[Selentia]
00:20:220 (1) - Move this to x:348 y:192 so it's easier to see the repeat. Right now it's under the old slider and hitburst.
00:43:857 (1) - I expected this to be two circles, not a slider.
01:27:948 (2,3) - This should be a slider, otherwise this speedup would be too hard too fast.
01:30:902 (2) - Move this farther away, it looks like a stream jump. Try x:88 y:236
01:35:220 (2,3) - This looks like a stream jump. I'd redesign this part so the distance between the circles is overall bigger. Something like this maybe ->
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/146785101:47:948 (1,2,1) - This is really difficult to read and is frustrating to play. I'd make this part easier / more understandable
02:00:902 (1,2) - I can't see the 2 very well when playing. Try moving this combo to x:380 y:240 ->
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/146786402:44:538 (1,2) - This is a pain when spaced out. Really annoying to break here, I'd make it more compressed so it isn't so frustrating.
03:19:425 (2,1) - This jump is way too big. Over 3x on a circle stream after a stack is a huge speed change.
03:49:198 (2,2) - I couldn't see these circles. Maybe position them so they are moving down and away from the sliders like this? ->
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/146788503:56:016 (2,1,2,1) - This might be a little overkill D: huge jumps
04:14:311 (1,2) - Move this more to the left, this jump is super big otherwise.
04:15:448 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1) - I think you should rework this pattern, right now it has huge back and forth circle stream jumps (the biggest ones so far) and changes from sliders to circles unexpectedly. I think the pattern as it is would be the biggest place where people break combo as it's far far harder than anything else. I'd make it as easy as (or easier than) the pattern at 05:15:448 - where you do a similar thing.
04:26:357 (1,2) - This is a pain when spaced out. Really annoying to break here, I'd make it more compressed so it isn't so frustrating.
05:14:538 (1) - Move this up and to the left more, otherwise 05:14:311 (2,3,1) - has bad flow and is really easy to miss on.
05:23:175 (1) - It's hard to see this slider. Try starting te slider to x:173 y:131 (where the previous slider ended)
05:24:766 (3) -
This slider end is improperly snapped. Please make it end on 1/4 as intended.
05:30:902 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - This is a little awkward to play. Might be more fun if the streams were more compressed and the jumps weren't quite as big.
06:00:448 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - This is a little scary to get through, and I can imagine this being super hard on HR. I think the ending of the map should be a little more straightforward and easy as the player has taken all this time to get here.
06:04:084 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Ok this is REALLY scary to get through, even on nomod! This is probably insane on HR. I really think you should make these two parts easier than this.