[Analgesia or something else cause i saw you editing]
01:09:509 (1) - it's not stacked perfectly and it's bothersome asdasdasd idk
01:23:009 (4) - you could curve it a bit to match the shape of (1) more
01:28:509 (2) - ctrl+g
01:32:259 (2) - delete this, if you accept it ctrl+g (3)
01:42:926 (4,5,6,7) - this doesn't look too good
01:58:676 (1,2,1,2) - i love this part
02:01:343 (4,5,6,7) -
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/148933102:07:176 (6) -
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1489338 only if you did ^ though
02:11:593 (2) - ctrl+g
02:14:259 (2) - ^
02:24:926 (2,3) - doesn't look too good either
03:20:009 (4) - move to x364 y252
03:29:676 (7) - move to x304 y208
03:29:926 (8) - delete
03:33:926 (4) - ctrl+g
03:58:926 (7,8,9,10) - kinda looks like you messed up a curved stream
- i did some major (?) changes to this slow part after the break
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1489348http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1489350http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/148935805:43:853 (1,2,3,4) -
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/148936405:50:687 (2) -
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1489367 this doesn't work unless you move (4) to the left a bit
06:06:186 (2) -
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/148937006:10:020 (5) - it's not aligned with (1) dunno if it was intentional
06:10:353 (1) - the first red point isn't in the same angle as the second i also dunno if it was intentional
06:12:186 (4) - ctrl+g
06:38:853 (4,5,6,7,8) - curve doesn't look right
06:44:020 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - beautiful
07:29:686 (1) - try making it slower
08:38:936 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - ok this really doesn't look nice
09:06:353 (1) - move the first and last red points more to the left and right, respectively
09:27:686 ~ 09:38:353 - skipped
09:43:020 (1,2,3,4) - doesn't look spaced properly but idk
09:44:427 (3) - nazi, move to x244 y120