (1,2) - the transition between the objects feel a bit forced here, try to make a more comfortable cursor movement here, take in consideration most of normal players are mouse users, that's why this placement is not friendly for them IMO
00:42:544 (1,2,3,4) - try a perfect square here? using the tool, or maybe just me hue
00:47:373 the break should be delayed to here 00:47:373 -, since there is the place where the vocals and music end
01:13:056 this break should not be delayed IMO, since the ¨a cappella¨ section is too long for this

ZZH's Easy:

to be honest, I don't like your spacing choose even the 1/1 gaps look overlapped, I guess this can be stressful for new players
SPOILER
00:14:446 too close after a spinner, new players need more recovery time after it
01:07:715 this NC is not even necessary
well the amount of overlaps due to the spacing choose can be confused for new players IMO

GL

Kinomi

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Topic Starter

Kinomi 2014-04-29T04:50:10+00:00

Natsu wrote:
Hi~

General:

this video can be considered NSFW, take a look at : 01:10:056 i think it is safe,many animes have this kind of scenes
about the ¨Another¨ diff name is mostly used for beatmania related songs, there is nothing wrong with keeping it, just saying yes...may change later
Inconsistency in combo colours fy use new color to show sv change
Inconsistency in LetterboxInBreaks fix
Another:

00:03:617 (2,4) - nazi, stack this properly k
00:11:080 (1,1,1) - this combo spam is not even necessary, since you're not changing SV or spacing there, also this is easyly readable without the NC spam, due to this innecesary NC the HP drain of the whole diff is being affected by that.
00:06:690 (1,1) - ^
waiting for more suggestions
00:14:300 (1,2,3,5) - if you're aiming for a blanket here, try to improve it, actually doesn't look nicely in game
00:15:032 (1,3) - 00:15:617 (1,3) - 00:16:349 (2,3) - same as above, maybe you can call me nazi, but is better if all look perfect ♥
k
00:16:788 I like the extended sliders, but this one is not rhythmical correct, since you can clearly hear music and vocals in 00:16:934 -, that's why a 1/2 slider will follow the song better. For example the one at 00:18:397 (2) - sound pretty nice, cause the vocal keep a hold feeling but not the one at 00:16:788 vocal end at blue line actually
00:18:910 (5) - I suggest you to remove this circle, since is not following nothing in the music this follow the guita
00:22:568 ^
00:27:544 (2) - ^
00:29:007 (3) - ^ , there are some more, but I think you can find them by yourself
these triplets are made to make the rhythm more sonsistant and awesome
00:43:422 (4,3) - same as 00:03:617 k
01:13:056 this spinner doesn't fit the music IMO, also if you're following the vocals it end so early actually, I prefer if you map the vocals like Laurier did
01:17:373 (3) - same as 00:16:788 -, the music is clearly 1/2, that's why your extended slider doesn't fit the song in this point. change

the slider shape, i whink they are rankable, because sv is consistant

Normal:

HP +1 (4) for better diff spread k
00:14:446 (1,2) - the transition between the objects feel a bit forced here, try to make a more comfortable cursor movement here, take in consideration most of normal players are mouse users, that's why this placement is not friendly for them IMO changed
00:42:544 (1,2,3,4) - try a perfect square here? using the tool, or maybe just me hue i think it is fine
00:47:373 the break should be delayed to here 00:47:373 -, since there is the place where the vocals and music end k
01:13:056 this break should not be delayed IMO, since the ¨a cappella¨ section is too long for this idk,currently keep it

GL

thanks for mod!

waxman

467 posts

Joined February 2012

waxman 2014-04-30T05:18:13+00:00

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[General]
01:13:056 (1) - According to 01:26:666 (1), this vol. is 5% tho. But I think the sound of the slider on tail is low. It's not the end of the song. So I wanna suggest increasing the vol. to 15%. Btw Normal diff's 00:44:885 (1) vol. is 60% tho. But I'm just taking about 01:13:056 (1). Maybe it's not related....

[Another]
00:00:398 (1,2,3,4) - I recommended regular spacing or change them to like yf's one. because this is the beginning of song. only 1 second lol. I'm pretty sure these players will retry pretty hard early.
00:11:080 (1,1,1) - I don't like those stacks tho. this is your style. so I can't do anything.
00:18:397 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Spacing is wrong. There is 1 stanza in 00:18:690 (3,4). but you can say it's intentional. yes, that's right. I recommended my idea.

00:29:812 (1) - delete NC. You placed sliders like 00:29:812 (1,2). They are same as 00:29:227 (5,6).
00:30:397 (3) - NC here.

00:45:910 (8,1) - (High recommended)Overmapped a bit. too far. I wanna suggest this one. 00:45:763 (7,8) - move to x:432 y:88
00:58:349 (3,4,5,6,1) - (High recommended) Decrease spacing. These spacing is not necessary. because SV of 00:58:934 (1) is slower than 00:58:349 (3).
01:26:593 (4) - There is no issue, but I recommended NC. because I prefer my idea.

[Fycho's Hard]
00:12:690 (3,4) - decrease distance pls? According to 00:12:105 (1,2,3).
01:19:129 (2) - This overlapping is strange to me. because you didn't overlap until - 01:18:690 (1).

[Laurier's Extra]
日本語書きやすい～＾＾
00:08:593 (1,2) - このスペーシング00:08:739 (2,3,4,5)と比べると狭いかなぁって思いました。良かったら広くしてくださ～い＾＾
00:14:008 (2,3) - ちょっと遠すぎる?　00:13:862 (1,2)より広くするのはいいアイディアだけども・・・

やっぱ日本人のmappingはいいね。中国人のmappingは優しさが感じられないwwwwwww

[Normal]
Nothing.

[yf's Insane]
00:14:300 (8) - Finish? Though I can add it on my editing mode I can't hear.... What happened?
01:13:056 (1) - hmm... no sound? Finish or Clap? on tail

[ZZH's Easy]
Nothing.

GOOD LUCK!

yf_bmp

Elite Storyboarder II / Elite Mapper

1,630 posts

Joined December 2011

yf_bmp 2014-04-30T12:34:16+00:00

Natsu wrote:
yf's Insane:

00:02:300 (6,7) - nazi, stack this properly √
00:04:788 - not a fan of the slider shape, I guess you can do a better one, also it should be NC due to the SV change
00:12:032 (4) - nothing in the music, I suggest you to remove this circle, since is very noticeable that it is not following nothing <:
00:12:397 (2) - I like the extended sliders, but this one is not rhythmical correct, since you can clearly hear music in 00:12:544, that's why a 1/2 slider will work better with the song. √
00:12:983 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - this part sound a bit overmapped, if you listen to 25% or 50%, try this rhythm instead:√
SPOILER
00:23:227 (1,2,3) - use the same spacing between them, for a more comfortable gameplay √
00:27:324 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - yup I can't listen a constant 1/4 there, try to listen again to the music here, my suggestion: concentrated drums here :O
SPOILER
00:30:690 (1,2,3) - stack this properly √
00:37:422 (2,3) - the transition between the objects feel a bit forced here, try to make a more comfortable cursor movement here
00:44:885 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - same as 00:12:983 -, I guess you can remove the objects and listen to 25% for a more accurate rhythm concentrated drums here :O
00:49:202 (2) - this need to be NC due to the big SV change √
00:55:495 (6) - nothing in the music here, will be better if you remove this circle for a better representation of the music √
01:13:056 (1) - same as another √
01:21:763 same as 00:49:202

Thank you Natsu!ww

To waxman: Nothing fixed but thank you!

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Title:Soushou Innocence (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:創傷イノセンス (TV Size)
Artist:Uchida Maaya
ArtistUnicode:内田真礼
Creator:Tsukuyomi
Version:yf's Insane
Source:悪魔のリドル
Tags:akuma no riddle opening ZZHBOY Fycho Laurier yf_bmp
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Kinomi

1,223 posts

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Topic Starter

Kinomi 2014-04-30T13:03:49+00:00

waxman wrote:
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[General]
01:13:056 (1) - According to 01:26:666 (1), this vol. is 5% tho. But I think the sound of the slider on tail is low. It's not the end of the song. So I wanna suggest increasing the vol. to 15%. Btw Normal diff's 00:44:885 (1) vol. is 60% tho. But I'm just taking about 01:13:056 (1). Maybe it's not related....
delete that line in normal

[Another]
00:00:398 (1,2,3,4) - I recommended regular spacing or change them to like yf's one. because this is the beginning of song. only 1 second lol. I'm pretty sure these players will retry pretty hard early. i think it's fine, since i test many times and seldom missed
00:11:080 (1,1,1) - I don't like those stacks tho. this is your style. so I can't do anything. :p
00:18:397 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Spacing is wrong. There is 1 stanza in 00:18:690 (3,4). but you can say it's intentional. yes, that's right. I recommended my idea.
i feel nothing strange about it..
00:29:812 (1) - delete NC. You placed sliders like 00:29:812 (1,2). They are same as 00:29:227 (5,6).
00:30:397 (3) - NC here.
i add NC by following down beat
00:45:910 (8,1) - (High recommended)Overmapped a bit. too far. I wanna suggest this one. 00:45:763 (7,8) - move to x:432 y:88 when clicking that kick slider,you just need to click the slider's head and don't need to move, so the real spacing is small
00:58:349 (3,4,5,6,1) - (High recommended) Decrease spacing. These spacing is not necessary. because SV of 00:58:934 (1) is slower than 00:58:349 (3). i think it is fine, but i will wait for more suggestions
01:26:593 (4) - There is no issue, but I recommended NC. because I prefer my idea. ok

GOOD LUCK!

thanks for mod!
update yf's diff

Kyoushi-kun

24 posts

Joined April 2014

Kyoushi-kun 2014-05-02T03:31:53+00:00

Hey! THERE are too much "wrongs" in your map. The offset is +14 . I can't S it.

Kinomi

1,223 posts

Joined August 2012

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Kinomi 2014-05-02T12:07:49+00:00

ok,offset+14

Fycho

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Fycho 2014-05-02T14:42:32+00:00

ids wrote:
[Fycho's Hard]

00:04:788 (3) - 建议向后移到白线，别管那个鼓点，节奏不好把握至少和前面对上
00:08:593 (1) - 建议换单点接半拍条这里换成了滑条加单点
00:35:533 (1) - 00:33:924 (2) - 叠好
00:35:387 (5,1) - 重叠，不美观，可以叠到4开头
00:31:363 - 00:34:582 - 00:36:338 - 这一段几个3/4，用折返遮一下？
00:36:558 (1,2,3,4) - 试下
00:45:777 (3,1,2) - 这一段来个长条比较赞
01:08:753 (2,3) - 建议2换单点接3
烤老板这个要不要GD;w;

ffstar0716 wrote:
[Fycho's Hard]
00:16:641 (4,1) - 先slider才cirlce？感觉比较好（不过你好像在跟white tick ;w;）这里fixed，为了前后统一跟乐器音

00:34:349 (1,2) - 这里打的时候有点尴尬，因为vocal在slider end，http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1542120 这样比较好
01:13:056 (1) - 如同insane diff fixed，我改了时间点
很好，个人很喜欢insane和hard的00:23:812 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 这个part，排版很美！

Natsu wrote:
Fycho's Hard:

00:22:495 (1) - I keep a bad feeling from this slider, since it is broking the drums line not a major issue, but I feel a repeat slider will represent better the music at this point, like:
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00:04:641 (3,1) - lol nazi, stack this properly ok
00:31:715 (4,1) - ^ you have some more like this one, they don't affect the gameplay but I'm very picky about minor stuff ok
00:47:373 maybe do you want to delay the break a bit here, drag it to 00:47:373 - will make a cool effect with the song IMO Have you have a test when you changed this break time? It would make the break time disappear, break time can't be too short
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01:13:056 (1) - same as another, I don't like the spinner I preffer a break or mapping the vocals like Laurier did, if you really like the spinner here, end it at 01:15:910 -, with the last vocal hit, IMO
GL

Thanks ids, ffstar0716, Natsu and waxman, only fixed what I pointed. For more reasons please find me in-game or send me a Forum PM.

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Title:Soushou Innocence (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:創傷イノセンス (TV Size)
Artist:Uchida Maaya
ArtistUnicode:内田真礼
Creator:Tsukuyomi
Version:Fycho's Hard
Source:悪魔のリドル
Tags:akuma no riddle opening ZZHBOY Fycho Laurier yf_bmp
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150,141,50460,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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276,88,55143,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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224,115,82070,2,0,L|305:114,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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303,339,83241,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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100,283,83826,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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262,219,84558,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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Koiyuki

2,531 posts

Joined March 2013

Koiyuki 2014-05-03T04:58:14+00:00

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Regou

1,916 posts

Joined July 2010

Regou 2014-05-04T03:33:42+00:00

還債
[Insane]
00:05:958 (5) - 沒加自定義clap簡直無情啊...
00:26:154 (1,2,3,4) - 這裡可以做點變化比方說四個slider方向不一樣這樣
00:38:154 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - copy and paste 好明顯
話說最後那段減速怎麼回事我被坑到了<_<

[Another]
我老是覺得叫another怪怪的
00:01:729 (3,4,5) - 這flow不順啊,主要是(3)太彆扭了點到(5)的時候不爽
00:04:655 (2,3) - 柑橘spacing可以弄大很多現在是(1)跳到(2)那個位置的spacing比較大感覺這裡可以改下來配合歌曲
00:11:094 (1,1,1) - 這個其實挺合歌的可惜點擊感一般
00:15:631 (1,2,3) - 這組不科學啊;w; 另外三組明明沒跳!!
00:19:436 (2,3,1) - 這個flow我感覺一般,但是不改也沒關係啦
00:22:655 (3) - 直接無視vocal那音好像不太好,拆開吧
00:45:777 (7,8) - 簡直無情居然重疊了讀不了
01:11:021 (3) - 這個太坑了
01:19:875 (4,1,1) - 同
01:21:777 (1) - 好評
01:26:314 (3,1) - 敢不敢不重疊
你太鬼畜了,我都嚇哭了

[Extra]
00:03:339 (4,5) - ummmm it's kinda ugly to me but it's okay if you don't want to change this
00:04:802 (1) - This one is way too slow
00:13:730 (2,3) - I would suggest not to stack this one as it should be kind of jumpy in the music
00:17:973 (1,2,3,4) - oooooo this one is tricky, interesting
00:28:217 (5,6) - the spacing can be bigger to improve the flow
00:49:290 (1,2) - it is too noisy to me lol maybe changing (1) into circle would be better

就這樣吧

smallboat

1,687 posts

Joined January 2010

smallboat 2014-05-04T09:12:02+00:00

嗨 BBQ。

Red words: Should be fix it.
Blue words : I recommended suggestion.
Black words : In my personal opinion.

[General]

1.yf's Insane 沒有插入影片video offset.
2.yf's Insane 的Combo color與其他難度不一致

[ZZH's Easy]

00:32:021 (4) - 錯過一個重音finish。
00:42:265 (3) - ^
00:42:851 (4) - 這邊是音樂急湊的部分，可以加個note上去，比較適合音樂起伏。
00:44:021 (5) - ^
00:49:582 (2) - 錯過一個重音finish。(雖然聽不太出來，建議還是加了)
00:50:168 (1) - 移到前面白線然後加個reverse比較適合vocal。
01:00:119 (2) - 開頭的N音效這樣聽起來有點突兀，不如換成whistle試試?
01:05:972 (3) - 2次大白一NC，所以這個NC一下，然後 01:07:729 (1) 取消NC。
01:10:655 (4) - NC，理由同上。
01:18:265 (1,2,3) - 應該可以24whistle這裡。
01:21:192 (1) - 為何不疊好，看起來很粗糙亂擺。
01:23:826 (4) - 這邊也是急湊的部分也漏個note。
01:26:314 (1) - 建議開頭在這裡 01:26:607 比較好，01:26:314有個點加個note。另外我覺得結尾是在白線，不是紅線。

Done，美觀還要加強。

[Normal]

00:27:631 (4) - 照這樣聽人聲加whistle的話，這邊開頭加個whistle應該較好?
00:30:119 (5,6) - 這2個跟的人聲好像怪怪，白線無人聲卻放了節奏，不如改成這樣完全跟人聲:

SPOILER

00:33:192 (1) - 錯過一個重音finish。(雖然聽不太出來，建議還是加了)

[Fycho's Hard]

00:46:948 (4) - 我覺得放到(277|281)做個三角形比overlap還比較美觀。

[yf's Insane]

00:26:168 (1,2,3,4) - 試著使每一個長條做個變速梗? (1.10 1.20 1.30 1.40這四種速度)，聽vocal這裡很適合變速。
00:31:436 (5,6) - 因為00:29:241 (3,6,7) - 這邊跟人聲都放紅線，唯獨這個人聲怎麼在尾端 ? 這兩個ctrl+g吧，這樣玩的比較自然，注意音效。
00:40:217 (1,2,3,4) - 同 00:26:168
01:01:290 (1) - 是不是忘了加重音finish
01:03:631 (1) - ^
01:05:972 (1) - 或許尾端能疊好。
01:25:582 (1,2) - 這邊1/4滑條跳是2.5x間距好像很遠容易miss，放近點?

[Laurier's Extra]

沒啥問題不挑細節了 = Nothing。

[Another]

00:05:533 (2) - 尾部疊一下保持美觀?
00:26:753 (3) - Ctrl+H有點歪了。
00:52:948 (7) - 6到7好像有點扭，不如丟到(462|215)看看?
01:08:607 (4) - 前面(1)有變速，這邊(4)是不是忘了NC?
01:19:875 (4,1,1) - 3個同一組的吉他聲，我覺得應該也能搞的變速梗做0.10漸變速度，就這樣速度過去有點沒cool。
01:22:509 (4,5) - 聽吉他聲似乎能大跳?

[Other]

好圖!
~~看了BBQ的圖好多梗，柑橘自己做的好渣。~~

Last edited by smallboat 2014-05-07T03:12:23+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Laurier

1,785 posts

Joined February 2011

Laurier 2014-05-04T12:00:59+00:00

http://puu.sh/8yHwb.osu
changed some nc patterns

Regou

1,916 posts

Joined July 2010

Regou 2014-05-05T13:57:22+00:00

偷偷補回一顆星星(

Kinomi

1,223 posts

Joined August 2012

Topic Starter

Kinomi 2014-05-05T15:45:59+00:00

Regou

Regou wrote:
[Another]
我老是覺得叫another怪怪的
00:01:729 (3,4,5) - 這flow不順啊,主要是(3)太彆扭了點到(5)的時候不爽我感觉很爽啊。。
00:04:655 (2,3) - 柑橘spacing可以弄大很多現在是(1)跳到(2)那個位置的spacing比較大感覺這裡可以改下來配合歌曲改大了难打，不改了
00:11:094 (1,1,1) - 這個其實挺合歌的可惜點擊感一般往下便宜了一点
00:15:631 (1,2,3) - 這組不科學啊;w; 另外三組明明沒跳!! 没关系啊。。
00:19:436 (2,3,1) - 這個flow我感覺一般,但是不改也沒關係啦
00:22:655 (3) - 直接無視vocal那音好像不太好,拆開吧好吧
00:45:777 (7,8) - 簡直無情居然重疊了讀不了还好吧
01:11:021 (3) - 這個太坑了不改
01:19:875 (4,1,1) - 同这里打着挺好就不拉开了
01:21:777 (1) - 好評
01:26:314 (3,1) - 敢不敢不重疊叠了好啊
你太鬼畜了,我都嚇哭了

就這樣吧

smallboat

smallboat wrote:
嗨 BBQ。0.0/小船

[Normal]

00:27:631 (4) - 照這樣聽人聲加whistle的話，這邊開頭加個whistle應該較好?好
00:30:119 (5,6) - 這2個跟的人聲好像怪怪，白線無人聲卻放了節奏，不如改成這樣完全跟人聲:
SPOILER
这儿我要跟clap
00:33:192 (1) - 錯過一個重音finish。(雖然聽不太出來，建議還是加了)好

[Another]

00:05:533 (2) - 尾部疊一下保持美觀? 没要叠
00:26:753 (3) - Ctrl+H有點歪了。 0.0应该一样的啊
00:52:948 (7) - 6到7好像有點扭，不如丟到(462|215)看看? 先放着
01:08:607 (4) - 前面(1)有變速，這邊(4)是不是忘了NC? 好
01:19:875 (4,1,1) - 3個同一組的吉他聲，我覺得應該也能搞的變速梗做0.10漸變速度，就這樣速度過去有點沒cool。三声也没什么音调的变化，就没变速，再看看吧
01:22:509 (4,5) - 聽吉他聲似乎能大跳?这样差不多啦

update guest diffs

Rizia

3,114 posts

Joined January 2012

Rizia 2014-05-06T11:48:56+00:00

你好

[yf]
00:02:460 (1) - nc
00:04:655 (7) - ^
00:49:582 (1) - http://puu.sh/8BnM3.jpg
00:53:094 (1,2,3) - 有點醜 2的弧度可以做大點 3可以包好2的尾

[fycho]
good

[another]
00:09:192 (1) - 不如換個普通的直滑條和1.0x吧
00:10:216 (4) - ctrl+g
00:45:485 (1) - nc
01:08:314 (2) - 這裡nc 之後01:08:607 (1) - remove這個nc

其他good

感覺extra比another易

kamisamaaa

605 posts

Joined July 2011

kamisamaaa 2014-05-08T06:06:23+00:00

感觉师傅好凄惨的求mod=L=

[another]

00:04:655 (2) - 感觉叠在3的开头比尾巴好看

00:05:972 (3,4) - 吧3换成滑条？拖到红线然后长白线一个note感觉比你这样听着好毕竟前面是3声一样的声音统一用滑条比较合适况且4开头你也没加音效没必要专门分开
00:07:436 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 你这里这个三个三个的梗前三个都是一横一竖所以感觉这个趋势第四组建议吧00:08:899 (2,3) - 换到左边去做成横着的这样比较有立体感其实我建议别全部都是一个梗前两组用这个后两组用个别的感觉会好得多比如后面两组用等边三角行之类的换个形状反而有意思
00:15:924 (3) - 这个怎么和别的几个不一样方向反了？
00:22:655 (3) - 这个滑条前后两声是一样的咚咚的感觉简直换成直滑条。感觉更能表现歌曲感觉你这个中间弯一下就没了那种急促连续的感觉或者把这个滑条换成叠在一起的note也行换成note还需要改前面的两个note
00:27:558 (2,3) - 这两个分开别叠叠起来打的时候光标要在这里停顿住不舒服不如分开点然后顺着前面滑条的速度就划过去了
00:27:777 (4,5,6,7,8) - ugly 就算468摆成一条直线看着还是乱
00:30:119 (2,3) - 这个距离我没试图不知道好不好读
00:45:777 (7,8) - 这两个分开吧本来跳得厉害突然原地停住停不下来啊
00:44:899 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 其实吧我觉得你不如这八个都用1/4 因为他唱歌声音在这里都是用一个调连续八声你应该表现一下这个一模一样的感觉所以用相同的滑条比较好或者用连打都行你现在这样感觉有点乱感觉没啥道理这么放为啥有的地方用note 有的地方用滑条我感觉这里蓝线都有音
00:46:948 (4) - 服气。。。。这红点绕的。。。。你是故意红点绕着这样还是做左右左右的时候吧红点拖错了。。。
00:49:070 (2,3,4,5) - 连打延长到红线吧后面还是一样的鼓点没道理空下来 kiai部分尽量别留下1/1的空比较好结算没节奏你加一个也是感觉比较舒服
00:54:411 这里试着加个note 打起来节奏比较连贯
00:56:021 (5,1) - 难看死了也不好玩你要真想弄这种梗不如用Rin那个前半段完全重叠起码比你这个好看。
01:09:411 (2) - 这是为啥长白线明显一个地鼓为何要故意空下来0.0 正常的装饰性3连白线起滑条不好么
01:15:046 (1,1) - 一样你索性完全重叠吧。
01:21:777 (1) - 这个的红点也是乱的。虽然打的时候不太感觉的出来

真实鬼畜尿
感觉音效不粗暴啊打起来击打感一般般

Kinomi

1,223 posts

Joined August 2012

Topic Starter

Kinomi 2014-05-08T06:41:47+00:00

Kawaiwkyik

Kawaiwkyik wrote:
[another]
00:09:192 (1) - 不如換個普通的直滑條和1.0x吧重新拉了红点
00:10:216 (4) - ctrl+g 故意的
00:45:485 (1) - nc 好
01:08:314 (2) - 這裡nc 之後01:08:607 (1) - remove這個nc 好

其他good

感覺extra比another易

Kinomi

1,223 posts

Joined August 2012

Topic Starter

Kinomi 2014-05-08T06:47:29+00:00

kamisamaaa

kamisamaaa wrote:
感觉师傅好凄惨的求mod=L=

[another]
00:04:655 (2) - 感觉叠在3的开头比尾巴好看打折不爽
00:05:972 (3,4) - 吧3换成滑条？拖到红线然后长白线一个note感觉比你这样听着好毕竟前面是3声一样的声音统一用滑条比较合适况且4开头你也没加音效没必要专门分开行
00:07:436 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 你这里这个三个三个的梗前三个都是一横一竖所以感觉这个趋势第四组建议吧00:08:899 (2,3) - 换到左边去做成横着的这样比较有立体感其实我建议别全部都是一个梗前两组用这个后两组用个别的感觉会好得多比如后面两组用等边三角行之类的换个形状反而有意思懒改了，现在这样flow挺好
00:15:924 (3) - 这个怎么和别的几个不一样方向反了？咦，当时不知道怎么想的感觉这样比较顺，其实差不多
00:22:655 (3) - 这个滑条前后两声是一样的咚咚的感觉简直换成直滑条。感觉更能表现歌曲感觉你这个中间弯一下就没了那种急促连续的感觉或者把这个滑条换成叠在一起的note也行换成note还需要改前面的两个note 我觉得这样挺带感啊
00:27:558 (2,3) - 这两个分开别叠叠起来打的时候光标要在这里停顿住不舒服不如分开点然后顺着前面滑条的速度就划过去了好
00:27:777 (4,5,6,7,8) - ugly 就算468摆成一条直线看着还是乱就是个渐大的梗啊
00:30:119 (2,3) - 这个距离我没试图不知道好不好读好读好读
00:45:777 (7,8) - 这两个分开吧本来跳得厉害突然原地停住停不下来啊好
00:44:899 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 其实吧我觉得你不如这八个都用1/4 因为他唱歌声音在这里都是用一个调连续八声你应该表现一下这个一模一样的感觉所以用相同的滑条比较好或者用连打都行你现在这样感觉有点乱感觉没啥道理这么放为啥有的地方用note 有的地方用滑条我感觉这里蓝线都有音
我听的节奏是这样的啊
00:46:948 (4) - 服气。。。。这红点绕的。。。。你是故意红点绕着这样还是做左右左右的时候吧红点拖错了。。。点错了，重新拉了下
00:49:070 (2,3,4,5) - 连打延长到红线吧后面还是一样的鼓点没道理空下来 kiai部分尽量别留下1/1的空比较好结算没节奏你加一个也是感觉比较舒服
停一下喘口气
00:54:411 这里试着加个note 打起来节奏比较连贯不好啊，这里空着休息
00:56:021 (5,1) - 难看死了也不好玩你要真想弄这种梗不如用Rin那个前半段完全重叠起码比你这个好看。不改啦，我感觉这梗不错
01:09:411 (2) - 这是为啥长白线明显一个地鼓为何要故意空下来0.0 正常的装饰性3连白线起滑条不好么跟vocal，长白线音不明显
01:15:046 (1,1) - 一样你索性完全重叠吧。不厚啊
01:21:777 (1) - 这个的红点也是乱的。虽然打的时候不太感觉的出来重新拉了
真实鬼畜尿
感觉音效不粗暴啊打起来击打感一般般

。。。。。。。。。。。。。double post

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4anke

115 posts

Joined August 2013

4anke 2014-05-08T07:00:05+00:00

easy和normal找不出问题0.0
Fycho's hard
00:42:485 (5) - 加个note然后大致改成这样，前面相同节奏的地方也加个note

yf's insane
技术差retry了很多次才pass
00:07:290 (4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 感觉这里比another的还难可以改得简单点吗？经常死这里
00:42:192 - 这里加个带clap的note然后大致改成这样，我摆得好难看，别学我;w;

another和extry 技术差pass不了orz不会mod

Kamio Misuzu

580 posts

Joined November 2012

Kamio Misuzu 2014-05-08T12:35:02+00:00

Hi~
~~什么时候我pass个tv size都要retry好几次了QAQ~~
第一遍玩这个曲子的时候感觉好别扭，不过打几pc习惯了以后就忘记最开始哪儿不舒服来着。。不知道算不算问题
[Another]
00:04:509 (1,2) - ctrl+g ds变化有点大，相对过来垂直移动过渡会比较稳一点

00:13:582 (6,1,2) - 稍有点远，6不动，1、2向中间靠一下

[Laurier's Extra]
nothing to say o.o

[yf‘s Insane]
00:16:729 (7) - 这个note没什么意义啊，感觉去掉反而好一点

00:27:338 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - 连打接跳本身玩着难免太难受了，而且这段overmap也有点不太合适。试一下这个？前后排版也不用变↓↓

SPOILER

01:12:119 (4) - 212|260 附近？现在离后面的1太远了点

01:25:582 (1,2,3) - 尾杀（思考

[Fycho’s Hard]
00:01:290 (1,2,3) - 这里的节奏好空啊，感觉反倒很是别扭。不跟vocal吗？

00:05:972 (3,1,2,3,4) - 和这里00:10:216 (2) - 的节奏保持一致？

SPOILER

[Normal & Easy]

好像没什么问题

美丽~加油！~

Nekonyan

305 posts

Joined October 2013

Nekonyan 2014-05-27T17:02:00+00:00

Hi ^w^)/ Hope my mod helps you!

[General]

check AiMod for KiAi Time

From Ranking Criteria
Do not overuse kiai time. The general rule of thumb is one toggle per minute of playtime. Kiai is meant to accent chorus sections, so don't use it just for fountains unless you're doing this rarely. You can toggle kiai off and back on halfway through the chorus if it fits, but using it constantly every few beats/measures is just ridiculous and can distract players.

[ZZH's Easy]

Uh.. how about CS 3?

00:42:265 (3) this slider too early.. ( consider to placing slider here, I suggest add circle on 00:42:558 (x: 252 y: 224) )

00:43:143 (5) this slider doesn't get the rhythm ( I suggest duplicate 00:42:851 then Ctrl-J (don't forget the DS!

) )

[Normal]

00:52:509 (2,3) I think it's better to change it into circle?

00:57:338 (2,3) How about to merge this into one slider?

[Hard, Insane, Another, Extra]

No comment owo well-mapped~

Good luck for ranked~

yf_bmp

Elite Storyboarder II / Elite Mapper

1,630 posts

Joined December 2011

yf_bmp 2014-05-31T07:44:58+00:00

Thanks for modding
中间改了

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Zero__wind

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Zero__wind 2014-06-21T07:04:50+00:00

ZZH's Easy
00:04:509 (2) - 尾巴上需要normal来跟鼓
00:09:777 (1) - 尾巴上的finish乱加的吧不怎么合适最好去掉
00:12:119 (1) - 在00:13:729 - 结束然后加个finish 现在离后面的滑条只隔一拍太短了
00:31:436 (3) - 丢了clap 这里有军鼓的
00:32:021 (4) - 尾巴上重音没加finish
00:42:265 (3) - 头上漏了clap 尾巴上漏了finish
00:53:972 (3) - ^
00:43:143 (4,5) - 这五拍全都加clap啊白线全都是军鼓
00:54:558 (1) - 头上漏了clap
00:57:192 (2) - 尾巴漏了clap
00:58:948 (1) - ^
01:01:290 (3) - 折返的地方也需要normal
01:15:046 (1) - 这重音 finish呢
01:18:265 (1) - 折返的clap呢
01:20:021 (3) - ^
01:19:436 (2) - 尾巴上的clap也美丽
01:22:948 (2) - ^

不想摸了好么别给我kd了蛋疼刀去了

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Myxo 2014-06-30T12:25:56+00:00

I love this mapset :3
Good luck on rankign ^-^

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