Normal:
00:26:580 (26580|3) - Add a note on this beat its the actual start and you should map it even if you put the notes later for a different pattern.
01:05:580 (65580|3) - Add note
01:10:980 (70980|0) - This note seems too apart from the next ones. 01:09:780 - Change the pattern to this?
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/90578301:20:580 (80580|2,80880|0) - move both 1 column to the right maybe?
01:31:380 (91380|0) - Move column 5
01:53:430 (113430|3) - I think this is not good, better do either all of the piano notes here, but this would be too many jacks for normal or just dont do it. I suggest remove this note. Or just add the note at 01:53:730 - and put those 5 notes in an easy way to play.
02:00:180 - Maybe you want to renote this pattern to a more outstanding way as the previous, like in symmetry. To give this measure a bit more weight and make it look like the finish and start of the next thing a bit more.
02:19:380 -
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/905811 try this
03:30:180 - Add notes?
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/90581903:40:380 - Add note column 5
03:42:480 (222480|6) - Move column 4
03:43:380 (223380|3,223680|2,223980|3,224280|5) - better make those notes a stair towards the right, or move 03:43:980 (223980|3) - to column 5
03:50:280 (230280|2,230430|1) - Move both 1 column left
04:01:380 (241380|4) -move this note to column 6
04:14:419 (254419|5) - ^ 7
04:17:536 (257536|6) - end at 04:19:094 - still reverbing but this note looks really too long
apply same mods to reoccuring parts of the songs ending
Hard:
00:23:868 - Add note?
00:26:580 (26580|4) - Move column 6. looks too similar to the other notes
00:55:830 (55830|3) - Whats this? cant identify it in the pattern :s
Suggesting to adding notes to this here: 00:56:130 - and 00:56:430 -
01:04:942 (64942|4) - Add note 01:24:142 -
01:32:880 (92880|1) - Move column5
01:48:330 - Add note column3
02:01:380 (121380|4,121980|0) - both notes better more to the right
02:20:580 (140580|4) - Move column 6
02:25:380 (145380|5) - Move column 4
02:25:980 (145980|3) - Move column 6
02:27:630 (147630|3) - Move column 5
02:28:380 (148380|5) - Move column 4
02:31:380 - Add note, column 4
02:35:730 (155730|0,155880|4) - change places?
02:36:180 -
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/905885 a pattern similar to this here?
02:42:780 (162780|1,162780|0) - change places
02:43:080 (163080|4) - move column 4
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/90588902:43:380 -
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/905894 i changed notes around here a bit~ it looks better to me this way and is on match with the next measure.
02:47:580 (167580|2) - move column 4
02:49:080 (169080|3,169380|4) - change places
02:51:780 (171780|5,172230|2) - bug in pattern starting here. 02:52:230 (172230|2) - this note must start on beat
03:14:580 -
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/905907 suggestion
03:18:480 (198480|3) - delete?
03:58:980 - You should add more notes here until 04:00:180 - to give this a finish and a change in notes according to the song
04:15:977 (255977|4,256172|5) - move column 3 and 5?
apply same mods to reoccuring parts of the songs ending