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Tachibana Shinnosuke & Toriumi Kousuke - Ageless Love (PV Ve

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Irreversible
osu! Alumni
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Joined December 2011
Irreversible
[General]

delete "op" from your tags since tags with 2 letters don't work

[Konei's Easy]

irc modded

[Normal]

Would be nice if you map the begin, even though easy is a gd, it would be nice to see some consistency.

01:10:470 (2) - I'd appreciate it if you could make 2 small sliders out of this big one. You can clearly hear how the voice changes there, a single slider just sounds odd to me.

[Beren's Hard]

:!: still has no video

00:42:212 (2) - where does this extension of the slider come from? it's not supported by the Music at all.. it even works against it. please remove it
01:23:631 (2) - nc
01:24:405 (1) - remove nc?
01:36:599 (1) - might be a bit too hard for a hard, don't you think? i'm sure you can get a pretty pattern as well as when you move it a bit closer.

[Insane]

map the begin xD

00:23:051 (2) - I don't recommend ignoring this loud, strong beat here. make it clickable with a slider - i know the "pattern" would get lost but i'm sure you're enough creative xD
00:43:373 (1,2,3) - cute!
01:17:438 (1) - mh, flow goes pretty lost because you go to the left with the end of the slider. i wouldn't do this, but rather Point it to the next circle.

a really good map, probably your best one. call me back for rank!
Konei
2,959 posts
Joined March 2012
Konei
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osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Double Score CosmosCamelliaOP.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 69889
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 27889,52663,58470,69889,69986,70083,70276,70470,70663,82276,82373,82470,82663,82857,83051
DistanceSpacing: 0.7
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 32
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Ageless Love (PV Ver.)
TitleUnicode:Ageless Love (PV Ver.)
Artist:Tachibana Shinnosuke & Toriumi Kousuke
ArtistUnicode:Tachibana Shinnosuke & Toriumi Kousuke
Creator:Kiiwa
Version:Konei's Easy
Source:Double Score～Cosmos×Camellia
Tags:Opening OP Otome Konei Beren
BeatmapID:289133
BeatmapSetID:111074

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:2
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:2
ApproachRate:3
SliderMultiplier:1
SliderTickRate:1

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//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
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Thanks, Irre!
Kiiwa
928 posts
Joined January 2010
Topic Starter
Kiiwa
Fixed all except map the beginning.
I really don't wanna map this part...
:o
Irreversible
osu! Alumni
4,315 posts
Joined December 2011
Irreversible
heh, it's fine!

Ranked! :D
Kiiwa
928 posts
Joined January 2010
Topic Starter
Kiiwa
THANKS! 8-)
Andrea
Beatmap Nominator
16,650 posts
Joined August 2008
Andrea
01:59:244 (3,4,5,6) - These anti-jumps on Hard difficulty are confusing and unreadable.

Just my opinion though :|

Congrats on rank~
Mao
Elite Mapper II
2,963 posts
Joined December 2012
Mao
Wow dat was fast after my mod lol
Gratz :D
Charles445
Elite Mapper II: Aspirant / osu! Paragon
2,881 posts
Joined March 2009
Charles445
Hello! This needs to be unranked for a couple reasons.

Only 73% of the mp3 is mapped, which is unrankable unless there is a good reason for it (like if there is a storyboard). You'll need to cut the mp3. 02:11:631 is a good place, since it's a little after where the video ends.
soft-hitwhistle2 has an extremely long attack, that is, buildup till the perceived beat. This makes the sound sound like it is 45 ms off! Here's a picture, notice where the sound sharply climbs http://puu.sh/7ZXLH.png
soft-hitnormal3 has a long attack, 10 ms actually. A couple maps have a modified version. Here's an edit I made for someone earlier http://puu.sh/7Smky make sure to rename it to the proper filename.
On Insane, 00:56:921 (1) - has its repeat under a previous circle. On skins with solid hitbursts this is unreadable. To maximize playability it would be better to not have this repeat under the circle.

More issues might come up but this is the quick reason for unranking. We'll work with you to get this fixed up!
Liiraye
1,354 posts
Joined December 2011
Liiraye
This map is amazing. Great work!
Fumika
1,425 posts
Joined November 2011
Fumika
New MP3 (Cut the last part that not mapped) : http://puu.sh/80tP4.rar
also offset -1

:)
Kiiwa
928 posts
Joined January 2010
Topic Starter
Kiiwa
Adrea, Charles, Fumika: All fixed, thanks so much everyone!!!!!!
(Can't give Adrea KD cause it was ranked at that time, sorry...)
Charles445
Elite Mapper II: Aspirant / osu! Paragon
2,881 posts
Joined March 2009
Charles445
Here's a replacement for soft-hitwhistle2 http://puu.sh/81eIy.wav

[Insane]
00:17:244 (2) - This has an extra repeat. Remove one of the repeats.
01:04:083 (5) - Why is this a repeat? There is no beat at 01:02:728 (2,3) -
01:13:470 (3) - Remove this circle? It doesn't fit the music
01:14:244 (3) - Same with this one?
01:25:180 (1,2,3) - This pattern needs to be reworked, there is no beat at 01:25:663 -
01:50:438 - Starting the stream here doesn't make sense, since the drumroll starts at 01:50:534 - in the music
Irreversible
osu! Alumni
4,315 posts
Joined December 2011
Irreversible
uhm.. i saw something else too

01:12:018 (4) - insane, can you apply CTRL + G on this? For two reasons: 1) the spacing according to the timespacing makes more sense 2) flow will improve really much

*disappears*
Kiiwa
928 posts
Joined January 2010
Topic Starter
Kiiwa

Charles445 wrote:

Here's a replacement for soft-hitwhistle2 http://puu.sh/81eIy.wav Thanks!

[Insane]
00:17:244 (2) - This has an extra repeat. Remove one of the repeats. Fixed
01:04:083 (5) - Why is this a repeat? There is no beat at 01:02:728 (2,3) - Fixed
01:13:470 (3) - Remove this circle? It doesn't fit the music I will keep this circle, its creates a nice rhythm when playing.
01:14:244 (3) - Same with this one?
01:25:180 (1,2,3) - This pattern needs to be reworked, there is no beat at 01:25:663 - Fixed
01:50:438 - Starting the stream here doesn't make sense, since the drumroll starts at 01:50:534 - in the music It sounds better when playing to have circle here, even if that rhythm isn't the same as the music.


Irreversible wrote:

uhm.. i saw something else too

01:12:018 (4) - insane, can you apply CTRL + G on this? For two reasons: 1) the spacing according to the timespacing makes more sense 2) flow will improve really much Fixed

*disappears*
Thanks you two~
dkun
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dkun
artist: 立花慎之介 & 鳥海浩輔
Kiiwa
928 posts
Joined January 2010
Topic Starter
Kiiwa
Fixed~
Charles445
Elite Mapper II: Aspirant / osu! Paragon
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Charles445
Alright that should be everything
Mikoto chan_old
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Mikoto chan_old
I really wait for this map :) Hope you finished it as soon as possible :oops: Good luck professionel osu mapper :3
dkun
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dkun
baka445 didn't remind me to check this..

Sorry for the inconvenience and the wait!
Kiiwa
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Kiiwa
Thank you~ :D
HabiHolic
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HabiHolic
Gratz~~!!!!!!
NewRulerNA
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NewRulerNA
found two issues.... :o

  1. different video offsets.

    Easy, Normal, Insane
    Video,196,"video.flv"

    Baren's
    Video,0,"video.flv"

    Ranking Criteria wrote:

    The video's offset must be correct and consistent between difficulties so that it follows the music how it was originally meant to be.
  2. two timing sections
    Normal, Hard and Insane


    Ranking Criteria wrote:

    No two uninherited or two inherited timing sections should be placed at the same point. An inherited timing section may be placed on an uninherited timing section (but only to change the slider speed). Having two uninherited or two inherited sections on top of each other will cause problems within the beatmap.
Liiraye
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Liiraye
Dkoon pls
Charles445
Elite Mapper II: Aspirant / osu! Paragon
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Charles445
Damnit! I'm going to need to make an AIMod thread in bug reports now.

Alright, go ahead and fix the things NewRulerNA pointed out. If you change only those things I'll be able to re-rank this quickly.
Irreversible
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Irreversible
T-T..
Andrea
Beatmap Nominator
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Andrea
Moved back to WIP.
Kiiwa
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Joined January 2010
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Kiiwa
Fixed.
Avena
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Joined December 2012
Avena
This preview point is really really odd.
I'd suggest you to move it to 01:10:470 - Sounds better and not as strange, at the moment your preview point is in the middle of a hanging vocal, which sounds just, unfitting.
Kiiwa
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Joined January 2010
Topic Starter
Kiiwa
Thanks but I'm fine with the current one.
Charles445
Elite Mapper II: Aspirant / osu! Paragon
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Joined March 2009
Charles445

Andrea wrote:

Moved back to WIP.
Thanks

Alright, checked all changes on difficulties with text comparing, Easy was not changed, Normal had an inheriting section removed, Hard had an inheriting section removed and video offset changed, Insane had an inheriting section removed.
There were no other changes to the difficulties.

Went and manually checked the video offsets again as well as the inheriting sections to make sure no inconsistencies or overlapping.
Both downloads are working.

Reranked, hopefully for the final time, I can't think of any issues that could have sneaked in.
Kaburagi Kotetsu
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Kaburagi Kotetsu
Gratz!
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