Armin wrote:

[jericho2442's Easy]

00:05:884 (1) - Ugly slider o.o make it better: i kno, im horrid at making curves >_>, bak to my style
00:09:779 (1,2) Make them symmetrical fixed
00:31:666 (Break) This is a short break, you can remove it fixed
00:46:542 (1) Spacing i dont see the problem, a few combo's before this spacing changed closer
00:49:161 (1) Stack this perfectly with the end of the previous slider fixed
01:01:645 & 01:02:620 (Time section) These time section are on the breaks. These are unnecessary, so you can remove them.fixed
01:11:954 (6) Add another repeat then move 1/4 later the spinner (and make it shorter of another 1/4) fixed
01:34:633 (4) Add a clap



[jericho2442's Fantasy]

All fine, just:
to 00:40:528 (5) - 00:48:983 (8 Some of these hitobjects are not snapped! Fix it manually and don't use the command Resnap all the notes, because there are hitobjects in 1/3 and 1/4 together 00:40:203 - from here its 1/3. 00:42:153 - here we go 1/4, 00:45:323 - here its 1/6. so using them, there is no unsnapped notes, but yea horrid beat timing on this song :/
01:35:383 (5) Clap at the start+clap at the end) fixed
02:14:008 (5) Finish fixed



@_@ starred!

Mystearica wrote:

简单看了一下, 比上次有进步了, 可是感觉还是有些乱.

[Hard]

这足够Insane

开头的clap很响, 可以考虑减音量或者除掉
有很多地方你用的音量都很低, 基本听不到声音, 请加大点.

Slider Velocity 2.00 比较恐怖, 但不改也好 (BPM高到爆炸) (很多地方的音效都改了下 包括音量
[Fantasy]

这排的是太直线了点吧...(這.....這BPM再各種變化型..沒可能存活了吧...

音效也下的很不好听 ;_; (我怎麼覺得很棒....lol

[Normal+]

00:18:170 (2,3) - 这里听起来怪
00:25:568 (3) - 突然clap o.o
00:29:959 (1,2,3) - 感觉像L4D2里面的AK47 XD, 这样用clap不太好听
00:37:520 (4,5,6) - 为什么突然很低音?

其它先不找了...

其实Normal类应该简单点吧, 1/4 -> 1/2, 1/6 -> 1/3, 虽然是+(適當的做了修改 至於就一處1/6 一處1/4吧...這問題我覺得影響不大 ~ :)
[Easy]

开头的clap也不是很fit...

这些图最大问题是音效, timing没有O2那个东西没办法查. 排法也可以好一点, 特别是那人给你作的难度, 基本全是直线, 这样很不好看.lol

加油吧~謝謝~

Lissette wrote:

cut the mp3 i will take care of that if you want angel honey



jericho2442's Easy
01:11:954 (6) - i'm not sure about this slider @.@ it looks hard but all you have to do is stay in one place, so it sould be fine

jericho2442's Fantasy
check with AIMod, there are objects that are not snnaped, fix manually fixed but .....wierd, on my pc they aint unsnapped yet aimod said they was O_o, ahh well nvm , thanks
01:06:213 (6) - i suggest remove this note nah i dont like how it sounds with it gone
01:11:606 (10) - ^^

Nice SB ^^
Star

jericho2442 wrote:

here's the SB'd warning, and cut mp3

[attachment=0:03b86]update.zip[/attachment:03b86]

DJPop wrote:

Re-mod by requested.
I always forgot what I've pointed out before =P


~jericho2442's Easy~
00:11:726 (2) - remove sliderwhistle
00:33:372 (1) - move down 1 grid (Lv3)
00:46:542 (1) - ^

~Normal+~
01:45:133 (4) - move up 1 grid (Lv3)
01:46:633 (8) - ^
01:48:508 (1) - use normal hitsound, add hitwhistle+hitfinish
01:49:258 (2) - use normal hitsound
01:50:008 (1) - use normal hitsound, add hitfinish
02:16:633 (1) - remove new combo
02:20:195 (1) - ^

~jericho2442's Fantasy~
00:03:937 (7) - new combo
00:08:805 (7) - ^
00:56:956 to 01:16:561 - D:
01:35:945 (1) - remove new combo
01:36:508 (7) - new combo

~Hard~
00:30:934 (5) - new combo
00:34:837 (3) - silence the slidertick
00:35:934 (3,4) - 1/3 snap
01:04:753 to 01:11:954 - 1/4 snap
01:53:008 (1) - remove new combo
01:53:570 (4) - new combo
02:11:008 to 02:13:400 - 1/4 snap
02:14:008 (1) - silence this spinner
02:16:445 - remove Kiai time
02:16:633 (1) - remove new combo
02:20:195 (1) - ^ (Optional)


Already starred.

Beuchi-chan wrote:

Hi hi~

Here are some suggestions for your map. Of couorse you don't have to change them if you don't agree with me

Let's go!!

~All Diffs~
- Remove "O2jam" from Tags, it's on Source already.
- Uhhh... such a weird timing (as weird as the song's rythm, but it's cool ) but jericho's diffs have 3 different sections with 123,00 bpm, please delete them and keep the first, as Angel's diffs :3

~jericho2442's Easy~
- The storyboard in this diff keeps playing when the map ends, please mark it "Diff Specific" on the rest diffs.

01:11:954 (6) - Wow, this is so unexpected... Maybe make a warning to this?

~Normal+~
01:11:954 (1) - Put the SB warning a bit earlier :3
01:36:508 (1,2,3,4) - Reverse Horizontally?
02:09:133 (4,1) - A bit offscreen.

~jericho2442's Fantasy~
From 00:56:956 (1) to 01:16:663 (1) - WTH! This is too crazy :S Decrease spacing please? xD
01:50:008 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Overlap (3)'s and (6)'s in the center?
02:05:289 (8,9,10,11) - Fix spacing.

~Hard~
01:02:802 (1) - I find this spinner too much x_x
02:07:258 (5,6) - Flip these horizontally, there's a big jump between (4) and (5).

Cool song!! *star*

DJPop wrote:

Re-mod by requested.
I always forgot what I've pointed out before =P


~jericho2442's Easy~
00:11:726 (2) - remove sliderwhistle fixed
00:33:372 (1) - move down 1 grid (Lv3) fixed
00:46:542 (1) - ^ fixed


~jericho2442's Fantasy~
00:03:937 (7) - new combo no
00:08:805 (7) - ^ no
00:56:956 to 01:16:561 - D: ya its hard
01:35:945 (1) - remove new combo no
01:36:508 (7) - new combo no



Already starred.

Beuchi-chan wrote:

Hi hi~





~All Diffs~
- Uhhh... such a weird timing (as weird as the song's rythm, but it's cool ) but jericho's diffs have 3 different sections with 123,00 bpm, please delete them and keep the first, as Angel's diffs :3 fixed

~jericho2442's Easy~
- The storyboard in this diff keeps playing when the map ends, please mark it "Diff Specific" on the rest diffs......lol it allready is

01:11:954 (6) - Wow, this is so unexpected... Maybe make a warning to this? you just have to stand in one place >_>


~jericho2442's Fantasy~
From 00:56:956 (1) to 01:16:663 (1) - WTH! This is too crazy :S Decrease spacing please? xD crazy and epic, i will ONLY change this if it needs to be changed for the map to get ranked
01:50:008 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Overlap (3)'s and (6)'s in the center? no
02:05:289 (8,9,10,11) - Fix spacing. fixed


Cool song!! *star*

EEeee wrote:

Map looks good, just uhhh, Why doesn't jericho2442's Fantasy or Hard(maybe) have that Fantazindy warning.png active? at least i think it should be in jericho2242's Fantasy.
Basically, some kind of warning at that insane part in jericho2242's Fantasy

anyways *star

password wrote:

Lol can i make a diff?
Btw. This map is great! Starred!

jericho2442 wrote:

aint the HUGE red warning bar what goes across the screen enough to tell ppl its gonna get hard, >_> pretty obv to me it is

Derekku Chan wrote:

I said that I would mod this, but I'm going to have to decline for at least the time being.

The BPM is definitely incorrect in at least a couple of spots. Skimming through the song, the beats sound unsnapped, even though they aren't, so there's surely a problem.

I'm very uncomfortable trying to mod this, so timing experts/BAT will probably need to check into this.

My apologies.

I must say, though, that the map is looking neat. 01:11:954 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - <3

Doomsday93 wrote:

Yes, The timing is off, So I'll try and help you out with that:

First up, add +30 to the offset of all your timing sections

Next, add these BPM's in: (the first one is for your first timing section. the second one is for your second timing section etc)

Also, at 01:15:264, add a timing section, offset = 75,268, BPM = 293.00

-123.10
-123.00
-246.10
-267.00
-160.00

This probably isn't perfect, but it feels better than what you have now

Also, at 01:15:264, add a timing section, offset = 75,268, BPM = 293.00

CheeseWarlock wrote:

[TimingPoints]
2010,489.795918367347,4,2,0,61,1,0
17796,487.80487804878,4,2,0,61,1,0
49201,487.804878048785,4,2,0,61,1,0
64810,447.761194029851,4,2,0,61,1,0
71974,410.958904109589,4,2,0,61,1,0
78549,416.666666666667,4,2,0,61,1,0
86049,375,4,2,0,61,1,0

I would say you shouldn't map to this part 01:22:299 - it sounds to me like it's random noise and not meant to be in time with the music.

Kytoxid wrote:

[General]


Stacking leniency is too low on Hard, and may be too low on jericho's difficulties.its fine as long as it aint fully down

jericho2442 wrote:

aint the HUGE red warning bar what goes across the screen enough to tell ppl its gonna get hard, >_> pretty obv to me it is

Not to me either, I thought it was just a fancy effect thing. all i can say is, when anybody i kno see a big red warning bar AND a increse in song power, all of them kno its gonna get hard >_>

The first blue combo colour blends too well with the background for approach circles.i will leave the angel honey to pick some combo colours for all the diffs

[jericho2442's Easy]

01:25:981 - Don't stack 2 timing sections.i dont see it
SB makes this run far longer than it should, please delete unneeded SB. fixed


[jericho2442's Fantasy]

Volume starts too low, in my opinion. its fine
00:48:983 (8,1) - Hard to see when the 1 lands.its fine
00:56:956 - ...wow. Umm, I'm not sure if this is rankable. At least put in a warning SB? =/ sigh, tired of ppl complaining about the hardness of it >_> fine i'll make it easier for all you lot, dont complain to me now though if it aint as fun -_-
01:22:295 (1,2) - Uh, huh? I dunno what this is following.....................the drums in the background >_>
01:48:883 - Too short a break.fixed

CheeseWarlock wrote:

[TimingPoints]
2010,489.795918367347,4,2,0,61,1,0
17796,487.80487804878,4,2,0,61,1,0
49201,487.804878048785,4,2,0,61,1,0
64810,447.761194029851,4,2,0,61,1,0
71974,410.958904109589,4,2,0,61,1,0
78549,416.666666666667,4,2,0,61,1,0
86049,375,4,2,0,61,1,0

I would say you shouldn't map to this part 01:22:299 - it sounds to me like it's random noise and not meant to be in time with the music.

Aoitenshi wrote:

I really love this song, you have my star, and, can you add this diff? Please? I will be happy if you will. (Note, Some spacing are off to make a symmetry stream)

password wrote:

Hey angelhoney. can i make my diff here?
PLS IM BEGGING U!!
THIS SONG ROCKS ALOT!
And this beatmap rocks too!

Shulin wrote:

General:

-- Your SB seems to be a few ms early if you could fix that it would be awesome. (If it was intentional then ignore me)
-- I guess the timing is as good as it gets...
-- BG color black.
-- You could move your inheriting sections back so they don't land on notes, not essential though.
-- Maybe add "O2 Jam" to tags (with the space) (O2jam is game name....:D
-- Try to make your kiai consistent across all difficulties.
-- It would be super awesome if you added a skin to this ^^(yes i will

Easy:

-- Take "O2jam" out of tags in this difficulty.
-- Don't get a skip button when the difficulty finishes, annoying for new players who don't know that space = skip.
-- Remove letterbox during breaks.

00:49:201 (1) - If you make this visible instead of under the slider it would be easier to hit.
01:22:299 (1,2) - I'm not too sure about these notes, they're not obvious to a new player and the 2nd one doesn't coincide with anything in the music.

Normal +:

-- Remove audio lead in.
-- Add letterbox during breaks.

00:09:846 (1) - Finish or whistle.

00:49:201 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I did lol at this, it keeps breaking my combo ;_;
02:14:049 (9) - Move directly above 02:13:861 (8) -
02:20:049 (1,2) - Stack these it looks neater.

jerico2442's Fantasy:

-- Remove "o2Jam" from tags.

01:00:908 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2) - The overlaps around here concern me a little, I personally don't like click by guessing but no one else seems to have complained so I guess they're fine.
01:50:049 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Overlap again.

Pretty nice, I didn't like the overlaps but I guess that's personal preference.

Insane:

-- Add letterbox to breaks.
-- Remove audio lead in or add it to the other difficulties.
-- A higher stacking leniency might look better here.

01:17:727 (1) - You almost killed the slider ball.
01:44:424 - I found this break a little odd.
02:01:299 (3) - Down two squares.
02:01:674 (4) - Up two squares.

Overall: Nice job with the maps and I love SB. The timing still concerns me a little but better timers than me have looked at it so I guess its okay.

~ Star.

Aoitenshi wrote:

AngelHoney, please don't use this skin, it has a lot of holes, like hitcircles too big... (You can see how the hitcircle is bigger than the trail of slider) Invisible hitcircle (Make them hard to read since the background has the same colour) And Unrelated Failscreen (An Anime girl falling from something, which is not related to fantazindy AT ALL).

Shulin wrote:

General:

-- Your SB seems to be a few ms early if you could fix that it would be awesome. (If it was intentional then ignore me)
its kinda the way i sb lol

Easy:


00:49:201 (1) - If you make this visible instead of under the slider it would be easier to hit. its easy to hit as it is
01:22:299 (1,2) - I'm not too sure about these notes, they're not obvious to a new player and the 2nd one doesn't coincide with anything in the music.they go with the drum finishes in the song


jerico2442's Fantasy:


01:00:908 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2) - The overlaps around here concern me a little, I personally don't like click by guessing but no one else seems to have complained so I guess they're fine.yup there fine
01:50:049 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Overlap again.thats how i wanted it

Pretty nice, I didn't like the overlaps but I guess that's personal preference.


~ Star.

password wrote:

Im done!
Pls take a look =3.

password wrote:

Pls try again @@
I really want a ranked map now...

VanMoNky wrote:

As your request. Sorry for the delay.

Read this first for the icon explanation.
- [?] Asking for a second thought.
- [!] Fatal error. You have to fix this for sure.
- [No icon] Only a suggestion.

[General]
Good map.

[Storyboarding]
1. Well, no offense but those sb strokes are quite odd. For me.
2. The warning SB isn't really cool. Once again, no offense.

[jericho2442's Easy]
1. The volume is too loud.
2. Map the rest of the song until 01:50:049. The section you mapped stops oddly.
00:07:887 (2) - Remove whistle from sliderslide.
00:11:805 (2) - ^
01:11:974 (6) - New combo.
01:22:715 (2) - Remove finish.
01:37:674 (4) - Remove clap.

[Normal+]
Some notes sound odd with the sudden low volume.
00:49:201 - You need some kind of 2x BPM change warning from that point. [?]

[jericho2442's Fantasy]
The volume is a bit too loud.
01:02:127 (2) - Kind of hidden slider.
01:22:715 (2) - Remove finish.
01:36:549 (1) - New combo.

[Insane]
1. Some notes sound odd with the sudden low volume.
2. Use 1/3 beat snap divisor.
00:06:907 (4) - Should end to 00:07:234.
00:10:826 (4) - Should end to 00:11:152.
00:13:765 (1) - Should end to 00:14:091.
00:14:744 (4) - Should end to 00:15:071.
00:46:576 (1) - Spacing error?
01:02:859 - Don't let this section empty.

Star.

VanMoNky wrote:

As your request. Sorry for the delay.

Read this first for the icon explanation.
- [?] Asking for a second thought.
- [!] Fatal error. You have to fix this for sure.
- [No icon] Only a suggestion.

[General]
Good map.

[Storyboarding]
1. Well, no offense but those sb strokes are quite odd. For me. its fine
2. The warning SB isn't really cool. Once again, no offense. its fine

[jericho2442's Easy]
1. The volume is too loud. its fine
2. Map the rest of the song until 01:50:049. The section you mapped stops oddly. no
00:07:887 (2) - Remove whistle from sliderslide.fixed
00:11:805 (2) - ^ fixed
01:11:974 (6) - New combo. fixed
01:22:715 (2) - Remove finish. no
01:37:674 (4) - Remove clap. no


[jericho2442's Fantasy]
The volume is a bit too loud. its fine
01:02:127 (2) - Kind of hidden slider. its fine
01:22:715 (2) - Remove finish. no
01:36:549 (1) - New combo. no

Star.

jericho2442 wrote:

[jericho2442's Easy]

00:07:887 (2) - Remove whistle from sliderslide.fixed

password wrote:

Wahhhhhh~

Oh well. Need to brush up my beatmapping skills...

Aoitenshi wrote:

Well, Time to mod these map.

Normal:
0:29:991 - 0:30:478 - Maybe change these 1/4 streams to 1/3 streams? Easier to read cause it rhymes with the song.Fixed
0:46:332 (3) - Sounds better if you delete this, easier to read and enjoyable.Fixed
1:11:974 - 1:18:549 - 2x Speed is not recommended for normal, they are the deathspot for intermediates. (Even I go surprised and die)



Insane:
0:46:332 (5) - Sounds better if you delete this, easier to read and enjoyable.

Aoitenshi wrote:

Well, Time to mod these map.

Jericho's Easy:
1:22:715 (2) - Delete this, I know you want to rhyme it with the SB, but, it's hard to read at first play (And frustrating).you allready kno im gonna say no to this


Jericho's Fantasy:
1:22:715 (2) - Delete this, I know you want to rhyme it with the SB, but, it's hard to read at first play (And frustrating).as above

DaRRi MIx wrote:

1 more diff acceptable?

1. Timing looks good (I trust CheeseWarlocks' timing)
2. I'm not sure what people have told you, but from what I know, the tags/source should be the same for all diffs. In other words, put "jericho2442 aoitenshi" in the tags for all diffs

Doomsday93 wrote:

'tis a shame.
[AOI'S INSANE]

<3 this difficulty

Not sure what other people will think of that massive stream at 00:49:201, but I think it works fine.

Starred

Doomsday93 wrote:

[JERICHO2442'S FANTASY]

01:00:908 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I can't read this while playing, because of how it all overlaps with each other. I need luck to get through it. Is there a better was you could set these out so they are easier to read? fixed
01:04:688 (8,1) - After a massive stream like that, a little jump like these will make pretty much any unaware player miss. you should close this gap up. fixed


Starred

Doomsday93 wrote:

I'm not sure what people have told you, but from what I know, the tags/source should be the same for all diffs. In other words, put "jericho2442 aoitenshi" in the tags for all diffs

Why was it removed anyway?

blissfulyoshi wrote:

[

jericho2442's Fantasy: (not in my range of skill)
Timing section mod:
01:04:810 - like in normal, you can probably just make the uninherited timing section be 2x BPM like in Aoi's Insane i dont use uninherited timing sections for stuff like that, there for base bpm and offset, inherited is for 2x, kiai, ect
===============================

Lybydose wrote:

Easy:

00:49:201 (1) - this is really unintuitive for an easy difficulty, since the note follows different timing than the previous slider. blame the song -_-

1. Letterboxing is enabled in some difficulties, while disabled on others. Intentional?
2. On all difficulties, you have to wait before the map finishes... with the skip button too. Mind fixing that?
3. Overall, timing felt early by around 10ms... on all sections. Not sure though.

1. I don't understand why stacking is low here... must be raised.

1. The first uninherited section isn't needed. Small thing.

1. The first section is missing here. I believe it must be there regardless if it's used or not to keep the pulse equal on all difficulties.