Hi~M4M here
I'm a beginner modder. Don't bash me if my mod is poor _(:3」∠)_
Generalfine.
Easy00:06:008 (1) - end it here 00:07:293 - , will be better for beginners to read.
00:51:008 (3) - i would like to move it up for 2 grids(288,176)
Very safe diff, nothing much worth mentioning.
Edit: a long sleep \:D/ so let's get this finished.
Normal
00:09:865 (2,3) - you may want to have similar rhythm like 00:12:865 (2,3) - since this is the only clap not on the note/slider head/slider end. Highly recommended!
http://puu.sh/71w65.jpg00:41:365 (2,3) - change it to something like 00:23:365 (6,7) - ? the clap is really obvious.
http://puu.sh/71wlr.jpg00:43:293 - add a note here with whistle? would really like to have this beat mapped. And starting from red tick is not a good choice for a Normal diff.
00:55:293 - ^
Hard00:32:150 (6) - this jump is relatively huge compare to other spacing changes you have. consider decreasing the distance?
This is well-made.
RLC00:04:293 (4) - unstack this note and put it here?
http://puu.sh/71xc4.jpg It's visually better since you didn't use stack on previous ones.
00:06:115 - the claps start from here is kind of loud. Try 30%?
00:13:936 (3) - ctrl+G? not really necessary to have 1/4 jump here.
00:28:508 (1,2,3) - this spacing is too huge even for a slider jump.... i have no problem catching them but consider similar rhythm before (00:25:508 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) -) , you may like to decrease the spacing. there's no change in music.
00:39:865 (6,7,8,9,10) - ctrl+J and attach it to 00:39:436 (5) - ? Current one is a bit weird to play.
01:27:008 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - reminds me of the Pretender > >
FUN
AHO
00:24:008 - 加个note? 或者加个1/2 slider都行。前后都没空过长白而且这个音挺明显的。
00:40:508 (1) - 这个1/8有点吵,降点音量吧.我觉得30-40差不多
00:44:793 (5,1) - 重音做个跳?
01:18:008 - 搞个KIAI喷泉好不好
01:28:508 (1) - 也是吵,降点音量如何
这串让我想起Identity P4,不过比那张简单好多额
Extra00:16:508 (1) - I prefer NC here.
00:21:650 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - this is not really necessary as all your other stream are not in spacing like this until your preview point.
00:25:508 (11,15,19) - NC for spacing change.
00:27:865 (4) - ^
00:50:579 (4,1) - This jump plays bad. why not stack 00:50:793 (1) - under 00:50:579 (4) - ? just like what you did here 00:44:793 - . It's plays really good imo.
01:12:436 (5) - NC
01:12:865 (9) - ^
these are not NC nazis, they're really necessary. check the Insane diff of this map to ensure this:
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/39428 01:14:258 (14,15) - stack them properly
I personally like the madness part from 01:18:008 - , good job!!
but there's a few spacing stuff bothering me,
01:23:900 (6,1) - this 1/4 jump is too huge because of the large angle change
http://puu.sh/71A39.jpg , consider moving 01:24:008 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - a bit up.
01:32:900 (6,1) - this one as well
That's all i got here. Thank you for waiting my mod!! Have a star then \:D/
And I'm gonna keep a ticket. Thank you ><