Lokamp wrote:

Easy
00:06:005 (5,1) - new combo on 5th, remove new combo from 1st ~fix
00:45:058 (4,5) - spacing... try distance snap on these beats or move some squared down the 5th beat (grid level 2 or 3) ~fix

Normal
00:15:040 (4) - remove clap ~fix
00:16:081 (4) - ^ ~fix
00:30:023 (5) - new combo ~fix
00:52:064 (3,1,2) - move these beats a square left (grid level 1 or maybe 2) ~fix
01:05:017 (1) - let it start on 01:05:034 (same end) ~fix

Nerv's Hard
00:31:046 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ... maybe hitsounds's volume in this time section is too loud... ^^"

DJPop's Insane
00:25:055 (5) - ... remove this clap, please. ~fix
00:30:023 (3) - new combo ~fix

...Another good collaboration beatmap that merits a star ;3

bmin11 wrote:

[General]
Spinner needs a center mark

[Normal]
00:09:023 (2,3,4,1) - Spacing. Atlease show them it is a faster notes
00:41:017 (1) - Spacing
00:45:058 (1) - Not a big spacing but could give some fail info

[Hard]
I see some small squere off spacings but it is too small to be a problem (I think)

[DJPop]
Flawless

Starred

Fix~

NoHItter wrote:

Overall
Remove .osb file and re-upload

Easy
00:29:701 (3) - Would really sound better if ended at 00:29:936, but I'm not sure if it's allowed since this is Easy
00:35:701 (X) - I really think that a spinner here up to 00:36:759 would be better than a break

Normal
Why are the timing sections (red) here different from the other diffs?
Resnap the notes
00:46:991 (x) - Map this part. Unusual time for a break. It;s in kiai time after all.

Other maps look good

Fix~

Tanmak wrote:

Hello~~

[Normal]
All note unsnapped. Resnap Please.

00:20:521 Why redline in timingline is there? Remove it.

[DJPop]
Preview time is different from others difficulty.

Great skin~ and I can't find problem in beatmap.
Starred~

Fix~

jericho2442 wrote:

[Easy]
fine

[Normal]
00:03:023 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - uses the same spacing as 00:08:087 (1,2,3,4) - even though there completely different speeds? sorry but to me this is a big no no in a normal diff,
00:11:087 (2) - end is out of time, resize so that it ends on white tick
00:12:058 (4) - ^
00:13:081 (3,4,1,2) - same speed but different spacing >_> , i really dont like all the changes like that in a normal difficulty, i suggest choosing on spacing or max 2 and sticking with them in a normal
00:20:087 (2,1,2) - ...........come on, spacing change again >_>
too many to post up so i suggest to go through this whole map and sort the spacing out, so many changes in a normal diff is just horrid >_>

[Hard]
00:13:028 (2,3,4) - spacing, fix plz
again i just find the sheer amount of spacing changes is pure sillyness >_> my advice it to make it more fun to play rather than having to guess what the next spacing is :/

[DJPop Insane]
00:35:070 (1,2,3,4,5) - this patten looks wobbly, try to make them all line up with each other better

great beatmap XD

refer to this beatmap to see how to space better for normal and hard, you will see that there is one main spacing, and when it does change it feel perfect for it

______________________________________________
im very sorry if my mod is a lil hard and i do not mean to offend you
goodluck with the map but srry i cant star it as it is right now

Fix~

Agent Spin Here wrote:

Artist is definitely wrong, but I couldn't find any information about this song on google so I'll leave this to someone else.
Offset is a little late. 402 should do it.

Easy
00:46:010 (5) - Really unpredictable for Easy. What's wrong with 00:46:277?
00:46:098 (6) - New combo

Normal
00:08:087 (1) - Wooooaaaaaah this spacing change is really hard to read. I suggest remapping 00:03:023 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - to follow a similar rhythm
00:17:034 (1,2) - Could you, like, space these out a bit further so the spacing makes more sense?
00:22:028 (2) - Space this further away from the previous note
00:41:017 (1) - Space this closer the the previous note
00:50:052 (7) - Uh could you move this down a bit to make the spacing make more sense

Other difficulties are lovely.

Fix~

Pasonia wrote:

In Normal there's this odd 412BPM thing that serves absolutely no purpose. Please remove this.

Inconsistent offset in Normal also. Please re-adjust and re-snap.
I understand there're some 1/6 notes in Normal to fit the vocals, so make sure that's changed too.
Please set preview points to ALL difficulties at the same time.

Artist field is also wrong - you need to credit the exact people who sang the song.

Other than that I see no problem with the mapping.

Fixed~

DJPop wrote:

UPDATE THIS!

UPDATE READY!

Vicho-kun wrote:

DJPop wrote:

UPDATE THIS!

UPDATE READY!

Starrodkirby86 wrote:

Hi!

Hmm...Kiai seems to be a lit long...
Maybe you can end the Kiai Time around here? 00:54:054 (1) - (This is on [Easy])
It's up to you though.

[Easy]:
00:58:995 (4) - Move 1/2 back?

Timing of the map seems to be a bit too early. Also, [Normal] has a different offset...Please correct that. You may want to add all offsets by...Hmm...+16 on all offsets (From 407)? I don't have any idea if we also need to slow down the BPM. You may want to get someone more experienced on the situation.

Remove star.png from your song folder. o:

Your comboburst.png is too wide. I know it's from the Lucky Star skin, but eh...oh well. XD Max width of combobursts are 500px (Max height is 768, but you follow that already).

How about you add Nariagari as tags or something? (Or whatever it would be separated) It's pretty much impossible to search this song by title as the hyphens separate each thing into two characters or less. Also, add DJPop too. Make sure you do this for every difficulty.

Nice map!

All fixed!

Leorda wrote:

Hola!

[Easy]
00:58:289 (3,4) - Spacing

[Normal]
00:29:962 (x) - Add note here

CUTE MAP!!! >w<
STAR

All Fixed!

Dusty wrote:

Nerv_Mario to tags on all difficulties. fix

[Easy]
You mapped in a box
00:52:289 (1) - Left 1. fix

[Normal]
00:11:965 (2,3) - I don't care what Distance Snap tells you, they're too close. fix
00:13:111 (1,2,3,4) - Don't finish spam. not necessary
00:28:638 (1,2,3,4) - ^ not necessary
00:33:226 (4,5,6) - Don't hitsound spam. not necessary
00:34:285 (1,2,3) - Too much clapping. not necessary
00:49:991 (6,7,1) - Spacing. not necessary =/ sorry

[DJPop's]
*clap clap clap clap* aah this song is driving me insane XD

I can't mod this any more.

Larto wrote:

Normal:
00:20:524 - Remove the timing sections here.
01:08:432 - Same

All fixed!

Azure_Kyte wrote:

Here's my mod

Blue = Suggestion Red = Check this

[overall]
-The tags "Lucky Star, NA-RI-A-GA-RI" are redundant, they are already in the title and source. Please remove them from every difficulty. / fix~
[Easy]
01:03:230 (2) - Shorten to 01:03:759 / I think it is not necessary
No problems found.

[Normal]
I suggest using a more precise grid level (2 or 3) on this difficulty. There are a few parts that are unintuitively spaced because of this
00:29:697 (4,5) - Incorrect distance spacing due to above / fix~
00:40:638 (2,1) - Spacing like this isn't a good idea in a Normal difficulty / fix~
00:52:285 (2,3,1,2) - Manually align these with the slider's end? / I think it is not necessary

[Nerv's Hard]
No problems found

[DJPop's Insane]
00:55:995 (6) - possibly remove? It makes it sound a little more interesting. / You are right, gives a sound more interesting
No problems found

A nice beatmap; once the red errors have been looked into I'll be happy to proto-bubble this. Starred in the meantime.

DJPop wrote:

Updated

[attachment=0:53fa2]Lucky Star - NA-RI-A-GA-RI (Short ver.) (Vicho-kun) [DJPop's Insane].osu[/attachment:53fa2]
Update!

James2250 wrote:

DJPop's Insane:
00:55:759 (3,4,5,6) - is still on 1/6 (make it 1/4)
Fixed.
01:01:112 (1,2,3,4) - ^ rawr
Voices are very obvious here so leave them.

James2250 wrote:

I believe Vicho already fixed it for you did you update and check it? (@ DJPop)

DJPop wrote:

James2250 wrote:

I believe Vicho already fixed it for you did you update and check it? (@ DJPop)

Yeah, but I don't like it so I fix again.

JarJarJacob wrote:

popopopop

Change artist name to Lucky Star Cast. It's really not needed to have the Lucky Star skin included with the map, it just bloats the file size. Just force it in song setup. In fact, you already have forced the skin! Remove the skin elements from this map. Set offset to 420. Set preview point and kiai start at 00:37:112. Kiai should end at 01:05:348.

DJPop's Insane:

This difficulty does not have the video.
01:03:772 (1,2,3,4) - I don't like the volumes changes, there's no reason for them to exist and they simply sound bad.

Normal:

00:46:462 - Awful break. Having it right in a kiai time like that is never a good idea. This difficulty's fine with no breaks.
00:55:462 (1) - Remove, it's too difficult to have a note right after a spinner on this difficulty.
01:01:109 (1) - ^
01:05:344 (1) - Add finish.

Easy:

00:35:524 - This doesn't need a break, use a slider or something.

All fixed~

DJPop wrote:

Fixed.

Update~

Mafiamaster wrote:

POPPED

Notes in Normal and Nerv's Hard aren't SNAPPED

Also remove the "PSP Game" portion from DJPop's source so it's the same on all difficulties.

All fixed~

DJPop wrote:

Fixed.

Update~