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Cool Joke - UNDO

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EEeee
1,026 posts
Joined July 2008
EEeee
Map looks good, just delete the .osb folder, there is some useless Storyboarding going on, with the "fail-background" file
make sure u delete the osb, and make the "fail-background" isn't doing anything in edit/design

*star
James2250
osu! Alumni
4,059 posts
Joined July 2008
James2250
easy has countdown on halftime while the other 3 have no countdowns
fullmetal does not need to be in tags twice
does stack leniency need to be so far to the left on 2 diff's?

easy:
looks fine

medium:
hp drain is very low
00:42:779 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - move onto white ticks to follow lyrics
00:51:902 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - ^
00:57:516 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
01:02:253 (8) - snap endpoint to white tick
01:03:656 (9) - ^
01:05:235 (1) - start at 01:05:060 end at 01:07:867
01:13:656 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - white ticks
01:17:341 (1) - end on white tick
01:23:832 (1,2,3) - white ticks
01:31:902 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
01:48:393 (10) - new combo
01:53:481 (5) - ^
02:02:077 (3,4) - white ticks
02:08:218 (4) - I wouldn't end with clap

taiko:
*meh* no idea about taiko

collab:
looks nice
Mattoi
58 posts
Joined October 2009
Mattoi
I've made the changes as James2250 said.
[attachment=0:15394]Cool Joke - UNDO (Teta268) [Medium].osu[/attachment:15394]

Hope I help~
anonymous_old
0 posts
Here since the beginning
anonymous_old
MattWin's Easy
SPOILER

Too short, but no errors here.

Medium
SPOILER

00:40:498 (9) : Put a slider here that ends at 00:41:727.
01:11:025 (9) : One grid-space to the left.
01:50:148 (7) : One tick later, (at 01:50:323.)

Fhatii Taiko Futsuu
SPOILER

00:40:148 (8) : Remove this beat.
00:51:025 (27,28) : Forward by 2 ticks, and make them both DON.
00:51:551 (29) : KAT.

Use less sliders in a taiko map.

Collaboration
SPOILER

good.

*SB the names of the people in the collab
arien666
6,271 posts
Joined May 2009
arien666
Another modding for Taiko diff :3

[Fhatii Taiko Futsuu] Taiko mod
00:20:14 ~ 00:32:77 - [Suggestion] I guess this part needs to be Kiai Time part
00:31:37(48) - Set end into 00:32:77
00:34:18 ~ 00:36:99 - [Suggestion] I don't think blank part is good idea... Why don't you add some patterns?
00:40:49(9) - Set end into 00:41:55
00:59:09(44) - Move to 00:58:91
00:59:27(45) - Set end into 01:00:49
01:05:06(55) - Set end into 01:06:28
01:11:37(65) - Set end into 01:12:42
01:39:44(Kiai start) - Move to 01:40:14
02:02:60(167) - Set end into 02:04:35

Okay...
Good luck for you :3
And keep going.

Geez... I gave a star already...
ps. Don't give a kudosu for this reply :3
Doomsday
osu! Alumni
1,960 posts
Joined July 2008
Doomsday
Ok, lets get on with this then

  1. Offset: 8,910 (a little eariler than yours)
  2. Like James2250 has already said, you should remove one of the "fullmetal"'s from the tags. having the same word in the tags twice is pointless.
[MATTWIN'S EASY]

No problems, but this is awfully short. You should map more of the song in this diff if you can

[MEDIUM]

-Lower the tickrate to 1. It sounds better that way to me

00:45:937 (8) - Stack this on the start of (9)?
00:54:358 (4) - Stack this on the start of (5)?
01:05:235 (1) - Move this 1/2 earlier? (and if you do this, make it 1/2 longer
01:25:762 (1) - Make this a whole beat shoter?

[FHATTI TAIKO FUTSUU]

I'm no taiko buff, but this seems fine enough, even though there doesn't seem to be many stacks or streams like the sort i normally see in taiko maps. i guess this isn't intended to be a Taiko Oni map then :P

[COLLABORATION]

00:16:102 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - This sudden spacing change feels awkward to me. You can keep it if you want, I just thought I'd throw that out here.
01:34:348 (2,1) - awkward-feeling jump. with all those stacks going on reading a rather sudden jump like this is a bit jarring. Perhaps close this gap up
03:56:804 (4) - Why not just change this slider for a hitcircle?

Nice map. I wasn't expecting much to be honest, so its a nice little surprise. :)

Starred
Mattoi
58 posts
Joined October 2009
Mattoi
Well okay, as you requested, there is the SB stuff
[attachment=0:645d9]mattwinsb.png[/attachment:645d9]
[attachment=1:645d9]tearasb.png[/attachment:645d9]
[attachment=2:645d9]bminsb.png[/attachment:645d9]

I'll post Teta268 and Fhatii Taiko Futsuu later.

About the .osu files you already have them.
Mattoi
58 posts
Joined October 2009
Mattoi
[attachment=1:0e460]fhatiisb.png[/attachment:0e460]
[attachment=0:0e460]tetasb.png[/attachment:0e460]

3 attachments per post -.-
bmin11
5,438 posts
Joined October 2008
bmin11
All fixed. I still don't have the SB you told me before

Download: Cool Joke - UNDO (Teta268) [Collaboration].osu
Kytoxid
osu! Alumni
1,369 posts
Joined April 2009
Kytoxid
[General]

Delete the .osb.
Easy and Medium have unrankably low stack leniency.
MattWin's Easy is the only diff with countdown enabled.

[MattWin's Easy]

00:39:095 (2) - I don't think it looks very good to have a hitcircle partially below a slider.

Ends a bit too abruptly, I'd recommend mapping a bit more.

[Medium]

00:30:323 (6,7) - Spacing.
01:02:253 (8) - Move this to the left a bit so that 5,6,7,8 form a diamond?
01:11:025 (9) - Slightly out of line for a square.
01:11:727 - Break seems a bit short; warning arrows appear the instant the break starts. Consider making 10 a slider, and removing the break.
01:25:762 (1) - End this 1/2 later.
01:55:937 - Random break, doesn't fit. Why have breaks in kiai, the most epic part of the song? :P
02:02:604 (4) - Doesn't end neatly on the stack.

[Collab]

00:16:990 (7) - Identical sliders in a row, one of which is 1/2 BPM, makes me sad. :(
00:28:392 (1,2) - This jump is not a likable one. :(
01:03:831 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I thought this part just played like and sounded like chaos. It's just so fast and so unreadable.
01:51:376 - Same thing for parts of this kiai section. Maybe I'm just a terrible osu! player.
03:20:498 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1) - Watch for spacing.
03:34:446 (1) - Move it 1/4 later? Sounds better, plays better.
03:43:305 - End kiai here?

Star~
bmin11
5,438 posts
Joined October 2008
bmin11
Fixed my part. I didn't change the one that you couldn't read. I would consider it if two more people complains about it

Download: Cool Joke - UNDO (Teta268) [Collaboration].osu
whymeman
osu! Alumni
3,432 posts
Joined November 2008
whymeman
[Medium]

01:25:762 (1) - This spinner ends 1/2 too short. Could expand it 1/2 more with a finish.

[Collaboration]

02:36:288 (10) - Ends kinda odd like its 1/2 too short or too long.
02:44:007 (5,1) - Was stacking it like this intentional?

Also, your comboburst is a bit too wide. The max px on the width is 500, but the current one is 512. And don't forget to force default the skin....
Mianki
2,701 posts
Joined September 2008
Mianki
Medium:

01:07:86 There should be a small break between the spinner and the circle imo. A circle right after a spinner is way too difficult in this difficulty. But not a big prob.
01:19:09 ^^

Nice map and the song rocks :D
Star~
Mafiamaster
osu! Alumni
3,460 posts
Joined July 2008
Mafiamaster
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Teara
osu! Alumni
814 posts
Joined June 2009
Teara
All mods applied, thanks.

Download: Cool Joke - UNDO (Teta268) [Collaboration].osu
Detective Tuesday
233 posts
Here since the beginning
Detective Tuesday
Easy
01:00:148 (3) - Slider end is too far from next combo.

01:05:060 (4) - too far from (3)... Mattafack, the spacing of this combo is generally messy. Move the (3) to make an even triangular patten of (1, 2, and 3), and then throw the (4) where the (1) is.

Medium

00:49:972 (4) - Move slider end closer to (5)

01:08:569 (2) - Should be closer to (3)


Collab

00:14:006 (7) - Lower a tick.


3:06:463 - I feel like you should just start the break here. There's no reason to set up a vibe just to leave it hanging for the next 3 measures.

Nice map overall. Star for you. Good luck, your birthday approaches.
barbareela
1 post
Joined December 2009
barbareela
meeeeu otooto-san *-*


Gostei do teu map, ficou bem legal... Só tem algumas partes fora de sync, maas isso tu conserta.
Quando fizer outro, me manda *-*
blissfulyoshi
osu! Alumni
4,755 posts
Joined July 2008
blissfulyoshi
Make sure to write every guest mapper's name in the tag section for every map.
Not going to mod the taiko diff.

MattWin's Easy
Change the source to Full Metal Alchemist like the other diffs
You might want to disable the countdown in this diff.

Normal mod:
I did not like the overlapping notes in the diff. (Ex: 00:27:165 (3) and 00:39:095 (2)) They detract from the aesthetic appeal of the map.

Timing section mod:
01:08:218 - unneeded timing section, please remove

Normal
You might want to disable the countdown in this diff.

Normal mod:
Again, I do not like the overlapping notes

Timing section mod:
01:59:797 - move back a quarter note

Collaboration:
I really do not like the difficulty spikes in this diff.

Normal mod:
01:54:007 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - this was very hard for me to read

Timing section mod:
01:54:007 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - unneeded timing section, please remove

====================
Nice map overall. Contact me again after you fix the map (remember what I post is my sugggestion and opinion, not what I am forcing you to do). I'll consider p-bubbling it then. Star.
penaxo
36 posts
Joined August 2009
penaxo
good beatmap loved
im play in the ctb 8-)
Teara
osu! Alumni
814 posts
Joined June 2009
Teara
Remapped a big part :>

Download: Cool Joke - UNDO (Teta268) [Collaboration].osu
Starrodkirby86
osu! Alumni
3,723 posts
Here since the beginning
Starrodkirby86
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Encrypto
128 posts
Joined March 2009
Encrypto
Well,you already have 2 golden stars,so theres nothing more to say.

Great Map,all is working fine,and I want this ranked NOW ^-^

*star*
Mattoi
58 posts
Joined October 2009
Mattoi
All the changes to my difficulty (but it's with the same lenght), I think there are no problems~
[attachment=0:0a01b]Cool Joke - UNDO (Teta268) [MattWin's Easy].osu[/attachment:0a01b]
Don't give kudosu
Agnes
osu! Alumni
1,153 posts
Joined July 2009
Agnes
Going for pubble now!
Skyripper
osu! Alumni
1,016 posts
Joined August 2008
Skyripper
[collab]

00:24:182 (7) - move closer to 6 or new combo it (jump)
00:28:918 (3) - move closer to 2 or new combo
00:58:918 (6) - move closer to previous number or new combo
01:54:182 (3) - ^
03:32:779 (4) - move away from previous number or new combo
Cheedar
95 posts
Joined December 2008
Cheedar
Nice map. \(*-*)/
Larto
4,128 posts
Joined June 2008
Larto
Not bad.
whymeman
osu! Alumni
3,432 posts
Joined November 2008
whymeman
Alright then....
Pasonia
osu! Alumni
1,199 posts
Joined October 2008
Pasonia
Sorry for quick and incomplete modding.

Offset is O - 20 to me, O - 10 to Kytoxid, so currently it's -15ms from original.

Easy:

00:39:777 (3) - Out of bounds slider end.
Hamuko
4,713 posts
Joined April 2009
Topic Starter
Hamuko
Fixed, and offset is 8.909 acording to Kytoxid and CheeseWarlock. XD
bmin11
5,438 posts
Joined October 2008
bmin11
Oh shi what is going on :o This map got bubbled without fixing those mods.
Anyway Fixedexcept the timing Pasonia has suggested because I don't know if this is the fixed version or not (I lost the track)

Please fix the timing for me if it is not the fixed version

Poof, just saw the post above


P.S I was wondering why Larto just said Not bad and didn't gave a bubble and just realized he is not BAT anymore :(

Download: Cool Joke - UNDO (Teta268) [Collaboration].osu
GladiOol
4,475 posts
Joined August 2008
GladiOol
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
maal
maal
Star :3
bmin11
5,438 posts
Joined October 2008
bmin11
Nice sig
NoHitter
osu! Alumni
3,785 posts
Joined June 2009
NoHitter
Overall
Add a center point in the spinner?
Delete the .osb and resubmit

MattWin's Easy
Too short, IMO

Medium
Sliders could be neater and symmetrical :
example: 00:46:101 (9), 01:35:575 (5)

Collaboration
01:39:797 - What's with the kiai time here?
03:57:564 - What's with the timing section here?

You could have made bmin11's name darker so it will not blend too much with the bg
bmin11
5,438 posts
Joined October 2008
bmin11
I fixed mine and Teara's part

You could have made bmin11's name darker so it will not blend too much with the bg
YES PLEASE!!

Download: Cool Joke - UNDO (Teta268) [Collaboration].osu
Mattoi
58 posts
Joined October 2009
Mattoi
Due to a lot of people saying it's too short, I've made my difficulty a bit bigger. Maybe I'll extend it more.

[attachment=0:29793]Cool Joke - UNDO (Teta268) [MattWin's Easy].osu[/attachment:29793]
Hamuko
4,713 posts
Joined April 2009
Topic Starter
Hamuko
I want it ranked NAO '-'
lepidopodus
3,548 posts
Joined November 2009
lepidopodus
For Fhatii Taiko Futsuu, I think HP drain rate is a little high for Futsuu. (under 5 is fine for Futsuu as I think...)
...and MAX Overall Difficulty? even Oni don't set overall like that. I suggest to lower under 5 (5? ok, but It Futsuu...)
(Futsuu means Normal, right? So let's make them like Normal diff....)
(Well actually this seems a little harder than what we called Futsuu... but much easier than Muzukashii, as there are no 1/4 continuous notes.)

Star...
Fabricio4p
17 posts
Joined July 2008
Fabricio4p
Nice map o/ star'd
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