jericho2442's Easy: fine
Normal+:
Combo mod:
01:29:049 (4) - new combo to be consistent with the next combo
01:42:549 (5) - from this point on, you seem to switch between combos that 4 whole notes long and combos that are 8 combos long, so please keep the sections consistent (personally, I would make every combo 4 combos long)
Timing section mod:
00:49:201 - since the entire area is 2x BPM, y don't you just make the uninherited timing section 2X BPM with soft hitsounds and remove the inherited timing section like in Aoi's Insane (note: if BATs complain about the different BPMs in diffs, then make Aoi's Insane consistent with these lower diffs)
01:42:508 - since you changed the hitsound volume, move a full quarter note back (align with the blue tick)
01:43:258 - ^
01:48:508 - since you changed the hitsound type, move a full quarter note back (align with the blue tick)
01:50:008 - you might want to put this timing section directly on top of the 1, and you should create another timing section with the same hitsound settings but no kiai a quarter note before this timing section
02:20:008 - a quarter note before this timing section create another timing section with the same hitsound settings but no kiai
jericho2442's Fantasy: (not in my range of skill)
Timing section mod:
01:04:810 - like in normal, you can probably just make the uninherited timing section be 2x BPM like in Aoi's Insane
Insane:
Combo mod:
01:09:287 (1) - remove new combo to be consistent with 01:07:496 (4)?
Timing section mod:
01:04:810 - make the section have half of the BPM and the same hitsound settings as the first inherited timing section to remove the first inherited timing section
01:32:383 to 01:35:008 - the timing sections here seem to be snapped to eighth notes, so please move these back to quarter notes if possible
02:15:924 - unneeded timing section, please remove
Aoi's Insane:
Normal mod:
00:49:201 (1) - This long slow stream was one of the most annoying things for me in this map. I doubt you want to change it, but I just wanted to state my opinion.
Timing section mod:
I advise you snap the timing sections that are supposed to follow the end of sliders be snapped to the end of the sliders
Also, any timing section follows a single beat or a slider, move a quarter note back if you can
00:49:202 - unneeded timing section, please remove
01:04:810 - same as insane
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To be truthful, I was not exactly sure of the combo patterns at higher diffs.
Nice map overall. Star. Is this p-bubbled yet?
Normal+:
Combo mod:
01:29:049 (4) - new combo to be consistent with the next combo
01:42:549 (5) - from this point on, you seem to switch between combos that 4 whole notes long and combos that are 8 combos long, so please keep the sections consistent (personally, I would make every combo 4 combos long)
Timing section mod:
00:49:201 - since the entire area is 2x BPM, y don't you just make the uninherited timing section 2X BPM with soft hitsounds and remove the inherited timing section like in Aoi's Insane (note: if BATs complain about the different BPMs in diffs, then make Aoi's Insane consistent with these lower diffs)
01:42:508 - since you changed the hitsound volume, move a full quarter note back (align with the blue tick)
01:43:258 - ^
01:48:508 - since you changed the hitsound type, move a full quarter note back (align with the blue tick)
01:50:008 - you might want to put this timing section directly on top of the 1, and you should create another timing section with the same hitsound settings but no kiai a quarter note before this timing section
02:20:008 - a quarter note before this timing section create another timing section with the same hitsound settings but no kiai
jericho2442's Fantasy: (not in my range of skill)
Timing section mod:
01:04:810 - like in normal, you can probably just make the uninherited timing section be 2x BPM like in Aoi's Insane
Insane:
Combo mod:
01:09:287 (1) - remove new combo to be consistent with 01:07:496 (4)?
Timing section mod:
01:04:810 - make the section have half of the BPM and the same hitsound settings as the first inherited timing section to remove the first inherited timing section
01:32:383 to 01:35:008 - the timing sections here seem to be snapped to eighth notes, so please move these back to quarter notes if possible
02:15:924 - unneeded timing section, please remove
Aoi's Insane:
Normal mod:
00:49:201 (1) - This long slow stream was one of the most annoying things for me in this map. I doubt you want to change it, but I just wanted to state my opinion.
Timing section mod:
I advise you snap the timing sections that are supposed to follow the end of sliders be snapped to the end of the sliders
Also, any timing section follows a single beat or a slider, move a quarter note back if you can
00:49:202 - unneeded timing section, please remove
01:04:810 - same as insane
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To be truthful, I was not exactly sure of the combo patterns at higher diffs.
Nice map overall. Star. Is this p-bubbled yet?