1. Easy (1,12 stars, 36 notes)
2. Hard (2,22 stars, 91 notes)
3. Insane (2,92 stars, 123 notes)
4. Mao's Insane (2,62 stars, 113 notes)
5. Normal (1,52 stars, 60 notes)

Changelog

08.03.2014 - Pending! :3
08.03.2014 - Applied Hard's mod.
08.03.2014 - Applied [ Lionheart ]'s mod.
08.03.2014 - Applied Mao's mod.
10.03.2014 - Applied Nvirjskly's mod.
16.03.2014 - Applied SonnyC's mod.
24.03.2014 - Applied kajiyatta's mod.
24.03.2014 - Applied iyasine's mod.
25.03.2014 - Applied sjoy's mod.
28.03.2014 - Applied Kenterz9's mod.
02.04.2014 - Applied 10crystalmask01's mod.
02.04.2014 - Applied Natsu's mod.
02.04.2014 - Applied Koalazy's mod.
02.04.2014 - Applied Natsu's mod.
02.04.2014 - Applied Kazuya-sama's mod.
02.04.2014 - Applied Dariano's mod.
02.04.2014 - Applied moonlightleaf's mod.
02.04.2014 - Applied Moway's mod.
09.04.2014 - Added Kenterz9's Storyboard ♥
10.04.2014 - Applied captin1's mod.
02.05.2014 - Applied Irreversible's mod.
09.05.2014 - Applied Kenezz's mod.
04.06.2014 - Applied Asphyxia's mod.
04.06.2014 - Bubbled by Asphyxia ♥
09.06.2014 - Changed tags.
09.06.2014 - Rebubbled by Asphyxia.
13.06.2014 - Changed diff settings.
13.06.2014 - Rebubbled by Asphyxia.
16.06.2014 - Ranked by Kenezz ♥

1. 00:04:734 (1) - this slider looks plain. Maybe ankle it a bit?
2. 00:08:908 (1) - the sound pitches higher at this point but the slidersound gets lower. that seems wrong, imo. maybe add a sound at this point?
3. 00:09:952 - this is the same sound, that appeared when you used the whistle before. maybe use a whistle at this point too.
4. 00:17:778 (2) - this isn't stacked properly
5. 00:43:343 (3) - make the blanket look better please.

1. Seems fine. Nice diff.

1. 00:27:691 (1,2,3) - To avoid that overlapping, strg + h this. Looks better, imo. This way, you can also stack 00:26:126 (2,2) -
   
   SPOILER

   
2. rest seems fine ~

1. 00:10:995 (1,2,3) - I suggest you change this overlapping pattern. It's not a pretty one and well... You can do this better
2. 00:46:474 (4) - can't find anything else in this diff and i feel bad if i send you this mod so i say it. HERE NC PLEASE.

1. 00:23:517 (1) - this looks wrong.
2. no more.

Hard wrote:

Mod~

Mao's Insane

1. 00:04:734 (1) - this slider looks plain. Maybe ankle it a bit? Supposed to look like this.
2. 00:08:908 (1) - the sound pitches higher at this point but the slidersound gets lower. that seems wrong, imo. maybe add a sound at this point? It's mapped the same way in the other Insane diff and I don't really see what's wrong here. No fix unless another modder shares your opinion.
3. 00:09:952 - this is the same sound, that appeared when you used the whistle before. maybe use a whistle at this point too. Done
4. 00:17:778 (2) - this isn't stacked properly I noticed that before but was too lazy to fix. Soo, fixed~
5. 00:43:343 (3) - make the blanket look better please. Blanket is fine for me here o: Tried to make some adjustments to it though.

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: 01 Nightmare -Overture-.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 2648
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.63
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 16

[Metadata]
Title:Nightmare -Overture-
TitleUnicode:ナイトメア - 序曲 -
Artist:Hatsuki Yura
ArtistUnicode:Hatsuki Yura
Creator:Desperate-kun
Version:Mao's Insane
Source:バラエピキュリアン
Tags:Mao
BeatmapID:382043
BeatmapSetID:155805

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:6
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7
SliderMultiplier:2
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG.png",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
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Hard wrote:

Mod~

Insane

1. Seems fine. Nice diff.

Hard

1. 00:27:691 (1,2,3) - To avoid that overlapping, strg + h this. Looks better, imo. This way, you can also stack 00:26:126 (2,2) - No, the overlap doesn' look bad here and the flow is pretty interesting like this imo
   
   SPOILER

   
2. rest seems fine ~

Normal

1. 00:10:995 (1,2,3) - I suggest you change this overlapping pattern. It's not a pretty one and well... You can do this better It's nice flow and look o:
2. 00:46:474 (4) - can't find anything else in this diff and i feel bad if i send you this mod so i say it. HERE NC PLEASE. Yes

Easy

1. 00:23:517 (1) - this looks wrong. It is right ._.
2. no more.

yeah. crappy mod. im not that good with modding. take a star.

[ Lionheart ] wrote:

General
In the Field "Title" there are spaces between the hyphens (- 序曲 -) and in "Romanised Title" there aren't (-Overture-), decide for one It's correct

Insane
00:04:213 (4,1) - while testing it first i thought this looked like that because of stack leniency, but you placed them like this^^' i personally would not let them overlap, same with i think 2-3 more times like 00:34:995 (3,1) (just for the looks) Why not lol
00:19:343 (1) - Really liked the part that began here, good job
00:51:691 (3) - same as with Mao's diff, just my feeling. am not gonna mention it again, it's your decision omg there aren't even beats there

Hard
00:13:082 (1,2) - Maybe use more of these kind-of blankets, they look really cool and you have lots of sliders that look like this, by rearanging a little i think it would look a lot cooler I try not to reuse the same pattern too often
00:17:256 (1,2) - I'd also make this a circle-circle-slider pattern like the two before, but if you want some variety it's fine as well The pitch-line is completely different for these... That's why I have the variety
00:18:300 (1) - while you'rea t it, maybe change this slider so it could be a blanket? No, it looks good as it is
00:25:604 (1,2) and 00:26:648 (3,4) - the jumps don't actually fit that much in my opninion, maybe rearrange / regarding the music i'd think that circles would fit better anyway, up to you It fits with the rhythm
00:48:561 (1) - make it a perfect triangle with (4) and (3) from before, would look cooler It's correct

Normal (My mapping experience comes to an end, only suggestions)
00:31:865 (1) - looks really a bit too squirky Ok
not much to say more than that, good job on this one

Easy
00:04:213 (2) - i don't know how accurate i should be with that, but the distance is 0,99x to next^^ maybe check some more, not sure whether the rest is fine or if this does matter at all Nobody cares, 0.97 ~ 1.03 is ok for me
00:15:169 (1) - Could confuse because the slider ending is closer than the beginning to the cursor position (i've just seen so many noobs mixing up the beginning and the end point of sliders) You can see that in many maps, and I think it's not very confusing. If some beginners can't read it, they have to learn
00:19:343 (1) - i don't know whether it was supposed to look like this, but i'd set the second ankle point in the middle and not so far to the beginning (there is at least one more of these sliders, also the small ones like 00:33:952 (2), not going to mention it again) It makes no difference from the slider algorythm ._.
00:21:430 (2) - rearrange so that the borders don't touch each other in the middle It's readable


Hope i could help you, good luck with the mapset

Mao wrote:

Mod

Nvirjskly wrote:

Hi! Most of what I say are suggestions so feel free to ignore whatever you don't agree with!

[Mao's Insane]
Wow this looks like it was made in 2009. Nothing wrong with that but it's just weird to see a current map using this sort of style.

AR+1? OD+2? CS-1?

I really don't know what else to say about this diff sorry.\

Sorry for the short mod.

Nvirjskly wrote:

Hi! Most of what I say are suggestions so feel free to ignore whatever you don't agree with!

[General]
It seems as if there is no storyboard, thus widescreen support needs to be disabled in all diffs. It is already

[Easy]
No glaring problems that I can see. Very consistent beatmap.

[Normal]
00:17:256 (3) - NC Ok
00:09:691 (2,1) - Might be confusing for newer players when then might think that the slider at 00:10:995 comes after the slider at 00:09:691 I think it's readable sry

Otherwise solid.

[Hard]
AR+1/2? OD+1? Th difficulty spread is supposed to look like this

00:16:213 (1) - remove NC?
00:18:300 (1) - ^
Those NCs are to emphasize the main instrument

[Insane]
OD+1/2. This is a DT diff, considering the short length of the song and that this is supposed to be the Insane diff, you want to make sure that the leaderboard is not full of HDDT SS scores.
HP+1? The difficulty settings are ok. The insane feels bad with higher OD

00:16:213 (1) - remove NC
00:20:387 (1) - ^
00:22:474 (1) - ^
00:24:560 (1) - ^
00:26:648 (1) - ^
00:28:734 (1) - ^
00:30:821 (1) - ^
00:32:908 (1) - ^
00:49:604 (1) - ^
You mentioned every second NC in this part lol. It's on purpose, to emphasize the main instrument ;w;

[Mao's Insane]
Wow this looks like it was made in 2009. Nothing wrong with that but it's just weird to see a current map using this sort of style.

AR+1? OD+2? CS-1?

I really don't know what else to say about this diff sorry.\

Sorry for the short mod.

Sonnyc wrote:

Random modding.

Easy:

00:09:952 (4) - I know this isn't the place for a whistle, but since the rhythm is kinda changed, consider adding it at the head.
00:16:213 (2) - ^? Sorry, I don't agree with these two. I don't think the rhythm changes a lot
00:17:256 (3) - Anyways this is apparently missing a whistle.
00:50:648 (3) - ^ Yes

Normal:

00:23:517 (1) - Making a perfect symmetry using ctrl+H would be better in aesthetic imo. This is the best I can do, and it isn't really noticable while playing for me, sorry ;w;
00:50:648 (3) - Whistle at the head. Yes

Hard:

00:17:256 (1) - Whistle at the head. Yes
00:37:082 (3) - (208,100) the last dot would improve the curved shape. Yes
00:50:648 (1) - Whistle at the head. Yes

Good luck~

kajiyatta wrote:

M4M
[General]
Inconsistence "Widescreen Support". No, that's a bug basically
[Easy]
BPM is low so AR3 would be fine for Easy. Yes
For the easiest diff, I don't agree tick2 since it would tend to miss notes for newbie. Yes
[Normal]
Rhythm
00:11:778(2) Why put kick slider in this? You didn't add kick in other parts, so it looks a bit weird. For variation. I don't think it looks weird
Hit Sound
Same as Hard and Insane.
[Hard]
Placement
00:18:300(1) It looks useless NC I suppose, delete it better. Yes
00:27:952(2) Move this note at 202:287 to stack notes. Just looks fine than current one. Sorry, I think it looks good and I like the flow
00:33:952(1) Move this note like this to avoid overlap? Yes

SPOILER

Rhythm
Hit Sound
00:19:865(3) Add whistle on the reverse like Insane?
00:21:952(3)^
00:24:561(1) Add whistlle at head? ... and more similar suggestion in same part. I don't know why only E,N,H is same pattern of hitsound except Insane. The hitsound pattern is different in Insane, because I think Insane needs more hitsounds, and needs to be more special. Sorry, I think these hitsounds are too much for a Normal or Hard
[Insane]
Placement
00:23:517(1,2,3,4) Maybe you can put these notes in natural flow, current placement from (1,2) is a bit odd for me. e.g)

SPOILER

00:26:648(1,2,3,4) Again feels odd for me, so same example here. Sorry, I think the flow is good, I can't explain ;w;

SPOILER

Hit Sound
00:19:343(1) Add whistle here, you already did it in other diffs.
00:21:430(1) ^
00:23:517(1) ^
00:25:604(1) ^
00:29:778(1)^ ... and more following notes in same part. You should check whole hitsound in this diff. I won't change the hitsound pattern ;w;

I don't know why pattern of putting whistles is different by diffs, you can make all diffs (except guest dfif) to be same pattern of hitsound, whick makes your map more symmetrically. But others fine, good luck.

iyasine wrote:

hi~ desperate , mao~ ! Thanks for m4m request ₍₍ (ง ˘ω˘ )ว ⁾⁾

[Easy]
■ 00:04:213 (2) - x:328 y:156 , 00:04:734 (3) - x:268 y:236 ? Sorry, I like my version more
■ 00:49:604 (2) - Rotate( ctrl + Shift + R ) -26 ? Hmm, my version is rotated 90°, I think it flows good and looks more special

[Normal]
■ 00:40:995 (2) - tyr this design Yes

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[Hard]
■ 00:15:430 (2) - x:418 y:51 ? I want to keep the blanket
■ 00:34:474 (2,3) - x:251 y:236 ? Already done differently ^^

[Insane]
■ 00:09:952 (3) - The proposal of a design It doesn't fit my timelien though .-.

img & code

123,255,9952,2,0,B|212:222|212:222|275:266|339:242,1,230,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

■ 00:17:778 (2) - Distance x1.35 ? Why o/

sorry small mod...
a well finished work , good luck

sjoy wrote:

hi here~
[Insane]
00:03:691 (3) - whistle on the head
00:09:952 (3) - clap
00:12:039 (4) - whistle
00:14:908 (4) - I prefer delete it
00:21:430 (1) - whistle
00:23:517 (1) - ^
00:28:734 (1) - ^
00:29:778 (1) - ^on the head
00:36:039 (1,2) - try this
00:44:387 (1,2) - ^
00:50:648 (1) - whistle on the head
so quiet song~
good luck~

Atrue wrote:

Hitsound modding

General

Kenterz9 wrote:

Hello, as requested (」・ω・)」

General

Circle size -> 2 for Easy and 3 for Normal ? Sorry, I want to keep smaller circle-sizes, because it fits the higher difficultys

Easy

00:43:343 (4,1) - Maybe blanket ? =D Hmm sry, I would have to move (4) down to do it without touching the hp-bar, but I want to keep the flow, so no change here ;w;

This diff. is perfect, I like the patterns with sliders =3

Normal

00:09:691 (2,1) - Because of the Approache rate, there's an overlap =/ It's supposed to be there o:
00:31:865 (1) - Move the 2nd contruction point to x:128 y:208 for a better curve ? Yes

Nice diff. too, good work ^w^

Hard

00:06:300 (4) - Try to blanket with (3) Hmm there's supposed to be a little jump here for better flow, sorry no change
00:42:300 (1,3) - This patern is strange... but it's not a big problem I think =P Well, I like it ._.

Insane

00:40:213 (1) - Blanket with (4) Sorry, I tried it before, but if I blanket that it will overlap badly, so I did it like this

I like this diff. because there's many circles, it's not ordinary =D

Mao's Insane

Nothing to say (っ°ω°)っ

This map is wonderful. Take my star =D
Good luck for rank =3

1. Combo colours are almost the same:
   []
   Try to change them a bit maybe like:
   

1. 00:04:213 (4) - this should be 1/2 slider since you should map this 00:04:474 - for consistency with the music and 00:03:952 -, also you map it here 00:08:387 (4) -
2. 00:08:908 (1) - try to curve the second part of the slider? not really important but will look a lot better imo,something similar to:
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:09:952 (3) - with this one you're losing all the consistency with the 1/2 sliders and the music, try:
   
4. 00:10:995 (1) - finish + whistle fit better here
5. 00:19:082 this kind of songs should be mapped exactly to the music, 00:19:082 add a circle, also you was mapping all the other similars parts
6. 00:23:256 (4,3) - try to avoid the overlap?
7. 00:41:517 (4) - this slider is starting in a really weak bit, and feel kinda weird in game, try a better rhythm:
   
8. 00:46:474 (1,2,3) - cool
   

1. OD 6 is really easy, even with cs6, try OD7 here, since is the hardest diff in the set
2. 00:04:213 (4) - this should be 1/2 slider for consistency with the music, also with 00:06:300 (4) -
3. 00:08:387 (4) - same as above
4. 00:12:561 (4) - and here too, since you are not being consistent, you map some like 00:10:474 (4) - and 00:14:648 (4) - , but you ignore the similars one in the above suggestions <:, try to be a bit more consistent IMO
5. 00:16:734 (6,2) - nazi, stack this properly
6. 00:19:865 (2,3,4,5,6) - not a fan, I prefer if you do a perfect star pattern here
7. 00:35:517 - and 00:35:778 - I really suggest you to map this both beats, since is the same music that's you was mapping before, I really don't feel that pause fit the song
8. 00:37:604 (4) - should be a 1/2 slider for consitency with 00:39:691 (4) -
9. 00:41:778 same as above
10. 00:45:952 (4) - ^
    

1. Reduce HP drain by 1 (5) to have a more balanced settings
2. 00:05:778 (3,4) - they look a bit weird, mainly because they are not symmetrical, try to copy paste them
3. 00:49:082 (3) - ah not a fan of this flow, making the slider curved can work better, like:
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:51:691 (3) - mm this play kinda forced, try CTRL G, for better flow
   

1. 00:03:430 (2) - make this slider curved for a bit better flow with previous and next object
2. 00:05:517 (2) - ^
3. 00:09:691 (2,1) - not a fan of this overlap, but maybe just me
4. 00:15:952 add a circle since the melody get faster here, is ok to use some 1/2 circles
5. 00:29:778 (1) - make this a slider symmetrical? actually look not nicely done
   

1. Reduce AR by 1 (3), since fit better how you mapped this
2. 00:21:430 (2) - make this a slider symmetrical? actually look not nicely done
   

well that's all, sorry for be a bit nazi with some slider shapes, the only thing i'm kinda worry is for some rhythms in both insane diffs and for the como colours, GL

10crystalmask01 wrote:

Hey, mod via PM o̿ ̭ o̿

[Insane]
00:14:126 (3,4) - Try swapping these notes timing spots, so that the hit circle starts before the slider. The slider will follow that funny up-and-down beats of the notes on 00:14:387. No, it's for consistency with this rhythm, as it is a variation itself.
00:22:995 (3,4,2,3,4) - Try moving these notes more apart. The spacing was very clean up until this part. The spacing follows an alternating pattern o:
00:41:256 (3,4) - Consider replacing with a 1/1 slider here, because there's no notes on 00:41:517 or 00:42:039, so the current rhythm seems a bit over mapped. There are notes

[Hard]
00:47:517 (3,4) - Replace with two 1/3 sliders, since the music here is similar to that on 00:05:778 (3,4) - , 00:09:952 (3,4) - and 00:39:169 (3,4) - . Basically make it the same rhythm as the objects noted above for consistency. It's for variety

[Normal]
00:15:952 - Consider adding a hit circle here, since there is an important (music box?) note here in the song, which is missing.
00:16:995 - ^
00:21:169 - Or add a reverse on 00:20:648 (2) - and re-position it.
00:23:256 - ^
00:25:343 - ^
00:27:430 - ^
00:29:517 - ^
00:31:604 - ^
00:33:691 - ^
00:49:343 - ^ Those are all too hard for my Normal diff

[Easy]
AR - 1[/notice]

Good luck.

Natsu wrote:

Hi hi hi ~


[General]

1. Combo colours are almost the same:
   []
   Try to change them a bit maybe like:
   

Sorry, I think they are fine and fit the song ;w;

[Insane]

1. 00:04:213 (4) - this should be 1/2 slider since you should map this 00:04:474 - for consistency with the music and 00:03:952 -, also you map it here 00:08:387 (4) - Sorry, I like to add some variation here.
2. 00:08:908 (1) - try to curve the second part of the slider? not really important but will look a lot better imo,something similar to: Sorry, I want to keep the parallels ;w;
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:09:952 (3) - with this one you're losing all the consistency with the 1/2 sliders and the music, try: Yes, but I used the version from the beginning instead.
   
4. 00:10:995 (1) - finish + whistle fit better here Ok
5. 00:19:082 this kind of songs should be mapped exactly to the music, 00:19:082 add a circle, also you was mapping all the other similars parts No, I want to keep this little break before the new section
6. 00:23:256 (4,3) - try to avoid the overlap? Hmm, it's not too bad I think ;w; And I don't want to change the angle
7. 00:41:517 (4) - this slider is starting in a really weak bit, and feel kinda weird in game, try a better rhythm: I think it's ok and fits
   
8. 00:46:474 (1,2,3) - cool Thanks :3
   

[Hard]

1. Reduce HP drain by 1 (5) to have a more balanced settings Ok
2. 00:05:778 (3,4) - they look a bit weird, mainly because they are not symmetrical, try to copy paste them Waah this is my favourite thingy in Hard diffs o:
3. 00:49:082 (3) - ah not a fan of this flow, making the slider curved can work better, like: Ok
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:51:691 (3) - mm this play kinda forced, try CTRL G, for better flow Ok
   

[Normal]

1. 00:03:430 (2) - make this slider curved for a bit better flow with previous and next object Ok
2. 00:05:517 (2) - ^ Want to keep parallel
3. 00:09:691 (2,1) - not a fan of this overlap, but maybe just me Sry, I like it ;w;
4. 00:15:952 add a circle since the melody get faster here, is ok to use some 1/2 circles Ok
5. 00:29:778 (1) - make this a slider symmetrical? actually look not nicely done Ok, done differently though
   

[Easy]

1. Reduce AR by 1 (3), since fit better how you mapped this Ok
2. 00:21:430 (2) - make this a slider symmetrical? actually look not nicely done It is almost
   

well that's all, sorry for be a bit nazi with some slider shapes, the only thing i'm kinda worry is for some rhythms in both insane diffs and for the como colours, GL

Koalazy wrote:

Hihi- Requested via forum PM

[Insane]
00:26:126 (2) - Ctrl+G ? Flows better~ Not at all

I love the flow ohhh

[Hard]
00:09:952 (3,4) - hmm I recommend to do it like this, this flows better for me My version is different but flows as well as that

Image

00:18:300 (3) - Adjust the tail of this slider to make00:18:300 (3,1,2,3) - a better curve I don't think it's a problem o: Atleast it points to them
00:49:865 (2,3) - I think this flows better I don't think so ;w;

Image

[Normal]
I wonder if CS4 is too small for normal diffs... Already changed that
00:10:213 - 00:10:734 - I think you can map some beats here since the music is different from the previous notes Not really o/

[Easy]
Nice!

Really really nice mapset~ Good luck!

Kazuya-sama wrote:

Hello, from PM

All diff: Uncheck widescreen support Yo

[Easy]

AR: -1 Yo

00:40:213 (1) - little better blanket: ? No, mine is more correct than yours

image, and coords

00:43:343 (4) - rotate -15 degress ?
00:44:387 (1) - move: x: 112 y: 20 ? and better blanket: + ^, I want to keep the flow here sry

image and coords

00:45:952 (2) - Move x: 68 y: 292 (distance fix) The spacing is 100% correct

[Normal]
CS: -1 It's "normal", not hard

00:10:995 (1,2,3,1,2) - Move? E.g.: http://puu.sh/7QQqK.jpg and http://puu.sh/7QQsU.jpg ? Why? no

[Hard]
AR: +1

00:06:300 (4) - move x: 108 y: 232 ? and slider end/last point/white tick: x: 148 y: 156 ? This is on purpose oô
00:06:821 (1) - after fix spacing: Move: x: 208 y: 100? and move: 00:07:604 (2) - x: 460 y: 76 ? ^
00:13:082 (1) - Little better blanket: http://puu.sh/7QQPM.JPG (image + Coords) ? Mine is more correct

[Insane]
CS: -1, please. It's better. Naah

00:04:213 (4) - move: x: 396 y: 60 ?
00:06:300 (4) - Better blanket. Slider center (2nd white tick) point: x: 192 y: 168 ? and last point (3rd white tick) x: 256 y: 192 ?
00:10:995 (1) - move: x: 352 y: 240?
00:11:517 (2) - move: x 436 y: 224?
00:11:778 (3) - ^ x: 396 y: 148 ?
00:12:039 (4) - ^x: 436 y: 72 ?
00:19:343 (1,2,3,4) - move: x 377 y: 286? Result: http://puu.sh/7QRtN.jpg
00:34:474 (2) - Slider center point x: 412 y: 20 ?
00:36:039 (1) - move: x: 474 y: 360 ? Sorry ;w; it's all on purpose

It's okay.

Good Luck!

Dariano wrote:

Hi hi~

This is a kind of shitty mod I just don't know why I couldn't mod this properly, so sorry.
Maybe it was because I could barely hear the hitsounds, perhaps you should consider stepping up the volume a little bit. Calm song = calm hitsounds ;w;

[Timing]

Offset: 2,635 (Current one -13ms) Well, I looked at it again, and I think my offset is correct

I played with both offsets and changed the OD to 9 to be more accurate and the new offset made a big difference there.

[Insane]

00:14:908 (4) - It feels like the song doesn't want this note here W..why ;(

[Hard]

00:37:082 (3) - This feels odd. I don't think so, sry ;w;
Perhaps you want to try something like this


[Normal]

00:23:517 (1) - Super nazi, not symmetrical, you didn't use grid snap did you? maybe if you used it, it would be perfect like Mine is almost perfect though this


[Easy]

00:27:691 (1,2) - make them symmetrical to the x axys. I can't, because it would mess up the spacing


All in all, I loved the map, the song was nice too, it was very polished so it deserves a star~
Good luck ranking this!.

moonlightleaf wrote:

hi~from pm-req

[General]

all diff 00:51:821 spinner to 00:54:821 ? Uhh I don't like spinners for fade outs sry

[Easy]

seem no problem

[Normal]

use cs3?

00:13:865 (2,3) - the same with 00:11:778 (2,3) Why, is different rhythm even

00:44:387 (1,2) - oh,suddenly appear different form fefore a little suprise , change the same typesetting as before? Variety is fine for me

[hard]

AR-7 OD-6

00:13:865 (2,3,4) - try this , make diff more fun to play

SPOILER

00:15:169 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - ^

SPOILER

00:48:561 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - ^ you can consder it

like this ↑ sometimes no use DS to put notes will be funny more (but no too far it depend the song Well, I think with DS it fits the diff spread more, and also, I don't really like yuor suggestions

00:42:300 (1) - try Why change my only creative pattern ;w;

SPOILER

[Insane]

cs4 plz

AR9

00:14:908 (4) - delete Sorry, it belongs there

00:26:126 (2) - ctrl+g No, it will destroy the flow

good luck

Moway wrote:

[Easy]
00:41:778 (2) - I prefer this to the right more, kind of similar to the way you have it at 00:06:821 (1,2). Here I think making the blanket breaks flow a bit, so I think it is okay to forego the blanket for this part. Sorry, I think it's fine flow ;w;


[Hard]

00:15:430 (2) - I prefer this to be somewhere around (420,48). Forcing the blanket plays kind of oddly, so I think it is better to go out a bit more since it will form better circular flow from 00:14:648 (4,1) then down into 00:15:691 (3). I think the flow is fine

[Insane]

Odd to me that you have this diff at CS5 and Mao's diff at CS6, considering that your idea was to increase CS with difficulty. Settings and object count indicate that this diff is supposed to be the harder one, so I suggest switching the CS between the two diffs if you really want to have the ascending CS with difficulty pattern. I personally really discourage CS6, but since you want to do it this way I suggest switching here. Alternatively, if you think Mao's diff is the harder one, then give the higher settings to that diff. I think it's cool to have the CS6 at the easier diff though

That's all from me, as you can see it's mostly hitsounding stuff. Good luck!