1. Hard (4.69 stars, 276 notes)
2. Normal (3.18 stars, 157 notes)

Tidek wrote:

M4M from my queue.

Insane

00:05:238 (4,5) - Considering this rhythm - done
00:05:928 (1,2) - Make a blanket? done
00:38:342 (1) - Try to delete overlap with 3?done
01:20:410 (1) - move to 100 320 to make a blanket?donedone
01:22:135 (2) - move to 352 44 to avoid overlap with 1?the time of two object is so apart. no
01:31:445 (1,2) - not sure about this, it can be confusing to follow (or im just a big noob), I prefer to make slider there, like u did here 01:09:376 (1,2)donev
01:36:962 (1) - make a wave? will be good connection between previous slider and next circle http://puu.sh/6dk2K.jpgdid some change
01:43:342 (4) - ^did some change
01:44:721 (5) - considering ctrl + g..no
01:55:410 (4,2) - overlapdon't need to
01:57:824 (3,5) - nazi, fix symmetry (y 31 =/= y32 :<)done
Crazy jumps on the end, but flows good overall

Hard

00:07:652 (4,5) - make overlap with 1?done
00:35:583 (5) - blanket?done
01:12:824 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - I suggest to keep DS more consistent on hard difficulty. Its not bad pattern at all...no
01:56:273 (1,2) - blanket? done
02:10:583 (2,3) - Those circles are touching health bardone

Normal

00:04:549 (4,1) - Keep your DS very consistent on normal/easy difficultiesdone
01:06:618 (3) - Considering 1/2 sliders instead of thiskeep.
rest fine

Im not really fan of that kind of music, but jumps are really fun to play, good luck with that ;p

yu1sT wrote:

0.0

Normal

00:22:479 (1) - 向左移动一些OK
00:26:618 (3) - 用弯的滑条？OK
01:12:136 (1,2) - 弯一点？OK
01:33:169 (3) - 移上一点OK
01:41:100 (3) - 换成滑条？...还是保持
01:47:307 (3,1) - 包好OK

Hard

00:04:031 - 加note？OK
00:05:583 - ^OK
00:20:928 - ^OK
00:12:135 (5,1) - 不要遮挡？还是不改了
01:50:755 (5) - 移到[32,184]OK
01:56:273 (1,2) - 包好OK
01:59:376 (2,3) - 分开点?OK

黑子快rank几张触图

lightr wrote:

lol

baka Jemmy eat some tv plz :C

1. OD我建議改成7就好
2. 00:07:997 (6) - 滑條的結束點在00:08:342
3. 00:09:204 (3) - 一樣結束點在00:09:548
4. 00:45:238 (1) - 轉盤起始點在00:45:066
   
   老實說你放置物件的地方都沒有問題，就是距離過遠

1. 00:09:893 - circle
2. 00:22:824 (1) - 起始點在藍線比較好
3. 01:38:342 (3) - 滑條整個都「嗶~~~！」囉
4. 01:51:100 (1) - 起始點在藍線

1. 00:11:445 (1) - 給你做參考:
   
   
   然後Normal就沒了，沒有問題

m1223961117 wrote:

From My queue:
幫不上忙沒有關係，重點還是有幫到 >.<

Insane
我大致上看過你的圖了，這個難度是世界級的難啊！((汗= =||| 嘻嘻其实我就觉得跳得挺爽快的
跳點真的太遠了，我自己測試過這張譜，每一個circle都是一樣 Orz
雖然夜曲的BPM只有87，但是這張譜打起來像是190
(BPM低於120記得要x2來做譜比較好) 也不一定啦，有音乐才下note额
不要小看BPM這玩意，會殺死人的

要怎麼調整要看你囉！我只能告訴你怪怪的地方...

1. OD我建議改成7就好都是单点所以，8也比较容易高acc
2. 00:07:997 (6) - 滑條的結束點在00:08:342 ok
3. 00:09:204 (3) - 一樣結束點在00:09:548 keep
4. 00:45:238 (1) - 轉盤起始點在00:45:066ok
   
   老實說你放置物件的地方都沒有問題，就是距離過遠

Hard

1. 00:09:893 - circle ok
2. 00:22:824 (1) - 起始點在藍線比較好ok
3. 01:38:342 (3) - 滑條整個都「嗶~~~！」囉done
4. 01:51:100 (1) - 起始點在藍線ok

Normal

1. 00:11:445 (1) - 給你做參考:
   这样好！
   
   然後Normal就沒了，沒有問題

加油，老實說你做得好 哇感谢啊!

lightr wrote:

baka Jemmy here is my mod D

Normal

00:04:549 (4) - 这样摆？ ok
00:10:067 (3,4) - 两个都换成滑条？音比较明显 ok
01:49:376 (3,4) - ^ ok，节奏是有点太慢了

Hard

00:53:686 - 加个circle？ok
00:53:859 (4) - 移到00:53:859 (4) - ok
01:08:686 (1) - 滑条取消whistle，安静点会比较贴合音乐？ok
02:11:790 (6,1) - 分开一点？ok

Insane

00:05:755 (5) - 去掉？还是留着
01:16:617 (5) - 移到[464.368] 大概移了下
01:17:997 (2) - 移到ok

good luck D

Laurier wrote:

mod4mod

General
BG: you should resize 1366*768.it's fine
Artist : use 周杰倫.sure

Normal
00:02:825 (1) - the timing is little hard to beginners. because delete this note ?ok
00:10:066 (3,4,1) - make better blanket

SPOILER

ok

Hard
00:12:135 (5) - make a triangle

SPOILER

ok
00:17:652 (3) - same as ^ok
00:32:824 (6) - Ctr+Gok
00:33:514 (1) - ^ok
01:14:549 (6) - stack on 01:12:824 (2) - end this jump is not goodchange some

Insane
00:05:755 (5) - stack on 00:05:238 (4) - end.
00:21:962 (5) - try this rhythm

SPOILER

no,,
00:55:238 (7) - Ctr+G

thank you!!

-Umi- wrote:

hi hi m4m

General

- Don't you want add a custom combo color ? who fit with the bg sure

[Colours]
Combo1 : 52,44,211
Combo2 : 160,203,245
Combo3 : 170,170,170

- Current BG is 1353x768, it should be 1366x768 fit itsure
- Disable "Widescreen Support" in all diff since u doesn't use SBsure
- don't you want add a soft-sliderslide and a Normal-sliderslide ?..maybe

Normal

- 00:05:929 (1,2) - make it like this, look betterok

SPOILER

- 00:14:205 (1) - move the tail of this slider far away from 00:13:515 (3) - it could be confused for new playerok
- 00:36:963 (2,3) - improve the blanketok

SPOILER

- 00:37:652 (3,1) - ^ok

SPOILER

- 00:52:136 (5) - it should be ctrl G here for a better flowok
- 01:06:617 (3) - like this ?ok

SPOILER

- 01:12:825 (2,3) - same as 00:05:929 (1,2)ok

hard

AR +1
- 00:05:928 (1,2) - blanketok

SPOILER

- 00:07:824 - add a note hereok
- 00:26:617 (3,4,5) - triangle ?ok

SPOILER

- 00:42:824 (4,1,2,3,4) - better flow like this ok

SPOILER

- 00:49:376 (5) - ctrl gok
- 02:03:169 (6,7) - blanket themok

SPOILER

- 02:12:135 (1,2,3,4,5) - move to 460,236change some

Insane

HP +1
- 00:03:859 (4) - stack with 00:03:169 (2) - endno..
- 00:04:893 (2,3) - ctrl g if u do, then make 00:04:548 (1) - toward (2)ok
- 00:42:997 (8,1,2) - thoses jump lol ~yeah..haha
- 00:57:652 (5,6) - use the same shape, it's not perfectly paralleleok
- 01:08:686 (1) - change into 2 notes..no
- 01:15:410 (2) - reduce the DSok

gl !

zengdaen wrote:

m4m 简直感动！

[jumping]

SPOILER

好图惹……除了没跳中的都是300~

只有两个无关紧要的细节规则和提升性的建议

00:23:169 (3) - 锚点出界ok

00:28:686 (4) - ^ok

00:29:721 (7) - ^ok

01:02:939 (2) - ^ok

01:14:893 (1) - ^ok

[b]01:26:790 (3) - ^ok

01:41:790 (3) - ^ok

00:43:169 (1) - 左上角不要封顶，会挡血条，我自己的图都不管这个233ok

01:32:307 (1) - ^ok

出界和挡血条只要不严重是没关系的……所以黑体外的改起来如果郁闷可以无视……其实就算严重……打图也是没事的233
。_。
01:09:376 - 那个whistle感觉不舒服……ok

跳梗很不错……可以考虑再去其他的跳图里面抄几个单点梗，我看那个加间距的单点梗你用了好几处，换几个吧……给个传送 ： http://osu.ppy.sh/s/133445嗯有些想有点变化，不过略懒了，那就加距作为主体吧

都是90BPM左右的跳图……不过他这个单点更好玩鬼畜

[hard]

好像whistle是下钢琴重音，那个clap是固定2.4白线么？那前面一小段为什么不跟？ok

每一个重音开头都可以稍稍拉开距离，因为他们并不是一组的而你的距离也不是固定的。。嘛，简单hard尽量DS就DS吧。。

00:15:066 - 不要突然放弃钢琴，这一段还是钢琴主导……ok

00:29:376 (3,4) - 可以弯一点

00:34:204 (2,3) - ^

00:59:031 (2,3) - ^

01:00:410 (5,6) - ^……好像这样会很水……就此打住好了 这些如果后面接的是弯滑条我就改弯了、

00:36:790 (2,3,4,5) - 可以朝右上走然后下来，均匀利用版面……好吧其实我在水……（捂脸。。。。暂时不改了，不过注意下

02:10:755 (3,4,5,6) - 4短滑应该可以弄个漂亮的梗……结尾还是帅气点吧，五单点可以用距离1.6弄五角星我想想怎么弄

[normal]

结尾不也加个转盘么？电钻掏榜党会失望的喵~~ok

00:24:549 (2,1,2,3,4) - 看见normal都用了这么好的梗真是感动啊……我看别人的normal很多都是贪吃蛇+复制，撞墙了叠一下掉个头什么的0.0.这个还好吧

检查了遍距离……美丽……补一个……02:12:134 (4) - 这个锚点出界ok

good luck

Edit ： 黑体用在^上面好像没用……是这两个01:26:790 (3) - & 01:32:307 (1) -

sksmwkd125 wrote:

Hi !

I'm a beginner modding.>.<

You can ignore my suggestion.

Hard

00:09:893 (4) - NC kk

00:15:238 - Add Circles kk

01:20:238 (6,1) - Distance. ?

Insane

Huge jump..

00:41:790 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Seem to have too much jumping it? not much, i think

01:29:204 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^

01:34:204 (1,2) - This rhythm. i want a little rhythm change
↓

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02:07:997 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Seem to have too much jumping it?

02:10:066 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^

02:11:445 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - ^


GL ^ ^ !

No_Gu wrote:

[Insane]
而且你这张做的有些地方flow不太顺就不太好玩了……兄台……我觉得你没打过图甚至打不动图……为什么你会知道不好玩呢……四暗刻~~

No_Gu wrote:

M4M from my queue

我很好奇周杰伦为什么要打繁体的
加个无声slider吧。。而且我觉得custom hitsound要好听得多。
慎用finish吧。。太吵好
结尾转盘停到02:15:583然后加个无声结尾可能更有感觉嗯这个是有感觉点

[Normal]
00:10:755 (4) - clap？ok
00:15:584 (2,5) - 前后都是1nc加一个whistle.这样的话这里应该去掉whistle吧这些从新理了一遍
结尾转盘呢
还算规矩吧 除了slider拉的不够好看之外。。不过这个也是没法强求的。下次你可以试试用grid 3 拉0.0 ok

[Hard]
00:03:859 (4,3) - clap?ok
00:52:824 (2,3) - 为何?、、、为何这样放？我觉得挺正常的。
01:08:686 (1) - 0.75完全没弄出感觉，0.5最好ok
01:14:204 (5) - clap?ok
恩

[Insane]
说实话我很不认同这样的作法所以也就不细mod了。。。jumping其实本身我就不太赞同 毕竟曲子没太大跳动的话满天飞就不好玩。而且你这张做的有些地方flow不太顺就不太好玩了。这曲子如果做Insane的话应该能做的挺美的感觉节奏稍微密一点适当美化下音效。不过每个人想法不一样就不强求了。我照自己想法随便摆了个，有兴趣的话瞧一眼吧 http://puu.sh/6sLpe.osu 嗯个人有个人喜好，我觉得这图做跳会挺好玩

zengdaen wrote:

No_Gu wrote:

[Insane]
而且你这张做的有些地方flow不太顺就不太好玩了……兄台……我觉得你没打过图甚至打不动图……为什么你会知道不好玩呢……四暗刻~~

Lapis Aoki wrote:

As I requested.
[General]
Needs an easy diff. Can I make an easy GD? owo sorry, the mapset is complete
[Normal]
00:33:859 -Note. nop.
00:41:445 -^ok
00:44:721 -No need for spinner. with spinner is better.

Sorry for short mod but GL ~ !