Natsu wrote:

HI~ Lexia x.x/

Mod Info:

1. Unrankable or very questionable stuff
2. Highly suggestion
3. Coment or opinions about some
4. nazi stuff or normal suggestions

Easy has been Remapped
Normal has Been Remapped

Hard:

1. 00:00:914 (1) - mmm nop this should start in 00:00:711 like the others diffs Done
2. 00:02:130 (1,2,3) - you have a bad rhythm here since you are mapping the strongs beats as a slider tails and its not good for play :c try this instead it follow better the rhythm of the song:I just Noticed that lol little mistake changed
   
3. 00:04:157 (2,3,4) - symilar issue here for this one you can try: same as above
   
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4. 00:05:576 the spinner sound bad xD i mean the song its to strong I suggest you to add a green line with 35 or 40% volume Done
5. 00:07:198 (2,1) - swap NC following your stanzas pattern the NC should be in 00:07:198 (2) - were the empathize its and not 00:07:400 (1) - cuz you broke your pattern Done
6. 00:07:198 (2,1,2,3,4) - and yes this is a broke rhythm to follow the music better try some like: Done and added a jump to signify the emotion in the music escalating
   
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7. 00:08:819 when you apply the rhyhtm above should be a NC here 00:08:819 and you should remove it from 00:09:630 (1) -
8. 00:11:049 (2,3) - this blanket can be alot better use the aproach circle to fix it Done
9. 00:11:860 (4,1) - really bad flow here the slider dont flow nice to the 1 position try maybe some like:Flow is fine since the slider takes a 1/1 break it would be easy for a hard player to hit it. its good to go in the opposite direction in harder diffs sometimes because if I keep going in the same direction it will get boring and repetitive
   
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10. 00:13:684 (1,2) - fix the blanket use the aproach circle to fix it Its Fine
11. 00:14:495 (3,4,1) - same as above with both blankets Its Fine
12. 00:15:711 (2) - move this a little down its getting overlaped by 00:14:495 (3) - previous slider No change not notable during gameplay
13. 00:15:711 (2,3) - here its another flow issue trysome like: Done
    
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14. 00:16:927 (1,2,3) - another one you can make a nice jump pattern here thought like: Done
    
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    If you want to add a jump ctrl g 5
15. 00:19:360 (3) - kinda nazui but you actually slider shape its pretty weird o.o use a better one? even though you told be to do the sexy curve okie dokie did something
    
16. 00:24:833 (1,2) - you can improve this blanket too look bad actually Improved the blanket
17. 00:26:657 (1) - remove finish and others hitsounds from sliders bodys X.X The finish on the first slider body is supposed to symbolize the extended note so no change on first. The other ones have been taken out
18. 00:28:684 (2) - ctrl g will play alot better here have some little jumps on hard will prepared players to play the others diffs Done
19. 00:29:090 (3) - also this slider broke all the flow here some like the next example will fix it: Done
    
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20. 00:31:927 (2,3) - another flow issue Im sure you can fix this by yourself Done
21. 00:32:333 I was expecting a original slider shape here to express the girl fun sound in music I added something weird xD
22. 00:33:954 (3,2) - fix the overlap here I don't know what you are pointing at cause 3 and 2 are blankets not overlaps
23. 00:34:765 (1,2) - use a properly distance and fix the flow with the next beat I mean 00:35:171 (2,3) -
24. 00:36:387 why the new combo? this its not consistent with what you did on 00:23:008 (1,2,3,4,5) -
25. 00:38:414 (2,3,1) - here its another flow issue since you can fix it easily taking examples from the others suggestions Fixed
26. 00:41:049 (1,2,3) - nazi this blankets can be better its fine off by 1 is to little to even be notable issue
27. 00:42:873 (1) - move this slider down since its getting overlap by previous 00:41:657 (2) - Done
28. 00:43:481 bad rhythm also itsnot consistent with the one you use on the previous symilar suggestion to keep consitent with your other section and the music use this: I fixed cause the slider ended on the white tick but a different rhythm is not bad having an inconsistency in rhythm brings diversity in a diff creating a special and more upbringing difficulty
    
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29. 00:44:900 (2,1) - avoid the overlap Fixed
30. 00:45:914 (5,1) - fix the blanket

actually that blanket is perfect owo

Thank Natsu for an amazing it helped a lot

im working sorry x'mas was bussy for me

1. Do you need 'Wide Screen support?' Probably,you might uncheck this issue.

1. 00:00:711 - IMO, this is calm part. That's why I recommend you to reduce the volume. I think 40% is appropriate
2. 00:00:711 (1,3) - That's my feeling. You might make these sliders the same form.(The reason why, these are a little bit different)
3. 00:05:576 (4) - NC
4. 00:05:576 (4) - set slider-head and slider-end parallel to the x-axis.
5. 00:07:198 (1) - Delete NC?
6. 00:16:927 (1,4) - I recommend you to change these the same form.
7. 00:29:495 - consider about 00:26:252 (4) - this note. You should add note here
8. 00:33:954 (2) - same as 00:05:576 (4) -
9. 00:36:792 (2,4) - How about using same form slider?
10. 00:39:630 (1) - make blanket more better
11. 01:20:171 (1,2,3) - I think this part is difficult for novice. I suggest that 01:20:171 (1) - let this slider grow to 01:20:981 - , and 01:21:184 (2) - delete it
12. 01:25:035 (3) - NC
13. 01:26:657 (1) - Delete NC

1. 00:00:711 - same as Easy
2. 00:01:319 (2) - Delete this green line
3. 00:15:306 (3) - try like this
   
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4. 00:28:279 (3) - Ctrl+J+H+G and replace it
5. 01:06:590 (4) - try like this
   
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6. 01:09:630 (5) - Move 1 grid left?
7. 01:24:225 (2) - Ctrl+J+H+G and replace

1. 00:00:711 - same as Easy
2. 00:01:522 (4) - delete sliderwhistle?
3. 00:02:333 (6,7,8) - try
   
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4. 00:04:157 (2,3) - use same slider form
5. 00:26:252 (8) - How about adding waypoint to make a curve
6. 00:57:063 (9,1) - try
   
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7. 01:05:576 (4) - NC
8. 01:12:063 (6) - Delete sliderwhistle
9. 01:18:549 (4) - Ctrl+J+H+G and replace it
   

1. 00:00:711 - same as Easy
2. 00:00:711 (1) - delete slider whistle
3. 00:03:144 (3) - Rotate 11 and replace it
4. 00:03:144 (3) - delete sliderwhistle
5. 00:19:563 (4,5,6,7,1) - try like this
   
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6. 00:21:387 (4,2) - use same slider form
7. 00:39:326 (4) - delete note (the reason why this is overmapped issue)
8. 00:40:542 (3) - ^
9. 00:43:988 (4) - ^
10. 01:02:333 (1) - delete sliderwhistle
11. 01:07:603 (2) - Ctrl+J+H+G and replace it
12. 01:09:630 (5) - delete waypoint and make a straight
13. 01:18:549 (1) - sticks out too much....
    

Alternative wrote:

Mod for Mod


[General]

1. Do you need 'Wide Screen support?' Probably,you might uncheck this issue.

[Easy]

1. 00:00:711 - IMO, this is calm part. That's why I recommend you to reduce the volume. I think 40% is appropriate Done
2. 00:00:711 (1,3) - That's my feeling. You might make these sliders the same form.(The reason why, these are a little bit different) Nope there the same I did ctrl v on them
3. 00:05:576 (4) - NC Nope going by 2 stanzas
4. 00:05:576 (4) - set slider-head and slider-end parallel to the x-axis. Okay
5. 00:07:198 (1) - Delete NC? Nope it hits to strong and has a finish so I cant remove
6. 00:16:927 (1,4) - I recommend you to change these the same form. I wasn't aiming for symerty there the red anchor is supposed to represent the ei sound she says during the note. thus the reason for it going curving on the exact same time as the red tick ^.^
7. 00:29:495 - consider about 00:26:252 (4) - this note. You should add note here Nope I didn't want to add a constant barrage of 1/1 notes so I gave them a break
8. 00:33:954 (2) - same as 00:05:576 (4) - ^^
9. 00:36:792 (2,4) - How about using same form slider? I understand for symerty but I will ruin the flow between 4 and 5 cause the slider will be too curved in the opposite direction it might be hard to hit owo
10. 00:39:630 (1) - make blanket more better Done
11. 01:20:171 (1,2,3) - I think this part is difficult for novice. I suggest that 01:20:171 (1) - let this slider grow to 01:20:981 - , and 01:21:184 (2) - delete it Actually since I ended the slider on a red tick the next red tick would be treated like a white tick cause of same ds
12. 01:25:035 (3) - NC Again following 2 stanzas
13. 01:26:657 (1) - Delete NC ^^

[Normal]

1. 00:00:711 - same as Easy Done
2. 00:01:319 (2) - Delete this green line Done
3. 00:15:306 (3) - try like this No that will ruin the flow for next note
   
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4. 00:28:279 (3) - Ctrl+J+H+G and replace it I did something a bit different
5. 01:06:590 (4) - try like this Done
   
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6. 01:09:630 (5) - Move 1 grid left? Way to Nazi I don't see anything wrong
7. 01:24:225 (2) - Ctrl+J+H+G and replace Okay I guess

[Hard]

1. 00:00:711 - same as Easy Done
2. 00:01:522 (4) - delete sliderwhistle?
3. 00:02:333 (6,7,8) - try Icant see it
   
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4. 00:04:157 (2,3) - use same slider form Done
5. 00:26:252 (8) - How about adding waypoint to make a curve
6. 00:57:063 (9,1) - try I cant see it
   
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7. 01:05:576 (4) - NC Done
8. 01:12:063 (6) - Delete sliderwhistle
9. 01:18:549 (4) - Ctrl+J+H+G and replace it Done

[Insane]

1. 00:00:711 - same as Easy
2. 00:00:711 (1) - delete slider whistle
3. 00:03:144 (3) - Rotate 11 and replace it
4. 00:03:144 (3) - delete sliderwhistle
5. 00:19:563 (4,5,6,7,1) - try like this
   
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6. 00:21:387 (4,2) - use same slider form
7. 00:39:326 (4) - delete note (the reason why this is overmapped issue)
8. 00:40:542 (3) - ^
9. 00:43:988 (4) - ^
10. 01:02:333 (1) - delete sliderwhistle
11. 01:07:603 (2) - Ctrl+J+H+G and replace it
12. 01:09:630 (5) - delete waypoint and make a straight
13. 01:18:549 (1) - sticks out too much....

OK finished
There is nothing to say.
Good luck
I'll be waiting for your mod for mod

[Colours]
Combo1 : 210,210,0
Combo2 : 255,128,192
Combo3 : 128,255,128

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LunarSakuya wrote:

hi

General
- Since you made all the diffs, you should have consistent combo colors. It seems that Hard's 3rd colors is the only one out of place lol. Make sure every diff has the code:

[Colours]
Combo1 : 210,210,0
Combo2 : 255,128,192
Combo3 : 128,255,128

- In the Title Unicode, there should be a space before TV Size: どう考えても私は悪くない (TV Size) Done

- I'm 95% sure the preview time's unsnapped lol, should be "PreviewTime: 53414" It'd be nice to check with another BAT but yea Changed

- Uncheck Widescreen Support Done


Easy
00:04:360 (2,3) - just a bit far xD maintain the 1.1x distance snap please
00:54:225 (1) - Finish on head would be nice
00:55:035 (2) - i recommend clap or whistle (like in Hard) on head for every other white tick starting from here =v= Right now, the placements seem a bit random, as in the emphasis on some notes come off kinda unbalanced imo
01:21:184 (2) - Highly suggest you delete this. There is only silence here. Upon deleting that, you could extend 01:20:171 (1) - to the end of the vocals like:

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01:23:008 (3) - Delete clap, similar idea as above, the clap sounded a bit strong here imo
01:25:035 (3) - Clap on head maybe
All Done I reworked the hitsounds a bit :3
Normal
00:00:711 (1) - perhaps whistle on head to introduce the map~
00:37:400 (2) - feels kinda funny starting on the wrong "downbeat", try this rhythm instead:

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00:39:225 (4) - a single note here would be just fine~ listen to the bgm
00:41:049 (4,5) - similar rhythm issue as before, try this rhythm:

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or something like that
00:46:117 (1) - Finish on head~
00:50:576 (4) - Finish on tail
00:50:880 (1) - some hitsound on this spinner would be nice
00:55:035 (2) - same deal as Easy, I suggest putting claps or whistles on every other white tick starting from here
Done All
Hard
00:08:413 (4) - Clap, hitsound consistency
00:34:765 (5) - minor but you could move this a bit to the left for a perfect blanket xD
00:43:685 (3) - Unsnapped slider start (I'd just remake it)
00:50:981 (6) - NC to mark the jump here?
01:10:035 (9) - hmm NC, delete NC on next note; vocals seem pretty distinct here imo
01:14:090 (2) - Delete Clap on tail (was this supposed to go on the head?)
01:14:496 (3) - Unsnapped start
01:20:577 (3) - ^
All Done
Insane
00:06:792 (1) - NC, its after a spinner
00:07:198 (2) - Finish on head D:
00:07:603 (3,7,11,1) - Claps lol don't forget your hitsounds
00:10:035 (3) - ^ yeah just go through and double check your hitsound consistency
00:14:698 (5) - Move this clap to (4)
00:32:029 (3) - What's this following? possibly another silence issue here =v= I'd move this forward to the red tick so it'll keep the 1/2 beat going
00:35:069 (2) - similar as above, the beginning of this slider doesn't seem to be going at its own rhythm..something like this maybe:

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01:19:360 (1,2) - i think a jump of some sort would be fitting here~ the vocals kinda create that feel?
01:20:577 (3) - Unsnapped start

All done
Nice map~~ I'd prob get a couple more mods just in case since there were several General and hitsounding things I noticed
for now, i'll leave my star here~

Priti wrote:

I would rather not have a butt facing me for the whole map.

Trust wrote:

Hi Lexia, mod on Insane and Hard as requested.

These are all suggestions,
feel free to use any~

[Insane]
So from what I can see your patterning of soft-hitclap2 is pretty inconsistent throughout the diff. I'll try to point you in the right direction and you can go from there.

To start, you can use S:C2 on 00:14:090 (2).
00:14:901 (6) - Change the head of this slider to S:C2
00:16:522 (12) - Change to S:C2
So for this measure you should have claps on (2), the head of (6), (8), and (12). Essentially you will want to repeat this pattern for each measure for the duration of the song for where it makes sense in the music. For example, the first section it made sense to avoid claps because of the prominent vocals. I'll let you go from here since it's a lot to point out. Make sure you apply a clap pattern to all your diffs as you'll want to keep hitsounding as consistent as possible and the consistency, from what LunarSakuya informed me, is what seems to be the issue. If you don't want to follow this pattern, that's certainly fine as long as you follow a pattern of some sort as it currently just seems like claps are sporadically placed at times.
I removed the Clap so consistency should not be a problem anymore This is the last time im changing hitsounds. There is gonna be no exceptiotion no bat or modder will change my mind about this.
From what I'm seeing you're placing whistles pretty nicely during the kiai section however the rest of the difficulty could definitely use more to bring out nice sounds in the music. Have a look to see where you can add some whistles, usually strong white ticks and sharp sounds are best suited.

00:14:090 (2,3,4,5,6) - It would look nice if you could get 00:14:090 (2,4,6) on the same y-coordinate and 00:14:292 (3,5) on the same x-coordinate to create a clean horizontal diamond shape. Sorry I don't understand
00:20:171 (1) - Remove the drum-finish as it sounds very random and not fitting here. Done
00:23:414 (1) - A soft-whistle makes more sense here since there isn't a cymbal crash sound in the music to justify a finish. Its emphasizes her vocal
00:25:036 (7,8) - The stacking on the tails can definitely be fixed. only if I unsnapped the notes xD
00:26:252 (11) - Remove the clap here? I don't think it really fits here with whats going on in the music. Also for this part you can add whistles on 00:26:049 (9,11) which I think sounds very nice. Done
00:34:765 (6,7) - This rhythm doesn't play very nice because currently the slider ends on neither a vocal or a significant beat in the music. I suggest you shorten it to end on 00:34:968 as it would make it more comfortable to play, as well as remain consistent with your rhythm seeing how this is the only time where you use a 3/4 slider for similar sounding parts. sorry if you listen closely she says 2 vocals really fast
00:39:225 (8,9,10) - This triplet does not appear to be emphasizing anything identifiable in the music. I highly recommending deleting 00:39:326 (9,10) to avoid what feels like overmap to me. I put that there to give a feeling of excitement to the new phase of music about to occur >w<
00:47:535 (5) - Would look nice if you shifted this slider to the right to get a cleaner blanketing rainbow effect. Done something00:53:414 (4) - NC here due to to the SV change. Okie
01:05:779 (6) - Add a S:C1 clap here for the drum beat Done
01:06:995 (13) - Having this note at around x:381 y:158 would make a clean triangle jump pattern with 01:06:387 (11,12,13) and make this part look more organized. Okay
01:10:035 (1) - Remove whistle on the head to fit your whistle pattern more nicely Its there for emphasis on the vocals
01:10:441 (2) - Change from finish to soft-whistle on the head ^^
01:11:251 (5) - ^ ^^
01:12:872 (3) - This rhythm doesn't really fit for me, and was actually kind of strange/confusing to read in a first playthrough. With how you started 01:12:062 (1,2) it would seem more intuitive to just use a 1/2 slider.

Example

Alternatively you can use a reversing 1/4 to catch those faint sounds in the BGM:

Example

In both cases, I would personally avoid having any objects on 01:13:177 since there are no sounds in the music to justify it. Done something different its there to bring excitement to the upcoming finsh owo
01:13:684 - I don't believe this green line is being used for anything. Make sure to remove it. I removed ALOT
01:13:684 (1,2) - Personally I don't like how these sliderheads are touching slightly, seems a bit unnecessary and avoidable but that's just me. Perhaps you can rearrange this to look nicer while staying consistent with the DS of this combo, really up to your preference though. Done but the ds was a little messed up
01:19:360 (1) - If you shifted this to right a bit around x:240 y:223 for instance it would feel more like a natural movement and less of awkward nudge as they currently feel really close. Done
01:20:981 (4) - The blanket here is a bit off. Use the approach circle of (5) to curve the slider nicely around it's head Done
01:21:590 (5) - Although what you've done here is ok, it would sound and play much nicer if you emphasized the downbeat here, especially since it has a vocal starting on it. I recommend you break this slider up into either a circle-1/2-circle, or a circle and reversing 1/2: I really like this slider

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Circle, 1/2, Circle



Circle, Reversing 1/2

Note that any hit-sounding suggestions can in most cases apply to all your difficulties, hence why I put Insane first in the mod. As you go through Hard, make sure to refer to this section too.
[Hard]
00:08:009 (3,4,5) - I think the formation of these objects could flow more nicely. If you rotate 00:08:009 (3) by 15-20° it will make a smoother upwards curving motion for cursors to follow.
00:08:617 (5) - Maybe something like this? I think it would look neater:

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00:26:252 (8) - As mentioned in Insane, the S:C1 clap doesn't really fit with the music here.
00:50:171 (3,4,5,1) - These jumps are rather extreme with how you mapped the rest of the difficulty and make more sense at parts in the music like you did for 01:06:590 (2,3,4). Consider toning it down a bit here.
00:58:684 (5) - This would make a nice triangle formation with 00:58:684 (5,6,7) if you shifted it to the right a bit.
00:59:090 (7) - The curve on this slider is a bit distorted as the left portion is more wavy than the right. Perhaps delete the middle anchor and see how that fits for you. Something like this:

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01:03:954 (1,2) - Looks kind of strange how you curved these two differently, or perhaps you were just going for variety. I think it would looker nicer if they were curved the same.
01:05:576 (1) - I can see why you would opt for a 2/1 here due to the vocal but truthfully it feels very empty for a Hard when you're skipping over an entire drumroll. Please consider mapping this out because it would definitely feel more exciting and fun to play. You can use either a 1/2 and a reversing 1/4 with multiple repeats or 2 circles instead of the 1/2:

Example

2 circles and a reversing 1/4


1/2 slider and a reversing 1/4

If you follow this suggestion - which I highly recommend you do - make sure to remove the SV change and the NC that came with it, as well as add claps on the drumbeats like you did for Insane.

01:13:684 - Useless green line again, make sure to remove.
01:26:252 (6,1) - I like what you had going with the symmetry but this kind of ruins it. Maybe you can centre (6) and stack (1) under the tail of 01:25:441 (3). Something like this would look much more aesthetically pleasing:

Example

Done Some im just to tired to reply
This diff is pretty nice! Just make sure you get your S:C2 claps consistent.

You're on the right track, just got to make sure the hit-sounding is good! Let me know when you're done with this I'll be happy to try and point out any missing hitsounds/errors in case I forgot some parts before you get the recheck. Also as a disclaimer i'm not a hit-sounding expert but hopefully this was useful.
Best of luck Lexia~

LexiaLovesU wrote:

Priti wrote:

I would rather not have a butt facing me for the whole map.

The BG was changed but it didn't update for the Listings

Saten wrote:

I can't see the other BG you intend to change to in the .osz

1. 01:25:036 (3) - Add a finish at the beginning to emphasize with the music and remove the clap.
2. 01:26:253 (1) - Remove new combo from here, it isn't necessary.

1. 00:05:576 (1) - This slider has a really ugly shape if you ask me, making a simple shape would play and look much better.
2. 01:25:036 (1) - Add a finish at the beginning to emphasize with the music and remove the clap.

1. 00:24:225 (3,4,5) - Small spacing inconsistency, fix it properly with distance snap enabled.
2. 00:57:063 (1) - Remove the whistle from the slider body and keep it only at the beginning.
3. 01:10:036 (1) - Same as above for the same reason.
4. 01:10:846 (3) - ^

1. 00:16:118 (1,2,3,4) - These doubles feels large spaced, I'd reduce the spacing a bit of these.
2. 00:23:009 (8) - New combo due to the new stanza and music change.
3. 00:23:415 (1) - Remove new combo from here afterwards.
4. 00:24:226 (4) - New combo due to the new stanza and music change.
5. 00:25:037 (7,8) - These two sliders could be stacked better if you disable the grid snap.
6. 00:53:009 (3,4,1) - Wrong spacing here, make sure to fix it properly with distance snap enabled.
7. 01:26:253 (1,2) - Space these two objects somewhere else, they're not so nice to play as anti-jump here.

Andrea wrote:

~Easy~

1. 01:25:036 (3) - Add a finish at the beginning to emphasize with the music and remove the clap.Done
2. 01:26:253 (1) - Remove new combo from here, it isn't necessary.Done

~Normal~

1. 00:05:576 (1) - This slider has a really ugly shape if you ask me, making a simple shape would play and look much better.Done
2. 01:25:036 (1) - Add a finish at the beginning to emphasize with the music and remove the clap.Done

~Hard~

1. 00:24:225 (3,4,5) - Small spacing inconsistency, fix it properly with distance snap enabled.Done
2. 00:57:063 (1) - Remove the whistle from the slider body and keep it only at the beginning.Done
3. 01:10:036 (1) - Same as above for the same reason.Done
4. 01:10:846 (3) - ^Done

~Insane~

1. 00:16:118 (1,2,3,4) - These doubles feels large spaced, I'd reduce the spacing a bit of these.Done
2. 00:23:009 (8) - New combo due to the new stanza and music change.Done
3. 00:23:415 (1) - Remove new combo from here afterwards.Done
4. 00:24:226 (4) - New combo due to the new stanza and music change.Done
5. 00:25:037 (7,8) - These two sliders could be stacked better if you disable the grid snap. Done
6. 00:53:009 (3,4,1) - Wrong spacing here, make sure to fix it properly with distance snap enabled.Done
7. 01:26:253 (1,2) - Space these two objects somewhere else, they're not so nice to play as anti-jump here.Done