Mako Sakata wrote:

Hii from my queue~

[General]
Clear

[Sekai's Easy]
00:04:614 (1) - Add whistle on head? based on the begining of the guitar sound
00:06:534 (2) - Same as above
00:10:374 (2) - How about place the whistle on head instead on reverse?
00:19:014 (2) - Change into hit-drum? nope
00:22:854 (5) - On head, same as above ^
01:04:134 (1) - I think the hitfinish a bit loud that part
01:09:894 (3) - Change whistle on slider tail into hitfinish-drum, so the sound could be same as this part 01:06:054 (3,4,1) -
01:15:654 (5) - Add hitfinish-drum?
01:16:134 (1) - Change into 1/2 slider and place hitfinish-drum on head and hit-normal on tail instead? The curent one not fit the song nope, this vocal beat
01:21:414 (3) - The hitsound should be, hitfinish-drum on head and hit-normal on tail
01:23:814 (1) - Change into hitfinish-drum on head

[Normal]
Is that ok to have diffrent SV on Normal?
01:09:654 (3) - Place hitfinish-drum on both head and tail, so the sound could be same as this part 01:05:814 (3,4) -
01:13:254 (2) - Delete hit-drum from tail?
01:16:134 (1) - Add hitfinish-drum on head
01:17:574 (2) - Change whistle into hitfinish-drum?
01:23:814 (1) - Same as above nope

[Hard]
Ok

Not much to say, good map

Garven wrote:

[General]
The red line at 00:48:774 - seems superfluous. I'd dispatch it. remove:D
Tick rate 2 or 4 fit this song well. i think 2 is the best.

[Easy]
01:25:254 (2) - I don't recommend having short repeat sliders like this in Easy difficulties. It's hard to tell when the repeats are going to end. 1/2 slide and change

[Normal]
00:23:334 (4) - Why are you overmapping in a Normal? change..
01:25:254 (1) - I'd remove the new combo here. That lone slider as a combo doesn't fit the progression at all. ^

[Hard]
00:03:174 (7,8,1) - You've got some weird spacing changes compared to 00:07:254 (4,1,2) - it's x1.0 spacing.
00:31:494 (4,5,1,2,3) - Normalize your spacing please ^
00:43:014 (1,2,3) - I'm not really feeling these jumps at all considering the song is lowering the intensity... was changed at intervals of x1.5.
01:09:414 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - You need to figure out if you're using larger or smaller spacing and keep it consistent throughout each section. changing the spacing of x1.0

Garven wrote:

ojisan tte... >_>

Fix the extra red timing point in the Hard.

Oyatsu wrote:

Nice!! Kirito
just you've changed your name, so I think change creator in your map is better and it will suppo rt you for next ranked maps

-Neipezi wrote:

Oyatsu wrote:

Nice!! Kirito
just you've changed your name, so I think change creator in your map is better and it will suppo rt you for next ranked maps

if you change, fires bubble x.x

Oyatsu wrote:

Call BAT to reb, that isnot a problem
Or nobody can know you anymore. What do u choose?

No Dap wrote:

??? bug??

Kurai wrote: