Joe Hisaishi - Tenki Wa No Warutsu · forum

steinsgate

Joined March 2009

Topic Starter

steinsgate 2009-09-20T16:35:50+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2010年1月9日 at 6:14:34

Artist: Joe Hisaishi
Title: Tenki Wa No Warutsu
Source: Yinnaka Tetsudou No Yoru
Tags: Joe Hisaishi Piano
BPM: 83.16
Filesize: 3683kb
Play Time: 01:34
Difficulties Available:

Easy (0.71 stars, 53 notes)
Hard (4.68 stars, 204 notes)
Normal (2.95 stars, 131 notes)

Download: Joe Hisaishi - Tenki Wa No Warutsu
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Hi guys. This is my first map, a light song played by piano, wish you like it.
Many thanks to
himydanny
Behonkiss
SOGASOGAMO
Crazy Jay
yaya
xiAo_H
xxheroxx

Last edited by steinsgate 2010-01-08T22:18:48+00:00, edited 34 times in total.

Behon

Elite Mapper

1,380 posts

Here since the beginning

Behon 2009-09-20T18:57:33+00:00

Lower your sample volume by about 2 notches. It's pretty loud compared to the song.

Easy:
The beginning section (from 00:01:082 to 00:09:018) should really be broken up into separate combos after each short break.
00:09:739 (1): Should be a lot closer to the previous hitcircle.
00:25:972 (1,2,3): Easy difficulties shouldn't have hitcircles coming in quick streams like this. Get rid of 2.
00:54:109 (1,2,3): Same here.
00:55:191 (4): Seems weird that you'd use Linear curves for this and Bezier for the rest. Change this one or make some others more like it.
01:18:999 (7): Would look a lot better if you made it symmetrical.
01:30:903 (1,2,3): Again, remove 2.

Normal:
Linear curves are fine on this since the other sliders are just straight lines.
The notes in this aren't snapped properly on the timeline. Resnap them all then go over the whole thing to make sure they have the right timing.
00:50:802 (10): New combo.
00:56:574 (5): Make this face the other way horizontally, it looks confusing when it overlaps previous hitcircles.
01:07:395 (7): Same here.
01:12:085 (6): Again.
01:25:432 (7): Yet again.

Hard:
Change the slider tick rate to 1. It fits the slow pace of the song better.

excliber_old

10 posts

Joined July 2009

excliber_old 2009-09-21T14:33:13+00:00

hmmmmmmmmmmm……not bad……

madog

21 posts

Joined February 2009

madog 2009-09-21T16:38:24+00:00

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

steinsgate

16 posts

Joined March 2009

Topic Starter

steinsgate 2009-09-22T02:44:14+00:00

Behonkiss wrote:
Lower your sample volume by about 2 notches. It's pretty loud compared to the song.

Easy:
The beginning section (from 00:01:082 to 00:09:018) should really be broken up into separate combos after each short break.
00:09:739 (1): Should be a lot closer to the previous hitcircle. Fixed
00:25:972 (1,2,3): Easy difficulties shouldn't have hitcircles coming in quick streams like this. Get rid of 2.Fixed
00:54:109 (1,2,3): Same here.Fixed
00:55:191 (4): Seems weird that you'd use Linear curves for this and Bezier for the rest. Change this one or make some others more like it.Fixed
01:18:999 (7): Would look a lot better if you made it symmetrical.Fixed
01:30:903 (1,2,3): Again, remove 2.Fixed

Normal:
Linear curves are fine on this since the other sliders are just straight lines.
The notes in this aren't snapped properly on the timeline. Resnap them all then go over the whole thing to make sure they have the right timing.
00:50:802 (10): New combo.Fixed
00:56:574 (5): Make this face the other way horizontally, it looks confusing when it overlaps previous hitcircles.Fixed
01:07:395 (7): Same here.Fixed
01:12:085 (6): Again.Fixed
01:25:432 (7): Yet again.Fixed

Hard:
Change the slider tick rate to 1. It fits the slow pace of the song better.Fixed

ww Hard is himysama to make. I tell him to alter

thx Behonkiss -33-

thx excliber madog giveme star ^^

Furawa

554 posts

Joined April 2009

Furawa 2009-09-22T05:53:05+00:00

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Download: Joe Hisaishi - Tenki Wa No Warutsu (akatsukl) [Easy].osu

steinsgate

16 posts

Joined March 2009

Topic Starter

steinsgate 2009-09-22T15:37:41+00:00

SOGASOGAMO wrote:
粗略提几个建议@_@
首先是hard
00:10:24 (2,3) - 这个我建议2向后拉一格到蓝线23组成1/4拍连打，我觉得这样的节奏比较好听，如果觉得合适的话就把后面的这个节奏都改下吧，不合适就54好了XD
xd 這都是基神的問題啊
normal:offset lol 了，可以参考下easy的offset,off调好后请点timing-resnap all note。嘛，间距变化最好new note
01:11:35 (4,5) - 这个间距太orz了
01:23:26 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 既然是两个两个一组可以吧new note成1,2,1,2,1,2不然这个间距会很囧
easy:请试试这个音效的下法

上面都有修改-o- 音效E和N我還是沒音效不知道效果好不好

sm000001

37 posts

Joined May 2009

sm000001 2009-09-22T16:15:17+00:00

star=.=/

PicoLo

188 posts

Joined July 2009

PicoLo 2009-09-22T19:54:51+00:00

~Star.

Fleur-de-lis

10 posts

Joined June 2009

Fleur-de-lis 2009-09-23T02:45:09+00:00

~Star good music

nomadop

36 posts

Joined February 2009

nomadop 2009-09-25T12:47:18+00:00

star XD

Ana_Coppola

100 posts

Joined March 2009

Ana_Coppola 2009-09-25T12:54:28+00:00

star for light music~~

Kagiyama Hina_old

1 post

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Kagiyama Hina_old 2009-09-25T12:54:30+00:00

star

Saturn_old

10 posts

Joined July 2008

Saturn_old 2009-09-25T13:12:48+00:00

★

teEth_old

1 post

Joined March 2009

teEth_old 2009-09-25T13:22:15+00:00

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

misa_old

52 posts

Joined April 2009

misa_old 2009-09-26T05:30:06+00:00

wwww
i go try this map now XD~

xierbaliti

osu! Alumni

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Joined August 2008

xierbaliti 2009-09-26T07:41:09+00:00

good map

star

w2306011

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Joined January 2009

w2306011 2009-09-26T08:00:17+00:00

Frank7654321

42 posts

Joined August 2008

Frank7654321 2009-09-26T09:39:30+00:00

star for good music.hope you make more good maps.

lunarchild

348 posts

Joined March 2009

lunarchild 2009-09-26T09:47:11+00:00

i love this

chy_old

10 posts

Joined June 2008

chy_old 2009-09-29T15:12:18+00:00

seems good,, I like it

Crazy Jay

482 posts

Joined October 2008

Crazy Jay 2009-10-17T12:45:30+00:00

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Ex Boy

191 posts

Joined March 2009

Ex Boy 2009-10-20T11:08:26+00:00

star for you XD

Lisa

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Joined July 2009

Lisa 2009-10-20T11:13:26+00:00

Star<3

yaya

osu! Alumni

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Joined November 2008

yaya 2009-10-27T19:29:56+00:00

Easy
怎么offset是0？改成361。

Normal
00:40:76 (8,9,10) - 这里间距差太大。细心一点

easy和normal，音量都改为3或者4.完全没有音量是不允许的，而且他手弹的有误差，不是每个音都卡在拍上的。一定要开音量。hitsound不要每个note都加上whistle，根据背景音乐来定。
音乐非常柔，最好不用直slider，会显得谱很刚，用bezier，又好看又舒服。

Hard
我感觉不合。曲子很柔，slider速度太快，overall高了。为什么不消掉slider的声音？
slider速度最快1.0就好。overall 6。而且挺多note都Off的~~可能是bpm有误，或者是手弹的时候有误差。

钢琴曲是osu里最难做的。很少有人做的。呵呵。如果有什么问题可以pm我。

Utsuho

25 posts

Joined May 2009

Utsuho 2009-10-28T19:13:22+00:00

star

steinsgate

16 posts

Joined March 2009

Topic Starter

steinsgate 2009-10-30T08:51:22+00:00

osu_CN_yaya wrote:
Easy
怎么offset是0？改成361。 ok -o- 俺記得以前不是0呀

Normal
00:40:76 (8,9,10) - 这里间距差太大。细心一点

easy和normal，音量都改为3或者4.完全没有音量是不允许的，而且他手弹的有误差，不是每个音都卡在拍上的。一定要开音量。hitsound不要每个note都加上whistle，根据背景音乐来定。
音乐非常柔，最好不用直slider，会显得谱很刚，用bezier，又好看又舒服。重新修改過bez了-0-

Hard
我感觉不合。曲子很柔，slider速度太快，overall高了。为什么不消掉slider的声音？
slider速度最快1.0就好。overall 6。而且挺多note都Off的~~可能是bpm有误，或者是手弹的时候有误差。
嗯 slider變1.0重新做了次
钢琴曲是osu里最难做的。很少有人做的。呵呵。如果有什么问题可以pm我。

感謝yaya指導 T-T 受益匪淺尤其是bezier那個以前都不知道

ttker

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ttker 2009-11-02T05:18:24+00:00

star star!

HentaiTei

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HentaiTei 2009-11-02T05:26:07+00:00

kira☆!~

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