hello mod via req (pm? or forum? i forgot lol) sorry late ;_;
dont add triplets everywhere~ , in osumania we cannot do it like standard maps . follow the rhythm, it is not good example to do this.
anyway , i'll just post as many suggestion for patterns since the diff balance is pretty good
[EZ]
00:00:540 - i think its better to add a note here at 2 to keep up the consistency x.x
00:03:969 - ^ at 6
00:14:040 (14040|4,14254|3) - make like this?
http://puu.sh/8k3wK.jpg00:19:826 (19826|2) - end the hold here and add a note
00:46:183 (46183|1) - move to right by 1 collumn
00:51:540 (51540|1,51969|4) - make like this?
http://puu.sh/8k3EP.jpg00:56:683 (56683|2) - move it here 00:56:469 , highlight the last note with chord , not necessary to suddenly follow drum here
00:58:826 - add a note
01:00:111 (60111|5) - move to 00:59:469
01:08:683 (68683|0) - move right by 1 collumn so it look like this
http://puu.sh/8k3Lv.jpg01:08:897 - add a note at 4th collumn
01:16:397 - add a note
01:19:611 - ^
[NM]
00:09:540 (9540|3) - delete
00:20:897 (20897|5,21111|3,21326|4,21540|6) - suggestion
http://puu.sh/8lA5m.jpg00:24:540 (24540|4,24754|3) - suggestion
http://puu.sh/8lA6V.jpg00:26:683 (26683|6) - move to 2nd collumn for hand balance
00:27:326 (27326|5,27433|4,27540|3,27647|4,27754|6,27969|0,28076|1,28183|3) - suggestion
http://puu.sh/8lAaT.jpg00:28:397 (28397|6) - move to 1st collumn for hand balance
00:30:111 - add a note
00:32:254 - ^
00:33:326 - ^
00:35:897 (35897|4) - move to 4?
00:41:040 (41040|0,41254|4) - suggestion
http://puu.sh/8lAhk.jpg00:42:540 - add a note
00:43:611 - ^
00:50:683 - add a note
00:52:826 (52826|5,53040|2,53469|6) - suggestion
http://puu.sh/8lAlz.jpg00:59:683 (59683|4,59897|5) - move to 1st collumn and 2nd
01:01:183 (61183|1,61397|0,61611|5) - suggestion
http://puu.sh/8lApT.jpg01:02:040 (62040|4,62254|3,62469|6,62683|5) - how about this?
http://puu.sh/8lAs2.jpg01:04:183 (64183|1) - move to 1st collumn
01:04:611 (64611|0,65040|6) - ctrl + j
01:06:111 (66111|4) - move to 1st collumn
01:06:540 - add a note
01:08:254 (68254|3) - move to left by 1
01:10:611 (70611|1,70826|2,71040|3) - ctrl + h
01:20:254 - add a note
[HD]
00:03:754 (3754|2,3969|3,4183|4) - ctrl + h for pitch
00:07:183 (7183|5,7397|0,7611|3,7826|4,8040|6,8254|0) - suggestion
http://puu.sh/8lAEM.jpg00:13:826 (13826|4) - delete
00:14:040 (14040|5,14254|1,14469|3) - suggestion
http://puu.sh/8lAHH.jpg looks more clean
00:17:254 - add a note
00:18:111 (18111|6,18326|0) - ctrl + h
00:18:540 (18540|2) - move to 2nd collumn
00:18:754 (18754|6,18754|4) - snap end to double line
00:24:540 (24540|4,24754|3,24969|5) - suggestion
http://puu.sh/8lASe.jpg00:26:790 (26790|0,26897|5) - how about this
http://puu.sh/8lAUH.jpg00:28:076 (28076|0) - not necessary i guess , for consistency too
00:28:611 - add a note at 5th
00:28:826 (28826|4) - move to 3rd
00:29:361 (29361|6,29469|3) - like this?
http://puu.sh/8lAZu.jpg00:29:897 - add a note
00:31:290 (31290|1,31397|3) - move this down by 1/4 divisor
00:34:397 (34397|4,34397|3,34504|6,34504|5,34611|4,34719|5,34826|4,34826|0,34826|1,34933|3) - suggestion
http://puu.sh/8lB5X.jpg00:35:040 - add a note
00:36:111 (36111|4) - move to 6th
00:37:397 (37397|2,37826|3) - move to left by 1
00:38:254 (38254|0) - mvoe to 4th
00:40:611 (40611|6) - move to 1st
00:43:611 - add a note
00:47:254 (47254|6,47361|4) - move down by 1/4 divisor
00:48:111 (48111|0,48219|6) - delete , not necessary to 3 notes here
00:48:540 (48540|6) - ^
00:51:969 (51969|5) - move to 3?
00:54:969 (54969|3,55183|6,55397|5) - suggestion
http://puu.sh/8lBgW.jpg00:57:219 (57219|0) - move to 2nd collumn
01:01:826 (61826|3) - move it here 01:01:719
01:06:326 - add a note
01:06:540 - ^
01:07:076 - add a note
01:07:290 (67290|3,67504|1) - delete , no sound
01:08:790 (68790|1) - ^
01:11:254 - add a note
01:14:897 (74897|1,75004|2,75111|3) - ctrl + j and move to left by 1 collumn
01:16:933 (76933|5) - delete
01:17:790 (77790|2) - delete
01:19:719 (79719|5) - delete
01:20:040 - add a note
01:20:254 - ^
01:21:111 (81111|5) - mvoe to 4th
[MX]
00:01:611 (1611|1,1611|5) - better snap this hold end to 00:03:969
00:03:969 (3969|0) - delete
00:16:397 (16397|5) - change to normal note
00:18:754 (18754|0,19826|5) - end these holds at 00:20:469
00:22:183 (22183|5) - end hold at 00:23:254
00:25:183 (25183|5,25397|3,26040|2,26254|3,26469|5) - delete , no sound
00:42:111 - add a note for cymbal
00:53:469 (53469|0) - move to 5th collumn
00:53:897 (53897|4) - delete