1. Hard (4.79 stars, 255 notes)
2. Normal (2.92 stars, 91 notes)

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

中文歌摸不动啊.-.

但是无论如何, SSM已经在0L出现. LZ下面还是美丽

1. Red: Be unrankable
2. Blue: Be important
3. Black: Suggestions

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yf_bmp wrote:

HI, M4M

• 
  

1. Red: Be unrankable
2. Blue: Be important
3. Black: Suggestions

[General]
tags是不是少了点 目前想不到加啥。。。难道我要把华语啊china那种也加进去吗orz，随便加了点
bg感觉有点奇怪啊 你不懂女生！
歌词感觉有点奇怪啊 你不懂女生！

[Hard]
00:03:273 (1) - 这种短间隔拉条完全重叠应该是unrankable的 可以稍微拉在不同一点的位置 其实是rankble的，只不过不适合放在hard diff里，改掉了
00:03:273 (1,2,3,4,5) - hard, 这样读不好 建议每个物件头尾方向掉下 不要啊，这样倒回去多好玩OVQ
00:13:144 (1,2) - 建议不这样 因为后面的小节同一位置没有相同的梗,或者后面也做成这样 为何要做一样。。。OVQ
00:20:547 (5,6) - ^
00:38:350 (5,1) - too close,要做梗的话这里也不适合 我觉得这个变ds梗在这里还算不错0.0
00:40:993 (4,5,1) - 因为是匀速移动,不等间隔对于hard来说读图会有些难 摸了那么多hard diff的我表示变ds什么的在hard里根本不是个事儿orz
00:52:627 (1,2,3,4) - 现在这种节奏在前后看起来有些不太合,可以试着做成这样: 反正木有循环，想到啥梗就用啥梗呗orz，这个图后面这种梗我也用了所以这里就保持现状好了

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00:54:742 - add note, 这里不加会略显突兀 没啊，感觉还行啊0.0
00:59:853 (6,7) - 同1,但此处是建议 nope
01:02:850 - why Kiai? 射喷泉
01:01:440 (2,3) - slightly close arranged ds
01:14:483 (1,2,3) - hard读图略难啊, 虽然kiai一开始也是这样但倒是不怎么会造成读图问题,这里因为前面01:13:778 (4,5,6) - 已经是1/4了 可以考虑完全重叠 这里我确实稍微有点犹豫，不过感觉打起来的话现在这么摆也没啥，再看看别的modder咋说好了
00:31:475 (7) - NC nope，没必要
01:02:674 (5) - ^ ^

[Normal]
00:10:676 (1,2) - Normal还要叠? 空了一整拍，没事的
00:58:972 (2) - NC ok
01:01:087 (5) - ^ ok
01:02:850 - kiai去掉 nope

Hard感觉不错啊 希望能认真考虑一下我的mod 我check mod一向很认真0.0

My map: http://osu.ppy.sh/s/143734 thx~同样中文 ok

Kawaiwkyik wrote:

[Normal]
00:03:625 (2) - 有點彎 跟00:02:920 (1) - 有點不配合 改了一下1的位置
00:42:051 (2) - 錨點有點多? 这是吐槽吗orz，稍微调了下blanket

[Hard]
難度上跟nm有點大差距 我觉得还在接受范围内吧0.0
00:47:691 (4,5) - 看到當場無言 咦orz
其餘沒太大問題 好吧噗

happy623 wrote:

YEA

irc modded

2014-01-25 00:11 Hollow Wings: 妹纸
2014-01-25 00:11 Hollow Wings: 我有张2diff 一分半的曲子
2014-01-25 00:11 Hollow Wings: 想求个速mod行不
2014-01-25 00:12 happy623: 恩
2014-01-25 00:12 Hollow Wings: ACTION is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/359480 Yuki Hsu - Wo Shi Nv Sheng]
2014-01-25 00:12 Hollow Wings: 多谢！
2014-01-25 00:12 Hollow Wings: OVQ
2014-01-25 00:12 happy623: wawawa
2014-01-25 00:12 happy623: 中文
2014-01-25 00:12 Hollow Wings: 对
2014-01-25 00:15 happy623: irc 還是
2014-01-25 00:16 Hollow Wings: 噗，你说吧
2014-01-25 00:16 happy623: ;w;
2014-01-25 00:16 happy623: 00:13:849 (2,4) -
2014-01-25 00:16 happy623: NM
2014-01-25 00:16 Hollow Wings: 嗯0.0
2014-01-25 00:16 happy623: 雖然說不是不行 但覺得會視覺上有混淆
2014-01-25 00:17 Hollow Wings: 好，我考虑一下
2014-01-25 00:17 happy623: 00:15:259 (4) - 可能會早點了
2014-01-25 00:17 Hollow Wings: 应该可以变一下
2014-01-25 00:17 happy623: 恩恩
2014-01-25 00:18 happy623: 00:25:129 (2,3) - 這個都是
2014-01-25 00:18 happy623: 第一個diff來說多數都是新手玩
2014-01-25 00:18 happy623: 可能會被尾巴誤導了
2014-01-25 00:18 Hollow Wings: 这个会太难吗
2014-01-25 00:19 Hollow Wings: 好，那我换个吧0.0
2014-01-25 00:19 happy623: 00:48:396 (3,1) -
2014-01-25 00:20 happy623: unstack?
2014-01-25 00:20 Hollow Wings: 是让我stack perfec吗？
2014-01-25 00:20 happy623: 不要stack
2014-01-25 00:20 Hollow Wings: 0.0
2014-01-25 00:21 Hollow Wings: 好
2014-01-25 00:21 happy623: 嘛 不是不行, 但感覺會太難了
2014-01-25 00:21 Hollow Wings: 嗯。。。normal有个1分拍遮挡应该不是难梗
2014-01-25 00:21 Hollow Wings: 不过还是改了吧OVO
2014-01-25 00:22 happy623: 我最怕就是藍線會不會太難而已233
2014-01-25 00:22 happy623: 不過BPM低應該不會的
2014-01-25 00:23 Hollow Wings: bpm才80+噗。。。
2014-01-25 00:24 happy623: 話說Source是什麼;w;
2014-01-25 00:24 Hollow Wings: 徐怀钰
2014-01-25 00:24 Hollow Wings: 同名专辑
2014-01-25 00:24 Hollow Wings: 徐怀钰的第一张专辑就叫《徐怀钰》
2014-01-25 00:25 happy623: 沒記錯Source不要寫專輯名字
2014-01-25 00:25 happy623: 我BiBi那張就是這樣沒泡起了;w;
2014-01-25 00:25 Hollow Wings: 你那是同人曲
2014-01-25 00:25 Hollow Wings: 要写原作
2014-01-25 00:25 Hollow Wings: 这首是商业曲
2014-01-25 00:26 happy623: 那張也是商業吧qwq
2014-01-25 00:26 Hollow Wings: 哎？
2014-01-25 00:26 Hollow Wings: 我去问问
2014-01-25 00:26 happy623: https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Song_Setup#Song ... _Meta_Data
2014-01-25 00:27 happy623: "This is not to be used for things like album titles."
2014-01-25 00:27 Hollow Wings: 好我懂了
2014-01-25 00:27 Hollow Wings: 多谢！
2014-01-25 00:27 Hollow Wings: OVQ
2014-01-25 00:27 happy623: qwq
2014-01-25 00:27 happy623: 放去Tags吧
2014-01-25 00:28 Hollow Wings: 不用了
2014-01-25 00:28 Hollow Wings: 吗
2014-01-25 00:28 Hollow Wings: 哦对
2014-01-25 00:28 Hollow Wings: 网站搜的话title
2014-01-25 00:28 happy623: 恩
2014-01-25 00:28 Hollow Wings: unicode搜不了
2014-01-25 00:28 Hollow Wings: 嗯
2014-01-25 00:28 happy623: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/359480 Yuki Hsu - Wo Shi Nv Sheng [Hard]]
2014-01-25 00:28 happy623: 00:37:468 (2,3) - 我的話會放遠點
2014-01-25 00:29 happy623: 不然跟前面ds差不多會點早
2014-01-25 00:30 Hollow Wings: 我思考一下
2014-01-25 00:30 happy623: 恩恩
2014-01-25 00:30 Hollow Wings: 我把00:40:288 (3) - 反向了一下
2014-01-25 00:30 Hollow Wings: 这样似乎也不错
2014-01-25 00:30 happy623: 01:19:066 (4) - 這個拆反會不會太快了
2014-01-25 00:30 happy623: 我怕會掉
2014-01-25 00:31 Hollow Wings: 拆反？
2014-01-25 00:31 happy623: reverse
2014-01-25 00:31 happy623: 折
2014-01-25 00:31 happy623: 反
2014-01-25 00:31 happy623: (orz 打錯了
2014-01-25 00:31 Hollow Wings: 0.0
2014-01-25 00:31 happy623: 折返!
2014-01-25 00:31 Hollow Wings: 这里没有折返啊
2014-01-25 00:31 Hollow Wings: 你是指反向的移动吗
2014-01-25 00:31 happy623: 我指滑條啊
2014-01-25 00:32 happy623: 01:19:066 (4) -
2014-01-25 00:32 Hollow Wings: 这个没有折返啊orz
2014-01-25 00:32 happy623: reverse sign
2014-01-25 00:32 happy623: qwq
2014-01-25 00:32 happy623: reverse 2 times
2014-01-25 00:32 happy623: so fast
2014-01-25 00:32 happy623: to react
2014-01-25 00:33 Hollow Wings: 我
2014-01-25 00:33 happy623: 明嗎
2014-01-25 00:33 Hollow Wings: 我的图
2014-01-25 00:33 happy623: !?
2014-01-25 00:33 Hollow Wings: 1:19:066没有obj。。
2014-01-25 00:33 happy623: . . .
2014-01-25 00:34 happy623: Hard啊
2014-01-25 00:34 happy623: http://puu.sh/6wsgy.jpg
2014-01-25 00:34 Hollow Wings: OVQQQ
2014-01-25 00:34 Hollow Wings: 我看错diff了噗。。。
2014-01-25 00:34 happy623: qwwwwwwwqqqqqqqqq
2014-01-25 00:34 Hollow Wings: 我的错！！！
2014-01-25 00:34 Hollow Wings: OVQQQ
2014-01-25 00:35 happy623: 不要緊qwq
2014-01-25 00:35 happy623: 應該大致沒了
2014-01-25 00:36 Hollow Wings: 00:37:115 (1,2) - 这里我感觉还好，因为变奏比较不明显所以就这样好了
2014-01-25 00:36 happy623: 好的
2014-01-25 00:36 Hollow Wings: 01:19:066 (4) - 这个折返不难的，嗯OVO
2014-01-25 00:36 happy623: 看來您不喜歡太多NC啊
2014-01-25 00:36 happy623: 我的話會掉233
2014-01-25 00:36 Hollow Wings: hard嘛nc不需要太多
2014-01-25 00:37 Hollow Wings: 是吗，那你觉得怎么改比较好
2014-01-25 00:37 happy623: 不知道
2014-01-25 00:37 happy623: www
2014-01-25 00:38 Hollow Wings: 嗯。。。这里的话其实就是一个读图的梗啦
2014-01-25 00:38 Hollow Wings: 应该没那么难，所以就这样吧OVO
2014-01-25 00:38 Hollow Wings: 多谢看图！OVQ
2014-01-25 00:38 happy623: 好;w;/

Sieg wrote:

Hello

General:
clear

Hard:
00:00:981 (1) - seems too short for song beginning, just remove? anyway should this be placed on 00:01:158 (1) - ? u r right, i just removed the spinner
00:29:361 (7,8) - i'm sure rhythm here should be same as on 00:26:540 (7,8) - same rhythm as well, just change objs 0.0
00:37:468 (2) - maybe end this one on white, this will help to keep rhythm easy i see, fixed
00:38:702 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2) - idk but timing here feels a bit off hmm, maybe i'll try to ask bats to check timing before ranking
01:08:314 (5) - maybe remove this note nope, this is just good

Normal:
00:34:295 (3) - maybe http://puu.sh/6xkWJ.jpg ok~
nothing wrong tho

Good Luck!

SuperContact wrote:

Mod via in-game Chat

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2014-01-25 17:55 SuperContact: 哦这次节奏和流畅性很不错嘛Xd
2014-01-25 17:56 Hollow Wings: 因为是善良图嘛
2014-01-25 17:56 Hollow Wings: 所以
2014-01-25 17:57 SuperContact: 移动还是杯具了，暂时
2014-01-25 17:57 Hollow Wings: OVQ
2014-01-25 17:57 Hollow Wings: 我想快点rank这张图啊
2014-01-25 17:57 Hollow Wings: 这样多个坑位
2014-01-25 17:57 Hollow Wings: OVQ
2014-01-25 18:02 SuperContact: 善良点的话00:38:702 (1) - 不要放在相邻的位置orz
2014-01-25 18:03 Hollow Wings: 好
2014-01-25 18:04 SuperContact: 00:25:129 (3) -
2014-01-25 18:04 SuperContact: 00:25:835 (5) -
2014-01-25 18:04 SuperContact: 感觉可以小跳一下
2014-01-25 18:05 SuperContact: 等等
2014-01-25 18:05 SuperContact: 好像也有点怪orz
2014-01-25 18:05 Hollow Wings: 因为是先打note
2014-01-25 18:06 Hollow Wings: 最多就23调一下
2014-01-25 18:06 Hollow Wings: 跳
2014-01-25 18:08 Hollow Wings: 00:47:691 (4) - ...
2014-01-25 18:09 SuperContact: timing 早了。。
2014-01-25 18:09 SuperContact: offset要+
2014-01-25 18:10 Hollow Wings: 多少
2014-01-25 18:12 SuperContact: 加10到15ms之间吧
2014-01-25 18:12 SuperContact: 我也不是专业测timing的orz
2014-01-25 18:12 Hollow Wings: 0.0
2014-01-25 18:13 SuperContact: 我建议+15
2014-01-25 18:14 Hollow Wings: 嗯
2014-01-25 18:15 Hollow Wings: 额
2014-01-25 18:15 Hollow Wings: +15太多了
2014-01-25 18:16 Hollow Wings: 我改成+12
2014-01-25 18:16 Hollow Wings: -945现在
2014-01-25 18:16 SuperContact: 好
2014-01-25 18:16 SuperContact: 00:44:181 (1) -
2014-01-25 18:17 SuperContact: 我建议两排滑条。。
2014-01-25 18:17 SuperContact: 拍
2014-01-25 18:17 Hollow Wings: 好
2014-01-25 18:18 Hollow Wings: 咦
2014-01-25 18:18 Hollow Wings: 哎
2014-01-25 18:18 Hollow Wings: 不对啊
2014-01-25 18:18 Hollow Wings: 其实我很想保留00:44:530的重音
2014-01-25 18:19 Hollow Wings: 改成3/4slider+note好了0.0
2014-01-25 18:19 SuperContact: 这是我备选方案orz
2014-01-25 18:20 Hollow Wings: orz
2014-01-25 18:22 SuperContact: 总00:52:286 (8) - 这个换成一拍滑条？
2014-01-25 18:23 Hollow Wings: 这边是跟着之前的梗啦orz
2014-01-25 18:23 SuperContact: 之前是哪里？
2014-01-25 18:24 Hollow Wings: 00:49:818 (1,2,3,4,5) -
2014-01-25 18:24 Hollow Wings: 一路复制粘贴-.-
2014-01-25 18:24 Hollow Wings: 8就在那个位置
2014-01-25 18:24 Hollow Wings: 你懂的
2014-01-25 18:25 SuperContact: 00:52:286 (8) - 滑条头在同一个位置就行了orz、反正节拍位置也不一样
2014-01-25 18:25 Hollow Wings: 嗯好吧orz
2014-01-25 18:25 Hollow Wings: 不过这边果然还是只能接3/4
2014-01-25 18:26 SuperContact: 也行
2014-01-25 18:27 SuperContact: 一拍的话是和7形成一组两个滑条的感觉
2014-01-25 18:28 Hollow Wings: 噗
2014-01-25 18:28 Hollow Wings: 7的话主要是跟4一个位置
2014-01-25 18:29 SuperContact: 一组是指节拍上一组的感觉，不是说位置上orz
2014-01-25 18:29 Hollow Wings: orz
2014-01-25 18:38 SuperContact: 01:19:783 (6,7,8) -
2014-01-25 18:38 SuperContact: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1279132
2014-01-25 18:38 SuperContact: 换个曲线透一下气orz
2014-01-25 18:39 Hollow Wings: 好的0.0
2014-01-25 18:39 SuperContact: 算啦就这样啦
2014-01-25 18:39 Hollow Wings: OVQQQ
2014-01-25 18:39 Hollow Wings: 多谢看图!

1. Remove first period of kiai? It doesn't make much sense to me :<

1. 00:39:771 (2) - 0,04x Distance snap error.
2. 00:52:639 (1) - ^
3. 00:54:049 (3) - 0,05x DS error.
4. 01:05:682 (3,4) - Something like this would flow better:
   
   example

   
   You would have to redo the stuff afterwards though.
5. 01:12:381 (4) - 0,04x DS error.
6. 01:14:495 (6) - This doesn't look so good, because 6 doesn't continue the curve of 5 correctly. It would be hard to fix though. Maybe do something like this:
   
   example

   
7. 01:16:258 (2) - 0,15 DS error.
8. That's it already. Nice :3

1. 00:28:668 (5,6) - They don't continue curve and that makes it look not good. I'd prefer something like that again:
   
   example

   
2. 01:03:919 (1,2,3) - I think these overlaps look bad. I'd consider to change it
3. Great!

Zweib wrote:

request from in-game pm

[Normal]
OA5有点可怕呀 噗忘记调了，变成了od3 hp3
00:01:170 (1) - spinner会不会太短了。。。换成slider好像也不维和？ 我也不太清楚，只是想塞个转盘罢了，如果实在是不好那我再换0.0
00:29:373 (4) - 这个不弯下的话跟下个(1)组合起来总觉不太好看呀 4和前面的2是组合啦，1和后面的2是组合噗，而且我也挺喜欢弯的+直的（咦）这种组合的呀orz
00:52:639 (1) - 这个也可以弯下跟00:51:229 (2) - 做blanket的 这里就想直接直过去所以不想做blanket呢

[Hard]
00:22:321 (3,4) - 往左移点？和(5)的位置太直了 可以，fixed
00:35:277 (7) - 好像不是很必要 好，删了
01:13:790 (4,5,6) - 这个跟01:14:495 (1,2,3) - 放在一起感觉很容易让人误读啊。。感觉后面的放大间距也可以0 0 果然这个梗很失败啊，全都改掉了，顺便还改了一些相关的梗

Desperate-kun wrote:

M4M

[General]

1. Remove first period of kiai? It doesn't make much sense to me :< after 2 modders mentioned this, ok :3

[Normal]

1. 00:39:771 (2) - 0,04x Distance snap error. fixed
2. 00:52:639 (1) - ^ fixed
3. 00:54:049 (3) - 0,05x DS error. fixed
4. 01:05:682 (3,4) - Something like this would flow better: haha i prefer the one i've set
   
   example

   
   You would have to redo the stuff afterwards though.
5. 01:12:381 (4) - 0,04x DS error. fixed
6. 01:14:495 (6) - This doesn't look so good, because 6 doesn't continue the curve of 5 correctly. It would be hard to fix though. Maybe do something like this: well, thou ur idea is still good to me, the composing now is working pretty well in my mind, so i choose to keep this :3
   
   example

   
7. 01:16:258 (2) - 0,15 DS error. fixed
8. That's it already. Nice :3

[Hard]

1. 00:28:668 (5,6) - They don't continue curve and that makes it look not good. I'd prefer something like that again: alright this is exactly what i want
   
   example

   
2. 01:03:919 (1,2,3) - I think these overlaps look bad. I'd consider to change it no i won't 0.0
3. Great!

I love special, unique mapsets, and this definitely belongs to this category! This is truly a piece of art and I didn't expect this. Hitsounding is also really great. The style fits the song very much, amazing job! Good luck for rank ^-^ i'm glad u like it (thou some composing style didn't fit ur taste q:

EDIT: Have my star thx a lot :3

[ HalLoWeeN ] wrote:

[Hard]
No kds plz :]
00:05:400 (4) - NC?

Well...! This mapset is pretty good. maybe I cannot help for this mapset.
so, I just shoot the star for this map!

[ HalLoWeeN ] wrote:

Hi!

[ HalLoWeeN ] wrote:

[Hard]
No kds plz :]
00:05:400 (4) - NC? nope for uhm... maybe this is just in one section so no nc here is just ok for most players, and for stack here i think it'll be fine. still thx for recheck the feedback :3

Well...! This mapset is pretty good. maybe I cannot help for this mapset.
so, I just shoot the star for this map! thx for the star, i'm really appreciate. i've mod ur map and i just forgot to shoot one, coz ur map is good as well lol.

kanon_sayuri wrote:

哦嘞♂哦嘞233 233

[Hard]

0.0一开始觉得滑条慢吞吞的不舒服，玩了两遍发现这滑条配合音乐挺可爱2333 才85的bpm把sv调高了感觉也不是很好，况且就现在来看这个滑条速度还是可以接受的嗯

Kiai Time部分的类似三连的，比如01:05:946 (6) - 01:11:586 (6) - 01:17:227 (7) - 建议去掉。01:14:054 (5) - 这个可以保留。 这些没关系的啦orz

00:22:498 (4) - delete 不要啊，前面都有的

00:29:548 (8) - 拆一下比较好，note+slider 为何啊，这里节奏柑橘没有任何问题啊

00:37:480 (2) - 往后再拉一下，到00:37:921 - 好

00:42:063 (3) - 稍微放远一丁点 微调了一下

00:44:178 (1,2) - 合并一下？ 不要，比较想强调一下2

00:46:998 (1) - 大白线直接一个note就好了，不要滑条。稍微停顿一下比较好一些 没有改掉滑条，不过这块节奏全都改掉了，只强调了长白线的音嗯

00:54:401 (6) - 拉到00:54:754 - ？毕竟有一个音0.0 这里节奏是故意这么下的

00:59:337 (5,7) - 完全重叠有点。。稍微错一下位？ 好的

[Normal]

00:09:278 (3,2) - 完全重叠 差了两拍应该没事

00:17:386 (3,4) - 3 在00:17:915 - 处结束，4在白线00:18:091 - 起手，红线00:18:443 - 结尾 不，这里节奏就想这么下

00:20:911 (4) - 折返一下 不需要

00:36:951 (2) - 后移，白线00:37:127 - 起手，红线00:37:480 - 结尾 不用，这里只是跟鼓而已

00:38:537 (1,2,3) - 换成这种？ 因为跟鼓所以不改

00:59:513 (2) - 和前面一样 nope

01:08:150 (5) - 和01:04:977 (2) - 照应一下，前移至01:07:797 - 起手。 01:08:502 - 处可以补一个note，压在01:08:855 (6) - 上 节奏不会换

01:19:431 (5) - ^ ^

完了。。出不去了，摸完了发现好好听，当年怎么就没觉得呢。。QAQ 当年你不懂女生！

1. You can remove "china" "taiwan" from tags, map will have "chinese" as gentre after rank anyway
2. Normal diff have different combo-colours, any reasons for that?
3. Even with automatic audio lead-in map starts kinda really too fast... can you please adjust audio lead-in to 1000 via notepad?
4. Nice bg

1. 00:01:170 (1) - Don't see any reason for silence here, it ends on audible beat. Actually, i find rhythm at this part kinda strange, beat on 00:01:698 - needs to be played while it covered by sliderbody. Try something like this to follow music better:
   
   
   
2. 00:01:875 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - Really well-done patterns, i like them a lot! Thought i have one idea to make this part a bit more interesting and challenging, especially for HD players. How about to try something like this?
   
   
   SPOILER

   
   
   Just replace 00:02:932 (5,1) - with code:
   
   

   455,248,2932,2,0,L|499:255,1,40,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   438,267,3285,5,0,0:0:0:0:
   477,273,3461,1,0,0:0:0:0:

3. 00:06:458 (2,3,4,5) - Hmm, what about adjusting sliders here to follow vocals better? Something like this:
   
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:12:098 (1,2) - If you going to keep an extended sliders here i guess you need to make slidertails audible - i actually tried and it was sounds not too bad! There is no reason to keep them silent anyway.
5. 00:13:156 (1) - Same as above
6. 00:17:738 (6) - New combo follow new part of music
7. 00:20:559 (5) - Same as above about extended sliders with silent slidertails.
8. 00:23:026 (6,7) - While i can agree with (6) being silent i can't agree with (7). A simple reason - (6) follows sound what music provides while (7) is just extended. Make tail of (7) audible please. Also, spacing at this part feels kinda clamped. I'd raise it a bit to avoid excessive overlapping between 00:23:026 (6,7,8) -
9. 00:25:847 (5,6,7) - Same as above, all of these needs to be audible.
10. 00:28:668 (5,6) - Same
11. 00:34:307 (4,5) - Same
12. 00:35:012 (6,7) - Raise spacing at this part. Main problem of this pattern: it looks totally same as 00:34:307 (4,5). Such spacing tricks can works good on Insane diffs, but since your is a Hard i'd prefer to see this part more friendly.
13. 00:37:127 (1,2) - Same about unnesessary silence. As all usual extendeds they should have audible tails. By the way, you can extend 00:37:480 (2) - to 00:38:009 - it will improve playability and will madel made 00:38:186 (4,5) - easier to catch. Also try to made this overlap more prettier:
    
    
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14. 00:40:476 (2) - It can be mapped as singe note at 00:40:476 - or shortened to 00:40:653. Silence is unacceptable.
15. 00:42:768 (5,6) - Same problem with silent slidertails.
16. 00:49:113 (9,10) - Same problem with silence
18. 00:44:178 (1) - Also this can be just extended to 00:44:530 -
19. 00:45:588 (5,6) - Again problem with unneeded silence.
20. 00:46:293 (7,8) - Same problem. Also, this overlap doesnt looks/plays well. How about try something like this to avoid it?
    
    
    SPOILER

    
21. 00:46:998 (1) - This can be mapped just as single note, this extended actually even plays bad. Try to just replace with single note at 00:46:998
22. 00:47:703 (4,5,6) - This part technically plays well, but estetically looks bad. How about use bigger spacing here & rotate (6) a bit? Try this. Also, again problem with silence.
    
    
    SPOILER

    
23. 00:52:286 (8,1,2,3,4,5,6) - A very problematic part. Inconsistent spacing between these sliders might confuse players a lot, actually these extendeds... I don't really think that they fit at all, in my opinion simple 1/2 sliders would work much better since it is still a Hard diff, but if you really want to keep them please made tails audible.
24. 00:56:164 (3,4) - This works much better as 1/2 slider (00:56:164 - 00:56:516 - ). Not sure why you mapped it with extended, it imo doesn't mach music well
25. 00:57:574 (7,8) - Should be audible
26. 00:58:279 (1,2) - ^
27. 00:59:865 (6) - New combo follow pattern
28. 01:01:099 (1,2) - Shouldn't be silent
29. 01:02:686 (5) - NC?
30. 01:22:427 (1) - Spinnertail snapped to beat here and therefore should be audible.

1. 00:13:156 (1) - Add finish?
2. 00:27:962 (2) - Looks bad, try this:
   
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:55:459 (1) - Ah, 3 repeats are annoying to play for anyone. Can you please replace it with 3 1/1 sliders?
4. 01:18:021 (4) - This slider feels kinda out of place. Maybe try something like this to make it flows more smoother?
   
   
   SPOILER

   

Kodora wrote:

sorry for delay > >

[General]

1. You can remove "china" "taiwan" from tags, map will have "chinese" as gentre after rank anyway alright
2. Normal diff have different combo-colours, any reasons for that? fixed to same ones
3. Even with automatic audio lead-in map starts kinda really too fast... can you please adjust audio lead-in to 1000 via notepad? idk if lead-in is an issue before ranking... some bats told me that the system will give an appropriate lead-in addition set if the map's ranked. so let it be like this now
4. Nice bg lol, guess whio's she(?) ?

[Hard]

*Well, you kinda overuse extended sliders with silent slidertails here. I must say that Ranking Criteria allowes having silent slidertails, but only for cases where it makes sense (for example long note what ends in silence). Silencing slidertails only for achieving 1/4 or 1/8 jumps is not allowed. Actually, i made some of them audible and i find that they sounds pretty nice without any silence here. well, as for the song's silent and most of objs r set in vocal track. so i really think it's nice if those slider's ends' hs r set in silence... well, if the bat says that this is not rankble then i'll consider to remove some orz

1. 00:01:170 (1) - Don't see any reason for silence here, it ends on audible beat. Actually, i find rhythm at this part kinda strange, beat on 00:01:698 - needs to be played while it covered by sliderbody. Try something like this to follow music better: haha well, i'll remove the silence hs set. as for the unplayed beat... hmm, this hard diff is already hard enough, so i decide to miss this 0.0
   
   
   
2. 00:01:875 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - Really well-done patterns, i like them a lot! Thought i have one idea to make this part a bit more interesting and challenging, especially for HD players. How about to try something like this? lol if i replace this slider by 2 notes it will be a bit too difficult in this mapset imo... so this is it ;w; i'm glad u love this pattern www
   
   
   SPOILER

   
   
   Just replace 00:02:932 (5,1) - with code:
   
   

   455,248,2932,2,0,L|499:255,1,40,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   438,267,3285,5,0,0:0:0:0:
   477,273,3461,1,0,0:0:0:0:

3. 00:06:458 (2,3,4,5) - Hmm, what about adjusting sliders here to follow vocals better? Something like this: uhhhhhhh??? i think the rhythm i set now is better to fit the vocal track than urs orzzz
   
   
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4. 00:12:098 (1,2) - If you going to keep an extended sliders here i guess you need to make slidertails audible - i actually tried and it was sounds not too bad! There is no reason to keep them silent anyway. hmm... alright OVQ
5. 00:13:156 (1) - Same as above yep u r right, it's still good OVQ
6. 00:17:738 (6) - New combo follow new part of music oh, here i think nc is not that necessary 0.0
7. 00:20:559 (5) - Same as above about extended sliders with silent slidertails. ok
8. 00:23:026 (6,7) - While i can agree with (6) being silent i can't agree with (7). A simple reason - (6) follows sound what music provides while (7) is just extended. Make tail of (7) audible please. Also, spacing at this part feels kinda clamped. I'd raise it a bit to avoid excessive overlapping between 00:23:026 (6,7,8) - ok, fixed the hs and ds issue both
9. 00:25:847 (5,6,7) - Same as above, all of these needs to be audible. fixed
10. 00:28:668 (5,6) - Same fixed
11. 00:34:307 (4,5) - Same fixed
12. 00:35:012 (6,7) - Raise spacing at this part. Main problem of this pattern: it looks totally same as 00:34:307 (4,5). Such spacing tricks can works good on Insane diffs, but since your is a Hard i'd prefer to see this part more friendly. i see, changed
13. 00:37:127 (1,2) - Same about unnesessary silence. As all usual extendeds they should have audible tails. By the way, you can extend 00:37:480 (2) - to 00:38:009 - it will improve playability and will madel made 00:38:186 (4,5) - easier to catch. Also try to made this overlap more prettier: fixed the hs issue. and changed the slider to another style
    
    
    SPOILER

    
14. 00:40:476 (2) - It can be mapped as singe note at 00:40:476 - or shortened to 00:40:653. Silence is unacceptable. fixed as the second mod
15. 00:42:768 (5,6) - Same problem with silent slidertails. fixed
16. 00:49:113 (9,10) - Same problem with silence fixed
18. 00:44:178 (1) - Also this can be just extended to 00:44:530 - i kept the pattern and remove the silence hs set
19. 00:45:588 (5,6) - Again problem with unneeded silence. fixed
20. 00:46:293 (7,8) - Same problem. Also, this overlap doesnt looks/plays well. How about try something like this to avoid it? good, all changed
    
    
    SPOILER

    
21. 00:46:998 (1) - This can be mapped just as single note, this extended actually even plays bad. Try to just replace with single note at 00:46:998 but i really love the patterns like this... OVQ
22. 00:47:703 (4,5,6) - This part technically plays well, but estetically looks bad. How about use bigger spacing here & rotate (6) a bit? Try this. Also, again problem with silence. lololololol, i think this is just fine, thou it looks not that much good but it's just fine www
    
    
    SPOILER

    
23. 00:52:286 (8,1,2,3,4,5,6) - A very problematic part. Inconsistent spacing between these sliders might confuse players a lot, actually these extendeds... I don't really think that they fit at all, in my opinion simple 1/2 sliders would work much better since it is still a Hard diff, but if you really want to keep them please made tails audible. i changed some of them to 1/2 sliders, and fixed the hs issue
24. 00:56:164 (3,4) - This works much better as 1/2 slider (00:56:164 - 00:56:516 - ). Not sure why you mapped it with extended, it imo doesn't mach music well well. i just can say: my feeling told me to set rhythm like this
25. 00:57:574 (7,8) - Should be audible fixed
26. 00:58:279 (1,2) - ^ fixed
27. 00:59:865 (6) - New combo follow pattern fixed
28. 01:01:099 (1,2) - Shouldn't be silent fixed
29. 01:02:686 (5) - NC? ok
30. 01:22:427 (1) - Spinnertail snapped to beat here and therefore should be audible. hmmmmmmm alright... ;w;

Lots of very nice patterns, kiai part actually was awesome. However, i must say that some overlapping patterns and unnesessary silent slidertails can be real problems for players, so i highly suggest you work at these problems. (You also have so any silent slidertails on kiai and it was working very well - it would be very nice if you will do them audible on the rest of map). yeah i see, changed a little bit in composing

[Normal]

1. 00:13:156 (1) - Add finish? hmmm nope
2. 00:27:962 (2) - Looks bad, try this: haha ok
   
   
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3. 00:55:459 (1) - Ah, 3 repeats are annoying to play for anyone. Can you please replace it with 3 1/1 sliders? hhhhhhmmmmmmmmm i decide to keep it, i bit fun with low sv if there's a pattern like this imo, don't u think? lol
4. 01:18:021 (4) - This slider feels kinda out of place. Maybe try something like this to make it flows more smoother? changed to another style
   
   
   SPOILER

   

Pretty nice diff. Good luck! lol sry for delay nearly 2 months lolol, and i'm glad u announced me of the hs issues in different words hhhhhh

1. 00:11:392 (5) - 把网格调到最小然后把它稍微往右调一下http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1287652如何？
2. 00:12:451 (2,3) - 两个这样的slider连的话这样我觉得比较好看http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1287660
3. 00:13:156 (1,2) - ^ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1287662
4. 00:23:379 (7,8) - slider弧度小一些会更好看？
5. 00:25:141 (3) - 不加音效么？
6. 00:38:537 - 要不要加个note？
7. 00:59:689 - ^
8. 00:01:170 - 01:03:919 :音效有些意义不明，00:13:156之前我好想没有听到你所加的whistle的声音，不过加上感觉更好。但是后面的我觉得按照music里面的音效下会比较好，不然显得有些乱。且我觉得可以把音效的声音加大些，而hitnormal的声音缩小些，否则有些地方没有音效的note感觉很突兀比如。
9. 01:21:898 (4,5,6) - 三角稍稍有点歪？
10. 01:14:495 (1) - 要加NC吗？

1PSA wrote:

我来了~偷懒之余就顺便摸了果然很短 我比你更懒orz

[Hard]

1. 00:11:392 (5) - 把网格调到最小然后把它稍微往右调一下http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1287652如何？ ok
2. 00:12:451 (2,3) - 两个这样的slider连的话这样我觉得比较好看http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1287660 咦，有区别吗orz
3. 00:13:156 (1,2) - ^ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1287662 这里就不改了
4. 00:23:379 (7,8) - slider弧度小一些会更好看？ 为何你们都喜欢小弧度。。。orz
5. 00:25:141 (3) - 不加音效么？ 不加
6. 00:38:537 - 要不要加个note？ 不加
7. 00:59:689 - ^ 不加
8. 00:01:170 - 01:03:919 :音效有些意义不明，00:13:156之前我好想没有听到你所加的whistle的声音，不过加上感觉更好。但是后面的我觉得按照music里面的音效下会比较好，不然显得有些乱。且我觉得可以把音效的声音加大些，而hitnormal的声音缩小些，否则有些地方没有音效的note感觉很突兀比如。 下音效我从来都是跟着感觉来的。。。现在的音效整体我还是很满意的
9. 01:21:898 (4,5,6) - 三角稍稍有点歪？ 稍微调了下
10. 01:14:495 (1) - 要加NC吗？ 啥？不加了么orz

[Normal]
没。

以上~~好图快rank~ 233我也想啊噗

ZZHBOY wrote:

啊 女神我来了
[Normal]
00:51:229 (2) - 这里建议拆成1note加1/2折返滑条 哦哦哦这样的感觉 虽然是个好主意不过在normal里beat的出现速度普遍偏慢，所以这个就这样好了，不然感觉有点突兀
00:55:459 (1) - 少折返一次然后00:58:279 加个note 可以突出鼓点 前面四个字也是一个词 这个可以有，改了
01:01:099 (1) - 去掉nc 下一个滑条nc 人声起 这里nc不需要动
01:12:381 (4) - 建议改3/4折返 然后下一个滑条提前1/4拍然后拉长1/4拍 我传不了图你感受一下 感觉有点奇怪 这里节奏也不需要动
01:19:078 - 不跟这里的wuuuuuuuu? 不跟了噗（为何看到你wuuu我就想笑噗
01:20:841 (1,3) - 总感觉没报号 然后挤在一起不觉得很蠢吗._. blanket稍微调了下。这么萌的滑条居然说蠢，打你哦
[Hard]
00:07:339 (5,1) - crtl+g然后调整位置 感觉会好点 这不需要动
00:46:293 (7,8,1) - 感觉好丑啊=。= 改掉了
00:54:754 - 空着感觉有点奇怪 没事的
00:56:164 (3) - 建议老老实实用1/4滑条 或者萍水相逢都用这种设置会感觉舒服一点 这里不打算动
00:58:631 (2,4) - overlap好丑=。= 为何。。。
然后看完KIAI说说对这个难度的感想 还是有点你那种一个难度里不同部分难度差太大的特点 有点偏向I 嗯orz
所以说hwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww女神龖死ki =。=||||||

Piyoko_9796 wrote:

你是女生o le o le o~ 我是男生o le o le o~
HW你決定去泰國了喔恭喜 没钱去
記住爆照 -，-|||

中文歌真無力....((趴
給個渣摸((被巴

[Hard]
00:05:400 (4) - NC 不需要
00:07:339 (5) - 要不要前面的滑條改成return? 那個什麼oleoleo 有種來回的感覺((語死中 没事，这样也挺好玩的
00:20:206 (4) - circle比較好... 故意下了不一样的节奏
00:22:497 (4) - remove nope
00:23:731 (8) - 向下好看點((思 稍微调了下
00:33:955 (3) - 變兩個circle 柑橘也挺好。。。纠结。。。先不改orz
00:37:127 (1,2,3,4,5) - 這裡我miss了幾次了Q口Q 这边的梗我翻新了一下
00:38:186 (4) - 拉出點變三角形((耶((X 没，这里是叠在之前note的位置上啦
00:54:401 (6) - 滑條尾到白線 nope

[NM]
00:17:386 (3) - 縮短到紅線然後(4)以前到白線 这里节奏不想动
01:12:381 (4,5,6) - 這裡接的有點奇葩...不知怎樣改 不会改

[General]
你X的...這圖怎麼這麼有趣hhh hhh

我就只懂摸ins....我吧HD當成ins摸了_(TvT_)_ 23333
祝rk

這歌好洗腦喔喔喔喔喔喔喔((不要喔喔喔喔喔!!!! 哦哦哦哦哦！！！

1. You must remove "drum-hitnormal" file in your folder. as you can see both diffs, you don't use this file.

1. Circle size +1, AR-1. It's a bit hard for this difficulty.
2. 00:01:170 (1) - This spinner is really short for beginner. I recommend you to use one slider here.
3. 00:24:436 (1) - add a finish to the head of the slider same as your hard diff.
4. 00:29:372 (4) - Design suggestion: I prefer to make curve slider here. It would look better imo also you can make a flow more naturally
   
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5. 00:51:229 (2) - About slider's repeat. If you followed the vocal at this slider, It's better to use a finish instead of a whistle.
6. 00:55:459 (1,1) - I don't agree the stack in the easiest diff. You should consider remaking this part. Fix this one, so it prevents the player from misreading.
7. 01:08:150 (5) - I feel kind of empty here 01:07:797 - .because you followed this sound at previous part 01:03:919 (1,2) - . So Please try to make this
   
8. 01:13:966 (5) - I think you don't need to follow this slider. It seems a bit hard to me for this difficulty. So you should consider removing it.
9. 01:19:431 (5) - Same as above.

1. 00:03:109 - add a whistle same as here 00:04:519 - You should be able to apply my suggestion for the rest of the part....00:08:749 - ... and so on.
2. 00:15:094 - i feel kind of empty here, it is better to use 1/2 rhythm for playing also you followed same sound at here 00:14:389 - . so consider adding a note.
3. 01:09:384 - These consecutive whistles do not match imo. Please remove it here.

alacat wrote:

hey www

[General]

1. You must remove "drum-hitnormal" file in your folder. as you can see both diffs, you don't use this file. thou i actually used it a bit but anyway it didn't work really well, so fixed this already 0.0

[Normal]

1. Circle size +1, AR-1. It's a bit hard for this difficulty. hmm? it may be bigger circle size and set CS to 3 right? ok~~
2. 00:01:170 (1) - This spinner is really short for beginner. I recommend you to use one slider here. ok
3. 00:24:436 (1) - add a finish to the head of the slider same as your hard diff. ohhh my bad! fixed!! ;w; (u really found issues, awesome
4. 00:29:372 (4) - Design suggestion: I prefer to make curve slider here. It would look better imo also you can make a flow more naturally ok~~
   
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5. 00:51:229 (2) - About slider's repeat. If you followed the vocal at this slider, It's better to use a finish instead of a whistle. yyyyyeahhhhhh u r right!!! u really understand my hs works! ;w;
6. 00:55:459 (1,1) - I don't agree the stack in the easiest diff. You should consider remaking this part. Fix this one, so it prevents the player from misreading. fixed
7. 01:08:150 (5) - I feel kind of empty here 01:07:797 - .because you followed this sound at previous part 01:03:919 (1,2) - . So Please try to make this of course, fixed
   
8. 01:13:966 (5) - I think you don't need to follow this slider. It seems a bit hard to me for this difficulty. So you should consider removing it. ok, i'm bad at low diff's mapping ;w; changed these two sliders to one note here
9. 01:19:431 (5) - Same as above. ^

[Hard]

1. 00:03:109 - add a whistle same as here 00:04:519 - You should be able to apply my suggestion for the rest of the part....00:08:749 - ... and so on. all fixed
2. 00:15:094 - i feel kind of empty here, it is better to use 1/2 rhythm for playing also you followed same sound at here 00:14:389 - . so consider adding a note.
3. 01:09:384 - These consecutive whistles do not match imo. Please remove it here. u mean the whistle at 01:09:560 (1) - right? removed, and 01:20:841 (1) - 's as well 0.0

This map needs more works tbh. So please get some mods around 2~3. i hope your map will be fine at that time. and whenever you're ready, Call me back for recheck. thank u very much alacat!!! OVQ