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DJPop
I posted what I've heard.

~Normal~
From 00:01:990 to 00:17:764 - use 1/3 snap
00:21:910 (4) - on red tick
00:37:398 (4) - ^
00:45:690 (3,4) - use 1/3 snap
01:18:506 (1) - end on right red tick

~Hard~
00:18:007 (2) - use 1/4 snap
00:21:829 (4) - on right red tick
00:21:991 (5) - on right blue tick
00:33:698 (5) - on red tick
00:35:894 (3,4) - use 1/3 snap
00:37:438 (2) - on right red tick
00:37:601 (3) - on right blue tick
00:41:178 (1) - sounds weird, should not snap by 1/3
00:26:056 (5) - new combo
00:38:251 (5) - ^
00:39:227 (9) - ^
00:46:707 (1,1,1) - remove new combo
00:47:682 (1,1,1) - ^
01:03:777 (1) - since this note, use 1/4 snaps as the primary
01:17:687 (25) - new combo
01:18:506 (1) - end on right red tick


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Topic Starter
AngelHoney
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Gens
[General]
  1. You'll definitely need an easier difficulty.
  2. Cut the mp3, at the end there's a gap of silence of about 30 seconds.
  3. Capitalize the source properly and erase the tag, since it's already used in source.
  4. Delete "o2jam - Fantazindy (AngelHoney).osb" and full submit.
[Normal+]
  1. Add Kiai like in Hard.
01:08:348 - The break would feel better (musically speaking) if it ended here. In other words, delete 01:07:449 (1,2,3). Also, try using the normal sampleset instead of soft here.
01:11:954 (1) - Storyboard a 2x warning please.

[Hard]
  1. Raise stack leniency a bit...
  2. Disable countdown here too? I know it won't make any difference, just to evade some problems.
00:41:178 (1) - Doesn't sounds good at all.
01:06:550 (1) - Random 2x section...?
01:08:348 (1) - Doesn't sounds good at all, maybe it's because you used 1/8 snap.
01:11:954 (1 and on) - Maybe extend each slider to the nearest white/red tick?

~ ~ ~

Mmm, yes, I think that's it. O2Jam~
BananasGoMoo
[Normal+]
I really like this map :P
00:22:154 (6) - i think this should be a slider.
00:25:568 (3) - This too, maybe.
00:49:161 (1,2,3,5,6,7,8) - too repetitive imo, as well as the next combo :o

[Hard]
01:32:008 - this section ahead is kinda confusing because you change between slider speeds a lot.

+Star
Topic Starter
AngelHoney

Gens wrote:

[General]
  1. You'll definitely need an easier difficulty.Maybe...i will..
  2. Cut the mp3, at the end there's a gap of silence of about 30 seconds.i think its ok..
  3. Capitalize the source properly and erase the tag, since it's already used in source.fix
  4. Delete "o2jam - Fantazindy (AngelHoney).osb" and full submit.fix
[Normal+]
  1. Add Kiai like in Hard.fix
01:08:348 - The break would feel better (musically speaking) if it ended here. In other words, delete 01:07:449 (1,2,3). Also, try using the normal sampleset instead of soft here.fix
01:11:954 (1) - Storyboard a 2x warning please.i dont know SB.... :oops:

[Hard]
  1. Raise stack leniency a bit...???
  2. Disable countdown here too? I know it won't make any difference, just to evade some problems.i think its ok..
00:41:178 (1) - Doesn't sounds good at all.fix
01:06:550 (1) - Random 2x section...? ???
01:08:348 (1) - Doesn't sounds good at all, maybe it's because you used 1/8 snap.fix
01:11:954 (1 and on) - Maybe extend each slider to the nearest white/red tick?fix

~ ~ ~

Mmm, yes, I think that's it. O2Jam~BG is RYO...
Thank you ~ :) :)
Topic Starter
AngelHoney
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
jericho2442
will mod soon, although i wanna make a diff XD, if you dont mind i will get you an easy and an insane whipped up or just an insane? your choice, just saying i want to make a diff if you would allow me :P
Topic Starter
AngelHoney

jericho2442 wrote:

will mod soon, although i wanna make a diff XD, if you dont mind i will get you an easy and an insane whipped up or just an insane? your choice, just saying i want to make a diff if you would allow me :P
Yes. Please make it.m(_ _)m :) :)
jericho2442
phew ok this was not easy to map, heres the complete insane map but it aint hitsounded yet, i will need a lil more time to do that, also making a storyboard so gotta finish that too ;)

simply just take all the files out of this zip folder and put them into the folder for this song to add my difficulty :)
Download: Fantazindy map.zip
Topic Starter
AngelHoney

jericho2442 wrote:

phew ok this was not easy to map, heres the complete insane map but it aint hitsounded yet, i will need a lil more time to do that, also making a storyboard so gotta finish that too ;)

simply just take all the files out of this zip folder and put them into the folder for this song to add my difficulty :)
[attachment=0:24a3d]Fantazindy map.zip[/attachment:24a3d]
coooooooooooooool!!
jericho2442
ok insane fully hitsounded and a few problems fixed, will finish SB off after a break, but wow what a wierd song for timing, ive had to use 1/4 and 1/6 in different area's to get this to sound good lol XD

Download: Ryo - Fantazindy (AngelHoney) [jericho2442s Fantasy].osu

do not kudo me for map update's or maps ;)

EDIT: oh and dont worry i will SB you some x2 warnings into your maps for you ;)
Topic Starter
AngelHoney

jericho2442 wrote:

ok insane fully hitsounded and a few problems fixed, will finish SB off after a break, but wow what a wierd song for timing, ive had to use 1/4 and 1/6 in different area's to get this to sound good lol XD

[attachment=0:f5b58]Ryo - Fantazindy (AngelHoney) [jericho2442s Fantasy].osu[/attachment:f5b58]

do not kudo me for map update's or maps ;)

EDIT: oh and dont worry i will SB you some x2 warnings into your maps for you ;)
lol...
jericho2442
ok insane 100% done, SB 100% done
EDIT: named it wrong >_>, anyway fix is in this update :) remember to deleate the old ver of my map when you put this one in
Download: Fantazindy map.zip

will do easy diff as soon as i can
Topic Starter
AngelHoney
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Hiromi_Yuasa
支持下~咱也喜欢这个曲
ZHAO YU
moe~moe~DK is coming~XD
Joyeden
O2的东东~~~不错不错
bbccdd
shine shot! :) 大赏!
tale_c
So hard~TOT
ccbp
这曲子不适合做map;而且你还没找到做这类曲子的窍门。
abcde1234qaz
加油吧.
Cyril Scarlet
Shoot ☆  :P
jericho2442
ahhhh finally easy is done, enjoy :D , if you want the SB on your maps just tell me too ;)

Download: Ryo - Fantazindy (AngelHoney) [jericho2442's Easy].osu
Topic Starter
AngelHoney

jericho2442 wrote:

ahhhh finally easy is done, enjoy :D , if you want the SB on your maps just tell me too ;)

[attachment=0:1c573]Ryo - Fantazindy (AngelHoney) [jericho2442's Easy].osu[/attachment:1c573]
Yes!i need SB...on my maps....can you... :P :P

thx for your easy diff~
jericho2442
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Download: Fantazindy map.zip
Topic Starter
AngelHoney

jericho2442 wrote:

put these files inside this zip into your song folder ;)

[attachment=0:37dfe]Fantazindy map.zip[/attachment:37dfe]

enjoy the SB :)
thank you very much!!! :) :)
abalee
SB is good.
others are not access to my rankable standard. sorry.
Topic Starter
AngelHoney

abalee wrote:

SB is good.
others are not access to my rankable standard. sorry.
:( :(
jericho2442
hmm yea all the diffs are tricky, i admit i even went all out with mine hahahaha, but i had to to make it harder than [Hard]
maybe you would be better going for approved? dunno try asking a few more ppl about it ;)

if needed though i can make my diff a bit easier ;)
Topic Starter
AngelHoney

jericho2442 wrote:

hmm yea all the diffs are tricky, i admit i even went all out with mine hahahaha, but i had to to make it harder than [Hard]
maybe you would be better going for approved? dunno try asking a few more ppl about it ;)

if needed though i can make my diff a bit easier ;)
i think your diffs is ok... :D

maybe my diffs...need further modding.. :?

(and ...my english is so poor... i dont know how PM to MAT/BAT... :o
Armin
[jericho2442's Easy]

00:05:884 (1) - Ugly slider o.o make it better:

00:09:779 (1,2) Make them symmetrical
00:31:666 (Break) This is a short break, you can remove it
00:46:542 (1) Spacing
00:49:161 (1) Stack this perfectly with the end of the previous slider
01:01:645 & 01:02:620 (Time section) These time section are on the breaks. These are unnecessary, so you can remove them.
01:11:954 (6) Add another repeat then move 1/4 later the spinner (and make it shorter of another 1/4)
01:34:633 (4) Add a clap

[Normal+]

There aren't may hitsounds; download the .osu file at the end of the post

00:23:129 (1) Spacing
00:45:081 (1) Align with the previous (5)
00:18:129 (2) 1/6 back (use the 1/3 BSD)
00:33:739 (2) As above

[jericho2442's Fantasy]

All fine, just:
to 00:40:528 (5) - 00:48:983 (8) Some of these hitobjects are not snapped! Fix it manually and don't use the command Resnap all the notes, because there are hitobjects in 1/3 and 1/4 together
01:35:383 (5) Clap at the start+clap at the end
02:14:008 (5) Finish

[Hard]

01:32:383 (2) This slider is very hard to hit because the the start is hidden by the prevous slider. Try to change it
01:33:133 (2) As above
01:33:883 (2) As above
01:34:633 (2) As above
01:37:070 (Break) This is a short break, you should remove it

@_@ starred!

Download: Ryo - Fantazindy (AngelHoney) [Normal+].osu
jericho2442

Armin wrote:

[jericho2442's Easy]

00:05:884 (1) - Ugly slider o.o make it better: i kno, im horrid at making curves >_>, bak to my style :P
00:09:779 (1,2) Make them symmetrical fixed
00:31:666 (Break) This is a short break, you can remove it fixed
00:46:542 (1) Spacing i dont see the problem, a few combo's before this spacing changed closer ;)
00:49:161 (1) Stack this perfectly with the end of the previous slider fixed
01:01:645 & 01:02:620 (Time section) These time section are on the breaks. These are unnecessary, so you can remove them.fixed
01:11:954 (6) Add another repeat then move 1/4 later the spinner (and make it shorter of another 1/4) fixed
01:34:633 (4) Add a clap



[jericho2442's Fantasy]

All fine, just:
to 00:40:528 (5) - 00:48:983 (8 Some of these hitobjects are not snapped! Fix it manually and don't use the command Resnap all the notes, because there are hitobjects in 1/3 and 1/4 together 00:40:203 - from here its 1/3. 00:42:153 - here we go 1/4, 00:45:323 - here its 1/6. so using them, there is no unsnapped notes, but yea horrid beat timing on this song :/
01:35:383 (5) Clap at the start+clap at the end) fixed
02:14:008 (5) Finish fixed



@_@ starred!
thanks and srry you found so many probs. kinda got these diffs made fast, (2 diffs and a SB in 2 days >_>) XD

Download: Ryo - Fantazindy (AngelHoney) [jericho2442's Easy].osu

Download: Ryo - Fantazindy (AngelHoney) [jericho2442's Fantasy].osu

Mok
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Topic Starter
AngelHoney
All fix~ :) :)
Mystearica
简单看了一下, 比上次有进步了, 可是感觉还是有些乱.

[Hard]

这足够Insane

开头的clap很响, 可以考虑减音量或者除掉
有很多地方你用的音量都很低, 基本听不到声音, 请加大点.

Slider Velocity 2.00 比较恐怖, 但不改也好 (BPM高到爆炸)

[Fantasy]

这排的是太直线了点吧...

音效也下的很不好听 ;_;

[Normal+]

00:18:170 (2,3) - 这里听起来怪
00:25:568 (3) - 突然clap o.o
00:29:959 (1,2,3) - 感觉像L4D2里面的AK47 XD, 这样用clap不太好听
00:37:520 (4,5,6) - 为什么突然很低音?

其它先不找了...

其实Normal类应该简单点吧, 1/4 -> 1/2, 1/6 -> 1/3, 虽然是+

00:18:170 (2,3) -

[Easy]

开头的clap也不是很fit...

这些图最大问题是音效, timing没有O2那个东西没办法查. 排法也可以好一点, 特别是那人给你作的难度, 基本全是直线, 这样很不好看.

加油吧~
Topic Starter
AngelHoney

Mystearica wrote:

简单看了一下, 比上次有进步了, 可是感觉还是有些乱.

[Hard]

这足够Insane

开头的clap很响, 可以考虑减音量或者除掉
有很多地方你用的音量都很低, 基本听不到声音, 请加大点.

Slider Velocity 2.00 比较恐怖, 但不改也好 (BPM高到爆炸) (很多地方的音效都改了下 包括音量
[Fantasy]

这排的是太直线了点吧...(這.....這BPM再各種變化型..沒可能存活了吧...

音效也下的很不好听 ;_; (我怎麼覺得很棒....lol

[Normal+]

00:18:170 (2,3) - 这里听起来怪
00:25:568 (3) - 突然clap o.o
00:29:959 (1,2,3) - 感觉像L4D2里面的AK47 XD, 这样用clap不太好听
00:37:520 (4,5,6) - 为什么突然很低音?

其它先不找了...

其实Normal类应该简单点吧, 1/4 -> 1/2, 1/6 -> 1/3, 虽然是+(適當的做了修改 至於就一處1/6 一處1/4吧...這問題我覺得影響不大 ~ :)
[Easy]

开头的clap也不是很fit...

这些图最大问题是音效, timing没有O2那个东西没办法查. 排法也可以好一点, 特别是那人给你作的难度, 基本全是直线, 这样很不好看.lol

加油吧~謝謝~
thank you~
Lissette
you don't need O2jam in tags, is already in source
cut the mp3

Normal+
00:42:154 (4) - remove and place a note here 00:42:398 -
01:11:944 - put a warning for that change of velocity
01:42:508 (1) - put a slider, end point at 01:43:070 , remove (2)
01:49:258 (2) - this spacing maybe confuse some ppl, stack (2) under prev (1)

Hard
00:05:884 (1,2,3,4,5) - repeat (1) and remove (3) - sounds better, imo
00:09:779 (1,2,3,4,5) - same, i mean make it sound like ^ adding and removing notes
00:13:673 (1,2,3,4,5) - same ^
00:18:007 (2) - make it end at the prev blue tick and repeat
00:33:739 - add note
00:42:154 (1) - remove?
02:03:508 (9) - new combo
02:06:508 (9) - ^

jericho2442's Easy
01:11:954 (6) - i'm not sure about this slider @.@

jericho2442's Fantasy
check with AIMod, there are objects that are not snnaped, fix manually
01:06:213 (6) - i suggest remove this note
01:11:606 (10) - ^

Nice SB ^^
Star
Topic Starter
AngelHoney
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
jericho2442

Lissette wrote:

cut the mp3 i will take care of that if you want angel honey



jericho2442's Easy
01:11:954 (6) - i'm not sure about this slider @.@ it looks hard but all you have to do is stay in one place, so it sould be fine

jericho2442's Fantasy
check with AIMod, there are objects that are not snnaped, fix manually fixed but .....wierd, on my pc they aint unsnapped yet aimod said they was O_o, ahh well nvm :), thanks
01:06:213 (6) - i suggest remove this note nah i dont like how it sounds with it gone
01:11:606 (10) - ^^

Nice SB ^^
Star
thanks for mod. heres the update
Download: Ryo - Fantazindy (AngelHoney) [jericho2442's Fantasy].osu
jericho2442
here's the SB'd warning, and cut mp3 :)

Download: update.zip
Topic Starter
AngelHoney

jericho2442 wrote:

here's the SB'd warning, and cut mp3 :)

[attachment=0:03b86]update.zip[/attachment:03b86]
Thank you very much~ :) :)

m(_ _)m
Hanyuu
Star i like :)

go go
DJPop
Re-mod by requested.
I always forgot what I've pointed out before =P


~jericho2442's Easy~
00:11:726 (2) - remove sliderwhistle
00:33:372 (1) - move down 1 grid (Lv3)
00:46:542 (1) - ^

~Normal+~
01:45:133 (4) - move up 1 grid (Lv3)
01:46:633 (8) - ^
01:48:508 (1) - use normal hitsound, add hitwhistle+hitfinish
01:49:258 (2) - use normal hitsound
01:50:008 (1) - use normal hitsound, add hitfinish
02:16:633 (1) - remove new combo
02:20:195 (1) - ^

~jericho2442's Fantasy~
00:03:937 (7) - new combo
00:08:805 (7) - ^
00:56:956 to 01:16:561 - D:
01:35:945 (1) - remove new combo
01:36:508 (7) - new combo

~Hard~
00:30:934 (5) - new combo
00:34:837 (3) - silence the slidertick
00:35:934 (3,4) - 1/3 snap
01:04:753 to 01:11:954 - 1/4 snap
01:53:008 (1) - remove new combo
01:53:570 (4) - new combo
02:11:008 to 02:13:400 - 1/4 snap
02:14:008 (1) - silence this spinner
02:16:445 - remove Kiai time
02:16:633 (1) - remove new combo
02:20:195 (1) - ^ (Optional)


Already starred.
Topic Starter
AngelHoney

DJPop wrote:

Re-mod by requested.
I always forgot what I've pointed out before =P


~jericho2442's Easy~
00:11:726 (2) - remove sliderwhistle
00:33:372 (1) - move down 1 grid (Lv3)
00:46:542 (1) - ^

~Normal+~
01:45:133 (4) - move up 1 grid (Lv3)
01:46:633 (8) - ^
01:48:508 (1) - use normal hitsound, add hitwhistle+hitfinish
01:49:258 (2) - use normal hitsound
01:50:008 (1) - use normal hitsound, add hitfinish
02:16:633 (1) - remove new combo
02:20:195 (1) - ^

~jericho2442's Fantasy~
00:03:937 (7) - new combo
00:08:805 (7) - ^
00:56:956 to 01:16:561 - D:
01:35:945 (1) - remove new combo
01:36:508 (7) - new combo

~Hard~
00:30:934 (5) - new combo
00:34:837 (3) - silence the slidertick
00:35:934 (3,4) - 1/3 snap
01:04:753 to 01:11:954 - 1/4 snap
01:53:008 (1) - remove new combo
01:53:570 (4) - new combo
02:11:008 to 02:13:400 - 1/4 snap
02:14:008 (1) - silence this spinner
02:16:445 - remove Kiai time
02:16:633 (1) - remove new combo
02:20:195 (1) - ^ (Optional)


Already starred.
Thank you so much :) :)
Cyril Scarlet
Oh ! 40 STAR !

Fight ~ (●´ω`●)
Topic Starter
AngelHoney
(´・ω・`)
Beuchi
Hi hi~ :)

Here are some suggestions for your map. Of couorse you don't have to change them if you don't agree with me :P

Let's go!!

~All Diffs~
- Remove "O2jam" from Tags, it's on Source already.
- Uhhh... such a weird timing (as weird as the song's rythm, but it's cool :P) but jericho's diffs have 3 different sections with 123,00 bpm, please delete them and keep the first, as Angel's diffs :3

~jericho2442's Easy~
- The storyboard in this diff keeps playing when the map ends, please mark it "Diff Specific" on the rest diffs.

01:11:954 (6) - Wow, this is so unexpected... Maybe make a warning to this?

~Normal+~
01:11:954 (1) - Put the SB warning a bit earlier :3
01:36:508 (1,2,3,4) - Reverse Horizontally?
02:09:133 (4,1) - A bit offscreen.

~jericho2442's Fantasy~
From 00:56:956 (1) to 01:16:663 (1) - WTH! This is too crazy :S Decrease spacing please? xD
01:50:008 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Overlap (3)'s and (6)'s in the center?
02:05:289 (8,9,10,11) - Fix spacing.

~Hard~
01:02:802 (1) - I find this spinner too much x_x
02:07:258 (5,6) - Flip these horizontally, there's a big jump between (4) and (5).

Cool song!! *star*
Topic Starter
AngelHoney

Beuchi-chan wrote:

Hi hi~ :)

Here are some suggestions for your map. Of couorse you don't have to change them if you don't agree with me :P

Let's go!!

~All Diffs~
- Remove "O2jam" from Tags, it's on Source already.
- Uhhh... such a weird timing (as weird as the song's rythm, but it's cool :P) but jericho's diffs have 3 different sections with 123,00 bpm, please delete them and keep the first, as Angel's diffs :3

~jericho2442's Easy~
- The storyboard in this diff keeps playing when the map ends, please mark it "Diff Specific" on the rest diffs.

01:11:954 (6) - Wow, this is so unexpected... Maybe make a warning to this?

~Normal+~
01:11:954 (1) - Put the SB warning a bit earlier :3
01:36:508 (1,2,3,4) - Reverse Horizontally?
02:09:133 (4,1) - A bit offscreen.

~jericho2442's Fantasy~
From 00:56:956 (1) to 01:16:663 (1) - WTH! This is too crazy :S Decrease spacing please? xD
01:50:008 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Overlap (3)'s and (6)'s in the center?
02:05:289 (8,9,10,11) - Fix spacing.

~Hard~
01:02:802 (1) - I find this spinner too much x_x
02:07:258 (5,6) - Flip these horizontally, there's a big jump between (4) and (5).

Cool song!! *star*
Thank you so much~ :) :)
All fix...Wait jericho2442'srespond...
jericho2442

DJPop wrote:

Re-mod by requested.
I always forgot what I've pointed out before =P


~jericho2442's Easy~
00:11:726 (2) - remove sliderwhistle fixed
00:33:372 (1) - move down 1 grid (Lv3) fixed
00:46:542 (1) - ^ fixed


~jericho2442's Fantasy~
00:03:937 (7) - new combo no
00:08:805 (7) - ^ no
00:56:956 to 01:16:561 - D: ya its hard :D
01:35:945 (1) - remove new combo no
01:36:508 (7) - new combo no



Already starred.

Beuchi-chan wrote:

Hi hi~ :)





~All Diffs~
- Uhhh... such a weird timing (as weird as the song's rythm, but it's cool :P) but jericho's diffs have 3 different sections with 123,00 bpm, please delete them and keep the first, as Angel's diffs :3 fixed

~jericho2442's Easy~
- The storyboard in this diff keeps playing when the map ends, please mark it "Diff Specific" on the rest diffs......lol it allready is

01:11:954 (6) - Wow, this is so unexpected... Maybe make a warning to this? you just have to stand in one place >_>


~jericho2442's Fantasy~
From 00:56:956 (1) to 01:16:663 (1) - WTH! This is too crazy :S Decrease spacing please? xD crazy and epic, i will ONLY change this if it needs to be changed for the map to get ranked
01:50:008 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Overlap (3)'s and (6)'s in the center? no
02:05:289 (8,9,10,11) - Fix spacing. fixed


Cool song!! *star*
very sorry for the late fix ;)
Download: Ryo - Fantazindy (AngelHoney) [jericho2442's Easy].osu

Download: Ryo - Fantazindy (AngelHoney) [jericho2442's Fantasy].osu

EEeee
Map looks good, just uhhh, Why doesn't jericho2442's Fantasy or Hard(maybe) have that Fantazindy warning.png active? at least i think it should be in jericho2242's Fantasy.
Basically, some kind of warning at that insane part in jericho2242's Fantasy

anyways *star
jericho2442

EEeee wrote:

Map looks good, just uhhh, Why doesn't jericho2442's Fantasy or Hard(maybe) have that Fantazindy warning.png active? at least i think it should be in jericho2242's Fantasy.
Basically, some kind of warning at that insane part in jericho2242's Fantasy

anyways *star
aint the HUGE red warning bar what goes across the screen enough to tell ppl its gonna get hard, >_> pretty obv to me it is ;)
DJNightmare
Lol can i make a diff?
Btw. This map is great! Starred!
Topic Starter
AngelHoney

password wrote:

Lol can i make a diff?
Btw. This map is great! Starred!
Thank you so much for lending me a hand, but ....this map have 4 diffs....I think it is enough

Thank you..:( :(
Kytoxid
[General]

You have 3 .osb files, none of which are actually necessary, since your SB is all in the .osu files. Delete and resubmit.
I can't pubble this until someone good at timing confirms the current timing. Still feels weird to me.
Remove "o2jam" as a tag on jericho's difficulties.
Stacking leniency is too low on Hard, and may be too low on jericho's difficulties.
Make countdown consistent across the difficulties.
Add a bit of lead-in?
Make combo colours consistent across the difficulties?
Turn off letterboxing on all diffs.

jericho2442 wrote:

aint the HUGE red warning bar what goes across the screen enough to tell ppl its gonna get hard, >_> pretty obv to me it is ;)
Not to me either, I thought it was just a fancy effect thing.

The first blue combo colour blends too well with the background for approach circles.

[jericho2442's Easy]

01:25:981 - Don't stack 2 timing sections.

SB makes this run far longer than it should, please delete unneeded SB.

[Normal+]

00:49:161 (1) - Volume is too low for too long, and this section is inherently a pain to play.
01:04:753 - Same as before, don't stack 2 timing sections.
01:48:508 - Needs to be earlier. (might be others, I didn't really watch for this)
01:50:195 - Weird place for kiai, move 1/2 back?

[jericho2442's Fantasy]

Volume starts too low, in my opinion.
00:48:983 (8,1) - Hard to see when the 1 lands.
00:56:956 - ...wow. Umm, I'm not sure if this is rankable. At least put in a warning SB? =/
01:22:295 (1,2) - Uh, huh? I dunno what this is following.
01:48:883 - Too short a break.

[Hard]

Same thing here, make sure timing sections start before the note.

00:16:594 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Where does this stack come from? o_O

This wasn't as thorough a mod as I should have done, but these maps seem crazy. Hard feels more like an Insane (man, those streams...) Make sure you check with a BAT about rankability of that section on jericho2442's Fantasy.
Derekku
I said that I would mod this, but I'm going to have to decline for at least the time being. :o

The BPM is definitely incorrect in at least a couple of spots. Skimming through the song, the beats sound unsnapped, even though they aren't, so there's surely a problem.

I'm very uncomfortable trying to mod this, so timing experts/BAT will probably need to check into this.

My apologies. :( :(

I must say, though, that the map is looking neat. 01:11:954 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - <3
Topic Starter
AngelHoney
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Topic Starter
AngelHoney

Derekku Chan wrote:

I said that I would mod this, but I'm going to have to decline for at least the time being. :o

The BPM is definitely incorrect in at least a couple of spots. Skimming through the song, the beats sound unsnapped, even though they aren't, so there's surely a problem.

I'm very uncomfortable trying to mod this, so timing experts/BAT will probably need to check into this.

My apologies. :( :(

I must say, though, that the map is looking neat. 01:11:954 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - <3
lol....
Doomsday
Yes, The timing is off, So I'll try and help you out with that:

First up, add +30 to the offset of all your timing sections

Next, add these BPM's in: (the first one is for your first timing section. the second one is for your second timing section etc)

Also, at 01:15:264, add a timing section, offset = 75,268, BPM = 293.00

-123.10
-123.00
-246.10
-267.00
-160.00

This probably isn't perfect, but it feels better than what you have now
Topic Starter
AngelHoney

Doomsday93 wrote:

Yes, The timing is off, So I'll try and help you out with that:

First up, add +30 to the offset of all your timing sections

Next, add these BPM's in: (the first one is for your first timing section. the second one is for your second timing section etc)

Also, at 01:15:264, add a timing section, offset = 75,268, BPM = 293.00

-123.10
-123.00
-246.10
-267.00
-160.00

This probably isn't perfect, but it feels better than what you have now
I'll try to fix , but...

Also, at 01:15:264, add a timing section, offset = 75,268, BPM = 293.00
no , i think its wrong D:

Thank you so much~ :) :)
CheeseWarlock
[TimingPoints]
2010,489.795918367347,4,2,0,61,1,0
17796,487.80487804878,4,2,0,61,1,0
49201,487.804878048785,4,2,0,61,1,0
64810,447.761194029851,4,2,0,61,1,0
71974,410.958904109589,4,2,0,61,1,0
78549,416.666666666667,4,2,0,61,1,0
86049,375,4,2,0,61,1,0

I would say you shouldn't map to this part 01:22:299 - it sounds to me like it's random noise and not meant to be in time with the music.
Topic Starter
AngelHoney

CheeseWarlock wrote:

[TimingPoints]
2010,489.795918367347,4,2,0,61,1,0
17796,487.80487804878,4,2,0,61,1,0
49201,487.804878048785,4,2,0,61,1,0
64810,447.761194029851,4,2,0,61,1,0
71974,410.958904109589,4,2,0,61,1,0
78549,416.666666666667,4,2,0,61,1,0
86049,375,4,2,0,61,1,0

I would say you shouldn't map to this part 01:22:299 - it sounds to me like it's random noise and not meant to be in time with the music.
cooooooooool !!!

i will fix it !!!

Thank you vvvvvveeeeeerrrrrryyyyyyyyy much!!! :) :) :)
jericho2442

Kytoxid wrote:

[General]


Stacking leniency is too low on Hard, and may be too low on jericho's difficulties.its fine as long as it aint fully down


jericho2442 wrote:

aint the HUGE red warning bar what goes across the screen enough to tell ppl its gonna get hard, >_> pretty obv to me it is ;)
Not to me either, I thought it was just a fancy effect thing. all i can say is, when anybody i kno see a big red warning bar AND a increse in song power, all of them kno its gonna get hard >_>

The first blue combo colour blends too well with the background for approach circles.i will leave the angel honey to pick some combo colours for all the diffs

[jericho2442's Easy]

01:25:981 - Don't stack 2 timing sections.i dont see it
SB makes this run far longer than it should, please delete unneeded SB. fixed


[jericho2442's Fantasy]

Volume starts too low, in my opinion. its fine
00:48:983 (8,1) - Hard to see when the 1 lands.its fine
00:56:956 - ...wow. Umm, I'm not sure if this is rankable. At least put in a warning SB? =/ sigh, tired of ppl complaining about the hardness of it >_> fine i'll make it easier for all you lot, dont complain to me now though if it aint as fun -_-
01:22:295 (1,2) - Uh, huh? I dunno what this is following.....................the drums in the background >_>
01:48:883 - Too short a break.fixed
hopefully you should be happy now ive made it easier, but im REALLY not happy about it, i hate killing the soul of maps

CheeseWarlock wrote:

[TimingPoints]
2010,489.795918367347,4,2,0,61,1,0
17796,487.80487804878,4,2,0,61,1,0
49201,487.804878048785,4,2,0,61,1,0
64810,447.761194029851,4,2,0,61,1,0
71974,410.958904109589,4,2,0,61,1,0
78549,416.666666666667,4,2,0,61,1,0
86049,375,4,2,0,61,1,0

I would say you shouldn't map to this part 01:22:299 - it sounds to me like it's random noise and not meant to be in time with the music.
thanks ive fixed the timing :)

Download: Ryo - Fantazindy (AngelHoney) [jericho2442's Easy].osu

Download: Ryo - Fantazindy (AngelHoney) [jericho2442's Fantasy].osu

Sushi
Seems fine to me.

you have my star.
Shulin
General:

-- Your SB seems to be a few ms early if you could fix that it would be awesome. (If it was intentional then ignore me)
-- I guess the timing is as good as it gets...
-- BG color black.
-- You could move your inheriting sections back so they don't land on notes, not essential though.
-- Maybe add "O2 Jam" to tags (with the space)
-- Try to make your kiai consistent across all difficulties.
-- It would be super awesome if you added a skin to this ^^

Easy:

-- Take "O2jam" out of tags in this difficulty.
-- Don't get a skip button when the difficulty finishes, annoying for new players who don't know that space = skip.
-- Remove letterbox during breaks.

00:49:201 (1) - If you make this visible instead of under the slider it would be easier to hit.
01:22:299 (1,2) - I'm not too sure about these notes, they're not obvious to a new player and the 2nd one doesn't coincide with anything in the music.

Normal +:

-- Remove audio lead in.
-- Add letterbox during breaks.

00:09:846 (1) - Finish or whistle.

00:49:201 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I did lol at this, it keeps breaking my combo ;_;
02:14:049 (9) - Move directly above 02:13:861 (8) -
02:20:049 (1,2) - Stack these it looks neater.

jerico2442's Fantasy:

-- Remove "o2Jam" from tags.

01:00:908 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2) - The overlaps around here concern me a little, I personally don't like click by guessing but no one else seems to have complained so I guess they're fine.
01:50:049 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Overlap again.

Pretty nice, I didn't like the overlaps but I guess that's personal preference.

Insane:

-- Add letterbox to breaks.
-- Remove audio lead in or add it to the other difficulties.
-- A higher stacking leniency might look better here.

01:17:727 (1) - You almost killed the slider ball.
01:44:424 - I found this break a little odd.
02:01:299 (3) - Down two squares.
02:01:674 (4) - Up two squares.

Overall: Nice job with the maps and I love SB. The timing still concerns me a little but better timers than me have looked at it so I guess its okay.

~ Star.
Aoitenshi
I really love this song, you have my star, and, can you add this diff? Please? I will be happy if you will. (Note, Some spacing are off to make a symmetry stream)

Download: Ryo - Fantazindy (AngelHoney) [Aoi's Insane].osu
DJNightmare
Hey angelhoney. can i make my diff here?
PLS IM BEGGING U!!
THIS SONG ROCKS ALOT!
And this beatmap rocks too! :) :D
Topic Starter
AngelHoney

Aoitenshi wrote:

I really love this song, you have my star, and, can you add this diff? Please? I will be happy if you will. (Note, Some spacing are off to make a symmetry stream)
loooooooooool

OK...i will...(because i like your diff :) :)

password wrote:

Hey angelhoney. can i make my diff here?
PLS IM BEGGING U!!
THIS SONG ROCKS ALOT!
And this beatmap rocks too! :) :D

OK you can try it .......
Topic Starter
AngelHoney

Shulin wrote:

General:

-- Your SB seems to be a few ms early if you could fix that it would be awesome. (If it was intentional then ignore me)
-- I guess the timing is as good as it gets...
-- BG color black.
-- You could move your inheriting sections back so they don't land on notes, not essential though.
-- Maybe add "O2 Jam" to tags (with the space) (O2jam is game name....:D
-- Try to make your kiai consistent across all difficulties.
-- It would be super awesome if you added a skin to this ^^(yes i will

Easy:

-- Take "O2jam" out of tags in this difficulty.
-- Don't get a skip button when the difficulty finishes, annoying for new players who don't know that space = skip.
-- Remove letterbox during breaks.

00:49:201 (1) - If you make this visible instead of under the slider it would be easier to hit.
01:22:299 (1,2) - I'm not too sure about these notes, they're not obvious to a new player and the 2nd one doesn't coincide with anything in the music.

Normal +:

-- Remove audio lead in.
-- Add letterbox during breaks.

00:09:846 (1) - Finish or whistle.

00:49:201 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I did lol at this, it keeps breaking my combo ;_;
02:14:049 (9) - Move directly above 02:13:861 (8) -
02:20:049 (1,2) - Stack these it looks neater.

jerico2442's Fantasy:

-- Remove "o2Jam" from tags.

01:00:908 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2) - The overlaps around here concern me a little, I personally don't like click by guessing but no one else seems to have complained so I guess they're fine.
01:50:049 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Overlap again.

Pretty nice, I didn't like the overlaps but I guess that's personal preference.

Insane:

-- Add letterbox to breaks.
-- Remove audio lead in or add it to the other difficulties.
-- A higher stacking leniency might look better here.

01:17:727 (1) - You almost killed the slider ball.
01:44:424 - I found this break a little odd.
02:01:299 (3) - Down two squares.
02:01:674 (4) - Up two squares.

Overall: Nice job with the maps and I love SB. The timing still concerns me a little but better timers than me have looked at it so I guess its okay.

~ Star.
Thank you so much~ :) :)
Wait jericho2442'srespond
DJNightmare
Thank you~
Gonna work on it now =3
Aoitenshi
Reminder:

Guess Diffing doesn't mean to be payed by kudos.

Oh, yeah, updates! I forgot to turn on the kiai on the last part.

Download: Ryo - Fantazindy (AngelHoney) [Aoi's Insane].osu
Aoitenshi
AngelHoney, please don't use this skin, it has a lot of holes, like hitcircles too big... (You can see how the hitcircle is bigger than the trail of slider) Invisible hitcircle (Make them hard to read since the background has the same colour) And Unrelated Failscreen (An Anime girl falling from something, which is not related to fantazindy AT ALL).
Topic Starter
AngelHoney

Aoitenshi wrote:

AngelHoney, please don't use this skin, it has a lot of holes, like hitcircles too big... (You can see how the hitcircle is bigger than the trail of slider) Invisible hitcircle (Make them hard to read since the background has the same colour) And Unrelated Failscreen (An Anime girl falling from something, which is not related to fantazindy AT ALL).
All delete (if you have nice skin ,plz tell me :) :)
DJNightmare
Im done!
Pls take a look =3.

Download: Ryo - Fantazindy (AngelHoney) [Password's Insane].osu
jericho2442

Shulin wrote:

General:

-- Your SB seems to be a few ms early if you could fix that it would be awesome. (If it was intentional then ignore me)
its kinda the way i sb lol

Easy:


00:49:201 (1) - If you make this visible instead of under the slider it would be easier to hit. its easy to hit as it is
01:22:299 (1,2) - I'm not too sure about these notes, they're not obvious to a new player and the 2nd one doesn't coincide with anything in the music.they go with the drum finishes in the song


jerico2442's Fantasy:


01:00:908 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2) - The overlaps around here concern me a little, I personally don't like click by guessing but no one else seems to have complained so I guess they're fine.yup there fine
01:50:049 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Overlap again.thats how i wanted it

Pretty nice, I didn't like the overlaps but I guess that's personal preference.


~ Star.
i will let angelhoney take care of the tags in it
Topic Starter
AngelHoney

password wrote:

Im done!
Pls take a look =3.
i have checked your diff.but,your skill of mapping is....hmm...not very well
there are some unrankable patterns and bad hitsounds in your diff
sorry,i can not add your diff. :( :(
DJNightmare
Rawr, am i that bad?
Tries to improve*
DJNightmare
Pls try again @@
I really want a ranked map now...

Download: Ryo - Fantazindy (AngelHoney) [Password's Insane].osu
Vanmonky
As your request. Sorry for the delay.

Read this first for the icon explanation.
- [?] Asking for a second thought.
- [!] Fatal error. You have to fix this for sure.
- [No icon] Only a suggestion.

[General]
Good map.

[Storyboarding]
1. Well, no offense but those sb strokes are quite odd. For me.
2. The warning SB isn't really cool. Once again, no offense.

[jericho2442's Easy]
1. The volume is too loud.
2. Map the rest of the song until 01:50:049. The section you mapped stops oddly.
00:07:887 (2) - Remove whistle from sliderslide.
00:11:805 (2) - ^
01:11:974 (6) - New combo.
01:22:715 (2) - Remove finish.
01:37:674 (4) - Remove clap.

[Normal+]
Some notes sound odd with the sudden low volume.
00:49:201 - You need some kind of 2x BPM change warning from that point. [?]

[jericho2442's Fantasy]
The volume is a bit too loud.
01:02:127 (2) - Kind of hidden slider.
01:22:715 (2) - Remove finish.
01:36:549 (1) - New combo.

[Insane]
1. Some notes sound odd with the sudden low volume.
2. Use 1/3 beat snap divisor.
00:06:907 (4) - Should end to 00:07:234.
00:10:826 (4) - Should end to 00:11:152.
00:13:765 (1) - Should end to 00:14:091.
00:14:744 (4) - Should end to 00:15:071.
00:46:576 (1) - Spacing error?
01:02:859 - Don't let this section empty.
Star.
Topic Starter
AngelHoney

password wrote:

Pls try again @@
I really want a ranked map now...
im sorry... :( :(
Topic Starter
AngelHoney

VanMoNky wrote:

As your request. Sorry for the delay.

Read this first for the icon explanation.
- [?] Asking for a second thought.
- [!] Fatal error. You have to fix this for sure.
- [No icon] Only a suggestion.

[General]
Good map.

[Storyboarding]
1. Well, no offense but those sb strokes are quite odd. For me.
2. The warning SB isn't really cool. Once again, no offense.

[jericho2442's Easy]
1. The volume is too loud.
2. Map the rest of the song until 01:50:049. The section you mapped stops oddly.
00:07:887 (2) - Remove whistle from sliderslide.
00:11:805 (2) - ^
01:11:974 (6) - New combo.
01:22:715 (2) - Remove finish.
01:37:674 (4) - Remove clap.

[Normal+]
Some notes sound odd with the sudden low volume.
00:49:201 - You need some kind of 2x BPM change warning from that point. [?]

[jericho2442's Fantasy]
The volume is a bit too loud.
01:02:127 (2) - Kind of hidden slider.
01:22:715 (2) - Remove finish.
01:36:549 (1) - New combo.

[Insane]
1. Some notes sound odd with the sudden low volume.
2. Use 1/3 beat snap divisor.
00:06:907 (4) - Should end to 00:07:234.
00:10:826 (4) - Should end to 00:11:152.
00:13:765 (1) - Should end to 00:14:091.
00:14:744 (4) - Should end to 00:15:071.
00:46:576 (1) - Spacing error?
01:02:859 - Don't let this section empty.
Star.
Thank you so much~ :) :)

Wait jericho2442'srespond
jericho2442

VanMoNky wrote:

As your request. Sorry for the delay.

Read this first for the icon explanation.
- [?] Asking for a second thought.
- [!] Fatal error. You have to fix this for sure.
- [No icon] Only a suggestion.

[General]
Good map.

[Storyboarding]
1. Well, no offense but those sb strokes are quite odd. For me. its fine
2. The warning SB isn't really cool. Once again, no offense. its fine

[jericho2442's Easy]
1. The volume is too loud. its fine
2. Map the rest of the song until 01:50:049. The section you mapped stops oddly. no
00:07:887 (2) - Remove whistle from sliderslide.fixed
00:11:805 (2) - ^ fixed
01:11:974 (6) - New combo. fixed
01:22:715 (2) - Remove finish. no
01:37:674 (4) - Remove clap. no


[jericho2442's Fantasy]
The volume is a bit too loud. its fine
01:02:127 (2) - Kind of hidden slider. its fine
01:22:715 (2) - Remove finish. no
01:36:549 (1) - New combo. no
Star.
Download: Ryo - Fantazindy (AngelHoney) [jericho2442's Easy].osu
Topic Starter
AngelHoney
updated :) :)
Topic Starter
AngelHoney

jericho2442 wrote:

[jericho2442's Easy]

00:07:887 (2) - Remove whistle from sliderslide.fixed
You forget to fix it ...but i fixed :D

updated :) :)
DJNightmare
Wahhhhhh~

Oh well. Need to brush up my beatmapping skills...
Topic Starter
AngelHoney

password wrote:

Wahhhhhh~

Oh well. Need to brush up my beatmapping skills...
(︶ε︶メ)
v2b
aaa
Aoitenshi
Well, Time to mod these map.

Jericho's Easy:
1:22:715 (2) - Delete this, I know you want to rhyme it with the SB, but, it's hard to read at first play (And frustrating).

Normal:
0:29:991 - 0:30:478 - Maybe change these 1/4 streams to 1/3 streams? Easier to read cause it rhymes with the song.
0:46:332 (3) - Sounds better if you delete this, easier to read and enjoyable.
1:11:974 - 1:18:549 - 2x Speed is not recommended for normal, they are the deathspot for intermediates. (Even I go surprised and die)

Jericho's Fantasy:
1:22:715 (2) - Delete this, I know you want to rhyme it with the SB, but, it's hard to read at first play (And frustrating).

Insane:
0:46:332 (5) - Sounds better if you delete this, easier to read and enjoyable.
Topic Starter
AngelHoney

Aoitenshi wrote:

Well, Time to mod these map.

Normal:
0:29:991 - 0:30:478 - Maybe change these 1/4 streams to 1/3 streams? Easier to read cause it rhymes with the song.Fixed
0:46:332 (3) - Sounds better if you delete this, easier to read and enjoyable.Fixed
1:11:974 - 1:18:549 - 2x Speed is not recommended for normal, they are the deathspot for intermediates. (Even I go surprised and die) :o :o



Insane:
0:46:332 (5) - Sounds better if you delete this, easier to read and enjoyable. :o :o
:) :) :)
gdeath
Random Star~
jericho2442

Aoitenshi wrote:

Well, Time to mod these map.

Jericho's Easy:
1:22:715 (2) - Delete this, I know you want to rhyme it with the SB, but, it's hard to read at first play (And frustrating).you allready kno im gonna say no to this ;)


Jericho's Fantasy:
1:22:715 (2) - Delete this, I know you want to rhyme it with the SB, but, it's hard to read at first play (And frustrating).as above
DaRRi
1 more diff acceptable? :D

Download: Ryo - Fantazindy (AngelHoney) [DaRRi's Another].osu
yaya
best diff
ignorethis
wow star for darri and the map :D
Topic Starter
AngelHoney

DaRRi MIx wrote:

1 more diff acceptable? :D
hmm....好吧...
貌似顏色要統一什麽的...還有一些其他細節(包括tag)也是..再改下吧 (我先傳上了
Kytoxid
Nice MAT dropping by to remind you that 0.2 stack leniency is unrankable, and Darri's diff needs his name in the tags.

(no kudosu please)

Bai~
DaRRi
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
tsuka
wth , the best diffi not allow to be accepted xD
Doomsday
'tis a shame. I liked Darri's diff

Blue = design/minor issues. you do not have to change these if you don't want to.
Orange = moderate issues. it would be best if you change these.
Red = major issues. you need to change these .

  1. Timing looks good (I trust CheeseWarlocks' timing)
  2. I'm not sure what people have told you, but from what I know, the tags/source should be the same for all diffs. In other words, put "jericho2442 aoitenshi" in the tags for all diffs
[JERICHO2442'S EASY]

Looks good

[NORMAL+]

Even though this is a Normal+, it would still be better if you make this diff easier and change it to just a Normal. Just to give the map a better difficulty balance.

01:11:974 (1) - Speedup's in a normal are a bit much. I would remove this.

[JERICHO2442'S FANTASY]

01:00:908 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I can't read this while playing, because of how it all overlaps with each other. I need luck to get through it. Is there a better was you could set these out so they are easier to read?
01:04:688 (8,1) - After a massive stream like that, a little jump like these will make pretty much any unaware player miss. you should close this gap up.

[INSANE]

Seems fine

[AOI'S INSANE]

<3 this difficulty

Not sure what other people will think of that massive stream at 00:49:201, but I think it works fine.

Good. It works muuuch better now it has some decent timing :)

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Aoitenshi

Doomsday93 wrote:

'tis a shame.
[AOI'S INSANE]

<3 this difficulty

Not sure what other people will think of that massive stream at 00:49:201, but I think it works fine.

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I FC that ridiculous streams, also that's why it's called INSANE...

Anyway, Yay for darri's making a diff. Long time no see it :D
jericho2442

Doomsday93 wrote:

[JERICHO2442'S FANTASY]

01:00:908 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I can't read this while playing, because of how it all overlaps with each other. I need luck to get through it. Is there a better was you could set these out so they are easier to read? fixed
01:04:688 (8,1) - After a massive stream like that, a little jump like these will make pretty much any unaware player miss. you should close this gap up. fixed


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srry for late fix

Download: Ryo - Fantazindy (AngelHoney) [jericho2442's Fantasy].osu
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