Santa Claw wrote:

my noob mod...

[General]
Skin - awesome.
BPM and offset - good.

[Easy]
I find TONS of spacing problems. Please re-space this with Distance Snap.
01:25:352 (9) - new combo
01:30:225 (13) - ^
01:35:098 (21) - ^

[Sweet Dreams]
00:50:327 (10) - shorten to 00:50:631
00:54:591 (4) - make it a repeating slider till 00:55:505 on red and white ticks.
01:03:423 (1) - make it till 01:04:033
01:08:296 (1) - shorten to 01:10:124
01:34:185 (7) - change the shape of the slider and shorten to 01:34:489
01:38:449 (2) - same as 00:54:591 (4)
01:41:190 (5,6) - I really hate it. change it. it's confusing.
01:52:154 (1) - it confuses the player also. shorten it to 01:53:982 and add hitcircle at 01:54:591. flows better with the music.
01:57:027 (1) - ugly slider much?
02:43:931 (11,1) - fix spacing
03:21:088 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - NO.

could be an awesoem map, good luck! :3

Shoily wrote:

Santa Claw wrote:

my noob mod...

[General]
Skin - awesome.
BPM and offset - good.

[Easy]
I find TONS of spacing problems. Please re-space this with Distance Snap.
01:25:352 (9) - new combo
01:30:225 (13) - ^
01:35:098 (21) - ^

[Sweet Dreams]
00:50:327 (10) - shorten to 00:50:631
00:54:591 (4) - make it a repeating slider till 00:55:505 on red and white ticks.
01:03:423 (1) - make it till 01:04:033
01:08:296 (1) - shorten to 01:10:124
01:34:185 (7) - change the shape of the slider and shorten to 01:34:489
01:38:449 (2) - same as 00:54:591 (4)
01:41:190 (5,6) - I really hate it. change it. it's confusing.
01:52:154 (1) - it confuses the player also. shorten it to 01:53:982 and add hitcircle at 01:54:591. flows better with the music.
01:57:027 (1) - ugly slider much?
02:43:931 (11,1) - fix spacing
03:21:088 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - NO.

could be an awesoem map, good luck! :3

LOL Thank you very very much
I might ask what to do in that spinner spam place because I have been told earlier its a pretty dumb idea
- grabs for suggestions from everyone -
<__>

poisonedblood wrote:

Well I rechecked and found a few things to fix.
Don't change anything you don't want to, I'm sorry if I repeat something you didn't want to change I'm too lazy to read my last mod.

Easy

General :
I'm not very good to mod mapping but some places I see jumps that shouldn't be there. I don't know if you're 100% done mapping or not so I just thought I should mention this. Just 1 example [02:47:281] and [02:47:586].

[00:50:631] - [00:50:936] Maybe keep the reverse arrow slider from this starting and ending points?
[00:53:0068] Maybe add a circle here, and keep the slider only from [00:53:677] - [00:54:286]?
[00:57:332] Is this New Combo necessary?
[01:00:987] Maybe add a New Combo?
[01:03:423] Maybe start the slider here instead?
[01:07:992] I think the spinner would sound better if it started here.
You could add a slider from [01:07:383] - [01:07:687], but you don't have to.
I just think it would be empty before the spinner if you change it.

[01:25:352] Maybe add a New Combo?
[01:30:225] ^
[01:32:662] ^
[01:35:098] ^
[01:47:281] ^
[02:27:789] Maybe remove this circle?
[02:34:185] or [02:34:794] Add a New Combo.
[02:39:667] Add a New Combo here, perhaps even remove the one on [02:37:230].
[02:42:104] Maybe start the slider with reverse arrows here? If you do please fill the emptiness it creates
[02:44:540] Maybe add a New Combo?
[02:49:109] Maybe add something here? Like maybe a slider with [02:49:413]? If you do make it a New Combo.
If you don't please make [02:49:413] a New Combo.

[02:49:718] - [02:50:022] Maybe make it a slider? Or delete the circle on [02:50:022]?
[02:53:677] It sounds better if your slider starts here, and you might want to make it a New Combo.
[02:59:159] Maybe add a New Combo?
[03:03:423] Please move here the circle that's on [03:03:322].
[03:10:733] Is this New Combo necessary?
[03:11:342] It sounds better if you started you spinner here.

Sweet Dreams

General:
I'm not very good to mod mapping but some places I see jumps that shouldn't be there. I don't know if you're 100% done mapping or not so I just thought I should mention this. Just 1 example the entire segment here [00:48:804] - [00:50:936].
The Last Kiai Time that starts at about 3:33 isn't very necessary, I'd remove it if I we're you.

[00:44:540] Maybe remove this New Combo?
[00:50:631] Maybe just move this slider in the timeline so it starts here and remove 1 reverse arrow?
[01:07:992] Maybe add a circle?
[01:34:489] - [01:34:794] Maybe keep the reverse arrow slider from this starting and ending points?
[01:37:535] It sounds better if you start the slider here. You could keep a circle on [01:37:230].
[01:50:327] Maybe extend your slider so it ends here?
[01:51:850] Maybe add a circle here?
[01:54:286] I don't like the way the spinner and the circle at this time sound.
It would sound much better if the spinner ended here and you moved the circle to [01:54:591].

[01:57:027] A 12 combo starts getting long for a normal, so perhaps add a New Combo here?
[02:50:327] - [02:53:677] This part might be a bit overmapped. Especially in the 2nd combo.
You can keep things on all the spots you have your circles on, but could you replace a few with sliders?

[02:54:286] Maybe end your slider here? You can still keep something on [02:54:591].
[02:54:591] - [02:57:332] Maybe add a slider or 2 in here?
[02:59:159] - [03:00:987] ^
[03:07:687] Remove this New Combo.
[03:08:601] Make this the start of the New Combo instead of [03:09:210].
[03:07:687] - [03:10:428] Maybe add a slider or 2 in here?
[03:18:652] - [03:21:088] Could you add something here? Make sure it starts a New Combo.

[03:29:921] Your spinner currently start here and I don't really like how it sounds.
Here is where it would sound better to start it : [03:28:389] or [03:30:835].
If you chose the one that's later than yours, please add something to fill the void.

Well you wanted to see what I did up till now well here you go.
I'm not done yet, but the plus side is I only have the mapping left to do and I started a little.
I you can call it however you want, just keep my name in it and add my name to the tags.[attachment=0:13bbf]Kagamine Len - Monochrome Dream Eater (Shoily) [Insane].osu[/attachment:13bbf]

1. 1.20x slider velocity in "Lucid dreaming"
2. 1.40x slider velocity in "Sweet Dreams"
3. 1.60x slider velocity in "Sleep Disturbance"

1. Always use the same spacing, if you have decided to use a value of 1,1x for the distance spacing, use this value always through the difficulty. If you always use a different spacing for all the different patterns, it will be really awkward and senseless.
   Of course you can breaks this rule but only in specific cases, firstly for jumps and anti-jumps. I know you know what a jump is, howeve you should always keep in mind that you ought to use jumps only if it is justified by the music, not randomly ! Otherwise it will be awkward.
   You can change the spacing if the music becomes slower or faster to keep a good flow. Always keep in mind that when you want to change the spacing you have to be sure that it fits !
2. Every notes should be visible while playing, it means that neither a circle nor a slider can be hidden by something during the game. (Don't forget that when you are in the editor you don't see some objects there are in the play mode such as hitbursts, spinner-texts, etc..).
   It means that you can't do things like this :
   
   SPOILER

   In this case the circle is hidden by the track of the slider :
   
   
   In this case it is unreadble because every notes overlap themselves thus the hitbursts hide the following notes :
   
   
   In this case you can't see the beginning of (2) :
   
   
   In this case the reverse arrow is hidden by the hitburst of the circle, so the player can't see it and will not know there are reverses :
   
   
   Etc.
3. Keep in mind that you can listen the music smore slowly with the playback rate at the right-bottom of the editor :
   
   With this feature you can listen the music more deeply, in that way you can hear the beats more easily !
4. Everything should be consistent. It means that if you have mapped a certain part in a certain way, you need to map the parts which are similar to this in the same way. This counts for everything (hitsounds, sliderspeed changes, etc.).

winber1 wrote:

Poisonblood's

Please AR +1. AR 8 makes absolutely NO SENSE on this map even AR 9 is a little hard to read. In all honestly even AR 10 could fit. But just use AR 9 Changed

For maps like these, you should also be a lot more neat with some stacks too, because stacks that aren't perfectly stacked will make things a lot harder to read some times. like even small stacks such as 00:58:145 (5) - should be stacked more correctly just to be neat. Changed what I managed to see. If you have more examples of places that still need to be fixed do not hesitate to say so.
Also, overlaps like 01:00:074 (1,4,2,5) - just looks weird Changed

00:10:328 (3,4,5) - very hard to read http://puu.sh/m57u is better Changed
00:11:545 (3,4,5) - ^ Changed
00:29:819 (4) - http://puu.sh/m59d do this OK
00:30:429 (6) - would work better if this was one note and 00:30:631 (7) - this slider started at 00:30:530 - Instead I started the slider a bit later on [00:30:733].
00:33:982 - would be better if you added some note like here http://puu.sh/m5a4 Changed but also added a circle too.
02:09:008 (7,4) - stack more perfectly. Changed
02:11:648 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - now this part just doesn't make any sense at all. This part does not use 1/6 tick Well if you think so I'll change them to sliders and sliders with reverse arrows instead. I'm following what I hear from the solo.

Kurai wrote:

you have asked me to be your mentor fr improving right ? So don't hate me for this >w<

HeatKai wrote:

Kurai wrote:

you have asked me to be your mentor fr improving right ? So don't hate me for this >w<

KURAI IS A MENTOR?
SENSEI? D:
HAHAHAHAHAHAAHA!

Shoily wrote:

ROFL
Do you want to be called Sensei too HeatKai?
Or do you want to be called Mapping master?
Or Pokemon Master

HeatKai wrote:

Shoily wrote:

ROFL
Do you want to be called Sensei too HeatKai?
Or do you want to be called Mapping master?
Or Pokemon Master

inb4 I think Kurai and I wanted to be called as Pokemon Master LOL

Kurai wrote:

I AM a pokemon master baka !

xiceyx wrote:

Awesome map!!! Good timing , nice skin and everything! Great job

eLtigreXXx wrote:

HI ^^ m4m Request from eLtigreXXx's Modding queue~

AIBat v3.0
Missing Skin Files
approachcircle.png
reversearrow.png


Inconsistency in combo colours: Fixed

SPOILER

- [Lucid Dreaming] :
Combo1 : 255,255,255
Combo2 : 88,80,75
Combo3 : 251,236,179
Combo4 : 142,87,98
SliderBorder : 230,193,68

- [Poisonedblood's Nightmare] :
Combo1 : 255,255,255
Combo2 : 88,80,75
Combo3 : 251,236,179
Combo4 : 142,87,98

- [Sleep Disturbance] :
Combo1 : 255,255,255
Combo2 : 88,80,75
Combo3 : 251,236,179
Combo4 : 142,87,98
SliderBorder : 230,193,68

- [Sweet Dreams] :
Combo1 : 255,255,255
Combo2 : 88,80,75
Combo3 : 251,236,179
Combo4 : 142,87,98
SliderBorder : 230,193,68

Inconsistency in PreviewTime: Fixed

SPOILER

- [Lucid Dreaming] : 46735
- [Poisonedblood's Nightmare] : 51237
- [Sleep Disturbance] : 46735
- [Sweet Dreams] : 46735

Inconsistency in Kiai Times:

SPOILER

- [Lucid Dreaming] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:49:783, ends on 01:05:531
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:34:382, ends on 01:51:815
Kiai #3: Starts on 02:34:237, ends on 02:53:734
Kiai #4: Starts on 02:54:311, ends on 03:11:131
Kiai #5: Starts on 03:33:195, ends on 03:33:435

- [Poisonedblood's Nightmare] : With new ranking rules or so I've supposedly heard, GD's may have different kiai time...I'm not sure if I will fix this
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:12:256, ends on 00:22:002
Kiai #2: Starts on 00:51:240, ends on 01:10:733
Kiai #3: Starts on 01:35:098, ends on 01:54:489
Kiai #4: Starts on 01:54:591, ends on 02:14:083
Kiai #5: Starts on 02:34:794, ends on 02:54:185
Kiai #6: Starts on 02:54:286, ends on 03:13:779

- [Sleep Disturbance] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:49:783, ends on 01:05:531
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:34:574, ends on 01:52:774
Kiai #3: Starts on 02:34:389, ends on 02:53:629
Kiai #4: Starts on 02:54:449, ends on 03:13:469
Kiai #5: Starts on 03:33:191, ends on 03:33:527

- [Sweet Dreams] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:49:783, ends on 01:05:531
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:34:136, ends on 01:52:089
Kiai #3: Starts on 02:34:389, ends on 02:53:519
Kiai #4: Starts on 02:54:471, ends on 03:13:469
Kiai #5: Starts on 03:33:191, ends on 03:33:357

[Lucid Dreaming]
Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at: Fixed

SPOILER

00:21:928 - snap to 00:21:951 Fixed
00:49:783 - snap to 00:49:768 Fixed
01:05:531 - snap to 01:05:555 Fixed
01:20:263 - snap to 01:20:276 Fixed
01:34:382 - snap to 01:34:388 Fixed
01:51:815 - snap to 01:51:799 Fixed
02:24:237 - snap to 02:24:235 Fixed
02:34:095 - snap to 02:34:083 Fixed
03:11:131 - snap to 03:11:139 Fixed
03:33:435 - snap to 03:33:423 Fixed

Spinner New Combo
03:14:083 (2) - Consider adding a NC here, since this note follows a spinner. Done
00:12:256 (1) - Add a finish. Done
00:26:875 (1) - Add a finish on the start, remove the finish on repeat #1 (at 00:27:484). Done
00:30:530 (1) - Add a finish on the start, add a finish on the end. Done, not really too sure about how it sounds
01:54:591 (1) - Add a finish. Done

[Poisonedblood's Nightmare]
Spinner New Combo
01:44:135 (2) - Consider adding a NC here, since this note follows a spinner.



[Sleep Disturbance]
Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
00:21:892 - snap to 00:21:900
00:31:604 - snap to 00:31:596
00:35:462 - snap to 00:35:454
00:49:783 - snap to 00:49:768
01:05:531 - snap to 01:05:555
01:20:170 - snap to 01:20:174
01:34:136 - snap to 01:34:134
01:34:574 - snap to 01:34:591
01:52:774 - snap to 01:52:763
01:58:365 - snap to 01:58:347
02:22:583 - snap to 02:22:560
02:32:231 - snap to 02:32:256
02:32:398 - snap to 02:32:408
02:33:922 - snap to 02:33:931
02:53:629 - snap to 02:53:626
02:54:449 - snap to 02:54:438
03:13:469 - snap to 03:13:474
03:33:191 - snap to 03:33:169
03:33:527 - snap to 03:33:525


[Sweet Dreams]

Snapping
01:34:489 (7) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
01:34:489 (7) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
01:34:489 (7) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
01:34:489 (7) - Unsnapped slider (end).

Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
00:21:843 - snap to 00:21:850 Fixed
00:49:783 - snap to 00:49:768 Fixed
01:05:531 - snap to 01:05:555 Fixed
01:20:032 - snap to 01:20:022 Fixed
01:34:136 - snap to 01:34:134 Fixed
01:35:320 - snap to 01:35:301 Fixed
01:37:092 - snap to 01:37:078 Fixed
01:52:089 - snap to 01:52:103 Fixed
01:58:365 - snap to 01:58:347
02:00:731 - snap to 02:00:733
02:13:602 - snap to 02:13:626
02:17:565 - snap to 02:17:586
02:32:398 - snap to 02:32:408
02:33:299 - snap to 02:33:322
02:33:922 - snap to 02:33:931
02:34:525 - snap to 02:34:540
02:53:519 - snap to 02:53:525
02:54:471 - snap to 02:54:489
03:13:469 - snap to 03:13:474
03:33:191 - snap to 03:33:169
03:33:357 - snap to 03:33:372
Spinner New Combo
01:54:591 (2) - Consider adding a NC here, since this note follows a spinner.
I'll recheck
:3

Xierra wrote:

Ahh, Shoily, you're mapping one of Nem's songs?
There's a lot that you still need to learn though, I had times like these too, but I'll tell you through my experience

Hello Xierra! Thanks for your kindness to a newbie like me! It means a lot to me!
Yep! I love Nem, he and reruriri are my favorite producers

Here's a bit of quick mod:

General

First, I suggest you to do a nicer re-map especially on Hard (IMO). Change the beat divisor to 1/4, it'll be a bit easier. By such time I know you had learnt something, right? Change beat divisor on Hard or all diffs?
I seem to think this song is kinda hard for the first timers. I've tried to map myself, but it seems there's a lot of use of 1/8 and 1/4 vocals and beats. I realized much later on that I was stupid to chose a difficult song like this to map as my first one but I'll still try to do my best

Please change the artist to "Nem" and the singer on tags. I know I hate this, but I had to follow the rules if you want this ranked.
I actually already knew this rule for a long time, but I hate it so much I didn't want to change it unless someone pointed it out
But anyways, Fixed

Lucid Dreaming

1. 00:51:241 (1) - Prevent using two repeats on Easy or Normal. Dividing into 2 sliders would be a better idea. Fixed!
2. 01:58:246 (1) - Somewhat really misleading part. Why not map like this one? Sounds much much better, thanks!
   
3. 02:03:423 (4) - NC here Done!

Sorry for only one diff (Since I'm just taking a quick look), but I'll be doing the others sometime later. Thanks for taking the time!
Honestly I really wanna see this map ranked, the skin itself looks great, really! Good luck! You too! All the best for yours as well > u <

352,120,18956,2,0,B|416:136|424:220|336:236,1,160

Teru21 wrote:

Hiii xD didn't I say I love to check my friends map x3 <3333

Sooo..... there is so many things that need to be change.. xD *sigh* I know

[General]
Use Grid lvl 4 please xD (Tiny). It'll make your map neater xD and please note that My mod is using grid lvl 4 Okay
hitsound suggestion xD http://puu.sh/1bmZa . copy paste again and rename it normal-hitwhistle. change the audio at the timing tab into C1 (All of it) xD Sounds cool

[Lucid Dreaming]
AR-1? Not sure
01:54:591 - kiai time should end here Oopss
Lucid as Easy right? Yep
00:12:865 (2) - Spacing.. Should be at x:60 y:88 Done
00:14:083 (2) - ^ x:276 y:88 Done
00:14:692 (1) - ^ x:384 y:116 Done
00:15:302 (2) - ^ x:420 y:220? Done
00:16:824 - add circle and add whistle? xD Done
00:18:956 (2) -

352,120,18956,2,0,B|416:136|424:220|336:236,1,160

Thankies
00:20:175 (1) - alined it with 00:18:347 (1) Done
00:20:175 (1,2) - Spacing >< Don't understand what you mean here
00:20:784 (2,3,4) - avoid making this notes xD change them to Slider reverse? cause it would be hard for beginners xD Played it multiple times with beginners, I think it's easy enough
00:22:002 (1) - let me teach you how to make these sliders.. xD http://puu.sh/1blTf Fixed lolol
00:26:875 (1) - ^ ^
00:30:530 (1) - ^ ^
00:25:657 (1,2,3) - delete and add 2/1 slider
00:34:489 (2) - shouldn't be here OAO;; suggest u to put it 00:33:880 Done
00:40:276 (2,3,4) - Change into slider reverse If you say so
00:41:494 (1) - http://puu.sh/1bm4y Haha fixed
00:53:677 (1) - too curved.. loosen it a bit would be good xD Done
00:56:114 (1,1) - any reason why u put them like this? pattern or what? x3 not really but idk how else to place them
00:58:550 (1,2,3,4,1) - make this flower pattern xD Done
01:01:596 (2,1) - ugly sliders.. >< fix them.. Done
01:05:860 (1) - http://puu.sh/1bmbJ looks okay to me
01:25:961 (1) - aline it with (6) Done
01:28:398 (3,4) - http://puu.sh/1bmd5 Done
01:43:626 (1,2,3) - remove (2) to make it more easier hmmm done
01:41:799 (4) - http://puu.sh/1bmjA Done
01:43:626 (1,3,1) - (1,3) are overlapped with (1) it sure looks messy Fixed ( I think )
01:50:022 (2) - should be at 01:50:631 instead moved to 01:51:241
02:02:814 - feell awkward here >< I hope it's fixed
and you can fix the other by yourself already xD

[Sweet Dreams]
00:11:342 (4) - http://puu.sh/1bmt4 Fixed
00:13:169 (7) - not symmetrical enough Well how am I supposed to fix it
00:25:352 (1) - remove and add slider from 00:25:048 till 00:25:352 Sounds a bit weird, instead I added a hitcircle at 00:25:048
00:31:748 (1) - curve this Done
00:32:966 (3) - ^ ^
00:40:885 (7) - remove and move 00:39:971 (6) - to 00:40:276 why T o T sounds odd to me, let's see if any other mods find it
00:50:631 (6) - this is so horrible.. add a soft hitsound here and reduce the volume till 30% . fix the other one too xD Soft Htsounds really weair hear, just reduced the volume.
00:53:677 (1,2,3,4) - fix this.. the flower pattern isn't symmetric hope it is now
01:30:225 (1) - aww... don't be afraid to bent it, http://puu.sh/1bmN5 Bent it cuz you said so but honestly I thought it was fine
01:50:631 (6,7,8) - Overlapped >< Fixed
02:24:438 (2) - not symmetrical enough.. sseems fine to me, I'll see for other mods
03:14:692 (2) - why don't you copy paste from (1) OAO oops...Done lol

[Sleep Disturbance]
- there is still Ugly sliders (not symmetrical) lol
- the beat is strange.. so I can't really mod it.. sorry.. what

Poison's diff is perfect x3 No diff is perfect imo, but I really hope poison comes online sometime soon

I'll Mod the hitsound after you fix the mods xD Fixed them all

GL xD Thank youuuu~ <3

1. 00:26:571 (9) - I would prefer a better overlapping/or stacking with 00:26:875 (1) - slider end. looks a bit meh
   
   Maybe this

   
2. 00:30:429 (2) - X: 128 Y: 316?
3. 00:31:648 (2) - stack under 00:31:343 (1) - sliderend
4. 00:33:880 (4) - maybe a bit hard to see
5. 00:46:367 (1) - one grid to the right
6. 01:03:423 (1) - I think it would look better if the sliderbeginning was stacked somehow with 01:02:713 (5) - sliderend
7. 01:46:368 (4,5) - mmmh not a nice overlap. looks kind of ugly
8. 01:48:500 (3) - X: 156 Y: 180 01:48:804 (4) - X: 396 Y: 180
9. 02:25:962 (5) - X:276 Y: 224 | 02:26:165 (6) - X: 436 Y: 204 | 02:26:266 (1) - X:428 Y: 124 | 02:26:875 (2) - X: 428 Y: 268
10. 02:28:399 (5,6) - overlap with sliders D: try (5) X: 340 Y: 156 (6) X: 500 Y: 160
11. 02:30:835 (5,6) - (5) overlaps again :/ X: 144 Y: 236 (6) X: 304 Y: 216

1. 00:21:088 (1) - Looks kind of bad there, because of 00:20:175 (8) - Maybe put (1) on X: 68 Y: 208 | 00:21:393 (2) - X: 248 Y: 184 and 00:22:002 (3) - on X: 364 Y: 212
   
   looks like this

   
2. 00:25:149 (9,10,11,12,13,14) - This stream has a to huge spacing D:
3. 00:46:368 (1) - slider looks better if the 2nd slider anchor point is on: X: 136 Y: 120
4. 00:47:586 (4) - ^ if you like that copy it and use ctrl + h
5. 00:53:677 (1) - overlap is not so nice with previous slider... i have no suggestion how to fix it though :/
6. 01:39:667 (11) - I would like to see this stacked under sliderbeginning of 01:38:449 (9) -
7. 02:22:967 (1,2,3,4) - would reduce stream spacing to 0,8x
8. 03:30:073 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - these feel random D:

bomber34 wrote:

Hi from #modreqs

[General]
Nice Videoquality and finally someone who has no sound under his video xD Haha Thank you very much
- Could you maybe use a huger picture as pause screen? It is really small D: Done! Thanks~

[Poisonedblood's Nightmare] POISON FOR THE LOVE OF GOD PLEASE COME ONLINE I WILL GIVE YOU COOKIES
- super hard o.o especially ending of 3rd KIAI time. I wanna see someone FC this Me as well waiting for poison to come online though, ore else I'll have to fix this myself against her wishes

1. 00:26:571 (9) - I would prefer a better overlapping/or stacking with 00:26:875 (1) - slider end. looks a bit meh
   
   Maybe this

   
2. 00:30:429 (2) - X: 128 Y: 316?
3. 00:31:648 (2) - stack under 00:31:343 (1) - sliderend
4. 00:33:880 (4) - maybe a bit hard to see
5. 00:46:367 (1) - one grid to the right
6. 01:03:423 (1) - I think it would look better if the sliderbeginning was stacked somehow with 01:02:713 (5) - sliderend
7. 01:46:368 (4,5) - mmmh not a nice overlap. looks kind of ugly
8. 01:48:500 (3) - X: 156 Y: 180 01:48:804 (4) - X: 396 Y: 180
9. 02:25:962 (5) - X:276 Y: 224 | 02:26:165 (6) - X: 436 Y: 204 | 02:26:266 (1) - X:428 Y: 124 | 02:26:875 (2) - X: 428 Y: 268
10. 02:28:399 (5,6) - overlap with sliders D: try (5) X: 340 Y: 156 (6) X: 500 Y: 160
11. 02:30:835 (5,6) - (5) overlaps again :/ X: 144 Y: 236 (6) X: 304 Y: 216

[Sleep Disturbance]

1. 00:21:088 (1) - Looks kind of bad there, because of 00:20:175 (8) - Maybe put (1) on X: 68 Y: 208 | 00:21:393 (2) - X: 248 Y: 184 and 00:22:002 (3) - on X: 364 Y: 212 Done, it plays a lot better now but doesn't look the way you capped it
   
   looks like this

   
2. 00:25:149 (9,10,11,12,13,14) - This stream has a to huge spacing D: Hopefully fixed
3. 00:46:368 (1) - slider looks better if the 2nd slider anchor point is on: X: 136 Y: 120 Thank you!
4. 00:47:586 (4) - ^ if you like that copy it and use ctrl + h Done
5. 00:53:677 (1) - overlap is not so nice with previous slider... i have no suggestion how to fix it though :/ I hope I fixed it a little bit
6. 01:39:667 (11) - I would like to see this stacked under sliderbeginning of 01:38:449 (9) - Done
7. 02:22:967 (1,2,3,4) - would reduce stream spacing to 0,8x Done! Really helped
8. 03:30:073 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - these feel random D: I hope it's a little better now

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If you did previous mod you could call me back so I mod the easier diffs :> Thank you soooo much!

Pink Agate wrote:

shoot my star ,good luck

Xierra wrote:

Hey, Len ate one of my stars!
Oh well, I wanted to do that anyways

Oh, your map's getting better and better. Go Shoily!

Kuroneko-sHerald wrote:

Sorry for late mod

[General]
Remove Kagamine Len - Monochrome Dream Eater (Shoily).osb. Fixed
You should skin approachcircle.png and reversearrow.png. Going to do this soon

[Lucid Dreaming]
01:08:296 (1) - End at 01:10:124 - ? Fixed

[Sweet Dreams]
01:08:296 (1) - End at 01:10:124 - ? Fixed
01:54:591 (2) - New Combo bug. New combo isn't checked.

SPOILER

02:02:205 (6,7) - Spacing. Since you did and anti-jump between 02:01:596 (5) - and 02:02:205 (6) -, it's better to fix the spacing between 02:02:205 (6) - and 02:03:728 (7) -, because Anti jump -> jump on normal=not good. I didn't notice that, sorry! Fixed
02:32:357 (4,5,6) - slow section 0.75x here? That seems more accelerated compared to 02:31:748 (2,3) -, but they have the same rhythm. 1x velocity + spacing fix please. Fixed
03:28:398 (1) - remove clap Done

[Sleep Disturbance]
00:09:819 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I think that this is the correct rhythm:

SPOILER

move (2) to 00:09:972 -, shorten (5) so that it ends at 00:11:494 - and move (6,7,8) to 00:11:647 -
01:08:296 (1) - End at 01:10:124 - ? Fixed

[Poisonedblood's Nightmare] Leaving this to poison when shes back
01:44:135 (2) - New Combo bug. New combo isn't checked.

SPOILER

02:09:211 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - What?

Kuroneko-sHerald wrote:

[General]
Remove Kagamine Len - Monochrome Dream Eater (Shoily).osb.

Kuroneko-sHerald wrote:

Kuroneko-sHerald wrote:

[General]
Remove Kagamine Len - Monochrome Dream Eater (Shoily).osb.

You must remove this since it don't have the same Artist, it's unrankable.
Oh and don't know why but the No Video version has some error. When you try to download it says: This beatmap has not been uploaded correctly!
Maybe it's because of osb?
Anyway, try to update the map again (without osb) and see if the error fixes.

1. 00:13:474 (1) - I guess this is supposed to be an "Easy" diff, right? Not sure if this jump is to huge then? You kept overall a distance space of 0,7x in this diff. Maybe play a bit around to make this spot easier? Try to keep a constant distance space like 0,7
2. 00:17:738 (2) - spacing
3. 00:20:175 (1,2,3) - try these coordinates (1): X: 256 Y: 292 | (2) X: 144 Y: 276 | (3) X: 100 Y: 244
4. 00:22:002 (1) - spacing
5. 00:21:951 - unsnapped green inherit line
6. 00:26:875 (1,2,3) - abit nitpicking but correct spacing from previous combo to (1) and fix spacing afterwards
7. 00:41:494 (1) - I made the slider symmetrical. Use this code
   

   340,200,41494,6,0,B|292:240|272:272|256:332|256:332|240:272|220:240|172:200,1,320

8. 00:43:322 (1) - same for this slider. Fix spacing afterwards
   

   112,104,43322,6,0,B|200:24|312:24|400:104,1,320,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

9. 00:46:368 (1,2,3) - Put this three either on the same Y-Axis coordinate from 00:45:758 (2) - or different. But just a small difference of one 4 level grid is ugly. (3) should be on the same Y-Axis like (1) of this combo
10. 01:01:596 (2) - This slider looks a bit weird. Maybe play a bit around with the red anchor point.
11. 01:05:860 (1) - overlaps a bit with previous slider >.<. put it on X: 452 and Y: 192 or so
12. 01:20:276 - unsnapped green inherit line
13. 01:22:611 - maybe add Hitcircle
14. 01:22:916 (5) - New Combo
15. 01:24:134 (7) - no repeat and add a Hitcircle on 01:25:352 -
16. 01:28:398 (3,4,5) - because (5) is a slider this pattern looks weird
17. 01:30:328 - unsnapped green inherit line
18. 01:34:388 - ^
19. 01:34:489 (2) - mmmh New combo would look cool i think
20. 01:35:708 (2) - spacing
21. 01:38:449 - not sure if you can add a hitcircle there?
22. 01:41:799 (4) - I actually would use here a New combo and remove New combo on 01:43:626 (1) -
23. 01:54:591 (1) - I don't know. Maybe it is a bit far away from the center after that spinner
24. 01:58:246 (1) - spacing to previous hitcircle
25. 02:00:987 (2,3) - I would delete this two and make a slider from where (2) starts and end it on where (3) starts. Would be better, because of flow of previous slider
26. 02:04:642 (1) - This slider should start 1/1 beat earlier and end on 02:05:251 -
27. 02:11:342 (1) - spinner should start at 02:11:647 - but end on current end
28. 02:24:235 - unsnapped green inherit line
29. 02:34:083 - ^
30. 02:54:311 - ^
31. 02:56:723 (4) - New combo
32. 03:11:139 - unsnapped green inherit line
33. 03:13:779 (1) - to far away from spinner end.
34. 03:14:388 (2) - use this code for spinner and fix spacing afterwards
    

    60,112,194388,2,0,B|136:68|212:112,2,160

35. 03:28:703 (1) - start spinner already on 03:28:398 -

1. 00:12:560 (5) - add new combo, remove combo from 00:13:779 (1) -
2. 00:17:129 (8,1) - New Combo and remove New combo
3. 00:18:956 (3) - Take that whistle out of the slider ride >.<
4. 00:25:352 (1) - remove new combo
5. 00:27:484 (2) - slider half beat longer so first repeat is on 00:27:941 -
6. 00:32:966 (1) - remove new combo
7. 00:50:631 (6) - I think soft whistle fit better. Anything but normal whistles please
8. 00:58:550 (6) - new combo
9. 01:34:489 (7) - I think soft whistle fit better. Anything but normal whistles please
10. 01:34:134 - unsnapped green line
11. 01:35:301 - ^
12. 01:37:230 (1) - start slider at 01:37:535 - . Or remove clap from slider beginning
13. 01:38:449 (2) - claps don't fit. The claps on the whole KIAI part doesn't fit imo
14. 01:50:327 (5) - X:280 Y: 164
15. 01:56:875 - unsnsapped green line
16. 01:58:365 - ^
17. 02:00:731 - ^
18. 02:01:900 - add Hitcircle
19. 02:13:626 - unsnapped green line
20. 02:14:388 - ^
21. 02:17:565 - pointless and unsnapped green line
22. 02:27:738 (1) - unsnapped slider
23. 02:32:433 - ^ (line)
24. 02:33:271 - ^
25. 02:33:956 - ^
26. 02:34:413 - ^
27. 02:34:565 - ^
28. 02:44:540 (1) - weird slider end
29. 02:54:438 - unsnapped green line
30. 02:54:591 (4) - new combo
31. 03:12:256 - add circle there. New Combo. Remove following new combo. Maybe place this new slider on X: 236 Y: 188
32. 03:13:474 - unsnapped green line
33. 03:24:438 (1) - remove new combo
34. 03:28:398 (1) - I would prefer a soft whistle instead of your hitsound choice

Shoily wrote:

bomber34 wrote:

hey. 2nd Part of my mod I promised (no kudosu) Why did you deny yourself kudosu for such a thorough mod?
[Lucid Dreaming]

1. 00:13:474 (1) - I guess this is supposed to be an "Easy" diff, right? Not sure if this jump is to huge then? You kept overall a distance space of 0,7x in this diff. Maybe play a bit around to make this spot easier? Try to keep a constant distance space like 0,7 Fixed, I'm pretty sure it wasn't like that last time I saw it though
2. 00:17:738 (2) - spacing Fixed
3. 00:20:175 (1,2,3) - try these coordinates (1): X: 256 Y: 292 | (2) X: 144 Y: 276 | (3) X: 100 Y: 244 Fixed
4. 00:22:002 (1) - spacing Fixed
5. 00:21:951 - unsnapped green inherit line Fixed
6. 00:26:875 (1,2,3) - abit nitpicking but correct spacing from previous combo to (1) and fix spacing afterwards Fixed
7. 00:41:494 (1) - I made the slider symmetrical. Use this code Fixed
   

   340,200,41494,6,0,B|292:240|272:272|256:332|256:332|240:272|220:240|172:200,1,320

8. 00:43:322 (1) - same for this slider. Fix spacing afterwards Fixed
   

   112,104,43322,6,0,B|200:24|312:24|400:104,1,320,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

9. 00:46:368 (1,2,3) - Put this three either on the same Y-Axis coordinate from 00:45:758 (2) - or different. But just a small difference of one 4 level grid is ugly. (3) should be on the same Y-Axis like (1) of this combo Fixed
10. 01:01:596 (2) - This slider looks a bit weird. Maybe play a bit around with the red anchor point.
11. 01:05:860 (1) - overlaps a bit with previous slider >.<. put it on X: 452 and Y: 192 or so Fixed
12. 01:20:276 - unsnapped green inherit line Fixed
13. 01:22:611 - maybe add Hitcircle
14. 01:22:916 (5) - New Combo Fixed
15. 01:24:134 (7) - no repeat and add a Hitcircle on 01:25:352 - Fixed
16. 01:28:398 (3,4,5) - because (5) is a slider this pattern looks weird
17. 01:30:328 - unsnapped green inherit line
18. 01:34:388 - ^
19. 01:34:489 (2) - mmmh New combo would look cool i think
20. 01:35:708 (2) - spacing
21. 01:38:449 - not sure if you can add a hitcircle there?
22. 01:41:799 (4) - I actually would use here a New combo and remove New combo on 01:43:626 (1) -
23. 01:54:591 (1) - I don't know. Maybe it is a bit far away from the center after that spinner
24. 01:58:246 (1) - spacing to previous hitcircle
25. 02:00:987 (2,3) - I would delete this two and make a slider from where (2) starts and end it on where (3) starts. Would be better, because of flow of previous slider
26. 02:04:642 (1) - This slider should start 1/1 beat earlier and end on 02:05:251 -
27. 02:11:342 (1) - spinner should start at 02:11:647 - but end on current end
28. 02:24:235 - unsnapped green inherit line
29. 02:34:083 - ^
30. 02:54:311 - ^
31. 02:56:723 (4) - New combo
32. 03:11:139 - unsnapped green inherit line
33. 03:13:779 (1) - to far away from spinner end.
34. 03:14:388 (2) - use this code for spinner and fix spacing afterwards
    

    60,112,194388,2,0,B|136:68|212:112,2,160

35. 03:28:703 (1) - start spinner already on 03:28:398 -

[Sweet Dreams]

1. 00:12:560 (5) - add new combo, remove combo from 00:13:779 (1) - Done
2. 00:17:129 (8,1) - New Combo and remove New combo Done
3. 00:18:956 (3) - Take that whistle out of the slider ride >.< Done
4. 00:25:352 (1) - remove new combo Done
5. 00:27:484 (2) - slider half beat longer so first repeat is on 00:27:941 - Done
6. 00:32:966 (1) - remove new combo Done
7. 00:50:631 (6) - I think soft whistle fit better. Anything but normal whistles please Done
8. 00:58:550 (6) - new combo Done
9. 01:34:489 (7) - I think soft whistle fit better. Anything but normal whistles please Done
10. 01:34:134 - unsnapped green line Fixed
11. 01:35:301 - ^ Fixed
12. 01:37:230 (1) - start slider at 01:37:535 - . Or remove clap from slider beginning Done
13. 01:38:449 (2) - claps don't fit. The claps on the whole KIAI part doesn't fit imo How do you suggest I fix this? ;__;
14. 01:50:327 (5) - X:280 Y: 164 Done
15. 01:56:875 - unsnsapped green line Fixed
16. 01:58:365 - ^ Fixed
17. 02:00:731 - ^ Fixed
18. 02:01:900 - add Hitcircle
19. 02:13:626 - unsnapped green line
20. 02:14:388 - ^
21. 02:17:565 - pointless and unsnapped green line Fixed
22. 02:27:738 (1) - unsnapped slider
23. 02:32:433 - ^ (line)
24. 02:33:271 - ^
25. 02:33:956 - ^
26. 02:34:413 - ^
27. 02:34:565 - ^
28. 02:44:540 (1) - weird slider end
29. 02:54:438 - unsnapped green line
30. 02:54:591 (4) - new combo
31. 03:12:256 - add circle there. New Combo. Remove following new combo. Maybe place this new slider on X: 236 Y: 188
32. 03:13:474 - unsnapped green line
33. 03:24:438 (1) - remove new combo
34. 03:28:398 (1) - I would prefer a soft whistle instead of your hitsound choice

Done

Kin wrote:

Hi ~

A lil update+template taiko bg, I miss something and I don't know why but all of my inherited point changed

http://puu.sh/1mirL

Shoily wrote:

Thanks all! \o/
Teru, your BG is cutee!
Also about the video, it keeps erroring and it won't upload properly :' (

Shoily wrote:

SPOILER

SkyDevil wrote:

duduudud wowowowowo

Easy Im too lazy to write the full names ò_ó Leonyan whyyy
00:13:474 (1,1) - I don't see why you have to put alot of NC's here o-o go put one at 00:14:083 (2) - and remove the other two o-o Done
00:17:129 (1) - Remove nc wwwww lolol done
00:51:850 - Please put in the refrain a clap at the third beat It sounds good (if you have problems with hitsounding you can ask me to do it lol) Yesyes, I'll ask you for a hitsound mod later
01:22:611 (4) - 8 combo for an easy is too much, NC here Done
01:32:053 (2) - too far from the other slider O-O (Please remember that a reverse slider will turn back, it looks fine in editing, but its different while playing) Done
01:35:708 - same as at the other refrain You mean at every third beat or just that one?


Normal (I think)
00:50:631 (6) - TOO DIFFICULT FOR A NORMAL. Changed
00:58:550 (6) - NC here (12 combo is too long owo) Done
01:31:139 (2) - Put this circle a litttleee bit down =3= Done
01:32:357 (1,2,3,4,5) - Confusing =3=
01:34:489 (7) - TOO DIFFICULT = = [ color=#FF80BF]Changed[/color]
01:36:926 (7,1) - Whats up with the difference in spacing? xD ( compared to the other 6 circles that came before it) to make it fit in the screen without creating jumps,stacks or something confusing

Hard (I think)
00:09:819 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this confuses me more than it should ;-; idk, it plays fine to me. I'll look for more mods hhh
00:14:388 (5,6,7) - Hue fix the distance spacing supposed to be like that heh
02:01:901 (1,2,3) - yu no ^ fixed
I found almost nothing (or was i too lazy to write more?) theres definitely more lol

Insane poison thingy
nice diff /o/ maybe a little bit too insane... and where is the BG video? Also please don't forget that you need to NC whenever there is a speed change owo

One of the most useful mods I got, thanks Leonyan!

Teru21 wrote:

fix it manually? try removing it from the folder and insert again, if you re-rename the video, change it manually in the .osu and check it again in the editor XD

I 'll try that! Thank you Teru! > u <

Shoily wrote:

One of the most useful mods I got, thanks Leonyan!