chonicle wrote:

mod by request

[Easy]
01:22:509 (82509|2) - move to 01:22:295 (82295|2) -
01:22:509 - put 2 notes(like column 1 and 7)
01:22:938 (82938|0) - remove this one
01:41:474 (101474|2) - similar to this 01:39:652 (99652|3,99866|2) -
01:46:509 - put 2 notes to emphasize the finish(hold end is not enough)
02:08:366 (128366|5) - 7th column
03:24:224 (204224|5) - similar to 03:22:509 (202509|2,202509|4,202724|4,202724|2,202938|3) -

[Normal]
Too hard for a normal.. double notes hard for novice, also the combination of hold and multiple notes ;w;
00:19:509 (19509|0) - move to 00:19:938 (19938|0) -
00:34:509 - This part you can just use 1/4 single notes, no need to 2 1 2 1
不會太難嗎@@ 雖然可以放單個但是開1/4我可能就亂放了
00:36:866 (36866|4) - This effect starts at 00:35:795
01:18:866 (78866|6,78866|3) - move to 01:18:759 (78759|6,78759|3) -
01:23:688 (83688|2) - move to 01:23:795 (83795|4) -
01:24:652 (84652|4) - remove this note(no piano sound)
01:30:545 (90545|2) - ^
01:32:045 (92045|1) - move to 01:31:938 (91938|1) and extend to the white line to avoid confusion..(this is a normal diff)
01:37:831 (97831|3,98259|5) - notes better...(consistant with before)
01:40:509 - add notes. and These three crashes should all on the same column
02:08:366 (128366|5) - 7th column
02:11:152 (131152|1) - remove this note
02:20:366 (140366|2) - 1st column or 2nd column
03:07:081 (187081|4) - move to 03:06:974 (186974|4) -
03:13:402 (193402|3) - move to 03:13:509 (193509|3) -
03:14:366 (194366|3,194902|5) - like 01:32:045
03:20:795 (200795|4) - move to 03:20:688 (200688|4) -
03:22:938 (202938|4) - starts at 03:23:045 (203045|4) -
03:31:081 (211081|3) - move to 03:30:974 (210974|3) -
03:32:795 - add one note

other diffs I don't have enough time x_x
looks OK overall but you need to be careful of some snaps(in normal) When you think it's ready call me back \:D/

- R u m i a - wrote:

as requested ,
other than this 3 diff i think ready for rank edy nice map!
[Hard]
great diff , nth to mod i like this diff
[Insane]
00:30:652 (30652|1,30706|2,30759|3,30813|4) - change to circle? I like noodles :3
00:53:366 (53366|6,53366|5,53366|4,53474|3,53474|5,53474|4,53581|4,53581|3,53581|2,53688|3,53688|1,53688|2,53795|1,53795|2,53795|0) - i dun like this pattern x.x , recommend to change (optional) I like the sense of keyboard hits here.=W=
01:07:081 - add fixed
01:05:366 (65366|5) - change to circle fixed
01:09:009 (69009|6,69224|6) - remove I retained ;W;
01:11:259 - add fixed
01:11:795 (71795|4) - move to 01:11:688 fixed
01:19:081 - add fixed
01:25:724 (85724|0) - move to 01:25:616 retained
01:25:509 (85509|4) - move to 01:25:402 retained
01:32:581 - add fixed
01:32:688 - add fixed
01:32:795 - add fixed
01:33:116 (93116|3,93331|3) - remove fixed
01:37:938 - add fixed
01:37:831 (97831|3) - remove fixed
01:38:152 - add at 4 fixed
04:32:795 (272795|0,272795|2,272795|1,272902|2,272902|3,272902|1,273009|2,273009|4,273009|3,273116|4,273116|3,273116|5,273224|4,273224|6,273224|5,273224|1,273224|0,273331|1,273331|2,273438|2,273438|3,273545|4,273545|3,273652|4,273652|5) - gay pattern! hahahahaha!!!XD
[Another]
00:46:295 (46295|2) - move to 6th fixed
00:46:402 (46402|5) - move to 3rd fixed
too much identical notes with insane diffs idk what to mod ;_;
its like juz another plaguerised diff but added a bit different note x.x ~!

asd123iii wrote:

Recheck time~

re=remove

[General]
04:48:866 - 我覺得這裡有個鋼琴聲 之前有跟你說過了我加1個在1 然後 04:49:295 (289295|0) - 改道 4
找hitsound吧(拜某人所賜)

[Easy]
00:15:224 (15224|5,15438|2) - re
00:18:652 (18652|5,18866|3) - ^
00:20:366 (20366|5) - ^
00:20:366 (20366|4,20795|4) - 改成一個LN
00:41:366 - 00:46:938 - 全部改成像這樣LN+note

00:47:366 - 改成4個重音的鍵會比較舒服 我放2顆 但為了有FU 後面各1/2拍都放一顆
00:48:224 - 00:52:938 - 同前面
00:53:152 - 加一個note
00:53:366 (53366|3,53366|2,53795|4,53795|5,54224|0,54224|1,54652|5,54652|6) - 各剩一個LN
01:15:438 - 加一個note對重音
01:20:581 - ^
01:20:795 - 這樣

01:26:581 (86581|5,87438|0) - re
01:29:366 (89366|6) - unsnap
01:32:795 - 01:34:509 - 建議跟鼓點
01:36:224 (96224|3) - unsnap
01:39:652 (99652|3,99866|2) - 改成一個LN
01:40:831 (100831|1,100831|6,101152|5,101152|3) - 各刪一個
01:41:366 (101366|4) - re
01:42:545 (102545|1,102545|5,102866|4,102866|6) - 各刪一個
01:43:081 (103081|2) - 改成2個note
01:43:724 (103724|4) - unsnap 我順便連後面那個長條也改掉了
01:45:652 (105652|3) - re
01:45:866 - 我聽這邊有鋼琴音，要不要加一個note?
01:49:081 (109081|4) - 改成LN 01:49:938 - 結束
01:49:938 (109938|1,109938|6) - 改成一個LN 01:50:366 - 結束
01:50:795 - 加note，鼓點
01:51:224 (111224|0) - re
01:52:509 (112509|3) - 改LN 01:52:938 - 結束
01:58:724 (118724|6,118831|5,118938|4) - 改成一個LN
01:59:152 (119152|0,119259|1,119366|2) - ^
01:59:581 (119581|5,119795|0,120009|3) - ^ 在02:00:224 - 結束
02:04:295 (124295|1) - 不建議jack，往右移? 這邊不用
02:10:938 (130938|2,131152|2) - 不建議jack 音高不是一樣??= =
02:58:295 - 加一個note
03:03:438 - ^
03:03:652 - 同01:20:795 -
03:05:366 (185366|2) - unsnap
03:08:795 - 03:10:509 - 建議跟鼓點
03:12:224 (192224|2) - unsnap
03:15:652 - 03:17:366 - 建議跟鼓點
03:19:081 (199081|4) - unsnap
03:22:509 - 這一段這樣?

部分採用@@
03:24:224 - ^

部分採用@@
03:25:938 - ^

採用， 但是左右位置會互換
03:27:652 - ^

採用， 但是位置會橋一下
03:29:366 (209366|5) - unsnap
03:36:009 - 加一個note 03:36:224 - 結束
03:36:224 (216224|4) - unsnap
03:39:652 - 03:41:366 - 建議跟鼓點
03:43:081 (223081|6) - unsnap

03:46:509 - 類似03:22:509 -
03:48:224 - 類似03:24:224 -

03:53:366 - 這一段你原本是LN+3note 建議把最後一個拿掉當鼓點 鋼琴聲的話note會太多是第1個還是最後一個 我先拿第1個
當鼓點的話在03:54:224 - 加第二組鼓這邊不用@@


[Normal]
等你改完

xxbidiao wrote:

整体建议下次不要拉1/4条子。
也許是我之前做好玩的W(?
因为你知道o!m的判定，条子和点差太多。
现在OD7，点乱打都300，条子基本都是200。
你要是拉到OD10，点是正常判定了，条子不能打了。

不过谱子不错(稱不上W瑕疵很多的)，顺便庆祝o!m第一个纯条海诞生XD
挖个坑

硬是挑点刺的话，
00:30:652 (30652|1,30706|2,30759|3,30813|4) - 这里按照之前的谱面推断，1/8条改点为好。
00:53:152 (53152|1,53366|5,53366|4,53366|6,53474|4,53474|5,53474|3,53581|3,53581|2,53581|4,53688|2,53688|3,53688|1,53795|2,53795|1,53795|0,53795|5) - 这里有overmap的嫌疑哦;w;
可是我喜歡●w●
04:32:902 (272902|3,272902|1,272902|2,273009|3,273009|2,273009|4,273116|5,273116|4,273116|3,273224|4,273224|5,273224|6,273224|0,273224|1,273331|2,273331|1,273438|2,273438|3,273545|4,273545|3,273652|5,273652|4) - ^ 而且04:33:009 (273009|4,273009|3,273009|2) - 这里事实上是个轻音，不适合和前面后面的重音一样的排法。 就當這部分是用o2的方式去放普八.......(默
02:37:402 (157402|2,157402|3,157509|5,157563|4,157616|3,157670|2) - 如果不是故意的，建议这里楼梯移个位。这里无意间形成了一个巨卡手的条后点。
我直接把 02:37:295 ~ 02:37:509 的NOTE 重排
03:34:081 (214081|4,214188|2) - ^ 建议从42改为54
03:32:795 (212795|5,212902|3) - ^ 建议从53改为45
03:11:366 (191366|6,191438|5,191509|4,191581|3,191652|2,191724|1,191795|6) - 这几个还是放点饶了玩家们把...
03:17:366 (197366|6,197438|5,197509|4,197581|3,197652|2,197795|6) - ^

dionzz99 wrote:

Insane removed??

PROGUY wrote:

Hi there. Here's my check as requested.

[Easy]
HP Drain + 1 or 2 +1
OD + 1 or 2 +1
02:00:652 (120652|5) Move to 5th column.fixed
04:34:509 Add note in 1st or 4th column.4th

[Normal]
HP Drain +1fixed
OD +1fixed
01:29:259 (89259|4) Move to 3rd column.
fixed

I will resume my check another time.

PROGUY wrote:

Continued. No kudosu please.

[Hard]
OD +1fixed
02:54:974 (174974|5) Move to 5th column.fixed
03:41:366 (221366|6,221438|5,221509|4,221581|3,221652|4,221724|5) Change to normal notes.
No.
But make it more comfortable and move the column of the notes in 03:41:795 ~ 03:42:224 : http://puu.sh/6T94f.png
Nothing to say for Another.really?Hope it helps though.

PROGUY wrote:

Looking back at this, something bothers me in Another.

As opposed to other parts of the chart, it seems way harder than usual at 00:20:795, 02:34:509, and 04:20:795 due to the combination of normal notes and short long notes used in a 1/4 stream. Either remove the normal notes or change the long notes into normal notes.

Raging Bull wrote:

oh god. this is way too awesome.

victorica_db wrote:

2014年巨作

PROGUY wrote:

After seeing Agka's performance on Another, twice, I have no further objections.

Here's your first bubble. Congrats!

Spy wrote:

victorica_db wrote:

2014年巨作

victorica_db wrote:

2014年巨作

c36098651 wrote:

你知道你們能七步成詩嗎

隨便一寫就離(巨)騷(作)

還敢講我? WW

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

Love this song so much >w<
Go go ranked >w<

richardfeder wrote:

victorica_db wrote:

2014年巨作

c36098651 wrote:

你知道你們能七步成詩嗎

隨便一寫就離(巨)騷(作)

還敢講我? WW

卧槽我们这唱着玩的打油诗怎么能跟你这巨作相提并论/o/

HanzeR wrote:

o god so glad to see this bubbled

faiiitoo!!~

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

Congratssssssssssss 'w'
Finally it ranked >w<

YunoFanatic wrote:

Grats ^w^

victorica_db wrote:

2014年度巨作

asd123iii wrote:

2014年度巨作

[ Karen ] wrote:

gratz~ ヾ(๑╹◡╹)ﾉ

indyinyou wrote:

i like this map

richardfeder wrote:

we have been waiting this for too long
congrats c36!

Raging Bull wrote:

about time!

lil_yumika_lil wrote:

Congratz~

Light_Yagami12 wrote:

Good map <3

ishimaru94 wrote:

Nice \:D/

SoG Tava wrote:

Congratz~