UnitedWeSin wrote:

Your offset is too early. Try 394 (+14). Make sure to resnap all objects / timing sections / preview point.

I see Nymph modded, so let me know if you still want me to mod. If so I can mod after her bubble.
Decided it would be better to just mod now.

As promised:

[General]

1. 00:33:393 to 01:03:393 - I recommend that you remove the kiai time from here since the music is still relatively soft compared to the rest of the music. It will make the later kiai times more dramatic imo. ok
   
2. Combo colors 1 and 2 are too alike imo. It's mainly a problem in and before the second kiai because you switch back and forth between the two greens. I think you could add more variation of colors in those sections. waiting for discussion
   
3. Uncheck widescreen storyboard support in all the diffs since you don't use a storyboard. ok

[Insane]

1. 00:10:393 (4) - This slider has strange flow because of the flat portion at the end, I'd like to suggest a wave slider:
   
   Example

   
   fixed
   
2. 00:35:393 (4) - You can add a whistle here on the head. Also one at 00:39:393 (4) - 00:43:393 (4) - 00:47:393 (4) - and so on throughout the section. They fit quite well, consider it. all added
   
3. 00:51:393 (1) - Remove NC to follow in your pattern. keeping..will [/color]
   
4. 01:18:393 (1) - Move it up a few grids to be on the same line as 01:17:393 (9,10).
   
5. 01:48:393 (5) - Try Ctrl+J I think it can make a better flow:
   
   Example

   
   ok
   
6. 01:52:727 (6,7,1) - Since the drums are pretty active, maybe try to make a jump between 6-7. I think it could play better than this small spacing.
   
   Example

   
   fixed
   
7. 02:09:727 (1,2) - Too many finishes here imo, I think you should remove the ones one 1 and 2. i removed all because only 3 seems strange too
   
8. 02:11:393 (5) - Maybe a soft finish is better here instead of drum clap.just follow the music
   
9. 02:11:727 (6) - You can try a finish on the end if you'd like.same above
   
10. 02:12:477 - Consider a spinner like you've done in the other diffs. ok
    
11. 03:13:393 (1,2,3) - Consider some whistles here like the other diffs. added
    
12. 03:40:893 (2,3,4) - The smaller spacing of 3 makes it feel like you force the stack a bit. You can try something different like:
    
    Example

    
    With nice flow from 03:41:393 (4) to 03:42:393 (1).
    good idea
    
13. 03:56:393 (4,5,6) - Use more spacing (1.1 - 1.2x) to match other placements in this section like 03:51:393 (4,5,6). increased to 1.1
    
14. 04:02:393 (1,2,3,4,5) - Simple design suggestion: rotate 1 to blanket 2 and make a nice diamond with the combo.
    
    Example

    
    sounds good
    
15. 04:17:060 (3) - Try to replace this with a 1/1 slider to follow the music a bit better. You can continue with your pattern like this:
    
    Example

    
    i'd like to keep the 5-combo here
    
16. 04:18:393 (3) - I think NC is nice here to end the map, you should consider it. Like how you used NC at 02:12:393 (1).Fixed

[Hard]

1. 01:44:393 (5) - Try to extend this slider by 1/4. It will fit nicely with the music there. a bit strange OAO
   
2. 01:38:393 to 02:10:393 - Don't you want to mix in red and brown colors like the other diffs? Disabled color pattern
   
3. 02:00:393 (4,5,6) - Stack the 5,6 better than that. It will look nicer in play that way. You can delete them and then place them directly on the tail of the 4. sorry that's an accident
   
4. 03:13:393 (1,2,3,1) - Since the 03:14:393 (1) is one of the most powerful beats in the song, maybe you can rearrange 03:13:393 (1,2,3) to make a jump to it since it would be more fitting. make an ugly jump
   
5. 03:15:393 (3) - Make sure the straight portion is aligned parallel with 2. fixed
   
6. 03:46:393 (1) - Start with a different color here than black/white since it's the kiai reset. same above
   
7. 04:18:393 (4) - Same as Insane, NC is nice here. ok

[Normal]

1. I suggest AR 4 for this diff since it's your easiest. ok
   
2. 02:08:393 (6) - Add finish? ok
   
3. 02:10:060 (2) - Maybe replace finish with clap would follow with music better. changed all 1,2,3 to clap

Nice job on this one.

I'm a bit concerned with the timing. I want to ask a few more people to check it, which I will do tomorrow~

1. Preview time is unsnapped. Snap it to 01:37:211?
   
2. You still have the first kiai in Normal and Hard. You should remove them like you did the Insane.

1. 00:49:046 - Timing section is unsnapped.
   
2. 00:50:049 (2) - Move this to (440,332) to have even spacing here.
   
   Example

   
3. 04:18:549 - Imo you should reduce the volume of the spinner to 30% or so and the end to 5% because the music is very soft here.

1. 00:33:377 (1) - Snap this slider to 00:33:396.
   
2. 01:44:377 (5) - Sorry, I meant to say extend it by 1/2 like 01:40:377 (4). It would fit the music nicely.
   
3. 04:18:382 (1) - Maybe you want to remove the whistle since you don't use it in the other diffs.
   
4. 04:18:549 - Same as Insane about spinner volume.
   

1. 01:22:379 - Unsnapped timing section.
   
2. 02:41:377 (1) - Snap this slider to 02:41:405.
   
3. 04:18:716 - Same an Insane about volumes.
   
   Cool.
   Just bug me again.

UnitedWeSin wrote:

Hey recheck~
No KD

[General]

1. Preview time is unsnapped. Snap it to 01:37:211?
   
2. You still have the first kiai in Normal and Hard. You should remove them like you did the Insane.

[Insane]

1. 00:49:046 - Timing section is unsnapped.
   
2. 00:50:049 (2) - Move this to (440,332) to have even spacing here.
   
   Example

   
3. 04:18:549 - Imo you should reduce the volume of the spinner to 30% or so and the end to 5% because the music is very soft here.

[Hard]

1. 00:33:377 (1) - Snap this slider to 00:33:396.
   
2. 01:44:377 (5) - Sorry, I meant to say extend it by 1/2 like 01:40:377 (4). It would fit the music nicely.
   
3. 04:18:382 (1) - Maybe you want to remove the whistle since you don't use it in the other diffs.
   
4. 04:18:549 - Same as Insane about spinner volume.
   

[Normal]

1. 01:22:379 - Unsnapped timing section.
   
2. 02:41:377 (1) - Snap this slider to 02:41:405.
   
3. 04:18:716 - Same an Insane about volumes.
   
   Cool.
   Just bug me again.

615915887 wrote:

sorry for those unsnapped problems which caused by my carelessness

UnitedWeSin wrote:

Ok looks good to me.

Nice map and good luck with your rank.

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