Behonkiss wrote:

Lower your sample volume by about 2 notches. It's pretty loud compared to the song.

Easy:
The beginning section (from 00:01:082 to 00:09:018) should really be broken up into separate combos after each short break.
00:09:739 (1): Should be a lot closer to the previous hitcircle. Fixed
00:25:972 (1,2,3): Easy difficulties shouldn't have hitcircles coming in quick streams like this. Get rid of 2.Fixed
00:54:109 (1,2,3): Same here.Fixed
00:55:191 (4): Seems weird that you'd use Linear curves for this and Bezier for the rest. Change this one or make some others more like it.Fixed
01:18:999 (7): Would look a lot better if you made it symmetrical.Fixed
01:30:903 (1,2,3): Again, remove 2.Fixed

Normal:
Linear curves are fine on this since the other sliders are just straight lines.
The notes in this aren't snapped properly on the timeline. Resnap them all then go over the whole thing to make sure they have the right timing.
00:50:802 (10): New combo.Fixed
00:56:574 (5): Make this face the other way horizontally, it looks confusing when it overlaps previous hitcircles.Fixed
01:07:395 (7): Same here.Fixed
01:12:085 (6): Again.Fixed
01:25:432 (7): Yet again.Fixed

Hard:
Change the slider tick rate to 1. It fits the slow pace of the song better.Fixed

SOGASOGAMO wrote:

粗略提几个建议@_@
首先是hard
00:10:24 (2,3) - 这个我建议2向后拉一格到蓝线23组成1/4拍连打，我觉得这样的节奏比较好听，如果觉得合适的话就把后面的这个节奏都改下吧，不合适就54好了XD
xd 這都是基神的問題啊
normal:offset lol 了，可以参考下easy的offset,off调好后请点timing-resnap all note。嘛，间距变化最好new note
01:11:35 (4,5) - 这个间距太orz了
01:23:26 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 既然是两个两个一组可以吧new note成1,2,1,2,1,2不然这个间距会很囧
easy:请试试这个音效的下法

osu_CN_yaya wrote:

Easy
怎么offset是0？改成361。 ok -o- 俺記得以前不是0呀

Normal
00:40:76 (8,9,10) - 这里间距差太大。细心一点

easy和normal，音量都改为3或者4.完全没有音量是不允许的，而且他手弹的有误差，不是每个音都卡在拍上的。一定要开音量。hitsound不要每个note都加上whistle，根据背景音乐来定。
音乐非常柔，最好不用直slider，会显得谱很刚，用bezier，又好看又舒服。重新修改過bez了-0-

Hard
我感觉不合。曲子很柔，slider速度太快，overall高了。为什么不消掉slider的声音？
slider速度最快1.0就好。overall 6。而且挺多note都Off的~~可能是bpm有误，或者是手弹的时候有误差。
嗯 slider變1.0重新做了次
钢琴曲是osu里最难做的。很少有人做的。呵呵。如果有什么问题可以pm我。

xxheroxx wrote:

Mod Infos:

Green: Suggestions.
Orange: I think you should fix this.
Red: You must fix this.

Start Suggestions:

Set preview point in all diffs.
Offset = 380
Add kiai?

[Easy]

00:09:001 (4,1) - Spacing. Is this jump necessary? This is an Easy D:
00:41:050 (3) - New combo
00:50:088 (3) - ^
00:58:081 (4) - ^
01:10:036 (3) - ^
01:18:029 (6,1) - Spacing
01:22:062 (2,3) - ^ (new combo on (3))
01:27:067 (4) - ^
01:34:017 (4) - New combo

[Normal]

00:31:038 (7) - New combo
01:30:090 (6) - ^

[Hard]

Overall difficulty: up (4-5 ticks)

Starred~