rerank也是凌风 偶像
thanks Chewin <3!!Chewin wrote:
GeneralEasy
- 2nd red line (the one that starts kiai time) is still off. It must be 72161. Don't forget to resnap elements and green lines after applied this change. 88428 red line is off as well, it should be 88444 and next one at 89340.
- Why don't you add the video? You can get it from http://osu.ppy.sh/s/154334
- 01:16:431 (2,3) - We have wrong spacing here. Move the 01:17:288 (3) at x:400 y:140 I'd like to move 01:16:431 (2) - close to 01:17:288 (3) - xD/ thanks!
That's it. Thank you BeatofIke for checking the bpm issues :3 But I would apply those timing changes I suggested as well about red lines, they are more accurated to me. Nice mapset anyways, you can call me back when you have fixed them :3
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Hi. I'd appreciate if you read my post as well.Frostmourne wrote:
I take a hear closer on somewhere like 01:12:147 (1,2,3) - on this new timing and this is really off.
It does lie on vocal quite correctly but the way hitsound usage mainly hits on the heavy beat as in a normal hit, it is pretty much off by -20 to -30 in this whole section. no, probably the whole mapset.
Thank you for clarifying that one! I am opposing the way Ike's timing is used for this one as it currently is. (The mapper didn't update so I took it from the current one)Chewin wrote:
Hi. I'd appreciate if you read my post as well.Frostmourne wrote:
I take a hear closer on somewhere like 01:12:147 (1,2,3) - on this new timing and this is really off.
It does lie on vocal quite correctly but the way hitsound usage mainly hits on the heavy beat as in a normal hit, it is pretty much off by -20 to -30 in this whole section. no, probably the whole mapset.
Perfect! It sounds much better indeed. Thank you for your check Frost :3 I'd say to set +10 on the first one.Frostmourne wrote:
Thank you for clarifying the correct one! I am opposing the way Ike's timing is used for this one as it currently is. (The mapper didn't update so I took it from the current one)
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hello, here i am fixed all the unsnap, timing, nc, hitsoundChewin wrote:
GeneralEasy
- 2nd red line (the one that starts kiai time) is still off. It must be 72161. Don't forget to resnap elements and green lines after applied this change. 88428 red line is off as well, it should be 88444 and next one at 89340.
- Why don't you add the video? You can get it from http://osu.ppy.sh/s/154334
Normal
- 01:16:431 (2,3) - We have wrong spacing here. Move the 01:17:288 (3) at x:400 y:140
Hard
- First part looks so empty without hitsounds. I mean you should add normal sampleset on 00:07:877 , 00:08:734 and so on to make the sound much better to hear. Well, I'm suggesting to apply the same hitsounds happy623 made for his Easy xD
- 01:29:321 (1) - This slider should finish 1/2 later to fill the piano melody. On that red tick I can't hear any sound there.
That's it. Thank you BeatofIke for checking the bpm issues :3 But I would apply those timing changes I suggested as well about red lines, they are more accurated to me. Nice mapset anyways, you can call me back when you have fixed them :3
- 00:17:732 (1) - Wrong snap here. Extend this slider by 1/4 till the white tick
- 00:21:160 (1) - Snap it correctly on the red tick
- 00:31:443 (1) - Extend by 1/4
- 01:29:321 (1) - Whistles on slider's head and tail, 01:32:893 (1) whistle on reverse arrow (to fill melody sounds)
- 01:36:484 (4) - New combo
Fixed all diffBeatofIke wrote:
The preview time sounds good at 00:55:008 (55008). Also, the end part still sounds a bit off. Going to double-check that.
EDIT: Okay, here's my final Timing Check for the end part. Re-snap all notes and timing sections there. Fix that and I shall re-rank!
>_______<BeatofIke wrote:
Everything checks out now. Re-ranked!
Scores are wiped!
叻柚happy623 wrote:
叻仔
我的yf不可能這麼可愛>///<yf_bmp wrote:
Gratz~~SS美丽……
scores should be wiped nowKawaiwkyik wrote:
我改好了 但成績單還在是什麼一回事 不敢update/_\"
yes, I'm sorry that you're just right, the second timing is even worsesammy711 wrote:
From my perspective, The first version of timing plays much better than the second one,though..
happy623 wrote:
柚子一下子就3rd rank了