kanpakyin wrote:

下載了,然後聽了聽..
感覺MP3有點渣...有辦法拿個好一點的MP3嗎?

xierbaliti wrote:

你终于把这个挖出来了lol

为啥总是太短啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊:x

Breeze wrote:

xierbaliti wrote:

你终于把这个挖出来了lol

为啥总是太短啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊:x

._.什么太短

1. (和map無關) Creator's words裡面喜兒的id連結錯了XD
2. E/N/H 00:26:251 (1) - 我個人無法在這裡感覺到spinner, 或許舖notes比較適合

1. 00:46:685.. (1..) - 這一串combo可以考慮下移個1~2grid, (4)有一部分與HP條交界了
2. 01:00:598 (1) - 結尾點在下一個副歌段是有KIAI噴泉的, 怎麼這裡不擺一個? 另外音效也多了一個whistle
3. 01:01:468 (2) - 維持後面的clap pattern的話我覺得這裡就能開始clap了
4. 01:53:642 (3) - 音效同上面

1. 00:53:859 (1) - 去音效
2. 01:18:425 (x) - 可以把滑鼠移動到Break上, 拖曳起始點到這裡
   
3. 01:46:251 (2) - ...我個人認為這個slider拉的糟了些..
4. 01:56:251 (5) - 值得new combo, 我個人是認為這裡下, 後面不下, 和第一個KIAI一致

1. 這個diff相對來說note密度很高了, 我認為沒鼓段落應該下點S default whistle, 否則略嫌平淡
2. 00:31:685 (1,2,3,4,5) - 有些突然, 改用單個短spinner或不stack用spacing強調一下3/4?
3. 00:38:642 (．) - 這裡可以clap他一下(其實是custom tick)
4. 00:45:598 (1,2,3,4) - 因為有第一次了, 所以這裡我是沒打錯XD..
5. 01:04:512 (3,4) - 沒對稱到, 右邊低了
6. 01:53:207 (3) - 是否漏了個KIAI噴泉?
7. 01:53:642 (5,6,7) - 類似這種stack現在似乎是比較容易被討厭的..
8. 02:10:598 (x) - 可以拉Break到此
9. 02:32:990 (7) - 有漏clap的感覺..(其實是custom whistle)

loveFantasy wrote:

哦終於有張Falco了

[General]

1. (和map無關) Creator's words裡面喜兒的id連結錯了XD 咦这个都注意到了,fixed
2. E/N/H 00:26:251 (1) - 我個人無法在這裡感覺到spinner, 或許舖notes比較適合 背景音乐有yooooooooo一声

[Easy]

1. 00:46:685.. (1..) - 這一串combo可以考慮下移個1~2grid, (4)有一部分與HP條交界了 fixed
2. 01:00:598 (1) - 結尾點在下一個副歌段是有KIAI噴泉的, 怎麼這裡不擺一個? 另外音效也多了一個whistle whistle是custom sound
3. 01:01:468 (2) - 維持後面的clap pattern的話我覺得這裡就能開始clap了 是开始了,clap的声音是自定义的custom whitle, 因为我有用到预设的soft clap
4. 01:53:642 (3) - 音效同上面 ^

[Normal]

1. 00:53:859 (1) - 去音效 没去,换了个音效
2. 01:18:425 (x) - 可以把滑鼠移動到Break上, 拖曳起始點到這裡 OK
   
3. 01:46:251 (2) - ...我個人認為這個slider拉的糟了些.. 重新拉了
4. 01:56:251 (5) - 值得new combo, 我個人是認為這裡下, 後面不下, 和第一個KIAI一致 这倒没注意过,fixed

[Hard]

1. 這個diff相對來說note密度很高了, 我認為沒鼓段落應該下點S default whistle, 否則略嫌平淡 有加啊..音量太小么..
2. 00:31:685 (1,2,3,4,5) - 有些突然, 改用單個短spinner或不stack用spacing強調一下3/4? 我觉得spacing应该是看不出3/4的
3. 00:38:642 (．) - 這裡可以clap他一下(其實是custom tick)
4. 00:45:598 (1,2,3,4) - 因為有第一次了, 所以這裡我是沒打錯XD..
5. 01:04:512 (3,4) - 沒對稱到, 右邊低了 fixed
6. 01:53:207 (3) - 是否漏了個KIAI噴泉? added
7. 01:53:642 (5,6,7) - 類似這種stack現在似乎是比較容易被討厭的.. 看再有人说到的话我就改吧
8. 02:10:598 (x) - 可以拉Break到此
9. 02:32:990 (7) - 有漏clap的感覺..(其實是custom whistle) 这个确实是没有的

ziin wrote:

[general]
offset is 5381 or 164, whichever you prefer It's a map submitted one and a half years ago, so I guess it's not needed to observe new ranking rules, but anyways, I'll do the change then.
since you're skinning a hitcircle, can you use "SliderBorder:255,255,255" under [colours]? Read why here. Even now I don't know why we need to force a code like that even if we use white sliderborder?
I tried to find a better background but couldn't find it. Why aren't you using Falco's cover? Thanks but I'll keep present one

[Colors]
There are parts of the background which are 81,77,68 after the playfield dim. One of your colors is 92,88,85. This is too close. Maybe use a dark red-brown, the color of dead leaves? The light brown might be too close as well, but I didn't have as much trouble with it. Players who tested this map says that's easy to read, so keep it.

[easy]
00:30:381 (2) - move 1/2 later, shorten by 1/2. the red tick doesn't have much emphasis, and the bass not hits here too. I'm fit vocal
00:43:642 (1,2) - I don't like red notes on easy, but this one is better than the previous. Maybe slider circle instead? All white note is boring IMO, few red notes is OK. Annnnnnd, vocal is more easy to catch for new player
01:57:120 (2) - spacing fixed

[normal]
01:12:772 (3) - spacing fixed
02:03:642 (7) - red node in middle looks really bad, move up 1/2 grid. changed another way

[hard]
00:31:685 (1,2,3,4,5) - This was confusing both times because you take out the ability to read via spacing. I don't think put them out will make them more easy to read, keep it for now, if someone else menthioned, I'll change
00:46:903 - shouldn't there be a note here? no, after 4 3/4 stack notes, here's a little break

Breeze wrote:

ziin wrote:

[general]
offset is 5381 or 164, whichever you prefer It's a map submitted one and a half years ago, so I guess it's not needed to observe new ranking rules, but anyways, I'll do the change then.
since you're skinning a hitcircle, can you use "SliderBorder:255,255,255" under [colours]? Read why here. Even now I don't know why we need to force a code like that even if we use white sliderborder?

wcx19911123 wrote:

sorry for the huge delay
/me from my que

[General]
fine

[Easy]
00:30:381 (2) - start at 00:30:598 k
01:05:816 (5) - circle at 01:05:816 , slider start at 01:06:250 looks good, fixed
02:05:381 (2) - symmetrical ? Isn't it?

[Normal]
01:17:120 (2,1) - change nc to 2 done

[Hard]
00:11:251 (1) - circle here , spinner from 00:11:359 plz k
00:31:685 (1,2,3,4,5) - this is very confusing , not stack k. changed
00:45:598 (1,2,3,4) - ^ and add circle at 00:46:903 done
01:11:468 (3) - ctrl+j so what's the difference?
01:45:381 (3,4,5,6,1) - pentagon better plz , maybe need to change 01:44:294 (2)'s shape fine for me
01:53:642 (5,6,7) - try this ? http://puu.sh/4UGD
01:55:381 (5,6,7) - ^ http://puu.sh/4UGN changed another way
good luck

OzzyOzrock wrote:

I thought this would be Captain Falcon remix... XD

Farucon paaan ;w;

gina91189 wrote:

Sorry for very huge delay.
Note that they are just my opinions.

[Easy]
All fine

[Normal]
Only thing:
01:14:946 (1) – I am pretty sure that you can get something more interesting than this.
Also, compared to the end, this slider seems like a little boring.
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/146050, this is just my idea, you probably have something better than this >, < changed

[Hard]
01:01:033 – you forgot to make a fountain here ? I think it's no

I’m a noob modder
Star \:D/

SapphireGhost wrote:

HA, I got to this one before it was bubbled.

[General]
- I'd put Tick Rate 2 on all the difficulties for reasons listed in the Tick Rate 2 rant. (Except for maybe [Easy] due to the slow velocity.) Emm, I see no reason to use 2, keep it for now
- Skin: All skinning elements appear to be the proper dimensions. Lovely!
- Snapping: Everything seems to be snapped correctly. Nice job!
- Song Folder: Everything looks good here. YAAAY!
- About the difficulty names, I'd think it would be better to have something a bit more similar to:

[Hard]
- Again, I think this is a little harder than your average [Hard] difficulty. Yea, you're right, maybe it's a hard+
00:11:359 (1) - Start spinner one blue tick later. k
01:18:533 - End the kiai here if you're just going for a short little fountain. nothing much different than present :/ anyway changed
01:42:772 (7) - This is probably an insignificant thing but this slider would look better if the start and end didn't overlap. I feel it's fine
01:53:316 - End the kiai here if you're just going for a short little fountain. Yay for re-typing things I could have easily copy-pasted. OK, then
02:09:837 - Same kiai thing again, and I'll stop bothering you about this because it's probably intentional and it's okay.
02:24:729 (1) - Start this spinner one blue tick sooner? No, I feel starts at red tick is fine since there's a sound starts at red tick in background music
02:59:729 (3,1) - I'm really not a fan of the spacing here. Rearrange these a bit? Emm, I feel it's fine, if someone more mention this, I'll consider change

[Normal]
- Please finish this difficulty! I'd really appreciate it if you'd let Normal players play the full song.
00:51:903 (5) - New combo here for the start of a new lyric. it's not a new lyric start, really
01:14:946 (1) - I wouldn't recommend using a kickslider like this on Normal. Perhaps it would be better to figure out another way to do it. changed

[Easy]
- I would also be very happy if you finished this difficulty, too.
00:57:772 (1,2,3,4) - Maybe do this pattern differently. I'd imagine new players would have a hard time figuring out when to hit these notes. Emm, well, it's not as hard as you thought...

Keep mapping!

SapphireGhost wrote:

[LK's Insane]
01:23:642 - I don't think the break is necessary here but it works well enough. k
02:08:425 (4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - Stacking a new combo under a slider end is a bit messy. Maybe space them out a little. Then again, there are a lot of these so you probably don't want to change them. i didn't finally
02:10:598 - Definitely drag break to here! ok
02:32:772 (7) - Perhaps add a new combo here. It's getting a bit long without it. ok
02:55:816 (1,1,1,1,1) - I wouldn't advise putting this many new combos in a row. keep it
03:09:512 (1) - No need for a new combo here, it doesn't start the beginning of a new lyric or measure or anything. ok
03:09:729 (1,1) - I'd combine these spinners, as the second one is a bit short. Auto barely gets 2000.

osuplayer111 wrote:

[General]

You're missing the file "reversearrow.png" into your folder. Please make sure to add it and do a full submission. Added

[Hard]

00:41:033 (1) - Remove new combo. done
00:41:903 (4) - New combo. okay
02:32:990 (7) - ^ okay
02:34:294 (1) - Remove new combo. done

[xier's Hard]

Stack Leniency is unrankable. Increase it by 1 or 2 ticks. done

02:08:859 (9) - New combo. done
03:14:946 (6) - ^ done

osuplayer111 wrote:

[General]

[LKs's Insane]

Rename it to "LKs' Insane". √

00:25:816 (1) - Remove new combo. √
00:26:251 (3) - New combo.
00:35:816 (1) - Remove new combo. √
01:00:598 (1,2,1,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,1,2,1,2) - Such a useless new combo spam :/ fixed
01:07:555 (1,2,1,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,1,2,1,2) - ^ removed many NCs
01:11:468 (1) - Remove new combo. √
02:01:468 (8) - New combo. √
02:02:990 (1) - Remove new combo. √
02:03:642 (1) - ^ √
02:54:403 (1,2,3,4,5) - This change of rhythm is a bit unexpected. Using some sliders instead of circles would be much better. changed
02:55:816 (1,1,1,1) - Another useless new combo spam. fixed

Sakura Hana wrote:

[Hard]
00:26:251 (1) - This spinner doesnt seem to fit at all, it would feel better if you used notes mapped to the lyrics or the instruments here. There is a sound like electronic sound ""in the background music, so I'm following this at here, like what I do in normal and easy, maybe it's because here has some note before this spinner, so kinda hard to hear the electronic sound
02:24:512 (1) - Would feel better if this note is removed and the spinner starts from here, otherwise the spinner doesnt seem to make as much of an impact in the song. okay, removed note
02:27:772 (1) - Pretty close to spinner, there should be at least 1 full beat after a spinner to ensure player recovery. Well, removed this note

[Easy]
01:39:294 (2,3) - And well here's one of the reasons i dont like slidertick hitsounding, and well you see in gameplay the ticks are hidden, yet there are claps comming outta nowhere before the sliderball touches the repeat, hence it feels like a mistimed hitsound, and such it's unrankable because you have a hitsound coming out of nowhere Well, removed slidertick sound

AoiX wrote:

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