Sasaki Sayaka - Koi Saku Mirai · forum

Kinomi

Joined August 2012

Topic Starter

Kinomi 2014-01-16T13:12:10+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2014年5月23日 at 13:16:07

Artist: Sasaki Sayaka
Title: Koi Saku Mirai
Source: 恋がさくころ桜どき
Tags: Koi ga Saku Koro Sakura Doki ぱれっと palette galgame visual novel eroge baldrace Fycho [Minakami Yuki] 615915887 ZZHBOY Yoshino-Sakura
BPM: 168
Filesize: 10595kb
Play Time: 01:59
Difficulties Available:

Fycho's Insane (5 stars, 458 notes)
Insane (5 stars, 495 notes)
Sakura's Easy (3.04 stars, 125 notes)
Yuki's Hard (4.88 stars, 278 notes)
ZZH's Normal (4.27 stars, 167 notes)

Download: Sasaki Sayaka - Koi Saku Mirai
Download: Sasaki Sayaka - Koi Saku Mirai (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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本来想放个冷笑话，后来忘记放了。Insane是电钻图
#6 ranked map 恋がさくころ桜どき OP
Gamu's version

by me

by Fycho

by [Minakami Yuki]

by 615915887

by ZZHBOY

thanks all modders

Hollow Wings
AllStar12
IamKwaN
Xinely
Tari
kamisamaaa
smallboat
Zero__wind
Kenterz9
moonlightleaf
Atrue
Sellenite
BeatofIke
captin1

Last edited by Kinomi 2014-05-24T04:55:18+00:00, edited 38 times in total.

Nepu

211 posts

Joined September 2013

Nepu 2014-01-16T13:45:30+00:00

房顶小天使

sammy711

207 posts

Joined November 2012

sammy711 2014-01-17T07:45:28+00:00

飞球我爱你

Laurier

1,785 posts

Joined February 2011

Laurier 2014-01-17T14:25:38+00:00

go

Hollow Wings

1,514 posts

Joined July 2010

Hollow Wings 2014-01-24T04:50:58+00:00

as ur req
already has +9 sp without any mod huehue

Fycho's Insane

00:12:433 存在感那么强的vocal都放过么
00:23:594 (4,5,6,7,1) - 直线？
01:17:880 (6,7,8,9,1) - ds。。。

Insane

00:18:059 (6,7) - 再多叠一点
00:20:916 (9) - 反向
01:11:808 (2) - 果然还是nc
01:28:505 (2,1) - 跳太远了，稍微近点
01:36:808 (1) - 反向

Yuki's Hard

开始那些1/2obj之间就叠那么点看着感觉很蛋疼

ZZH's Normal

vocal跟太多，note+slider的一些梗可以考虑改成折返，normal里建议不要放太多单点

615's Easy

00:41:809 (2,4) - stack
01:10:023到01:11:094塞个转盘呗

你湊sp，我来骗kd
good luck

Kinomi

1,222 posts

Joined August 2012

Topic Starter

Kinomi 2014-01-24T14:18:00+00:00

Hollow Wings wrote:
Insane
00:18:059 (6,7) - 再多叠一点好
00:20:916 (9) - 反向不好，这边试了好多次，感觉还是这样摆舒服
01:11:808 (2) - 果然还是nc 好
01:28:505 (2,1) - 跳太远了，稍微近点我感觉不远啊
01:36:808 (1) - 反向好

TAIN

168 posts

Joined January 2012

TAIN 2014-01-25T05:21:48+00:00

Hi !

I am a newbie modding.

You can ignore my suggestion.

615's Easy

00:03:952 (1,1,2,1,1) - Think of a different pattern.

01:09:666 (3) - Add spinner recommended.

GL!

AllStar12

488 posts

Joined January 2013

AllStar12 2014-01-25T11:06:45+00:00

M4M here! Lets see here:
Note:
• Have the Grid Snap disabled in order to do these re-positioning and fixes
• Not sure if the changes I made actually affects the hitsounds, if it does then remember where you placed those hitsounds

[General]

Not sure if it's a problem but the offsets are different for 615's Easy and Yuki's Hard:
Creator, Fycho and ZZH's offset: 2523

615 and Yuki's offset: 3952
Don't think the inherited warnings matters (unless it's talking about the offset) but there are warnings for the song setup so I suggest copy the creator's song setup info (However, you missed out tagging ZZHBOY as well so just copy and paste the info provided below):
Artist: 佐咲紗花
Romanised Artist: Sasaki Sayaka
Title: 恋さくミライ
Romanised Title: Koi Saku Mirai
Source: 恋がさくころ桜どき
Tags: Koi ga Saku Koro Sakura Doki ぱれっと palette galgame visual novel eroge baldrace Fycho [Minakami Yuki] 615915887 ZZHBOY
01:52:522 (1) - The creator(Tsukuyomi) and ZZH's spinner time at then end end at a different time from Yuki, 615 and Fycho's difficulties, suggest choosing a specific time for everyone to end at:
Tsukuyomi's spinner time ends at: 01:56:808
ZZHBOY's spinner time ends at: 01:59:844
Fycho's spinner time ends at: 01:59:665
615915887 and Minakami Yuki's spinner time ends at: 01:59:666 - (I don't know why it's like that, maybe it's because of the offset?)

[615's Easy]

00:35:023 (4) - Missing clap?
00:35:380 (1) - Missing clap on tail
01:16:809 (3) - Missing clap on tail
01:39:666 (3) - Have a whistle on the slider's tail? See if you like it
01:42:523 (3) - Have a whistle on the slider's tail?

Suggestions and Ideas
Add a note at 01:46:809 ?

Test play for 615's Easy Difficulty
Result
Comments: Appropriate slider velocity, HD, CS, AR, OD, flow and distance snap. Doesn't seem to have any major issues in this difficulty. Just issues about the hitsounds and I believe it should be good to go. Sorry if used mod, it was slow for me
╮(￣▽￣")╭
Actual level of difficulty that this can be under : Easy ~ Normal (2%)

[ZZH's Normal]

Your NC seems to be bit inconsistent
For the inherited points that contained the volume of 100%, recommend lowering it or at least equal to 85%.
00:03:951 (2,3) - Distance snap between is 1.14x
00:15:380 (1) - Add finish here?
00:36:987 (4) - Add finish on the slider's head since there's a cymbal sound here.
01:35:380 (1) - Extend the slider to 01:38:237
01:38:415 - Insert break time here?

Suggestions and Ideas
Add a note at 01:46:809 ?

Test play for ZZH's Normal Difficulty
Result
Comments: Appropriate slider velocity, HD, CS, AR, OD, flow and distance snap. Doesn't seem to have any major issues in this difficulty. Just a few issues and I believe it should be good to go, maybe recheck your claps and whistle. Sorry if used mod, it was slow for me. Orz
Actual level of difficulty that this can be under : Normal ~ Hard (2%~)

[Yuki's Hard]

00:15:380 (1) - End the spinner at 00:18:237
00:50:559 (3) - Not sure if it was intentional but this slider's head has the sampleset to normal. Was just wondering
00:59:309 (3) - Same here as well
01:45:916 (3) - add a Finish?
01:46:094 (4) - add a Finish on the head?

Going to edit this the next day, was getting late for me (5:52 AM) Orz

Suggestions and Ideas

None

Test play for Yuki's Hard Difficulty
Result
1st Attempt:

2nd Attempt:
Comments: Appropriate slider velocity, HD, CS, AR, OD, flow and distance snap. Didn't seem to spot any issues during my testplay. Actually do like the patterns, shapes and the style you implemented into this difficulty as well. The hitsounds seem to be prefect here so not much of a problem out of that. Sorry if used mod here as well, the AR was a bit slow for me (Was very fun using the Hard Rock mod though haha). ( ; ՞ਊ ՞ )
Actual level of difficulty that this can be under : Hard ~ Insane(5%~)

[Fycho's Insane]

For the inherited points that contained the volume of 100%, recommend lowering it or at least equal to 85%.

Suggestions and Ideas

None

Test play for Fycho's Insane Difficulty
Result
1st Attempt:

2nd Attempt:

3rd Attempt:
Comments: Not really going to touch this because I enjoyed the way it really is as of now and during my testplay. I don't really want to try any unnecessary false accusation on this difficulty. I just got misses due to my own mistakes. Everything seems to be fine for me but I suggested on turning it down the volume a bit for the kiai time. Overall, I liked it ^^
Actual level of difficulty that this can be under : Insane ~ Expert

[Insane]

I believe there's two unsnapped notes in this difficulty (believe you have to stretch them out again:
• 01:23:594 (1) -
• 01:23:772 (2) -
00:26:094 (3) - Finish on the slider's head?
00:32:523 (1) - Missing clap on the slider's head
01:28:505 (2) - Remove clap on the slider's head?
01:29:487 (3) - Remove clap on the slider's head?

Suggestions and Ideas
00:20:201 (3,4,5,6,7) - If you want, try out the blanket shown here?
Picture and coordinates

• 00:20:291 (4) - x: 164 y: 270
• 00:20:380 (5) - x: 126 y: 283
• 00:20:469 (6) - x: 86 y: 283
• 00:20:559 (7) - x: 47 y: 269

Test play for Insane Difficulty
Result
1st Attempt:

2nd Attempt:
Comments: Not really going to touch this as well because I enjoyed the way it really is as of now and during my testplay. I don't really want to try any unnecessary false accusation on this difficulty. I just got misses due to my own mistakes here as well. Everything seems to be fine for me, just issues with the unsnapped sliders and hitsounds and it's good (for me). Overall, I liked it ^^
Actual level of difficulty that this can be under : Insane ~ Expert

If you have any complaints, questions, comments, etc. or found any errors in my work, ✉ in-game or on the osu website!

(ﾉ´ヮ´)ﾉ*:･ﾟ✧❀ Wish you best of luck!~ ❀

★

IamKwaN

osu! Alumni

3,905 posts

Joined August 2012

IamKwaN 2014-01-26T07:04:04+00:00

Hi, m4m耶~

[General]

BG的Size是1024*728,找個1024*768的吧
ZZH的Normal跟其他難度的Tags, Source和Unicode title+artist不一致
有些難度的Letterbox during breaks跟Offset不一樣

[Insane]

00:10:737 (1,2) - 這裡的spacing會不會太遠,還不是Kiai Time
00:18:059 (6,7) - 這個flow感覺很奇怪
00:21:094 (1) - 個人感覺沒必要1.5x SV, 整段音樂都只是過渡段
00:45:915 (2,3) - Spacing真的大丈夫?
01:29:487 (3) - 這個轉SV可以有

[飛球的Insane]

完美

[Yuki的Hard]

00:03:952 - 00:13:951 - 這裡的spacing嘗試1.25x, 感覺沒接觸的circle跟slider更美觀
00:15:380 (1) - spinner延長到00:18:237, 跟音樂感覺更有活力
00:26:809 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 音效太輕,跟鼓聲不配合,沒啥打擊感
00:29:666 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 這段的圓圈很難打,感覺不知道跟著甚麼來打,又不是歌詞
00:32:523 (1,2,3,4) - 老實說我不喜歡這種類似的排列,很沉悶,可以加多點創意嗎
00:38:237 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ^
00:43:951 (1,2,3,4) - 明顯的copy and paste
00:45:380 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - 這段只是跟前面這段 00:33:951 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) copy and paste對吧
kiai的排列跟前面的好像沒啥分別,還是不斷的轉,感覺不到高潮,建議重新排一下,節奏倒是沒問題

[ZZH的Normal]

最主要就是slider扭得不好,可能是我的個人看法;另外就是這normal難度有點高,01:35:022 (3) 這類型的slider太多,新手打得有點苦逼
01:15:915 (2) - 嘗試copy 01:16:630 (3)? 柑橘更美觀,如果是我,一樣的slider我會選擇複製
01:27:344 (4,1) - 01:28:058 (1) 放在(384,12)更符合flow
01:52:522 (1) - 在01:59:665 完結, 01:59:844的只是回音

[615的Easy]

00:36:094 (2) - 尾node的位置:(248,208)
00:57:523 (4) - 我會將這slider的頭跟00:56:630 (3) 的尾巴成一直線
01:19:666 (3) - 這滑條捕捉不到01:20:023 的鼓點,然後看前面的風格也不是跟歌詞的mapping,所以我會建議這樣放:
SPOILER
01:28:237 - 這裡的rhythm有點奇怪,我建議這樣
SPOILER
01:49:666 (1) - 在01:52:166 完結,然後01:52:701 (1) 開01:52:523 開始; 如果按照現在的位置的話,那就比normal還要困難了

Good luck~~

ZZHBOY

1,649 posts

Joined April 2012

ZZHBOY 2014-01-26T08:53:15+00:00

Hollow Wings wrote:
ZZH's Normal
vocal跟太多，note+slider的一些梗可以考虑改成折返，normal里建议不要放太多单点为难跟vocal爽啊.-.

AllStar12 wrote:
[ZZH's Normal]
Your NC seems to be bit inconsistent
For the inherited points that contained the volume of 100%, recommend lowering it or at least equal to 85%.
00:03:951 (2,3) - Distance snap between is 1.14xfixed
00:15:380 (1) - Add finish here?nope.it's end with vocal disappearing
00:36:987 (4) - Add finish on the slider's head since there's a cymbal sound here.i added Normal Hitsound here
01:35:380 (1) - Extend the slider to 01:38:237 just like before
01:38:415 - Insert break time here?done

Suggestions and Ideas
Add a note at 01:46:809 ?done

Test play for ZZH's Normal Difficulty
Result
Comments: Appropriate slider velocity, HD, CS, AR, OD, flow and distance snap. Doesn't seem to have any major issues in this difficulty. Just a few issues and I believe it should be good to go, maybe recheck your claps and whistle. Sorry if used mod, it was slow for me. Orz
Actual level of difficulty that this can be under : Normal ~ Hard (2%~)

IamKwaN wrote:
[ZZH的Normal]
最主要就是slider扭得不好,可能是我的個人看法;另外就是這normal難度有點高,01:35:022 (3) 這類型的slider太多,新手打得有點苦逼双号码
01:15:915 (2) - 嘗試copy 01:16:630 (3)? 柑橘更美觀,如果是我,一樣的slider我會選擇複製你书的对
01:27:344 (4,1) - 01:28:058 (1) 放在(384,12)更符合flowdone
01:52:522 (1) - 在01:59:665 完結, 01:59:844的只是回音
h'

记得搞好歌曲信息

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: .mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 71630
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 39129
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Koi Saku Mirai
TitleUnicode:恋さくミライ
Artist:Sasaki Sayaka
ArtistUnicode:佐咲紗花
Creator:Tsukuyomi
Version:ZZH's Normal
Source:恋がさくころ桜どき
Tags:Koi ga Saku Koro Sakura Doki ぱれっと palette galgame visual novel eroge baldrace Fycho [Minakami Yuki] 615915887 ZZHBOY
BeatmapID:359196
BeatmapSetID:143050

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
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0,0,"BG.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
2,18437,25608
2,98258,99536
2,107008,108465
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
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Koiyuki

2,531 posts

Joined March 2013

Koiyuki 2014-01-26T09:05:51+00:00

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AllStar12 wrote:
[Yuki's Hard]
00:15:380 (1) - End the spinner at 00:18:237 nope, the spin follows the vocal
00:50:559 (3) - Not sure if it was intentional but this slider's head has the sampleset to normal. Was just wondering because it fits and soft clap doesn't fit here
00:59:309 (3) - Same here as well softclap instead
01:45:916 (3) - add a Finish? ok
01:46:094 (4) - add a Finish on the head? ok

Comments: Appropriate slider velocity, HD, CS, AR, OD, flow and distance snap. Didn't seem to spot any issues during my testplay. Actually do like the patterns, shapes and the style you implemented into this difficulty as well. The hitsounds seem to be prefect here so not much of a problem out of that. Sorry if used mod here as well, the AR was a bit slow for me (Was very fun using the Hard Rock mod though haha). ( ; ՞ਊ ՞ ) haha considering to use ar8 .-.
Actual level of difficulty that this can be under : ~ Insane(5%~)

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IamKwaN wrote:
[Yuki的Hard]
00:03:952 - 00:13:951 - 這裡的spacing嘗試1.25x, 感覺沒接觸的circle跟slider更美觀懒得改了不然又要动一次排版真是美丽
00:15:380 (1) - spinner延長到00:18:237, 跟音樂感覺更有活力我觉得跟vocal不错
00:26:809 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 音效太輕,跟鼓聲不配合,沒啥打擊感背景就是鼓音谢谢
00:29:666 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 這段的圓圈很難打,感覺不知道跟著甚麼來打,又不是歌詞跟钢琴而已，而且改了又和前面一样
00:32:523 (1,2,3,4) - 老實說我不喜歡這種類似的排列,很沉悶,可以加多點創意嗎 nope
00:38:237 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ^ nope
00:43:951 (1,2,3,4) - 明顯的copy and paste 对
00:45:380 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - 這段只是跟前面這段 00:33:951 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) copy and paste對吧对
kiai的排列跟前面的好像沒啥分別,還是不斷的轉,感覺不到高潮,建議重新排一下,節奏倒是沒問題
虽然我一个都没改，只能说看的角度不一样
Hard不断的转的确是copy and paste，但每个的角度都是72°（一周360°的五分之一），结合一下歌名和这个gal的名字：《恋爱绽放樱飞时》（恋がさくころ桜どき）和樱花的形状，其实这些旋转都是专用梗，我其实是想给人一种樱花在绽放的感觉

thanks for modding~
code:

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osu file format v12

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Title:Koi Saku Mirai
TitleUnicode:恋さくミライ
Artist:Sasaki Sayaka
ArtistUnicode:佐咲紗花
Creator:Tsukuyomi
Version:Yuki's Hard
Source:恋がさくころ桜どき
Tags:Koi ga Saku Koro Sakura Doki ぱれっと palette galgame visual novel eroge baldrace Fycho [Minakami Yuki] 615915887 ZZHBOY
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Tari

osu! Alumni

1,671 posts

Joined July 2012

Tari 2014-01-27T05:42:14+00:00

Save posts here because this isn't in my queue but I will mod it.

kamisamaaa

605 posts

Joined July 2011

kamisamaaa 2014-01-27T18:57:08+00:00

[insane]
00:11:094 (3) - 这个头加上whistle？因为这里你是跟着背景那个音的 00:10:737 (1,2,3) - 这三个是在加强的然后3的时候达到最强没道理前两个有whistle 这个反而没有额
00:15:201 (6) - 感觉这个whistle不如加到00:15:023 (5) - 上
00:22:523 (1) - 头上加一个whistle？这里是重音额
01:28:505 (2) - 这个头上那个clap感觉很违和啊虽然鼓点确实是这样子的两声了（可能是因为人声比较大然后造成的影响）建议想飞球一样吧蓝线空下来舒服得多
01:39:487 (1) - ctrl+G？
妈蛋神图没啥可摸
[飞球insane]
00:23:683 (5) - 这里没音不是五连额 00:24:219这里明明是三连。。。这段的节奏应该是3个三连+1个五连才对吧。。。而且是渐强的感觉你这么下节奏感觉有点怪
妈蛋又是一个神图没啥可摸
一个跟鼓点一个跟vocal简直碉堡

伤感别的难度先不摸了去做会图然后睡了

Tari

osu! Alumni

1,671 posts

Joined July 2012

Tari 2014-01-28T03:38:14+00:00

Hi Hi

[Easy]

00:11:094 (2) - The start of the slider should have a whistle too because the piano there is really strong. and it doesn't sound abusive because the whistles sound really nice with the song no matter how many you use hehe.
00:09:666 (3) - Not sure, but probably add a finish here? the music is strong enough here for you to add a finish to, but you can lower the volume for this finish if it sounds too loud for you.
00:23:594 (4) - This doesn't perfectly stack to the end of 00:21:808 (2) - you need to move this note to the x coordinate of 339 and I already know your trying to stack the
00:23:951 (1) - Add whistle in the start of the slider? seems a little empty without any hitsounds here and its to put some focus on the starting beat of this slider.
00:40:737 (4) - Hmm, why did you break symmetry in this pattern orz? Imo you should make sure this note is in the same y-axis as 00:40:737 (4) - basically you need to make sure this is somewhere around y: 112 so your symmetry can be kept. abd then make the following notes to keep spacing orz
00:38:237 (1) - I'm sorry, but I think you should add clap to the tick sound, some sliders sound too quiet and empty without any claps in the slider ticks. like add them here
00:55:380 (1) - For the end of the slider try to use samplset normal and additions normal? I think it sounds really nice there.
00:59:487 (2) - ^ same add it to the end of the slider here too.
01:03:951 (1) - Add whistle to the start of the slider? it sounds a little empty without it.
01:09:666 (3) - Put at the same place as 01:06:809 (1) - ? I think it flows better that way, anyways here's how it should look like : http://puu.sh/6zGax.jpg the flow from 2 to 3 is better.
01:15:380 (1) - Curve this a little bit to the left? I think it creates better flow to the next note, anyways here's how it looks like : http://puu.sh/6zGf0.jpg hehe should try it
01:22:523 (2) - Move to same location as 01:19:666 (3) - please, I think it would be better anyways to do that, it looks unclean really.
01:25:380 (2) - Whistle to the start of the slider sounds great? maybe add it
01:26:809 (1) - ^ same
01:31:094 (3) - Add a curve to the left of the slider would be better.
01:33:237 (2) - You obviously missed a finish to the end of the slider here, it's quite obvious.
01:38:237 (1) - Add a whistle to the start of the slider? it sounds much better.
01:43:951 (1) - Add Whistle?

[Normal]

00:31:094 (4,5) - I'd prefer you use a slider here because there are not much vocals or beats to focus on here, it'll much more of an hold not a click here, if there were more vocals it'll be better.
00:42:522 (3,4) - Same as above, I'd be better if you just changed this into a slider because there is not much to click here, and so a much more hold note slider fits better
00:35:737 (2,3) - I'd prefer if you stack them hehe, I don't know why but the this looks really weird from the modders aspect at least.
00:41:094 (1) - Whistle to the start seems to sound great here,
00:48:951 (5,6) - Your making it to complicated, can you just use two circles here? instead of this 1/4th rhythm because there nothing to show in the red tick there, seems little overmapped.
00:55:915 (2) - Move back to the white tick and add a reverse? There is still a vocal at the white tick hehe and you skipped it.
01:04:665 (2,3,4) - Revise the rhythm, because it feels weird to click some of these notes , how about this : http://puu.sh/6zJD1.jpg Seems to get all the nice beats.
01:25:022 (5) - At the end of the slider add a whistle or a finish. feels yet again empty without it.
01:34:487 (2) - Add a wistle to the start of the slider please.
Not a problem, but I'm really wary of some of the rhythms at this diff, but it shouldn't be a problem since this is a normal diff.

[Hard]

00:05:380 (1) - So weird, but I prefer you reduce the slider to the white tick and then add a note there, it would better match with this rhythm here : 00:08:059 (1,2,3) - orz
00:08:773 (3) - Add a whistle to the start? sounds so empty without whistles orz
00:15:380 (1) - Whistle to the spinner at least, and maybe extend it to the white tick that beat in the white tick is stronger than the beat that you ended the slider here.
00:33:594 (4,1) - If you Ctrl+G both sliders here you can notice they can't perfectly stack, you need to move the end point in slider 4 to x 316 and that'll fix your problem.
00:34:844 (3) - Looks less overlap and more cleaner if you do this : http://puu.sh/6AQAT.jpg and there still this nice even-out space between the slider here and the slider at 00:33:951 (1) -
00:36:987 (2,3) - Can you move this to the right more? I feel there should be a jump to the next slider after these two, it helps lead to the more exicting part and matches with the jumpier parts and signals it. http://puu.sh/6AQML.jpg
00:56:094 (3,4) - Curve the slider more here? and try to make patterns like this here : http://puu.sh/6AQXa.jpg You do so much straight sliders, so little curve won't hurt you
00:56:809 (1) - Hey, you should remove the new combo here because the next note is hard to read and I feel to make it more readable it would be better to make the next note a new combo, so remove the new combo here and add it at 00:57:344 (2) - , so many reverses aren't the best thing to do.
01:01:094 (1) - Not big problem, but can you put it at the same place as 00:59:487 (1) - I see another overlap there orz and I don't think it looks nice as is.
01:00:023 (2) - As I said above, there too much straight slider in diff, can you add some variation :3? Change sliders so they curve a little bit would be better like this : http://puu.sh/6AR9J.jpg
01:03:416 (2) - Should increase spacing here, because jump to this note won't be that hard because of the slider leniency and the long amount of hold but short cursor movement. try this pattern : http://puu.sh/6ARil.jpg
01:19:666 (1) - For the start of the slider : Change the additions in the left screen to Normal : http://puu.sh/6ARry.jpg and add a finsh to the start of the slider, it sounds great like that.
01:18:594 (1) - Minor issue, but this definitely needs to be stacked with 01:16:809 (1) - it ruins the blanketing because they need to be blanketed the same way.

[Fycho]

00:12:165 (4) - Hmm, maybe move the note like this : http://puu.sh/6AS8K.jpg and add an extra note too, seems little more challenging for a insane and more balanced
00:33:415 (3,4) - ? I think it's suppose to blanket here orz, maybe you can try to make it blanket here? and try to move 4 so it can blanket slider 2 in this combo, like this : http://puu.sh/6ASnb.jpg
00:53:415 (4,1,2) - To match with the previous here 00:50:915 (1,1) - you need to add a new combo at 00:53:415 (4) - and 00:54:308 (2) -
00:57:701 (4) - The stacking isn't correct, the note here needs to be stacked with the slider end 00:56:630 (1) - perfectly.
00:58:951 (3,4) - I'd prefer if you remove the note at 4 and reverse the previous slider, feels more uptight and blending with the jump, since your focus is the jump
01:19:308 (3) - Try to make it so this notes, get blanketed, personally I'd like you to revise this whole triangle here 01:19:130 (2,3,4) - , you'll still keep about the same direction movement, just a little more nicer, how about try this : http://puu.sh/6ASOv.jpg
01:27:344 (2) - Maybe since you have the midpoint here you can move it up more so it creates a curve up? or else I think the midpoint in the slider is pretty useless. like this : http://puu.sh/6ASU9.jpg

[Insane]

00:22:166 (6) - Why don't you change this slider by copying the previous slider 00:21:809 (5) - ? Not big deal. but find this little odd since that'll make the map little make consistent, and the makes slider less stick out.
00:28:594 (2) - So much juuumpinggg, better to try less back and forth movement and form a triangular cursor movement like this : http://puu.sh/6AVgQ.jpg
00:45:915 (2,3) - I don't think this jump is possible LOL, I know you are trying to make blanket better that's why too much distance before the note that It'll really not even playable lol. so as this 00:46:272 (4) - omg
01:05:201 (7) - Maybe move ti to here? http://puu.sh/6AVyV.jpg would be better orz.
01:05:380 (1) - Add a whistle to the start of this slider sounds nice?
00:11:094 (3) - Same whistle to the start sounds nice.
00:16:094 (4) - Whistle to the end here
00:16:809 (8) - ^ same add whistle.
00:17:523 (4) - ^ same add whistle.
00:18:773 (3) - To the end of the slider here
00:19:487 (6) - Remove whistle from start and add to end instead.
00:21:809 (5) - ^ I think you know where to add them now orz.
01:19:665 (1,2) - The jump to the next note would be better if you did this : http://puu.sh/6AW2A.jpg since you are trying to not emphasize the movement to 2 but the note to the slider it'll give less focus on 2 and more on 3
01:23:951 (3) - Add a new combo here? it doesn't match with 01:11:808 (1,2) - and those two notes have a separate combo right before a new chorus
01:33:594 (4) - Better to make slider look like this : http://puu.sh/6AWgC.jpg

Koiyuki

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Joined March 2013

Koiyuki 2014-01-28T18:29:56+00:00

Tari wrote:
[Hard]

00:05:380 (1) - So weird, but I prefer you reduce the slider to the white tick and then add a note there, it would better match with this rhythm here : 00:08:059 (1,2,3) - orz
00:08:773 (3) - Add a whistle to the start? sounds so empty without whistles orz
00:15:380 (1) - Whistle to the spinner at least, and maybe extend it to the white tick that beat in the white tick is stronger than the beat that you ended the slider here. the spin follows the vocal
00:33:594 (4,1) - If you Ctrl+G both sliders here you can notice they can't perfectly stack, you need to move the end point in slider 4 to x 316 and that'll fix your problem.
00:34:844 (3) - Looks less overlap and more cleaner if you do this : http://puu.sh/6AQAT.jpg and there still this nice even-out space between the slider here and the slider at 00:33:951 (1) -
00:36:987 (2,3) - Can you move this to the right more? I feel there should be a jump to the next slider after these two, it helps lead to the more exicting part and matches with the jumpier parts and signals it. http://puu.sh/6AQML.jpg move a little
00:56:094 (3,4) - Curve the slider more here? and try to make patterns like this here : http://puu.sh/6AQXa.jpg You do so much straight sliders, so little curve won't hurt you
00:56:809 (1) - Hey, you should remove the new combo here because the next note is hard to read and I feel to make it more readable it would be better to make the next note a new combo, so remove the new combo here and add it at 00:57:344 (2) - , so many reverses aren't the best thing to do. let me think about it, i will check other's idea on this
01:01:094 (1) - Not big problem, but can you put it at the same place as 00:59:487 (1) - I see another overlap there orz and I don't think it looks nice as is. no overlap here if you test
01:00:023 (2) - As I said above, there too much straight slider in diff, can you add some variation :3? Change sliders so they curve a little bit would be better like this : http://puu.sh/6AR9J.jpg
01:03:416 (2) - Should increase spacing here, because jump to this note won't be that hard because of the slider leniency and the long amount of hold but short cursor movement. try this pattern : http://puu.sh/6ARil.jpg no that's not good imo
01:19:666 (1) - For the start of the slider : Change the additions in the left screen to Normal : http://puu.sh/6ARry.jpg and add a finsh to the start of the slider, it sounds great like that.
01:18:594 (1) - Minor issue, but this definitely needs to be stacked with 01:16:809 (1) - it ruins the blanketing because they need to be blanketed the same way.

=fixed
thanks for modding

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Xinely

5,014 posts

Joined April 2012

Xinely 2014-01-29T14:00:58+00:00

你好啊! M4M here

Guide

Bold = Unrankable/must be fixed
Red = consider to fix it
Black = Suggestion
Blue = Personal Taste

Easy

00:11:094 - i guess you need to add whistle on this time since the music is like crystal sound that need emphasize with whistle also for consistency with previous. (feel empty w/o hitsound too imo)
00:26:809 (1) - no need clap on head since the sound of this time only cymbal sound
00:30:380 (2) - tbh i'm not really like the flow in this slider to 00:31:094 (3) - because you did a left diagonal only. the line is same. seems like uncomfortable. try http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1290158 to keep consistency flow downward and then upward? xD
00:32:701 - for this diff i guess you need to add clap on tick of slider (00:32:880 - ). since your diff using clap on every objects. it become quite weird when the tick being silent here.
00:34:308 - same as above
00:36:094 (2) - blanket between 00:35:380 (1,2) - could be better here. tweaked the blanket i got this for reference https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1290184
00:37:880 - unnecessary greenline. remove it
00:39:666 (3) - how nazi, 1 grid left to make better symmetrical between (1) and (3)? it's make the pattern neater too imo
00:43:951 (1) - no need finish on head for this slider. hear the music. doesn't have any cymbal sound and quite relax imo
00:46:809 (1) - nazi, tail 1 grid down to make better blanket lol
00:48:951 (3,4) - imo too many of straight line of flow here make an uncomfortable movement. well try to make a little bit of curving flow here.
00:56:094 - imo sound of this time is quite low. you need to map this instead following vocal (redticks) here. so 00:55:380 (1,2,3) - try to change for simple rhythm like http://puu.sh/6Cb7O.jpg instead? tbh your Easy is little bit Hard cause 3 stars so i guess try to lower it a little too with this rhythm
01:06:809 (1,2) - remove all finishes for both heads and tails. obviously since the music is quite relax and no cymbal sounds (even vocal become a little bit strong) better to remove its imo
01:11:808 - imo the music and vocal in this time is quite low. i would like to remove whistle here and keep whistle on tail since the music is become loud on that time
01:14:665 - well will break your consistency but the music of this time is quite loud and i feel an empty here. add whistle to emphasize the music?
01:21:094 (1) - no need finish on head and tail. no cymbal sounds here.
01:22:522 - same as 01:14:665 -
01:25:380 (2) - nazi, blanket could be smoother here imo. flow a little bit better too. move the 2nd node to 120,228 for its
01:28:773 (3,4) - it will be better and easier if you change these circles become one slider here. obviously
01:31:630 - the music on this time is cymbal. you need to map this obviously, so 01:31:094 (3,4) - change them become like http://puu.sh/6Cc9r.jpg instead
01:44:666 (2) - this suppose to make blanket right? if yes blanket in here could be better imo like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1290436
01:46:808 - need to map this time. obviously because cymbal(+hard music) sound
Neat diff here

Normal

00:02:880 - unnecessary greenline here. remove it
00:04:844 (3) - hmm inconsistency spacing here. you can make a blanket with keep consistency too imo. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1290652
00:05:380 (4,5) - a little wrong rhythm here. you need to emphasize vocal of 00:05:915 - with head slider to following vocal properly, not with slider's tail so try this http://puu.sh/6CjCW.jpg instead
00:09:665 (6,1) - swap the NC please. much better since NC for 00:09:665 - to emphasize the music
00:12:344 (1) - imo you using much of red tick here. no surpise why the star rating is high. and no need to following all of vocal to map Normal diff imo so i would suggest to remove it
00:13:058 (3) - i would extend this slider to 00:13:415 - . many of 1/2 spaces aren't good for Normal diff imo so let's give a little rest with 1/1 space instead
00:14:665 - aw so noisy here. if you want to emphasize the music since the music increasing here. use 75% or 80% instead
00:15:380 (1) - add finish here. to keep consistency with Easy diff. also the music is quite loud so finish fits for this time
01:28:772 (2,3) - you can change them become slider to make easier here
01:35:380 (1) - the spin should be end in 01:38:237 - since string sound is end in this time also emphasize the piano sound
01:46:808 - same as Easy
i would say, you're following vocal too much for this diff. have many of 1/2 spaces here. imo it's little Hard since newbie still kinda confuse if see many of 1/2 spaces at the one time. and if you following vocal. follow it with properly. example 00:33:058 (2) - if following vocal should be end in 00:33:415 - . 2nd example : 00:44:487 (2) - same as previous should be end in 00:45:558 - if following vocal.
well i'm not recommended to following vocal too much here. since it's quite Hard for Normal diff. Others like placement hitsound are fine

Hard

00:05:380 (1,2) - same as Normal here. should be like http://puu.sh/6CjCW.jpg or http://puu.sh/6CpPz.jpg
00:08:058 - hmm music is increasing here. try add whistle to emphasize that music?
00:11:094 (1) - well just personal taste about rhythm. how about make rhythm like http://puu.sh/6CsRy.jpg for emphasize the vocal of red tick here?
00:12:523 (1) - nazi, flow could be better here if you try to move the tail to 492,36
00:14:666 (3) - NC this to marking there is SV changing here
00:15:380 (1) - extend the spinner to 00:18:237 - when hearing the music i prefer to end the spinner here since the string sound still appear in this time
00:26:809 - altho it's a low sound but cymbal is appear here. so use finish instead whistle clap
00:33:951 - add whistle here to emphasize the piano sound
00:34:844 (3) - imo flow could be better here. hard to explain but i prefer to change it like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1291298
00:42:523 (1) - imo for 00:42:701 - if you follow this guitar sound i guess you need to map 00:42:790 - too since they have similar sound (i feel it, kinda weird for me). but i prefer to change this slider become 1/1
00:43:951 (1) - tbh the flow isn't really good here. i prefer to ctrl+G this for natural flow but since you did a pattern from 1 until 4.. yeah just saying here
00:57:344 (2) - many of repeats isn't good to play for Hard diff. Really. http://puu.sh/6CtTQ.jpg instead
00:59:130 - i would suggest to add note here to following vocal. somehow i feel kinda empty here
01:10:201 (4) - i don't like many of repeats altho 1/4 here. so divide it become 2 like http://puu.sh/6Cu4r.jpg ?
01:13:951 - no need for finish. no cymbal sound. finish makes quite loud sound imo
01:25:201 (5) - nazi, try to move 128|50 to keep flow of 01:24:844 (3,4,5) - . yeah your flow a little bit different between them. a kinda uncomfortable for me
01:28:773 (3) - NC for marking as anti jump
01:36:630 (1,3) - dunno, but i prefer to these sliders become symmetrical each other
01:51:809 (1) - same as 01:10:201 (4) - http://puu.sh/6CuAR.jpg

Fycho's Insane

00:03:952 (1) - well tbh i feel a kinda weird when you gave a huge jump for 00:03:594 - when i heard the 00:03:951 - louder than 00:03:594 - . i guess better give a huge jump to downbeat here since loud of music. yeah just personal taste
00:08:415 (2) - vocal of 00:08:772 - is really fit with a huge jump imo so i would to make a jump here. try to tweak the 00:08:415 (2) - become like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1291420
00:18:862 (3) - aa imo it's kinda hard to read as 1/2 also this song have high bpm so 1/4 jump circle like this a little hard imo. how about use a consistency spacing with 0,9x example =w=
00:19:487 (6,1) - imo change this objects with 1/1 slider like http://puu.sh/6CvgH.jpg. it emphasize the string sound in 00:19:487 - better
00:24:844 (6) - imo this jump is quite fast and far so give NC to warning it cause a huge jump? pretty easier to read imo ~
00:37:165 (2) - personal taste, i would to move this circle to 184,212. just prefer about flow on this ~
01:01:987 (4,5,6,7) - imo flow between them isn't really good to play 01:52:612 (1) - ay so i would suggest to change flow between them. maybe like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1291471
01:09:933 (2) - same as 00:18:862 (3) -
01:32:165 (4) - ah yeah kinda nazi but i guess NC it for readbable as 1/4 space with previous
01:33:415 (4) - imo ctrl+G this with (5). a huge jump here doesn't match with any music. also a forced flow that i got between 01:33:237 (3,4) - cause too sharply
01:45:915 (3) - hmm a little bit weird flow from (2) to (3) imo, hard to read it i guess. yeah i prefer to move the (3) to 280,200 for easier flow
01:52:522 (1) - aw this is killing player asdf. yeah i'm not like with flow that go to upward so i guess better if flow to downward instead. how about move this circle to 188,324?

Insane

00:11:094 (3) - you need to NC this since stanza(downbeat) also warning about 1/4 huge jump
00:14:309 (2) - ctrl+G this for better flow. no need to explain it. too obviously why i guess
00:18:237 (7) - too confusing imo. cause stacked/overlap with (6) together
00:20:916 (9) - nazi, tail 224,64 for better flow of jump
00:22:166 (6) - flow could be better here. it's bad cause you did a opposite with slider's body so yeah. a kinda weird for me. try https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1291554 instead
00:36:630 (6,1) - swap NC here. NC for slider to emphasize the music (you gave finish on it too)
00:37:344 (3) - NC for SV change here, obviously
00:46:094 (3,4) - pretty killing player's hands asdf. can you lower the distance of it? DX
00:49:665 (5) - NC for stanza and SV change here
01:12:165 (2) - same as 00:37:344 (3) -
01:52:612 (1) - extend the spinner to 01:59:665 - ? the string sound end in this time (and consistency with GD-ers)
Yeah. it quite Hard imo. i prefer HP8 OD8 and name this diff as Extra. especially for 1/4 circle jump

Good Luck

Fycho

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Fycho 2014-01-29T17:32:04+00:00

Hollow Wings wrote:
as ur req
already has +9 sp without any mod huehue
Fycho's Insane
00:12:433 存在感那么强的vocal都放过么额加了
00:23:594 (4,5,6,7,1) - 直线？换节奏了这
01:17:880 (6,7,8,9,1) - ds。。。fixed
good luck

kamisamaaa wrote:
[飞球insane]
00:23:683 (5) - 这里没音不是五连额 00:24:219这里明明是三连。。。这段的节奏应该是3个三连+1个五连才对吧。。。而且是渐强的感觉你这么下节奏感觉有点怪好，改成三连了
妈蛋又是一个神图没啥可摸
一个跟鼓点一个跟vocal简直碉堡

Tari wrote:
[Fycho]

00:12:165 (4) - Hmm, maybe move the note like this : http://puu.sh/6AS8K.jpg and add an extra note too, seems little more challenging for a insane and more balanced changed the rhythm
00:33:415 (3,4) - ? I think it's suppose to bl anket here orz, maybe you can try to make it blanket here? and try to move 4 so it can blanket slider 2 in this combo, like this : http://puu.sh/6ASnb.jpg sorry I am not going to use blanket ere
00:53:415 (4,1,2) - To match with the previous here 00:50:915 (1,1) - you need to add a new combo at 00:53:415 (4) - and 00:54:308 (2) - NC fixed
00:57:701 (4) - The stacking isn't correct, the note here needs to be stacked with the slider end 00:56:630 (1) - perfectly.ok
00:58:951 (3,4) - I'd prefer if you remove the note at 4 and reverse the previous slider, feels more uptight and blending with the jump, since your focus is the jump ok
01:19:308 (3) - Try to make it so this notes, get blanketed, personally I'd like you to revise this whole triangle here 01:19:130 (2,3,4) - , you'll still keep about the same direction movement, just a little more nicer, how about try this : http://puu.sh/6ASOv.jpgno good imo,01:19:487 (4,1) - flow will be bad
01:27:344 (2) - Maybe since you have the midpoint here you can move it up more so it creates a curve up? or else I think the midpoint in the slider is pretty useless. like this : http://puu.sh/6ASU9.jpgI like nearly-straigt slider here

Xinely wrote:
你好啊! M4M here 你好

Fycho's Insane
00:03:952 (1) - well tbh i feel a kinda weird when you gave a huge jump for 00:03:594 - when i heard the 00:03:951 - louder than 00:03:594 - . i guess better give a huge jump to downbeat here since loud of music. yeah just personal taste It's no problem:3
00:08:415 (2) - vocal of 00:08:772 - is really fit with a huge jump imo so i would to make a jump here. try to tweak the 00:08:415 (2) - become like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1291420 I don't want make beginning too hard
00:18:862 (3) - aa imo it's kinda hard to read as 1/2 also this song have high bpm so 1/4 jump circle like this a little hard imo. how about use a consistency spacing with 0,9x example =w=no problem this as many testers and I played
00:19:487 (6,1) - imo change this objects with 1/1 slider like http://puu.sh/6CvgH.jpg. it emphasize the string sound in 00:19:487 - better sorry I'd like tu put slider head at downbeat
00:24:844 (6) - imo this jump is quite fast and far so give NC to warning it cause a huge jump? pretty easier to read imo ~ ok added nc
00:37:165 (2) - personal taste, i would to move this circle to 184,212. just prefer about flow on this ~I'd like to use jump because this is a strong beat
01:01:987 (4,5,6,7) - imo flow between them isn't really good to play 01:52:612 (1) - ay so i would suggest to change flow between them. maybe like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1291471 I am op purpse here, to match the music and a little jump and chanllenging
01:09:933 (2) - same as 00:18:862 (3) -removed this note since I find it's overmapped orz
01:32:165 (4) - ah yeah kinda nazi but i guess NC it for readbable as 1/4 space with previous NC don't need at here since it will break my nc pattern
01:33:415 (4) - imo ctrl+G this with (5). a huge jump here doesn't match with any music. also a forced flow that i got between 01:33:237 (3,4) - cause too sharplychanged this to another suitable jumps xD
01:45:915 (3) - hmm a little bit weird flow from (2) to (3) imo, hard to read it i guess. yeah i prefer to move the (3) to 280,200 for easier flowIt's not hard imo
01:52:522 (1) - aw this is killing player asdf. yeah i'm not like with flow that go to upward so i guess better if flow to downward instead. how about move this circle to 188,324? I'd like a jump on the other direction to match the strong downbeat

Good Luck

thanks for modding~

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324,233,108237,6,0,B|268:245|232:207|232:207|202:230|202:230|173:202|98:214,1,240.000009155274,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,69,109130,2,0,P|128:58|100:46,2,60.0000022888184,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,72,109665,5,4,0:0:0:0:
256,72,110022,5,2,1:2:0:0:
256,72,110201,2,0,B|232:108|260:146|260:146|280:176|257:224,1,160,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
203,346,110737,2,0,P|187:294|179:258,1,80,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
255,72,111094,5,2,1:2:0:0:
266,175,111272,1,2,1:2:0:0:
57,171,111451,1,2,1:2:0:0:
150,119,111630,1,2,1:2:0:0:
65,276,111808,1,2,1:2:0:0:
63,240,111897,1,2,1:2:0:0:
60,203,111987,1,2,1:2:0:0:
56,167,112076,1,2,1:2:0:0:
54,131,112165,2,0,L|86:101,1,40,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
151,177,112344,2,0,L|161:216,1,40,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
146,40,112522,5,4,1:2:0:0:
256,192,112612,12,0,119665,0:0:0:0:

InabaTewi

InabaTewi 2014-02-01T02:30:10+00:00

烤肉我好香草你

Kinomi

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Kinomi 2014-02-01T05:47:24+00:00

InabaTewi wrote:
烤肉我好香草你

are you sb？

Kinomi

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Kinomi 2014-02-02T08:56:36+00:00

update GDs

AllStar12

AllStar12 wrote:
M4M here! Lets see here:
Note:
• Have the Grid Snap disabled in order to do these re-positioning and fixes
• Not sure if the changes I made actually affects the hitsounds, if it does then remember where you placed those hitsounds

[General]
Not sure if it's a problem but the offsets are different for 615's Easy and Yuki's Hard:
Creator, Fycho and ZZH's offset: 2523

615 and Yuki's offset: 3952
Don't think the inherited warnings matters (unless it's talking about the offset) but there are warnings for the song setup so I suggest copy the creator's song setup info (However, you missed out tagging ZZHBOY as well so just copy and paste the info provided below):
Artist: 佐咲紗花
Romanised Artist: Sasaki Sayaka
Title: 恋さくミライ
Romanised Title: Koi Saku Mirai
Source: 恋がさくころ桜どき
Tags: Koi ga Saku Koro Sakura Doki ぱれっと palette galgame visual novel eroge baldrace Fycho [Minakami Yuki] 615915887 ZZHBOY
01:52:522 (1) - The creator(Tsukuyomi) and ZZH's spinner time at then end end at a different time from Yuki, 615 and Fycho's difficulties, suggest choosing a specific time for everyone to end at:
Tsukuyomi's spinner time ends at: 01:56:808
ZZHBOY's spinner time ends at: 01:59:844
Fycho's spinner time ends at: 01:59:665
615915887 and Minakami Yuki's spinner time ends at: 01:59:666 - (I don't know why it's like that, maybe it's because of the offset?)

all fixed
[Insane]
I believe there's two unsnapped notes in this difficulty (believe you have to stretch them out again: fixed
• 01:23:594 (1) -
• 01:23:772 (2) -

00:26:094 (3) - Finish on the slider's head? ok
00:32:523 (1) - Missing clap on the slider's head yeah
01:28:505 (2) - Remove clap on the slider's head? i follow the music to add it
01:29:487 (3) - Remove clap on the slider's head? ^

Suggestions and Ideas
00:20:201 (3,4,5,6,7) - If you want, try out the blanket shown here? fixed
[box=Picture and coordinates]
• 00:20:291 (4) - x: 164 y: 270
• 00:20:380 (5) - x: 126 y: 283
• 00:20:469 (6) - x: 86 y: 283
• 00:20:559 (7) - x: 47 y: 269

Test play for Insane Difficulty

Result

1st Attempt:

2nd Attempt:

Comments: Not really going to touch this as well because I enjoyed the way it really is as of now and during my testplay. I don't really want to try any unnecessary false accusation on this difficulty. I just got misses due to my own mistakes here as well. Everything seems to be fine for me, just issues with the unsnapped sliders and hitsounds and it's good (for me). Overall, I liked it ^^
Actual level of difficulty that this can be under : Insane ~ Expert

IamKwaN

IamKwaN wrote:
[General]
BG的Size是1024*728,找個1024*768的吧
ZZH的Normal跟其他難度的Tags, Source和Unicode title+artist不一致
有些難度的Letterbox during breaks跟Offset不一樣
都改了
[Insane]
00:10:737 (1,2) - 這裡的spacing會不會太遠,還不是Kiai Time 不会。。
00:18:059 (6,7) - 這個flow感覺很奇怪 0.0没啥奇怪呀
00:21:094 (1) - 個人感覺沒必要1.5x SV, 整段音樂都只是過渡段打着没啥问题0.0
00:45:915 (2,3) - Spacing真的大丈夫? 没关系的啦
01:29:487 (3) - 這個轉SV可以有

kamisamaaa

kamisamaaa wrote:
[insane]
00:11:094 (3) - 这个头加上whistle？因为这里你是跟着背景那个音的 00:10:737 (1,2,3) - 这三个是在加强的然后3的时候达到最强没道理前两个有whistle 这个反而没有额好
00:15:201 (6) - 感觉这个whistle不如加到00:15:023 (5) - 上按音调加的
00:22:523 (1) - 头上加一个whistle？这里是重音额我是跟提琴加的
01:28:505 (2) - 这个头上那个clap感觉很违和啊虽然鼓点确实是这样子的两声了（可能是因为人声比较大然后造成的影响）建议想飞球一样吧蓝线空下来舒服得多不好啊
01:39:487 (1) - ctrl+G？好

Tari

Tari wrote:
Hi Hi :3
[Insane]

00:22:166 (6) - Why don't you change this slider by copying the previous slider 00:21:809 (5) - ? Not big deal. but find this little odd since that'll make the map little make consistent, and the makes slider less stick out. fix
00:28:594 (2) - So much juuumpinggg, better to try less back and forth movement and form a triangular cursor movement like this : http://puu.sh/6AVgQ.jpgi think it's fine :3
00:45:915 (2,3) - I don't think this jump is possible LOL, I know you are trying to make blanket better that's why too much distance before the note that It'll really not even playable lol. so as this 00:46:272 (4) - omg ah it's playable,when you use 1/4 slider,only take care of the spacing of it's head with the note before or later,than change the direction of tail for flow
01:05:201 (7) - Maybe move ti to here? http://puu.sh/6AVyV.jpg would be better orz. it will be harder..
01:05:380 (1) - Add a whistle to the start of this slider sounds nice? ok
00:11:094 (3) - Same whistle to the start sounds nice. ok
00:16:094 (4) - Whistle to the end here
00:16:809 (8) - ^ same add whistle.
00:17:523 (4) - ^ same add whistle.
00:18:773 (3) - To the end of the slider here
00:19:487 (6) - Remove whistle from start and add to end instead.
00:21:809 (5) - ^ I think you know where to add them now orz.
i follow violin not down beat
01:19:665 (1,2) - The jump to the next note would be better if you did this : http://puu.sh/6AW2A.jpg since you are trying to not emphasize the movement to 2 but the note to the slider it'll give less focus on 2 and more on 3 keep current one
01:23:951 (3) - Add a new combo here? it doesn't match with 01:11:808 (1,2) - and those two notes have a separate combo right before a new chorus i take these 3 as a triangle pattern
01:33:594 (4) - Better to make slider look like this : http://puu.sh/6AWgC.jpg
ok

Xinely

Xinely wrote:
你好啊! M4M here 你好！

Insane
00:11:094 (3) - you need to NC this since stanza(downbeat) also warning about 1/4 huge jump k
00:14:309 (2) - ctrl+G this for better flow. no need to explain it. too obviously why i guess ok
00:18:237 (7) - too confusing imo. cause stacked/overlap with (6) together it's fine imo
00:20:916 (9) - nazi, tail 224,64 for better flow of jump i prefer current one
00:22:166 (6) - flow could be better here. it's bad cause you did a opposite with slider's body so yeah. a kinda weird for me. try https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1291554 instead it's intention and i tink it;s fine 0.0
00:36:630 (6,1) - swap NC here. NC for slider to emphasize the music (you gave finish on it too) i think it's unecessary
00:37:344 (3) - NC for SV change here, obviously it's easy to read when click
00:46:094 (3,4) - pretty killing player's hands asdf. can you lower the distance of it? DX it's fine :3 i promise!
00:49:665 (5) - NC for stanza and SV change here i think it's unecessary
01:12:165 (2) - same as 00:37:344 (3) - ^
01:52:612 (1) - extend the spinner to 01:59:665 - ? the string sound end in this time (and consistency with GD-ers) k
Yeah. it quite Hard imo. i prefer HP8 OD8 and name this diff as Extra. especially for 1/4 circle jump
actually it is easier than fycho 's diff xD

Good Luck

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