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Kestrel11
I want to see this ranked! ^^
Are you planning on doing the other there she is steps?
No problems I found really...
It could just be my skin, but the combo finishes are normal, not the skin you used. I think this is only for the 300 finishes, not a 100 finish...i'm not really sure...
Star for you!!!
Topic Starter
GabrielRKF

thefuriouschemist wrote:

I want to see this ranked! ^^
Are you planning on doing the other there she is steps?
No problems I found really...
It could just be my skin, but the combo finishes are normal, not the skin you used. I think this is only for the 300 finishes, not a 100 finish...i'm not really sure...
Star for you!!!
Yes, I'm planning to map the other 4 songs :]
Leorda
[General]
Source?

[Attraction]
00:47:116 (2,3,4) - Hold Shift Button and move it. If you spot some lines from right, release it
00:50:007 (2,3,4) - Hold Shift Button and move it. If you spot some lines from left, release it

01:40:608 (1) - Extend this spinner to 01:42:054

[GbL's Love]
00:26:087 (4,6) - Allign with 3
00:32:029 (x) - Place note here and activate the new combo
00:32:065 (1) - No new combo
01:36:099 (3,4) - A little confusing
01:56:014 (2) - Allign with 1 (end of slider)
02:11:069 (3) - Allign with 2 (end of slider)
02:12:041 (4) - Allign with 3 (end of slider)


[Forbidden Passion]
00:12:059 (x) - Place note here
00:15:049 (x) - ^

01:11:069 (1) - Allign with 3
01:57:005 (7) - Extend this slider to white tick


Perfect SONG!!!!
STAR
mago104
Nice :]
Topic Starter
GabrielRKF

Leorda wrote:

[General]
Source? I don't know what to put here ;__;

[Attraction]
00:47:116 (2,3,4) - Hold Shift Button and move it. If you spot some lines from right, release it Ok~
00:50:007 (2,3,4) - Hold Shift Button and move it. If you spot some lines from left, release it Same here~
01:40:608 (1) - Extend this spinner to 01:42:054 Ok~ :D

[GbL's Love]
00:26:087 (4,6) - Allign with 3 Ok~
00:32:029 (x) - Place note here and activate the new combo Ok~
00:32:065 (1) - No new combo Ok~
01:36:099 (3,4) - A little confusing I think it's easy to see ._.
01:56:014 (2) - Allign with 1 (end of slider) Ok~
02:11:069 (3) - Allign with 2 (end of slider) This one... I don't think so :/
02:12:041 (4) - Allign with 3 (end of slider) This one I can do ^^


[Forbidden Passion]
00:12:059 (x) - Place note here Sorry, I like the way that is now >_<
00:15:049 (x) - ^ Same here >_<
01:11:069 (1) - Allign with 3 Not really my style but ok~
01:57:005 (7) - Extend this slider to white tick WTF!? O_O How could I let this happen!? Thanks a lot!!


Perfect SONG!!!!
STAR
Thanks a lot for your mod!
Smart and detailed :)
DJPop
~Attraction~
Fine.

~GbL's Love~
Many notes are lacked of hitclaps :<
02:35:064 - delete 2 timing sections
End Kiai at the end of the map

~Forbidden Passion~
01:05:730 (5,1) - move down 1 grid (Lv2)
01:40:608 (1,2) - add some hitfinish


+Star



I still remember this XD

roxkyuubiforever wrote:

Hi DjPop. I were thinking if u could make a diff for my beatmap...
You see, i'm not really good at making Insanes and i know that you are ^^
Do it if you want to, ok? =3

http://osu.ppy.sh/s/7330

thankz for reading this message
Topic Starter
GabrielRKF

DJPop wrote:

~Attraction~
Fine.

~GbL's Love~
Many notes are lacked of hitclaps :<
02:35:064 - delete 2 timing sections Ow, I didn't saw that o.o
End Kiai at the end of the map Ok~

~Forbidden Passion~
01:05:730 (5,1) - move down 1 grid (Lv2) Right!!!!
01:40:608 (1,2) - add some hitfinish Done :)


+Star



I still remember this XD Ow god! I forgot about that!!!! O__________________O

roxkyuubiforever wrote:

Hi DjPop. I were thinking if u could make a diff for my beatmap...
You see, i'm not really good at making Insanes and i know that you are ^^
Do it if you want to, ok? =3

http://osu.ppy.sh/s/7330

thankz for reading this message
Thanks a lot DJPop! Did everything that you said :]
Mok
Updated Mod's Info:
Mine are all suggestions. You're free to follow or not this mod :3
If I found a beat who must be added, i'll write it.
Remember to fix spacing after all modfiy :3

[General]
Use 1/4 Snap Divisor.
Use Grid Level 3.
Add a Source.

Now i'll mod with the 1/4 Snap Divisor.
[Attraction]
Ok.

[GbL's Love]
ok too.

[Forbidden Passion]
00:12:599 (x) Add a Circle here.
00:15:490 (x) ^.

And that's all I can do for your map! Starred.
Lokamp
Attraction
00:47:839 (4,4,4) - clap here

Gbl's Love
01:33:379 (1,3) - clap here
01:56:872 (spinner) - set hitsounds's volume to 0 for this spinner
02:10:968 (2,3) - clap these sliders's end
02:12:775 (5) - clap this slider's start and 4th repeat, finish its end
02:52:894 (1,3) - clap here

Forbidden Passion
00:20:731 (2) - clap here
01:12:326 (2) - silence this slider (no hitsounds)
02:15:667 (3) - fill the break after this slider with a spinner


... easier modes doesn't mean shorter modes, remember!
Topic Starter
GabrielRKF

tmokb93 wrote:

Updated Mod's Info:
Mine are all suggestions. You're free to follow or not this mod :3
If I found a beat who must be added, i'll write it.
Remember to fix spacing after all modfiy :3

[General]
Use 1/4 Snap Divisor.
Use Grid Level 3.
Add a Source.

Now i'll mod with the 1/4 Snap Divisor.
[Attraction]
Ok.

[GbL's Love]
ok too.

[Forbidden Passion]
00:12:599 (x) Add a Circle here. Sorry, I like the way that is now ;_;
00:15:490 (x) ^. ^

And that's all I can do for your map! Starred.
Sorry, no kudosu ;_;
Thanks for your star!!


Lokamp wrote:

Attraction
00:47:839 (4,4,4) - clap here Sorry, don't like it .__.

Gbl's Love
01:33:379 (1,3) - clap here Ok~
01:56:872 (spinner) - set hitsounds's volume to 0 for this spinner Good idea :)
02:10:968 (2,3) - clap these sliders's end Ok~
02:12:775 (5) - clap this slider's start and 4th repeat, finish its end good good good!
02:52:894 (1,3) - clap here Ok~

Forbidden Passion
00:20:731 (2) - clap here Sorry, no >_<
01:12:326 (2) - silence this slider (no hitsounds) ^
02:15:667 (3) - fill the break after this slider with a spinner now there is a spinner here :D


... easier modes doesn't mean shorter modes, remember! In most part of the ranked maps, yes it does o.o
Breeze
OK, let's mod go go go~
The hit0.png I would do it when I back school (I mod your map in home, and there's no photoshop in my home's computer)

[General]
  1. Copy the SB code into osb. file and delete osb. file
  2. there's a diffculty (-Shiro- and roxkyuubiforever) in the song file, but no notes in it, delete it please
[Attraiction]
  1. 00:55:429 (3), 00:56:152 (5), 00:56:513 (6) - remove clap and add clap at 00:55:790 (4) to make the rhythm same to previous notes
  2. 01:15:579 and 01:15:850 - unused timing section? delete they
[GbL's Love]
  1. 02:57:954 (5) - slider finish here
  2. I think there are too many break period in this diffculty, reduce some, my suggestion is to leave some long break and delete short break
[Forbidden Passion]
  1. 00:30:128 (1) - this jump is hard to read
  2. 02:03:740 (1) - finish here
star~
Diasios
Mod Infos:

Green: Suggestions.
Orange: I think you should fix this.
Red: You must fix this.

Start Suggestions:

BPM: 166

[Attraction]

00:27:597 (x) - Add a break
01:00:489 (x) - ^
01:09:163 (x) - ^
01:12:055 (x) - ^


[GbL's Love]

Slider Tick Rate: 1

[Forbidden Passion]

I love it <3

Starred~
Armin
Add the tag GbL on all the difficulties D:
Optimize the offset: 10964

[Attraction]

00:45:670 Remove the whistle in the middle, add a whistle at the start instead
00:48:562 As above
00:51:453 As above
01:28:319 Whistle
01:29:042 Whistle
01:29:403 Remove the whistle here, if you want
01:30:488 Whistle+finish at the start, then add a whistle on the second repeat
01:34:825 Whistle
01:36:271 Finish at the start

GbL's Love

No problems.

[Forbidden Passion]

00:21:084 Place a hitcircle here, then move 1/4 to the right the spinner, and reduce it of 1/4
00:32:116 (1,2,3,1) Replace better these hitcircles, like in the picture:


Starred, good map. D:
GladiOol
[General]
The music of this map is really weird, making this point 'off beat'
00:22:538 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2).
It should be snapped almost 1/8 back.
Fix that place with some one who is good with timing.

[Forbidden Passion]
  1. 01:12:326 (2) - Move this 1/4 later, then decrease slider length by 1/4.
[GbL's Love]
  1. 01:04:649 (x) - Extra note (?)
[Attraction]
  1. Decrease Overall Difficulty by 2 or 3 please.
Starred.
Topic Starter
GabrielRKF

Breeze wrote:

OK, let's mod go go go~
The hit0.png I would do it when I back school (I mod your map in home, and there's no photoshop in my home's computer)

[General]
  1. Copy the SB code into osb. file and delete osb. file
  2. there's a diffculty (-Shiro- and roxkyuubiforever) in the song file, but no notes in it, delete it please I don't see it ._. I'll re-upload to see if it will be fixed
[Attraiction]
  1. 00:55:429 (3), 00:56:152 (5), 00:56:513 (6) - remove clap and add clap at 00:55:790 (4) to make the rhythm same to previous notes I think it's better the way that is now >_>
  2. 01:15:579 and 01:15:850 - unused timing section? delete they You are right o_o
[GbL's Love]
  1. 02:57:954 (5) - slider finish here Ok~
  2. I think there are too many break period in this diffculty, reduce some, my suggestion is to leave some long break and delete short break Filled a few
[Forbidden Passion]
  1. 00:30:128 (1) - this jump is hard to read I like it but if anyone else say this, I'll fix it
  2. 02:03:740 (1) - finish here Ok~
star~
Thanks :]

xxheroxx wrote:

Mod Infos:

Green: Suggestions.
Orange: I think you should fix this.
Red: You must fix this.

Start Suggestions:

BPM: 166 Sorry, how gave me that 006 before the offset were a BAT so I think that I shouldn't change it >_<

[Attraction]

00:27:597 (x) - Add a break
01:00:489 (x) - ^
01:09:163 (x) - ^
01:12:055 (x) - ^[/color]

[GbL's Love]

Slider Tick Rate: 1 [/color]

[Forbidden Passion]

I love it <3

Starred~
Sorry, no kudosu ;__;

Stiil making the rest, not uploaded yet...
Topic Starter
GabrielRKF

Armin wrote:

Add the tag GbL on all the difficulties D:
Optimize the offset: 10964

[Attraction]

00:45:670 Remove the whistle in the middle, add a whistle at the start instead Ok~
00:48:562 As above Ok~
00:51:453 As above Ok~
01:28:319 Whistle Sorry, like the way that is now
01:29:042 Whistle ^
01:29:403 Remove the whistle here, if you want Sorry, no >_<
01:30:488 Whistle+finish at the start, then add a whistle on the second repeat Ok~
01:34:825 Whistle Sorry, like the way that is now
01:36:271 Finish at the start Ok~

GbL's Love

No problems.

[Forbidden Passion]

00:21:084 Place a hitcircle here, then move 1/4 to the right the spinner, and reduce it of 1/4 Got it!
00:32:116 (1,2,3,1) Replace better these hitcircles, like in the picture:

NIIICE! Thanks :D

Starred, good map. D:
Thanks for your mod :)

Gladi wrote:

[General]
The music of this map is really weird, making this point 'off beat'
00:22:538 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2).
It should be snapped almost 1/8 back.
Fix that place with some one who is good with timing. I think it's funny too but I don't think that I should reesnap it 1/8 later =/ I'll ask a BAT about that

[Forbidden Passion]
  1. 01:12:326 (2) - Move this 1/4 later, then decrease slider length by 1/4. Nice :]
[GbL's Love]
  1. 01:04:649 (x) - Extra note (?) Yeah, I think it's a good idea :]
[Attraction]
  1. Decrease Overall Difficulty by 2 or 3 please. Ok >_<
Starred.
Thanks :D
Lissette
Add GbL to the tags

Attraction
00:48:562 (1) - no jumps in easy diff

GbL's Love
02:32:654 - why dont you map this break time? i think the map don't need more break times

Forbidden Passion
no problems

Nice map!
Star! ^^

Edit: PM me when you fix it
Zekira
As said many times, there are some parts which are sounding 'off-beat'; this is due to imperfect composition. Well, all music are imperfectly composed, it just so happened that this map showed such too evidently.

To remedy this I will try and provide some seemingly weird offsets like I did with my first map (Tsukasa Syndrom - Minagiru)

(uh okay this is becoming a bit harder than expected. I'm a bit fazed right now so I can only do timing for the first half of the song)

10961-166
25437-166
34103-166
45676-166
62987-166
68790-165 (not typo)
74586-166

To the well-versed ear I could stand up here and say that this song does not have a static BPM. I advise you get a timing expert (...or just wait for me to wake up even more, I can probably do this, just not right now) to inspect all the parts that sound late and early on the current offset. I could swear there should be only minimal red timing points, but not just one.

I'm sorry if I'm being a disappointment right now, but this is all I can do for now.
Breeze
here's the hit0.png you request




choose one :)

no kds for this post

jericho2442
Forbidden Passion]
01:03:019 (1,2,3,4) - i dont like having the 2 different spacings in this one combo, feels ugly

_____________
nice maps have a star :)
Topic Starter
GabrielRKF
\/ Mods \/
SPOILER

Lissette wrote:

Add GbL to the tags

Attraction
00:48:562 (1) - no jumps in easy diff Reduced the spacing here~

GbL's Love
02:32:654 - why dont you map this break time? i think the map don't need more break times Did it :]

Forbidden Passion
no problems

Nice map!
Star! ^^

Edit: PM me when you fix it
Thanks! :D

jericho2442 wrote:

Forbidden Passion]
01:03:019 (1,2,3,4) - i dont like having the 2 different spacings in this one combo, feels ugly Sorry but that is something from my style >_< I use this is most part of the maps and diffs that I make

_____________
nice maps have a star :)
Thanks, but sorry, no kudosu ;__;

Zekira wrote:

As said many times, there are some parts which are sounding 'off-beat'; this is due to imperfect composition. Well, all music are imperfectly composed, it just so happened that this map showed such too evidently.

To remedy this I will try and provide some seemingly weird offsets like I did with my first map (Tsukasa Syndrom - Minagiru)

(uh okay this is becoming a bit harder than expected. I'm a bit fazed right now so I can only do timing for the first half of the song)

10961-166
25437-166
34103-166
45676-166
62987-166
68790-165 (not typo)
74586-166

To the well-versed ear I could stand up here and say that this song does not have a static BPM. I advise you get a timing expert (...or just wait for me to wake up even more, I can probably do this, just not right now) to inspect all the parts that sound late and early on the current offset. I could swear there should be only minimal red timing points, but not just one.

I'm sorry if I'm being a disappointment right now, but this is all I can do for now.
Yeah, the BPM is pretty weard in this song >_<
I'll aks a pro to take a look :/

Breeze wrote:

here's the hit0.png you request

choose one :) The second one :D

no kds for this post What?! Why not? D:
Thanks a lot >_<
Lizbeth
You don't need the name of the song in the tags
comboburst must not exceed 500 px of width

Forbidden Passion
no problems, cool map

GbL's Love
fine

Attraction
dicrase Overall diff
i find the spacing a lil too big for easy.

nice work
have star
Kytoxid
[General]

.osb file references a nonexistant image file.
Comboburst is too big, should be under 500px wide, I think.
hit0.png looks a bit pixelly around the edges.

Remove the title from the tags. Weird title though; check the capitalization and the (step 1)?

[Attraction]

00:20:731 (1,1) - Might be a bit too close, but should be okay.
00:47:116 (2,3,4) - Center?
00:50:008 (2,3,4) - ^ (thus allowing them to stack)
00:55:067 (2,3,4,5,6) - I'd move them a grid closer to the middle (except 4, of course); right now 3-4 looks farther than 2-3.

[GbL's Love]

Preview time is different here, albeit very slightly.

00:18:924 (3) - Consider shifting this to the left a bit to be in line with 2?
01:59:041 (1,2,3,4) - Didn't fit the music very well, in my opinion.
02:11:691 (3) - Line this up with 2's endpoint?

[Forbidden Passion]

00:57:597 - This break probably should be removed; it's so short that the arrows appear before the break even starts.
01:00:489 - ^
01:03:561 (2) - Didn't really like this jump much, but it's okay as a whole.
01:17:838 - Short break.
01:23:440 (5) - A grid up and left will keep the staircase formation in shape.
01:29:223 (5) - ^ (up and right, of course)
01:37:716 (5) - Move the repeat upwards a bit so it doesn't touch the 4? Looks better, in my opinion.
02:02:655 - Short break.
02:04:101 - ^
02:37:353 - ^
02:42:955 (5) - Same as before.
02:48:738 (5) - ^

Star~
Topic Starter
GabrielRKF

Lizbeth wrote:

You don't need the name of the song in the tags Fixed~ :D
comboburst must not exceed 500 px of width Fixed~ :D

Forbidden Passion
no problems, cool map

GbL's Love
fine

Attraction
dicrase Overall diff
i find the spacing a lil too big for easy. Decreased 1 >_>

nice work
have star
Thanks! Nice mod! :)

Kytoxid wrote:

[General]

.osb file references a nonexistant image file.
Comboburst is too big, should be under 500px wide, I think.
hit0.png looks a bit pixelly around the edges.

Remove the title from the tags. Weird title though; check the capitalization and the (step 1)? I'm not sure... I'll take a look

[Attraction]

00:20:731 (1,1) - Might be a bit too close, but should be okay. I think it's ok >_>
00:47:116 (2,3,4) - Center? Ok~
00:50:008 (2,3,4) - ^ (thus allowing them to stack) Ok~
00:55:067 (2,3,4,5,6) - I'd move them a grid closer to the middle (except 4, of course); right now 3-4 looks farther than 2-3. Ok~

[GbL's Love]

Preview time is different here, albeit very slightly.

00:18:924 (3) - Consider shifting this to the left a bit to be in line with 2? Did it :]
01:59:041 (1,2,3,4) - Didn't fit the music very well, in my opinion. I think it's cool ._.
02:11:691 (3) - Line this up with 2's endpoint? Moved the (1) and the (2) to fix that~

[Forbidden Passion]

00:57:597 - This break probably should be removed; it's so short that the arrows appear before the break even starts. Ok~
01:00:489 - ^ Ok~
01:03:561 (2) - Didn't really like this jump much, but it's okay as a whole. I like it ,__,
01:17:838 - Short break. Ok~
01:23:440 (5) - A grid up and left will keep the staircase formation in shape. RIGHT! :)
01:29:223 (5) - ^ (up and right, of course) Ok~~
01:37:716 (5) - Move the repeat upwards a bit so it doesn't touch the 4? Looks better, in my opinion. Fixed :DDD
02:02:655 - Short break. Ok
02:04:101 - ^ Ok
02:37:353 - ^ Ok
02:42:955 (5) - Same as before. Ok~~
02:48:738 (5) - ^ Ok~~

Star~
Thanks a lot! Very Effective mod!
Lissette
This map is really good, but after reading Zekira's mod post, i can't proto-bubble T.T I wish I could help you on that >.< but I'm not as good as Zekira on timing....
Topic Starter
GabrielRKF

Lissette wrote:

This map is really good, but after reading Zekira's mod post, i can't proto-bubble T.T I wish I could help you on that >.< but I'm not as good as Zekira on timing....
I'm looking for a pro but it's sooo hard ;___________;
K3nsh1n_H1mur4
I think it's ready. Follow the rhythm of the song very well.

And the genre of this song is Pop (Korean).

Star for u.
Teara
No problems found

Have a star :>
Kinesia
Nice one!!
Topic Starter
GabrielRKF

k3nsh1n_H1mur4 wrote:

I think it's ready. Follow the rhythm of the song very well.

And the genre of this song is Pop (Korean).

Star for u.
Thanks :D

Teara wrote:

No problems found

Have a star :>
Thank you too ^^

Kinesia wrote:

Nice one!!
Thank ya :3
Bittersweet
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Topic Starter
GabrielRKF

Bittersweet wrote:

Pt-Br Gibe Moni Plox, okay? ._.

Uhn. Sobre a skin, acho que os corações que substituem a star estão meio exagerados. E acho que a imagem do miss poderia ser diferente, meio que não combina. E~ tinha skin no spin antes? Tirou pq? D: Pq tava escrota D:

Well, das dificuldades em si, eu não tenho o que falar do easy a não ser te dar os parabéns por não fazer o que eu chamo de easy pra pessoas saidas da apae. Sabe, aqueles que parece que o cara pensa "dels, se aparecerem dois beats na tela ao mesmo tempo eles surtam" e.e' [Eu tbm odeio isso >_> Confundem easy com beginer ¬¬ mas mesmo assim, ta bem facil, eu acho.] e as outras tão divertidas pacas de jogar *o* Parabéns de novo! *o*

E só pra constar, ADORO esse flashzinho <3 Adorei a idéia de mapear ele e tal *o*

E, óbvio, Staaaaar~~~
Valeu :D
awp
Less than 3 months behind

1. Offset: 10,977ms BPM: 166.005


Man I hate it when it's almost a whole BPM but actually isn't.

Complimentary modding:

[Attraction]
00:20:735 (1,1) - You should really avoid doing this on easier difficulties. There's very little time between the spinner's end and the next note - while that's okay for Hard and up, earlier difficulties are geared towards beginners who will likely have very little control/focus over their spinning, so you're better off giving them a bit of space.

[Forbidden Passion]
00:23:623 (1,2) - I'm not confident that this jump is reasonable. Check with more experienced players (Cyclone's a good one to ask here, I think) and if they're okay with it, then yeah, okay. (Note, I did not read previous posts in this thread, heyhey.)

01:11:693 (1,2) - This one threw me off. Suggestion: Take the second slider, and grid snap it 1/3 left, so it lands on 01:12:296, and shorten it to the beat accordingly. The previous combos match the vocals so closely that this one just felt delayed.

[GbL's Love]
This beatmap feels lost between Normal and Hard. You've got Hard note placement, but Easy/Normal spacing and Easy overall difficulty. Personally, I'd rather see you increase the spacing a fair bit and increase normal difficulty to add a bit of challenge. Right now, it feels a bit indecisive.

02:09:161 (1) - Hmm, this spinner feels out of place. It's just stuck in the middle of a phrase, by the sounds of it.

02:38:437 (1) - For the section starting here, I think you'd benefit from some whistles. I don't normally recommend using whistles since they're loud and obnoxious, but I feel they'd really fit.



Overall, I find myself really enjoying this.
Behon
Attraction:
-01:08:802 (1): Get rid of new combo.
-01:10:609 (2): Make this a new combo instead.
-01:11:693 (1): Get rid of new combo.

GbL's Love:
There seems to be a general lack of finishes throughout this difficulty. Try sticking them on spinners and slider ends.

Forbidden Passion:
-00:23:623 (1,2): Spacing between these two is weird.

Good job overall, hope this gets ranked soon.
SephiL
Love the map and the song :) ... great work and re-upload it if you can. Putting a star :D
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