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Jason Appleton - Battle Frontier

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NoHitter
osu! Alumni
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NoHitter
You can put notes before the offset...
22:35 <NoHItter> Ephemeral: just a question, is putting notes before the offset rankable?
22:36 <Ephemeral> yes, NoHItter
22:36 <Ephemeral> They should be just fine as long as the offset is correct
And updated

Download: Jason Appleton - Battle Frontier (Aoitenshi) [NoHitter's Symbol].osu
Aoitenshi
711 posts
Joined February 2009
Topic Starter
Aoitenshi

osuplayer111 wrote:

New "Detailed" modding style for help maps <3

You don't have to follow my post, remember there are not directions, but suggestions!

[File Checking...]

Background: Yes.
Source: Yes.
Tags: Yes. (Remove "XD" from the tags.)
File Size: 4,74MB/24,00MB

[Overall]

You have to set a preview point on all difficulties.

[Difficulties]

[NoHitter's Symbol]

Is this the most easier difficulty? You need to create an easy difficulty.

00:00:011 (1,2) - You have two notes before the first offset here.
00:08:056 (5,1) - Unexpected jump.
00:19:044 (1,2) - Spacing. Too close.

[Relax Symbol]

00:00:011 (1,2) - Same as NoHitter's difficulty.
00:02:012 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:04:003 (1) - ^
00:05:034 (1) - ^
00:06:095 (2) - New combo.
00:07:016 (1) - Remove new combo.

[Speed Symbol]

00:00:011 (1,2) - Same as NoHitter's difficulty.
00:03:033 (1,2,3) - Spacing.
00:13:040 (1) - Starting from here, you need a storyboard warning due to BPM change.
00:20:064 (3) - Hidden slider.
Fixed!
EEeee
1,026 posts
Joined July 2008
EEeee
Overall
1. first of all, u need a easy or normal diff, all diffs are a bit to challenging, 4 stars and such, make an easier one plz. for now, since you don't have an easy diff, move this to WIP
2. wow 30 secs long, lol, that's nice
3. set a preview point in all diffs.

NoHitter's Symbol
looks good

Relax Symbol
00:20:044 (4) - resnap this note plz

Speed Symbol
something wrong with that 2x section, why didn't u inherit, then times 2, and map?
resnap all notes, there are some like 00:20:045 (2) - this, and 00:21:086 (5) - this, that aren't snapped
do that and ur good to go.

well there u go,
*star
Ephemeral
Inland Empire
3,945 posts
Joined April 2009
Ephemeral
Checking timing on request from EEeee:

149 BPM / 528

Still sounds a little flimsy. Song is too short for any solid testing.

The 298bpm section in Speed Symbol should be changed to a 2x inherited.
Mok
1,226 posts
Joined August 2009
Mok
Mod's Info:
Mine are all suggestions. You're free to follow or not this mod :3
I'll just mod the beats in your map, in all its forms, will not tell you to add or remove the beat <3
Remember to fix spacing after all modfiy :3

[General]
It's ok.

[NoHitter's Symbol]
Seems fine ^^

[Relax Symbol]
Seems fine too ^^

[Speed Symbol]
00:05:650 (1,2) Move them 1/4 after.

And that's all! really good map, i'm glad to star it! Hope you will ask me again for other maps-modding x3
Kytoxid
osu! Alumni
1,369 posts
Joined April 2009
Kytoxid
[General]

Yeah, you need an easier diff.
Consider using custom combo colours.
Any chance of a higher quality MP3? Right now it's smaller than your background image, so it could be smoother. XD

Needs preview points.

[NoHitter's Symbol]

Not much to say; consider capitalizing the name in the same way his name is actually done.

00:16:022 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Shift this column upwards so that 3, 6 land in the centre?

[Relax Symbol]

One unsnapped note.

00:07:016 (2,3,1,2) - Align the notes a bit better (make them fall right underneath the repeat)

[Speed Symbol]

Looks okay. Drain feels high, but whatever. XD

Star.
Aoitenshi
711 posts
Joined February 2009
Topic Starter
Aoitenshi
Fixed!
NoHitter
osu! Alumni
3,785 posts
Joined June 2009
NoHitter
Updated

and cleaned up some unneeded commands in the SB on Speed Symbol.

Download: Jason Appleton - Battle Frontier (Aoitenshi) [NoHitter's Symbol].osu

Download: Jason Appleton - Battle Frontier (Aoitenshi) [Speed Symbol].osu
Lokamp
2,530 posts
Joined January 2009
Lokamp
NoHitter's Symbol
00:17:042 (6) - new combo

Relax's Symbol
00:27:089 (3) - move it a square left

Speed Symbol
00:18:063 (7) - new combo

... and the fastest work of the month is done x3
Short but gives good entertainment! Have your star.
Vanmonky
986 posts
Joined June 2009
Vanmonky
As your request. Wew ada orang Indonesia nih~

[NoHitter's Symbol]
Are you sure the name is NoHitter not NoHItter?

00:26:008 (1) - Found this too hard. This is the easiest diff of all. But it's just like normal or hard diff with a little harder.

[Speed Symbol]
00:29:010 (1,1,1) - I don't like this pattern. Jangan atas, bawah, tengah. Tapi atas, tengah, bawah. Itu lebih enak mainnya. Kalau mau disusah-susahin, spacingnya di lebarin aja.

-----

And star~
NoHitter
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NoHitter
Speed Symbol

00:13:401 - This timing section should be changed into inherited; then make it x2 BPM
00:17:427 - Make this timing section X1 BPM
00:18:635 - ^
00:19:843 - Make this timing section X2 BPM
00:23:102 - ^

You seriously need to change this

Oh god, I posted here more times than I regularly do with my threads.
DJPop
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3,549 posts
Here since the beginning
DJPop
~Relax Symbol~
00:08:016 (3) - stack it
00:09:077 (2) - ^
00:15:001 (7) - new combo
00:21:045 (6) - ^
00:27:089 (3) - looks really weird >_>

~NoHitter's Symbol~
00:17:042 (6) - new combo

~Speed Symbol~
00:05:034 (6) or 00:05:065 (7) - new combo
00:27:089 (7) - ^


+Star
bmin11
5,438 posts
Joined October 2008
bmin11
[Hitter]
00:08:097 (2,3) - Don't let them overlap

[Speed]
00:20:064 (3) - lift 1 grid up

Starred
Tanmak
896 posts
Joined August 2009
Tanmak
Hello~

[General]
How about set preview time to 00:12:999 exactly?

[NoHitter's Symbol]
00:29:106 (1,2,3) All new combo looks like the other difficulty.

Hmm..then I can't find major issue. :3
Star
NoHitter
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NoHitter

bmin11 wrote:

[Hitter]
00:08:097 (2,3) - Don't let them overlap
???

Tanmak wrote:

[NoHitter's Symbol]
00:29:106 (1,2,3) All new combo looks like the other difficulty.
Sorry but no
GabrielRKF
992 posts
Joined September 2008
GabrielRKF
//Relax Symbol//
  1. 00:13:401(SB) - Storyboarded "BPM x2" but there is no BPM x2 here >_>
  2. 00:19:240(SB) - here too.
//NoHitter's Symbol//
  • No prob.
//Speed Symbol//
  1. 00:03:938(2) - This note is at 00:04:039 (Blue Tick)
//Overall//
  • There can't be notes before the BPM start. So make the BPM at 00:00:113 (Offset: 516)
Good map ^^

Star o/
Zekira
9,233 posts
Joined September 2008
Zekira
In rare times, I will have to argue on awp's timing here and say

Offset: 512 (-4)

Also, I don't have time to make a diff. in the next 21309576234 weeks so... yeah, you can go without me.
DJNightmare
882 posts
Joined February 2009
DJNightmare
Great Beatmapping there! The star is yours =3
Bass
1,846 posts
Joined January 2009
Bass
Blue = Suggestion, you mustn't fix this
Red = you must fix this


[Overall]
Set a preview point

[Relax Symbol]
Why I see 2x BPM sign in this diff? Delete it, cuz it's useless.

00:15:01 (1,2,3) - looks really messy~
00:17:47 (1) - unrankable spinner! Spinner on auto must gain at least 3000 points. This spinner gained unfortunately 2000 points.


[NoHItter's Symbol]
Fine

[Speed Symbol]
Fine

Star~
NoHitter
osu! Alumni
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NoHitter
Umm minimum spinner points is 2000 not 3000
Aoitenshi
711 posts
Joined February 2009
Topic Starter
Aoitenshi
You're right nohitter, anyway, I chage the spinner to a 2 New combo circle
GladiOol
4,475 posts
Joined August 2008
GladiOol
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Vergence
546 posts
Joined December 2009
Vergence
:lol: :lol: :lol:
Nice...
XD
Hard
jockeytiyan
1,269 posts
Joined July 2009
jockeytiyan
Darn...sorry for the delay. Just got into a modding spree today.

Anyway, here's my mod.


Relax Symbol:
SPOILER
General: As much as possible, don't place notes that are hidden among others. It will confuse newbie players. For example, 00:01:720 (3) - and 00:08:163 (3) -. I've found more of these notes in the map, so please fix them. Also, decrease the hitsounds volume, I can't hear the music that well.

00:00:109 (1,2,3) - This breaks the flow of the map.
00:27:894 (3) - I don't know if this is ok, but can you make this a 0.5x BPM slider?

Another thing, make the Beat Snap Divisor to 1/4.


NoHItter's Symbol:
SPOILER
General: Make Beat Snap Divisor 1/4.

00:07:156 (1) - Get this out of the slider. It looks ugly. >.>
00:10:377 (1) - Suggestion: Add a whistle here.
00:15:209 (2) - Remove whistle here.
00:27:894 (4) - Add whistle to the whole slider + starting/ending point

Such a short kiai time. >.>


Speed Symbol:
SPOILER
00:05:646 (2,4) - Suggestion: Remove these. Sounds ugly, IMO.
00:07:156 (2) - Start new combo here. Not at 00:06:954 (1) -
00:14:001 (2,1) - o_O WHAT THE HECK IS THIS?!?!?! Did you forget to 2x BPM this slider?
00:14:202 (3,5) - Stack the end point of (3) to the starting point of (5).
00:17:826 (5,6) - Stack these too.
00:20:443 (2,1) - Forgot to 2x BPM the slider again. >.>

Haha, I'm not a Pokemon fan and I'd usually hate mapping short songs. But yeah, you've earned your star. ^^
NoHitter
osu! Alumni
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Joined June 2009
NoHitter
Fixed

Download: Jason Appleton - Battle Frontier (Aoitenshi) [NoHitter's Symbol].osu
NoHitter
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Joined June 2009
NoHitter
And here's the Easy/Normal you wanted.
You can rename the diff if you want

Download: Jason Appleton - Battle Frontier (Aoitenshi) [NoHitter's Training].osu
Ephemeral
Inland Empire
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Joined April 2009
Ephemeral
A friendly reminder that guest difficulties do not constitute kudosu.
Aoitenshi
711 posts
Joined February 2009
Topic Starter
Aoitenshi
I don't know about that, thanks for reminding me
jericho2442
osu! Alumni
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Joined March 2009
jericho2442
[Nohitters training]
(suggestion) 00:08:968 (2) - i dont like how this i placed under (1) i think it would look better away from (1)

[Speed Symbol]
00:17:417 (4) - new combo would go nice here spacing wise

___________________
short but sweet maps, have a star
jockeytiyan
1,269 posts
Joined July 2009
jockeytiyan
Just one problem in NoHItter's Training:

00:24:673 (3) - Add a whistle here.
NoHitter
osu! Alumni
3,785 posts
Joined June 2009
NoHitter
Updated

Download: Jason Appleton - Battle Frontier (Aoitenshi) [NoHitter's Training].osu
cyanberryio
424 posts
Joined August 2008
cyanberryio
Help Agnes clear Loogie's queue.

[NoHitter's Training]
Preview point isn't set. And since this is the first map in the listing, it goes by this unset point.

[Relax Symbol]
00:15:414 - Object isn't snapped!

[NoHitter's Symbol]
No preview point.

[Speed Symbol]
PREVIEW POINT BLAH BLAH
2x BPM SB not noticeable enough.
00:29:095 (1) - Up 1 grid3.
00:29:498 (1) - Down 1 grid3.
^for the sake of the last beat being under the stack, and symmetry

Fun even though I can't play rite right now. Star~
Lizbeth
osu! Alumni
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Lizbeth
i'm not sure of adding Ash and Pikachu to the tags o.O, why not just Pokemon?

NoHitter's Symbol
00:03:334 - dont place the inherited timing section on top of the notes, always 1/4 before as minimum, so if you hit early the you hear the sound efect.
00:03:334 (1) - how about replace this slider for 3 beats at 00:03:334 - 00:03:536 - 00:03:737, then the slider from here: 00:04:140 to 00:04:542
00:08:569 (5,1) - be consistence with spacing here
00:18:636 - remove this timing section

Speed Symbol
00:03:323 - see NoHitter's Symbol
i barely could see the SB warning alert, u should put it bigger and with a intense color.
00:16:411 (8,1,2,3) - space this 3 evenly, and make them a single combo, for more intuitive jump ^^
u work with 1/8 snap, be sure anything is snapped at 1/8 by mistake
you could lower a bit the hp drain just a suggestion n.n

Relax Symbol
i supose this is equivalent to a normal diff, right?
00:04:035 (2) - this beat is hard to read, suggesto make (2,3) a slider
00:06:954 (1) - too close to prev combo
00:08:565 (1) - same
00:11:787 (1,1,1) - avoid jumps on normal or easy diff
00:16:619 (3,4) - kinda confusing, unstack?
00:19:438 (1) - too far from prev combo
00:23:062 (1,1,1,1) - same with the jumps

NoHitter's Training
if this is the easiest diff, hp drain should be lower than Relax Symbol
low the slider velocity a bit

nice work
post it in my queue again for a recheck
cya
NoHitter
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NoHitter

Lizbeth wrote:

i'm not sure of adding Ash and Pikachu to the tags o.O, why not just Pokemon? Pokemon is covered by the source

NoHitter's Symbol
00:03:334 - dont place the inherited timing section on top of the notes, always 1/4 before as minimum, so if you hit early the you hear the sound efect. Done
00:03:334 (1) - how about replace this slider for 3 beats at 00:03:334 - 00:03:536 - 00:03:737, then the slider from here: 00:04:140 to 00:04:542 It doesn't have to literally conformed to the lyrics :)
00:08:569 (5,1) - be consistence with spacing here Define consistent
00:18:636 - remove this timing section Done

NoHitter's Training
if this is the easiest diff, hp drain should be lower than Relax Symbol Done
low the slider velocity a bit And Done

nice work
post it in my queue again for a recheck
cya
Download: Jason Appleton - Battle Frontier (Aoitenshi) [NoHItter's Symbol].osu

Download: Jason Appleton - Battle Frontier (Aoitenshi) [NoHItter's Training].osu
NoHitter
osu! Alumni
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NoHitter
Bah!
SB changes

Edit: fixed

Download: Jason Appleton - Battle Frontier (Aoitenshi) [Speed Symbol].osu
arkiandruski
31 posts
Joined February 2009
arkiandruski
That video is really lagging out my computer.

Training:

Good enough. There's only one spot I question and that's the note at 00:08:968. Does it have to start right underneath the other slider?

Relax Symbol:

That is a pretty large change in difficulty from Training. On top of this the map was made more confusing by having notes overlapping and crowded on top of each other.

No Hitter's Symbol:

I like this one. It's fun and easy to read.

Speed Symbol:

There were some sliders that overlap each other, but other than that it looks fine.

Well, I wasn't able to say much here, but have a star.
Lizbeth
osu! Alumni
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Joined August 2008
Lizbeth
Speed Symbol
00:16:411 (8,9,10,11) - it will be cool if yoy make this a perfect diamond.. and add new combo to (8)

Relax Symbol
00:08:565 (1) - move 1/2 later and remove a repeat
00:18:632 - this timing section is useless, remmove it

NoHItter's Training
hp drain, overall diff and circle size are the same of Relax Symbol
consider decrase each a beat...
00:24:874 (1) - too short imo, would be hard for beginner.. continue the circles each 2 beats
other than that all good n.n

NoHItter's Symbol
all good

PM me when is fixed and ill pubble it

i edit this post cuz i mess up the names of the difficulties ><, if you already check and were: wtf, check it again n.nU
NoHitter
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NoHitter
Not changing the hitcircle size
But everthing else done.

Download: Jason Appleton - Battle Frontier (Aoitenshi) [NoHItter's Training].osu
Lizbeth
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Lizbeth
NoHItter's Symbol and Speed Symbol have different offset than the other 2 diff

Relax Symbol
00:18:632 - delete inherited timing section
00:19:236 - ^
00:29:102 (1) - separate this a bit of prev combo

NoHItter's Training
00:24:673 (1) - 2 objects in the same tick, not good
00:18:632 - delete inherited timing section
NoHitter
osu! Alumni
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NoHitter
Just fix the offset in NoHItter's Symbol. Don't forget to adjust the inherited timing sections too

Download: Jason Appleton - Battle Frontier (Aoitenshi) [NoHItter's Training].osu
anonymous_old
0 posts
Here since the beginning
anonymous_old
NoHItter's Training
SPOILER

Good.

Relax Symbol
SPOILER

00:08:767 (1) : Whistle.
00:15:008 (1,2,3) : I keeping thinking to go to the 3 first, not the 2. Consider changing the spacing here.

NoHItter's Symbol
SPOILER

00:18:636 (1,2,3) : Too big of a jump.

Speed Symbol
SPOILER

Good.

* Move the SB that says "BPM x2" lower
Lizbeth
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Lizbeth
NoHItter's Training
00:24:773 (1) - start this spinner in the next red tick..

Anyway you deserve you P-Bubble
good job!!
NoHitter
osu! Alumni
3,785 posts
Joined June 2009
NoHitter
Updated

Download: Jason Appleton - Battle Frontier (Aoitenshi) [NoHItter's Training].osu
Mismagius
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Joined July 2008
Mismagius
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Andrea
Beatmap Nominator
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Andrea
[NoHItter's Training]

00:06:149 (4,1) - Seems too far to me.

[Relax Symbol]

00:11:787 (1,1,1) - Why new combo spam here? Looks weird.
00:23:062 (1,1,1,1) - ^
00:29:102 (1,1,1) - ^
NoHitter
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NoHitter
Done :|

Download: Jason Appleton - Battle Frontier (Aoitenshi) [NoHItter's Training].osu
Andrea
Beatmap Nominator
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Andrea
Some little IRC fix...

Bubbled~
kingcobra52
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kingcobra52
No complaints. Ranked.
NoHitter
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NoHitter
yes!
Aoitenshi
711 posts
Joined February 2009
Topic Starter
Aoitenshi

NoHItter wrote:

yes!
..... Anyway, yay!
Venumidas
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Venumidas
One of the worst ranked maps I ever played, worst timing.
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