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Laurier

1,786 posts

Joined February 2011

Laurier 11 years ago

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Hollow Wings

1,514 posts

Joined July 2010

Hollow Wings 11 years ago

as ur req
already has +9 sp without any mod huehue

Fycho's Insane

00:12:433 存在感那么强的vocal都放过么
00:23:594 (4,5,6,7,1) - 直线？
01:17:880 (6,7,8,9,1) - ds。。。

Insane

00:18:059 (6,7) - 再多叠一点
00:20:916 (9) - 反向
01:11:808 (2) - 果然还是nc
01:28:505 (2,1) - 跳太远了，稍微近点
01:36:808 (1) - 反向

Yuki's Hard

开始那些1/2obj之间就叠那么点看着感觉很蛋疼

ZZH's Normal

vocal跟太多，note+slider的一些梗可以考虑改成折返，normal里建议不要放太多单点

615's Easy

00:41:809 (2,4) - stack
01:10:023到01:11:094塞个转盘呗

你湊sp，我来骗kd
good luck

Kinomi

1,229 posts

Joined August 2012

Topic Starter

Kinomi 11 years ago

Hollow Wings wrote:
Insane
00:18:059 (6,7) - 再多叠一点好
00:20:916 (9) - 反向不好，这边试了好多次，感觉还是这样摆舒服
01:11:808 (2) - 果然还是nc 好
01:28:505 (2,1) - 跳太远了，稍微近点我感觉不远啊
01:36:808 (1) - 反向好

TAIN

168 posts

Joined January 2012

TAIN 11 years ago

Hi !

I am a newbie modding.

You can ignore my suggestion.

615's Easy

00:03:952 (1,1,2,1,1) - Think of a different pattern.

01:09:666 (3) - Add spinner recommended.

GL!

AllStar12

488 posts

Joined January 2013

AllStar12 11 years ago

M4M here! Lets see here:
Note:
• Have the Grid Snap disabled in order to do these re-positioning and fixes
• Not sure if the changes I made actually affects the hitsounds, if it does then remember where you placed those hitsounds

[General]

Not sure if it's a problem but the offsets are different for 615's Easy and Yuki's Hard:
Creator, Fycho and ZZH's offset: 2523

615 and Yuki's offset: 3952
Don't think the inherited warnings matters (unless it's talking about the offset) but there are warnings for the song setup so I suggest copy the creator's song setup info (However, you missed out tagging ZZHBOY as well so just copy and paste the info provided below):
Artist: 佐咲紗花
Romanised Artist: Sasaki Sayaka
Title: 恋さくミライ
Romanised Title: Koi Saku Mirai
Source: 恋がさくころ桜どき
Tags: Koi ga Saku Koro Sakura Doki ぱれっと palette galgame visual novel eroge baldrace Fycho [Minakami Yuki] 615915887 ZZHBOY
01:52:522 (1) - The creator(Tsukuyomi) and ZZH's spinner time at then end end at a different time from Yuki, 615 and Fycho's difficulties, suggest choosing a specific time for everyone to end at:
Tsukuyomi's spinner time ends at: 01:56:808
ZZHBOY's spinner time ends at: 01:59:844
Fycho's spinner time ends at: 01:59:665
615915887 and Minakami Yuki's spinner time ends at: 01:59:666 - (I don't know why it's like that, maybe it's because of the offset?)

[615's Easy]

00:35:023 (4) - Missing clap?
00:35:380 (1) - Missing clap on tail
01:16:809 (3) - Missing clap on tail
01:39:666 (3) - Have a whistle on the slider's tail? See if you like it
01:42:523 (3) - Have a whistle on the slider's tail?

Suggestions and Ideas
Add a note at 01:46:809 ?

Test play for 615's Easy Difficulty
Result
Comments: Appropriate slider velocity, HD, CS, AR, OD, flow and distance snap. Doesn't seem to have any major issues in this difficulty. Just issues about the hitsounds and I believe it should be good to go. Sorry if used mod, it was slow for me
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Actual level of difficulty that this can be under : Easy ~ Normal (2%)

[ZZH's Normal]

Your NC seems to be bit inconsistent
For the inherited points that contained the volume of 100%, recommend lowering it or at least equal to 85%.
00:03:951 (2,3) - Distance snap between is 1.14x
00:15:380 (1) - Add finish here?
00:36:987 (4) - Add finish on the slider's head since there's a cymbal sound here.
01:35:380 (1) - Extend the slider to 01:38:237
01:38:415 - Insert break time here?

Suggestions and Ideas
Add a note at 01:46:809 ?

Test play for ZZH's Normal Difficulty
Result
Comments: Appropriate slider velocity, HD, CS, AR, OD, flow and distance snap. Doesn't seem to have any major issues in this difficulty. Just a few issues and I believe it should be good to go, maybe recheck your claps and whistle. Sorry if used mod, it was slow for me. Orz
Actual level of difficulty that this can be under : Normal ~ Hard (2%~)

[Yuki's Hard]

00:15:380 (1) - End the spinner at 00:18:237
00:50:559 (3) - Not sure if it was intentional but this slider's head has the sampleset to normal. Was just wondering
00:59:309 (3) - Same here as well
01:45:916 (3) - add a Finish?
01:46:094 (4) - add a Finish on the head?

Going to edit this the next day, was getting late for me (5:52 AM) Orz

Suggestions and Ideas

None

Test play for Yuki's Hard Difficulty
Result
1st Attempt:

2nd Attempt:
Comments: Appropriate slider velocity, HD, CS, AR, OD, flow and distance snap. Didn't seem to spot any issues during my testplay. Actually do like the patterns, shapes and the style you implemented into this difficulty as well. The hitsounds seem to be prefect here so not much of a problem out of that. Sorry if used mod here as well, the AR was a bit slow for me (Was very fun using the Hard Rock mod though haha). ( ; ՞ਊ ՞ )
Actual level of difficulty that this can be under : Hard ~ Insane(5%~)

[Fycho's Insane]

For the inherited points that contained the volume of 100%, recommend lowering it or at least equal to 85%.

Suggestions and Ideas

None

Test play for Fycho's Insane Difficulty
Result
1st Attempt:

2nd Attempt:

3rd Attempt:
Comments: Not really going to touch this because I enjoyed the way it really is as of now and during my testplay. I don't really want to try any unnecessary false accusation on this difficulty. I just got misses due to my own mistakes. Everything seems to be fine for me but I suggested on turning it down the volume a bit for the kiai time. Overall, I liked it ^^
Actual level of difficulty that this can be under : Insane ~ Expert

[Insane]

I believe there's two unsnapped notes in this difficulty (believe you have to stretch them out again:
• 01:23:594 (1) -
• 01:23:772 (2) -
00:26:094 (3) - Finish on the slider's head?
00:32:523 (1) - Missing clap on the slider's head
01:28:505 (2) - Remove clap on the slider's head?
01:29:487 (3) - Remove clap on the slider's head?

Suggestions and Ideas
00:20:201 (3,4,5,6,7) - If you want, try out the blanket shown here?
Picture and coordinates

• 00:20:291 (4) - x: 164 y: 270
• 00:20:380 (5) - x: 126 y: 283
• 00:20:469 (6) - x: 86 y: 283
• 00:20:559 (7) - x: 47 y: 269

Test play for Insane Difficulty
Result
1st Attempt:

2nd Attempt:
Comments: Not really going to touch this as well because I enjoyed the way it really is as of now and during my testplay. I don't really want to try any unnecessary false accusation on this difficulty. I just got misses due to my own mistakes here as well. Everything seems to be fine for me, just issues with the unsnapped sliders and hitsounds and it's good (for me). Overall, I liked it ^^
Actual level of difficulty that this can be under : Insane ~ Expert

If you have any complaints, questions, comments, etc. or found any errors in my work, ✉ in-game or on the osu website!

(ﾉ´ヮ´)ﾉ*:･ﾟ✧❀ Wish you best of luck!~ ❀

★

IamKwaN

osu! Alumni

3,905 posts

Joined August 2012

IamKwaN 11 years ago

Hi, m4m耶~

[General]

BG的Size是1024*728,找個1024*768的吧
ZZH的Normal跟其他難度的Tags, Source和Unicode title+artist不一致
有些難度的Letterbox during breaks跟Offset不一樣

[Insane]

00:10:737 (1,2) - 這裡的spacing會不會太遠,還不是Kiai Time
00:18:059 (6,7) - 這個flow感覺很奇怪
00:21:094 (1) - 個人感覺沒必要1.5x SV, 整段音樂都只是過渡段
00:45:915 (2,3) - Spacing真的大丈夫?
01:29:487 (3) - 這個轉SV可以有

[飛球的Insane]

完美

[Yuki的Hard]

00:03:952 - 00:13:951 - 這裡的spacing嘗試1.25x, 感覺沒接觸的circle跟slider更美觀
00:15:380 (1) - spinner延長到00:18:237, 跟音樂感覺更有活力
00:26:809 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 音效太輕,跟鼓聲不配合,沒啥打擊感
00:29:666 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 這段的圓圈很難打,感覺不知道跟著甚麼來打,又不是歌詞
00:32:523 (1,2,3,4) - 老實說我不喜歡這種類似的排列,很沉悶,可以加多點創意嗎
00:38:237 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ^
00:43:951 (1,2,3,4) - 明顯的copy and paste
00:45:380 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - 這段只是跟前面這段 00:33:951 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) copy and paste對吧
kiai的排列跟前面的好像沒啥分別,還是不斷的轉,感覺不到高潮,建議重新排一下,節奏倒是沒問題

[ZZH的Normal]

最主要就是slider扭得不好,可能是我的個人看法;另外就是這normal難度有點高,01:35:022 (3) 這類型的slider太多,新手打得有點苦逼
01:15:915 (2) - 嘗試copy 01:16:630 (3)? 柑橘更美觀,如果是我,一樣的slider我會選擇複製
01:27:344 (4,1) - 01:28:058 (1) 放在(384,12)更符合flow
01:52:522 (1) - 在01:59:665 完結, 01:59:844的只是回音

[615的Easy]

00:36:094 (2) - 尾node的位置:(248,208)
00:57:523 (4) - 我會將這slider的頭跟00:56:630 (3) 的尾巴成一直線
01:19:666 (3) - 這滑條捕捉不到01:20:023 的鼓點,然後看前面的風格也不是跟歌詞的mapping,所以我會建議這樣放:
SPOILER
01:28:237 - 這裡的rhythm有點奇怪,我建議這樣
SPOILER
01:49:666 (1) - 在01:52:166 完結,然後01:52:701 (1) 開01:52:523 開始; 如果按照現在的位置的話,那就比normal還要困難了

Good luck~~

ZZHBOY

1,649 posts

Joined April 2012

ZZHBOY 11 years ago

Hollow Wings wrote:
ZZH's Normal
vocal跟太多，note+slider的一些梗可以考虑改成折返，normal里建议不要放太多单点为难跟vocal爽啊.-.

AllStar12 wrote:
[ZZH's Normal]
Your NC seems to be bit inconsistent
For the inherited points that contained the volume of 100%, recommend lowering it or at least equal to 85%.
00:03:951 (2,3) - Distance snap between is 1.14xfixed
00:15:380 (1) - Add finish here?nope.it's end with vocal disappearing
00:36:987 (4) - Add finish on the slider's head since there's a cymbal sound here.i added Normal Hitsound here
01:35:380 (1) - Extend the slider to 01:38:237 just like before
01:38:415 - Insert break time here?done

Suggestions and Ideas
Add a note at 01:46:809 ?done

Test play for ZZH's Normal Difficulty
Result
Comments: Appropriate slider velocity, HD, CS, AR, OD, flow and distance snap. Doesn't seem to have any major issues in this difficulty. Just a few issues and I believe it should be good to go, maybe recheck your claps and whistle. Sorry if used mod, it was slow for me. Orz
Actual level of difficulty that this can be under : Normal ~ Hard (2%~)

IamKwaN wrote:
[ZZH的Normal]
最主要就是slider扭得不好,可能是我的個人看法;另外就是這normal難度有點高,01:35:022 (3) 這類型的slider太多,新手打得有點苦逼双号码
01:15:915 (2) - 嘗試copy 01:16:630 (3)? 柑橘更美觀,如果是我,一樣的slider我會選擇複製你书的对
01:27:344 (4,1) - 01:28:058 (1) 放在(384,12)更符合flowdone
01:52:522 (1) - 在01:59:665 完結, 01:59:844的只是回音
h'

记得搞好歌曲信息

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: .mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 71630
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 39129
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Koi Saku Mirai
TitleUnicode:恋さくミライ
Artist:Sasaki Sayaka
ArtistUnicode:佐咲紗花
Creator:Tsukuyomi
Version:ZZH's Normal
Source:恋がさくころ桜どき
Tags:Koi ga Saku Koro Sakura Doki ぱれっと palette galgame visual novel eroge baldrace Fycho [Minakami Yuki] 615915887 ZZHBOY
BeatmapID:359196
BeatmapSetID:143050

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1
SliderTickRate:1

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//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
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Koiyuki

Beatmap Nominator

2,571 posts

Joined March 2013

Koiyuki 11 years ago

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AllStar12 wrote:
[Yuki's Hard]
00:15:380 (1) - End the spinner at 00:18:237 nope, the spin follows the vocal
00:50:559 (3) - Not sure if it was intentional but this slider's head has the sampleset to normal. Was just wondering because it fits and soft clap doesn't fit here
00:59:309 (3) - Same here as well softclap instead
01:45:916 (3) - add a Finish? ok
01:46:094 (4) - add a Finish on the head? ok

Comments: Appropriate slider velocity, HD, CS, AR, OD, flow and distance snap. Didn't seem to spot any issues during my testplay. Actually do like the patterns, shapes and the style you implemented into this difficulty as well. The hitsounds seem to be prefect here so not much of a problem out of that. Sorry if used mod here as well, the AR was a bit slow for me (Was very fun using the Hard Rock mod though haha). ( ; ՞ਊ ՞ ) haha considering to use ar8 .-.
Actual level of difficulty that this can be under : ~ Insane(5%~)

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IamKwaN wrote:
[Yuki的Hard]
00:03:952 - 00:13:951 - 這裡的spacing嘗試1.25x, 感覺沒接觸的circle跟slider更美觀懒得改了不然又要动一次排版真是美丽
00:15:380 (1) - spinner延長到00:18:237, 跟音樂感覺更有活力我觉得跟vocal不错
00:26:809 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 音效太輕,跟鼓聲不配合,沒啥打擊感背景就是鼓音谢谢
00:29:666 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 這段的圓圈很難打,感覺不知道跟著甚麼來打,又不是歌詞跟钢琴而已，而且改了又和前面一样
00:32:523 (1,2,3,4) - 老實說我不喜歡這種類似的排列,很沉悶,可以加多點創意嗎 nope
00:38:237 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ^ nope
00:43:951 (1,2,3,4) - 明顯的copy and paste 对
00:45:380 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - 這段只是跟前面這段 00:33:951 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) copy and paste對吧对
kiai的排列跟前面的好像沒啥分別,還是不斷的轉,感覺不到高潮,建議重新排一下,節奏倒是沒問題
虽然我一个都没改，只能说看的角度不一样
Hard不断的转的确是copy and paste，但每个的角度都是72°（一周360°的五分之一），结合一下歌名和这个gal的名字：《恋爱绽放樱飞时》（恋がさくころ桜どき）和樱花的形状，其实这些旋转都是专用梗，我其实是想给人一种樱花在绽放的感觉

thanks for modding~
code:

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osu file format v12

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Title:Koi Saku Mirai
TitleUnicode:恋さくミライ
Artist:Sasaki Sayaka
ArtistUnicode:佐咲紗花
Creator:Tsukuyomi
Version:Yuki's Hard
Source:恋がさくころ桜どき
Tags:Koi ga Saku Koro Sakura Doki ぱれっと palette galgame visual novel eroge baldrace Fycho [Minakami Yuki] 615915887 ZZHBOY
BeatmapID:357033
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Tari

osu! Alumni

1,671 posts

Joined July 2012

Tari 11 years ago

Save posts here because this isn't in my queue but I will mod it.

kamisamaaa

605 posts

Joined July 2011

kamisamaaa 11 years ago

[insane]
00:11:094 (3) - 这个头加上whistle？因为这里你是跟着背景那个音的 00:10:737 (1,2,3) - 这三个是在加强的然后3的时候达到最强没道理前两个有whistle 这个反而没有额
00:15:201 (6) - 感觉这个whistle不如加到00:15:023 (5) - 上
00:22:523 (1) - 头上加一个whistle？这里是重音额
01:28:505 (2) - 这个头上那个clap感觉很违和啊虽然鼓点确实是这样子的两声了（可能是因为人声比较大然后造成的影响）建议想飞球一样吧蓝线空下来舒服得多
01:39:487 (1) - ctrl+G？
妈蛋神图没啥可摸
[飞球insane]
00:23:683 (5) - 这里没音不是五连额 00:24:219这里明明是三连。。。这段的节奏应该是3个三连+1个五连才对吧。。。而且是渐强的感觉你这么下节奏感觉有点怪
妈蛋又是一个神图没啥可摸
一个跟鼓点一个跟vocal简直碉堡

伤感别的难度先不摸了去做会图然后睡了

Tari

osu! Alumni

1,671 posts

Joined July 2012

Tari 11 years ago

Hi Hi

[Easy]

00:11:094 (2) - The start of the slider should have a whistle too because the piano there is really strong. and it doesn't sound abusive because the whistles sound really nice with the song no matter how many you use hehe.
00:09:666 (3) - Not sure, but probably add a finish here? the music is strong enough here for you to add a finish to, but you can lower the volume for this finish if it sounds too loud for you.
00:23:594 (4) - This doesn't perfectly stack to the end of 00:21:808 (2) - you need to move this note to the x coordinate of 339 and I already know your trying to stack the
00:23:951 (1) - Add whistle in the start of the slider? seems a little empty without any hitsounds here and its to put some focus on the starting beat of this slider.
00:40:737 (4) - Hmm, why did you break symmetry in this pattern orz? Imo you should make sure this note is in the same y-axis as 00:40:737 (4) - basically you need to make sure this is somewhere around y: 112 so your symmetry can be kept. abd then make the following notes to keep spacing orz
00:38:237 (1) - I'm sorry, but I think you should add clap to the tick sound, some sliders sound too quiet and empty without any claps in the slider ticks. like add them here
00:55:380 (1) - For the end of the slider try to use samplset normal and additions normal? I think it sounds really nice there.
00:59:487 (2) - ^ same add it to the end of the slider here too.
01:03:951 (1) - Add whistle to the start of the slider? it sounds a little empty without it.
01:09:666 (3) - Put at the same place as 01:06:809 (1) - ? I think it flows better that way, anyways here's how it should look like : http://puu.sh/6zGax.jpg the flow from 2 to 3 is better.
01:15:380 (1) - Curve this a little bit to the left? I think it creates better flow to the next note, anyways here's how it looks like : http://puu.sh/6zGf0.jpg hehe should try it
01:22:523 (2) - Move to same location as 01:19:666 (3) - please, I think it would be better anyways to do that, it looks unclean really.
01:25:380 (2) - Whistle to the start of the slider sounds great? maybe add it
01:26:809 (1) - ^ same
01:31:094 (3) - Add a curve to the left of the slider would be better.
01:33:237 (2) - You obviously missed a finish to the end of the slider here, it's quite obvious.
01:38:237 (1) - Add a whistle to the start of the slider? it sounds much better.
01:43:951 (1) - Add Whistle?

[Normal]

00:31:094 (4,5) - I'd prefer you use a slider here because there are not much vocals or beats to focus on here, it'll much more of an hold not a click here, if there were more vocals it'll be better.
00:42:522 (3,4) - Same as above, I'd be better if you just changed this into a slider because there is not much to click here, and so a much more hold note slider fits better
00:35:737 (2,3) - I'd prefer if you stack them hehe, I don't know why but the this looks really weird from the modders aspect at least.
00:41:094 (1) - Whistle to the start seems to sound great here,
00:48:951 (5,6) - Your making it to complicated, can you just use two circles here? instead of this 1/4th rhythm because there nothing to show in the red tick there, seems little overmapped.
00:55:915 (2) - Move back to the white tick and add a reverse? There is still a vocal at the white tick hehe and you skipped it.
01:04:665 (2,3,4) - Revise the rhythm, because it feels weird to click some of these notes , how about this : http://puu.sh/6zJD1.jpg Seems to get all the nice beats.
01:25:022 (5) - At the end of the slider add a whistle or a finish. feels yet again empty without it.
01:34:487 (2) - Add a wistle to the start of the slider please.
Not a problem, but I'm really wary of some of the rhythms at this diff, but it shouldn't be a problem since this is a normal diff.

[Hard]

00:05:380 (1) - So weird, but I prefer you reduce the slider to the white tick and then add a note there, it would better match with this rhythm here : 00:08:059 (1,2,3) - orz
00:08:773 (3) - Add a whistle to the start? sounds so empty without whistles orz
00:15:380 (1) - Whistle to the spinner at least, and maybe extend it to the white tick that beat in the white tick is stronger than the beat that you ended the slider here.
00:33:594 (4,1) - If you Ctrl+G both sliders here you can notice they can't perfectly stack, you need to move the end point in slider 4 to x 316 and that'll fix your problem.
00:34:844 (3) - Looks less overlap and more cleaner if you do this : http://puu.sh/6AQAT.jpg and there still this nice even-out space between the slider here and the slider at 00:33:951 (1) -
00:36:987 (2,3) - Can you move this to the right more? I feel there should be a jump to the next slider after these two, it helps lead to the more exicting part and matches with the jumpier parts and signals it. http://puu.sh/6AQML.jpg
00:56:094 (3,4) - Curve the slider more here? and try to make patterns like this here : http://puu.sh/6AQXa.jpg You do so much straight sliders, so little curve won't hurt you
00:56:809 (1) - Hey, you should remove the new combo here because the next note is hard to read and I feel to make it more readable it would be better to make the next note a new combo, so remove the new combo here and add it at 00:57:344 (2) - , so many reverses aren't the best thing to do.
01:01:094 (1) - Not big problem, but can you put it at the same place as 00:59:487 (1) - I see another overlap there orz and I don't think it looks nice as is.
01:00:023 (2) - As I said above, there too much straight slider in diff, can you add some variation :3? Change sliders so they curve a little bit would be better like this : http://puu.sh/6AR9J.jpg
01:03:416 (2) - Should increase spacing here, because jump to this note won't be that hard because of the slider leniency and the long amount of hold but short cursor movement. try this pattern : http://puu.sh/6ARil.jpg
01:19:666 (1) - For the start of the slider : Change the additions in the left screen to Normal : http://puu.sh/6ARry.jpg and add a finsh to the start of the slider, it sounds great like that.
01:18:594 (1) - Minor issue, but this definitely needs to be stacked with 01:16:809 (1) - it ruins the blanketing because they need to be blanketed the same way.

[Fycho]

00:12:165 (4) - Hmm, maybe move the note like this : http://puu.sh/6AS8K.jpg and add an extra note too, seems little more challenging for a insane and more balanced
00:33:415 (3,4) - ? I think it's suppose to blanket here orz, maybe you can try to make it blanket here? and try to move 4 so it can blanket slider 2 in this combo, like this : http://puu.sh/6ASnb.jpg
00:53:415 (4,1,2) - To match with the previous here 00:50:915 (1,1) - you need to add a new combo at 00:53:415 (4) - and 00:54:308 (2) -
00:57:701 (4) - The stacking isn't correct, the note here needs to be stacked with the slider end 00:56:630 (1) - perfectly.
00:58:951 (3,4) - I'd prefer if you remove the note at 4 and reverse the previous slider, feels more uptight and blending with the jump, since your focus is the jump
01:19:308 (3) - Try to make it so this notes, get blanketed, personally I'd like you to revise this whole triangle here 01:19:130 (2,3,4) - , you'll still keep about the same direction movement, just a little more nicer, how about try this : http://puu.sh/6ASOv.jpg
01:27:344 (2) - Maybe since you have the midpoint here you can move it up more so it creates a curve up? or else I think the midpoint in the slider is pretty useless. like this : http://puu.sh/6ASU9.jpg

[Insane]

00:22:166 (6) - Why don't you change this slider by copying the previous slider 00:21:809 (5) - ? Not big deal. but find this little odd since that'll make the map little make consistent, and the makes slider less stick out.
00:28:594 (2) - So much juuumpinggg, better to try less back and forth movement and form a triangular cursor movement like this : http://puu.sh/6AVgQ.jpg
00:45:915 (2,3) - I don't think this jump is possible LOL, I know you are trying to make blanket better that's why too much distance before the note that It'll really not even playable lol. so as this 00:46:272 (4) - omg
01:05:201 (7) - Maybe move ti to here? http://puu.sh/6AVyV.jpg would be better orz.
01:05:380 (1) - Add a whistle to the start of this slider sounds nice?
00:11:094 (3) - Same whistle to the start sounds nice.
00:16:094 (4) - Whistle to the end here
00:16:809 (8) - ^ same add whistle.
00:17:523 (4) - ^ same add whistle.
00:18:773 (3) - To the end of the slider here
00:19:487 (6) - Remove whistle from start and add to end instead.
00:21:809 (5) - ^ I think you know where to add them now orz.
01:19:665 (1,2) - The jump to the next note would be better if you did this : http://puu.sh/6AW2A.jpg since you are trying to not emphasize the movement to 2 but the note to the slider it'll give less focus on 2 and more on 3
01:23:951 (3) - Add a new combo here? it doesn't match with 01:11:808 (1,2) - and those two notes have a separate combo right before a new chorus
01:33:594 (4) - Better to make slider look like this : http://puu.sh/6AWgC.jpg

Koiyuki

Beatmap Nominator

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Joined March 2013

Koiyuki 11 years ago

Tari wrote:
[Hard]

00:05:380 (1) - So weird, but I prefer you reduce the slider to the white tick and then add a note there, it would better match with this rhythm here : 00:08:059 (1,2,3) - orz
00:08:773 (3) - Add a whistle to the start? sounds so empty without whistles orz
00:15:380 (1) - Whistle to the spinner at least, and maybe extend it to the white tick that beat in the white tick is stronger than the beat that you ended the slider here. the spin follows the vocal
00:33:594 (4,1) - If you Ctrl+G both sliders here you can notice they can't perfectly stack, you need to move the end point in slider 4 to x 316 and that'll fix your problem.
00:34:844 (3) - Looks less overlap and more cleaner if you do this : http://puu.sh/6AQAT.jpg and there still this nice even-out space between the slider here and the slider at 00:33:951 (1) -
00:36:987 (2,3) - Can you move this to the right more? I feel there should be a jump to the next slider after these two, it helps lead to the more exicting part and matches with the jumpier parts and signals it. http://puu.sh/6AQML.jpg move a little
00:56:094 (3,4) - Curve the slider more here? and try to make patterns like this here : http://puu.sh/6AQXa.jpg You do so much straight sliders, so little curve won't hurt you
00:56:809 (1) - Hey, you should remove the new combo here because the next note is hard to read and I feel to make it more readable it would be better to make the next note a new combo, so remove the new combo here and add it at 00:57:344 (2) - , so many reverses aren't the best thing to do. let me think about it, i will check other's idea on this
01:01:094 (1) - Not big problem, but can you put it at the same place as 00:59:487 (1) - I see another overlap there orz and I don't think it looks nice as is. no overlap here if you test
01:00:023 (2) - As I said above, there too much straight slider in diff, can you add some variation :3? Change sliders so they curve a little bit would be better like this : http://puu.sh/6AR9J.jpg
01:03:416 (2) - Should increase spacing here, because jump to this note won't be that hard because of the slider leniency and the long amount of hold but short cursor movement. try this pattern : http://puu.sh/6ARil.jpg no that's not good imo
01:19:666 (1) - For the start of the slider : Change the additions in the left screen to Normal : http://puu.sh/6ARry.jpg and add a finsh to the start of the slider, it sounds great like that.
01:18:594 (1) - Minor issue, but this definitely needs to be stacked with 01:16:809 (1) - it ruins the blanketing because they need to be blanketed the same way.

=fixed
thanks for modding

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168,240,59487,6,0,L|199:352,1,105.000004005432,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
279,347,60023,2,0,P|310:349|338:359,1,52.5000020027161,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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329,224,60737,1,8,0:0:0:0:
246,208,60916,1,0,0:0:0:0:
165,232,61094,6,0,P|181:264|209:284,1,70,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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356,138,64130,1,0,0:0:0:0:
437,158,64309,1,8,0:0:0:0:
444,243,64487,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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201,296,65916,1,0,0:0:0:0:
140,238,66094,2,0,L|159:158,1,70
87,94,66451,2,0,L|72:163,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
175,87,66809,5,2,0:0:0:0:
248,47,66987,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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432,152,67523,1,0,0:0:0:0:
359,192,67701,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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321,345,69666,5,8,0:0:0:0:
228,246,69844,1,8,0:0:0:0:
361,215,70023,1,12,0:0:0:0:
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303,349,75023,1,8,0:0:0:0:
384,328,75201,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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193,204,76451,1,8,0:0:0:0:
152,278,76630,1,0,0:0:0:0:
152,278,76719,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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101,210,77166,2,0,P|77:184|66:151,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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233,162,77880,2,0,P|267:168|295:188,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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152,277,78594,6,0,P|147:242|157:210,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
233,162,78951,2,0,P|267:156|295:136,2,70,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
237,77,79487,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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324,207,80737,1,8,0:0:0:0:
354,285,80916,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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224,296,82166,2,0,P|209:327|213:361,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
294,341,82523,2,0,P|319:364|353:371,2,70,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
294,341,83237,5,2,0:0:0:0:
331,265,83416,1,0,0:0:0:0:
369,190,83594,1,8,0:0:0:0:
407,115,83773,1,0,0:0:0:0:
350,52,83951,6,0,P|278:73|212:58,1,140,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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106,182,84844,1,0,0:0:0:0:
62,105,85023,1,8,0:0:0:0:
132,59,85201,1,0,0:0:0:0:
215,59,85380,6,0,P|283:72|350:51,1,140,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
433,63,85916,2,0,P|461:102|466:135,1,70
433,200,86273,1,0,0:0:0:0:
350,212,86451,1,8,0:0:0:0:
382,134,86630,1,0,0:0:0:0:
433,200,86809,6,0,L|425:276,2,70,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
349,212,87344,2,0,P|317:223|282:218,1,70
226,281,87701,2,0,P|205:253|198:219,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
119,187,88059,6,0,P|138:158|169:141,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,57,88416,2,0,P|209:67|234:90,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
317,74,88773,1,4,0:0:0:0:
317,109,89130,1,4,0:0:0:0:
302,140,89487,1,4,0:0:0:0:
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100,178,90380,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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100,178,91094,5,2,0:0:0:0:
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340,286,92166,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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309,208,92434,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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170,242,92880,2,0,P|158:209|159:174,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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316,193,95380,6,0,L|303:343,1,140,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
222,355,95916,1,0,0:0:0:0:
150,312,96094,2,0,P|133:281|130:246,1,70
156,166,96451,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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382,171,97166,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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101,230,98059,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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101,230,98237,6,0,L|46:182,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
38,100,98594,1,8,0:0:0:0:
115,66,98773,2,0,L|170:114,1,70
250,98,99130,5,0,0:0:0:0:
250,98,99309,1,8,0:0:0:0:
322,140,99487,2,0,L|345:209,1,70
428,213,99844,5,0,0:0:0:0:
428,213,100023,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,112612,12,0,119666,0:0:0:0:

Xinely

5,014 posts

Joined April 2012

Xinely 11 years ago

你好啊! M4M here

Guide

Bold = Unrankable/must be fixed
Red = consider to fix it
Black = Suggestion
Blue = Personal Taste

Easy

00:11:094 - i guess you need to add whistle on this time since the music is like crystal sound that need emphasize with whistle also for consistency with previous. (feel empty w/o hitsound too imo)
00:26:809 (1) - no need clap on head since the sound of this time only cymbal sound
00:30:380 (2) - tbh i'm not really like the flow in this slider to 00:31:094 (3) - because you did a left diagonal only. the line is same. seems like uncomfortable. try http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1290158 to keep consistency flow downward and then upward? xD
00:32:701 - for this diff i guess you need to add clap on tick of slider (00:32:880 - ). since your diff using clap on every objects. it become quite weird when the tick being silent here.
00:34:308 - same as above
00:36:094 (2) - blanket between 00:35:380 (1,2) - could be better here. tweaked the blanket i got this for reference https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1290184
00:37:880 - unnecessary greenline. remove it
00:39:666 (3) - how nazi, 1 grid left to make better symmetrical between (1) and (3)? it's make the pattern neater too imo
00:43:951 (1) - no need finish on head for this slider. hear the music. doesn't have any cymbal sound and quite relax imo
00:46:809 (1) - nazi, tail 1 grid down to make better blanket lol
00:48:951 (3,4) - imo too many of straight line of flow here make an uncomfortable movement. well try to make a little bit of curving flow here.
00:56:094 - imo sound of this time is quite low. you need to map this instead following vocal (redticks) here. so 00:55:380 (1,2,3) - try to change for simple rhythm like http://puu.sh/6Cb7O.jpg instead? tbh your Easy is little bit Hard cause 3 stars so i guess try to lower it a little too with this rhythm
01:06:809 (1,2) - remove all finishes for both heads and tails. obviously since the music is quite relax and no cymbal sounds (even vocal become a little bit strong) better to remove its imo
01:11:808 - imo the music and vocal in this time is quite low. i would like to remove whistle here and keep whistle on tail since the music is become loud on that time
01:14:665 - well will break your consistency but the music of this time is quite loud and i feel an empty here. add whistle to emphasize the music?
01:21:094 (1) - no need finish on head and tail. no cymbal sounds here.
01:22:522 - same as 01:14:665 -
01:25:380 (2) - nazi, blanket could be smoother here imo. flow a little bit better too. move the 2nd node to 120,228 for its
01:28:773 (3,4) - it will be better and easier if you change these circles become one slider here. obviously
01:31:630 - the music on this time is cymbal. you need to map this obviously, so 01:31:094 (3,4) - change them become like http://puu.sh/6Cc9r.jpg instead
01:44:666 (2) - this suppose to make blanket right? if yes blanket in here could be better imo like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1290436
01:46:808 - need to map this time. obviously because cymbal(+hard music) sound
Neat diff here

Normal

00:02:880 - unnecessary greenline here. remove it
00:04:844 (3) - hmm inconsistency spacing here. you can make a blanket with keep consistency too imo. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1290652
00:05:380 (4,5) - a little wrong rhythm here. you need to emphasize vocal of 00:05:915 - with head slider to following vocal properly, not with slider's tail so try this http://puu.sh/6CjCW.jpg instead
00:09:665 (6,1) - swap the NC please. much better since NC for 00:09:665 - to emphasize the music
00:12:344 (1) - imo you using much of red tick here. no surpise why the star rating is high. and no need to following all of vocal to map Normal diff imo so i would suggest to remove it
00:13:058 (3) - i would extend this slider to 00:13:415 - . many of 1/2 spaces aren't good for Normal diff imo so let's give a little rest with 1/1 space instead
00:14:665 - aw so noisy here. if you want to emphasize the music since the music increasing here. use 75% or 80% instead
00:15:380 (1) - add finish here. to keep consistency with Easy diff. also the music is quite loud so finish fits for this time
01:28:772 (2,3) - you can change them become slider to make easier here
01:35:380 (1) - the spin should be end in 01:38:237 - since string sound is end in this time also emphasize the piano sound
01:46:808 - same as Easy
i would say, you're following vocal too much for this diff. have many of 1/2 spaces here. imo it's little Hard since newbie still kinda confuse if see many of 1/2 spaces at the one time. and if you following vocal. follow it with properly. example 00:33:058 (2) - if following vocal should be end in 00:33:415 - . 2nd example : 00:44:487 (2) - same as previous should be end in 00:45:558 - if following vocal.
well i'm not recommended to following vocal too much here. since it's quite Hard for Normal diff. Others like placement hitsound are fine

Hard

00:05:380 (1,2) - same as Normal here. should be like http://puu.sh/6CjCW.jpg or http://puu.sh/6CpPz.jpg
00:08:058 - hmm music is increasing here. try add whistle to emphasize that music?
00:11:094 (1) - well just personal taste about rhythm. how about make rhythm like http://puu.sh/6CsRy.jpg for emphasize the vocal of red tick here?
00:12:523 (1) - nazi, flow could be better here if you try to move the tail to 492,36
00:14:666 (3) - NC this to marking there is SV changing here
00:15:380 (1) - extend the spinner to 00:18:237 - when hearing the music i prefer to end the spinner here since the string sound still appear in this time
00:26:809 - altho it's a low sound but cymbal is appear here. so use finish instead whistle clap
00:33:951 - add whistle here to emphasize the piano sound
00:34:844 (3) - imo flow could be better here. hard to explain but i prefer to change it like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1291298
00:42:523 (1) - imo for 00:42:701 - if you follow this guitar sound i guess you need to map 00:42:790 - too since they have similar sound (i feel it, kinda weird for me). but i prefer to change this slider become 1/1
00:43:951 (1) - tbh the flow isn't really good here. i prefer to ctrl+G this for natural flow but since you did a pattern from 1 until 4.. yeah just saying here
00:57:344 (2) - many of repeats isn't good to play for Hard diff. Really. http://puu.sh/6CtTQ.jpg instead
00:59:130 - i would suggest to add note here to following vocal. somehow i feel kinda empty here
01:10:201 (4) - i don't like many of repeats altho 1/4 here. so divide it become 2 like http://puu.sh/6Cu4r.jpg ?
01:13:951 - no need for finish. no cymbal sound. finish makes quite loud sound imo
01:25:201 (5) - nazi, try to move 128|50 to keep flow of 01:24:844 (3,4,5) - . yeah your flow a little bit different between them. a kinda uncomfortable for me
01:28:773 (3) - NC for marking as anti jump
01:36:630 (1,3) - dunno, but i prefer to these sliders become symmetrical each other
01:51:809 (1) - same as 01:10:201 (4) - http://puu.sh/6CuAR.jpg

Fycho's Insane

00:03:952 (1) - well tbh i feel a kinda weird when you gave a huge jump for 00:03:594 - when i heard the 00:03:951 - louder than 00:03:594 - . i guess better give a huge jump to downbeat here since loud of music. yeah just personal taste
00:08:415 (2) - vocal of 00:08:772 - is really fit with a huge jump imo so i would to make a jump here. try to tweak the 00:08:415 (2) - become like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1291420
00:18:862 (3) - aa imo it's kinda hard to read as 1/2 also this song have high bpm so 1/4 jump circle like this a little hard imo. how about use a consistency spacing with 0,9x example =w=
00:19:487 (6,1) - imo change this objects with 1/1 slider like http://puu.sh/6CvgH.jpg. it emphasize the string sound in 00:19:487 - better
00:24:844 (6) - imo this jump is quite fast and far so give NC to warning it cause a huge jump? pretty easier to read imo ~
00:37:165 (2) - personal taste, i would to move this circle to 184,212. just prefer about flow on this ~
01:01:987 (4,5,6,7) - imo flow between them isn't really good to play 01:52:612 (1) - ay so i would suggest to change flow between them. maybe like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1291471
01:09:933 (2) - same as 00:18:862 (3) -
01:32:165 (4) - ah yeah kinda nazi but i guess NC it for readbable as 1/4 space with previous
01:33:415 (4) - imo ctrl+G this with (5). a huge jump here doesn't match with any music. also a forced flow that i got between 01:33:237 (3,4) - cause too sharply
01:45:915 (3) - hmm a little bit weird flow from (2) to (3) imo, hard to read it i guess. yeah i prefer to move the (3) to 280,200 for easier flow
01:52:522 (1) - aw this is killing player asdf. yeah i'm not like with flow that go to upward so i guess better if flow to downward instead. how about move this circle to 188,324?

Insane

00:11:094 (3) - you need to NC this since stanza(downbeat) also warning about 1/4 huge jump
00:14:309 (2) - ctrl+G this for better flow. no need to explain it. too obviously why i guess
00:18:237 (7) - too confusing imo. cause stacked/overlap with (6) together
00:20:916 (9) - nazi, tail 224,64 for better flow of jump
00:22:166 (6) - flow could be better here. it's bad cause you did a opposite with slider's body so yeah. a kinda weird for me. try https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1291554 instead
00:36:630 (6,1) - swap NC here. NC for slider to emphasize the music (you gave finish on it too)
00:37:344 (3) - NC for SV change here, obviously
00:46:094 (3,4) - pretty killing player's hands asdf. can you lower the distance of it? DX
00:49:665 (5) - NC for stanza and SV change here
01:12:165 (2) - same as 00:37:344 (3) -
01:52:612 (1) - extend the spinner to 01:59:665 - ? the string sound end in this time (and consistency with GD-ers)
Yeah. it quite Hard imo. i prefer HP8 OD8 and name this diff as Extra. especially for 1/4 circle jump

Good Luck

Fycho

Global Moderator

2,490 posts

Joined August 2012

Fycho 11 years ago

Hollow Wings wrote:
as ur req
already has +9 sp without any mod huehue
Fycho's Insane
00:12:433 存在感那么强的vocal都放过么额加了
00:23:594 (4,5,6,7,1) - 直线？换节奏了这
01:17:880 (6,7,8,9,1) - ds。。。fixed
good luck

kamisamaaa wrote:
[飞球insane]
00:23:683 (5) - 这里没音不是五连额 00:24:219这里明明是三连。。。这段的节奏应该是3个三连+1个五连才对吧。。。而且是渐强的感觉你这么下节奏感觉有点怪好，改成三连了
妈蛋又是一个神图没啥可摸
一个跟鼓点一个跟vocal简直碉堡

Tari wrote:
[Fycho]

00:12:165 (4) - Hmm, maybe move the note like this : http://puu.sh/6AS8K.jpg and add an extra note too, seems little more challenging for a insane and more balanced changed the rhythm
00:33:415 (3,4) - ? I think it's suppose to bl anket here orz, maybe you can try to make it blanket here? and try to move 4 so it can blanket slider 2 in this combo, like this : http://puu.sh/6ASnb.jpg sorry I am not going to use blanket ere
00:53:415 (4,1,2) - To match with the previous here 00:50:915 (1,1) - you need to add a new combo at 00:53:415 (4) - and 00:54:308 (2) - NC fixed
00:57:701 (4) - The stacking isn't correct, the note here needs to be stacked with the slider end 00:56:630 (1) - perfectly.ok
00:58:951 (3,4) - I'd prefer if you remove the note at 4 and reverse the previous slider, feels more uptight and blending with the jump, since your focus is the jump ok
01:19:308 (3) - Try to make it so this notes, get blanketed, personally I'd like you to revise this whole triangle here 01:19:130 (2,3,4) - , you'll still keep about the same direction movement, just a little more nicer, how about try this : http://puu.sh/6ASOv.jpgno good imo,01:19:487 (4,1) - flow will be bad
01:27:344 (2) - Maybe since you have the midpoint here you can move it up more so it creates a curve up? or else I think the midpoint in the slider is pretty useless. like this : http://puu.sh/6ASU9.jpgI like nearly-straigt slider here

Xinely wrote:
你好啊! M4M here 你好

Fycho's Insane
00:03:952 (1) - well tbh i feel a kinda weird when you gave a huge jump for 00:03:594 - when i heard the 00:03:951 - louder than 00:03:594 - . i guess better give a huge jump to downbeat here since loud of music. yeah just personal taste It's no problem:3
00:08:415 (2) - vocal of 00:08:772 - is really fit with a huge jump imo so i would to make a jump here. try to tweak the 00:08:415 (2) - become like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1291420 I don't want make beginning too hard
00:18:862 (3) - aa imo it's kinda hard to read as 1/2 also this song have high bpm so 1/4 jump circle like this a little hard imo. how about use a consistency spacing with 0,9x example =w=no problem this as many testers and I played
00:19:487 (6,1) - imo change this objects with 1/1 slider like http://puu.sh/6CvgH.jpg. it emphasize the string sound in 00:19:487 - better sorry I'd like tu put slider head at downbeat
00:24:844 (6) - imo this jump is quite fast and far so give NC to warning it cause a huge jump? pretty easier to read imo ~ ok added nc
00:37:165 (2) - personal taste, i would to move this circle to 184,212. just prefer about flow on this ~I'd like to use jump because this is a strong beat
01:01:987 (4,5,6,7) - imo flow between them isn't really good to play 01:52:612 (1) - ay so i would suggest to change flow between them. maybe like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1291471 I am op purpse here, to match the music and a little jump and chanllenging
01:09:933 (2) - same as 00:18:862 (3) -removed this note since I find it's overmapped orz
01:32:165 (4) - ah yeah kinda nazi but i guess NC it for readbable as 1/4 space with previous NC don't need at here since it will break my nc pattern
01:33:415 (4) - imo ctrl+G this with (5). a huge jump here doesn't match with any music. also a forced flow that i got between 01:33:237 (3,4) - cause too sharplychanged this to another suitable jumps xD
01:45:915 (3) - hmm a little bit weird flow from (2) to (3) imo, hard to read it i guess. yeah i prefer to move the (3) to 280,200 for easier flowIt's not hard imo
01:52:522 (1) - aw this is killing player asdf. yeah i'm not like with flow that go to upward so i guess better if flow to downward instead. how about move this circle to 188,324? I'd like a jump on the other direction to match the strong downbeat

Good Luck

thanks for modding~

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InabaTewi

InabaTewi 11 years ago

烤肉我好香草你

Kinomi

1,229 posts

Joined August 2012

Topic Starter

Kinomi 11 years ago

InabaTewi wrote:
烤肉我好香草你

are you sb？

Kinomi

1,229 posts

Joined August 2012

Topic Starter

Kinomi 11 years ago

update GDs

AllStar12

AllStar12 wrote:
M4M here! Lets see here:
Note:
• Have the Grid Snap disabled in order to do these re-positioning and fixes
• Not sure if the changes I made actually affects the hitsounds, if it does then remember where you placed those hitsounds

[General]
Not sure if it's a problem but the offsets are different for 615's Easy and Yuki's Hard:
Creator, Fycho and ZZH's offset: 2523

615 and Yuki's offset: 3952
Don't think the inherited warnings matters (unless it's talking about the offset) but there are warnings for the song setup so I suggest copy the creator's song setup info (However, you missed out tagging ZZHBOY as well so just copy and paste the info provided below):
Artist: 佐咲紗花
Romanised Artist: Sasaki Sayaka
Title: 恋さくミライ
Romanised Title: Koi Saku Mirai
Source: 恋がさくころ桜どき
Tags: Koi ga Saku Koro Sakura Doki ぱれっと palette galgame visual novel eroge baldrace Fycho [Minakami Yuki] 615915887 ZZHBOY
01:52:522 (1) - The creator(Tsukuyomi) and ZZH's spinner time at then end end at a different time from Yuki, 615 and Fycho's difficulties, suggest choosing a specific time for everyone to end at:
Tsukuyomi's spinner time ends at: 01:56:808
ZZHBOY's spinner time ends at: 01:59:844
Fycho's spinner time ends at: 01:59:665
615915887 and Minakami Yuki's spinner time ends at: 01:59:666 - (I don't know why it's like that, maybe it's because of the offset?)

all fixed
[Insane]
I believe there's two unsnapped notes in this difficulty (believe you have to stretch them out again: fixed
• 01:23:594 (1) -
• 01:23:772 (2) -

00:26:094 (3) - Finish on the slider's head? ok
00:32:523 (1) - Missing clap on the slider's head yeah
01:28:505 (2) - Remove clap on the slider's head? i follow the music to add it
01:29:487 (3) - Remove clap on the slider's head? ^

Suggestions and Ideas
00:20:201 (3,4,5,6,7) - If you want, try out the blanket shown here? fixed
[box=Picture and coordinates]
• 00:20:291 (4) - x: 164 y: 270
• 00:20:380 (5) - x: 126 y: 283
• 00:20:469 (6) - x: 86 y: 283
• 00:20:559 (7) - x: 47 y: 269

Test play for Insane Difficulty

Result

1st Attempt:

2nd Attempt:

Comments: Not really going to touch this as well because I enjoyed the way it really is as of now and during my testplay. I don't really want to try any unnecessary false accusation on this difficulty. I just got misses due to my own mistakes here as well. Everything seems to be fine for me, just issues with the unsnapped sliders and hitsounds and it's good (for me). Overall, I liked it ^^
Actual level of difficulty that this can be under : Insane ~ Expert

IamKwaN

IamKwaN wrote:
[General]
BG的Size是1024*728,找個1024*768的吧
ZZH的Normal跟其他難度的Tags, Source和Unicode title+artist不一致
有些難度的Letterbox during breaks跟Offset不一樣
都改了
[Insane]
00:10:737 (1,2) - 這裡的spacing會不會太遠,還不是Kiai Time 不会。。
00:18:059 (6,7) - 這個flow感覺很奇怪 0.0没啥奇怪呀
00:21:094 (1) - 個人感覺沒必要1.5x SV, 整段音樂都只是過渡段打着没啥问题0.0
00:45:915 (2,3) - Spacing真的大丈夫? 没关系的啦
01:29:487 (3) - 這個轉SV可以有

kamisamaaa

kamisamaaa wrote:
[insane]
00:11:094 (3) - 这个头加上whistle？因为这里你是跟着背景那个音的 00:10:737 (1,2,3) - 这三个是在加强的然后3的时候达到最强没道理前两个有whistle 这个反而没有额好
00:15:201 (6) - 感觉这个whistle不如加到00:15:023 (5) - 上按音调加的
00:22:523 (1) - 头上加一个whistle？这里是重音额我是跟提琴加的
01:28:505 (2) - 这个头上那个clap感觉很违和啊虽然鼓点确实是这样子的两声了（可能是因为人声比较大然后造成的影响）建议想飞球一样吧蓝线空下来舒服得多不好啊
01:39:487 (1) - ctrl+G？好

Tari

Tari wrote:
Hi Hi :3
[Insane]

00:22:166 (6) - Why don't you change this slider by copying the previous slider 00:21:809 (5) - ? Not big deal. but find this little odd since that'll make the map little make consistent, and the makes slider less stick out. fix
00:28:594 (2) - So much juuumpinggg, better to try less back and forth movement and form a triangular cursor movement like this : http://puu.sh/6AVgQ.jpgi think it's fine :3
00:45:915 (2,3) - I don't think this jump is possible LOL, I know you are trying to make blanket better that's why too much distance before the note that It'll really not even playable lol. so as this 00:46:272 (4) - omg ah it's playable,when you use 1/4 slider,only take care of the spacing of it's head with the note before or later,than change the direction of tail for flow
01:05:201 (7) - Maybe move ti to here? http://puu.sh/6AVyV.jpg would be better orz. it will be harder..
01:05:380 (1) - Add a whistle to the start of this slider sounds nice? ok
00:11:094 (3) - Same whistle to the start sounds nice. ok
00:16:094 (4) - Whistle to the end here
00:16:809 (8) - ^ same add whistle.
00:17:523 (4) - ^ same add whistle.
00:18:773 (3) - To the end of the slider here
00:19:487 (6) - Remove whistle from start and add to end instead.
00:21:809 (5) - ^ I think you know where to add them now orz.
i follow violin not down beat
01:19:665 (1,2) - The jump to the next note would be better if you did this : http://puu.sh/6AW2A.jpg since you are trying to not emphasize the movement to 2 but the note to the slider it'll give less focus on 2 and more on 3 keep current one
01:23:951 (3) - Add a new combo here? it doesn't match with 01:11:808 (1,2) - and those two notes have a separate combo right before a new chorus i take these 3 as a triangle pattern
01:33:594 (4) - Better to make slider look like this : http://puu.sh/6AWgC.jpg
ok

Xinely

Xinely wrote:
你好啊! M4M here 你好！

Insane
00:11:094 (3) - you need to NC this since stanza(downbeat) also warning about 1/4 huge jump k
00:14:309 (2) - ctrl+G this for better flow. no need to explain it. too obviously why i guess ok
00:18:237 (7) - too confusing imo. cause stacked/overlap with (6) together it's fine imo
00:20:916 (9) - nazi, tail 224,64 for better flow of jump i prefer current one
00:22:166 (6) - flow could be better here. it's bad cause you did a opposite with slider's body so yeah. a kinda weird for me. try https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1291554 instead it's intention and i tink it;s fine 0.0
00:36:630 (6,1) - swap NC here. NC for slider to emphasize the music (you gave finish on it too) i think it's unecessary
00:37:344 (3) - NC for SV change here, obviously it's easy to read when click
00:46:094 (3,4) - pretty killing player's hands asdf. can you lower the distance of it? DX it's fine :3 i promise!
00:49:665 (5) - NC for stanza and SV change here i think it's unecessary
01:12:165 (2) - same as 00:37:344 (3) - ^
01:52:612 (1) - extend the spinner to 01:59:665 - ? the string sound end in this time (and consistency with GD-ers) k
Yeah. it quite Hard imo. i prefer HP8 OD8 and name this diff as Extra. especially for 1/4 circle jump
actually it is easier than fycho 's diff xD

Good Luck

Last edited by Kinomi 11 years ago, edited 2 times in total.

Kinomi

1,229 posts

Joined August 2012

Topic Starter

Kinomi 11 years ago

ah ....mistake

smallboat

1,687 posts

Joined January 2010

smallboat 11 years ago

Hi,BBQ, QQ group req.

Red words: Should be fix it.
Blue words : I recommended suggestion.
Black words : In my personal opinion.

[General]

紙張波跟飛球的Stack Leniency 都是7，其他都是4，建議都保持原來的7就好?

[615's Easy] 多餘的綠線:00:37:880

00:11:094 (2) - 我覺得很適合在開頭加whistle怎麼不加。 (3)開頭都加了
00:22:523 (3) - 沒包好
00:49:309 (4) - 如果是我我會照著弧度擺。
01:06:809 (1,2) - 強烈建議裡面紅線finish換掉，換成whistle，這樣連續的finish顯然很noisy。
01:09:666 (3) - 把這刪掉放一個spinner，前後都大白線試試?
01:13:951 (4) - 開頭加whistle試試。 (其實可以試試大白線沒加到的音效加個whistle做效果)
01:16:809 (3) - ^
01:19:666 (3) - ^
01:25:380 (2) - ^

[ZZH's Normal]

00:15:380 (1) - 感覺+whistle沒什麼效果音，是加finish吧?
00:34:308 (4) - 忘了+whistle? 不是依照24加嗎?
00:56:451 (3) - ^
00:48:951 (5) - 我覺得你這個是要跟人聲吧，那麼後面那個短滑條我覺得不需要，這個5拉成1/1長條不就OK了?
00:56:808 (4,5) - 如果你要跟人聲的話，這邊節奏有點怪，我認為是這樣:

SPOILER

01:02:522 (4) - 這個鼓點的我覺得用1/1長條就好了比較好掌握滑順。(紅線沒節奏阿)
01:04:487 (2,3,4,5,6) - 也是很難掌握的節奏有時跟人聲或鼓聲，尤其234，改完也跟前面那一段比較一下 :

SPOILER

01:24:487 (4) - 或許能複製(3)的，形成一個對稱 (另外中間那一個點根本沒用到要不要取消?)
01:25:737 (1) - 看不出來有彎。
01:28:772 (2) - 連續3個finish有點突兀，這個換成whistle?
01:34:487 (2) - 開頭whistle。
01:35:022 (3) - 尾端whistle。
01:44:308 (2) - 跟前面呈三角。
01:52:522 (1) - 為什麼spinner尾端會在紅線? 建議跟615一樣吧。

[Yuki's Hard] 節奏沒什麼，以下主要都音效。

01:02:523 (5) - 尾端感覺不太好看..orz

01:26:809 (1) - 開頭應該是finish，而不是whistle?
01:27:701 (3) - +whistle (因為 01:28:059 (1) 這邊加了，所以我覺得前面2個沒加whistle感覺有點空，至少加一個?)
01:33:237 (3) - 01:32:880 (2,4) 開頭都加了clap，那這個要不要+個whistle在滑條頭凸顯人聲?
01:38:773 (3) - 個人感覺這滑條頭也能+whistle，因為01:38:237 (1) 你這有+了(同旋律)。加了我覺得不錯。
01:39:487 (3) - ^
01:40:201 (3) - ^
01:41:809 (3) - ^

[Fycho's Insane]

01:14:665 (3) - 前面的whistle都加在紅線上，這個加在白線要不要去掉?
01:26:094 (3) - ^

01:25:737 (2) - 或許whistle加在這滑條尾上，跟前段一樣
01:26:272 (5) - +whistle
01:37:701 (5) - ^
01:40:201 (4) - ^ (這個建議加一下，因為01:43:058 (3) 這長條都加了)

[Insane]

00:35:023 (4,5) - 兩個選起來 Ctrl+G 一下不就很flow了?
00:36:273 (4) - 感覺尾端可以疊在(6)滑條頭。
00:42:522 (1) - 或許尾端能加個whistle
00:52:165 (6) - 這樣聽音樂，藍線上沒有節奏呢，可以考慮一下看要不要放紅白線就好比較自然。
01:05:915 (3) - 似乎跟前面沒完全重疊。

[Other]
1.If you have any mod above problems, you can PM or in-game to me.
2.Hope to you ranked.
3.Hope my mod is useful to you.

Koiyuki

Beatmap Nominator

2,571 posts

Joined March 2013

Koiyuki 11 years ago

Xinely wrote:

Hard
00:05:380 (1,2) - same as Normal here. should be like http://puu.sh/6CjCW.jpg or http://puu.sh/6CpPz.jpg fixed
00:08:058 - hmm music is increasing here. try add whistle to emphasize that music? ok
00:11:094 (1) - well just personal taste about rhythm. how about make rhythm like http://puu.sh/6CsRy.jpg for emphasize the vocal of red tick here? en i keep mine
00:12:523 (1) - nazi, flow could be better here if you try to move the tail to 492,36 short slider doesn't need this <3
00:14:666 (3) - NC this to marking there is SV changing here it's not necessary imo
00:15:380 (1) - extend the spinner to 00:18:237 - when hearing the music i prefer to end the spinner here since the string sound still appear in this time follow vocal here >.<
00:26:809 - altho it's a low sound but cymbal is appear here. so use finish instead whistle clap ok
00:33:951 - add whistle here to emphasize the piano sound ok
00:34:844 (3) - imo flow could be better here. hard to explain but i prefer to change it like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1291298 keep mine because of avioding the overlap
00:42:523 (1) - imo for 00:42:701 - if you follow this guitar sound i guess you need to map 00:42:790 - too since they have similar sound (i feel it, kinda weird for me). but i prefer to change this slider become 1/1 follow but not all follow, kinda I need to map 00:42:076 - and 00:42:433 - ? it's enough now~
00:43:951 (1) - tbh the flow isn't really good here. i prefer to ctrl+G this for natural flow but since you did a pattern from 1 until 4.. yeah just saying here >.<
00:57:344 (2) - many of repeats isn't good to play for Hard diff. Really. http://puu.sh/6CtTQ.jpg instead ok
00:59:130 - i would suggest to add note here to following vocal. somehow i feel kinda empty here I keep it
01:10:201 (4) - i don't like many of repeats altho 1/4 here. so divide it become 2 like http://puu.sh/6Cu4r.jpg ? nope
01:13:951 - no need for finish. no cymbal sound. finish makes quite loud sound imo change to whistle
01:25:201 (5) - nazi, try to move 128|50 to keep flow of 01:24:844 (3,4,5) - . yeah your flow a little bit different between them. a kinda uncomfortable for me :p
01:28:773 (3) - NC for marking as anti jump ok
01:36:630 (1,3) - dunno, but i prefer to these sliders become symmetrical each other :P
01:51:809 (1) - same as 01:10:201 (4) - http://puu.sh/6CuAR.jpg keep that

smallboat wrote:
[Yuki's Hard] 節奏沒什麼，以下主要都音效。

01:02:523 (5) - 尾端感覺不太好看..orz orz

01:26:809 (1) - 開頭應該是finish，而不是whistle? 我觉得还是whi好
01:27:701 (3) - +whistle (因為 01:28:059 (1) 這邊加了，所以我覺得前面2個沒加whistle感覺有點空，至少加一個?) 不好
01:33:237 (3) - 01:32:880 (2,4) 開頭都加了clap，那這個要不要+個whistle在滑條頭凸顯人聲? 好
01:38:773 (3) - 個人感覺這滑條頭也能+whistle，因為01:38:237 (1) 你這有+了(同旋律)。加了我覺得不錯。好
01:39:487 (3) - ^ ^
01:40:201 (3) - ^ ^
01:41:809 (3) - ^ 这个加了怪怪的

thanks for modding
http://puu.sh/6Ih3k.osu

YoshinoSakura

472 posts

Joined January 2011

YoshinoSakura 11 years ago

媽蛋那麼多mod

sad圈不到那麼多了，沒法一個一個回惹。。

hw

all fix

sksmwkd125

第一條沒改

12

00:35:023 (4) - Missing clap? added
00:35:380 (1) - Missing clap on tail added
01:16:809 (3) - Missing clap on tail no miss there
01:39:666 (3) - Have a whistle on the slider's tail? See if you like it
01:42:523 (3) - Have a whistle on the slider's tail? seems strange

Suggestions and Ideas

Add a note at 01:46:809 ? ok

IamKwaN wrote:
[615的Easy]
00:36:094 (2) - 尾node的位置:(248,208) 沒看懂。。
00:57:523 (4) - 我會將這slider的頭跟00:56:630 (3) 的尾巴成一直線很有道理
01:19:666 (3) - 這滑條捕捉不到01:20:023 的鼓點,然後看前面的風格也不是跟歌詞的mapping,所以我會建議這樣放: 我覺得重音在01:20:201
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01:28:237 - 這裡的rhythm有點奇怪,我建議這樣加了個note
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01:49:666 (1) - 在01:52:166 完結,然後01:52:701 (1) 開01:52:523 開始; 如果按照現在的位置的話,那就比normal還要困難了 spinner關係不大吧

Tari wrote:
[Easy]

00:11:094 (2) - The start of the slider should have a whistle too because the piano there is really strong. and it doesn't sound abusive because the whistles sound really nice with the song no matter how many you use hehe.ok
00:09:666 (3) - Not sure, but probably add a finish here? the music is strong enough here for you to add a finish to, but you can lower the volume for this finish if it sounds too loud for you.if so,there should be too many finish lol
00:23:594 (4) - This doesn't perfectly stack to the end of 00:21:808 (2) - you need to move this note to the x coordinate of 339 and I already know your trying to stack the fixed
00:23:951 (1) - Add whistle in the start of the slider? seems a little empty without any hitsounds here and its to put some focus on the starting beat of this slider.ok
00:40:737 (4) - Hmm, why did you break symmetry in this pattern orz? Imo you should make sure this note is in the same y-axis as 00:40:737 (4) - basically you need to make sure this is somewhere around y: 112 so your symmetry can be kept. abd then make the following notes to keep spacing orz did i break that lol
00:38:237 (1) - I'm sorry, but I think you should add clap to the tick sound, some sliders sound too quiet and empty without any claps in the slider ticks. like add them here i should ask the map creator first..
00:55:380 (1) - For the end of the slider try to use samplset normal and additions normal? I think it sounds really nice there.i think no special changes
00:59:487 (2) - ^ same add it to the end of the slider here too.same
01:03:951 (1) - Add whistle to the start of the slider? it sounds a little empty without it.ok
01:09:666 (3) - Put at the same place as 01:06:809 (1) - ? I think it flows better that way, anyways here's how it should look like : http://puu.sh/6zGax.jpg the flow from 2 to 3 is better. both are good
01:15:380 (1) - Curve this a little bit to the left? I think it creates better flow to the next note, anyways here's how it looks like : http://puu.sh/6zGf0.jpg hehe should try it seems good
01:22:523 (2) - Move to same location as 01:19:666 (3) - please, I think it would be better anyways to do that, it looks unclean really. but it's a little bit far
01:25:380 (2) - Whistle to the start of the slider sounds great? maybe add it no sorry
01:26:809 (1) - ^ same ok
01:31:094 (3) - Add a curve to the left of the slider would be better.it's okay
01:33:237 (2) - You obviously missed a finish to the end of the slider here, it's quite obvious.added
01:38:237 (1) - Add a whistle to the start of the slider? it sounds much better.ok
01:43:951 (1) - Add Whistle?ok

Xinely wrote:
Easy
00:11:094 - i guess you need to add whistle on this time since the music is like crystal sound that need emphasize with whistle also for consistency with previous. (feel empty w/o hitsound too imo) added
00:26:809 (1) - no need clap on head since the sound of this time only cymbal sound removed
00:30:380 (2) - tbh i'm not really like the flow in this slider to 00:31:094 (3) - because you did a left diagonal only. the line is same. seems like uncomfortable. try http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1290158 to keep consistency flow downward and then upward? xD your idea seems great but i can't understand complex english XD
00:32:701 - for this diff i guess you need to add clap on tick of slider (00:32:880 - ). since your diff using clap on every objects. it become quite weird when the tick being silent here.
00:34:308 - same as above asking creator lol
00:36:094 (2) - blanket between 00:35:380 (1,2) - could be better here. tweaked the blanket i got this for reference fixed a bithttps://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1290184
00:37:880 - unnecessary greenline. remove it lol
00:39:666 (3) - how nazi, 1 grid left to make better symmetrical between (1) and (3)? it's make the pattern neater too imook
00:43:951 (1) - no need finish on head for this slider. hear the music. doesn't have any cymbal sound and quite relax imo changed to whistle
00:46:809 (1) - nazi, tail 1 grid down to make better blanket lol ok lol
00:48:951 (3,4) - imo too many of straight line of flow here make an uncomfortable movement. well try to make a little bit of curving flow here.curved a bit
00:56:094 - imo sound of this time is quite low. you need to map this instead following vocal (redticks) here. so 00:55:380 (1,2,3) - try to change for simple rhythm like http://puu.sh/6Cb7O.jpg instead? tbh your Easy is little bit Hard cause 3 stars so i guess try to lower it a little too with this rhythm no sorry
01:06:809 (1,2) - remove all finishes for both heads and tails. obviously since the music is quite relax and no cymbal sounds (even vocal become a little bit strong) better to remove its imo ok
01:11:808 - imo the music and vocal in this time is quite low. i would like to remove whistle here and keep whistle on tail since the music is become loud on that time seems good on another way
01:14:665 - well will break your consistency but the music of this time is quite loud and i feel an empty here. add whistle to emphasize the music? but it seems good
01:21:094 (1) - no need finish on head and tail. no cymbal sounds here. just learn patterns from fycho
01:22:522 - same as 01:14:665 -changed
01:25:380 (2) - nazi, blanket could be smoother here imo. flow a little bit better too. move the 2nd node to 120,228 for its ok
01:28:773 (3,4) - it will be better and easier if you change these circles become one slider here. obviously sorry,just emphasizing
01:31:630 - the music on this time is cymbal. you need to map this obviously, so 01:31:094 (3,4) - change them become like http://puu.sh/6Cc9r.jpg instead changed
01:44:666 (2) - this suppose to make blanket right? if yes blanket in here could be better imo like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1290436 why i see nno changes lol
01:46:808 - need to map this time. obviously because cymbal(+hard music) sound added
Neat diff here

InabaTewi wrote:
烤肉我好香草你

smallboat wrote:
[615's Easy] 多餘的綠線:00:37:880 一閃

00:11:094 (2) - 我覺得很適合在開頭加whistle怎麼不加。 (3)開頭都加了完了已經有兩個modder提過這個問題惹
00:22:523 (3) - 沒包好改惹
00:49:309 (4) - 如果是我我會照著弧度擺。好
01:06:809 (1,2) - 強烈建議裡面紅線finish換掉，換成whistle，這樣連續的finish顯然很noisy。好
01:09:666 (3) - 把這刪掉放一個spinner，前後都大白線試試?這兒有節奏很快的鼓，所以用spinner代替啦
01:13:951 (4) - 開頭加whistle試試。 (其實可以試試大白線沒加到的音效加個whistle做效果)
01:16:809 (3) - ^
01:19:666 (3) - ^
01:25:380 (2) - ^都加了

謝謝mod

tags還是不一樣捏？

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: .mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 71630
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.4
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Koi Saku Mirai
TitleUnicode:恋さくミライ
Artist:Sasaki Sayaka
ArtistUnicode:佐咲紗花
Creator:Tsukuyomi
Version:615's Easy
Source:恋がさくころ桜どき
Tags:Koi ga Saku Koro Sakura Doki ぱれっと palette galgame visual novel eroge baldrace Fycho [Minakami Yuki] 615915887 ZZHBOY
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Zero__wind

osu! Alumni

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Joined August 2012

Zero__wind 11 years ago

Hi, mod from popner's modding team

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General
没啥问题

Insane
00:10:737 (1,2,1) - 节奏不太自然因为你前面当时跟着vocal起长滑条的而00:10:915 - 这里却不是而是跟了伴奏又是个跳就显得有点突兀
00:15:023 (5) - 这咋没clap
00:18:237 (7,1) - 感觉互换NC更有意义因为00:18:237 (7,1,2,3) - 这几个音是连贯的比较适合放在一组里
00:24:844 (6) - 可以考虑想个梗把这换成1/4 slider啊
00:26:451 (4) - 我的话会选择换成个加速的3/4 slider
00:27:166 (2) - 这段开始 whistle加得完全不知所云建议你选择一种固定的模式比如跟人声里面音调比较高力度相对强的音或者就是跟伴奏里的旋律音选一种在这个段落都保持这种用法不然现在这样非常奇怪而且你那clap和whistle一起加也不咋好听
00:29:130 (4,5,6,1) - 有点不太舒服因为你前面456构成的结构或者说flow 会让人觉得你想要上下的变角度的对跳那样的话1比较适合放在6的左下方向然后顺时针往上走但你现在这个位置就很别扭建议你调整5的位置和00:28:416 (1) - 叠起来或者和00:30:202 (3) - 叠起来反正就中间这一带的位置这样的话00:29:130 (4,5,6) - 就会构成一个逆时针的锐角三角形再跳到后面的1就相当于一个逆时针flow的延续了会自然很多
00:36:451 (5) - 其实这头上还少一个S:C2的clap啊虽然不是啥大问题
00:41:094 (1) - 头上可whistle 伴奏里有一个电子音“嘀” =。=
00:51:719 (4) - 我的话会倾向于这里也whistle
01:00:558 (7,8) - 这两个clap去掉然后在01:00:737 (1) - 的头上加一个clap会更合曲
01:03:772 (9) - 怎么看着就这么弯呢
01:05:915 (3) - 头上whistle一个伴奏里有比较明显的高音
01:09:844 (2,3) - clap去掉两个都加finish我觉得听着很棒
01:14:308 (2) - 稍微往右挪一些打起来1 2 3的弧线自然一些如果觉得会离3太近就把2345一起往右挪一些
01:20:201 (3) - 为何感觉CTRL+G flow更佳如果改的话还是让后面的circle叠在尾巴上反正相应调整一下也不咋影响后面的跳
01:22:701 (1,2) - 这里和前面pre-kiai的地方一样别的音效都去掉 double finish 爽号码
01:23:237 (6,1) - 为何要挨着分开好看些还有就是你01:23:594 (1,2,3) - 构成的结构也有点奇怪 1和2是向内侧弯的 3是向外侧不如把1和2也改成像外侧弯曲感觉更搭配一些毕竟3没法改
01:25:737 (2) - 这太抠唆了好歹人家还带着个clap呢和01:25:201 (8) - 叠要好得多
01:35:380 (1) - 这咋没1.5倍速？
01:43:951 (1) - 咋感觉这个格外地弯
01:52:522 (9) - 最后的这个clap去掉好听些
没了

Fycho's Insane
OD8真是要死我觉得明明应该烤肉的diff用8的喧宾夺主啊
00:23:772 (5) - 可whistle 毕竟明显的旋律音
00:25:022 (2) - 感觉这一拍还是适合soft clap
00:26:451 (1) - 头上有个挺明显的clap为何不加
00:35:380 (1) - 跟后面串子有点碰到了不太好看微调一下滑条或者把串子往左来一点
00:42:343 (6,1) - 1头上这个whistle比较明显的错位了应该加在6
00:45:201 (7,1) - ^ 应该把1的whistle挪到7
00:49:308 (3) - 头上whistle？或者按你的用法用normal？
00:56:630 (1) - 头上clap合适一些 normal的那一拍实际上落在这滑条中间的白线
01:26:808 (1) - 长白线whistle还是有点奇怪虽然01:25:380 (1) - 这个也是可能因为26秒这个前面的01:26:630 (8) - 刚有过一个whistle了再加就有点不舒服
01:31:094 (1) - 明显头上finish没了
01:37:165 (2) - 尾巴上whistle一个和01:36:272 (6,1) - 它们两个头上的是呼应的
01:40:201 (4) - 头上whistle
01:41:094 (1,3) - 感觉看着有点奇怪
01:52:522 (1) - 感觉就一个soft finish就行 normal略违和

Yuki's Hard
00:26:809 (1) - 头上的whistle形单影只格格不入
00:49:666 (1) - 尾巴上clap明显胡乱加的……删掉吧那里什么音都没有的
00:56:809 (1) - 这个也是头上明显是不适合clap的只留折返点的那个就行
00:57:344 (2) - 这什么激霸啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊我HD打到这里的是都吓哭了求求你别折返这么多遍行么太诡异了=。=
01:00:023 (2) - 头上的clap是不合适的或者别加或者像00:59:309 (3) - 用normal 我觉得啥都别加就挺好
01:09:844 (2,3) - 每次都先跳到3再跳到2……可能是个人问题
01:20:201 (2) - 前面的1用normal finish这里只给个whistle 也太不搭调了吧……好歹也得用个soft finish是不头上明显还是挺重的一拍有回音的
01:22:166 (4,5) - 这节奏有问题的 01:22:522 - 这条白线上没有拍子的白线上的重音提前到前面那条红线上去了应该在01:22:165 - 用一个circle 然后从01:22:344 - 起一个1/1 slider 最后01:22:880 - 补个circle
01:28:059 (1) - 这NC不太明白一个是因为你从排列上看明显和01:27:344 (2,3) - 是同属于一个结构里的所以它们比较适合在一个组里从节奏上看后面的01:28:773 (3,4,5) - 是属于特殊的节奏应该单独拿出来的所以01:28:059 (1,3) - 应该互换NC
01:31:094 (1) - 应该换finish 有回音的重拍
01:38:773 (3,3) - 头上都应该whistle 这和01:38:237 (1) - 头上的whistle是呼应的
01:45:916 (3,4) - 3和4的头上都finish来强调重音

ZZH's Normal
00:47:344 (2) - 头上whistle配合人声?
01:02:522 (4) - 这节奏啥意思？你01:01:629 (2) - 这里还在更人声把白线上的鼓都扔了这里又突然跑去跟伴奏？明显应该从01:02:344 - 继续起滑条才是连贯的节奏
01:03:951 (1) - 后面这一组combo有同样的问题你看从01:06:808 (1) - 开始又想明白了……为啥中间那段就=。=
01:29:487 (4) - 头上留一个finish就行了两个一起加听着怪怪的

615's Easy
这diff做太难了简化节奏吧像00:26:809 (1) - S:C2的这一段在整首曲子里属于相对较弱的段落却把节奏铺得这么密全都连续1/1 而后面却很多2/1和3/2 这是很不合理的把这一段的节奏弄稀疏一些 star rating应该还能有救哦不对615美丽
00:11:094 (2) - 头上不whistle个？
01:19:665 (3) - 头上很重要的finish美丽
01:31:094 (3) - ^ 嘛其实01:31:094 (3,4) - 更适合换成一个3/2 reverse 因为实际上01:31:630 - 这红线上这一拍要重要得多和前面白线相比的话

That's all
Good luck

Koiyuki

Beatmap Nominator

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Joined March 2013

Koiyuki 11 years ago

Zero__wind wrote:
Yuki's Hard
00:26:809 (1) - 头上的whistle形单影只格格不入前面就改成fin了烤肉没跟新
00:49:666 (1) - 尾巴上clap明显胡乱加的……删掉吧那里什么音都没有的
00:56:809 (1) - 这个也是头上明显是不适合clap的只留折返点的那个就行好
00:57:344 (2) - 这什么激霸啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊我HD打到这里的是都吓哭了求求你别折返这么多遍行么太诡异了=。=[/color] 前面就改了烤肉没跟新
01:00:023 (2) - 头上的clap是不合适的或者别加或者像00:59:309 (3) - 用normal 我觉得啥都别加就挺好好
01:09:844 (2,3) - 每次都先跳到3再跳到2……可能是个人问题 huehue
01:20:201 (2) - 前面的1用normal finish这里只给个whistle 也太不搭调了吧……好歹也得用个soft finish是不头上明显还是挺重的一拍有回音的好
01:22:166 (4,5) - 这节奏有问题的 01:22:522 - 这条白线上没有拍子的白线上的重音提前到前面那条红线上去了应该在01:22:165 - 用一个circle 然后从01:22:344 - 起一个1/1 slider 最后01:22:880 - 补个circle
01:28:059 (1) - 这NC不太明白一个是因为你从排列上看明显和01:27:344 (2,3) - 是同属于一个结构里的所以它们比较适合在一个组里从节奏上看后面的01:28:773 (3,4,5) - 是属于特殊的节奏应该单独拿出来的所以01:28:059 (1,3) - 应该互换NC[/color] 前面就改了烤肉没跟新
01:31:094 (1) - 应该换finish 有回音的重拍好
01:38:773 (3,3) - 头上都应该whistle 这和01:38:237 (1) - 头上的whistle是呼应的前面就改了烤肉没跟新
01:45:916 (3,4) - 3和4的头上都finish来强调重音好

算了还是给代码吧

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Fycho

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Fycho 11 years ago

smallboat wrote:
[Fycho's Insane]

01:14:665 (3) - 前面的whistle都加在紅線上，這個加在白線要不要去掉?
01:26:094 (3) - ^
01:25:737 (2) - 或許whistle加在這滑條尾上，跟前段一樣
01:26:272 (5) - +whistle
01:37:701 (5) - ^
01:40:201 (4) - ^ (這個建議加一下，因為01:43:058 (3) 這長條都加了) 好的

其他的音效不想改了，听起来没原来好

Zero__wind wrote:
Fycho's Insane
OD8真是要死我觉得明明应该烤肉的diff用8的喧宾夺主啊
00:23:772 (5) - 可whistle 毕竟明显的旋律音好
00:25:022 (2) - 感觉这一拍还是适合soft clap好
00:26:451 (1) - 头上有个挺明显的clap为何不加加了影响打击感，这里节奏下的不适合用clap之类的
00:35:380 (1) - 跟后面串子有点碰到了不太好看微调一下滑条或者把串子往左来一点好
00:42:343 (6,1) - 1头上这个whistle比较明显的错位了应该加在6这段有音效pattern就不改了
00:45:201 (7,1) - ^ 应该把1的whistle挪到7^
00:49:308 (3) - 头上whistle？或者按你的用法用normal？同上会影响打击感，个人喜欢把这四个kickslider一起处理
00:56:630 (1) - 头上clap合适一些 normal的那一拍实际上落在这滑条中间的白线好
01:26:808 (1) - 长白线whistle还是有点奇怪虽然01:25:380 (1) - 这个也是可能因为26秒这个前面的01:26:630 (8) - 刚有过一个whistle了再加就有点不舒服这调整了些音效
01:31:094 (1) - 明显头上finish没了恩
01:37:165 (2) - 尾巴上whistle一个和01:36:272 (6,1) - 它们两个头上的是呼应的好
01:40:201 (4) - 头上whistle好
01:41:094 (1,3) - 感觉看着有点奇怪我看着还好啊
01:52:522 (1) - 感觉就一个soft finish就行 normal略违和好

thank you

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YoshinoSakura

472 posts

Joined January 2011

YoshinoSakura 11 years ago

/me dead
烤肉加油

Zero__wind wrote:
615's Easy
这diff做太难了简化节奏吧像00:26:809 (1) - S:C2的这一段在整首曲子里属于相对较弱的段落却把节奏铺得这么密全都连续1/1 而后面却很多2/1和3/2 这是很不合理的把这一段的节奏弄稀疏一些 star rating应该还能有救哦不对615美丽隊，我美麗
00:11:094 (2) - 头上不whistle个？加
01:19:665 (3) - 头上很重要的finish美丽哦
01:31:094 (3) - ^ 嘛其实01:31:094 (3,4) - 更适合换成一个3/2 reverse 因为实际上01:31:630 - 这红线上这一拍要重要得多和前面白线相比的话哭哭哦前面一個modder教我改成這樣的

烤肉記得更新啊

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Kinomi

1,229 posts

Joined August 2012

Topic Starter

Kinomi 11 years ago

smallboat

smallboat wrote:
[Insane]

00:35:023 (4,5) - 兩個選起來 Ctrl+G 一下不就很flow了? 原来那样也行
00:36:273 (4) - 感覺尾端可以疊在(6)滑條頭。故意不叠的，为了好读
00:42:522 (1) - 或許尾端能加個whistle hitsound 打算重新弄一下
00:52:165 (6) - 這樣聽音樂，藍線上沒有節奏呢，可以考慮一下看要不要放紅白線就好比較自然。没啥问题啊
01:05:915 (3) - 似乎跟前面沒完全重疊。叠好了啊。。

Zero__wind

Zero__wind wrote:
Insane
00:10:737 (1,2,1) - 节奏不太自然因为你前面当时跟着vocal起长滑条的而00:10:915 - 这里却不是而是跟了伴奏又是个跳就显得有点突兀
不知道咋改。。
00:15:023 (5) - 这咋没clap 加了
00:18:237 (7,1) - 感觉互换NC更有意义因为00:18:237 (7,1,2,3) - 这几个音是连贯的比较适合放在一组里好
00:24:844 (6) - 可以考虑想个梗把这换成1/4 slider啊好
00:26:451 (4) - 我的话会选择换成个加速的3/4 slider 我柑橘不太厚啊
00:27:166 (2) - 这段开始 whistle加得完全不知所云建议你选择一种固定的模式比如跟人声里面音调比较高力度相对强的音或者就是跟伴奏里的旋律音选一种在这个段落都保持这种用法不然现在这样非常奇怪而且你那clap和whistle一起加也不咋好听
其实是24 whistle..嘛，重新加了下
00:29:130 (4,5,6,1) - 有点不太舒服因为你前面456构成的结构或者说flow 会让人觉得你想要上下的变角度的对跳那样的话1比较适合放在6的左下方向然后顺时针往上走但你现在这个位置就很别扭建议你调整5的位置和00:28:416 (1) - 叠起来或者和00:30:202 (3) - 叠起来反正就中间这一带的位置这样的话00:29:130 (4,5,6) - 就会构成一个逆时针的锐角三角形再跳到后面的1就相当于一个逆时针flow的延续了会自然很多 1改了下
00:36:451 (5) - 其实这头上还少一个S:C2的clap啊虽然不是啥大问题好
00:41:094 (1) - 头上可whistle 伴奏里有一个电子音“嘀” =。= 好
00:51:719 (4) - 我的话会倾向于这里也whistle 好
01:00:558 (7,8) - 这两个clap去掉然后在01:00:737 (1) - 的头上加一个clap会更合曲好
01:03:772 (9) - 怎么看着就这么弯呢 =。=
01:05:915 (3) - 头上whistle一个伴奏里有比较明显的高音好
01:09:844 (2,3) - clap去掉两个都加finish我觉得听着很棒好
01:14:308 (2) - 稍微往右挪一些打起来1 2 3的弧线自然一些如果觉得会离3太近就把2345一起往右挪一些好
01:20:201 (3) - 为何感觉CTRL+G flow更佳如果改的话还是让后面的circle叠在尾巴上反正相应调整一下也不咋影响后面的跳好，不过note叠在头了，其实差不多
01:22:701 (1,2) - 这里和前面pre-kiai的地方一样别的音效都去掉 double finish 爽号码好
01:23:237 (6,1) - 为何要挨着分开好看些还有就是你01:23:594 (1,2,3) - 构成的结构也有点奇怪 1和2是向内侧弯的 3是向外侧不如把1和2也改成像外侧弯曲感觉更搭配一些毕竟3没法改我感觉这样挺爽啊
01:25:737 (2) - 这太抠唆了好歹人家还带着个clap呢和01:25:201 (8) - 叠要好得多好
01:35:380 (1) - 这咋没1.5倍速？改了
01:43:951 (1) - 咋感觉这个格外地弯改了下
01:52:522 (9) - 最后的这个clap去掉好听些好
没了

huoyaoyuan

12 posts

Joined March 2013

huoyaoyuan 11 years ago

[Yuki's Hard]
00:36:273 (4) - 感觉可以调一下方向，稍微顺时针转一点
00:36:987 (2,3) - 又不像跳又不像Distance Snap，给人一种Anti-Jump的感觉
01:28:773 (1,2,3) - 要么原地要么分开，这个时间差半重叠放Hard里感觉太突兀了

[Insane]
短滑条间距这么远真的没问题？

AruOtta

1,303 posts

Joined May 2012

AruOtta 11 years ago

Hello, M4M from your queue ^ω^

615's Easy

At the beggining, NC's patterns are messy, so try this :
00:05:380 (1) - Remove
00:08:237 (1) - Remove
00:09:666 (3) - Add
00:10:380 (1) - Remove
00:12:522 (3) - Add
00:13:773 (1) - Remove

00:43:594 (4) - Try to stack it properly on (2)'s end
00:43:951 (1) - Two red ticks aren't needed, try with only one :

SPOILER

01:42:523 (3) - Try to use 2 normal ticks for the curve. The curve seems odd with only one =/

ZZH's Normal

00:10:022 (1) - Move the NC at 00:09:665 (6)
00:12:344 (1) - Start with a circle on a red tick is too difficult imo xD
00:14:665 (1) - NC not needed
01:29:487 (4) - The clap at the beggining seems "heavy"

Yuki's Hard

00:31:809 (2) - Try to stack it properly on (1)'s head
01:02:523 (5) - Make the curve a little bit less important :

SPOILER

01:11:808 - Maybe something here ?
01:19:666 (1) - Why normal hitfinish ? xD

Fycho's Insane

01:11:808 (1) - Remove NC ? And stack properly on (1)

Amazing diff <3

Insane

00:11:630 (3) - Try to make this slider a bit funny =D :

Too moch funny x3

00:49:130 (1) - Move NC to 00:49:665 (5)
00:51:272 (2) - Stack it properly on (9)'s end
00:55:380 (3) - Make it funny ? =D
01:41:094 (3) - ^
01:43:058 (3) - Stack properly on (7)

Wonderful map, Good Luck =D

moonlightleaf

2,165 posts

Joined September 2011

moonlightleaf 11 years ago

letterbox 那啥好像都没conflict，不知道行不行

hard

= =格子这么大怎么放的。。

00:55:023 (4) - ctrl+g

01:04:666 (5) - 尾巴扔6上

01:10:201 (4) - 不如放连打

01:40:201 (3) - 折返一次

01:46:094 (4) - 换成和前面23一样的搭配

insane

格子同hard....

00:04:487 (2) - 感觉可和后面对称

00:20:916 (9) - 尾巴放1那？

00:18:059 (6) - 不如2连

00:23:772 (8) - 换成蓝线单点放1上和后面对应

00:46:094 (3) - 34对换？U型流

01:07:522 (3) - 这串距离不一样会坑吗？

01:11:094 (1) - 有点厉害

01:35:380 (1) - 突然1.5倍速 = = 有点坑

01:40:558 (7) - 7812全选 ctrl+h 然后拖住7放x|33y|216如何

easy

AImod 是 Normal 。。。。

00:08:952 (2) - 没包好

00:26:094 (4) - 有点难，3延长吧

以下尝试降低难度:

00:23:594 (4) - 删

00:32:165 (5) - ^

00:33:594 (2) - ^

00:36:987 (3) - ^

00:39:309 (2,4) - ^

00:43:594 (4) - ^

00:45:023 (2) - ^

00:46:451 (3) - ^

00:49:309 (4) - ^

00:56:273 (2) - ^

01:02:166 (2) - ^

01:15:023 (5) - ^

01:18:237 (1) - ^

01:26:451 (3) - ^

01:28:415 (3) - ^

01:29:130 (4) - ^

01:39:309 (2,4) - ^

01:43:594 (4) - ^

01:23:237 (3) - 换单点

最后俩滑条也不适合easy= =

这是Normal，easy建议重做。。。太难

insane飞了个秋

00:05:380 (1) - 这随便放的。。。放2上

00:08:415 (2) - ctrl+g

00:24:487 (3,4,5) - 这距离。。

00:45:380 (1,2) - 1和2 x|156y|120 3 x|227y|212

00:56:183 (6) - 删

00:57:969 (6) - ^

01:00:826 (8) - ^

01:19:308 (3) - 超界了？放8上试试

01:37:969 note

01:46:451 (5) - 和1成直线会好看些

Normal

= =现在流行高难度用低难度命名吗

00:29:308 (5) - 延长到 00:29:665

00:30:022 (2) - 单点

00:33:237 (2) - 单点00:33:237

00:33:772 (3) - 3从00:33:594-00:33:951

00:35:022

00:35:022 (5) - 单点或者延长到1

00:35:915 (7) - 拉白线去

00:36:987 (8,9) - 8删了 9拉白线白线结尾 00:37:880单点

00:38:951 (2) - 白线

00:39:487 (3) - 删

00:39:665单点

......都是红线滑条orz ,建议都白线吧(参考上面的 = =

降低难度可以空些拍子

Koiyuki

Beatmap Nominator

2,571 posts

Joined March 2013

Koiyuki 11 years ago

Kenterz9 wrote:
Yuki's Hard
00:31:809 (2) - Try to stack it properly on (1)'s head fixed
01:02:523 (5) - Make the curve a little bit less important : not necessary
SPOILER
01:11:808 - Maybe something here ? it's fine now imo >.>
01:19:666 (1) - Why normal hitfinish ? xD fixed

moonlightleaf wrote:
= =格子这么大怎么放的。。
00:55:023 (4) - ctrl+g nope
01:04:666 (5) - 尾巴扔6上 nope
01:10:201 (4) - 不如放连打 nope
01:40:201 (3) - 折返一次 ok
01:46:094 (4) - 换成和前面23一样的搭配改了下

SPOILER

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Fycho

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Fycho 11 years ago

Kenterz9 wrote:
Fycho's Insane
01:11:808 (1) - Remove NC ? And stack properly on (1) changed NC here o.o

Amazing diff <3

moonlightleaf wrote:
00:05:380 (1) - 这随便放的。。。放2上这是故意的=。=

00:08:415 (2) - ctrl+g滑条跳不合适

00:24:487 (3,4,5) - 这距离。。fixed

00:45:380 (1,2) - 1和2 x|156y|120 3 x|227y|212懒的看这种坐标了，再手动移动我的note来看到底怎么样了，没图来的直观，关键我觉得我现在的玩起来可以

00:56:183 (6) - 删我觉得删不删差不多，或者请给出一个理由o.o

00:57:969 (6) - ^

01:00:826 (8) - ^

01:19:308 (3) - 超界了？放8上试试 fine，没出界

01:37:969 note 不喜欢，串子太长没必要

01:46:451 (5) - 和1成直线会好看些对，fixed

thanks for modding

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HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:8
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:1.6
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
Video,0,"movie.avi"
0,0,"BG.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

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Combo2 : 255,128,64
Combo3 : 128,255,255
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ZZHBOY

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ZZHBOY 11 years ago

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Atrue

Beatmap Nominator

1,021 posts

Joined July 2012

Atrue 11 years ago

Hello~
From your req.

[Notion]
This color means something you can either choose to fix or not to fix cause I prefer to do this.
And this color means some issue to fix I think.
[General]
Good map and a little suggestions here.
Good luck

[615's Easy]
General
偏难了，整体做的是不错的
Beats
01:49:666 (1) - 你们怎么都这么喜欢转盘？
Hitsound
01:35:022 - 尾巴上的clap我倾向于用default soft

[ZZH's Normal]
General
还行，排版还有进步空间
Beats
00:14:665 (1) - 减1/2吧，我觉得normal diff里面不用每个字都压上，与其空重音白线还不如舍弃后边的红线……而且你后边从白线起转盘已经说明舍弃了后边白线的音，又何必非得压着那根红线呢？
00:34:308 (4) - 前边比较严格地跟了人声，这里突然跑出来一个鼓声，而且后边的人声也是空了一下，所以建议 example：

SPOILER

01:04:397 - 既然是人声我还是建议这么来 Example：

SPOILER

01:16:451 - 大概似乎可能也许不用担心加个note难度增加啥的吧，为了维持你的鼓声节奏完整
01:49:665 (1) - 用长滑条都行，这个转盘实在是太空了 Example：

SPOILER

Placement
00:35:915 (3,5) - 这这这我觉得不好看，最起码弄个对称啊。。
Hitsound
01:29:487 - 大概这个不是clap，即便你想强调这个滑条我觉得也是不要破坏你的鼓点节奏
01:35:022 - 插根绿线用s default音效或者烤肉弄了一个custom 滑条静音的音效组，用那个，我觉得这里适合默认的softclap

[Yuki's Hard]
General
clear
就一条
Hitsound
01:00:022 - 这个地方我听了好几遍25%我觉得应该不只是一个softhit这么软绵绵的音，倾向加个clap

[Insane]
General
Clear
没啥要说的
结果也是写了一堆
Placement
00:25:201 (8) - 明明是个重音还要往里缩，这flow我不赞成，做跳的话越来越大才对 example：（摆的不好看，大概是这么个意思，毕竟空间不太大

SPOILER

00:45:915 (2,3) - 喷一喷这个地方，滑条变速要用到换nc来提醒，可是这里十分夸张的间距突然加大我就不理解了。换nc不现实，你的梗也是这么设计的，但是我觉得这里不是那种跳5.0的地方，除非拆掉梗，不然我找不出来解决方案= = 我提供一种： example：

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Hitsound
00:13:951 (1,2) - 这两个滑条slide音有点大，是比较清晰的，我建议sc3 然后copy一下你的sliderslide，用在这里的绿线上，而不是s default
01:00:201 (3,5) - 这里我觉得就这两个note有clap应该就可以了，放多了反而觉得听得clap混在一起不是很清晰，当然后边滑条肯定是要有clap的
01:23:772 - 有点建议性意见，这里加clap挺好的~
01:28:505 (2) - 不建议这么用clap，两个连起来听起来比较模糊，偏向于滑条头换成finish
01:29:487 - 去掉clap，用finish应该就好，两个叠加起来也是觉得不好听
01:32:344 (6) - 跟前边一样，不过这里你想要强调的话，我还没想好应该怎么加

[Fycho's Insane]
General
clear
摸不出来啥
Placement
00:55:201 (8) - 求ctrl+G，example：

SPOILER

虽然实际上不影响但是我不理解为何这里偏偏要往回放一个，还不对称，要么就弄得跟后边note有关系一点啊，Example：

SPOILER

01:23:594 (3,4) - 这里四个短滑条我感觉flow有点奇怪，我的建议是后边两个短滑条ctrl+G然后调成差不多这样

SPOILER

Hitsound
01:10:022 - 我觉得这里还是softclap 其实挺纠结的
01:17:969 (7,8,9) - 这么暴力的音效，我还是建议soft，不然确实有点吵啊

That's my suggestions. Thanks for requesting.If you have any questions feel free to send pm to me.

.

Kinomi

1,229 posts

Joined August 2012

Topic Starter

Kinomi 11 years ago

wpcap这么多星你们想干嘛

还不如射scarlet faith

Kenterz9

Insane

00:11:630 (3) - Try to make this slider a bit funny =D : i like thi shape xD
00:49:130 (1) - Move NC to 00:49:665 (5) add another NC
00:51:272 (2) - Stack it properly on (9)'s end i think it;s ok now
00:55:380 (3) - Make it funny ? =D
01:41:094 (3) - ^ umm...it's intention,to use this shape
01:43:058 (3) - Stack properly on (7) i think it;s ok now

moonlightleaf

[quote="moonlightleaf"]

00:04:487 (2) - 感觉可和后面对称就是对称的啊

00:20:916 (9) - 尾巴放1那？这样打起来舒服

00:18:059 (6) - 不如2连不好，二连最后一个音按不到不舒服

00:23:772 (8) - 换成蓝线单点放1上和后面对应为啥。。

00:46:094 (3) - 34对换？U型流没懂=。=

01:07:522 (3) - 这串距离不一样会坑吗？不会，这挺好打的。。

01:11:094 (1) - 有点厉害=L=

01:35:380 (1) - 突然1.5倍速 = = 有点坑没关系的

01:40:558 (7) - 7812全选 ctrl+h 然后拖住7放x|33y|216如何现在这样也挺好啊

Atrue

[quote="Atrue"]

[Insane]
General
Clear
没啥要说的
结果也是写了一堆
Placement
00:25:201 (8) - 明明是个重音还要往里缩，这flow我不赞成，做跳的话越来越大才对 example：（摆的不好看，大概是这么个意思，毕竟空间不太大
我觉得这样挺带感啊233.。
00:45:915 (2,3) - 喷一喷这个地方，滑条变速要用到换nc来提醒，可是这里十分夸张的间距突然加大我就不理解了。换nc不现实，你的梗也是这么设计的，但是我觉得这里不是那种跳5.0的地方，除非拆掉梗，不然我找不出来解决方案= = 我提供一种
没改。。感觉如果这样BAT没挑那就不改了=。=
Hitsound
00:13:951 (1,2) - 这两个滑条slide音有点大，是比较清晰的，我建议sc3 然后copy一下你的sliderslide，用在这里的绿线上，而不是s default 好
01:00:201 (3,5) - 这里我觉得就这两个note有clap应该就可以了，放多了反而觉得听得clap混在一起不是很清晰，当然后边滑条肯定是要有clap的
听零风的加的。。
01:23:772 - 有点建议性意见，这里加clap挺好的~ 有whistle拉
01:28:505 (2) - 不建议这么用clap，两个连起来听起来比较模糊，偏向于滑条头换成finish 跟音乐下的啊
01:29:487 - 去掉clap，用finish应该就好，两个叠加起来也是觉得不好听好
01:32:344 (6) - 跟前边一样，不过这里你想要强调的话，我还没想好应该怎么加没改

thanks for mod！
all updated

Fycho

Global Moderator

2,490 posts

Joined August 2012

Fycho 11 years ago

Atrue wrote:
[Fycho's Insane]
General
clear
摸不出来啥
Placement
00:55:201 (8) - 求ctrl+G，example：这个换方向后玩起来不舒服啊，不知道是不是我思维定势了
SPOILER
虽然实际上不影响但是我不理解为何这里偏偏要往回放一个，还不对称，要么就弄得跟后边note有关系一点啊，Example：
SPOILER
01:23:594 (3,4) - 这里四个短滑条我感觉flow有点奇怪，我的建议是后边两个短滑条ctrl+G然后调成差不多这样这是因为01:23:951 (1) - 这重音，所以4往后顺着flow不好，所以一左一右逆flow增强打击感，玩着觉得flow没什么不好啊owo
SPOILER
Hitsound
01:10:022 - 我觉得这里还是softclap 其实挺纠结的说的很对，我加错了，后面也一并改了
01:17:969 (7,8,9) - 这么暴力的音效，我还是建议soft，不然确实有点吵啊再次减少了音效
That's my suggestions. Thanks for requesting.If you have any questions feel free to send pm to me. .

SPOILER

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YoshinoSakura

472 posts

Joined January 2011

YoshinoSakura 11 years ago

他大爺那麼多mod

Kenterz9 wrote:
615's Easy

At the beggining, NC's patterns are messy, so try this :
00:05:380 (1) - Remove
00:08:237 (1) - Remove
00:09:666 (3) - Add
00:10:380 (1) - Remove
00:12:522 (3) - Add
00:13:773 (1) - Remove adjust the ncs

00:43:594 (4) - Try to stack it properly on (2)'s end fixed
00:43:951 (1) - Two red ticks aren't needed, try with only one : little difference
collapsed text

01:42:523 (3) - Try to use 2 normal ticks for the curve. The curve seems odd with only one =/ i dont really understand but i changed a bit

moonlightleaf wrote:
AImod 是 Normal 。。。。

00:08:952 (2) - 没包好你就當他不是包把

00:26:094 (4) - 有点难，3延长吧偶爾出現一個沒關係吧

以下尝试降低难度:

00:23:594 (4) - 删

00:32:165 (5) - ^

00:33:594 (2) - ^

00:36:987 (3) - ^

00:39:309 (2,4) - ^

00:43:594 (4) - ^

00:45:023 (2) - ^

00:46:451 (3) - ^

00:49:309 (4) - ^

00:56:273 (2) - ^

01:02:166 (2) - ^

01:15:023 (5) - ^

01:18:237 (1) - ^

01:26:451 (3) - ^

01:28:415 (3) - ^

01:29:130 (4) - ^

01:39:309 (2,4) - ^

01:43:594 (4) - ^

01:23:237 (3) - 换单点

最后俩滑条也不适合easy= =

这是Normal，easy建议重做。。。太难還好吧，柑橘4mod也不難

Atrue wrote:
[615's Easy]
General
偏难了，整体做的是不错的
Beats
01:49:666 (1) - 你们怎么都这么喜欢转盘？fycho的真愛bybf
Hitsound
01:35:022 - 尾巴上的clap我倾向于用default soft 有道理

烤老闆生快

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Sellenite

1,092 posts

Joined September 2013

Sellenite 11 years ago

Sasaki Sayaka~

[615's Easy]
00:14:666 (2) - 尾巴clap改为finish？
00:25:559 (3,4) - 个人意见，这样可能会好点

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00:43:951 (1) - 两个红点的形状有点...
00:49:666 (1) - 包好些
01:09:666 (3) - finish
01:27:523 (2) - 这个有点别扭，红线结尾接几个1/1，而且01:28:237这里又有鼓音，建议改一下
01:43:951 (1,2,3,4,5) - 同上，有些别扭，我提供一下另一个节奏..不满意的就保持原状好了，不要打我

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[ZZH's Normal]
跟歌词的我不太会看...
00:14:665 (1) - 拉到00:15:022然后尾finish？然后00:15:380 (1) - remove finish会好点，后者放finish不好
00:35:915 (7,9) - 这样的overlap太不好看了
00:49:129 (6) - 换成一个circle踩在白线上？前面全是滑条后面可以用两个note平衡一下
00:55:379 (1,2) - 感觉突然空了一个节奏不舒服，换换比较好，然后00:55:915 (2,3,4,5,6) - 这些，前面跟歌唱，后面跟BGM，也是很别扭的

[Yuki's Hard]
00:15:023 (4) - 头clap改为finish，一直看下去你们都是用clap..不过我还是想制造一下回音的感觉，毕竟后面接转盘了
00:33:951 (1) - 嘛..尾巴叠得与前面的note歪了一些
00:39:666 (1) - 这里不应该跳
00:53:237 (3) - 直接用1/2的滑条？
01:05:023 (6,1) - 也是歪了一点..其实不改也没什么问题，玩的时候很难发现
01:51:809 (1) - 折返最后的那个下finish

[Fycho's Insane]
00:23:951 (1) - 这部分有三个三连打，这里的尾巴是是第二个三连打的开始，放在尾巴不好
00:33:951 (1,4) - 嘛也是歪了一些，看不出改不改都行
01:15:196 kiai部分的normal sampleset超大声..100%太大了，降低一下
01:28:058 (4,5,1) - 这三个的normalhit比后面的三个finish大超多，好像变得强调前面一样而不是后面，建议绿降低一下音量
01:52:165 (9,10) - 为什么这两个滑条尾都不统一音效呢..突然空了两个音

[Insane]
这难度我完全不会摸..
01:09:665 (1) - finish好些？
01:52:522 (9) - 这个finish的声音被BGM给盖了...绿线单独将这个note提到60%？

不怎么会摸...但还是挑些有用的改一下吧;w;
~~这么多星星真是超爽~~

ZZHBOY

1,649 posts

Joined April 2012

ZZHBOY 11 years ago

改了点吧

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256,120,43951,6,0,P|304:68|340:56,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,48,44487,2,0,P|408:120|456:200,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
409,277,45380,2,0,P|365:309|288:342,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,316,45915,2,0,P|208:264|116:232,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
63,292,46808,6,0,P|59:196|83:168,1,100,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
93,103,47522,2,0,P|165:111|232:93,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
242,106,48058,2,0,P|306:90|361:97,1,100,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,116,48594,1,8,0:0:0:0:
444,195,48951,1,0,0:0:0:0:
456,243,49129,2,0,L|445:300,1,50,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,348,49665,6,0,P|260:352|184:344,1,150,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,336,50380,2,0,P|136:332|92:340,1,50,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,268,50915,2,0,P|44:208|36:140,1,100,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
134,134,51629,1,2,0:0:0:0:
184,120,51808,2,0,P|240:116|320:124,1,100,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,56,52522,6,0,P|400:112|412:224,1,150,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,240,53237,2,0,P|396:272|376:288,1,50,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,312,53772,2,0,P|232:308|192:312,1,100,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,360,54486,1,2,0:0:0:0:
67,325,54665,2,0,P|31:270|30:231,1,100,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,246,55379,5,4,0:0:0:0:
214,297,55737,2,0,L|279:295,1,50,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
322,214,56272,2,0,P|343:234|380:261,2,50
292,119,56987,2,0,P|260:89|192:75,1,100
168,105,57522,2,0,P|153:152|115:183,1,100
76,276,58237,6,0,P|24:220|44:116,1,150,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
12,100,58951,2,0,P|96:68|152:72,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,56,59487,2,0,P|196:128|220:192,1,150,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,288,60380,1,8,0:0:0:0:
312,320,60737,2,0,L|368:296,1,50,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,284,61094,6,0,P|428:232|425:165,1,100,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
418,141,61629,2,0,P|379:87|290:55,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
202,62,62522,2,0,P|156:98|132:149,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
93,223,63236,1,0,0:0:0:0:
107,322,63594,1,8,0:0:0:0:
193,272,63951,6,0,P|281:240|329:236,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
330,263,64487,2,0,P|377:220|405:133,1,150,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
315,96,65379,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,80,65737,1,8,0:0:0:0:
124,120,66094,1,2,0:0:0:0:
188,196,66451,1,8,0:0:0:0:
96,232,66808,6,0,P|130:275|202:295,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,284,67344,2,0,P|300:284|376:316,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,224,68237,2,0,P|448:164|416:104,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,84,68772,2,0,P|376:88|304:60,1,100,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
295,59,69308,2,0,P|226:59|166:98,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
154,95,69844,6,0,L|168:185,1,50,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,243,70379,2,0,P|110:275|83:318,2,100,0|8|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,224,71808,1,2,0:0:0:0:
340,128,72165,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,72,72522,6,0,P|208:92|156:104,1,100,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
111,110,73058,2,0,P|119:173|112:247,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
97,255,73594,2,0,P|163:300|199:338,1,100,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
275,293,74308,2,0,P|316:263|353:225,1,100,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,148,75022,1,8,0:0:0:0:
432,52,75380,6,0,P|352:40|315:59,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,89,75915,2,0,P|263:129|220:146,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,48,76630,2,0,P|148:80|132:152,1,100,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,168,77165,1,8,0:0:0:0:
132,216,77344,2,0,P|224:248|288:292,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,364,78237,1,4,0:0:0:0:
128,328,78594,5,8,0:0:0:0:
60,256,78951,2,0,P|40:196|44:112,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,108,79487,2,0,P|128:80|172:80,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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206,209,80558,2,0,L|237:268,1,50,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,304,81094,6,2,P|384:304|460:324,1,100,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,328,81630,2,0,P|464:232|452:172,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,128,82344,2,0,P|364:116|272:124,1,150,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,152,83237,5,2,0:0:0:0:
277,220,83594,1,8,0:0:0:0:
299,119,83951,2,0,P|256:68|204:48,1,100,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,48,84487,2,0,L|112:104|80:132,1,100,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,152,85022,2,0,L|12:148,2,50,8|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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320,280,86451,1,8,0:0:0:0:
400,344,86808,2,0,P|424:296|400:216,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,208,87344,2,0,P|384:160|384:104,1,100,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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210,78,88772,1,4,0:0:0:0:
147,156,89129,1,4,0:0:0:0:
82,237,89487,2,0,P|162:261|201:234,1,100,12|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,232,90022,2,0,P|272:232|328:268,1,100,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,336,90737,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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182,267,93236,1,4,0:0:0:0:
274,306,93593,1,12,0:0:0:0:
313,214,93950,5,4,0:0:0:0:
463,207,94487,2,0,P|427:135|403:107,1,100,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,85,95022,2,0,L|306:82,1,50,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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256,194,98594,5,8,0:0:0:0:
340,247,98951,2,0,P|309:316|248:339,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
242,314,99487,2,0,P|168:308|108:261,1,150,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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BeatofIke

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BeatofIke 11 years ago

After several IRC re-checks (in private) with this mapset, I'm 100% confident with the map moving forward into ranking. Good luck and map bubbled!

Kinomi

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Kinomi 11 years ago

thank you ike :3/

Rukaru

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Rukaru 11 years ago

wow, so many stars...
congratulation bubbled!

Kinomi

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Kinomi 11 years ago

raheta_adi wrote:
wow, so many stars...
congratulation bubbled!

Shoot by friends on my birthday xD

NatsumeTsuchimi

NatsumeTsuchimi 11 years ago

love this map

captin1

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captin1 11 years ago

hi
Might be a good idea to pick one of the two Insanes and use OD8 on it, probably Fycho's since it's a bit harder
[Sakura's Easy]

00:05:380 (1) - and 00:08:237 (1) - I would remove these two NCs, don't really need single combo circles
00:25:559 (3,4) - this is the only 1/2 spacing in the map, I'd highly recommend you change to a 3/2 slider like this
SPOILER
00:29:309 (4) - missing clap?

[ZZH's Normal]

00:09:665 (6,1) - swap NC? to fit better in the musical phrase
00:14:665 (1) - whistle on sliderbody intentional?
00:32:522 (1) - missing clap on head?
00:34:665 (5) - clap on repeat?
01:18:237 (6,1) - swap NC? same reason
01:23:951 (3) - NC? the NC on 01:23:237 (1) - is a bit unnecessary but I do understand why you put it there
01:25:737 (1) - remove NC, and put it 01:26:808 (3) - instead?
01:28:058 (1) - move NC to 01:29:487 (4) - ?
01:31:094 (1) - move NC to 01:32:879 (4) - ? and then remove from 01:33:950 (1) - ?
01:40:736 (1,2) - swap NC?
01:52:344 (1) - start spinner on 01:52:522 - ? would fit better with the music

Map isn't bad, but I noticed it seems to be just moving in a circle motion for much of the map, like 00:29:665 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) -
For your future maps, try and create some more interesting motions and patterns

Be careful of your NC patterns too, one mistake when you're not paying attention can mess up a lot
[Yuki's Hard]

00:30:380 (5) - what is this whistle following? I can't hear anything in the music for it. If anything, it would sound better to have whistles on 00:30:201 (4,6) - with the background melody

great map
[Insane]

00:18:059 (6) - I would space this away from 00:18:237 (1) - , to be more like the rest of your 1/4 sliders.
SPOILER
01:11:094 (1,1,2) - this looks the same if you go by distance snap, but it's actually uneven because of the changing sv. Moving 01:11:808 (1) - to x232 y348 looks better
01:19:487 (6) - personal preference but I think this looks better if it's a bit less curved
SPOILER

awesome map as usual from Fycho, nothin to say there

call me back

Koiyuki

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Koiyuki 11 years ago

Yeah captin you are right~
Fixed in my hard.
http://puu.sh/8Xig5.osu

Kinomi

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Kinomi 11 years ago

captin1

captin1 wrote:
hi hi!
Might be a good idea to pick one of the two Insanes and use OD8 on it, probably Fycho's since it's a bit harder
[Sakura's Easy]
00:05:380 (1) - and 00:08:237 (1) - I would remove these two NCs, don't really need single combo circles
00:25:559 (3,4) - this is the only 1/2 spacing in the map, I'd highly recommend you change to a 3/2 slider like this
00:29:309 (4) - missing clap?
all fixed

[ZZH's Normal]
00:09:665 (6,1) - swap NC? to fit better in the musical phrase done
00:14:665 (1) - whistle on sliderbody intentional? it's a mistake
00:32:522 (1) - missing clap on head? fixed
00:34:665 (5) - clap on repeat? fixed
01:18:237 (6,1) - swap NC? same reason sure
01:23:951 (3) - NC? the NC on 01:23:237 (1) - is a bit unnecessary but I do understand why you put it there
01:25:737 (1) - remove NC, and put it 01:26:808 (3) - instead?
01:28:058 (1) - move NC to 01:29:487 (4) - ?
01:31:094 (1) - move NC to 01:32:879 (4) - ? and then remove from 01:33:950 (1) - ?
01:40:736 (1,2) - swap NC?
rearrange NC
01:52:344 (1) - start spinner on 01:52:522 - ? would fit better with the musick
Map isn't bad, but I noticed it seems to be just moving in a circle motion for much of the map, like 00:29:665 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) -
For your future maps, try and create some more interesting motions and patterns
Be careful of your NC patterns too, one mistake when you're not paying attention can mess up a lot

[Insane]
00:18:059 (6) - I would space this away from 00:18:237 (1) - , to be more like the rest of your 1/4 sliders.
it's intentional, it needs players to take it as a note, note a slider
01:11:094 (1,1,2) - this looks the same if you go by distance snap, but it's actually uneven because of the changing sv. Moving 01:11:808 (1) - to x232 y348 looks better
ok
01:19:487 (6) - personal preference but I think this looks better if it's a bit less curved
ok
awesome map as usual from Fycho, nothin to say there

call me back

captin1

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captin1 11 years ago

good to go

ranked

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gxytcgxytc 11 years ago

gongxi rank w

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toara_fict 11 years ago

Gratz!!!!!! :3

Kodora

Kodora 11 years ago

wow, pro Yomi

Gratz!

Kuuhaku

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Kuuhaku 11 years ago

恭喜哦~

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