EASY
00:03:728 (2,1) - beetween them, maybe you can fix the spacing, make them closer, since this is easy.
00:08:660 (3,4) - again, spacing, maybe you can make them closer, remember this is easy.
00:19:756 (1,2) - I averagely recomend that you should change this into 1 long slider, cause it's too complicated for easy.
00:24:276 (2) - Spacing please, make it closer to the first slider, or put it in the middle beetween them, to make it look more beautiful.
00:30:440 (2) - change it to hit circle and add a long slider perhaps? remember again this is easy, this pattern is too complicated I think.
00:47:701 (4) - spacing. fix it a bit. put it between hit circle 3 and slider 5. ( put it RIGHT in the middle of them, you see it's a bit misplaced?)
Beside that, GOOD!! beautiful pattern, fit the rhytm, neccessary spacing.
NORMAL
00:11:331 (1) - the slider apperears too fast. Nudge forward 1x (K)
00:19:756 (1,2,3,4) - In my opinion this pattern is too complicated for normal, maybe you could try to change it into short sliders with reverse arrows? that might be a good idea, seriously!
00:53:043 (8) - This stop a bit strange when played, don't you think, perhaps, make it longer a little.
01:09:071 (1,2,3) - same, too complicated
01:12:769 (7) - same, sound a bit strange for me.
Overall: Good, smooth, clean, fresh, beautiful Just don't make too complicated notes.
HARD
00:06:194 (4) - new combo? THEN,
00:07:016 (1) - remove new combo
00:11:228 (1) - Spinner apperears too fast nudge forward (K) .
I WILL CHOOSE THIS IF I WERE YOU VVV
or remove 00:11:125 (1) - as i feel it is not neccessary, while you can fill that empty space with some other pattern, use your creativity! xD.
but if you choose to delete that blue hit circle, nudge that spinner backwards (J), and don't forget to make it longer to the point before so it doesn't disturb the harmony of rhytm!!
00:39:482 (5,6) - need to be fixed, really, try making a more simple pattern.
00:53:043 (7,8) - spacing, too close put it farther a biiiiiiiit more.
00:58:180 (5) - I don't think this note is neccessary, delete it.
00:59:208 (3,4) - Too complicated, and worse, it makes the next blue 1,2,3 hard/unreachable.
01:01:879 (2,1) - spacing put it down a biiiit more.
01:02:290 (1,2,3) - Spacing, too far I guess and hard to reach, yet the approach rate is fast.
01:08:249 (1) - Don't think this note is neccesssary, yet annoying!, maybe you can make the pink number 6 hitcircle before it into a long slider with reverse? that's better I guess.
01:15:235 (4,1) - Don't you think beetween them is too far? fix it? I averagely recomended.
Overall: Good, really, nice, creative, fit the rhytm, aaand well the hard difficulty is just riiight xD
Consclusion: Nice, really nice, you have talent!^_^ , just you need to practice a bit more to adjust the note in your map with the difficulty. Don't make too complicated pattern on easy, and normal.
And I do hope this is useful to make your map more beautiful and tidy, sorry if I make any mistake/unimportant mod. (I'm newbie xD.)
And hell yeah! I love your storyboard.
Good luck and get ranked soon ^_^!!!
00:03:728 (2,1) - beetween them, maybe you can fix the spacing, make them closer, since this is easy.
00:08:660 (3,4) - again, spacing, maybe you can make them closer, remember this is easy.
00:19:756 (1,2) - I averagely recomend that you should change this into 1 long slider, cause it's too complicated for easy.
00:24:276 (2) - Spacing please, make it closer to the first slider, or put it in the middle beetween them, to make it look more beautiful.
00:30:440 (2) - change it to hit circle and add a long slider perhaps? remember again this is easy, this pattern is too complicated I think.
00:47:701 (4) - spacing. fix it a bit. put it between hit circle 3 and slider 5. ( put it RIGHT in the middle of them, you see it's a bit misplaced?)
Beside that, GOOD!! beautiful pattern, fit the rhytm, neccessary spacing.
NORMAL
00:11:331 (1) - the slider apperears too fast. Nudge forward 1x (K)
00:19:756 (1,2,3,4) - In my opinion this pattern is too complicated for normal, maybe you could try to change it into short sliders with reverse arrows? that might be a good idea, seriously!
00:53:043 (8) - This stop a bit strange when played, don't you think, perhaps, make it longer a little.
01:09:071 (1,2,3) - same, too complicated
01:12:769 (7) - same, sound a bit strange for me.
Overall: Good, smooth, clean, fresh, beautiful Just don't make too complicated notes.
HARD
00:06:194 (4) - new combo? THEN,
00:07:016 (1) - remove new combo
00:11:228 (1) - Spinner apperears too fast nudge forward (K) .
I WILL CHOOSE THIS IF I WERE YOU VVV
or remove 00:11:125 (1) - as i feel it is not neccessary, while you can fill that empty space with some other pattern, use your creativity! xD.
but if you choose to delete that blue hit circle, nudge that spinner backwards (J), and don't forget to make it longer to the point before so it doesn't disturb the harmony of rhytm!!
00:39:482 (5,6) - need to be fixed, really, try making a more simple pattern.
00:53:043 (7,8) - spacing, too close put it farther a biiiiiiiit more.
00:58:180 (5) - I don't think this note is neccessary, delete it.
00:59:208 (3,4) - Too complicated, and worse, it makes the next blue 1,2,3 hard/unreachable.
01:01:879 (2,1) - spacing put it down a biiiit more.
01:02:290 (1,2,3) - Spacing, too far I guess and hard to reach, yet the approach rate is fast.
01:08:249 (1) - Don't think this note is neccesssary, yet annoying!, maybe you can make the pink number 6 hitcircle before it into a long slider with reverse? that's better I guess.
01:15:235 (4,1) - Don't you think beetween them is too far? fix it? I averagely recomended.
Overall: Good, really, nice, creative, fit the rhytm, aaand well the hard difficulty is just riiight xD
Consclusion: Nice, really nice, you have talent!^_^ , just you need to practice a bit more to adjust the note in your map with the difficulty. Don't make too complicated pattern on easy, and normal.
And I do hope this is useful to make your map more beautiful and tidy, sorry if I make any mistake/unimportant mod. (I'm newbie xD.)
And hell yeah! I love your storyboard.
Good luck and get ranked soon ^_^!!!