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Reisen Udongein

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Reisen Udongein 2014-01-22T08:11:45+00:00

W h i t e wrote:
아직도 최고의 퀄리티를 가지고 계시군요! ㅎㅎ

스타도 칭찬도 감사합니다!

bmin11 wrote:
다시 쿠도스 벌어야겠네

스타 감사합니다! 죄송해서라도 빨리 만들어야겠네요 ㅠㅠ 늑장부리고 있었는데

bmin11

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bmin11 2014-01-25T07:02:23+00:00

[Bunny]
00:05:062 (2) - 이전처럼 점프로 만들어주세요 아무리 뒤에 노트가 있다 하더라도
00:10:641 (2) - 좀 사소하지만 좀 더 가깝게, 그리고 조금만 아래로 위치하는게 더 느낌이 좋은것 같아요
00:13:746 (6) - 점프가 1번부터 시작해야한다고 생각해요
00:15:483 (4) - 좀 더 완만하게 이어지도록 좌상단으로 조금 이동
00:27:483 (3,1,1) - 이게 사실 조금 불안정한데 뭐 괜찮겠죠 이후 패턴을 안망가트리면서 고칠 방도도 안떠오르고
00:32:693 (2,1,2,1,2,1) - ㄷㄷ 근데 뭐 괜찮겠죠
00:35:378 (6) - 좀만 더 5번이랑 붙여주세요
00:39:641 (9,10) - 1/3 입니다
00:40:272 (3,4) - 마찬가지
00:44:693 (3,4) - ^
00:45:404 (7,8,9) - 7,8번은 1/3이고 9번은 사실상 빈노트

[Another]
Fantastic

[Hyper]
I have a mixed feeling with those drum hitsounds, but I suspect that I'm just being bias with it.
01:44:693 (2) - These kinds of note actually makes this part quite confusing 01:48:009 (1) - combined with this. The gap feels quite noticeable since I had to hit those empty notes. Could just be there for a challenge I suppose.

Reisen Udongein

Former osu! Champion: OWC#3

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Reisen Udongein 2014-01-25T14:35:58+00:00

bmin11 wrote:
[Bunny]
00:13:746 (6) - 점프가 1번부터 시작해야한다고 생각해요 - 노트 4개로 바꿈
00:45:404 (7,8,9) - 7,8번은 1/3이고 9번은 사실상 빈노트 - 요 부분은 멜로디에 안 맞추고 임의로 넣은 것

나머지는 전부 고쳤습니다. 모딩 감사드려요!

bmin11

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bmin11 2014-01-25T17:11:33+00:00

00:05:062 (2) - 이거 말을 잘못한듯 1 -> 2 가는걸 이전처럼 점프로 만들어주세요

Akiyama Mizuki

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Joined March 2009

Akiyama Mizuki 2014-02-02T06:23:59+00:00

태고 오니 만들어도 되나요...?

Reisen Udongein

Former osu! Champion: OWC#3

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Reisen Udongein 2014-02-04T09:21:02+00:00

bbj0920 wrote:
태고 오니 만들어도 되나요...?

죄송하지만 스탠 이외의 것은 안받을려구요~

Beige

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Beige 2014-02-07T06:31:25+00:00

흐엉엉 늦어서 죄송합니다 ㅠㅠ ~~제가 제일 못 만드는~~ Normal

Normal

osu file format v12

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ArtistUnicode:猫叉Master+
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Reisen Udongein

Former osu! Champion: OWC#3

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Reisen Udongein 2014-02-07T11:54:06+00:00

goes to pending!

Last edited by Reisen Udongein 2014-02-07T14:23:32+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Sonnyc

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Sonnyc 2014-02-07T14:20:35+00:00

랜덤 모딩~

Beginner:

00:03:483 (1) - 스택 효과를 고려해서 이거는 이전 슬라이더 끝점에 잘 오게 (465,111)에 놓는게 좋을것 같아요.
00:08:535 (1) - 유사한 의견. (280,74)
01:44:219 (1,2,1) - ??? 점프 수정좀 부탁합니다. 이외에도 여러 점프 수정바랍니다. 맵셋에서 가장 쉬운 난이도에서 너무 무리합니다.

W h i t e's Normal:

00:20:851 (2,3) - 개인적으로 어려운 박자이니 노트 대신 리버스 하나로 때우는게 나을것긴 한데 놔둬도 무방.
01:02:535 (1,2) - 둘이 같은 힛사가 어울릴거라고 생각합니다. 좀 소음이 있을 거라는 생각이 드셔도 둘다 피니시 놓는거 고민해 주세요. 이후 유사 힛사들도 동일한 의견.

Muya's Another:

00:18:324 (1) - Mind adding a drum-whistle at the reverse and the end? The rhythm selection here feels a bit awkward since the drums were barely hearing in this part. Still adding these hit sounds will make players understandable enough.
00:46:745 (9) - Consider NC for rhythm change?
00:53:377 - lol Taiko hitsound xD
00:53:377 (3,1) - Imo starting NC from (3) feels better..
00:59:772 (9) - Imo don fits better than a kat here. I felt kats were little bit spammed.
01:01:509 - Add a note?

Niva's Hyper:

00:09:483 (3) - Mind NCing as previous combo patterns?
00:41:535 (2,5) - Consider (474,350) for a better distance.
00:45:404 - Add a note as 00:44:772 (9)? Feels a bit empty, but fine to ignore.
01:25:904 - Add a note please. This is seriously empty, compared to the music which has a strong beat here. If you were following the drums, giving the previous slider an NC would be a nice solution either.
01:30:956 - ^
01:36:009 - ^
01:54:167 (5) - Imo drum-whistle didn't felt nice. Just an opinion.

Extra:

00:05:062 (2) - 저도 이거에 대해서는 비민님과 유사한 의견으로 이전 (1)과 간격 비슷하게 하는걸 추천하는데, ~~플레이어들은 잘 해낼겁니다.~~
00:10:351 - 여기에 노트 넣고 이후 간격 조절하는게 어때요? 00:05:298 (3) 처럼.
00:16:430 (7) - 뉴콤? 00:13:904 (1) 처럼.
00:35:851 (1,2,3) - 스택 때문에 좀 보기 안좋은 감이 있는듯 한데 이후 연타까지 다 일직선으로 하시거나, 이 3개만 어떻게 간격을 줄이는 방향을 추천합니다.
00:45:562 (9) - 삭제?
00:52:430 (1) - 새 슬라이더 규정상 이거 언랭 패턴으로 알고 있습니다.
00:57:483 (1) - ^
01:26:535 (1) - 간격과 흐름 고려해서 1칸 올려주세요 ㅋ
01:35:062 (1) - 이전의 01:34:114 (1,1) 처럼 곡률 좀 줄여주시는게 어때요?
01:44:298 - 01:46:983 - 여기에 설정된 타임라인에 의해 노트 소리가 좀 많이 작은데, 각각 35%, 30% 정도로는 올려야 어느정도 들릴것 같습니다. 01:44:377 부터 1/1 마다 엇박으로 들리는 소리도 있어서 헷갈릴 소지도 있을 것 같아서 그렇습니다.
01:51:483 (1) - 슬라이더 끝이나 스핀 끝이 아니라면 노트 힛사가 들려야 하는데 음악과 맞는다고 하더라도 5%는 너무 작은것 같습니다. 최소 20% 추천합니다 ㅜ

굳맵인데 제가 즐길수 없는게 함정 ㅋ 화이팅!

Reisen Udongein

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Reisen Udongein 2014-02-07T14:54:49+00:00

Sonnyc wrote:
랜덤 모딩~

Extra:

00:05:062 (2) - 저도 이거에 대해서는 비민님과 유사한 의견으로 이전 (1)과 간격 비슷하게 하는걸 추천하는데, ~~플레이어들은 잘 해낼겁니다.~~
- 일자 슬라이더로 변경
00:10:351 - 여기에 노트 넣고 이후 간격 조절하는게 어때요? 00:05:298 (3) 처럼. - 간격 조절 대신 그냥 스택하는게 외관상 그리고 플레이상 괜찮을거같아서 스택
00:35:851 (1,2,3) - 스택 때문에 좀 보기 안좋은 감이 있는듯 한데 이후 연타까지 다 일직선으로 하시거나, 이 3개만 어떻게 간격을 줄이는 방향을 추천합니다. - 패턴 수정
00:52:430 (1) - 새 슬라이더 규정상 이거 언랭 패턴으로 알고 있습니다. - BAT에 문의
00:57:483 (1) - ^ - ^
01:35:062 (1) - 이전의 01:34:114 (1,1) 처럼 곡률 좀 줄여주시는게 어때요? - 너무 높아서 그런가 알아서 바뀌네요. 조금 내려서 수정
굳맵인데 제가 즐길수 없는게 함정 ㅋ 화이팅!

나머진 전부 말씀하신대로 수정했습니다. 모딩이랑 스타 감사드려요!

Niva

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Niva 2014-02-07T17:41:23+00:00

bmin11 wrote:
[Hyper]
I have a mixed feeling with those drum hitsounds, but I suspect that I'm just being bias with it. I'm not really familiar with drum hitsounds previously, this is my attempt on exploring it more so... Yeah (:
01:44:693 (2) - These kinds of note actually makes this part quite confusing 01:48:009 (1) - combined with this. The gap feels quite noticeable since I had to hit those empty notes. Could just be there for a challenge I suppose. This is to add a lush normal-soft-normal combination actually, I had the similar on 01:49:746 (2) though xD

Sonnyc wrote:
Niva's Hyper:

00:09:483 (3) - Mind NCing as previous combo patterns? Done
00:41:535 (2,5) - Consider (474,350) for a better distance. Yep, perfect~
00:45:404 - Add a note as 00:44:772 (9)? Feels a bit empty, but fine to ignore. ...I'll leave this for now, I don't want this part to be too hectic in sudden ._.
01:25:904 - Add a note please. This is seriously empty, compared to the music which has a strong beat here. If you were following the drums, giving the previous slider an NC would be a nice solution either. Yes it's intentional, did the second though :3
01:30:956 - ^
01:36:009 - ^
01:54:167 (5) - Imo drum-whistle didn't felt nice. Just an opinion. Left this as is~

Thanks for the mods (:

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Muya

2,355 posts

Joined August 2009

Muya 2014-02-08T01:56:26+00:00

01:01:509 - and some fixed~ http://puu.sh/6NRus.osu

DeletedUser_1574070

DeletedUser_1574070 2014-02-08T04:58:53+00:00

개쩐다 랭크 ㄱㄱㄱ

pw384

Beatmap Nominator

2,322 posts

Joined January 2012

pw384 2014-02-08T13:32:38+00:00

hi Reisen!!
mod req from 384's queue

As the map is quite hard, I'll begin the mod with the lowest diff..

mod info:
Black: Suggestions. Feel free to ignore!
Bule: Emphasis suggestions.
Red: Unrankable stuffs. Must be fixed.

[General]

Oh an interesing bug found in muya's diff. (pic1) By checking the osu file, I found this (pic2). So you need to fix this!
Pic1
Offset is different in timing panel and the main panel lol..
Pic2
640.63979331855? It should be 641

[Beginner]

00:22:746 (1) - In fact I don't suggest using stacks like this (a hitcircle cover the slider's head) in Beginner diff. However, since the Beginner is generally no so easy, it is okay. But I still advise changing this like 00:24:641 (1,2,3) - .
01:02:535 (1) - (nazi) Try this?
Picture
01:12:641 (2) - umm, how about this? it fit the song better:
Picture
Oh the end is quite hard lol, but no problem imo :3

[W h i t e's Normal]

00:57:956 (2) - I think use soft-finish is better than use Normal-hitnormal bcz you use soft-finish at 00:52:904 (2) -
00:57:483 (1) - (nazi) 00:56:851 (5,6,1) - the heads of 5,6 and 1 are not on the same line. move 00:57:483 (1) - to x=120,y=180 will solve the problem
01:53:693 (5) - (nazi) move to x=148,y=48 may look better~
Quite nice diff. \:D/ I can only find some nazi things orz...

[Niva's Hyper]

00:30:325 (3) - move to x=306,y=285 so that it can be stacked with 00:29:693 (1) - perfectly
01:36:167 (2) - ^
Ahh sorry the diff is pretty nice and I can't find any major things...

[Muya's Another]

I advise using HP=7. I know that you like using HP8/OD9, but I think HP8 doesn't fit the mapset. The Ex diff uses HP8/OD8 while Another diff uses HP8/OD8 too. Also, I can FC hyper but I can't pass the diff due to the high HP drain orz /.\ Considering using HP7?
00:24:009 (3,4) - move 3 to x=220,y=276 and move 4 to x=292,y=380? Then you can find that 2 3 5 are on the same line and the mod won't destroy the parallel 3~4
01:43:904 (5,6) - Ctrl+G? I know that you did this on purpose but it seems weird...
Great job!

[Extra]

Nothing. the diff is awesome with CS5 and the flow is perfect!!!
What am I doing when I am modding the map???

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I'll shoot star if I have enough stars...

Niva

Global Moderator

3,196 posts

Joined November 2009

Niva 2014-02-08T22:06:23+00:00

Fixed both, thanks 384059043!~

SPOILER

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Nekomata Master+ - squall.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1500
PreviewTime: 83603
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 1.3
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:squall
TitleUnicode:squall
Artist:Nekomata Master+
ArtistUnicode:猫叉Master+
Creator:Reisen Udongein
Version:Niva's Hyper
Source:jubeat
Tags:saucer Drum n Bass Niva Nivalis Muya W h i t e
BeatmapID:354045
BeatmapSetID:127772

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.25
SliderTickRate:2

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510,185,109904,2,0,B|504:142|504:142|514:102|514:102|508:63,1,125,0|8,1:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
507,62,110535,6,0,L|497:0,1,62.5,0|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
454,125,110851,2,0,L|390:125,1,62.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
511,185,111167,2,0,L|501:247,1,62.5,0|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
446,303,111483,6,0,B|422:311|397:303|397:303|371:295|347:304,1,100,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,212,112114,6,0,L|176:148,1,62.5,8|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
127,83,112430,2,0,P|180:111|242:99,1,125,0|8,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
242,99,113062,6,0,P|277:94|308:99,1,62.5,0|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
377,66,113377,2,0,P|395:41|406:11,1,62.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
370,144,113693,2,0,P|383:191|417:228,1,93.75,0|0,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
412,224,114009,1,0,1:2:0:0:
389,328,114167,1,2,1:3:0:0:

Reisen Udongein

Former osu! Champion: OWC#3

1,073 posts

Joined January 2010

Topic Starter

Reisen Udongein 2014-02-09T07:01:12+00:00

384059043 wrote:
hi Reisen!!
mod req from 384's queue

As the map is quite hard, I'll begin the mod with the lowest diff..

mod info:
Black: Suggestions. Feel free to ignore!
Bule: Emphasis suggestions.
Red: Unrankable stuffs. Must be fixed.

[General]
Oh an interesing bug found in muya's diff. (pic1) By checking the osu file, I found this (pic2). So you need to fix this!
Pic1
Offset is different in timing panel and the main panel lol..
Pic2
640.63979331855? It should be 641
- Fixed

[Beginner]
00:22:746 (1) - In fact I don't suggest using stacks like this (a hitcircle cover the slider's head) in Beginner diff. However, since the Beginner is generally no so easy, it is okay. But I still advise changing this like 00:24:641 (1,2,3) - . - Considering
Oh the end is quite hard lol, but no problem imo :3

[Extra]

Nothing. the diff is awesome with CS5 and the flow is perfect!!!
What am I doing when I am modding the map???
- Thanks!!

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I'll shoot star if I have enough stars...

thanks for the mods and star!

Kayano

1,289 posts

Joined July 2011

Kayano 2014-02-09T12:57:09+00:00

Great work!! Star

Reisen Udongein

Former osu! Champion: OWC#3

1,073 posts

Joined January 2010

Topic Starter

Reisen Udongein 2014-02-09T16:03:35+00:00

OniJAM wrote:
Great work!! Star

thanks for the star!

Scorpiour

2,633 posts

Joined May 2011

Scorpiour 2014-02-09T20:02:44+00:00

Marked from popner's modding team for OniJam's recommendation, may mod it later

Laurier

1,786 posts

Joined February 2011

Laurier 2014-02-10T12:13:23+00:00

mod4mod

Beginner
00:08:535 (1) - you should use Ctr+H. It will makes good flow.
00:14:535 (1) - use same form as 00:17:062 (1) - ? it not big issue. just suggestion.
01:49:272 - you should start 1/4 rhythm at here.

W h i t e's Standard
00:26:535 (6) - what about this rhythm ? http://puu.sh/6QOSu.jpg
00:36:009 (3,4,5) - ^ http://puu.sh/6QOUv.jpg
00:51:167 (3) - what about make a shimentori slider ? your diff has some simentori patterns. I just say it's a good choice.
01:12:009 (2) - make a same angle as 01:10:588 (3) - http://puu.sh/6QP85.jpg

Muya's Another
00:18:957 (2,3,4,5) - sliderで溜めたあとなのでジャンプ作ったほうが曲に合うと思います。こんなんとか。http://puu.sh/6QPfF.jpg
00:23:852 (2,3,4,5,6) - (3,5)をCtrl+Gしたほうが音に合うジャンプになります。
00:30:167 (6) - ここはsliderにして00:30:246 - まで音とったほうがbetter sliderendは音量下げてもいいかも

Extra
nothing to say D:

Niva's Hyper
why using diffirent combo color as another diffs ?
00:42:325 (1) - it looks bad flow. maybe using this will be better. http://puu.sh/6QPEG.jpg
01:54:009 (4) - dont stack this note. dont stack this note. it is too trappy.

thats all good luck

Reisen Udongein

Former osu! Champion: OWC#3

1,073 posts

Joined January 2010

Topic Starter

Reisen Udongein 2014-02-10T14:52:55+00:00

Laurier wrote:
mod4mod

Beginner
00:14:535 (1) - use same form as 00:17:062 (1) - ? it not big issue. just suggestion. - intended form
01:49:272 - you should start 1/4 rhythm at here. - i don't map with rhythm there, i did it with melody part

thats all good luck

not mentioned mods are perfectly fixed! thanks for the mod!

Zweib

579 posts

Joined November 2011

Zweib 2014-02-11T05:24:53+00:00

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Quilt

1,476 posts

Joined May 2010

Quilt 2014-02-11T11:10:03+00:00

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Lieselotte

404 posts

Joined August 2011

Lieselotte 2014-02-12T05:14:44+00:00

Nice song and mapset

Reisen Udongein

Former osu! Champion: OWC#3

1,073 posts

Joined January 2010

Topic Starter

Reisen Udongein 2014-02-12T05:30:24+00:00

Zweib , Quilt , Lieselotte // Thanks!

DenoisoGoiso

681 posts

Joined April 2013

DenoisoGoiso 2014-02-12T12:17:07+00:00

:3/

[General]

AiBAT/AiMod Problem detected
- combo color please
  SPOILER
  AIBat v3.1 wrote:
  Combo Colours
  Inconsistency in combo colours:
  
  - [Beginner] :
  Combo1 : 124,117,255
  Combo2 : 36,146,255
  Combo3 : 251,237,115
  Combo4 : 235,58,85
  - [Extra] :
  Combo1 : 124,117,255
  Combo2 : 36,146,255
  Combo3 : 251,237,115
  Combo4 : 235,58,85
  - [Muya's Another] :
  Combo1 : 124,117,255
  Combo2 : 36,146,255
  Combo3 : 251,237,115
  Combo4 : 235,58,85
  - [Niva's Hyper] :
  Combo1 : 198,207,255
  Combo2 : 124,117,255
  Combo3 : 156,254,205
  - [W h i t e's Standard] :
  Combo1 : 124,117,255
  Combo2 : 36,146,255
  Combo3 : 251,237,115
  Combo4 : 235,58,85
  kiai time please
  SPOILER
  AIBat v3.1 wrote:
  Kiai
  Inconsistency in Kiai Times:
  
  - [Beginner] :
  Kiai #1: Starts on 01:24:009, ends on 01:33:325
  Kiai #2: Starts on 01:34:114, ends on 01:44:219
  
  - [Extra] :
  Kiai #1: Starts on 01:24:009, ends on 01:33:325
  Kiai #2: Starts on 01:34:114, ends on 01:44:219
  
  - [Muya's Another] :
  Kiai #1: Starts on 00:52:430, ends on 01:02:535
  Kiai #2: Starts on 01:24:009, ends on 01:34:035
  Kiai #3: Starts on 01:34:114, ends on 01:44:140
  Kiai #4: Starts on 01:44:219, ends on 01:44:298
  
  - [Niva's Hyper] :
  Kiai #1: Starts on 01:24:009, ends on 01:33:325
  Kiai #2: Starts on 01:34:114, ends on 01:43:392
  
  - [W h i t e's Standard] :
  Kiai #1: Starts on 01:24:009, ends on 01:33:325
  Kiai #2: Starts on 01:34:114, ends on 01:44:219

Ranking Criteria
- ~~Put any problems here~~ here is the problem
  nothing

[Easy]

Any feedback/greetings and General
- The spacing one really too big for this one, consider reduce it. Tick rate is too many, reduce it 1-? This beginner may be good for rhythms. At least you have too many 1/3 and 1/3 slider :O and some awful slider doesn't looks good. Good diff with the overall, good joob :>

Hitsounding
- not checking hitsound for a moment :>

Placements/Patterning & Comboing
- 00:01:904 (2) - this problem has inconsistency placement pattern, so not same shape with reversed shape (not with reverse icon :>), so linear path like jerk. So my suggestion copy paste the (1) and rotate (rotate placement same like original previous one.) and ctrl + g for consistency.
  00:23:377 (2) - this stack of course confusing beginner player, consider move it to another place .A.)
  00:29:693 (1) - I look, i think IMO this is should be more curved, because looking before pattern one really curve (cuz' it's curving flow)

Timing problems
- nope

Rhythms
- 00:13:430 (2) - you can't do this at easy diff! it's really hard when the slider have 1/2.

[W h i t e's moe]

Any feedback/greetings and General
- Reduce AR1- please, AR5 is so AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA. and this diff looks like suitable like hard, because these kickslider so hard.

Hitsounding
- Not checking at this moment.

Placements/Patterning & Comboing
- 00:05:693 (1,2,3,4) - flow really AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA with these linear path. there was triangle pattern that should be removed, linear path will be broke. I suggest to you change it. (or not)
  00:38:851 (2,3,4) - Try this? seems like (2) is not curved propely so (3,4) flow can't be worked propely too.
  SPOILER
  00:44:219 (3,1) - mother of nazi
  00:49:588 (3) - orz, stack nazi move it to 233,76 for consistency

Timing problems
- Nothing to see~

Rhythms
- ^ Nothing to see~

[nipah/niwvah's haiperr]

Any feedback/greetings and General
- haiiiii :3/

Hitsounding
- Not checking for a moment >.<

Placements/Patterning & Comboing
- 00:23:377 (4) - *this zig-zag shape doesn't hype* mendingan bikin tegak aja daripada bengkok ribet
  00:32:219 (1) - *nazi so hype* bikin blanket donggg

Timing problems
- 233

Rhythms
- 00:18:641 (4) - Kok ini slider? hapus slidernya jadi circle biar jadi ngikutin yg sebelumnya seperti 00:13:588 (4,4) - agar konsistensi yg tidak adil menjadi adil
  00:26:851 (7) - 1/2 gak pas buat musik, tapi di yang white tick nya ada instrumental sedangkan yg di tick merah gak ada apapun jadi jadiin circle aja.

~~Do not give me a kudos when my modding is incomplete. gonna edit the post later.~~ Already finished, yeaahh
i'm not very good modder so i can't mod insanes ;w;
guud lak

Last edited by DenoisoGoiso 2014-02-14T17:26:26+00:00, edited 3 times in total.

Reisen Udongein

Former osu! Champion: OWC#3

1,073 posts

Joined January 2010

Topic Starter

Reisen Udongein 2014-02-12T12:48:24+00:00

Oops i already gave it to you before reading that o:
Just waiting for you coming back then ._.

Kanye West

2,222 posts

Joined July 2011

Kanye West 2014-02-12T13:00:46+00:00

Quilt wrote:
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Selisi

721 posts

Joined October 2012

Selisi 2014-02-13T07:33:03+00:00

(from my queue
very nice map~ every thing looks fine
just take this star~

Beige

Elite Mapper

2,192 posts

Joined February 2011

Beige 2014-02-13T11:20:09+00:00

늦어서 죄송합니다 ㅋ

Tag에 w h i t e를 w_h_i_t_e로 바꿔주세요.

And Fixed it Some Nazi Problem.

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Nekomata Master+ - squall.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1500
PreviewTime: 83603
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:squall
TitleUnicode:squall
Artist:Nekomata Master+
ArtistUnicode:猫叉Master+
Creator:Reisen Udongein
Version:W h i t e's Standard
Source:jubeat
Tags:saucer Drum n Bass Niva Nivalis Muya W_h_i_t_e
BeatmapID:367006
BeatmapSetID:127772

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.1
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"bg.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
2,74104,77756
2,79156,81546
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

[TimingPoints]
641,315.789473684211,4,2,0,40,1,0
22114,-100,4,2,0,60,0,0
84009,-100,4,2,0,70,0,1
93325,-100,4,2,0,70,0,0
94114,-100,4,2,0,70,0,1
104219,-100,4,2,0,70,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 124,117,255
Combo2 : 36,146,255
Combo3 : 251,237,115
Combo4 : 235,58,85

[HitObjects]
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316,132,1904,2,0,L|428:144,2,110,0|0|0,1:0|1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
256,224,2851,2,0,P|272:276|256:328,1,110,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,276,3483,6,0,L|48:288,2,110,0|0|0,1:0|1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
164,168,4430,1,0,1:0:0:0:
256,108,4746,1,0,1:0:0:0:
364,116,5062,2,0,L|448:120,2,82.5,0|0|0,1:0|1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
336,164,5693,6,0,P|308:192|240:208,1,110,2|0,0:2|1:0,0:0:0:0:
132,196,6325,1,0,1:0:0:0:
172,296,6641,1,0,1:0:0:0:
280,308,6956,2,0,L|392:304,1,110,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
496,332,7588,2,0,P|500:304|496:276,1,55,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
468,232,7904,2,0,P|452:180|460:124,1,110,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
504,24,8535,5,0,1:0:0:0:
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316,112,9167,1,0,1:0:0:0:
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436,64,12009,6,0,P|384:72|328:56,1,110,4|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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44,88,69798,5,0,1:0:0:0:
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rrtyui

Former osu! Champion: 2014

744 posts

Joined May 2010

rrtyui 2014-02-14T06:58:46+00:00

please teach how to mapping ;_;

Beige

Elite Mapper

2,192 posts

Joined February 2011

Beige 2014-02-14T07:04:48+00:00

rrtyui wrote:
please teach how to mapping ;_;

You have two awesome Ranked beatmaps lol.

please teach how to playing ;_;

Reisen Udongein

Former osu! Champion: OWC#3

1,073 posts

Joined January 2010

Topic Starter

Reisen Udongein 2014-02-14T07:24:56+00:00

rrtyui wrote:
please teach how to mapping ;_;

let's exchange all my playing and mapping skill and your playing skill

Rakuen

1,654 posts

Joined March 2013

Rakuen 2014-02-14T15:34:38+00:00

( =`･ω･´) AIRakuen 愛楽園 (Mod/GD/M4M)

Hi~

[Beginner]
00:01:904 (2,1,1) - Try something like this? Tail overlap looks hard to read for a beginner (include coordinates)

Image

00:03:167 (1) - X:440 Y:24
00:03:483 (1) - X:368 Y:80
00:04:430 (2) - X:420 Y:296 (basically just DS)
00:05:693 (1) - X:136 Y:348 ( ^ )

00:06:956 (2,1,1) - Refer image (include coordinates)

Image

00:08:219 (1) - X:360 Y:28
00:08:535 (1) - X:388 Y:116

00:22:746 (1) - Place at X:88 Y:300 (below of (2)) or around the coordinates
01:13:904 (1) - I prefer DS tho, try placing it at the left side of 01:12:641 (2) -
01:18:956 (1) - This looks unneeded, consider removing it or start mapping there cuz drain time is only around 2:00 min
01:24:483 - Place a slider here and ends 01:24:956 - suits the music more, like 01:26:535 (1) - without reverse
01:28:430 - Note here, doesn't seem to stop
01:34:588 - Same as previous mod, put something to follow music
01:38:535 - Note here, it feels strange with the stop
01:38:851 (4) - Inconsistency DS (use 1.3x)
01:44:219 (1,2) - This is very hard to read, try other patterns like long sliders
01:46:956 (1,2,1,2,1) - ^ applies
01:53:483 (3) - Replace into a circle which is at 01:53:483 - and then a reverse slider at 01:53:693 - which ends 01:54:114 -

[W h i t e's Standard]
HP: -1 , to make parts like 01:03:167 - easier with lesser drain
00:21:062 (3) - 1.0x DS?
00:26:535 - Feels here should be a reverse slider like 00:30:325 (3) - , 00:26:693 - has a music sound
01:18:956 (1) - :\
01:49:588 - Claps start here a little loud, try 40%

[Niva's Hyper]
00:01:746 - Note here
00:06:798 - ^ flow~
00:31:272 (2) - Ctrl+G
00:36:009 (1) - Ctrl+G
00:36:009 (1,2,3,4) - Like image:

Image

00:41:851 (3,4) - Swap their timing place
^ Then place like image:

Image

00:46:746 (1,2) - Place around:

Image

01:23:062 (4) - NC
01:25:904 - Note, like 01:28:430 (3) -
01:30:956 - ^
01:36:009 - ^
01:41:062 - ^ applies

[Muya's Another]
00:52:430 - KIAI isn't following other diffs, and wadda...Taiko :O /
01:08:772 - The hitsound is a bit loud here, I cant hear the music

[Extra]
Oh tiny circles >w< how to HR

Muya

2,355 posts

Joined August 2009

Muya 2014-02-14T20:23:41+00:00

I want to keep kiai time :/

Niva

Global Moderator

3,196 posts

Joined November 2009

Niva 2014-02-15T04:15:02+00:00

Laurier wrote:
Niva's Hyper
why using diffirent combo color as another diffs ? Actually I was mapping this when the background hasn't been added, I chose this combo color because it looks good orz (changed anyway~)
00:42:325 (1) - it looks bad flow. maybe using this will be better. I tried this and I really felt like something's wrong orz ((1,2,3)'s symmetry is missing)http://puu.sh/6QPEG.jpg
01:54:009 (4) - dont stack this note. dont stack this note. it is too trappy. Added NC to (4), hopefully it's less trappy now~

thats all good luck

DenoisoGoiso wrote:
[nipah/niwvah's haiperr]
Any feedback/greetings and General

haiiiii :3/
Hitsounding

Not checking for a moment >.<
Placements/Patterning & Comboing

00:23:377 (4) - *this zig-zag shape doesn't hype* mendingan bikin tegak aja daripada bengkok ribet Masalah keterbatasan tempat itu...
00:32:219 (1) - *nazi so hype* bikin blanket donggg Umm, itu sudah blanket kok... Kalau perfect blanket kesannya terlalu dipaksa malah :3
Timing problems

233
Rhythms

00:18:641 (4) - Kok ini slider? hapus slidernya jadi circle biar jadi ngikutin yg sebelumnya seperti 00:13:588 (4,4) - agar konsistensi yg tidak adil menjadi adil ...err?
00:26:851 (7) - 1/2 gak pas buat musik, tapi di yang white tick nya ada instrumental sedangkan yg di tick merah gak ada apapun jadi jadiin circle aja. Ada rhythm di sana kok...

~~Do not give me a kudos when my modding is incomplete. gonna edit the post later.~~ Already finished, yeaahh
i'm not very good modder so i can't mod insanes ;w;
guud lak

Rakuen wrote:
[Niva's Hyper]
00:01:746 - Note here It's intentional to have a silence there, yes - the ranked version of squall has this too :3
00:06:798 - ^ flow~ o.o?
00:31:272 (2) - Ctrl+G Ah, I'd like to keep the circular flow here personally
00:36:009 (1) - Ctrl+G
00:36:009 (1,2,3,4) - Like image: Nice one, done!
Image
00:41:851 (3,4) - Swap their timing place
^ Then place like image: Ah, I need the triangle pattern here...
Image
00:46:746 (1,2) - Place around: Made this upper, yep
Image
01:23:062 (4) - NC OK~
01:25:904 - Note, like 01:28:430 (3) -
01:30:956 - ^
01:36:009 - ^
01:41:062 - ^ applies These four is intentional, actually xD

Thanks all (:

SPOILER

osu file format v12

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AudioLeadIn: 1500
PreviewTime: 83603
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
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BeatDivisor: 4
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[Metadata]
Title:squall
TitleUnicode:squall
Artist:Nekomata Master+
ArtistUnicode:猫叉Master+
Creator:Reisen Udongein
Version:Niva's Hyper
Source:jubeat
Tags:saucer Drum n Bass Niva Nivalis Muya W_h_i_t_e
BeatmapID:354045
BeatmapSetID:127772

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.25
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
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//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
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Freya

337 posts

Joined March 2013

Freya 2014-02-15T05:02:17+00:00

rrtyui wrote:
please teach how to mapping ;_;

nice one bunny >.< star

Niva : btw OD nya ditambahin 1 tick please, enakan OD 7, this is hyper afterall

Reisen Udongein

Former osu! Champion: OWC#3

1,073 posts

Joined January 2010

Topic Starter

Reisen Udongein 2014-02-16T03:34:22+00:00

Rakuen wrote:
( =`･ω･´) AIRakuen 愛楽園 (Mod/GD/M4M)

Hi~

[Beginner]
01:13:904 (1) - I prefer DS tho, try placing it at the left side of 01:12:641 (2) - - removed and lengthen the previous slider
01:18:956 (1) - This looks unneeded, consider removing it or start mapping there cuz drain time is only around 2:00 min - Considering
01:24:483 - Place a slider here and ends 01:24:956 - suits the music more, like 01:26:535 (1) - without reverse - since it's easy diff, i think it's too hard when the slider is close to the spinner
01:34:588 - Same as previous mod, put something to follow music - same issue
01:44:219 (1,2) - This is very hard to read, try other patterns like long sliders - Considering
01:46:956 (1,2,1,2,1) - ^ applies - ^
01:53:483 (3) - Replace into a circle which is at 01:53:483 - and then a reverse slider at 01:53:693 - which ends 01:54:114 - nah i like this

thanks for modding, not mentioned mods are perfectly fixed! (also fixed some of Goiso's mods, thanks too!)

Leorda

4,416 posts

Joined June 2009

Leorda 2014-02-17T07:15:01+00:00

Annyeonghaseyo

[Beginner]
* Why not fill the break space with object? Like others diff?

01:12:641 (2) - Too many repeating slider can confuse beginners bcause they don't know when the slider is end. Consider to separate them into 2 slider?
01:44:219 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - ^ (but, it's just suggestion though... it's ok to not to do it)
01:53:062 (2,3,4) - Due to unique rhythm, beginners will confuse for this pattern. Consider to put these into one slider with repeating sliders

[W h i t e's Standard]
* Why not fill the break space with object? Like others diff?

00:36:009 (3) - New combo for your combo pattern?
00:41:062 (3) - ^
00:46:114 (3) - ^
01:22:746 (1) - Short spinner with high BPM can make beginners/averages are hardly to spin this till complete. Consider to extend it or replace it with slider

[Niva's Hyper]
00:49:430 (4) - Move this further away from tail slider? I barely see this while gameplay....

[Muya's Another]
* Why this diff have 3 kiais than 2? Any reason?

00:31:325 (3,4) - Remove (3) and move (4) to blue tick?
00:35:931 (5) - Remove this note for better rhythm ?
00:46:036 (6) - ^

Good luck~

Raiku

238 posts

Joined April 2012

Raiku 2014-02-17T14:23:09+00:00

Daring to mod a Reisen Udongein extra because i'm feeling brave!

[Extra]

01:18:009 (3,1) - I feel as there could be a way to help even this out by causing 3 and 1 to stack because at the moment they overlap. Here is my suggestion (http://puu.sh/6ZEzy.jpg) and (http://puu.sh/6ZEzW.jpg).

01:34:430 (2,2) - I felt as if both of these circles could have been blanketed by their
respective slider components (http://puu.sh/6ZE51.jpg).

01:39:167 (1,2) - Plays and looks so much more hardcore if they weren't overlapping but
instead did what I suggest (http://puu.sh/6ZEbf.jpg).

Such a perfect map... There really isn't much more I can suggest. Good Luck!

Last edited by Raiku 2014-02-17T14:30:22+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

luxoDeh

1,497 posts

Joined February 2012

luxoDeh 2014-02-17T14:28:02+00:00

Hi! mod from my queue.

BEGINNER

00:20:851 (1,1) - there should be more space between the spinner and the next note. also because you did put more space in all the other spinners of the map. so also for a question of consistence maybe it's better to do the same thing.
00:36:956 (3) - move this to x:340 y:164 for better flow?
00:47:062 (3) - here too maybe move to x:232 y:164
01:12:641 (2) - too many repeats here. for an wasy diff is confusing. make 2 sliders with just one repeat.

W H I T E'S STANDARD

01:22:746 (1,1) - maybe there should be more space between this spinner and the next slider. it's still a normal diff, right? maybe if you change is better to replace the spinner with something else.

EXTRA

00:51:799 (1,2,3,4) - these should make a straight line too?
00:52:430 (1) - not really the best form
00:57:167 (1,2,3,4) - what about moving them a bit on the right?
01:28:746 (1) - move the last point of this slider just one grid on the right? (just to be precise XD)
01:37:588 (1) - this slider is too high on the screen. while playing this is exactly on the cirgle (the one that show you the duration of the map XD) put it a bit down.

NIVA'S HYPER

00:05:377 (4) - maybe the slider should be moved to 00:05:693 - and ass a note at 00:05:377 - instead. that's because in your way seem like there's nothing to drag, instead the sound start at 00:05:535 - and end at 00:05:693 - if you listen carefully. you will need to change the pattern just a bit if you change, but I don't think it will be too much. (just a suggestion)
01:25:904 - maybe missing a note here?
01:30:956 - ^
01:48:956 (4) - here's the same as 00:05:377 (4) - if you changed before try also here.

really good map! take a star :3

Reisen Udongein

Former osu! Champion: OWC#3

1,073 posts

Joined January 2010

Topic Starter

Reisen Udongein 2014-02-17T14:28:17+00:00

Raiku wrote:
Daring to mod a Reisen Udongein extra because i'm feeling brave!

[Extra]

01:34:430 (2,2) - I felt as if both of these circles could have been blanketed by their respective slider components (http://puu.sh/6ZE51.jpg).

01:39:167 (1,2) - Plays and looks so much more hardcore if they weren't overlapping but
instead did what I suggest (http://puu.sh/6ZEbf.jpg).

Such a perfect map... There really isn't much more I can suggest. Good Luck!

All fixed! thanks for the mod and star! (edited 3rd one is not changed since i don't want to stack them that much)

Last edited by Reisen Udongein 2014-02-17T14:48:25+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

Raiku

238 posts

Joined April 2012

Raiku 2014-02-17T14:31:36+00:00

Raiku wrote:
Daring to mod a Reisen Udongein extra because i'm feeling brave!

[Extra]

01:18:009 (3,1) - I feel as there could be a way to help even this out by causing 3 and 1 to stack because at the moment they overlap. Here is my suggestion (http://puu.sh/6ZEzy.jpg) and (http://puu.sh/6ZEzW.jpg).

01:34:430 (2,2) - I felt as if both of these circles could have been blanketed by their
respective slider components (http://puu.sh/6ZE51.jpg).

01:39:167 (1,2) - Plays and looks so much more hardcore if they weren't overlapping but
instead did what I suggest (http://puu.sh/6ZEbf.jpg).

Such a perfect map... There really isn't much more I can suggest. Good Luck!

3rd mod added at 01:18:009 (3,1)

Reisen Udongein

Former osu! Champion: OWC#3

1,073 posts

Joined January 2010

Topic Starter

Reisen Udongein 2014-02-17T14:48:14+00:00

luxoDeh wrote:
Hi! mod from my queue.

BEGINNER

00:36:956 (3) - move this to x:340 y:164 for better flow?- it's intended
01:12:641 (2) - too many repeats here. for an wasy diff is confusing. make 2 sliders with just one repeat. - your opinion is reasonable, but still considering

EXTRA

00:51:799 (1,2,3,4) - these should make a straight line too? - it's intended curve
00:52:430 (1) - not really the best form - why don't you give me a alternative shape with this saying D:
01:37:588 (1) - this slider is too high on the screen. while playing this is exactly on the cirgle (the one that show you the duration of the map XD) put it a bit down. - i think it's not that a problem

really good map! take a star :3

not mentioned mods are perfectly fixed! thanks for the mod and star!

Reisen Udongein

Former osu! Champion: OWC#3

1,073 posts

Joined January 2010

Topic Starter

Reisen Udongein 2014-02-17T14:49:30+00:00

Freya wrote:
rrtyui wrote:
please teach how to mapping ;_;
nice one bunny >.< star

Niva : btw OD nya ditambahin 1 tick please, enakan OD 7, this is hyper afterall

thanks for the star!

Beige

Elite Mapper

2,192 posts

Joined February 2011

Beige 2014-02-18T13:49:10+00:00

thanks for mod!

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osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Nekomata Master+ - squall.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1500
PreviewTime: 83603
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:squall
TitleUnicode:squall
Artist:Nekomata Master+
ArtistUnicode:猫叉Master+
Creator:Reisen Udongein
Version:W h i t e's Standard
Source:jubeat
Tags:saucer Drum n Bass Niva Nivalis Muya W_h_i_t_e
BeatmapID:367006
BeatmapSetID:127772

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.1
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"bg.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
2,74104,77756
2,79156,81546
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

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22114,-100,4,2,0,60,0,0
84009,-100,4,2,0,70,0,1
93325,-100,4,2,0,70,0,0
94114,-100,4,2,0,70,0,1
104219,-100,4,2,0,70,0,0


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Combo2 : 36,146,255
Combo3 : 251,237,115
Combo4 : 235,58,85

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Niva

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Joined November 2009

Niva 2014-02-18T14:12:51+00:00

luxoDeh wrote:
NIVA'S HYPER

00:05:377 (4) - maybe the slider should be moved to 00:05:693 - and ass a note at 00:05:377 - instead. that's because in your way seem like there's nothing to drag, instead the sound start at 00:05:535 - and end at 00:05:693 - if you listen carefully. you will need to change the pattern just a bit if you change, but I don't think it will be too much. (just a suggestion) Umm, if I moved it there it means that the slider would end on 00:05:930, and there's nothing from the music there orz... What I'm following right now is the drums actually, and the Reiji's Hard on the ranked squall map follows the exact same rhythm as well actually (albeit of her using two 1/4 circles instead of a 3/4 slider)
01:25:904 - maybe missing a note here?
01:30:956 - ^ These two is intentionally made like that though (already mentioned in my reply to previous mod :3)
01:48:956 (4) - here's the same as 00:05:377 (4) - if you changed before try also here. Kept as is for the same reason xD

Leorda wrote:
[Niva's Hyper]
00:49:430 (4) - Move this further away from tail slider? I barely see this while gameplay... I tried manual stacking (moving this further) here and it looks weird, really - much better if it's stacked as is imo~ (I changed the combo color to red though, so it should be MUCH more visible now)

Sorry for not changing much though, thanks for the mods anyway~

Reisen Udongein : Freya mentioned that OD +1 on my diff would be better, I'm fine with either OD 6 or 7 here so I'll leave it to you (:

SPOILER

osu file format v12

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AudioFilename: Nekomata Master+ - squall.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1500
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Mode: 0
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TitleUnicode:squall
Artist:Nekomata Master+
ArtistUnicode:猫叉Master+
Creator:Reisen Udongein
Version:Niva's Hyper
Source:jubeat
Tags:saucer Drum n Bass Niva Nivalis Muya W_h_i_t_e
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ivan

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ivan 2014-02-18T17:42:18+00:00

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Reisen Udongein

Former osu! Champion: OWC#3

1,073 posts

Joined January 2010

Topic Starter

Reisen Udongein 2014-02-19T09:08:19+00:00

Niva wrote:
Reisen Udongein : Freya mentioned that OD +1 on my diff would be better, I'm fine with either OD 6 or 7 here so I'll leave it to you (:

change OD to 7 and updated both hyper and standard!

TicClick

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4,466 posts

Joined February 2011

TicClick 2014-02-19T12:35:02+00:00

Why the background? Squall is more related to, for example, storm. Also it's recommended to use 16:9 proportions (1366×768 if we speak of resolution).

All difficulties except Myua's

01:33:325 - I see no reason to disable kiai here. If you try to follow the music in some way, you better turn it off at 01:33:483.

[Beginner]

00:19:588 (1) - it lacks soft whistles; add them to repeat and head/tail
01:12:641 (2) - sliders that have many repeats are uncomfortable to play for beginners, since the player has no idea for how long they should hold the slider and "follow" it. Consider turning it into 2/1, slider ticks will save the hitsounding: http://puu.sh/724wl.jpg
01:44:219 (1,2) and everything that follows it - same as above, except it only got worse. Players will have from very little to no idea how to follow them and when the second slider of every pair comes into play. Please, remap them; if you still refuse to fix, do this at least for 01:53:483 (3,4) - which start from the 1/3 offbeat

[Standard]

00:12:009 (1) - I personally would use a soft finish here, temporarily increasing the volume by 20%. What you have now is normal finish that can be barely heard behind the music
01:10:114 (2) - missed finish?
01:49:272 - you better put a note here, because there's a beat line in the music that appears right after, and it's always better to map at least the first beat of it. Also, you better lower the volume by 10 or 15% because normal sampleset is a bit loud for the tune

Hyper

01:25:904 - add note; it fits pretty well, also I missed 01:26:062 (2) - because I thought it goes 1/2 beat earlier
01:40:904 (2,3) - another tricky moment that will most likely cause player to miss; consider moving the whole stack somewhere else and not under the slider's beginning to make it bit more readable

Another

00:52:904 (2) - better use soft finish
01:18:957 (1,3,5) - consider adding soft whistles, or at least soft finish to the first one

[Extra]

00:41:299 (2) - consider replacing it with two notes to follow the music better
01:09:062 (2) - appears to be 1/4
01:09:246 (3) - it sounds like 1/6 and should be moved on the next brown tick, 01:09:272. So, the final result is http://puu.sh/726ap.jpg (be aware that I might be wrong! Talk to someone else about these two)
01:12:851 (2,3,3) - I'd add soft whistles
01:35:062 (1,2,3) - I'd change it a bit to make a better pattern: http://puu.sh/726jm.jpg

P.S. Extra and Another: I'd also try to break the consistency and follow the main beat on 01:49:062: http://puu.sh/725Rk.jpg
I am fine with the rest, except some very jumpy patterns on Extra that appear in the middle of streams.

P.P.S. Please say what you did not fix (and why).

Muya

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Muya 2014-02-20T12:25:50+00:00

TicClick wrote:
Another
00:52:904 (2) - better use soft finish I think normal finish is better
01:18:957 (1,3,5) - consider adding soft whistles, or at least soft finish to the first one added finish

thanks for mod,

http://puu.sh/73j30.osu

also I did check others modder's post, but no changed

Reisen Udongein

Former osu! Champion: OWC#3

1,073 posts

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Reisen Udongein 2014-02-21T07:54:27+00:00

TicClick wrote:
Why the background? Squall is more related to, for example, storm. Also it's recommended to use 16:9 proportions (1366×768 if we speak of resolution).- Surely i know what squall means, but i still don't want to change BG

All difficulties except Myua's
01:33:325 - I see no reason to disable kiai here. If you try to follow the music in some way, you better turn it off at 01:33:483. - i followed the melody starts at 01:33:325 -
[Beginner]
00:19:588 (1) - it lacks soft whistles; add them to repeat and head/tail - i think it would be better to follow drum

[Extra]
00:41:299 (2) - consider replacing it with two notes to follow the music better - i think slider there is good too
01:09:062 (2) - appears to be 1/4 - yeah it appears to be, but i don't want to add something like speed change to emphasize it 1/3
01:09:246 (3) - it sounds like 1/6 and should be moved on the next brown tick, 01:09:272. So, the final result is http://puu.sh/726ap.jpg (be aware that I might be wrong! Talk to someone else about these two) - yeah you might me right in my opinion too , gotta find another solution if can
01:12:851 (2,3,3) - I'd add soft whistles - i want to follow drum line as 01:12:167 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - follow drum line too
P.S. Extra and Another: I'd also try to break the consistency and follow the main beat on 01:49:062: http://puu.sh/725Rk.jpg - i think it would be confusing if i maintain the pattern and just change the rhythm

not mentioned mods are perfectly fixed! thanks for the mod!

Niva

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Niva 2014-02-23T11:53:54+00:00

TicClick wrote:
All difficulties except Myua's
01:33:325 - I see no reason to disable kiai here. If you try to follow the music in some way, you better turn it off at 01:33:483. Leaving this to Reisen~

Hyper
01:25:904 - add note; it fits pretty well, also I missed 01:26:062 (2) - because I thought it goes 1/2 beat earlier I've said on my previous replies that this is intentional though, however I changed (2) into a circle + slider (as in 01:36:167 (2,3)) so hopefully it'll be more intuitive now~
01:40:904 (2,3) - another tricky moment that will most likely cause player to miss; consider moving the whole stack somewhere else and not under the slider's beginning to make it bit more readable Don't know where else to put this though (tried many alternatives and not really pleased with the outcome), leaving as is ._.

Thanks TicClick (:

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Version:Niva's Hyper
Source:jubeat
Tags:saucer Drum n Bass Niva Nivalis Muya W_h_i_t_e
BeatmapID:354045
BeatmapSetID:127772

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.25
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"bg.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
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Reisen Udongein

Former osu! Champion: OWC#3

1,073 posts

Joined January 2010

Topic Starter

Reisen Udongein 2014-02-25T13:21:24+00:00

Updated niva's and the others (for tag)

10crystalmask01

10crystalmask01 2014-02-27T04:04:19+00:00

Ello, mod from queue

[Niva's Hyper]
00:33:798 (6) - NC?
00:38:535 (4) - ^
01:15:798 (5,1) - Move these notes more apart please, so their tails aren't overlapping each other. It'll get rid of that tight crowded feeling here.
01:30:956 Consider adding a note here or a reverse on 01:30:641 (1) - . That space on 01:25:904 sounds really awkward.
01:41:062 - ^ Add a note here?
01:47:062 (1,2) - Not aligned properly. 01:47:377 (2) - appears a bit more on the left.

[Extra]
00:25:272 (3) - Can blanket 00:24:956 (2) - better.
01:41:693 (1,2) - Try to have these 2 sliders in the same shape, similar to what you've done with 01:39:167 (1,2) -

[Muya's Another]
00:11:799 (6,1) - Move more apart so they're not sticking to each other.
00:18:325 (1,4) - ^
01:19:746 (4,3) - ^
01:35:536 (2) - Is not perfectly stacked on 01:35:852 (4) - 's tail.

[W h i t e's Standard]
00:34:746 (1,2) - Is not perfectly aligned. Was this intentional?

Nice map

Good luck!

Muya

2,355 posts

Joined August 2009

Muya 2014-02-27T11:39:58+00:00

01:35:536 (2) - Is not perfectly stacked on 01:35:852 (4) - 's tail.
^ fixed here, thanks for mod!
http://puu.sh/7chcH.osu

Niva

Global Moderator

3,196 posts

Joined November 2009

Niva 2014-02-27T13:13:33+00:00

10crystalmask01 wrote:
Ello, mod from queue
[notice][Niva's Hyper]
00:33:798 (6) - NC?
00:38:535 (4) - ^ Most of the new combos here appear every two stanzas though... I tend to agree on the first one, anyway (:
01:15:798 (5,1) - Move these notes more apart please, so their tails aren't overlapping each other. It'll get rid of that tight crowded feeling here. (5) should be more apart here, yep (can't get it to not overlap (1) though ._.)
01:30:956 Consider adding a note here or a reverse on 01:30:641 (1) - . That space on 01:25:904 sounds really awkward.
01:41:062 - ^ Add a note here? These two are intentional, yep (already mentioned in previous mods)
01:47:062 (1,2) - Not aligned properly. 01:47:377 (2) - appears a bit more on the left. Umm, did you mean the (2,1)? If it's the (1,2) yes it's intentionally made like that, if it's the (2,1) I fixed it~

Thanks for mod :3

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wendao

1,638 posts

Joined August 2012

wendao 2014-03-02T06:23:47+00:00

Extra - 00:43:904 (2,2) stack with previous note, or you did it on purpose?

no kds

Beige

Elite Mapper

2,192 posts

Joined February 2011

Beige 2014-03-02T14:21:10+00:00

no added note and fixed it
thanks for mod

Standard

osu file format v12

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[Editor]
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[Metadata]
Title:squall
TitleUnicode:squall
Artist:Nekomata Master+
ArtistUnicode:猫叉Master+
Creator:Reisen Udongein
Version:W h i t e's Standard
Source:jubeat
Tags:saucer Drum n Bass DnB Niva Nivalis Muya W_h_i_t_e
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Reisen Udongein

Former osu! Champion: OWC#3

1,073 posts

Joined January 2010

Topic Starter

Reisen Udongein 2014-03-09T02:38:43+00:00

updated~ (no change on extra diff)

DeletedUser_1574070

DeletedUser_1574070 2014-03-30T06:24:40+00:00

now you can change diffname Extra to Bunny Style

Reisen Udongein

Former osu! Champion: OWC#3

1,073 posts

Joined January 2010

Topic Starter

Reisen Udongein 2014-03-30T15:20:50+00:00

Kloyd wrote:
now you can change diffname Extra to Bunny Style

룰이 다시 바뀌었나요??

DeletedUser_1574070

DeletedUser_1574070 2014-03-31T10:29:15+00:00

Reisen Udongein wrote:
Kloyd wrote:
now you can change diffname Extra to Bunny Style
룰이 다시 바뀌었나요??

자기 이름만 아니면 된다네요

Oracle

571 posts

Joined April 2012

Oracle 2014-04-18T00:11:36+00:00

you can't anymore...
custom diff name can not be related to a username while Bunny=Reisen Udongein... (._.)

Decipher

617 posts

Joined December 2010

Decipher 2014-05-06T04:54:21+00:00

Udon Style

Frostmourne

osu! Alumni

3,737 posts

Joined November 2009

Frostmourne 2014-09-06T09:32:45+00:00

Welcome back Reisen *\(^o^)/*

tell me if you need a mod...

Reisen Udongein

Former osu! Champion: OWC#3

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Joined January 2010

Topic Starter

Reisen Udongein 2014-09-06T09:59:02+00:00

Frostmourne wrote:
Welcome back Reisen *\(^o^)/*

tell me if you need a mod...

wahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh long time no see frost T_T

back to map hehe

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DeletedUser_1574070 2014-09-07T04:47:23+00:00

켁... 오자마자 캣이 러브콜을...

Chloe

1,162 posts

Joined April 2011

Chloe 2014-09-07T07:16:31+00:00

Hello~ check it from my queue!

[General]

There're some unsnapped inherit timing points in Niva's Hyper, I suggest to fix them.

[Beginner]

00:03:483 (1) - 00:06:009 (1) - 00:08:535 (1) - remove nc from these, more friendly to beginner
00:36:009 (2,3,1) - make a blanket here will be more beautiful, also you

[W h i t e's Standard]

00:20:851 (2) - nc here for more friendly to newbies since this is only a normal or normal+ diff.

[Niva's Hyper]

00:47:377 (1) - remove finish in the tail? actually sounded weird imo
00:49:272 (1) - nc? looks clean
00:49:272 (1) - nc for more readable
01:15:483 (4) - 01:18:009 (4) - nc them like 01:25:588 (1) - for consistency

this diff is one of the best hard/hard+ diffs i've seen

[Muya's Another]

00:02:852 (1,1,1) - can you put them to x:364 y:72 ? it looks much nicer, currently
00:12:957 (3,3,5) - how about set drum additons and add whistle here, they're really fit here, also plz apply in this whole part if you want to do.
00:32:852 (3) - imo the spacing is too close here, looks like 1/2 spacing, you can
00:35:852 (4) - nc this one instead of 00:36:009 (1) - , i know you nc for hard beat now but I suggest to nc for pattern
00:45:956 (5,1) - ^
01:26:378 (6) - rhythm suggestion here, delete this and delay 01:25:746 (4,5) - 1/2 beat time, then you can add a triplet at 01:25:904 (4) -'s top
01:35:852 (4,5,6) - ^

[Extra]

00:19:193 - add sth here?
00:41:062 (1) - looks bad, you should reverse the cruve way.
01:21:167 (1) - nc here for stream pattern changed
01:26:219 (3,4,5,6,1) - plz make ths blanket well, you can see 01:26:062 (2) - 's approach circle to put the stream or use convert slider to stream.
01:36:641 (1,2) - i don't think this one is good.... i won't stack them as a pattern in the last part since it's eas(close spacing) and it has chance to make some players confused

overall a nice set, i've already favorited it for a long time, hope you can make more fun maps like this one, gl

Niva

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Niva 2014-09-07T08:25:47+00:00

Chloe wrote:
Hello~ check it from my queue!

[General]
There're some unsnapped inherit timing points in Niva's Hyper, I suggest to fix them. Done~
[Niva's Hyper]
00:47:377 (1) - remove finish in the tail? actually sounded weird imo Lowered the volume instead to make a dampened effect here
00:49:272 (1) - nc? looks clean
00:49:272 (1) - nc for more readable I understand your point there but personally I prefer to maintain the combo length consistency at this point (:
01:15:483 (4) - 01:18:009 (4) - nc them like 01:25:588 (1) - for consistency Done~
this diff is one of the best hard/hard+ diffs i've seen

Thanks Chloe!~ I totally didn't expect that last line coming - I personally feel this map is kind of outdated to nowadays' mapping style and there's a lot of more creative Hard diffs out there, though o.o

SPOILER

osu file format v13

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Reisen Udongein

Former osu! Champion: OWC#3

1,073 posts

Joined January 2010

Topic Starter

Reisen Udongein 2014-09-07T14:22:53+00:00

Chloe wrote:
Hello~ check it from my queue!

[Beginner]
00:03:483 (1) - 00:06:009 (1) - 00:08:535 (1) - remove nc from these, more friendly to beginner - gotta think more on this mod! i think this NC reflects the song's emphasizing point
00:36:009 (2,3,1) - make a blanket here will be more beautiful, also you - it's intended pattern, so i will leave them not changed!
[Extra]
00:19:193 - add sth here? - i want to leave that curvy pattern & spacing
00:41:062 (1) - looks bad, you should reverse the cruve way. - not that bad in my opinion
01:36:641 (1,2) - i don't think this one is good.... i won't stack them as a pattern in the last part since it's eas(close spacing) and it has chance to make some players confused - i think players who at least can survive on this diff will not be confused on that part

overall a nice set, i've already favorited it for a long time, hope you can make more fun maps like this one, gl

the others are perfectly fixed, thanks for the mod!

Frostmourne

osu! Alumni

3,737 posts

Joined November 2009

Frostmourne 2014-09-14T16:32:10+00:00

General
seems good ヾ(@^▽^@)ノ

Beginner
I am concerned about 01:29:062 (1,2,3) - and 01:39:167 (1,2,3) -
They are unexpected to be here for the Beginner diff. It could still work but at least, remove some of consecutive notes before it (example 01:37:904 (2,4) - or 01:27:798 (2,4) - to give players some time to rest.

W h i t e's Standard
can move AR to 5.5 or 6 since the bpm and the way you mapped and SV you used suit the song and increase HP to 4 or 5
A bit harder than what Standard should be... Could you remove some notes to get gaps for players?
00:15:798 (3) - something like this plays easier and still maintains what you may be following.

SPOILER

00:20:851 (2) - use slider instead to compensate the 1/3 instead of using a circle that is harder to hit ?

SPOILER

00:30:167 (2) - could remove to reduce the difficulty
overall the diff is great, but I highly suggest you remove some notes where you find appropriate to reduce a bit of difficulty
(guideline: normal icon = under 2.25, current rating = 2.28)

I will continue the rest later when I have time ~~~~~

fm4a93au04

129 posts

Joined March 2012

fm4a93au04 2014-09-15T07:00:44+00:00

Hello , from my queue .

fm4a93au04's standard modding and GD ( ? ) queue

Modding

[General]

There is no SB in your map , so consider to disable widescreen support .

[Beginner]

Good Easy ~ Just 1 thing I curious :

There are no special sound on the tick , then why you use 2x tick rate ? If that is you mean to , just ignore me .

[W h i t e's Standard]

I can’t find anything in this map = = . Just same curious as Easy :

There are no special sound on the tick , then why you use 2x tick rate ? If that is you mean to , just ignore me .

[Niva's Hyper]

01:41:219 (3) – Consider NC here .

There are no special sound on the tick , then why you use 2x tick rate ? If that is you mean to , just ignore me .

Good map ~ It absolutely can be ranked ~

Give you a star ~

Niva

Global Moderator

3,196 posts

Joined November 2009

Niva 2014-09-15T15:56:53+00:00

fm4a93au04 : That tick rate 2 is purely a personal preference, to say the truth - I'd leave the NC issue to Reisen for him to fix it or not, as I myself don't face any problem having it either NC'ed or not (:

Thanks for the mod~

AruOtta

1,304 posts

Joined May 2012

AruOtta 2014-09-24T17:54:38+00:00

Hey, mod from my queue <3
Welcome back \:D/

I'm so late, sorry ;w;

Beginner

2 Slider Tick Rate seems a bit too much for me and it's not needed, try to move it to 1, sliders will seems "cleaner"

00:01:904 (2,1) - There's an overlap here, it's just a suggestion but maybe you can move (1) 2 grids up, it'll not overlap with the head, so it'll look prettier. The overlap with the tail will not be noticeable as much as you think because the player will focus on the top of the screen.
00:03:483 (1,2) - You can make a better blanket to have a p
erfect pattern. Try to follow the circleoverlay like in this exemple :

SPOILER

00:08:535 (1) - I suggest to reverse this curve to increase the flow, it'll make a perfect transition with 00:09:483 (2) because it'll follow its movement.
00:13:430 (2) - I'm not a big fan of sliders on red ticks because I know beginners have a problem with them. It's a bit annoying, so maybe you can follow this pattern ? (same for the next patterns)

00:36:956 (3) - Just a suggestion : you can move it to x356|y164 to increase the flow and follow the 2 sliders' movement.
00:49:588 (2) - You can maybe try to move it like on the following picture to make a good flow with (2) and a blanket with (3) ? :

SPOILER

01:01:904 (4,1) - You can improve the blanket here, it'll make a cleaner pattern.
01:18:956 (1) - I don't really think this circle is needed, it breaks the break, so it's a bit annoying.
01:29:062 (1,2,3) - This pattern seems too hard for a Beginner diff. I suggest this exemle : (same for the next patterns)

The diff. is quite perfect except the little problems I noticed above

W h i t e's Standard

00:07:588 (5) - I think this 1/2 slider isn't needed, it doesn't follow the rhythm of previous patterns, so you may replace is by a circle.
00:20:851 (2,3) - I'm not a big fan of the 1/3 distance between these 2 objects. I think its's gonna create problems for beginners. I suggest to have the 2 objects on a white tick, like at 01:12:641 (1,2,3) or like this exemple :

00:26:535 (6) - This slider makes the big white tick unclickable. However, the beat at 00:27:167 - is emphasized. You even put a finish on ! So it should be clickable in my opinion.
00:52:904 (2) - Objects which starts on red tick can be annoying for beginners. I suggest this pattern : (same for the next patterns)

01:18:956 (1) - Same as the Easy diff, this circle breaks the break. The sound isn't enough emphasized for having a circle here in my opinion.

The diff is clean and beautiful. Good job :3

Niva's Hyper

00:05:062 (3,4) - Warning, this pattern looks like 00:03:798 (3,1) but there aren't the same rhythmically. It's quite tricky.
00:05:377 (4,1) - The distance snap between these 2 sliders is very high... I thought it was 1/1 spacing =/ I suggest this pattern : (just move (1) a bit)

SPOILER

00:25:904 (4,5,6,7) - If you look at (4)'s movement, it goes to (7) instead of (5) (like on this screenshot) so I suggest to reverse horizontally the slider (CTRL + H)
00:31:904 (4,1) - You missed a good opportunity to make a blanket. It'll looks prettier in my opinion (and it'll increase a bit the flow) :

SPOILER

00:34:667 (5) - It's quite hard to notice this circle when playing =/ It can make you sliderbreak easily, so I suggest to increase the distance between these 2 objects.
00:36:325 (2,4) - I think you can reverse the curves of these 2 slider, then it'll blanket with 00:36:009 (1,3) and increase the flow for 00:36:956 (4,5,1).
01:02:535 (3,4) - I suggest for these 2 circles to use a pattern similar as 01:05:062 (2,3) because it can be confusing with the stack ("when should you click the second circle ?")
01:25:904 - You missed an important beat here. I suggest to reverse (1)
01:30:956 - Same as above. I suggest to add a circle at x400|y4
01:36:009 - ^ I suggest to add a circle at x284|y65
01:41:062 - Same problem here. Maybe you can put a circle at x412|y56 ?

Your mapping style makes the diff perfect. Congratz :3

Muya's Another

HP 8 and OD 8 seems too much hard for me. The Hyper diff. is HP6 and OD 7, the Extra diff. is HP8 and OD 8. Then you should use HP 7 and OD7 / 7,5.

00:10:431 (4,5,6,1) - I suggest to use a higher distance snap for these circles since it looks like a 1/4 pattern (or maybe you can use sliders)

There's no other problem I noticed (except a little thing : the diff. is too hard for an Another diff in my opinion)

Extra

00:10:114 (2,3) - The distance between these 2 objects is too much high. Also, (3) is hidden by 00:09:799 (1). I suggest this pattern :

SPOILER

00:21:088 (1,2,3) - Maybe you can increase the distance snap between these 3 circles to emphasize the rhythm change ?
00:38:851 (7,9,10,1) - You can improve the stack here to make it prettier to play.
00:41:299 (2) - This slider makes 00:41:377 unclickable, however it's important to click it, so I suggest to add 2 circles instead of this slider.
00:58:035 (4) - This slider isn't logical with the rhythm. So you MUST delete it and maybe add a circle at 00:58:114 instead ?
01:04:430 (1,2) - This is quite hard to read. The player can think (1) is a slider. I suggest to add a NC for (2) or to move it somewhere else.
01:08:141 (5) - Same as above, this slider isn't logical with the rhythm and MUST be deleted. This is an exemple of a good rhythm :

SPOILER

01:11:298 (6) - This should be replaced by 2 circles to be logical with the song.
01:37:825 (2) - As I said above, this means there's only 01:37:825 clickable. This is not an important beat, so you should add a circle at 01:37:904 instead.
01:53:930 (3) - This slider isn't logical with the rhythm. This is the good rhythm for this pattern :

I think the mapset has a good quality, it's ready to be ranked in my opinion.
Good luck for rank <3

Secretpipe

3,316 posts

Joined December 2012

Secretpipe 2014-09-26T17:32:38+00:00

Frostmourne wrote:
Welcome back Reisen *\(^o^)/*

tell me if you need a mod...

EDIT : In my opinion , Preview Point should be here →01:24:009 -

This is really better !

Muya

2,355 posts

Joined August 2009

Muya 2014-09-26T17:46:15+00:00

update~

Verlaren

Verlaren 2014-09-28T15:16:55+00:00

From my queue.
Sorry for poor mod and delay.

Beginner
01:28:114 (2,3) - distace snap error
01:30:009 (3,4) - ^
01:39:641 (2,3) - ^
01:40:114 (3,4) - ^
01:40:430 (4,5) - ^
01:29:062 (1,2) - remove whistles from slider's tails
01:39:167 (1,2) - ^

White's standart, Niva's hyper
no comments, nice diff

Extra
Sorry, I can't mod this.

Niva

Global Moderator

3,196 posts

Joined November 2009

Niva 2014-09-28T17:22:59+00:00

Kenterz wrote:
Niva's Hyper

00:05:062 (3,4) - Warning, this pattern looks like 00:03:798 (3,1) but there aren't the same rhythmically. It's quite tricky. That manual-stacking technique should help a lot already, imo - I made this stacked properly to 00:07:272 (2)'s end, though
00:05:377 (4,1) - The distance snap between these 2 sliders is very high... I thought it was 1/1 spacing =/ I suggest this pattern : (just move (1) a bit) The new combo serves as a big hint already here, though (:
SPOILER
00:25:904 (4,5,6,7) - If you look at (4)'s movement, it goes to (7) instead of (5) (like on this screenshot) so I suggest to reverse horizontally the slider (CTRL + H) Changed the wave style into a rigid one here, should look much less forced now~
00:31:904 (4,1) - You missed a good opportunity to make a blanket. It'll looks prettier in my opinion (and it'll increase a bit the flow) : Oh, this one... My true intent here is actually to let (4) encircles (1)'s end, thus giving a slight jump from the (4) to (1) as it's serving the map currently
SPOILER
00:34:667 (5) - It's quite hard to notice this circle when playing =/ It can make you sliderbreak easily, so I suggest to increase the distance between these 2 objects. As you wish!
00:36:325 (2,4) - I think you can reverse the curves of these 2 slider, then it'll blanket with 00:36:009 (1,3) and increase the flow for 00:36:956 (4,5,1). CTRL+G'ed (1,3) instead
01:02:535 (3,4) - I suggest for these 2 circles to use a pattern similar as 01:05:062 (2,3) because it can be confusing with the stack ("when should you click the second circle ?") Good point there, but I'm leaving it as is for now as I can't think of a fancy pattern to put up here (:
01:25:904 - You missed an important beat here. I suggest to reverse (1)
01:30:956 - Same as above. I suggest to add a circle at x400|y4
01:36:009 - ^ I suggest to add a circle at x284|y65
01:41:062 - Same problem here. Maybe you can put a circle at x412|y56 ? These four were intentionally made like that from the very beginning, actually...

Your mapping style makes the diff perfect. Congratz :3 My heartfelt thanks!

Thank you for the helpful mod!~

SPOILER

osu file format v13

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AudioLeadIn: 1500
PreviewTime: 83603
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
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DistanceSpacing: 1.9
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

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TitleUnicode:squall
Artist:Nekomata Master+
ArtistUnicode:猫叉Master+
Creator:Reisen Udongein
Version:Niva's Hyper
Source:jubeat
Tags:saucer Drum n Bass DnB Niva Nivalis Muya W_h_i_t_e
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BeatmapSetID:127772

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CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.25
SliderTickRate:2

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Reisen Udongein

Former osu! Champion: OWC#3

1,073 posts

Joined January 2010

Topic Starter

Reisen Udongein 2014-10-04T13:24:21+00:00

Frostmourne wrote:
General
seems good ヾ(@^▽^@)ノ

Beginner
I am concerned about 01:29:062 (1,2,3) - and 01:39:167 (1,2,3) -
They are unexpected to be here for the Beginner diff. It could still work but at least, remove some of consecutive notes before it (example 01:37:904 (2,4) - or 01:27:798 (2,4) - to give players some time to rest. - fixed

thanks a lot frost~

wa_

237 posts

Joined May 2012

wa_ 2014-10-08T22:47:18+00:00

Just suggestions, feel free to ignore

Also, sorry for almost 1 month delay, I'm too lazy...

[General]

The only important thing that can be improved is diff spread between Hyper and Another. You have regular Hard difficulty and then you get really tough almost-Extra Another with many complex rhythms and high OD/HP. Yeah, currently it's rankable (probably? - it's under 2.0 stars) and it's OK for me as modder, but it's quite annoying as player, there's lack of Insane difficulty (about 4-4.5 stars) without long streams and pattern traps. It would be perfect if you make another Another :3
Add Nayouki Sato and 佐藤直之 to tags since it's real name of composer of this song?

[Hyper]

00:49:430 (4) - According to melody, consider remove this circle? Or change (3) into slider, there's not really big reason to have "big" jump at this moment...
01:13:904 (1) - It shoudln't flow better when you make blanket with previous note?

I love your mapping style <3

[Another]

HP 7 for better spread with Hyper and Extra?

[Extra]

There are some long, 6,8-beat combos. For example: 00:13:430 - 00:15:956 - 00:38:535 - 00:44:693. I don't know if they're intentional but they look inconsistent and they'd cause low HP pain (cause high drain rate ;_;)
00:13:904 (1,2,1,2) - Personally, I don't like these jumps at this moment... This part is too calm for something like this Consider decreasing spacing...
00:20:062 (2,3) - Add blanket here?
00:52:430 (1) - 00:57:483 (1) - Shape like this isn't unrankable? Just suggestion (for BATs, QATs?), cause I like it and I think it doesn't negatively affect the gameplay (this rule is really stupid). It appears also just before kiai.
01:04:904 (3,1) - Stack?
I suggest to put NC at 01:08:535 (7) (according to music) and 01:09:483 (5) (new pattern). You can remove New Combo from 01:08:851.

Easy diffs seems fine. Brilliant mapset, can't wait for ranking this

Niva

Global Moderator

3,196 posts

Joined November 2009

Niva 2014-10-09T17:13:41+00:00

wa_ wrote:
[Hyper]
00:49:430 (4) - According to melody, consider remove this circle? Or change (3) into slider, there's not really big reason to have "big" jump at this moment... Followed your second suggestion, it should play a lot more naturally now - thanks for this suggestion!~
01:13:904 (1) - It shoudln't flow better when you make blanket with previous note? Current pattern flows better with the next (2), while your suggestion flows better with the previous (3) - not really sure to follow which one here (both plays well), I'm leaving this as is for now though (:
I love your mapping style <3

Thank you wa_!~

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235,11,90641,6,0,P|267:17|302:15,1,62.5,8|2,0:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
449,103,91114,2,0,P|417:101|387:107,2,62.5,8|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:
503,42,91588,6,0,L|497:185,1,125,2|8,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
492,248,92062,2,0,B|445:248|445:248|415:275|373:264,1,125,2|8,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,203,92535,2,0,B|319:203|319:203|349:176|391:187,1,125,2|0,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
391,187,93167,6,0,B|385:155|385:155|394:120,1,62.5,8|2,0:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
460,81,93483,1,2,0:0:0:0:
412,14,93641,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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299,51,94114,6,0,B|270:63|237:51|237:51|201:38|174:52,1,125,6|8,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
110,98,94588,2,0,P|83:153|107:209,1,125,2|8,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,242,95062,2,0,B|203:254|239:241|239:241|272:229|301:241,1,125,2|0,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
301,241,95693,6,8,L|296:171,1,62.5,8|2,0:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
423,45,96167,1,8,0:0:0:0:
423,45,96325,2,0,L|417:107,1,62.5,10|0,0:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
470,169,96641,6,0,P|409:189|348:153,1,125,2|8,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
283,129,97114,2,0,B|243:129|243:129|201:149|201:149|162:149,1,125,2|8,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
105,208,97588,2,0,B|92:253|92:253|95:298|133:317,1,125,2|0,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
131,316,98219,6,0,L|68:316,1,62.5,8|2,0:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
256,264,98535,1,2,0:0:0:0:
186,374,98693,1,8,0:0:0:0:
177,243,98851,1,10,0:0:0:0:
262,346,99009,1,0,1:2:0:0:
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448,320,99641,2,0,B|456:277|456:277|441:240|441:240|448:194,1,125,2|8,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
491,131,100114,2,0,P|440:165|379:157,1,125,2|0,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
379,157,100746,5,8,0:0:0:0:
491,131,100904,1,2,1:2:0:0:
491,131,101219,1,8,0:0:0:0:
379,157,101377,1,2,0:0:0:0:
274,127,101535,1,8,0:0:0:0:
170,157,101693,6,0,P|110:170|57:137,1,125,2|8,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
2,78,102167,2,0,L|13:220,1,125,2|8,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
17,284,102641,1,2,1:2:0:0:
170,157,102956,1,0,1:2:0:0:
17,284,103272,6,0,L|22:359,1,62.5,8|2,0:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
13,203,103588,1,2,0:0:0:0:
100,290,103746,1,8,0:0:0:0:
83,167,103904,2,0,L|79:135,3,31.25,8|8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
76,120,104219,6,0,B|120:129|150:100|150:100|201:100,1,125,6|0,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
256,46,104693,1,0,0:0:0:0:
317,100,104851,2,0,B|362:100|362:100|392:129|436:120,1,125,0|0,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
436,119,105483,6,0,P|442:87|433:58,1,62.5,0|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
486,194,105798,2,0,P|507:169|513:139,1,62.5,0|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
478,278,106114,2,0,P|509:277|543:253,1,62.5,0|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
478,278,106430,6,0,B|429:265|429:265|378:265,1,100,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,314,107062,6,0,L|232:377,1,62.5,0|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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209,113,108009,6,0,P|241:123|274:120,1,62.5,0|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
397,164,108325,2,0,P|365:162|336:171,1,62.5,0|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,232,108641,2,0,P|270:278|291:324,1,93.75,0|0,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
299,329,108956,2,0,P|267:320|230:324,1,62.5,0|2,1:2|1:3,0:0:0:0:
374,357,109272,6,0,P|432:373|490:347,1,125,0|8,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
500,266,109746,1,0,0:0:0:0:
510,185,109904,2,0,B|504:142|504:142|514:102|514:102|508:63,1,125,0|8,1:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
507,62,110535,6,0,L|497:0,1,62.5,0|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
454,125,110851,2,0,L|390:125,1,62.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
511,185,111167,2,0,L|501:247,1,62.5,0|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
446,303,111483,6,0,B|422:311|397:303|397:303|371:295|347:304,1,100,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,212,112114,6,0,L|176:148,1,62.5,8|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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242,99,113062,6,0,P|277:94|308:99,1,62.5,0|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
377,66,113377,2,0,P|395:41|406:11,1,62.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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412,224,114009,5,0,1:2:0:0:
389,328,114167,1,2,1:3:0:0:

VINXIS

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VINXIS 2016-11-09T02:25:15+00:00

Bring This Back To Osu!

Frostmourne

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Frostmourne 2016-11-09T02:34:04+00:00

VINXIS wrote:
Bring This Back To Osu!

nice

Cloudchaser

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Joined May 2012

Cloudchaser 2018-02-28T21:49:51+00:00

You don't know how much I missed your mapping ;_;

Reisen Udongein

Former osu! Champion: OWC#3

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Reisen Udongein 2018-02-28T22:15:05+00:00

Cloudchaser wrote:
You don't know how much I missed your mapping ;_;

Wow...I didn't expect that someone still remember this map and post on this thread... It REALLY is a pleasure that there is at least a person who still remember me. Thanks a lot.

Dailycare

Beatmap Nominator

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Joined May 2012

Dailycare 2018-03-01T00:29:24+00:00

헉

Chanyah

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Joined November 2014

Chanyah 2018-03-01T01:29:40+00:00

yup checking this out real soon ~ placeholder

UndeadCapulet

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UndeadCapulet 2018-03-01T02:46:09+00:00

i can qualify after hailie bubbles (assuming qat dont hold me on probation)

Chanyah

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Joined November 2014

Chanyah 2018-03-02T18:46:01+00:00

Alrighty I have return

Extra

00:24:325 (5,1) - hmm possibly reduce the spacing some around here? I think for a less intense sections of the song I believe that the jumps is too high (even higher than some of the jumps in the kiai)
00:49:904 (1,1,1,1) - Minor thing but I do find these NC sorta unnnessary comparing to the other NC spam which is more understandable and removing these wouldn't exactly ruin any form of emphasis right here as I think the NC make these notes stand out too much
00:45:641 (9,10) - Would be cool to give more emphasis to (10) and (9) by not having them stack and move (9) to create a jump like most of all your patterns in here since this is the only time ya did something like this
00:53:693 (1,2,3,4) - this would flow better if you did not have the kickslider so close to the stream and have much more spaced out
01:06:483 - Don't see the harm of adding a note right here 01:04:430 - since it beat here is pretty noticable for it not to be here but up to u

General

Source : should be jubeat saucer
http://www.konamistyle.jp/sp/jubeat_saucer/index.html
normal-sliderslide7.wav soft-hitnormal7.wav soft-sliderslide7.wav not sure about these hitsounds since it states that it must be 100ms length at least in rc (all 3 41ms)
sorry to say but ya do have to replace them
I can get behind the high od in this map but yea I do suggest hp 6.5 or hp 7 since hp 8 is a tad too high
- The same for Muya's Another with using somewhere around 6 or 6.5 because even if you don't change above - i believe both difficulties shouldn't have the same hp and should be more balance for the spread
Spread issues - I have to raise some concerns between the Hyper and Another
I feel that the Another difficulty is quite too dense in general with its usages of a lot streams and jumps and that with the hyper in it current state with not much usage of jumps or 1/4 rhythm to really be a good transition. There is ways to come by this such as buffing Hyper or nerfing Another but the best solution is simple creating a lower insane difficulty that use not as many streams and jumps without needing to do neither of the other options

I would like to nominate this but my main issue is the spread and I would like to see how that is fix before going any further with modding this set sorry

EDIT: fix some grammar mistakes

Reisen Udongein

Former osu! Champion: OWC#3

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Reisen Udongein 2018-03-03T01:26:28+00:00

Hailie wrote:
Alrighty I have return

Extra
00:24:325 (5,1) - hmm possibly reduce the spacing some around here? I think for a less intense sections of the song I believe that the jumps is too high (even higher than some of the jumps in the kiai) - Since my intention on this is being symmetric with previous one and this difficulty is the hardest one on the mapset, so I'll keep it this way.
00:49:904 (1,1,1,1) - Minor thing but I do find these NC sorta unnnessary comparing to the other NC spam which is more understandable and removing these wouldn't exactly ruin any form of emphasis right here as I think the NC make these notes stand out too much - fixed
00:45:641 (9,10) - Would be cool to give more emphasis to (10) and (9) by not having them stack and move (9) to create a jump like most of all your patterns in here since this is the only time ya did something like this - I think it's better keeping this than make a jump there, so i just leave this
00:53:693 (1,2,3,4) - this would flow better if you did not have the kickslider so close to the stream and have much more spaced out - fixed
01:06:483 - Don't see the harm of adding a note right here 01:04:430 - since it beat here is pretty noticable for it not to be here but up to u - - I didn't set the streams to the drum sounds, I think i don't need to put a new note there

General
Source : should be jubeat saucer - fixed
http://www.konamistyle.jp/sp/jubeat_saucer/index.html
normal-sliderslide7.wav soft-hitnormal7.wav soft-sliderslide7.wav not sure about these hitsounds since it states that it must be 100ms length at least in rc (all 3 41ms)
sorry to say but ya do have to replace them - removed
I can get behind the high od in this map but yea I do suggest hp 6.5 or hp 7 since hp 8 is a tad too high
- The same for Muya's Another with using somewhere around 6 or 6.5 because even if you don't change above - i believe both difficulties shouldn't have the same hp and should be more balance for the spread - set extra 7, set another 6.5
Spread issues - I have to raise some concerns between the Hyper and Another
I feel that the Another difficulty is quite too dense in general with its usages of a lot streams and jumps and that with the hyper in it current state with not much usage of jumps or 1/4 rhythm to really be a good transition. There is ways to come by this such as buffing Hyper or nerfing Another but the best solution is simple creating a lower insane difficulty that use not as many streams and jumps without needing to do neither of the other options - umm on this suggestion I think i need to get much more opinions because I think leveling of difficulty this much is not that a big issue (saw some maps these days having bigger difference on their mapset), and modders on this map by far had not mentioned about this issue

I would like to nominate this but my main issue is the spread and I would like to see how that is fix before going any further with modding this set sorry

EDIT: fix some grammar mistakes

Well, Thank you for modding! I need to deliberately think about the spread you said.

Halfslashed

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438 posts

Joined July 2014

Halfslashed 2018-03-05T03:43:34+00:00

UC asked me for an opinion on the spread.

Niva's Hyper consists of somewhat long 1/2 chains separated by 1/1 gaps, occasional passive 1/4 with the rare 1/4 triple, meanwhile Muya's Another contains active 1/6, 17 note 1/4 streams, active 1/3, etc.

I think the best solution is to have an Insane difficulty between Niva and Muya's difficulties, with passive 1/6 and shorter chains of 1/4 (5-9 notes), along with friendlier handling of 1/3.

If you need a mod or anything by the way, feel free to contact me, I'd love to see this set ranked!

Reisen Udongein

Former osu! Champion: OWC#3

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Reisen Udongein 2018-03-05T09:32:16+00:00

Halfslashed wrote:
UC asked me for an opinion on the spread.

Niva's Hyper consists of somewhat long 1/2 chains separated by 1/1 gaps, occasional passive 1/4 with the rare 1/4 triple, meanwhile Muya's Another contains active 1/6, 17 note 1/4 streams, active 1/3, etc.

I think the best solution is to have an Insane difficulty between Niva and Muya's difficulties, with passive 1/6 and shorter chains of 1/4 (5-9 notes), along with friendlier handling of 1/3.

If you need a mod or anything by the way, feel free to contact me, I'd love to see this set ranked!

I highly appreciate all of you, Hailie, UC, Halfslashed, for giving attention on this map.
As three BNs have same opinion on the spread, I'll make the new diff between hyper and another. (or will get a guest diff) After i renew the whole mapset, I'll contact you.
Thank you for the attention once again.

Zero__wind

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Zero__wind 2018-03-05T14:28:42+00:00

Hype!!!!!

Reisen Udongein

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Reisen Udongein 2018-03-05T15:49:50+00:00

Zero__wind wrote:
Hype!!!!!

Thank you for numerous stars, zerowind

Chanyah

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Joined November 2014

Chanyah 2018-03-07T07:39:32+00:00

Alrighty I have already modded the Extra and don't have any true problems with it (I will recheck this later in case I miss something tho) so moving on to the rest of the difficulties

Muya's Another

00:10:431 (4,5,6) - maybe add a NC here to may help readability slightly and help the player understand more this is 1/3 or maybe slightly spaced it out more ( or make 00:05:378 (4) - more closed to the slider end of 00:05:062 (3) - each option works)
00:23:378 (1) - Possibly spacing this out more than it is currently to give it more emphasis on the strong beat - seems kind of weak currently
00:35:852 (4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - For some of these streams in this map (not pointing them all out) I feel that there should be more contrast in the intenseness of the music rather than just having the whole stream having the same spacing as if the music itself has it where all the beat is siginicantly strong which is defiantly not the case when I slow down the song or turning off the hitsounds
01:13:062 (3,4) - fixed stack here (minor)
01:17:694 (1,2) - maybe change the angle of (1) instead of just a straight line to help the flow a bit better around here (minor)

Hyper+

00:15:009 (2,3,4) - the spacing between these is kind of low comparison to what ya just did before where the spacing larger 00:12:798 (3,4,5,6,1) - . imo I feel that the spacing on the first pattern should be reduce some more to be easier (or ya can spacing out the 2nd 1 out more - either is ok and it be more consistent)
00:23:219 (1,2) - there isn't a beat at 00:23:298 (2) - or anything really to support nor do I see any of the other difficulties (such as your Extra) have map this so it seems strange to do it on this difficulty so I suggest removing this note and just make 00:23:219 (1) - a jump instead (also 00:23:062 (5) - maybe reduce the spacing on this note while ya at it since I think it is a tad too high currently)
00:28:746 (3,4) - the jump right is significantly too large here for this part of the song and shouldn't be this emphasis - even in your top difficulty doesn't have this much spacing like this so please reduce the spacing around here
00:35:062 (2,3,4) - by now u should get the point about the jumps (this should be about it tho)
00:47:535 (1,1,1) - I get what ya trying to do but at the same time the spacing here is quite large in comparison to most of the map and I believe too hard for this difficulty - reducing it some would be best
00:49:904 (1) - I feel this spinner just doesn't really work very well for this part and don't see much of why didn't ya mapped this part instead - its just is very out of place and maybe doing something similar to at least maybe the another difficulty (00:49:904 (1,2,3) - ) where it has 2 circle + slider since even that follows this part more or anything than it is currently.
00:52:114 (1,2,3,4,1) - can look more straight than currently
01:01:904 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - possibly used maybe some repeating sliders here to red - felt the stream as it is currently is a bit too long compare to others and decreasing the difficulty would be helpful
01:15:877 (5,6) - the spacing around here is sorta inconsistent so should fix it so they be evenly spaced out
01:25:588 (3) - maybe possibly move this down some ~ just think it would make the pattern look better since right now it look slightly off
01:44:219 (1,2,3) - I feel that there should be more than that and that you should at least do more than just copy+paste the beginning and flipping it tbh - while both parts are very similar - there is some differences to intensity of some the rhythm around here and that you have shown that difference between this in the Extra so I don't see why not do so here instead
01:52:746 (4) - fixed stack right here? (minor)
For the most part - it is pretty okay besides what has been said above (although I kind of think this difficulty can tone done some more on that 1/4 rhythm but it mostly alright) - could maybe get a bit more polish before calling me back for a recheck

Niva's Hyper

00:34:667 (5,1) - minor but maybe straighten up this to flow a bit better around here https://puu.sh/zCnhj/ac8fd04661.png (of course adjusted the spacing)
01:25:904 - tbh I felt this beat around here should be map since it pretty strong and it feel quite underemphasis around here to have a gap right here - 01:25:588 (1) - something simple like adding a repeat on 01:25:588 (1) - would help or something similar than keeping at it is currently would be cool
01:30:641 (1) - 01:35:693 (1) - , etc same for these as well

W h i t e 's Standard

01:22:746 (1) - a new player needs more time to react to the notes after the spinner since currently due to the low ar and all - the note are appearing to fast while the spinner is going on and it can confused the new player - highly suggest using some alternative method like a long slider than sticking to this
01:24:009 - also it would be better to have the start of the kiai at least clickable rather than having on the slider end :c

Beginner

01:22:746 (1) - like to say the same thing about this spinner like the standard diff about removing it and doing something - also I feel that that 01:24:009 - to 01:24:956 - is much more significant and more important to map that down right leave it empty for the sake of a spinner
01:32:851 (1) - and here 00:51:167 (1) - same for here as well
01:28:114 (2,3) - even for a beginner I feel this is just too undermap and it could follow the music better - something like just changing to into a 1/2 slider would help

General

Have the Hyper HP lower to somewhere around 5 or 5.5 for spread balance since right now it is the same as the Hyper+
01:23:588 - minor but the prev point is unsnapped (don't believe it matter too much)

k that be it for me for the night ~ pretty tired - you may ask for a recheck once again after replying to the mod above and i'll give a more further look into it in case I missed something (especially for the low difficulties and extra but there really shouldn't be a problem tho) before I decide to nominate

forgive grammar mistakes - don't feel like going over it right now

Reisen Udongein

Former osu! Champion: OWC#3

1,073 posts

Joined January 2010

Topic Starter

Reisen Udongein 2018-03-07T11:38:55+00:00

Hailie wrote:
Alrighty I have already modded the Extra and don't have any true problems with it (I will recheck this later in case I miss something tho) so moving on to the rest of the difficulties

Muya's Another
00:10:431 (4,5,6) - maybe add a NC here to may help readability slightly and help the player understand more this is 1/3 or maybe slightly spaced it out more ( or make 00:05:378 (4) - more closed to the slider end of 00:05:062 (3) - each option works) - NC added
00:23:378 (1) - Possibly spacing this out more than it is currently to give it more emphasis on the strong beat - seems kind of weak currently - I think it's better leave this because flow of notes now is better than take this apart from the following notes
00:35:852 (4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - For some of these streams in this map (not pointing them all out) I feel that there should be more contrast in the intenseness of the music rather than just having the whole stream having the same spacing as if the music itself has it where all the beat is siginicantly strong which is defiantly not the case when I slow down the song or turning off the hitsounds - Since the reasonable sounds for stream exist and adding few more notes for making a stream is not that a crucial problem on the second highest diff, I think it's not a problem to get rid of some notes. (Actually it doesn't make the map boring and unreasonable either)
01:13:062 (3,4) - fixed stack here (minor) - fixed
01:17:694 (1,2) - maybe change the angle of (1) instead of just a straight line to help the flow a bit better around here (minor)

Hyper+
00:15:009 (2,3,4) - the spacing between these is kind of low comparison to what ya just did before where the spacing larger 00:12:798 (3,4,5,6,1) - . imo I feel that the spacing on the first pattern should be reduce some more to be easier (or ya can spacing out the 2nd 1 out more - either is ok and it be more consistent) - set the slider bit lower
00:23:219 (1,2) - there isn't a beat at 00:23:298 (2) - or anything really to support nor do I see any of the other difficulties (such as your Extra) have map this so it seems strange to do it on this difficulty so I suggest removing this note and just make 00:23:219 (1) - a jump instead (also 00:23:062 (5) - maybe reduce the spacing on this note while ya at it since I think it is a tad too high currently) - Removed 2nd note
00:28:746 (3,4) - the jump right is significantly too large here for this part of the song and shouldn't be this emphasis - even in your top difficulty doesn't have this much spacing like this so please reduce the spacing around here - set the square notes lower and close to the following slider
00:35:062 (2,3,4) - by now u should get the point about the jumps (this should be about it tho) - i don't know why i should make a jump here, i think that current position is good
00:47:535 (1,1,1) - I get what ya trying to do but at the same time the spacing here is quite large in comparison to most of the map and I believe too hard for this difficulty - reducing it some would be best - set the 2nd, 3rd sliders much more close to each other
00:49:904 (1) - I feel this spinner just doesn't really work very well for this part and don't see much of why didn't ya mapped this part instead - its just is very out of place and maybe doing something similar to at least maybe the another difficulty (00:49:904 (1,2,3) - ) where it has 2 circle + slider since even that follows this part more or anything than it is currently. - Removed, and make 2 notes and 1 long slider there
00:52:114 (1,2,3,4,1) - can look more straight than currently - fixed
01:01:904 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - possibly used maybe some repeating sliders here to red - felt the stream as it is currently is a bit too long compare to others and decreasing the difficulty would be helpful - As the third-highest diff between hard and insane+ (and this diff is close to the insane imo), i think that the only stream consists of 9 notes is not a big problem
01:15:877 (5,6) - the spacing around here is sorta inconsistent so should fix it so they be evenly spaced out - fixed
01:25:588 (3) - maybe possibly move this down some ~ just think it would make the pattern look better since right now it look slightly off - down 2 grids
01:44:219 (1,2,3) - I feel that there should be more than that and that you should at least do more than just copy+paste the beginning and flipping it tbh - while both parts are very similar - there is some differences to intensity of some the rhythm around here and that you have shown that difference between this in the Extra so I don't see why not do so here instead - I feel the only difference here is type of sounds of the main melody, i made the line here based on the drum sound. In addition, i copied/pasted intentionally.
01:52:746 (4) - fixed stack right here? (minor) - fixed
For the most part - it is pretty okay besides what has been said above (although I kind of think this difficulty can tone done some more on that 1/4 rhythm but it mostly alright) - As the main problem was the diff spread between hyper(hard) diff and another(between Insane~insane+) diff, i made an diff closed to the typical insane diff (even i put a lot of 1/4 returning sliders instead of pure streams). i think it would be better leaving this, not making it easier - could maybe get a bit more polish before calling me back for a recheck

Niva's Hyper
00:34:667 (5,1) - minor but maybe straighten up this to flow a bit better around here https://puu.sh/zCnhj/ac8fd04661.png (of course adjusted the spacing) - I think it's better leave this because it was set on purpose by niva
01:25:904 - tbh I felt this beat around here should be map since it pretty strong and it feel quite underemphasis around here to have a gap right here - 01:25:588 (1) - something simple like adding a repeat on 01:25:588 (1) - would help or something similar than keeping at it is currently would be cool
01:30:641 (1) - 01:35:693 (1) - , etc same for these as well - added repeat

W h i t e 's Standard
01:22:746 (1) - a new player needs more time to react to the notes after the spinner since currently due to the low ar and all - the note are appearing to fast while the spinner is going on and it can confused the new player - highly suggest using some alternative method like a long slider than sticking to this
01:24:009 - also it would be better to have the start of the kiai at least clickable rather than having on the slider end :c - changed to 2 notes and 1 repeating slider, and removed the following 1 note

Beginner
01:22:746 (1) - like to say the same thing about this spinner like the standard diff about removing it and doing something - also I feel that that 01:24:009 - to 01:24:956 - is much more significant and more important to map that down right leave it empty for the sake of a spinner - changed differently
01:32:851 (1) - and here 00:51:167 (1) - same for here as well - [/color]
01:28:114 (2,3) - even for a beginner I feel this is just too undermap and it could follow the music better - something like just changing to into a 1/2 slider would help- changed to two 1/2 sliders

General
Have the Hyper HP lower to somewhere around 5 or 5.5 for spread balance since right now it is the same as the Hyper+ - set to 5.5
01:23:588 - minor but the prev point is unsnapped (don't believe it matter too much)- fixed

k that be it for me for the night ~ pretty tired - you may ask for a recheck once again after replying to the mod above and i'll give a more further look into it in case I missed something (especially for the low difficulties and extra but there really shouldn't be a problem tho) before I decide to nominate

forgive grammar mistakes - don't feel like going over it right now

Thank you for the mod once again!

Halfslashed

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Halfslashed 2018-03-07T21:06:49+00:00

As requested, will be taking a look at the Hyper+

[Hyper+]
00:30:009 (2,3,4,5) - I suggest a rhythm like this to build into 00:30:641 (1) - more appropriately with the melody.
00:31:272 (2) - This slider seems like an underwhelming way to lead in to the stream starting on 3, so I recommend either using two circles to rhythmically build into it or increasing spacing to and from this slider.
00:39:641 (1,4) - Since you decided to go with repeats here, try starting 1/3 repeats on 00:39:588 - and 00:40:219 - to follow the melody better.
00:46:746 (3,4) - I'd recommend using a rhythm like this or at least use some 1/3 repeats to differentiate this part from 00:46:114 (1,2) -.
01:29:062 (1) - I recommend changing this to a 3/4 slider + circle like you do with 01:29:535 (2,3) - to make 01:31:588 (1,2) - stand out better.

Not much else to say really. Good luck, let me know if you need anything else!

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Muya 2018-03-07T22:51:19+00:00

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Reisen Udongein

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Reisen Udongein 2018-03-08T09:17:33+00:00

Halfslashed wrote:
As requested, will be taking a look at the Hyper+

[Hyper+]
00:30:009 (2,3,4,5) - I suggest a rhythm like this to build into 00:30:641 (1) - more appropriately with the melody. Since there are '1/6' quadruple sounds, I think there is no reason to put 1/4 repeating slider and 1 note, so I leave this
00:31:272 (2) - This slider seems like an underwhelming way to lead in to the stream starting on 3, so I recommend either using two circles to rhythmically build into it or increasing spacing to and from this slider. I think current style is better because i don't feel any weird here and I want to make the slider symmetric to the following slider.
00:39:641 (1,4) - Since you decided to go with repeats here, try starting 1/3 repeats on 00:39:588 - and 00:40:219 - to follow the melody better. - fixed
00:46:746 (3,4) - I'd recommend using a rhythm like this or at least use some 1/3 repeats to differentiate this part from 00:46:114 (1,2) -. -fixed
01:29:062 (1) - I recommend changing this to a 3/4 slider + circle like you do with 01:29:535 (2,3) - to make 01:31:588 (1,2) - stand out better. - fixed

Not much else to say really. Good luck, let me know if you need anything else!

Thank you for modding!

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