fripSide - sister's noise (TV Size) [Osu|CatchTheBeat|Taiko] · forum

Weez

Joined February 2009

Topic Starter

Weez 2013-04-23T17:51:28+00:00

Seph wrote:
CTB MOD

AR=OD so set your OD to 8 as well
MAKE IT TICK RATE 1
i mean, it wouldnt hurt for less score, tick 2 doesnt fit imo

00:16:826 (1) - no, this looks ugly when played, probably make it straight or something
00:22:035 (6) - add this maybe, like this

00:55:785 (3,4) - try to change this to sliders (jump ones) maybe? for added fun, besides you didnt follow the incoming drumroll anyway lol
01:20:264 (6) - add it like 00:22:035 (6) - i guess v

~~AR+1 pls~~

I wan't even close to finished with that diff XD

Deif

Elite Mapper / osu!catch Paragon

3,564 posts

Joined April 2010

Deif 2013-05-08T17:27:46+00:00

Hi Weezy. As requested, here's the mod for the CTB diff:

[Rain]

00:01:826 (1) - Aesthetically, or making a better flow for the ryuuta movement, this slider can look better if you change the position of the middle point. Something like THIS.
00:16:826 (1) - Same as before, but in this case is more than recommendable due to the previous extreme zig-zag.
00:22:660 (3,4) - The slider looks a bit boring that way, too vertical. To make it a bit more enyojable, make that slider complete horizontal. There's another possibility: To change a bit the timeline and do sth like THIS.
01:20:993 (3,1) - ^ Or at least remove NC in (1).
00:26:410 (4,1) - The strenght of this HDash and the position of the ryuuta after the slider (4) makes the following jump (1,2) quite, quite tricky to do properly. Maybe it's possible to reduce the distance to the minimum where a HDash is created, or transform the previous sliders (2,3,4) into simple note streams to give more freedom to the movement of the ryuuta for the next jump.
00:40:368 (2,3) - ^ In this case, de-stacking (3) from (4), moving it a few grids to the right helps a lot (X:~192?).
00:42:035 (2,3) - ^
00:58:493 (1) - Ctrl-H <3
01:01:826 (1) - Ctrl-G + Ctrl-H (and optional, to move the middle point of the slider to make the slider-body easier to catch, as done before).
01:04:951 (1,2,3) - Move (1,2) stacked to a different position to make a little jump (2,3). That'll fit the music better.
01:06:618 (1,2,3) - ^
01:10:160 (1,2) - Move the final point of the slider (1) 2 grids to the right, and the end of (2) 2 grids to left. That must help to catch easier the next slider (4), which needs a lot of precision.
01:14:951 (7,1) - HDash this jump either? Otherweise it's gonna be a really painful Dash after all those HDashes.
01:15:159 (1) - Same as in previous sliders, it would look better if the middle point of the slider is moved to the right.

Good luck with your mapset :3

zorefire

429 posts

Joined October 2012

zorefire 2013-05-10T02:52:54+00:00

Modding Request

[Easy]
1. OK, 00:10:993 (2) fix the slant make that note straight.
  
  00:13:910 (2) make it look like this move y:284 x:152 Note* perfect symmetry .
  []
  
  00:28:076 (2) CTRL + SHIFT + R rotate to -13
  00:29:326 (4) make it perfectly slanted just like number 2
  []
  00:38:493 (3) y:452 x:184
  01:26:826 (3) rotate to 9
[/list]

Weez

2,318 posts

Joined February 2009

Topic Starter

Weez 2013-05-17T17:41:27+00:00

Lets get back to this!!
Deif fixed all your mods and zorefire, only fixed one minor thing so i cant really kudos it :/ thnaks to both ^_^

Hard

696 posts

Joined February 2013

Hard 2013-05-19T14:48:35+00:00

ART - MAP!

AsprikaQ

AsprikaQ 2013-05-23T18:43:53+00:00

M4M from ur Q

All suggestion. I'm drunk but i'll try my best. Let's go!

[General]

~~Where is my Misaki T-T~~ No Kiai in Hard ?

[Insane]

00:09:326 (3,4,5) - Make it straight
00:17:555 (3,4) - ^ I think it looks better when it's straight
00:42:139 (3) - You missed the core sound here maybe add a note
00:42:660 (7) - If follow the suggestion add a note here as well
00:42:347 (5) - Move to 00:42:451 (5) -
01:01:305 (5,6) - Make it straight

[249's Hard]

This diff. seems to be like Hard+ more

00:15:160 (1) - Finish at slider-head and Whistle at reverse
00:18:285 (3) - Whistle
00:42:035 (2,3) - Whistle at slider-head
00:42:660 (4) - Whistle at slider-tail
01:10:889 (3,4) - Move up 1 grid
01:10:993 (4,1) - Swap NC
01:26:826 (1) - Add note with Finish and start spinner at 01:27:035 (1) -
01:28:493 (1) - Why the diff. is not ended at the same time as Insane ?

[yanlu's Normal]

Circle Size +1 (?)

00:25:264 (1) - Start spinner here 00:25:160 (1) - while remove the reverse from 00:24:326 (3) -
00:33:493 (1) - Finish slider-head
00:39:118 (5) - Whistle slider-head
01:03:493 (4) - Finish
01:04:743 (7) - Add a note with clap
01:05:159 (1) - Finish slider-head
01:07:451 (6) - Whistle slider-head
01:10:680 (2) - Whistle slider-head and why jump (even though it's only little)
01:18:493 (1) - Finish slider-head
01:20:785 (5) - Swap Whistle to head
01:26:410 (3) - Clap slider*head

[Easy]

00:19:743 (5) - Change Whistle to Clap
00:33:493 (1) - Finish
01:19:326 (2) - ctrl+h (?)
01:28:493 (1) - Maybe too fast too start spin here

Sorry, I'm not a taiko & CTB player and there's nothing to mod more

This all I can mod

P A N

2,354 posts

Joined December 2011

P A N 2013-05-23T19:52:41+00:00

hi m4m from your queue

[Easy]

00:13:493 (1) - move to 252|48 for better blanket
00:25:576 (4) - fix spacing
00:31:826 (4) - try this blanket

SPOILER

00:38:493 (3) - move tail to 368|76
00:45:160 (3) - move center to 80|308 and move tail to 112|348 for this blanket

SPOILER

01:23:493 (1) - end at 01:25:160 replace the slider. add finish at spinner also because the beginner need break after spinner

[yanlu's Normal]

00:52:659 (5) - you can move it to 400|328 for avoid the stack of note. its confuse
01:00:785 - well.. this is normal diff so maybe add note here or it can be slider also

[249's Hard]

great diff 0.0

[Insane]

00:18:910 (3) - I think this pattern looks better

SPOILER

00:25:577 (2) - move to 173|322 for better flow
00:25:785 (1) - remove NC
00:26:098 (4) - move to 60|319 for better flow
01:01:305 (5) - right 1 grid up 1 grid
01:05:576 (4) - move tail to 432|248
01:07:243 (4) - move tail to the left 1 grid
01:19:326 (5) - right 1 grid
01:27:243 (2) - 221|303

Good Luck ><

Hanabi

Hanabi 2013-05-24T07:45:22+00:00

Sana's modding from M4M MODDING~

[Insane]

00:10:160 (1,2) - make time it like -> http://puu.sh/301h1.jpg (just time not shape)
00:33:285 (7) - NC
01:05:576 (4) - make it symmetry with 01:05:160 (3) -
01:16:201 (6) - NC
01:19:326 (5) - 1grid right
01:29:951 - timing point here

[Hard]

00:03:701 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - this beat is difficult for hard diff.
00:12:139 (1) - put the circle not slider
01:04:951 (5) - NC
01:05:160 (1) - remove NC
01:19:326 (4) - 2grid down
01:26:410 (4) - change head&tail

[Normal]

00:05:160 (1) - 2grid down
00:08:493 (4) - NC
00:45:784 (5) - 1grid down, 1grid right
00:53:284 (7) - NC
00:53:493 (1) - remove NC
01:26:410 (3) - 2grid up

[Easy]

00:03:076 (4) - NC
00:04:743 (6) - NC
00:10:993 (2) - make it straight
00:13:910 (2) - not pretty
00:47:660 (2) - overlapped
00:57:660 (5) - NC
01:19:326 (2) - Ctrl + H
01:26:826 (3) - ctrl + G

i hope it's helpful to you!!

nice map Nice song~~ GOOD LUCK~!!

bigfrog

1,002 posts

Joined October 2011

bigfrog 2013-05-25T09:00:02+00:00

hi
m4m~
sorry,i can't mod taiko mode

Easy
00:13:910(2) head,tail surround 00:13:493(1)
00:15:993(4) symmetry with 00:13:910(2)
00:20:993(2) tail move to x:80 y:312
00:27:243(1) not same angle with 00:28:076
00:38:493(3) head,tail surround 00:37:660(2) tail
00:45:160(3) ^
00:47:660(2) one grid up
00:53:493(1) head,tail surround 00:53:076(4) and 00:55:160(2) move to (4)?
00:55:160(2) parallel with 00:56:826(4)?
01:10:160(3) tail move to x:280 y:104
01:15:993(2,3,4) make a triangle

Normal
00:23:493(1) tail move to x:380 y:276
00:52:659(5) move to x:396 y:332?
01:04:951(7) NC instead 01:05:159(1)
01:09:326(3) tail move to x:132 y:228
01:10:160(1,2) i think change looks better

01:18:285(7) NC instead 01:18:493(1)
01:25:993(2) move to x:424 y:280
01:26:410(3) move to x:322 y:288

249's Hard
00:00:160 error distance ._.
00:42:660(4,5,6) showing a straight line
01:16:826(1,2,3) neat plz

Insane
00:20:993(5) head,tail surround 00:20:160(3) tail
00:27:347(4,5) symmetry
00:29:430(6) move to x:64 y:184 and stiil encase 00:29:223
then 00:29:743(7) move to x:176 y:260,tail move to x:200 y:352
00:36:826(1) head,tail surround 00:36:618(8) and 00:37:243(2) move to x:276 y:220
00:52:452(3) move to x:84 y:124
00:55:993(4) bend the other direction?
00:58:076(5) same rhythm as 00:57:660(1,2,3,4)
01:03:910(3) would you like it:

01:10:160(1) i think changing looks better:

01:15:576(3) move to x:120 y:220
01:16:826(1) what about

01:19:326(5) head,tail surround 01:19:118(4)

that's all~nice song :3
good luck~

EDIT:fixed a error word

Last edited by bigfrog 2013-05-27T10:55:49+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Weez

2,318 posts

Joined February 2009

Topic Starter

Weez 2013-05-26T23:41:45+00:00

wow .__. okaaaay will check all of them when i return from my trip

bokito

76 posts

Joined July 2010

bokito 2013-05-27T03:09:37+00:00

Hi~m4m
I'm a new modder if you think my mod is bad that you can not use my mod.
[Insane]
00:09:326 (3,4,5) - Not in the same straight line
00:36:201 (5,6,7) - When I play it here I think 6 and 5,7's too far away
01:14:534 (5,6,7) - ^

[Hard]
Why the kiai so short
00:02:764 (2,3) - Not a good angle on
00:09:951 (5) - x272 y288
00:30:368 (2) - whistle
00:31:618 (5) - ^
00:30:576 (3) -cancel whistle
00:45:576 (2) - x136 y308
01:25:368 (1) - whistle

[Normal]
00:16:826 (1) - finfsh
00:22:243 (5)

Rhythm Change

00:22:243 (5) - head add clap
00:23:076 (6) - clap

00:35:993 (4)

Rhythm Change

00:39:118 (5) - head add whistle

[Easy]
00:13:910 (2)

SPOILER

Weez

2,318 posts

Joined February 2009

Topic Starter

Weez 2013-05-27T19:43:35+00:00

Thanks for the mods to all!!!

bokito and [ Sana ]: unfortunatly I didn't apply none of your suggestion since I feel that don't apply well to my map >.<

To all: too lazy to reply to you all individually but if you want feedback let me know!!

Tari

osu! Alumni

1,671 posts

Joined July 2012

Tari 2013-05-28T04:21:58+00:00

Hi, I wanted to check this a while ago, but since I have a pending map

I'll think a M4M will be best, so if you can just mod this https://osu.ppy.sh/s/94448

This mod was made 3 days ago, so sometimes might be repeated.

[General]

Seems fine.

[Easy]

00:13:910 (2) - I'm not sure if this slider is suppose to be like this honestly, it could of been better blanketed with the previous note better. It just looks really unusual with the map since this is the only place where this happens.
00:23:910 (2) - Whistle here, the harp sound here seems to stand out because I can clearly hear it here,
00:18:493 (4) - ^ its also true here, the harp sound is clearly distinguishable in the music, maybe you want it to add it to both parts? imo it should fit well with the clap
00:45:160 (3) - Can you move this a little bit down? the current position looks a bit icky , and it will help the distance snap here a bit as well if you fix this issue
00:47:660 (2) - It will be best if you avoid these sliders from touching, I know some people that really hate this and I want you to use your mapping space wisely too lol
00:10:160 (1,2,3) - Why do you suddenly stop using symmetry here lol? I think from this part and the parts before you should use symmetry , just to make the placement more correct.
00:28:076 (2) - Check spacing here please, its a really big spacing increase and I don't really reccomend it here , The reason should be obvious to why you don't add jumps in easy.
00:25:576 (4) - ^ Wow, this one is major major major, you should really fix this ROFL (this one actually stood out during gameplay and I think this jump was a silly mistake lol)
00:40:993 (2) - For better polarity, I suppose you can move this slider end position a bit higher, it will make the direction of the 3 sliders more orderly I believe.
00:25:576 (4) - Please try for a different shape here too, cause I can see you changed the spacing now , this shape feels out of place when you changed the position now.
00:35:160 (4) - I think this beat is quite strong , usually I put whistles on these beats to make them stand out more , iunno about you but I think you should do it
00:38:493 (3) - ^ for consistency
00:57:660 (5) - Hmm, I'd say you add a new combo here to make this more readable for players.
01:06:826 (4) - I think a new combo should be here, you didn't put too much long combo's in this diff (well its easy so yeah) so it would make sense to add it here.
00:50:993 (2) - Well , a better thing to do here is to take 00:50:160 (1) - and then copy paste it and then flip horizontally and make that the slider note for this instead of the current slider, the shape just looks better and makes more sense, cause you did so with these two sliders : 01:05:576 (2) - 01:07:243 (5) -
00:27:243 (1) - I'd like to add a clap at the end of this slider and start here 00:29:326 (4) - because it offers a nice introduction to the upcoming hitsound parts.
00:33:493 (1) - Missed a finish?

[yanlu's Normal]

00:38:493 (4) - Finish sounds nice here,
00:40:576 (2) - Slider will look better and more symmetric if you move the end point down just a little bit,
00:45:159 (4,5) - The reverse in the 4th note here has empty music LOL , there no actually beats to represent there (at least in normal, ) I'd say you should try this http://puu.sh/30hFQ.jpg it fits better with vocals
00:50:159 (1,2,3,4,5) - This whole pattern is pretty much confusing, because notes 2,3 are not symmetrical to 4,5 and plus with all of that another curveball is added, (1/4th note) the best fix would be to stack note 3 on slider 4 and unstack note 5, here a visual : http://puu.sh/32Jnw.jpg , http://puu.sh/32JnZ.jpg
01:10:680 (2) - Just wanted to make sure this is intended, this is quite rare to see (since notes aren't usually in blue notes) I think its fine but just wanted to make sure you want to keep this.
01:12:659 (3,4) - Move these sliders up and to the left more please >< slider note 3 almost touch note 2 QQ
01:00:993 (5) - Whistle sounds nice here? maybe you could add it.
01:14:326 (5) - ^ for consistency.
01:22:660 (3) - Two sliders would be better, the multiple reverses here can be confusing for some people ,(especially me) and two 1/4th sliders would be much more readable for me.
This diff is really nice :O

[249's Hard]

Time to be nitpicky jk LOL

00:08:493 (1,2,3,4,5) - note 5 ruins this whole pattern, it looks so uneven with the other notes lol , so its best if you put it in the center x-line which is x:256
00:23:493 (1,2,3,4) - Can you make this pattern look not so similar to the previous notes , It makes me feel like I'm seeing clones, I think the best fix would be to curve all these sliders (Make sure your symmetry stays the same though)
00:49:326 (4) - Whistle to the start here?
00:45:993 (4) - ^ for consistency.
00:52:660 (3) - ^
01:12:555 (3,1,2,3) - This diamond could use some refreshing up really, it looks very uneven
01:16:201 (1,2,3) - You should really increase spacing here like you did to the other similar parts like these, here something you could possibly do : http://puu.sh/32K3R.jpg , and you'd better not make it a perfect triangle unless you want this whole region to be symmetrical.
01:18:285 (2,1,2) - Uhhh, I feel like these should be swapped o.o? something like this maybe? : http://puu.sh/32KaR.jpg
01:20:993 (4) - Whistle sounds nice here (to start)
01:23:076 (4) - ^
01:25:576 (2,3,4) - For a better pattern, rotate these sliders so they form a triangle-like shape something like this : http://puu.sh/32KmI.jpg

[Insane]

00:03:493 (1,2,3) - Please make the spacing to these 3 notes equal to the spacing to 00:00:160 (1,2,3) - so they flow better and are rhythmically correct spacing-wise
00:08:076 (5,6) - Same for these notes too , it would be better if you make it the same spacing as 00:09:743 (6,7) - so they also flow much better ^^
00:12:660 (4) - New combo should be added here, the 3 previous notes stand out from the rest of the music.
00:19:326 (4,5,6) - I don't quite understand why you placed these notes the way they are , anyways here something you should do http://puu.sh/32KIq.jpg , so spacing is consistent with 00:15:993 (4,5,6,7) -
00:35:160 (3) - If I'm not mistaken the new combo should be here, and not before.
01:04:326 (4) - Again , this spacing doesn't mean sense, it would be better if you decrease it slightly.
01:08:076 (1,2) - New combo should be swapped here, the rhythm here and and the previous one are reflection rhythms (similar rhythms)
01:23:493 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I don't quite understand this combo placement
01:27:243 (2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - ^

[CTB Rain]

You don't really need CTB diff in the diff name (It already has the icon that shows and is a redundant)
00:03:493 (1) - For every note like this , for example this one and this one 00:01:826 (1) - 00:08:493 (1) - Make each of them a hyper-dash note to make them stand out from the rest, it will be flow very nice too!
00:29:743 (7) - Would be better if you change this note's position , to somewhere around here http://puu.sh/32LE9.jpg
00:32:972 (5) - You should really stack this note with previous note, it just fits better with the catcher.
00:44:951 (6) - Well, you need to unstack this note with the slider so , the jumps feels more nice with the catcher, in fact a jump fits much better to here : 00:45:160 (1) - then to a jump to this note.
00:57:451 (5) - Put this in the center, because this note indeed stands out from the rest of the notes, (its not part of the catch pattern) http://puu.sh/32LOQ.jpg
That's it!

yanlu

749 posts

Joined November 2010

yanlu 2013-05-29T04:45:02+00:00

I fixed almost~
thaaaank you all modders!ヾ( ˊ∀ˋ*)ﾉ
@Tari - your mod is very helpful for me Ov Ob

update plz~ > <

SPOILER

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Toaru Kagaku no Railgun S - OP - fripSide - Sisters Noise (TV Size).mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 58489
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.8
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:sister's noise (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:sister's noise (TV Size)
Artist:fripSide
ArtistUnicode:fripSide
Creator:Weez
Version:yanlu's Normal
Source:Toaru Kagaku no Railgun S
Tags:toaru majutsu no index a certain scientific magical Byakugan249 yanlu ReySHeL Weezy season 2 opening
BeatmapID:241765
BeatmapSetID:88159

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.15
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
Video,0,"railguns op.avi"
0,0,"dp.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
2,27026,28960
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

[TimingPoints]
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89326,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
89951,-100,4,2,1,5,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,202,43
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YTYuyu

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4,147 posts

Joined January 2011

YTYuyu 2013-05-30T01:41:36+00:00

AsprikaQ wrote:
[249's Hard]

This diff. seems to be like Hard+ more

00:15:160 (1) - Finish at slider-head and Whistle at reverse did something else similar to this. the finish at the beginning/end sounds too loud and the whistle follows the piano.
00:18:285 (3) - Whistle no it breaks the flow in hitsounding and it plays unfittingly here.
00:42:035 (2,3) - Whistle at slider-head no it'll be inconsistent in the whistles and it'll ruin the flow in hitsounding during gameplay..
00:42:660 (4) - Whistle at slider-tail ^
01:10:889 (3,4) - Move up 1 grid no because the smoothness and transition would be too linear, and i don't want that.
01:10:993 (4,1) - Swap NC no i'm following the BGM, not the vocals.
01:26:826 (1) - Add note with Finish and start spinner at 01:27:035 (1) - fixed.
01:28:493 (1) - Why the diff. is not ended at the same time as Insane ? since my diff is a GD, it wouldn't matter that much.

This all I can mod

[ Sana ] wrote:
Sana's modding from M4M MODDING~

[Hard]

00:03:701 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - this beat is difficult for hard diff. did the same rhythm as the next pattern, so fixed.
00:12:139 (1) - put the circle not slider no because the transition would feel awkward to follow. i did this to make it easier for players.
01:04:951 (5) - NC
01:05:160 (1) - remove NC the (1) follows the cymbals, not the vocals.
01:19:326 (4) - 2grid down fixed it myself.
01:26:410 (4) - change head&tail uhh...i don't understand .

bigfrog wrote:
hi
m4m~
sorry,i can't mod taiko mode

249's Hard
00:00:160 error distance ._. nope this is intentional since it switches to a new phrase here.
00:42:660(4,5,6) showing a straight line no because it'll ruin the transition and it won't be as fun as it is during gameplay.
01:16:826(1,2,3) neat plz it's fine. i did similar patterns like this previously so it'll be inconsistent if i make it any neater.

that's all~nice song :3
good luck~

bokito wrote:
Hi~m4m
I'm a new modder if you think my mod is bad that you can not use my mod.

[Hard]
Why the kiai so short
00:02:764 (2,3) - Not a good angle on changed on a previous mod.
00:09:951 (5) - x272 y288 it won't make a difference so no.
00:30:368 (2) - whistle no then the pattern in the whistles will be inconsistent.
00:31:618 (5) - ^ ^
00:30:576 (3) -cancel whistle that's there for a consistent whistle pattern, so no.
00:45:576 (2) - x136 y308 fixed.
01:25:368 (1) - whistle no it sounds bad and unfitting with this part of the song.

Tari wrote:
Hi, I wanted to check this a while ago, but since I have a pending map

I'll think a M4M will be best, so if you can just mod this https://osu.ppy.sh/s/94448

This mod was made 3 days ago, so sometimes might be repeated.

[249's Hard]

Time to be nitpicky jk LOL
00:08:493 (1,2,3,4,5) - note 5 ruins this whole pattern, it looks so uneven with the other notes lol , so its best if you put it in the center x-line which is x:256 no if i do that, then (2,5) will be asymmetrical while (3) is in the middle of it.
00:23:493 (1,2,3,4) - Can you make this pattern look not so similar to the previous notes , It makes me feel like I'm seeing clones, I think the best fix would be to curve all these sliders (Make sure your symmetry stays the same though) no making curved sliders would break the flow and transitioning in this part for me.
00:49:326 (4) - Whistle to the start here? no i'm focusing on claps in this part.
00:45:993 (4) - ^ for consistency.^
00:52:660 (3) - ^ ^
01:12:555 (3,1,2,3) - This diamond could use some refreshing up really, it looks very uneven it's not a diamond. it's supposed to be a new pattern.
01:16:201 (1,2,3) - You should really increase spacing here like you did to the other similar parts like these, here something you could possibly do : http://puu.sh/32K3R.jpg , and you'd better not make it a perfect triangle unless you want this whole region to be symmetrical. fixed. applied the triangle.
01:18:285 (2,1,2) - Uhhh, I feel like these should be swapped o.o? something like this maybe? : http://puu.sh/32KaR.jpg no i'm leaning over to the jump in this because of the change in vocals, so this is why i did it.
01:20:993 (4) - Whistle sounds nice here (to start) it follows the piano, so fixed
01:23:076 (4) - ^ ^
01:25:576 (2,3,4) - For a better pattern, rotate these sliders so they form a triangle-like shape something like this : http://puu.sh/32KmI.jpg did something else.
That's it![/notice][/list]

ty for the mods everyone

.

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260,108,31618,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,64,31826,6,0,L|56:64,1,123.75
36,96,32243,2,0,L|36:200,1,82.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
44,260,32660,2,0,P|96:304|200:308,1,165,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,300,33285,1,0,0:0:0:0:
340,256,33493,6,0,P|416:216|484:216,2,123.75,4|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,256,34222,2,0,L|168:256,1,123.75
100,224,34743,1,2,0:0:0:0:
48,160,34951,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,92,35160,6,0,P|168:40|224:32,1,123.75,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,44,35576,2,0,P|288:64|400:60,1,165,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
472,96,36201,1,0,0:0:0:0:
492,176,36410,2,0,P|512:268|472:344,1,165,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,348,37035,5,0,0:0:0:0:
332,308,37243,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,276,37451,2,0,P|180:268|80:288,1,165
32,228,38076,2,0,L|32:136,1,82.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,84,38493,6,0,P|164:52|212:52,1,123.75,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,76,38910,2,0,P|264:160|232:228,1,165,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,248,39535,2,0,P|176:288|224:304,1,82.5,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,288,39951,1,0,0:0:0:0:
340,224,40160,6,0,P|408:172|452:172,1,123.75,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,148,40576,2,0,P|496:72|416:24,1,165,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,52,41201,1,0,0:0:0:0:
276,24,41410,2,0,L|172:24,1,82.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,56,41826,5,0,0:0:0:0:
60,116,42035,2,0,L|60:176,1,41.25,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,228,42347,2,0,L|152:272,1,41.25
200,300,42660,2,0,L|264:300,1,41.25
324,308,42972,1,0,0:0:0:0:
324,308,43076,2,0,L|412:308,1,82.5
468,252,43493,6,0,P|484:188|472:116,1,123.75,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,96,43910,2,0,P|428:68|388:68,1,82.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,84,44326,2,0,P|228:112|184:112,1,123.75
152,112,44743,1,8,0:0:0:0:
80,152,44951,1,0,0:0:0:0:
24,212,45160,6,0,P|44:272|124:296,1,123.75
136,308,45576,1,8,0:0:0:0:
216,328,45785,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,344,45993,2,0,P|372:348|432:320,1,123.75
444,300,46410,2,0,L|444:208,1,82.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,136,46826,6,0,P|384:84|312:84,1,123.75,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,84,47243,2,0,L|200:84,1,82.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,112,47660,1,0,0:0:0:0:
84,180,47868,1,0,0:0:0:0:
84,180,47972,1,0,0:0:0:0:
84,180,48076,2,0,P|88:224|128:260,1,82.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,300,48493,6,0,L|324:300,1,123.75
344,296,48910,1,8,0:0:0:0:
416,256,49118,1,0,0:0:0:0:
460,188,49326,2,0,P|472:128|452:52,2,123.75
376,188,50160,6,0,L|244:188,1,123.75,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,188,50576,2,0,P|172:188|112:164,1,82.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,102,50993,2,0,P|52:142|60:214,1,123.75
68,244,51410,1,8,0:0:0:0:
120,308,51618,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,348,51826,6,0,P|272:348|312:328,1,123.75
336,296,52243,2,0,L|336:212,1,82.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,132,52660,2,0,P|284:92|160:92,1,165,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,116,53285,1,0,0:0:0:0:
108,116,53389,1,0,0:0:0:0:
108,116,53493,6,0,L|108:204,1,82.5,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,272,53910,1,8,0:0:0:0:
216,320,54118,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,320,54222,2,0,P|268:340|340:320,1,123.75
400,276,54743,1,8,0:0:0:0:
436,200,54951,1,0,0:0:0:0:
420,120,55160,6,0,L|328:120,1,82.5
240,44,55576,2,0,L|340:44,1,82.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,120,55993,2,0,L|420:172,3,41.25
412,200,56410,2,0,L|388:236,3,41.25,8|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,260,56826,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,56930,12,4,58493,0:0:0:0:
136,312,58701,5,0,0:0:0:0:
84,248,58910,2,0,P|60:212|60:156,1,82.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,136,59222,2,0,P|144:80|208:80,1,123.75
256,76,59743,1,8,0:0:0:0:
328,116,59951,1,0,0:0:0:0:
380,180,60160,6,0,P|404:236|364:304,1,123.75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,316,60576,2,0,L|256:316,1,82.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,340,60993,2,0,P|128:344|64:316,1,123.75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,292,61410,1,8,0:0:0:0:
24,212,61618,1,0,0:0:0:0:
56,136,61826,6,0,P|88:88|152:64,1,123.75,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,76,62243,2,0,P|256:88|336:72,1,123.75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,64,62660,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,152,62868,5,0,0:0:0:0:
348,244,63076,1,8,0:0:0:0:
264,152,63285,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,240,63493,6,0,P|112:240|40:284,1,123.75
29,236,63910,2,0,P|1:188|1:144,1,82.5,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
60,316,64326,2,0,P|100:340|180:344,1,123.75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,340,64743,1,10,0:0:0:0:
300,348,64951,1,0,0:0:0:0:
300,348,65055,1,0,0:0:0:0:
300,348,65160,6,0,P|356:312|356:256,1,123.75,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,220,65576,1,8,0:0:0:0:
312,144,65785,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,144,65889,2,0,P|268:104|200:100,1,123.75
124,112,66410,1,8,0:0:0:0:
52,156,66618,1,0,0:0:0:0:
32,236,66826,5,4,0:0:0:0:
32,236,67243,2,0,P|52:280|136:300,1,123.75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,288,67660,2,0,P|200:288|256:316,1,82.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,332,68076,1,8,0:0:0:0:
396,332,68285,1,0,0:0:0:0:
468,292,68493,6,0,P|492:224|480:152,1,123.75,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
472,136,68910,1,8,0:0:0:0:
408,84,69118,1,0,0:0:0:0:
408,84,69222,1,0,0:0:0:0:
408,84,69326,5,0,0:0:0:0:
336,44,69535,2,0,L|248:44,1,82.5,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,84,69951,1,0,0:0:0:0:
120,140,70160,6,0,P|96:192|112:260,1,123.75,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,288,70576,2,0,L|220:336,1,82.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,336,70889,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,336,70993,1,0,0:0:0:0:
364,304,71201,5,0,0:0:0:0:
428,252,71410,2,0,P|448:212|448:164,1,82.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,96,71826,6,0,P|368:64|300:64,1,123.75,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,80,72243,2,0,P|232:96|176:96,1,82.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,100,72555,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,188,72868,5,0,0:0:0:0:
128,296,73076,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,188,73285,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,296,73493,6,0,L|388:296,1,123.75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
395,257,73910,2,0,P|403:195|395:117,1,123.75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,104,74326,2,0,P|364:56|436:12,1,123.75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,28,74743,1,8,0:0:0:0:
456,112,74951,1,0,0:0:0:0:
372,104,75160,6,0,L|244:104,1,123.75,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,112,75576,2,0,P|160:136|148:208,1,123.75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,240,75993,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,352,76201,5,0,0:0:0:0:
280,252,76410,1,8,0:0:0:0:
352,352,76618,1,0,0:0:0:0:
376,232,76826,6,0,P|376:180|448:136,1,123.75
452,104,77243,2,0,P|428:56|352:36,1,123.75,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,32,77660,1,2,0:0:0:0:
240,32,77868,6,0,L|136:32,1,82.5,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,120,78285,2,0,L|176:120,1,82.5,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,208,78701,5,0,0:0:0:0:
240,208,78805,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,208,78910,2,0,L|240:340,1,123.75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,352,79326,2,0,P|136:364|64:348,1,123.75
56,322,79743,2,0,L|56:234,1,82.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,160,80160,5,4,0:0:0:0:
132,96,80368,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,52,80576,2,0,L|296:52,1,82.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,128,80993,2,0,L|268:128,1,82.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,204,81410,2,0,L|296:204,1,82.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,128,81826,6,0,L|480:128,1,82.5,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,48,82243,2,0,L|240:48,1,82.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,128,82660,2,0,L|232:128,1,82.5,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,48,83076,2,0,L|16:48,1,82.5,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,83493,12,4,85160,0:0:0:0:
128,204,85368,5,0,0:0:0:0:
220,288,85576,2,0,P|264:296|312:296,1,82.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,172,85993,2,0,P|272:164|224:164,1,82.5,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,288,86410,2,0,P|182:287|138:279,1,82.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,160,86826,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,86930,12,4,88493,0:0:0:0:

ursa

1,302 posts

Joined April 2010

ursa 2013-05-31T16:41:02+00:00

sorry weez for late modding

[CTB Rain]

everything is good for the ctb diff , the jumps & the flow are good , but the only thing that bad is only the beginning part X_X

00:10:160 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - for this part , i think it would be better to make stream part , so my recommendation to this part is like this

(A)
00:10:160 (1,2) - change it into 1/4 beat & make a streampatter , also don't forget to put circle here :
00:10:472 (1) -
00:10:889 (1) -
also don't forget to put Whistle part intothis part
00:10:160 (1) -
00:10:576 (3) -
it seems quite overmapping , but it would make the flow song better &

00:12:659 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - for a jump type pattern i think it's quite not fit with the flow & the song beat , so my recommendation is make a stream pattern here & add circle here
00:12:868 -

(B)
it's same like the (A) mod , but i make the edit version for the ctb diff so for easier mod
:http://puu.sh/35eBF.osu

i just mod only just this part
00:10:160 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) & 00:12:659 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10)

that's all that i can help

ZHSteven

osu! Alumni

1,012 posts

Joined July 2009

ZHSteven 2013-06-03T12:30:02+00:00

Mod for CTB diff

Gladly there is finally a CTB diff in your mapset~
Map itself do not have any big issues.
Only thing I think I need to point out is, it seems that your stream pattern in this diff could be better. Try to see more map by Dief, the stream there are good~
[patterns in general]
flows are good, jumps are good, spacing is good, I tried hard but cannot find any big issues..
the only small thing is, maybe you can try some different stream pattern. It may be helpful to your map.

[Rain]
HP-1 could be better imo.. 7 is too crazy lol

00:03:076 (4) - more left a bit, the jump seems not suitable here. try this to have better flow.

1

00:09:951 (7) - stick to 00:09:326 (3,4,5) - to create a movement. stand is a little uncomfortable.
00:10:993 (3,4,5,6,7) - 1st stream. This I think you can try to make it increasing spacing. like

2

also by this you can create a hyper between 7 and 1, which I think better for the flow. if you dont like it, make 7 stick to 5, and move 6 a bit left will solve this problem.
00:12:972 (6,7,8,9,10,1) - weird spacing. I suggest keep x0.6.
00:13:493 (1) - 45° up to fit the spacing before.

3

00:25:576 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 2nd stream part. here I think yours are good, but a little bit stand.
I tried hard but dont get any good solutions, only get a OK pattern, see whether you like it or not.

4

spcing for stream is x0.8
00:32:451 (3,4) - too big jump imo. consider lower it a bit.
00:35:160 (3) - a bit weird.. yes I know this slider is just touch the borderline, not easy to fix. but why we insist to use repeat sliders?

5

00:36:826 (1) - right a bit to make it jumper?
00:55:160 (1,2) - this reverse slider jump is too unfriendly.. but I don't get any solution so far
01:10:160 (1,2) - Hyper this jump?

6

01:10:889 - personally think add a note here, and make the rest a smooth stream could be better, but if you insist to use jump, remember, 01:10:993 (5) - please not use a full spacing 1/4 reverse slider in jumps. That can make people hardly to catch the jump.
solution for this pattern:

7

or try this:(I like this better!!l)

8

01:26:826 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - , maybe you can try higher spacing, because this is the last stream of the map, try to make something different~~

the best map I have seen recently. Sorry when I see good map I will keep naziing... my bad habit.. forgiven me..

Good luck +star!

Deif

Elite Mapper / osu!catch Paragon

3,564 posts

Joined April 2010

Deif 2013-06-05T08:56:34+00:00

Hi Weez! I've checked already the whole mapset, but since I have no access to Internet in my laptop, I cannot post all the info of my mod in this thread by now (this post was made from the mobile orz). I hope I can make the proper post on Friday.

I recommend you to look for some taiko mods by then, since you still haven't received any!

Satellite

Beatmap Nominator

3,686 posts

Joined June 2012

Satellite 2013-06-11T00:10:26+00:00

hi

sorry guest diff so awesome. no proposal

and ssorry my poor English. If not sure, please ask me.

[Insane]
00:12:659 (1,2,3,4) - I think follow the melody more.

00:17:868 (5,6,7) - ugly distance snap... try this.

224,352,17868,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,240,18076,1,8,0:0:0:0:
124,264,18285,1,0,0:0:0:0:

00:18:910 (3,4) - The dirty overlap... make this?

SPOILER

88,160,18493,6,0,P|64:112|80:56,1,92.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,48,18805,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,28,18910,2,0,P|212:58|225:115,1,92.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
250,201,19326,1,2,0:0:0:0:
400,152,19535,1,0,0:0:0:0:
360,304,19743,1,8,0:0:0:0:

00:22:660 (3) - 00:20:993 (5) - end point 00:21:826 - here follow make this.

SPOILER

00:23:493 (1) - remove whistle and add finish is fit. 01:21:826 (1) - is finish.
00:25:577 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ummm...I think Irregular sequence notes.. try this.

SPOILER

176,320,25576,1,0,0:0:0:0:
157,338,25680,1,0,0:0:0:0:
132,348,25784,1,0,0:0:0:0:
106,348,25888,1,0,0:0:0:0:
82,338,25992,1,0,0:0:0:0:
63,320,26096,1,0,0:0:0:0:
52,296,26201,1,0,0:0:0:0:
50,270,26305,1,0,0:0:0:0:

00:31:618 (6) - stack 00:29:743 (7) - here?
00:32:972 (5) - remove note?
00:38:493 (1) - first point add whistle?
00:39:118 (3) - More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this.

00:40:368 (2,3,4) - ^

01:14:951 (1) - remove Nc and 01:15:159 (2) - add Nc
01:24:743 (1,2,3,4,5) - ummm...

01:27:243 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I think Irregular sequence notes.. try this.

224,304,87243,1,0,0:0:0:0:
202,288,87347,1,0,0:0:0:0:
186,267,87451,1,0,0:0:0:0:
175,243,87555,1,0,0:0:0:0:
170,217,87659,1,0,0:0:0:0:
171,191,87763,1,0,0:0:0:0:
178,166,87868,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,143,87972,1,0,0:0:0:0:

[Easy]
00:04:118 (5) - Nc
00:25:576 (4) - I think The dirty overlap 00:27:243 (1,2) - here. try 30ﾟ Rotation stack 00:23:910 (2) - here

SPOILER

good luck~

Leader

osu! Alumni

1,849 posts

Joined January 2011

Leader 2013-06-11T15:48:33+00:00

Hello, from my Modding Queue

[Easy]

00:18:493 (4) - Flipping slider would be better
SPOILER
00:27:243 (1) - Overlap <.<
00:28:910 (3) - It fits really weird because of music and position, I may suggest a 1/2 slider even if it's an Easy
01:04:326 (3) - Some grids up for a better flow
01:06:410 (3,5) - y u no x:180 y:132
01:13:910 (3) - Move a littlefor example in x:196 y:156?
01:18:493 (1,2) - I really don't like it, try this
SPOILER

[yanlu's Normal]

00:33:493 (1,3) - It will be great if they are on the same y axis

[249's Hard]

Why so different kiai D:

00:12:139 (1) - When I played it, I felt this position kinda weird for a slider after spinner and before a little break, I expected a vertical slider :< Just a suggestion tho

[Insane]

01:23:910 (1) - Useless NC

Good map, I apologize for not modding Taiko/ctb diffs but I'm not able >< good luck!

ZHSteven

osu! Alumni

1,012 posts

Joined July 2009

ZHSteven 2013-06-12T00:55:14+00:00

random recheck for ctb diff

00:25:576 (2,3,4) - I like these pattern but I think you still need to ask around it is suitable or not.
01:24:326 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - a little bit weird but not big issue, it will be better if you make them smooth a bit

god dam puush crashed...

01:27:243 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - suggestion:

yes I mad lol, see whether you like it or not

everything seems fine now.

(Do not kd)

Edit:01:28:076 (6,7) - wrong direction? (sorry maybe it is my fault)...

mingmichael

1,720 posts

Joined May 2012

mingmichael 2013-06-15T04:53:22+00:00

hey Weez

here the mods that you requested to me

[Muzu]

00:34:951 (1) - how about k there?
01:08:910 (2) - add a note here
01:09:951 (2,1) - d k. 01:09:951 (2) - has lower pitch sound than 01:10:160 (1) -

[Oni]

00:06:618 (3,1) - how about d K?
00:28:493 (1,1,2,1,2,1) - how about ddkkdk there?
01:11:618 (5) - d
01:19:326 (2,3,1) - ddd is better than ddk
01:23:701 (1,2,1) - ^

Last edited by Deif 2013-06-15T17:57:44+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Dolphin

1,167 posts

Joined January 2012

Dolphin 2013-06-18T18:56:12+00:00

Hello! PM Mod Request.

[ReySHeL's Muzu]

Huh, This is a fun map! Definetively a 7★ or 8★ difficulty. (In Taiko no Tatsujin star rating, this is the highest difficulty for Muzukashii)
Normally, I would scream and yell at you for doing complex-ish rhythms on Muzukashii. (Thinking about the White-Blue-Red and 2-hitters)
I won't go on you on this here because of the song of choice. It's really not avoidable.

But please use Audio Level 80%
Also, reconsider setting the OD to 4 opposed to 5. Muzukashii usually has larger hit windows than Oni.
Also if you add a note somewhere in the map, that would give the map a neat full combo of 330

I like neat full combos.

[ReySHeL's Oni]

Yay for fun map!

Please, Audio Level 80%
That's all I want to say about the Oni. It's fun

Also Weez, the Taiko Rule about how you need two diffs, one of which is easier, has become global to all game modes.
If you want to keep the CtB diff you need to map an easier CtB diff. Finalized here. I thought I would point it out to you.

ReySHeL

612 posts

Joined March 2012

ReySHeL 2013-06-19T16:01:41+00:00

mingmichael wrote:
hey Weez here the mods that you requested to me

[Muzu]
00:34:951 (1) - how about k there?
01:08:910 (2) - add a note here
01:09:951 (2,1) - d k. 01:09:951 (2) - has lower pitch sound than 01:10:160 (1) -

[Oni]
00:06:618 (3,1) - how about d K?
00:28:493 (1,1,2,1,2,1) - how about ddkkdk there?
01:11:618 (5) - d
01:19:326 (2,3,1) - ddd is better than ddk
01:23:701 (1,2,1) - ^

some fixed
thanks for mod :3

Dolphin wrote:
Hello! PM Mod Request.

[ReySHeL's Muzu]
Huh, This is a fun map! Definetively a 7★ or 8★ difficulty. (In Taiko no Tatsujin star rating, this is the highest difficulty for Muzukashii)
Normally, I would scream and yell at you for doing complex-ish rhythms on Muzukashii. (Thinking about the White-Blue-Red and 2-hitters)
I won't go on you on this here because of the song of choice. It's really not avoidable.

But please use Audio Level 80%
Also, reconsider setting the OD to 4 opposed to 5. Muzukashii usually has larger hit windows than Oni.
Also if you add a note somewhere in the map, that would give the map a neat full combo of 330 I like neat full combos.
[ReySHeL's Oni]
Yay for fun map!
Please, Audio Level 80%
That's all I want to say about the Oni. It's fun
Also Weez, the Taiko Rule about how you need two diffs, one of which is easier, has become global to all game modes.
If you want to keep the CtB diff you need to map an easier CtB diff. Finalized here. I thought I would point it out to you.

use 90%
thanks for mod :3
http://puu.sh/3jm85

Deif

Elite Mapper / osu!catch Paragon

3,564 posts

Joined April 2010

Deif 2013-06-19T21:53:45+00:00

As promised, here's my mod!

@Dolphin: There's no need of a 2nd CTB diff in this mapset. Check out this thread, as it's more up-to-date: https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/p/2369699

[General]

00:43:493 - 00:58:493 - @Weez, I missed the usage of that cool S-Clap you have =(

[Easy]

I've detected some minor distance errors (+/- 0,10x difference of the default 1,00x). Consider taking a look at them: 00:06:410 (8,1) - 00:28:076 (2,3,4) - 01:06:410 (3,4,5,6) - 01:18:493 (1,2).
00:10:993 (2) - Is it possible to move it to another position? It's way too down on the gameplay area. Curving the previous slider should help in that.
00:20:993 (2) - Would it be possible to curve a bit this slider, so (3) could be inside its curve?
00:27:243 (1) - What about putting the start of this slider inside the curve of the previous one? That'd look better and would improve the flow a bit. It wouldn't really overlap the next slider (4).
00:45:160 (3) - Can you make this blanket with the previous slider better? It looked nicer between (1,2), and since it's a slider with repetition you shouldn't have problems in modifying it.
01:25:993 (1) - Not a huge issue, but add a NC since it follows a spinner.
01:26:826 (2) - Make this slider shorter, as it's too close to the next spinner. 01:28:076 - Till here should be enough.

[Normal]

00:40:576 (2) - Instead of having a long slider there and some empty space before the next note, I suggest you to map that little part in other way. Even [Easy] has more density of notes in that part ^^"

[Hard]

00:24:326 (3,4) - I understand you wanted to vary the position of those sliders compared to the previous ones, but in terms of flow it feels much better if those sliders were horizontal as well. Is it possible to change it somehow without being repetitive? (e.g. Using a slight rotation on (1,2,3,4)?).

[Insane]

00:24:326 (5) - NC to keep the consistency with the similar sliders in 01:22:660 (1,2).
00:30:160 (1) - It's almost touching the edge of the screen! D:
01:13:284 (6) - Probably a bit more separated to the next note, keeping the same distance withe the previous one?
01:22:660 (1,2) - Select both notes and do Ctrl-G, to improve the flow of that part.

[Muzukashii]

Those 2-plets are giving me the creeps... Would you mind removing the following notes? It'll make the life of average taiko players easier: 00:39:326 , 00:42:139 , 00:46:305 , 00:49:639 .
00:39:222 - After removing the next note of the 2-plet, this note fits much better in the previous red tick, 00:39:118 .
01:04:535 - Add here a k to create a nice 3-plet.
01:17:868 - Same here, another k.

[Rain]

HP 7. It's still possible to recover well the HP bar.
00:25:576 (2,3,4,1) - Those kick-sliders are still killing me... Would it be possible to transform them into a normal stream or at least put them a bit closer? The jump (4,1) is still a real pain.
00:27:243 (3,4) - For these kind of 1/4 notes it'd be cool to separate them more to create a dashy effect. Stacking them seems a bit boring IMHO.
00:28:910 (3,4) - ^
00:29:430 (6,7) - This would be the effect required =)
00:40:576 (3,4) - But be careful with those... The jump the player has to do is already a bit rough. It could be applied for the notes (5,6) too.
00:42:243 (3,4) - ^ and that goes for (6,7) as well, since the dash isn't that challenging.
01:15:159 (1) - Make this curve inverted, like a "c" to prove the flow.

That's all! Really nice job, Weez. Call me back when you've modified everything :3

YTYuyu

osu! Alumni

4,147 posts

Joined January 2011

YTYuyu 2013-06-19T23:55:13+00:00

Leader wrote:
Hello, from my Modding Queue

[249's Hard]

Why so different kiai D: i really hate kiai times, which explains the fountains instead.
00:12:139 (1) - When I played it, I felt this position kinda weird for a slider after spinner and before a little break, I expected a vertical slider :< Just a suggestion tho i believe that doing that would make the transition more awkward since it starts at the 1/4 tick in this part of the song.
Good map, I apologize for not modding Taiko/ctb diffs but I'm not able >< good luck!

Deif wrote:
As promised, here's my mod!

@Dolphin: There's no need of a 2nd CTB diff in this mapset. Check out this thread, as it's more up-to-date: https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/p/2369699

[Hard]

00:24:326 (3,4) - I understand you wanted to vary the position of those sliders compared to the previous ones, but in terms of flow it feels much better if those sliders were horizontal as well. Is it possible to change it somehow without being repetitive? (e.g. Using a slight rotation on (1,2,3,4)?). well i curved (3,4) for a variation in this part if that's what you want.
That's all! Really nice job, Weez. Call me back when you've modified everything :3

ty for the mods

.

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ReySHeL

612 posts

Joined March 2012

ReySHeL 2013-06-20T00:28:49+00:00

Deif wrote:
As promised, here's my mod!

@Dolphin: There's no need of a 2nd CTB diff in this mapset. Check out this thread, as it's more up-to-date: p/2369699

[General]

00:43:493 - 00:58:493 - @Weez, I missed the usage of that cool S-Clap you have =(

[Muzukashii]

Those 2-plets are giving me the creeps... Would you mind removing the following notes? It'll make the life of average taiko players easier: 00:39:326 , 00:42:139 , 00:46:305 , 00:49:639 . i want to follow the beat
00:39:222 - After removing the next note of the 2-plet, this note fits much better in the previous red tick, 00:39:118 . i want to follow the vocal
01:04:535 - Add here a k to create a nice 3-plet. ok
01:17:868 - Same here, another k. ^

That's all! Really nice job, Weez. Call me back when you've modified everything :3

thanks for mod

http://puu.sh/3jHT8

Weez

2,318 posts

Joined February 2009

Topic Starter

Weez 2013-06-21T20:11:06+00:00

Deif wrote:
As promised, here's my mod!

@Dolphin: There's no need of a 2nd CTB diff in this mapset. Check out this thread, as it's more up-to-date: p/2369699

[General]

00:43:493 - 00:58:493 - @Weez, I missed the usage of that cool S-Clap you have =(
They are back, was testing something and I guess I forgot to put them back.

[Easy]

I've detected some minor distance errors (+/- 0,10x difference of the default 1,00x). Consider taking a look at them: 00:06:410 (8,1) - 00:28:076 (2,3,4) - 01:06:410 (3,4,5,6) - 01:18:493 (1,2).
00:10:993 (2) - Is it possible to move it to another position? It's way too down on the gameplay area. Curving the previous slider should help in that. Did something differently
00:20:993 (2) - Would it be possible to curve a bit this slider, so (3) could be inside its curve? Keeping it as it is. I like how it goes with (1)
00:27:243 (1) - What about putting the start of this slider inside the curve of the previous one? That'd look better and would improve the flow a bit. It wouldn't really overlap the next slider (4).
00:45:160 (3) - Can you make this blanket with the previous slider better? It looked nicer between (1,2), and since it's a slider with repetition you shouldn't have problems in modifying it.
01:25:993 (1) - Not a huge issue, but add a NC since it follows a spinner.
01:26:826 (2) - Make this slider shorter, as it's too close to the next spinner. 01:28:076 - Till here should be enough. Keeping this as it is. Its the very last object so they don't have to adjust themselves to anything else.
[Insane]

00:24:326 (5) - NC to keep the consistency with the similar sliders in 01:22:660 (1,2).
00:30:160 (1) - It's almost touching the edge of the screen! D:
01:13:284 (6) - Probably a bit more separated to the next note, keeping the same distance withe the previous one?
01:22:660 (1,2) - Select both notes and do Ctrl-G, to improve the flow of that part.
[Rain]

HP 7. It's still possible to recover well the HP bar.
00:25:576 (2,3,4,1) - Those kick-sliders are still killing me... Would it be possible to transform them into a normal stream or at least put them a bit closer? The jump (4,1) is still a real pain. Changed to a stream
00:27:243 (3,4) - For these kind of 1/4 notes it'd be cool to separate them more to create a dashy effect. Stacking them seems a bit boring IMHO.
00:28:910 (3,4) - ^
00:29:430 (6,7) - This would be the effect required =)
00:40:576 (3,4) - But be careful with those... The jump the player has to do is already a bit rough. It could be applied for the notes (5,6) too.
00:42:243 (3,4) - ^ and that goes for (6,7) as well, since the dash isn't that challenging.
01:15:159 (1) - Make this curve inverted, like a "c" to prove the flow.

That's all! Really nice job, Weez. Call me back when you've modified everything :3

Thank you just waiting on the normal now :3

Andrea

Beatmap Nominator

16,650 posts

Joined August 2008

Andrea 2013-06-22T11:25:34+00:00

~General~

You're missing the files "fruit-apple.png fruit-apple-overlay.png fruit-grapes.png fruit-grapes-overlay.png fruit-orange.png fruit-orange-overlay.png fruit-pear.png fruit-pear-overlay.png fruit-drop.png" in your folder, make sure to add them.
It would be nice to use same kiai and colours on the whole mapset, but it's not totally necessary.

~Easy~

00:04:118 (5) - Add a new combo here, otherwise it will be way too long for an Easy.
00:28:910 (3,4) - I don't think having such stacks it's a good idea for an Easy.
00:42:243 (3,4) - Same as above for the same reason.
00:56:826 (4) - New combo due to the new stanza and music change.

~yanlu's Normal~

01:04:951 (7,1) - New combo should actually go on (7).
01:07:243 (5) - New combo due to the new stanza and music change.
01:11:409 (3,1) - Spacing is wrong here, check it out.
01:18:285 (7,1) - New combo should actually go on (7).
01:20:576 (4) - New combo due to the new stanza and music change.

~249's Hard~

01:11:201 (1) - This new combo here is not necessary, just remove it.

~Insane~

00:26:410 (1) - This new combo here is not necessary, just remove it.
00:33:493 (1) - Add a finish at the begin of this slider to follow with the music.
00:38:493 (1) - Same as above for the same reason.
01:22:660 (1) - This new combo here is not necessary, just remove it.
01:28:076 (1) - Same as above for the same reason.

Weez

2,318 posts

Joined February 2009

Topic Starter

Weez 2013-06-24T17:54:44+00:00

Andrea wrote:
~General~
You're missing the files "fruit-apple.png fruit-apple-overlay.png fruit-grapes.png fruit-grapes-overlay.png fruit-orange.png fruit-orange-overlay.png fruit-pear.png fruit-pear-overlay.png fruit-drop.png" in your folder, make sure to add them. Added the fruit-platter.png, The ryuuta and actual fruit are 2 different elements. I want the user to use my ryuuta but I don't want to force them to use the default if they don't want to.
It would be nice to use same kiai and colours on the whole mapset, but it's not totally necessary.colours are the same ._. and it was byaku's choice to be different on the kiai times.
~Easy~
00:04:118 (5) - Add a new combo here, otherwise it will be way too long for an Easy.
00:28:910 (3,4) - I don't think having such stacks it's a good idea for an Easy.
00:42:243 (3,4) - Same as above for the same reason.
00:56:826 (4) - New combo due to the new stanza and music change.
~yanlu's Normal~
01:04:951 (7,1) - New combo should actually go on (7).
01:07:243 (5) - New combo due to the new stanza and music change.
01:11:409 (3,1) - Spacing is wrong here, check it out.
01:18:285 (7,1) - New combo should actually go on (7).
01:20:576 (4) - New combo due to the new stanza and music change.
~249's Hard~
01:11:201 (1) - This new combo here is not necessary, just remove it. Talked to byaku and said nope to this. Following the ~~vocals~~BGM here.
~Insane~
00:26:410 (1) - This new combo here is not necessary, just remove it.
00:33:493 (1) - Add a finish at the begin of this slider to follow with the music.
00:38:493 (1) - Same as above for the same reason. Doesn't fit with my current pattern.
01:22:660 (1) - This new combo here is not necessary, just remove it.
01:28:076 (1) - Same as above for the same reason.

thanks!!

Last edited by Weez 2013-06-24T18:54:24+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

YTYuyu

osu! Alumni

4,147 posts

Joined January 2011

YTYuyu 2013-06-24T18:18:53+00:00

not the vocals, the BGM ><.

Deif

Elite Mapper / osu!catch Paragon

3,564 posts

Joined April 2010

Deif 2013-06-24T19:05:42+00:00

It's not necessary at all to add the complete set of fruits since only the ryuuta was customised, which is NOT part of the fruits set (same as when you customise a cursor in standard, but not the circles for example).

Done some minor changes in-game as well (not worthy to be logged), and...

BUBBLED!

Last edited by Loctav 2013-07-02T19:02:53+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Sey

1,406 posts

Joined October 2010

Sey 2013-06-24T19:19:02+00:00

Congratulations, do not lose the bubble!

ZHSteven

osu! Alumni

1,012 posts

Joined July 2009

ZHSteven 2013-06-26T18:47:06+00:00

Aurele

Global Moderator

7,514 posts

Joined January 2011

Aurele 2013-06-28T03:01:07+00:00

~~meh, I was supposed to finish my mod two days ago. I am going to finish it even if it's bubbled.~~
I was almost done anyways:

Hai Weez~
I am first terribly sorry for being late and also, some points might already be pointed.

Easy

00:04:118 (5) - I am suggesting you to add a new combo here because first, there combo is actually pretty long. Secondly, the tone of the music was getting a bit different on the previous object (the slider 4). So actually, for those two reasons, I guess it would be better if a new combo could start here.
00:23:493 (1) - The previous slider has a curved form which can make a blanket with this circle. Right now, the circle is a bit at the right, which is not making a blanket with it. Would you like to move it two grids at the left to make a nicely blanket with those objects?
00:27:243 (1,2,3,4) - I really hate this combo, seriously. The first slider is breaking the flow with the previous slider, which is a bit frustrating because you actually have to go at the opposite of the slider's end. After that, the next slider seems to be really close from the previous one and the end of it is stacked with the end of this slider (00:25:576 (4) - ). Right after it, the circle (3) is one: stacked with the beginning of the slider (4) and personally, it's somehow, difficult for new players and two: the spacing between (2,3) seems to be very high compared to (1,2). I highly suggest you to make another pattern here to fit with first, the curves of 00:25:576 (4) - (to keep the flow of it) and second, have a nicely spacing without stacking anything.
00:42:243 (3,4) - Like I have mentioned on 00:27:243 (1,2,3,4) -, I do not really like stacked objects because it's a bit hard for beginners. I highly suggest you to move those objects somewhere else. For an example, you could try to make a blanket with the previous circle that will also keep the same spacing with the next object.
00:47:660 (2) - This slider looks a bit weird, to be honest. Since it's not copy/pasted from the previous slider, the curves of this slider makes it "terrible". It is not bad but, I suggest you to copy the previous slider to make it looks better.
01:01:826 (1) - This is only a suggestion, there's nothing bad actually. Would you like to make a blanket with the previous circle? The current form of this slider looks unproportioned, which looks a bit weird with the previous circle.
01:10:160 (3) - (I feel like I am only suggesting blanket patterns..) Can you move this slider one grid down to make it look more blanketed from what it is currently? You could do the same thing with 01:11:826 (1) - .

01:25:993 (1,2) - I was a little bored, and I make a form with the second slider. I don't know if you will like it, so here's the code whenever you want to include it in your map.

Example with code

208,168,85993,2,0,B|256:188|256:188|304:168,1,105,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
369,263,86826,2,0,B|327:259|327:259|268:267|218:297|209:314|226:356|285:356|302:314|293:297|243:267|184:259|184:259|142:263,1,367.5,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

Normal
Hello yanlu!

00:22:660 (5) - The thing with this circle is, I don't really like the flow/movement we have to do to catch it. First, the previous slider is pointing up and at the left, this is mostly why you have placed the next circle in the middle, to make a nice flow. With this circle, it is breaking the whole flow. I highly suggest you to highlight those objects 00:22:660 (5,1,2,3) - , and make a rotation with CTRL+H. The spacing will remain the same, so I guess it can be a nice change to do (:
00:23:493 - Why is there a clap at the beginning of this slider? (;w;) Actually, you're using claps on all the upbeats, which is great but, you've added one there.. It is not appropriate. I highly suggest you to delete it to make it consistent with the current pattern.
00:43:493 - If I go with logic, you have not used a finish here because you thought it would be too loud? Well, personnally, a finish could be added here because it will emphasize the new tone and to be honest, it is not that loud.
00:53:493 (1) - This slider is currently unsymmetrical, I suggest you to make the necessary arrangement to make it symmetric ;3
00:56:826 (1) - Meh, just a suggestion. I sincerely don't like the form of this slider, it would have been better for a longer slider but, making a curve before a straight line seems awkward to me. I suggest you to make the second dot a red dot so, it is going to make a more appropriated form.
01:23:493 (5) - the curve of this slider looks a bit "squary" for me. (in other word, the curves as a square form inside of it) For an example, this similar silder 01:26:826 (4) - , which is totally the same but, it is making a perfect round form instead since you've only used three dots to do it. Actually, I suggest you to make the same thing with the previous slider it make it looks better from what it is right now.

Hard
Byakunyaaan >//<

00:25:160 (5) - Previously, the two previous sliders were straight and this circle was placed in a good place, actually. But now, since both are curved, it does not make sense now. First, since the slider (4) is curved and the flow goes at the left, it's unnecessary to have it stacked with the beginning of the slider (3) because the flow is broken. I suggest you to make it moved somewhere close to the end of the slider (4) to keep the flow. (Maybe.. x:132 y:324?)
01:21:826 (1,2,3,4) - Those sliders are just a bit boring due to the three previous sliders that are also straight. I highly suggest you to change those sliders because it makes the flow a bit bad a boring, as already mentionned. Maybe, you can take example of my idea:
Example
Hope it's clear enought ;w;

Insane

00:00:160 (1) - to 00:04:743 (6) - There's a high lack of hitsounds here, that sounds very bad. I suggest you to add more whistles, to make add some effects to the song. For an example, you could add whistles to`:
Examples
00:00:785 (3) -
00:01:410 (6) -
00:01:618 (7) -
00:01:826 - (The beginning of this slider)
00:02:451 -
00:03:076 - both start and end
00:03:493 (1) -
00:04:118 -
00:04:743 (6) - both start and end
00:29:223 (5) - It needs some more spacing precision here, the spacing is a bit inconsistent, which breaks the whole thing. (Well, not the whole thing but, it still breaks the spacing)
00:38:076 (4,5) - These circles will make the previous slider more curved it they were perfectly blanketed with the slider. Actually, highlight both circles and move them two grids at the right, if you're using Grid Size 4.

Seems good

!

Good luck, Weez!

yanlu

749 posts

Joined November 2010

yanlu 2013-07-02T02:00:06+00:00

thaaaaank you Gabe !!
all fixed you said~! Gabe you're back ;w;

fixed ver here plz~> <

SPOILER

osu file format v12

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AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 58489
Countdown: 0
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StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.8
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:sister's noise (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:sister's noise (TV Size)
Artist:fripSide
ArtistUnicode:fripSide
Creator:Weez
Version:yanlu's Normal
Source:Toaru Kagaku no Railgun S
Tags:toaru majutsu no index a certain scientific magical Byakugan249 yanlu ReySHeL Weezy season 2 opening
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[Difficulty]
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Loctav

Popcorn Fairy

4,496 posts

Joined February 2009

Loctav 2013-07-02T19:03:51+00:00

CtB BATs are not supposed to initial-bubble mapsets that contain more gamemodes but CtB. Replacing with a star icon. Sorry. (I love you anyways, Deif)

YTYuyu

osu! Alumni

4,147 posts

Joined January 2011

YTYuyu 2013-07-02T21:29:25+00:00

Gabe wrote:
Hai Weez~
I am first terribly sorry for being late and also, some points might already be pointed.

Hard
Byakunyaaan >//< Gabey Gabe >//<
00:25:160 (5) - Previously, the two previous sliders were straight and this circle was placed in a good place, actually. But now, since both are curved, it does not make sense now. First, since the slider (4) is curved and the flow goes at the left, it's unnecessary to have it stacked with the beginning of the slider (3) because the flow is broken. I suggest you to make it moved somewhere close to the end of the slider (4) to keep the flow. (Maybe.. x:132 y:324?) moved it somewhere else. i wanna keep the flow steady here so i wanna keep the jump pattern in this part.
01:21:826 (1,2,3,4) - Those sliders are just a bit boring due to the three previous sliders that are also straight. I highly suggest you to change those sliders because it makes the flow a bit bad a boring, as already mentionned. Maybe, you can take example of my idea:
Example
Hope it's clear enought ;w;

did something similar.

Seems good !

Good luck, Weez!

ty for the mod

.

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Version:249's Hard
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Tags:toaru majutsu no index a certain scientific magical Byakugan249 yanlu ReySHeL Weezy season 2 opening
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Weez

2,318 posts

Joined February 2009

Topic Starter

Weez 2013-07-02T23:12:18+00:00

Gabe wrote:
~~meh, I was supposed to finish my mod two days ago. I am going to finish it even if it's bubbled.~~
I was almost done anyways:

Hai Weez~
I am first terribly sorry for being late and also, some points might already be pointed.

Easy
00:04:118 (5) - I am suggesting you to add a new combo here because first, there combo is actually pretty long. Secondly, the tone of the music was getting a bit different on the previous object (the slider 4). So actually, for those two reasons, I guess it would be better if a new combo could start here.
00:23:493 (1) - The previous slider has a curved form which can make a blanket with this circle. Right now, the circle is a bit at the right, which is not making a blanket with it. Would you like to move it two grids at the left to make a nicely blanket with those objects?
00:27:243 (1,2,3,4) - I really hate this combo, seriously. The first slider is breaking the flow with the previous slider, which is a bit frustrating because you actually have to go at the opposite of the slider's end. After that, the next slider seems to be really close from the previous one and the end of it is stacked with the end of this slider (00:25:576 (4) - ). Right after it, the circle (3) is one: stacked with the beginning of the slider (4) and personally, it's somehow, difficult for new players and two: the spacing between (2,3) seems to be very high compared to (1,2). I highly suggest you to make another pattern here to fit with first, the curves of 00:25:576 (4) - (to keep the flow of it) and second, have a nicely spacing without stacking anything. I've removed the stacks and change the placements slightly. Also made some sliders curvy too.
00:42:243 (3,4) - Like I have mentioned on 00:27:243 (1,2,3,4) -, I do not really like stacked objects because it's a bit hard for beginners. I highly suggest you to move those objects somewhere else. For an example, you could try to make a blanket with the previous circle that will also keep the same spacing with the next object.
00:47:660 (2) - This slider looks a bit weird, to be honest. Since it's not copy/pasted from the previous slider, the curves of this slider makes it "terrible". It is not bad but, I suggest you to copy the previous slider to make it looks better.
01:01:826 (1) - This is only a suggestion, there's nothing bad actually. Would you like to make a blanket with the previous circle? The current form of this slider looks unproportioned, which looks a bit weird with the previous circle. This one I wasn't going for a blanket so I'm leaving it alone.
01:10:160 (3) - (I feel like I am only suggesting blanket patterns..) Can you move this slider one grid down to make it look more blanketed from what it is currently? You could do the same thing with 01:11:826 (1) - .
01:25:993 (1,2) - I was a little bored, and I make a form with the second slider. I don't know if you will like it, so here's the code whenever you want to include it in your map.
Example with code
208,168,85993,2,0,B|256:188|256:188|304:168,1,105,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
369,263,86826,2,0,B|327:259|327:259|268:267|218:297|209:314|226:356|285:356|302:314|293:297|243:267|184:259|184:259|142:263,1,367.5,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
Did something different
Insane
00:00:160 (1) - to 00:04:743 (6) - There's a high lack of hitsounds here, that sounds very bad. I suggest you to add more whistles, to make add some effects to the song. For an example, you could add whistles to`:
Examples
00:00:785 (3) -
00:01:410 (6) -
00:01:618 (7) -
00:01:826 - (The beginning of this slider)
00:02:451 -
00:03:076 - both start and end
00:03:493 (1) -
00:04:118 -
00:04:743 (6) - both start and end
00:29:223 (5) - It needs some more spacing precision here, the spacing is a bit inconsistent, which breaks the whole thing. (Well, not the whole thing but, it still breaks the spacing)
00:38:076 (4,5) - These circles will make the previous slider more curved it they were perfectly blanketed with the slider. Actually, highlight both circles and move them two grids at the right, if you're using Grid Size 4.
Seems good !

Good luck, Weez!

Thanks\

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Loctav wrote:
CtB BATs are not supposed to initial-bubble mapsets that contain more gamemodes but CtB. Replacing with a star icon. Sorry. (I love you anyways, Deif)

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Sey

1,406 posts

Joined October 2010

Sey 2013-07-04T19:09:44+00:00

Hi Weez,
sad that this got debubbled again. I hope it gets bubbled soon again. Well, let's see if I still find some things that may be changed anyway.

[Easy]

A very nice and solid Easy, everything seems perfectly structured. I can only look on aesthetics a bit to keep a better flow here.
00:20:993 (2) - To make this part more aesthetic you might curve the slider that it borders 00:22:243 (3) - a bit more and works in a kind of symmetry with 00:20:160 (1) - . That gives it a better drift.
00:23:493 (1,2,3,4) - I do not really like the set-back movement to the left you need to do here from 00:22:243 (3) - to 00:23:493 (1) - We may improve the flow here in a way. Here an exemplary suggestion: http://puu.sh/3v1qt.jpg
00:43:493 (1) - I really expected this slider to be in the same shape as 00:44:326 (2) - and 00:45:160 (3) - . You may consider making it a bit more curvy to make it more fitting with the other sliders. They somehow belong together.
00:55:160 (2) - Well, same as above with the other slider. That one could look a bit nicer if it surrounds the slider before: http://puu.sh/3v1Tf.jpg
01:12:660 - Have you thought of putting a note here between the sliders since I find it quite fitting to the rhythm? I think it shouldn't be a problem to use an 1/2 section in an Easy just once because this is also the beginning of Kiai which can be a bit more "challenging" and unexpected for the Newbie than the rest of the song.

[yanlu's Normal]

All in all I like that difficulty, too. We can take a look here on some sliders again because some of those have a weird shape. I make you some suggestions and hope they are helpful.
00:33:493 (1) - and 00:35:160 (3) - might have a symmetrical shape. That also improves the flow here a lot.
00:43:076 (3) - Why didn't you make the new combo here and delete it at 00:43:493 (1) - ? Fits much more to the rhythm. It's strange if a combo goes on after a short break...
01:02:451 (2) - I personally don't prefer the shape of this slider. You may think of changing it into something else. I find it good to make it a bit particular cos it fits to the vocals here but it looks weird... Here a suggestion from my side: http://puu.sh/3v2t4.jpg With this he slider mirrors itself in the middle point and looks a bit prettier. Also it still fits great to the rhythm, just test it.

[249's Hard]

That difficulty is a lot of fun! God, I loved it. I tried it but I didn't find anything significantly to mod here.

[Insane]

I do not mod Insanes due to my lack of standard skill, already described that in my queue, but keep patient and I'm gonna improve my skill o3o
Just checked minor stuff here as hitsounding, new combos and so on but seems pretty fine to me.

[Rain]

That Rain is really good, no wonder that Deif bubbled this. Anyway, maybe some minor things you can think of but that mapset already has great potential to be ranked. Not sure if this map still needs a lot of mods, lol.
00:41:097 (5,6) - The crossing from one to the next slider feels a bit strange in my opinion. I tried something else, this here plays pretty cool to the rhythm: http://puu.sh/3v4im.jpg Try it, it is really not bad.
01:13:493 (1,2,3) - Mh dunno but the jump here is not really fluently from 2 to 3. Same counts for 00:15:160 (1,2,3) - The jump just doesn't feel well and you might think of putting the sliders a bit closer to each other and middle circle 2 between them to keep a symmetry here.
01:27:243 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - To create a better ending-feeling you may even think of making the distance between those sliders a bit bigger. This is a rain, so the ending really can be harder and more remarkable for the player.
I'm sorry but this difficulty is perfect and I didn't find anything else here for now. I hope that it was helpful.

Also, don't Kudosu me if I couldn't point out anything necessary. This map already seems very, very good to me and if it was not helpful you are not meant to give me one.
Best of luck still! Hope this gets rebubbled and ranked!

Weez

2,318 posts

Joined February 2009

Topic Starter

Weez 2013-07-05T14:19:48+00:00

Sey wrote:
Hi Weez,
sad that this got debubbled again. I hope it gets bubbled soon again. Well, let's see if I still find some things that may be changed anyway.

[Easy]

A very nice and solid Easy, everything seems perfectly structured. I can only look on aesthetics a bit to keep a better flow here.
00:20:993 (2) - To make this part more aesthetic you might curve the slider that it borders 00:22:243 (3) - a bit more and works in a kind of symmetry with 00:20:160 (1) - . That gives it a better drift.
00:23:493 (1,2,3,4) - I do not really like the set-back movement to the left you need to do here from 00:22:243 (3) - to 00:23:493 (1) - We may improve the flow here in a way. Here an exemplary suggestion: http://puu.sh/3v1qt.jpg I'm keeping it the way it is, i personally don't like it a straight line.
00:43:493 (1) - I really expected this slider to be in the same shape as 00:44:326 (2) - and 00:45:160 (3) - . You may consider making it a bit more curvy to make it more fitting with the other sliders. They somehow belong together.
00:55:160 (2) - Well, same as above with the other slider. That one could look a bit nicer if it surrounds the slider before: http://puu.sh/3v1Tf.jpg
01:12:660 - Have you thought of putting a note here between the sliders since I find it quite fitting to the rhythm? I think it shouldn't be a problem to use an 1/2 section in an Easy just once because this is also the beginning of Kiai which can be a bit more "challenging" and unexpected for the Newbie than the rest of the song. Nope because since the 2 sliders inbetween are not the normal 1/1 slider, putting a circle between will be very difficult for easy players.
[yanlu's Normal]

All in all I like that difficulty, too. We can take a look here on some sliders again because some of those have a weird shape. I make you some suggestions and hope they are helpful.
00:33:493 (1) - and 00:35:160 (3) - might have a symmetrical shape. That also improves the flow here a lot. This is so it flows nicely with the rest of the combo.
00:43:076 (3) - Why didn't you make the new combo here and delete it at 00:43:493 (1) - ? Fits much more to the rhythm. It's strange if a combo goes on after a short break...The new combo is so it follows the hitsound pattern with the finish
01:02:451 (2) - I personally don't prefer the shape of this slider. You may think of changing it into something else. I find it good to make it a bit particular cos it fits to the vocals here but it looks weird... Here a suggestion from my side: http://puu.sh/3v2t4.jpg With this he slider mirrors itself in the middle point and looks a bit prettier. Also it still fits great to the rhythm, just test it.
[249's Hard]

That difficulty is a lot of fun! God, I loved it. I tried it but I didn't find anything significantly to mod here.
[Insane]

I do not mod Insanes due to my lack of standard skill, already described that in my queue, but keep patient and I'm gonna improve my skill o3o
Just checked minor stuff here as hitsounding, new combos and so on but seems pretty fine to me.

[Rain]
That Rain is really good, no wonder that Deif bubbled this. Anyway, maybe some minor things you can think of but that mapset already has great potential to be ranked. Not sure if this map still needs a lot of mods, lol.
00:41:097 (5,6) - The crossing from one to the next slider feels a bit strange in my opinion. I tried something else, this here plays pretty cool to the rhythm: http://puu.sh/3v4im.jpg Try it, it is really not bad.
01:13:493 (1,2,3) - Mh dunno but the jump here is not really fluently from 2 to 3. Same counts for 00:15:160 (1,2,3) - The jump just doesn't feel well and you might think of putting the sliders a bit closer to each other and middle circle 2 between them to keep a symmetry here. Leaving this alone, I really like the hard jump here and flows well with the other coming jumps.
01:27:243 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - To create a better ending-feeling you may even think of making the distance between those sliders a bit bigger. This is a rain, so the ending really can be harder and more remarkable for the player.
I'm sorry but this difficulty is perfect and I didn't find anything else here for now. I hope that it was helpful.
Also, don't Kudosu me if I couldn't point out anything necessary. This map already seems very, very good to me and if it was not helpful you are not meant to give me one.
Best of luck still! Hope this gets rebubbled and ranked!

Thanks for the mod

Deif

Elite Mapper / osu!catch Paragon

3,564 posts

Joined April 2010

Deif 2013-07-05T20:31:38+00:00

Sorry for not being able to bubble your map. Let me at least use the proper icon, and wish you good luck to get it ranked.

APPLE'D!

Diasios

3,966 posts

Joined August 2008

Diasios 2013-07-06T12:28:41+00:00

Mod Infos:

• Suggestion.
• You should fix this.
______________________________________________
______________________________________________

Easy

• 00:04:743 (2) - Ctrl + g for a better flow.
• 00:10:160 (1,2,3) - I don't like this pattern, try this one:
SPOILER
• 00:23:493 (1) - Move this circle at x:236 y:192 for a better blanket.
• 00:40:160 (1,2,3,4) - Same as above, try this pattern:
SPOILER
• 01:09:118 (2) - Start this slider 1/2 earlier.
• 01:11:826 (1,2) - I know what are you trying to follow here but I think 1/1 fits better, right now this pattern sounds kinda weird.
SPOILER
• 01:25:993 (1) - There's no new combo mark here, add it.

yanlu's Normal

• 00:05:160 (1) - What about using a ~ slider here for a better flow?
SPOILER
• 00:21:826 (4) - Delete this circle, then start a slider here and end it 1/1 later.
• 00:22:660 (5) - ^
• 00:27:000 (break) - This is the only diff with a break, remove it and map this little part to keep a consistency with the other difficulties.
• 00:32:660 (5,6) - Why this stack? Move (6) at x:388 y:252.
• 01:04:951 (1) - Move this circle 1/2 earlier, keep following the piano.
• 01:18:285 (1) - ^
• 01:21:201 (3) - End this slider 1/2 earlier and add a repeat.

249's Hard

• 00:12:139 (1) - I think two circles would fit better here, otherwise try this:
SPOILER
• 00:27:035 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Try this pattern:
SPOILER
• 00:30:889 (4) - Why this slider starts on a blue tick? I don't really like how it sounds, start it 1/4 later or try this:
SPOILER
• 00:34:222 (2) - ^
• 00:40:576 (2) - End this slider 1/2 earlier and add a circle at 00:40:993.
• 01:02:243 (2) - End this slider 1/4 earlier and add a circle at 01:02:555.
• 01:13:910 (2) - Delete this slider, then add a circle at 01:13:910 and another one at 01:14:118.
• 01:15:576 (2) - Same as 01:02:243.
• 01:17:243 (2) - ^

Insane

• AR 8 fits a lot better with the current bpm imo.
• 00:19:326 (4) - Try to avoid this overlap, move this circle at x:272 y:60.
• 00:32:451 (3,4,5,6) - Try this:
SPOILER
• 01:04:326 (4) - End this slider 1/4 earlier. (also consider to add a 1/2 slider at 01:04:743)

ReySHeL's Oni

• 00:25:576 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,5) - kkkkddkkkkk --> kkkkddddkkk
• 01:10:785 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - ddddkkkkk --> ddkkddkdk (or ddkdddkdk)
• 01:27:451 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - I think ddkddkdkk fits quite a lot here.

ReySHeL's Muzu

Looks good, I'd call this diff "ReySHeL's Muzukashii" though.

ReySHeL

612 posts

Joined March 2012

ReySHeL 2013-07-06T21:50:58+00:00

xxheroxx wrote:
Mod Infos:

• Suggestion.
• You should fix this.
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______________________________________________

ReySHeL's Oni

• 00:25:576 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,5) - kkkkddkkkkk --> kkkkddddkkk i change to kkddddkkkkk
• 01:10:785 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - ddddkkkkk --> ddkkddkdk (or ddkdddkdk) i like the pattern of ddddkkkkk sry
• 01:27:451 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - I think ddkddkdkk fits quite a lot here. ^

ReySHeL's Muzu

Looks good, I'd call this diff "ReySHeL's Muzukashii" though. i want to ''ReySHeL's Muzu''

thanks for mod~
http://puu.sh/3wD9L.zip

Weez

2,318 posts

Joined February 2009

Topic Starter

Weez 2013-07-10T18:29:37+00:00

xxheroxx wrote:
Mod Infos:

• Suggestion.
• You should fix this.
______________________________________________
______________________________________________

Easy

• 00:04:743 (2) - Ctrl + g for a better flow.
• 00:10:160 (1,2,3) - I don't like this pattern, try this one: Changed it differently
SPOILER
• 00:23:493 (1) - Move this circle at x:236 y:192 for a better blanket.
• 00:40:160 (1,2,3,4) - Same as above, try this pattern: Nope keeping, purpously made them like so and I like it as it is.
SPOILER
• 01:09:118 (2) - Start this slider 1/2 earlier. Nope, following along with the vocals here.
• 01:11:826 (1,2) - I know what are you trying to follow here but I think 1/1 fits better, right now this pattern sounds kinda weird.
SPOILER
• 01:25:993 (1) - There's no new combo mark here, add it.
Insane

• AR 8 fits a lot better with the current bpm imo.
• 00:19:326 (4) - Try to avoid this overlap, move this circle at x:272 y:60.
• 00:32:451 (3,4,5,6) - Try this: Keeping it as is so it keeps consistency with 00:35:993 (4,5,6,7,8) -
SPOILER
• 01:04:326 (4) - End this slider 1/4 earlier. (also consider to add a 1/2 slider at 01:04:743)Nope for this, again im keeping track with the vocals here.

Thanks for the mod :3

yanlu

749 posts

Joined November 2010

yanlu 2013-07-11T09:38:45+00:00

xxheroxx wrote:
Mod Infos:

• Suggestion.
• You should fix this.
______________________________________________
______________________________________________

yanlu's Normal

• 00:05:160 (1) - What about using a ~ slider here for a better flow?
SPOILER
• 00:21:826 (4) - Delete this circle, then start a slider here and end it 1/1 later.
• 00:22:660 (5) - ^
• 00:27:000 (break) - This is the only diff with a break, remove it and map this little part to keep a consistency with the other difficulties. i like it.:<
• 00:32:660 (5,6) - Why this stack? Move (6) at x:388 y:252. ok
• 01:04:951 (1) - Move this circle 1/2 earlier, keep following the piano. ok
• 01:18:285 (1) - ^ ok
• 01:21:201 (3) - End this slider 1/2 earlier and add a repeat.

thanks for modding~

SPOILER

osu file format v12

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Version:yanlu's Normal
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YTYuyu

osu! Alumni

4,147 posts

Joined January 2011

YTYuyu 2013-07-11T21:06:58+00:00

xxheroxx wrote:
Mod Infos:

• Suggestion.
• You should fix this.
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249's Hard

• 00:12:139 (1) - I think two circles would fit better here, otherwise try this:
SPOILER
personally i find the curved slider more smoother to follow. ik where you're going since it's easy, but at the same time, it's not flowy enough to my liking.
• 00:27:035 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Try this pattern:
SPOILER
done. i had a lot of trouble with this pattern so yea.
• 00:30:889 (4) - Why this slider starts on a blue tick? I don't really like how it sounds, start it 1/4 later or try this:
SPOILER
i started it 1/4 later instead since i want to follow the BGM.
• 00:34:222 (2) - ^ ^
• 00:40:576 (2) - End this slider 1/2 earlier and add a circle at 00:40:993. i find the 1/1 slider more easier and it follows the music nicely as well.
• 01:02:243 (2) - End this slider 1/4 earlier and add a circle at 01:02:555. then it'll affect the next combo (sliders), ruining the transition and consistency in spacing.
• 01:13:910 (2) - Delete this slider, then add a circle at 01:13:910 and another one at 01:14:118. not following the vocals, but the BGM.
• 01:15:576 (2) - Same as 01:02:243. i find this pattern more fitting to the song than the suggested one, so i want to make it consistent.
• 01:17:243 (2) - ^ same as 01:13:910.

ty for the mod

.

SPOILER

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Toaru Kagaku no Railgun S - OP - fripSide - Sisters Noise (TV Size).mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 58489
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:sister's noise (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:sister's noise (TV Size)
Artist:fripSide
ArtistUnicode:fripSide
Creator:Weez
Version:249's Hard
Source:Toaru Kagaku no Railgun S
Tags:toaru majutsu no index a certain scientific magical Byakugan249 yanlu ReySHeL Weezy season 2 opening
BeatmapID:241764
BeatmapSetID:88159

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7
SliderMultiplier:1.65
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
Video,0,"railguns op.avi"
0,0,"dp.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

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13493,-100,4,2,1,85,0,1
13701,-100,4,2,1,85,0,0
58493,-100,4,2,1,85,0,1
58701,-100,4,2,1,85,0,0
71826,-100,4,2,1,85,0,1
72035,-100,4,2,1,85,0,0


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208,112,75576,2,0,P|160:136|148:208,1,123.75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,240,75993,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,352,76201,5,0,0:0:0:0:
276,248,76410,1,8,0:0:0:0:
344,352,76618,1,0,0:0:0:0:
376,232,76826,6,0,P|376:180|448:136,1,123.75
452,104,77243,2,0,P|428:56|352:36,1,123.75,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,32,77660,1,2,0:0:0:0:
240,32,77868,5,2,0:0:0:0:
156,32,78076,1,2,0:0:0:0:
72,120,78285,2,0,L|176:120,1,82.5,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,208,78701,5,0,0:0:0:0:
240,208,78805,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,208,78910,2,0,L|240:340,1,123.75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,352,79326,2,0,P|136:364|64:348,1,123.75
56,322,79743,2,0,L|56:234,1,82.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,160,80160,5,4,0:0:0:0:
132,96,80368,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,52,80576,2,0,L|296:52,1,82.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,128,80993,2,0,L|268:128,1,82.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,204,81410,2,0,L|296:204,1,82.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,128,81826,6,0,L|480:128,1,82.5,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,48,82243,2,0,L|240:48,1,82.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,100,82660,2,0,P|136:140|148:192,1,82.5,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,224,83076,2,0,P|268:184|256:132,1,82.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,100,83493,1,4,0:0:0:0:
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128,204,85368,5,0,0:0:0:0:
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316,172,85993,2,0,P|272:164|224:164,1,82.5,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,288,86410,2,0,P|182:287|138:279,1,82.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,160,86826,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,86930,12,4,88493,0:0:0:0:

Weez

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Weez 2013-07-12T15:00:51+00:00

Thanks all updated now :3

OnosakiHito

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OnosakiHito 2013-07-25T21:56:26+00:00

I had this map in my tabs since weeks, so I guess someone requested a mod.

[General]

[

Muzukashii]

General

01:28:493 - Kiai should stop here.

Notes

00:32:139 (1) - I think it would be better moving the note to 00:32:243 and follow rather the beat instead of the vocal.
00:35:472 (1) - ^
00:34:951 (1) - I think having here a kat might be good. Good alternate of the patterns d k d d and d k k d, also fits to the vocal well.
00:38:285 (4) - Maybe don? Not a must. Pitch feels lower here.
00:39:951 (1) - Kat? This time vocal is not kat worth, but still fits due to previous patterns.
00:42:139 - I suggeset two things, since the kk comes out of the sudden:

or

{
00:44:951 (1) - k
00:45:160 (1,2) - d d
} I think this sounds better, since it fits to the vocals.

Nice Muzukashii.

[

Oni]

General

01:28:493 - Kiai should stop here.

Notes

00:00:160 (1) - Better have a normal note here, not a finisher. It emphasize it self too much.
00:13:493~00:26:826 - Usage of finishers in this kiai is too spreaded. Try to use more or delete the three you have.
00:38:493 (1) - Keep the flow of the finishers, have a K.
00:50:368 (3) - Probably better to delete the note.
00:51:826 - Here is no finisher. Sounds a bit distracting and not emphasizes enough compared to the previous parts. Consider to change the pattern here.
00:55:160 - Same here. It sounds not emphasizes enough without a finisher.
{
00:56:722 (2) - delete
00:56:826 (1,1) - finisher
00:57:451 (2) - K
00:57:555 (3) - delete
00:57:972 - add kat
} I think this is better. Try it.
01:01:826 - Have a finisher here please. Spread from one to another finisher is too big again.
01:15:160 - ^
01:22:660 - ^
01:25:993 (1,1) - kat finisher

Oni is overall fine, but the finishers are a used inconveniently. Try to fix this befor it gets ranked.

Nice Taikos you mapped. After some stuff got fixed, I see no reason why it shouldn't be rankable.

ReySHeL

612 posts

Joined March 2012

ReySHeL 2013-08-06T05:34:24+00:00

OnosakiHito wrote:
I had this map in my tabs since weeks, so I guess someone requested a mod.

[General]

[ Muzukashii]

General

01:28:493 - Kiai should stop here. i dont know why kiai time end here lol, fixed

Notes

00:32:139 (1) - I think it would be better moving the note to 00:32:243 and follow rather the beat instead of the vocal.
00:35:472 (1) - ^
00:34:951 (1) - I think having here a kat might be good. Good alternate of the patterns d k d d and d k k d, also fits to the vocal well.
00:38:285 (4) - Maybe don? Not a must. Pitch feels lower here.
00:39:951 (1) - Kat? This time vocal is not kat worth, but still fits due to previous patterns.
00:42:139 - I suggeset two things, since the kk comes out of the sudden:

or

{
00:44:951 (1) - k
00:45:160 (1,2) - d d
} I think this sounds better, since it fits to the vocals.

Nice Muzukashii. thanks, all fixed~

[ Oni]

General

01:28:493 - Kiai should stop here.

Notes

00:00:160 (1) - Better have a normal note here, not a finisher. It emphasize it self too much. strong sound is heard
00:13:493~00:26:826 - Usage of finishers in this kiai is too spreaded. Try to use more or delete the three you have. i put below notes. because first kiai time

00:38:493 (1) - Keep the flow of the finishers, have a K. ok
00:50:368 (3) - Probably better to delete the note. ^
00:51:826 - Here is no finisher. Sounds a bit distracting and not emphasizes enough compared to the previous parts. Consider to change the pattern here.
00:55:160 - Same here. It sounds not emphasizes enough without a finisher.
{
00:56:722 (2) - delete ok
00:56:826 (1,1) - finisher 00:56:826 (1) - i added this note only
00:57:451 (2) - K no
00:57:555 (3) - delete ^
00:57:972 - add kat ^
} I think this is better. Try it. i want keep it
01:01:826 - Have a finisher here please. Spread from one to another finisher is too big again. no, because finish is too many
01:15:160 - ^ ^
01:22:660 - ^ ^
01:25:993 (1,1) - kat finisher ^

Oni is overall fine, but the finishers are a used inconveniently. Try to fix this befor it gets ranked.

Nice Taikos you mapped. After some stuff got fixed, I see no reason why it shouldn't be rankable.

thanks for great mod OnosakiHito~ :3/
really helpful >w<//
http://puu.sh/3UW67.zip

SZSTWGNYD

SZSTWGNYD 2014-04-01T14:41:40+00:00

don't look at my comment, I posted it on wrong beatmap sorry

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